1. Advanced (2,53 stars, 124 notes)
2. Easy (1,56 stars, 64 notes)
3. Hard (3,22 stars, 176 notes)
4. Insane (4,32 stars, 230 notes)
5. MBomb's Imagination (4,45 stars, 188 notes)
6. MBomb's Rain (3,76 stars, 161 notes)
7. Normal (2,19 stars, 110 notes)

Marianna wrote:

Easy

1. 00:09:115 (3,6) - These sliders are rather intense for this part of the map. made the slighlty more simple in shape
2. 00:26:459 (5,1,2,3) - It's a bit difficult having to keep going up and down with DT on an Easy. but that diff is mainly designed for new players that play it nomod. thats like saying "remove the 1/8 stacks on extra because I can't dt them". Also this movement feels really nice here and makes the part a bit more interesting
3. 00:15:678 (1,2) - It would be a little better a retro slide making blanket with 00:16:615 (3) - Since this map there is no straight slider. made a nice blanket here
4. 00:41:459 (5,1,2) - Intense Up and down. a triangle again, like before.

Normal

1. 00:06:068 - BNs dislike Overmaps at low difficulty, I advise you to change the hitsound in the end of this slider. not overmapped. But I have to say a soft hitsound would be better here made soft on sliderend for all diffs
2. 00:16:615 (4,4) - Intense sliders where there is no need straight 3/2 sliders would look boring here, they fit really nice
3. 00:19:896 (3,6) - Bad Blanket k
4. 00:24:115 (4,4) - Intense same as before
5. 00:39:115 (4) - ^ ^
6. 00:40:990 (4) - ~^

Advanced

1. 00:29:271 (3,4) - Bad Blanket. fix
2. 00:31:615 (4) - This could be more symmetrical. done
3. 00:38:178 (1) - This could be more beautiful for players. done

Deppyforce wrote:

from my mod queue xdxdxdxdxdxxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdx

[Easy]
00:02:553 (3,4) - blanket (4) with (3) and change pattern will looks nicer imo current one flows better

00:13:803 (3,4) - imo this should be mapped with a 1/2 slider and 2 circles (revert and add circle) this is fine for easy

00:44:740 (6) - this is pretty strong should be mapped with 2 circles 00:43:803 (4,5) - need circles too and I dont want to put so many taps in a row on easy

[Normal]
00:10:990 (4) - nc uh, I removed nc from 00:09:115 (1) - instead to make it consistent with the other stuff

00:33:490 (4,1,2,3) - make a square sure

00:45:795 (1) - this should start on red tick to keep note consistency with the rest of the map 00:43:803 (1,2,4,5) - all start on white tick and the music implies it too

[Insane]
00:08:646 (2) - change to 2 circles

00:09:584 (4) - ^
those are part of the buildup, I'd like to keep them like that, I dont want too much density here so I can increase it at 00:10:053 (1) -

00:13:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this 1/2stream shape might be too hard for this SR It's fine for Insane

00:34:428 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4079051 uhh https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4079168 but I changed the shape a bit to make it look nicer

[Extra]
00:11:459 (8) - pretty strong should be 2 circles slider is fine here imo

00:12:396 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - curve pls this parts flow is bad this is aligned like a star with growing spacing as the song gets more intense, curving wouldnt look nice here. It's supposed to play like it does now :v

00:22:709 (3) - revert and add circle on red tick current one is fine, bring more diversity for the rhythm since the song is pretty much the same loop all the time

thats all from me im lazy lool

gl :3

FCL wrote:

o/
M4M from your queue

• [General]

1. uncheck widescreen support at easy diff

• [Easy]

1. 00:09:115 (3) - i think you could be do this slider a more symmentrical (i mean 1st and last points of hold)
2. 00:10:990 (6) - same
3. 00:11:928 (1) - looks bad for me, If you delete 1st white point of hold this will look better fine for me
4. 00:13:803 (3) - same ^
5. 00:21:771 (4) - maybe copy 00:19:896 (2) - and ctrl+h? lol that is the same just flipped and rotated already
6. 00:40:521 (4) - same, i don't like this form
7. 00:42:396 (2,3) - improve blanket
8. 00:44:271 (5,6) - same

