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azusa - Kimi no mamade

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[Shalon]
686 posts
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Topic Starter
[Shalon]
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 12월 28일 화요일 at 오후 5:11:13

Artist: azusa
Title: Kimi no mamade (TV size)
Source: Amagami SS
Tags: ykcarrot
BPM: 135
Filesize: 15526kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.31 stars, 97 notes)
  2. Hard (4.72 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Normal (3.71 stars, 156 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.95 stars, 299 notes)
  5. ykcarrot's Insane (4.9 stars, 210 notes)
Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size)
Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
5th map,

amagami's second opening.

azusa's voice is so clear, I hope you're happy when heard this song.

Ready for mod :D
Last edited by [Shalon] , edited 45 times in total.
Torran
724 posts
Joined November 2008
Torran
osu! Timing Help!
  • 1. BPM 135 , Offset 810
Good Luck!
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
[General]
title: azusa, change to: Azusa

[Easy]
00:27:476 - this slider makes previously slider's 2nd repeat hidden. Please move it away
00:29:254 - add finish
00:50:587 - remove whistle and add finish
01:13:698 - add finish
01:17:254 - ^
01:24:143 - cut by 1/4

[Normal]
00:07:921 - distance
00:15:032 - add finish?
00:29:254 - add finish
00:36:365 - ^
00:39:032 - this slider is out of playfield please replace it.
01:13:698 - add finish

[Hard]
00:50:587 - finish
00:59:476 - ^
01:13:698 - ^
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
title: azusa, change to: Azusa
well, here is school, So I can't fixed my map now.

btw, at first, I think the artist is Azusa, but in album, artist's name is written 'azusa', So I use that name.

thx for mod ;)
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Oh you are right, sorry 3:
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
title: azusa, change to: Azusa

[Easy]
00:27:476 - this slider makes previously slider's 2nd repeat hidden. Please move it away
00:29:254 - add finish
00:50:587 - remove whistle and add finish
01:13:698 - add finish
01:17:254 - ^
01:24:143 - cut by 1/4

[Normal]
00:07:921 - distance
00:15:032 - add finish?
00:29:254 - add finish
00:36:365 - ^
00:39:032 - this slider is out of playfield please replace it.
01:13:698 - add finish

[Hard]
00:50:587 - finish
00:59:476 - ^
01:13:698 - ^
All done except colored text.

thx for mod ;)
poko725poko
6 posts
Joined July 2010
poko725poko
I like his song♪
So I give a star.
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

poko725poko wrote:

I like his song♪
So I give a star.
thx for star :D
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
-suggestion: use a series of softer combo colour
-either lower hitsound or make the mp3 louder?

[taiko] nice.

[hard]
0:50:143 (4) left 1 grid? then (1) left 1 grid too
1:18:809 (2,3,4,1,2,3) try to arrange them in stright line?
1:24:143 (x) put a note before spinner

[normal]
1:15:032 (4) left 1 grid

[easy] fine

star~
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

wmfchris wrote:

-suggestion: use a series of softer combo colour
-either lower hitsound or make the mp3 louder?

[taiko] nice.

[hard]
0:50:143 (4) left 1 grid? then (1) left 1 grid too
1:18:809 (2,3,4,1,2,3) try to arrange them in stright line?
1:24:143 (x) put a note before spinner

[normal]
1:15:032 (4) left 1 grid

[easy] fine

star~
Thx for mod ;)

I'll try to find new MP3 file.

All done except colored text, thx :D
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Timing is incredibly out :o

Offset: 698.

I'm not sure if Resnapping will do well,you better place your notes one more time.

Nothing to mod atm,cause it's messed.

Also...

[Source]
Amagami SS

Star~
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

IceBeam wrote:

Timing is incredibly out :o

Offset: 698.

I'm not sure if Resnapping will do well,you better place your notes one more time.

Nothing to mod atm,cause it's messed.

Also...

[Source]
Amagami SS

Star~

Ah, I forgot to change timing. (I changed the MP3 before few hours,)

sorry to bother you,
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Hi~ I'll take Insane diff. ;)
Firo Prochainezo
2,140 posts
Joined June 2010
Firo Prochainezo
Normal:
01:07:364 to 01:09:142: In my opinion this part doesn't really fit. Try to remove some hitcircles and put some sliders in it so it doesn't look messy.

Hard:
00:29:142 (3): Hitfinish.
00:45:142 (3): Remove hitfinish from this slider.
00:52:253 (5): ^.
01:27:809: Finish the spinner here.

