bmin11 wrote:

May I make an Insane for this song?

animask wrote:

[Normal]
Raise Approach Rate by 1? We don't want to make things harder, now do we? So, no.
02:33:169 (2) - Spacing is off (noticeably off =P). Move away from previous slider. Fixed.

[Hard]
00:39:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Uh...you should fix the spacing on that later... Fixed.
00:46:078 (3) - You could make it not touch the previous slider... Fixed?
01:35:351 (5) , (8,9) - Spacing again lol Fixed?

You seem to like using connected sliders a lot. Is that a problem?

Overall, I think the sliders could be a bit more clean and nicer looking. Using grid level 2 to make a slider then rearranging slider points it in grid level 3 helps a bit. Also, I think that your Normal could have been better if you mapped primarily to the music. (So the hitsounds/notes would be easier to follow.) Whatever.


Timing seems good. Okay.


Starr'd

animask wrote:

I thought you said you weren't accepting other difficulties for this...or was that a different song?

James2250 wrote:

(Snap all your kiai times to the correct ticks?) Fixed.
Any tags? Added some.

Normal:
00:09:897 (2) - add note with clap to keep the flow going? Fixed.
00:11:351 (4) - ^ ^
00:12:806 (7) - ^ ^
00:58:624 (3,4) - spacing on purpose? Oops Its fixed.
01:03:169 (1) - bad idea to have on the easiest difficulty Done.
01:57:897 (2,3,4) - spacing Fixed.
02:57:351 (1) - kind of short, might be able to pass Its fine.

Hard:
01:49:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - would be more interesting if this wasn't stacked Fixed.

Nicely done Yes
Good luck~

• Artist: B.o.B
  Title: Magic ft. Rivers Cuomo
  Offset : +8ms~+12ms
  Tag goes to Source?
  I feel the volume is little bit loud...maybe reduce 10%?

• 00:12:806 (7) - clap?
  Add some finish in kiai to stress?
  00:30:624 (5) - Finish?
  00:33:533 (3) - ^
  00:36:442 (5) - ^
  02:34:806 (1) - New combo?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Artist: B.o.B
  Title: Magic ft. Rivers Cuomo
  ^Okay
  Offset : +8ms~+12ms Okay. New offset is 5,905
  Tag goes to Source? Nah.
  I feel the volume is little bit loud...maybe reduce 10%? Sure.

[Normal]

• 00:12:806 (7) - clap? Done.
  Add some finish in kiai to stress?
  00:30:624 (5) - Finish? Nah.
  00:33:533 (3) - ^ ^
  00:36:442 (5) - ^ ^
  02:34:806 (1) - New combo? Okay.

[Hard]

01:02:987 (9,10) - Maybe use slider instead of notes? (Based on the music feeling?) Nah, its fine.
01:36:806 (1) - I don't like this spinner much... Okay. Did something different.

Mapset is nice...[size]but I really expect that you fuse some your style into the map..[/size] I'll try next time.

Star~

DiamondCrash wrote:

Normal;

00:11:727 (5) - New combo.
00:30:636 (5) - 1/2 shorter?
01:03:363 (1) - Off center and so soon after the spinner? In a Normal?
01:40:454 (5) - 1/2 shorter?
02:13:181 (1) - Too soon after the spinner.
02:50:272 (5) - 1/2 shorter...
02:51:727 - ...then put a circle here?
02:53:181 (4) - 1/2 shorter?

^All fixed.

Hard;

00:08:818 (1) - Have a circle here instead, then a slider running from 00:08:999 to 00:09:363.
00:39:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - How about making this into a nice hexagon or septagon or something pretty?

^All fixed.

Great stuff.

Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely.

ayey wrote:

Roddie~

Normal
01:12:454 (x) - Add a note maybe? Done.
02:22:272 (x) - ^ Done.
02:40:090 (1) - Extend it to 02:42:636 I'll just leave this one as it is.

Hard
00:11:181 (6) - Weird placement Fixed.
01:08:818 (x) - Add a note? Fixed.
01:11:272 (3) - Feels extra , idk Done.