• [Normal]

1. 00:02:553 (1,2,3,4) - hm idk. Relativity of previous patterns this patterns looks weird. Ideal was copy 00:00:678 (1,2,3,4) - and press ctrl+j and ctrl+h, but you can also gradually increase the angle between 00:02:553 (1,2,3) I like it like that, having the same just slightly changed afterwards would make it even more repetitve than 8x 1/2 sliders in a row already are
2. 00:06:537 (2) - move a bit ( 169 290) for better blanketfixed blanket

• [Advanced]

1. 00:08:646 (2,4) - this sliders created the blanket, but blankets look different that don't fine, fix it
   k
2. 00:30:678 (1) - what? looks bad imo
3. 00:32:553 (1) - same, looks weird, but it will be fine if you do this slider symmetrical
4. 00:44:271 (3) - same, don't like this form
   remade those sliders

• [Hard]

1. 00:19:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - btw, here can create a beautiful patterns in the form of pentagon
2. 00:21:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same, but in the form of cross
   made those look a bit nicer

• [Insane]

1. 00:29:974 (3,4,1) - i'm not sure that this fine for read the whole part from 00:28:803 (1) - has the same spacing structure so it is fine to read also used the same spacing for 1/4 before all the time.

• [Extra]

1. 00:11:459 (8) - this form is not needed because music remains a same i think this is fine with the music
2. 00:15:209 (1,1) - imo stack will be better i dont think I ever stacked 3/4 sliders on any serious map, don't like that most of the time
3. 00:19:428 (1) - same as 00:11:459 (8), although nah, it will be fine if you make slider to curve at start
4. 00:29:271 (1) - not sure that this form approach for your style made this straight instead of shitty :v
5. 00:36:303 (1,3) - the overlap looks it not good i liked it at the beginning but yes, it looks bad, done
6. 00:39:584 (3) - move a bit for improve this section sure, also fixed blanket
7. 00:38:646 (3) - same overlap same

hard something say, your style It is very different from my. Some patterns looks not very neat, although they corresponds to music.
GL!

-Tochi wrote:

M4M from your queue

• 
  

  General

1. The source of the map should be 東方永夜抄 or Imperishable Night
2. The artist can either be 長尾ちえみ (Chiemi Nagao) or Halozy feat.長尾ちえみ

idk, the song is no an actual tohou arrange since it is only the intro, so I'll keep it like that for now. seemd fine for the last one I mapped where I checked with some people. I'll definitely look into it again once hte map is actually ready for ranking/color]

• 
  

  Extra

1. 00:04:896 (3,4) - The flow here is a bit weird, maybe do Ctrl+G on this 00:04:896 (3) - or do something like this: http://puu.sh/lMUoc/cce2c5b97e.png
2. 00:06:303 (1,2) - These are too close to each other, imo you should move (2) to x:162 | y:68, so the sldierend stacks on 00:07:006 (4) - You might have did sth like that to move 00:06:771 (3) - a bit to the right for more fluent movement.
3. 00:11:928 (1,2) - Move these two like this: http://puu.sh/lMUB0/ec03d7c79b.png for a better looking and better flow. rearranged a bit like that
4. 00:16:381 (4,5,6,7) - I would recommend you to change this into a slider like: http://puu.sh/lMUIm/aa5d51ecce.png
5. 00:18:256 (4,5,6,7) - Same as above.
6. 00:20:131 (4,5,6,7) - Same ^
7. 00:22:006 (4,5,6,7) - Same. I will stop pointing these out, but imo you should fix them all, and change it to a 1/8 slider instead.
   those are like the core of this, lol. I already stacked them so even people that have problems with the bpm can kinda mash them, lol. there is an insane for people that cant handly those after all