Good job :) have a star
Torran
724 posts
Joined November 2008
Torran
osu! Timing Help!
  • New Offset: 690 (-8)
Starred~!
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Here you are. :)
Download: ykcarrot's Insane.rar

And some mods.


[General]
- Tag : 'ykcarrot' 추가
- comboburst 가로길이가 500px 넘으면 안됩니다. 리사이즈 해주세요.


[Easy]
00:11:142 (1) - 끝 00:13:142
00:16:697 (3) - 스페이싱
00:20:253 (3) - 스페이싱
00:29:142 (1) - 읽기 어렵습니다. 00:27:364 (2) - 이 슬라이더 아래에 위치하는걸 추천합니다.
00:41:587 (3) - 스페이싱. BPM 바뀌는 첫부분에서는 이전 스페이싱을 따르는게 좋습니다.
01:24:031 (1) - 끝을 01:27:809 로 하는게 더 낫습니다.


[Normal]
00:42:031 (2) - HP bar에 닿으니 내려주세요.
00:51:364 (3,1) - 슬라이더 끝이랑 다음 노트가 HP bar에 살짝 닿으니 조금 조정해주세요.
01:21:586 (3) - 스페이싱
01:24:253 (4) - ^
01:26:031 (1) - 끝 01:27:809


[Hard]
00:07:809 (1) - 스페이싱. 설명은 이지에서 했습니다.
00:21:142 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
01:24:253 (1) - 끝 01:27:809
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
fixed ;)
Mikkuri
823 posts
Joined April 2010
Mikkuri
Star !
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
>w</ nice map~

ah...and there are two thing,
1.Please fix taiko's offset to same with other diffs (690) xD

2.And except yk's insane, there are unsnap notes on other diffs. xD
SPOILER
I think it's because you do offset 698->690 and not do resnap. lol
so please resnap all notes on those diffs to use this button. :P
SPOILER

hmm and that's all~
star and gogogo >~</

kenji
127 posts
Joined April 2009
kenji
♪
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

quintitem wrote:

>w</ nice map~

ah...and there are two thing,
1.Please fix taiko's offset to same with other diffs (690) xD

2.And except yk's insane, there are unsnap notes on other diffs. xD
SPOILER
[attachment=1:71a68]unsnap.PNG[/attachment:71a68]
I think it's because you do offset 698->690 and not do resnap. lol
so please resnap all notes on those diffs to use this button. :P
SPOILER
[attachment=0:71a68]snap.PNG[/attachment:71a68]

hmm and that's all~
star and gogogo >~</
Thx for advice, I'll fix it when school is end, here is school XD

kenji wrote:

♪
Thx for star :)
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,233 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Hi [Shalon]
Mod it to you^_^
--------------------------------------------
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Just suggestion

[easy]
00:30:912(3)add whistle?
00:33:578(2)^
00:54:023(1)remove new combo?
00:57:578(x)the spinner should stop in 00:58:912?

[Normal]]
What happen to the offset?Use green line please?>.<

[Hard]
00:11:134(x)The spinner should start in 00:11:356?
00:19:356(1)remove new combo?
00:26:467(1)spacing(not suitable jump here)
00:37:134(1)remove new combo?
00:40:689(1)Not completeness gemination with (2)

[Taiko]
Awsome map :lol:
00:03:801(x)add a note here?my suggestion is k
00:07:356(x)^
00:24:023(42)change to k?
00:24:245(43)^

I love shoalon's taiko>.<I got 1FC^_^
awsome star~
PLZ PM me if you need cross check
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi [Shalon]
Mod it to you^_^
--------------------------------------------
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Just suggestion

[easy]
00:30:912(3)add whistle?
00:33:578(2)^
00:54:023(1)remove new combo?
00:57:578(x)the spinner should stop in 00:58:912?

[Normal]]
What happen to the offset?Use green line please?>.<

[Hard]
00:11:134(x)The spinner should start in 00:11:356?
00:19:356(1)remove new combo?
00:26:467(1)spacing(not suitable jump here)
00:37:134(1)remove new combo?
00:40:689(1)Not completeness gemination with (2)

[Taiko]
Awsome map :lol:
00:03:801(x)add a note here?my suggestion is k
00:07:356(x)^
00:24:023(42)change to k?
00:24:245(43)^

I love shoalon's taiko>.<I got 1FC^_^
awsome star~
PLZ PM me if you need cross check

Thx to help and thx to love my map :D

and, most of sentences are fixed, thx again for you ;)
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

Star !
I've got mod by you via IRC before, So I give you a kudosu.

and, thx for star ~
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
Seems an odd time to end kiai, end it on a white tick?