Magic~ Magic Magic Maa-g-g-gic~

Zerostarry wrote:

Much better

wmfchris wrote:

[hard]
1:04~1:10 seems the vocal falls on blue ticks, so all 1/4 forward? I don't think so ._.
1:34:999 (1) down 1 grid Its fine like that.
[Normal]
very nice. Awesome.

No big problems at all~
it's nearly rankable imo : D Fantastic.

if you have time take a look on this one
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/21754 I'll get right on it.

Odaril wrote:

General
You should add another difficulty. Alright, alright. I'll get working on it later.

Normal
00:23:727 (2,3) - These two sound weird - might be because they're offbeat. 2 isn't but 3 is. Thanks for pointing that out.
02:56:999 (5) - clap ? it will follow the same pattern you've been using so far How about if I just replace it with a slider there and put a clap on the end of that slider?

Hard
00:26:272 (2) - Curve it a bit more down ? The pattern will look better this way Fixed.
01:35:363 (3) - Move this down a bit, the pattern will look a lot better imo (same for the previous (5) Nah. I did something different.

Joshua Lost wrote:

Hi~Sorry for my late~>.<~
Here's some suggestion~Hope can improve your map~>.<
(Poor English..= =|||)

[Hard]
02:22:636(2)Spacing suddenly changes.Maybe new combo?Or you can stack 1 and 2. I'll consider changing it if someone else mentions the same thing.
Fine to me. Great.

[Normal]
Maybe raise 1 approach rate? Sure.
00:33:545(3)1 grid up?Personal view...@_@ Okay.
02:19:727(1,2,3,4)Plays weird I guess.Not follow the rhythm?I will map like this: Very good. I'll change it.
[attachment=0:e0926]for roddie.jpg[/attachment:e0926]
If you accept this,don't forget to replace sound effects.

[Easy]
00:34:999(4)New combo? Okay.
01:27:363(1)Add finish at beginning? No. ._.
02:37:181(4)New combo.And no new combo at 02:38:999. Sure.

Wow,cool map!Star~!~★~=D

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Easy]
00:26:272 (1) - Maybe end this at 00:28:272 - ? Gives a little more recovery time and sounds better to me.
01:36:454 (1) - Same thing here. 01:38:090 -
02:45:909 (1) - ^

^All fixed.

[Normal]
01:03:363 (1) - Eeh, kinda soon after a spinner even for a normal. Maybe extend it to 01:04:090 - ? Fixed.
02:05:181 - This WIP or something? Really bad spot for a break. Fine. I'll map this a little more.

[Hard]
02:02:272 - Hrm, I guess it's on purpose. It's still a really bad spot for a break. Map through it. Alright. I'll map this a little more too.
Rest looks fine. Kind of messy, but I'd just have a page of nazis otherwise.

GladiOol wrote:

Offset 5900 Okay.

Sure, B.o.B - Magic ft. Rivers Cuomo, this is how the song is released.
But you've put ft. Rivers Cuomo in title now, which isn't right? Because it's part of the artist?

I'd suggest putting Rivers Cuomo at Artist field, but maybe that's just me~ Hm... It does make sense. So... alright.
Also delete B.o.B from tags. Fine.

Star.

Rukarioman wrote:

Easy:
01:04:809 - Add a note here? Yes.

Normal:
02:56:990 (5) - Add a repeat? Alright.
02:59:172 (1) - Because I don't like simple and boring repeat sliders maybe try a little something like this:

SPOILER

Good idea. I'll rearrange that.

Hard:
01:17:172 - It really feels like there is a note missing here. Such a strong note I felt like clicking something Okay.
01:22:990 - ^ No. ._.
01:28:809 - ^ Sure.

Really nice map man, Call me back when you fixed some stuff (all suggestions) and if there are not too much bubbles I'd be glad to bubble^^.
Until then.

ztrot wrote:

there are lots of unstacked notes on slider endpoints set the stack lvl down one tick, looking good~