• 
  

  Insane

1. 00:16:381 (4,5,6,7) - Im not sure about this, but i think it's playable.. It's fine :v
2. 00:31:615 (6,7) - This is a pretty random placement/awkward, you should at least avoid the overlap to improve it. It was meant to be a bit confusing, but I changed it anyways lol
3. 00:33:490 (6,7) - Ctrl+G?
4. 00:35:365 (6,7) - Same as above.
   they are meant to be like that
5. 00:41:224 (1) - Remove NC. No need for it makes it easier to read

• 
  

  Feedback

  
  I modded the needed diff as you wanted from ur queue

DylanSan wrote:

Hey from my queue

General

Work on your balnkets a bit on easier diffs

Easy

00:00:678 (1,2) - this blanket is not perfect as good as it can get with that slider + ds
00:11:928 (1,2,3) - Missed perfect blanket opportunity changed and even plays better now
00:19:896 (2,3,4) - This could be symetrical made them identical but second one is +15° rotated since that plays better herel

Normal

00:06:303 (1,2) - blanket is off
00:29:974 (5,6) - ^
00:37:943 (6,1) - ^
all fixed
00:43:803 (1,2,3) - Missed blanket opportunity imo current one is nicer than blanketing

Advanced

00:17:318 (5,1) - Blanket is off
00:19:193 (5,1) - ^ all fixed

Hard

00:06:303 (1) - What is this supposed to be, i hear nothing on the blue tick guess I can make it 1/2 here
00:06:537 - That small kickslider fits better here imo fine as it is right now
Nothing much wrong here

Insane

LOVE THIS

Extra

256BPM bursts? Rip easy DT pp hahaha
Love this too

XxSeonxX wrote:

Hello, from my NM queue

mod

Extra
00:16:029 (2,3) - maybe use a DS of 0.6 for this? These also 00:16:967 (2,3) 00:17:904 (2,3) 00:18:842 (2,3) 00:19:779 (2,3) 00:20:717 (2,3) 00:21:654 (2,3) 00:23:529 (2,3) 00:25:404 (2,3) 00:26:342 (2,3) 00:27:279 (2,3) 00:28:217 (2,3) 00:28:803 (1,2,3,4)
that spacing is pretty much the core of the map
00:45:678 (1) - finish

Insane
00:45:678 (1) - finish

Hard
00:06:303 (1,2) - blanket
00:09:115 (3,4) - why is the gap between these different from the 1st 2? wow, overlooked that, fixed
00:45:678 (1) - finish

Advanced
00:10:404 - I think you missed something here There is sth there, but this is a lower difficulty so I ignore it for easier gameplay/rhythm
00:37:474 (5,6) - blanket
00:41:693 (5,1) - ^
00:45:678 (3) - finish

Normal
AR 4 5 is better for the spread and stil lfine for this diff
00:20:599 (5,6) - blanket here could be better
00:24:115 (4,1) - blanket
00:39:115 (4,1) - ^
00:45:678 (5) - finish

Easy
00:00:678 (1,2) - blanket
00:45:678 (1) - finish

added those finishes for the last note on every diff and fixed the blankets

that's all I can find, good luck
Edit: for extra, I accidentally didn't put space between the time...sorry...

Baraatje123 wrote:

Hi

[General]
All clear
This song is cool!!!

[Easy]
00:13:803 (3) - As it's a low bpm, please make this 1/2, to fit the music more 1/1 is betetr for easier and more consisten rhythm
00:34:896 (2,3,4) - Flow seems a bit broken here seems fine for me
00:43:803 (4) - Nc for rhythm change? k

[Normal]
00:03:021 (2) - Flip it vertically? It follows the previous combo better (and flows the same du to leniency)
00:39:115 (4,1) - Blanket
00:45:678 (5) - NC, for consisteny with easy
all applied

[Advanced]
00:45:678 (3) - NC, for consisteny with easy sure
Great diff, only the red noded slider feel a bit cramped, consider making them less crmaped :3 Think they are quite nice actually