Easy:
At least hp + 1, lowest hp is too low for most maps
00:02:467 (1,2,1) - keep spacing equal
00:11:134 (1) - start at 00:11:356? -- Same for every difficulty
00:22:023 (1,2) - make slightly more symmetrical?
00:39:801 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal
00:57:578 (1,1) - try and separate these more for an Easy

Normal:
HP and OD are very low for a Normal, I would say + 2 to both
00:10:467 (1) - move away from hp bar?
00:30:912 (1,2,3,1,2) - keep whistle rhythm going? (same for any other parts where it randomly stops)
01:07:356 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - not sure if this suits a Normal
01:09:134 (1) - remove new combo
01:14:467 (2,3,4) - make sure spacing on stuff like this stays equal (and any others that do this)

Hard:
Resnap all notes
00:02:467 (1,2,1) - keep spacing equal
00:06:912 (2,3,1) - ^ (timing section messes up distance snap but it still needs to be equal)
00:45:134 (3) - I wouldn't have a 0.5 slider here (you can't see the ticks so you can't tell)
00:52:245 (5) - ^
01:01:578 (3,4,5) - check spacing? Doesn't look equal
01:09:254 - Remove un-inherited timing section here (looks like you forgot it when removing the rest)

Insane:
Looks good

Taiko:
Looks ok

Needs some more work done on it but deserves a star~
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Sunny Holic
[Easy]
00:23:801 (2) - ctrl+r로 리버스 한다음에 그리드 스냅 끄고 0.0x 디스턴스스냅으로 스택하고 다시 ctrl+r로 돌아

옵니당.
00:34:467 (3) - 반복 한번 더?
01:08:245 (1) - 01:07:356 (3) - 과 스택하심이?

[Normal]
음..... GJ임당

[Hard]
00:15:801 (1) - remove new combo?
00:22:912 (1) - ^
00:59:801 (2,3) - 슬라이더로 교체?
01:03:356 (2,3) - ^

[ykcarrot's Insane]
노트와 노트 사이가 좀 허전한데.. Circle Size 한칸 크게?..
00:09:134 (5) - 00:09:578 - 여기서 끝나는걸 고려해 보심이~
00:52:912 (6) - 00:53:356 - 여기서 끝내고 00:53:578 - 여기에 노트 추가?
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure

Sunny Holic wrote:

[ykcarrot's Insane]
노트와 노트 사이가 좀 허전한데.. Circle Size 한칸 크게?.. // 아니요
00:09:134 (5) - 00:09:578 - 여기서 끝나는걸 고려해 보심이~ // 보컬에 맞춘겁니다
00:52:912 (6) - 00:53:356 - 여기서 끝내고 00:53:578 - 여기에 노트 추가? // 고쳤습니다
모딩 감사합니다~ :)

Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) ([Shalon]) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
updated and fixed most of parts
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hi~

[General]
The "hitcircle.png" seems not fit the "hitcircleoverlay.png",the gray part can't appear in right side.(Hope you could understand what I mean> <)

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
00:11:134 (1) - Start here 00:11:356?
01:08:245 (1) - 1 grid left?
01:12:689 (1) - ^
01:14:467 (2) - ^
01:22:467 (5,1) - Switch new combo?
01:24:245 (4) - New combo?
01:25:578 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:912 - End KIAI here?

[Hard]
00:11:134 (1) - Start here 00:11:356?
00:15:801 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:22:912 (1) - ^
00:30:023 (1) - ^
00:43:578 (1) - ^
00:47:801 (3) - Remove 1 repeat?
01:12:689 (1) - Remove new combo?

[ykcarrot's Insane]
Great~

STAR~!
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

kino77 wrote:

Hi~

[General]
The "hitcircle.png" seems not fit the "hitcircleoverlay.png",the gray part can't appear in right side.(Hope you could understand what I mean> <)

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
00:11:134 (1) - Start here 00:11:356?
01:08:245 (1) - 1 grid left?
01:12:689 (1) - ^
01:14:467 (2) - ^
01:22:467 (5,1) - Switch new combo?
01:24:245 (4) - New combo?
01:25:578 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:912 - End KIAI here?

[Hard]
00:11:134 (1) - Start here 00:11:356?
00:15:801 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:22:912 (1) - ^
00:30:023 (1) - ^
00:43:578 (1) - ^
00:47:801 (3) - Remove 1 repeat?
01:12:689 (1) - Remove new combo?


STAR~!
almost done.

well, I think current hitcircle and overlay is good. the gray part is looks like shadow, so maybe I don't fix it, haha.

thx for mod :)
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


the yellow circles look too light on the background, especially during kiai time.


ykcarrot's Insane

fine

Hard

00:17:578 (3) - 1 more repeat?
00:47:801 (3) - ^
from 00:59:356 - add some claps here like Insane?