[Hard]
00:13:334 (4,1) - This jump is too high, people need to hold the slider due to the reverses, so they don't have (much) leniency nerfed it pretty hard

[Insane]
00:11:459 (8) - Feels a bit out of place, and quite cramped changed
00:15:209 (2) - stack?
Uhm, I'm not sure about the 1/8 here. They fit, but the spacings a re a bit weird, and cause weird game play imo
same as for Insane, that spacing is pretty much what makes it interesting to play, just throwing in all same ds 1/4 quads would make this really boring

[Extra]
00:19:428 (1) - Can be seen as burai changed
Hmm, not sure about the 1/4 circles after the 1/8 streams, the doublets feel quite weird, why not make the 2nd circle a 1/4 slider, so it at least is full 1/4! that is pretty much the main aspect of the map. might as well remove this diff if I did that :/ It's pretty much meant to for people with nicesingletap so they singletap the 128bpm 1/4 or people who are good at alternating so it won't bother them

-Kanzaki wrote:

Hello m4m queue


Extra :

• 
  
  00:08:178 (8) - From here start using 1/4 slider 00:08:178 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - sliders and 00:10:053 (16) - a single tap so your next triplet doesn't gets broken.
  
  00:10:756 (5,6,7) - ^ same
  ugh, that would feel really overdone
  00:13:803 (1) - After this object you see its something really different so i would recommend you to put this stream after this object to another way so we can tell its something else(emphasising more just) Well you might not understand what i meant so what i did for example you can probably make something better is ctrl + j and ctrl+h and ctrl+g rotation a little. So it goes somewhere else instead of you repetitive triangle stream to emphasis. there is enough emphasis by the way they are arranged since the circles top touching at that point
  
  00:43:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Too dangerous, hard to read mb keep then just in simple flow but you can still use a distance on 4 and 1 to emphasis yep but let them follow each other tho. would ruin the whole concept. it is fine considering the ar/bpm and all

For Hard :

[*] 00:23:881 (4) - You don't have to undermap here you can just use 1/8 reversed slider.
not putting 1/8 on hard, even with that bpm and rev. slider stuff




For Advanced :

[*] 00:11:928 (1) - Have you ever seen this kind of sliders for streams on low difficulties : http://puu.sh/lWi0X/6e7c371319.jpg - Try it with 2.00 SV it wont be a problem since they are sliders. Mine is kinda not good drawed but if you get the idea you can do something better. Or you could just use a spin tho but meh.
that isn't even rankable since the point make the sldier play slower lol



For Normal :


[*]00:13:803 (1) - delete it and start 00:14:037 (2) - on white tick which you deleted the circle on it and add a circle on 00:14:506 (4)
changed a bit, but the clicking rhythm stays

[*]Those 00:25:990 (4) - kind of sliders are too long it has to end at 00:26:459 end it here and add a circle after it and same for other same sliders.
this feels better with the music and everything



For Easy :

[*]00:09:115 (3) - End the slider on 00:09:584 it is a problem for easy diff its hard to click to next circle like this cause like rhytm changing, Do Not overuse 1/2 on easy you are not allowed to. You have to stick with 1/1 if its obvioulsy has to be 1/2 then you can but as i can see the song is simple and you dont need to do it on anywhere. bpm is low and spacing too, should be fine like that




Thats all its short bt the song is too.
GL

• 
  Everything seems good!

• No problems found here.

• 00:10:053 (1) - Make this slider a 1/1. The beat on the blue tick here 00:10:404 - is as strong as 00:10:521 (2) - so it's pretty confusing. It's usually best to cover strong beats you're not mapping with sliders than leaving them like that.

• 00:43:803 (1,2) - For the same reason as I mentioned above, I would replace those hitcircles with a slider.

• 00:16:615 (6,7) - The spacing between these 2 sliders is too short in my opinion, because of the spacing of these 00:16:146 (3,4) - . I would suggest making the spacing between 00:16:146 (3,4,6,7) - equal.
  00:44:740 (1,1,1) - I'm curious as to why you decided to stack these but in advanced difficulty you spaced them out. I mean there's nothing wrong with that and you could keep it but maybe you could think of something cooler!

• 00:02:787 (2,7,1) - Stack these.
  00:10:053 (1) - Try to avoid this overlap.
  00:15:678 (1) - If you don't want to stack this then I would move it to x:412 y:176. However you have stacked it here 00:30:209 (1,1) - so it would promote consistency.
  00:33:373 (5,6) - Spacing too high here.
  00:34:428 (1) - Not sure if this is rankable. Looks pretty crooked.
  00:35:248 (5,6) - Spacing also applies here.
  00:40:873 (5,1,2,1,2) - This pattern is very awkward to play. I'm fine with the spacing but you could do something that flows better.

• 00:05:131 (4) - this is too close to 00:04:896 (3) - . Try making the spacing between 00:04:662 (2,3,4) - equal.
  00:23:178 (1) - Ctrl + G and move these 00:23:529 (2,3) - accordingly? The pause between 00:22:709 (3,1) - feels awkward to me.
  00:24:584 (3,1) - Here too.
  00:39:349 (2) - Ctrl + G.

Riven wrote:

Hi, M4M from your queue.

[General]

• 
  Everything seems good!

[Easy]

• No problems found here.

[Normal]

• 00:10:053 (1) - Make this slider a 1/1. The beat on the blue tick here 00:10:404 - is as strong as 00:10:521 (2) - so it's pretty confusing. It's usually best to cover strong beats you're not mapping with sliders than leaving them like that think this rhythm is okay too and plays nicer.

[Advanced]

• 00:43:803 (1,2) - For the same reason as I mentioned above, I would replace those hitcircles with a slider. would be too boring here imo

[Hard]

• 00:16:615 (6,7) - The spacing between these 2 sliders is too short in my opinion, because of the spacing of these 00:16:146 (3,4) - . I would suggest making the spacing between 00:16:146 (3,4,6,7) - equal. sure
  00:44:740 (1,1,1) - I'm curious as to why you decided to stack these but in advanced difficulty you spaced them out. I mean there's nothing wrong with that and you could keep it but maybe you could think of something cooler! I like this one here. Basically having some variety between two diffs and all

[Insane]

• 00:02:787 (2,7,1) - Stack these. no! but I unstacked them more so it doesnt look like a mistake :v
  00:10:053 (1) - Try to avoid this overlap.
  00:15:678 (1) - If you don't want to stack this then I would move it to x:412 y:176. However you have stacked it here 00:30:209 (1,1) - so it would promote consistency.
  1/2 vs 1/4
  
  00:33:373 (5,6) - Spacing too high here.
  00:35:248 (5,6) - Spacing also applies here.
  intended
  
  00:34:428 (1) - Not sure if this is rankable. Looks pretty crooked. uh, fixed/redraw slider
  00:40:873 (5,1,2,1,2) - This pattern is very awkward to play. I'm fine with the spacing but you could do something that flows better. Oh come on eveyone loves zigzag patterns :v

[Extra]

• 00:05:131 (4) - this is too close to 00:04:896 (3) - . Try making the spacing between 00:04:662 (2,3,4) - equal. yes
  00:23:178 (1) - Ctrl + G and move these 00:23:529 (2,3) - accordingly? The pause between 00:22:709 (3,1) - feels awkward to me.
  00:24:584 (3,1) - Here too.
  I do that all the time :v I think it is fitting lol. Always stack 1/2 before Nc on this diff
  00:39:349 (2) - Ctrl + G k.

thanks, will mod your map later today
Good luck!