Normal

00:08:245 (2,4) - put them farther apart
from 00:59:356 - add some claps here like Insane?


Easy

00:57:578 (1) - this spinner is too short for a easy.Maybe start it on 00:56:912

also add some claps during kiai time



nice map 8-)
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Fixed position of some notes.

Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) ([Shalon]) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

ykcarrot wrote:

Fixed position of some notes.
updated
Licnect
Elite Mapper
367 posts
Joined May 2010
Licnect
Hello
this is my some suggestions

[Overall]
offset 698 maybe to best for me ;)
why you not use soft-hitclap in your diff ?
maybe you should like ykcarrot use it. :D
[ps.I uesd offset 698 modding]

[Easy]
00:43:807 [2] remove whistle?
00:44:695 [4] ^
00:45:584 [2] ^
00:46:473 [4] ^
00:50:918 [2] ^
00:51:807 [4] ^
00:52:695 [2] ^
00:53:584 [4] ^
01:09:140 [3.4] hard to read for me :cry: (maybe i'm stupid XD

[Normal]
00:45:134 [3] change whistle?
other are good

[Hard]
00:58:473 [3.4-1.2.3.4] if you use soft-hitclap in here. maybe sounds good 8-)
01:12:697 [3.4-1.2.3.4 ^
other are good

[ykcarrot's Insane]
00:12:253 Slider repeat is hidden due to the hitsplash of 00:10:920 [3]
other are good

Nice map and song >M< star~
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Ah yeah,I remember this map.

Kay,time to check once again.

[Easy]
00:32:689 (1) - I'd add a finish.
00:36:245 (1) - ^
01:09:134 (3) - Move it back to 01:08:912.
01:26:023 (x) - Last spinner should finish here.

[Normal]
Spacing is kinda random sometimes,but it's pretty acceptable.
00:10:467 (1) - Combo spam,remove NC.
00:32:689 (1) - Finish?
00:58:912 - Remove finish.
01:06:023 (4) - Too close,fix.
01:13:578 (1) - Finish.

[Hard]
Fine,but missed some finishes,use I posted above.

Nice,star.
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure

Licnect wrote:

[ykcarrot's Insane]
00:12:253 Slider repeat is hidden due to the hitsplash of 00:10:920 [3] // The repeat arrow is shown while following slider ball. I asked some players to test this map, they never missed it. I won't fix.
Last edited by Sure , edited 1 time in total.
Licnect
Elite Mapper
367 posts
Joined May 2010
Licnect

ykcarrot wrote:

Licnect wrote:

[ykcarrot's Insane]
00:12:253 Slider repeat is hidden due to the hitsplash of 00:10:920 [3] // The repeat arrow is shown while following slider ball. I asked some player to test this map, they never missed it. I won't fix.
Okay~i can read too :D
but my map have same question
you can consultation :
viewtopic.php?f=14&t=36379&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=30
maybe can help you ;)
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
@Licnect

I know what is definitely unrankable thing. It's defined by timing difference.
BPM of this song and slider velocity aren't very fast, so repeat arrow appears when slider ball passes middle point of slider.


It needs just little attention.
Anyway thanks for your kindness.
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
thx to Lincect and IceBeam, most of your mod sentences are fixed.

anyway, I have no idea with timing, so I'll ask for timing experts. :D
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Annyong

[General]
1) In my opinion, you should change your video quality from high to low, or find the low quality of your video on website and download them to make bad/poor PC have a lot FPS (Frame per Second?) otherwise the poor/bad PC are completely lag during gameplay
2) Those approachcircle is from Nya-Chan! (osu!M@ster) Did you give a permission to her? OR you can credit her ON your beatmap creator words, otherwise, Nya-Chan will be mad at you because she is already did some hard work to make the approachcircle.png
3) Your BG is very very very very flat, you should find another BG so the BG looks good and clean
4) Make sure the comboburst has not cut off, I saw some comboburst are cut off. If you found the comboburst that cut off, you should replace them with the original one, otherwise comboburst are very ugly
5) Ugh, the mp3 Bit Rate are soooooooo unrankable. Maximum of bit rate is 192kbps and the minimum is 128kbps. You need to re-encode it using the program that program can to re-enconde your mp3, otherwise the mp3 quality is completely bad and very bad for listening the music

[Easy]
The slider velocity is too fast! Reduce it please

00:02:475 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:031 (1) - ^
00:09:586 (1) - ^
00:48:697 (1) - ^
01:08:697 (2,3) - Can you combine this into one slider? This is pretty difficult because 01:08:920 (3) place in red tick

[Normal]
00:02:475 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:031 (1) - ^
00:23:809 (1) - ^
00:38:031 (1) - ^
00:39:809 (1,2,3,4) - I guess you might want to arrange pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36757
01:08:697 (3) - Move 2 grid up? So the pattern looks clean?
01:20:697 (1,2,3,4) - These pattern are make no sense for me, maybe?
01:24:253 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern are weird~

[Hard]
00:02:475 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:031 (1) - ^
00:09:586 (2) - Remove finish at beginning?
00:14:920 (1) - Finish?
00:48:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make a pattern like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36758
01:19:809 (1,2) - Spacing? (correct me if I am wrong!)

[ykcarrot's Insane]
Nice one

[Taiko]
Fine, but too easy for me~

Good song
STAR
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

Leorda wrote:

Annyong
2) Those approachcircle is from Nya-Chan! (osu!M@ster) Did you give a permission to her? OR you can credit her ON your beatmap creator words, otherwise, Nya-Chan will be mad at you because she is already did some hard work to make the approachcircle.png
Well, I can't fix my map rightnow, but I'll fix it soon.

I find that approachcircle in this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15677, and got permission to him,

but I didn't know that this circle's maker is not same with that mapper(youngdow). I'll ask him to use this awesome skin,

and thx to noticing me. If you don't tell me about that, I never know who is this approachcircle's maker.

thank you so much!
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
I'll provide much better BG image, BG video and MP3 (even comboburst.png) than now.


EDIT : Here you are.
DL Link removed.

New MP3 was encoded by Lame VBR V2.
The new offset is 710 what I got. But I'm not sure about it, please ask timing expert.
And I tried my best at making comboburst images, but thier hairs are little bit messy.. orz


사실 예전 MP3는 소리가 너무컸어요.
지금건 크롭핑을 어느정도 고려해서 볼륨 키워놓은거라서 예전거보다 소리는 약간 작긴한데,
지금 설정해놓은 오디오볼륨(타이밍 섹션)들을 굳이 조정할 필요까진 없어보입니다.
오프셋을 710으로 잡아놓긴했는데, 제가 수차례 테스트 해봐도 좀 이상하군요.
아무래도 BPM문제일것 같은데 확실하진 않습니다. DJPop 모딩큐에 타이밍헬프 요청해보세요.
그리고 콤보버스트 이미지는 포토샵갖고 좀 끄적거려봤는데 머리카락 쪽은 좀 힘드네요.

Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) ([Shalon]) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
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Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Ohai~

[Easy]
HP Drain Rate +1 ?
01:09:364 (3) - Too close to the previous slider, It's confusing.
01:13:586 (1) -[Nazi] - Move 1 grid down

[Normal]
01:09:142 (5) - Sounds weird :/

[Hard]
00:38:697 (4,5) - Better like -> http://puu.sh/tQi

[ykcarrot]
<3<3<3

Nice *.*
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
fixed something.

Download: azusa - Kimi no mamade (TV size) ([Shalon]) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
Speed Mod

It's so cold today D: Freezing @_@

[Easy]

00:57:586 (1) - Remove Finish (there's too much hitsounds here) Adding less noise before Kiai Time makes it stand out more.

[Normal]

00:45:142 (3,4) - Remove one of the finishes here and replace with a whistle?


[Hard]

00:23:364 (4) - Spacing seems a bit weird compared to (2,3)

[ykcarrot's Insane]

Seems Fine.

[Taiko]

Seems Fine. Plays great.

Overall, I saw some overlapping combos (circle/sliders) that I usually don't like. Since the patterns themselves weren't wrong I didn't mention it.

Starr'd
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
Thx a lot, I'll fix it after. cuz here is school :(
KSHR
osu! Alumni
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
amagami~ :)
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[Easy]
01:09:364 (3) - move a bit farther from (2)

[Normal] - fine~

[Hard]
- sound claps a bit loud x_x low vulome it a bit? (only a past that has sound claps)

[YK] - nice

mapset look fine ~ well done!
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

orioncomet wrote:

[Easy]
01:09:364 (3) - move a bit farther from (2)

[Normal] - fine~

[Hard]
- sound claps a bit loud x_x low vulome it a bit? (only a past that has sound claps)

[YK] - nice

mapset look fine ~ well done!
Thanks a lot, but now, my main computer have some problems, so I can't fix it few days T^T

I'll fix both computer and map soon
Sharp
249 posts
Joined June 2010
Sharp
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