Lasse wrote:

-Tochi wrote:

M4M from your queue

• 
  

  General

1. The source of the map should be 東方永夜抄 or Imperishable Night
2. The artist can either be 長尾ちえみ (Chiemi Nagao) or Halozy feat.長尾ちえみ

idk, the song is no an actual tohou arrange since it is only the intro, so I'll keep it like that for now. seemd fine for the last one I mapped where I checked with some people. I'll definitely look into it again once hte map is actually ready for ranking

1. 00:03:256 (4,5,6) - I think a sharper angle here would improve flow (like how you did 00:01:381 (4,5,6) - )
2. 00:29:037 (3,4) - move this to [240, 192] so 00:28:920 (2,3) and 00:29:154 (4,1) have equal spacing (if anything, (4,1) should have larger spacing because of slider leniency)
3. 00:30:209 (1) - this slider is much harder to follow since its smooth and very curved, compared to your other sliders that are either straight are scrunched. I'd recommend changing the shape
4. 00:42:631 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't think these 1/8's fit the song here. You've been using 1/8s to emphasize strong beats, but this one feels pretty weak in comparison. I think making these last couple seconds all jumpy would be better.

1. 00:01:615 (5) - this is a stronger beat than (4) or (6), so (4,5) should have a larger spacing than (5,6) imo. The other option is to keep all the spacings exactly the same.
2. 00:03:490 (5) - same thing
3. 00:16:381 (4,5,6,7) - I'm not a fan of this rhythm, but if you insist on using it, move 00:16:615 (6,7) - to [168,334] for better flow
4. 00:18:490 (6,7) - same thing, move this down and left a little. Later it's ok to make the flow more jerky since players will have gotten used to the rhythm
5. 00:22:240 (6) - move to [424, 160]. flow is more important here to be consistent with 00:20:131 (4,5,6,7) -
6. 00:26:342 (8,9) - ctrl+g and move up so it's the same height as 00:25:990 (6,7) - better flow and aesthetics
7. 00:40:990 (1,2,1,2,1) - why NC happy now?
8. 00:42:631 (2,3) - same comment about unnecessary 1/8 rhythm here
9. visually, it would look nicer if you moved some notes down so that 00:45:678 (1) - ends right in the center of the map

1. 00:41:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the consecutive triples feel a little too difficult for a hard diff. maybe use some repeat sliders instead

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~
I'm not used to modding this style, so this will be a little short
[Extra]

1. 00:03:256 (4,5,6) - I think a sharper angle here would improve flow (like how you did 00:01:381 (4,5,6) - ) current one seems fine for me
2. 00:29:037 (3,4) - move this to [240, 192] so 00:28:920 (2,3) and 00:29:154 (4,1) have equal spacing (if anything, (4,1) should have larger spacing because of slider leniency) made them equally spaced
3. 00:30:209 (1) - this slider is much harder to follow since its smooth and very curved, compared to your other sliders that are either straight are scrunched. I'd recommend changing the shape perfectly catches the momentum of 2, plays fine
4. 00:42:631 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't think these 1/8's fit the song here. You've been using 1/8s to emphasize strong beats, but this one feels pretty weak in comparison. I think making these last couple seconds all jumpy would be better. think they fit just fine

[Insane]

1. 00:01:615 (5) - this is a stronger beat than (4) or (6), so (4,5) should have a larger spacing than (5,6) imo. The other option is to keep all the spacings exactly the same. eh, they are all the same sound and some not using same ds for all makes them a bit more interesting for an insane
2. 00:03:490 (5) - same thing
3. 00:16:381 (4,5,6,7) - I'm not a fan of this rhythm, but if you insist on using it, move 00:16:615 (6,7) - to [168,334] for better flow
4. 00:18:490 (6,7) - same thing, move this down and left a little. Later it's ok to make the flow more jerky since players will have gotten used to the rhythm
   I think those are fine like that
5. 00:22:240 (6) - move to [424, 160]. flow is more important here to be consistent with 00:20:131 (4,5,6,7) - plays fine
6. 00:26:342 (8,9) - ctrl+g and move up so it's the same height as 00:25:990 (6,7) - better flow and aesthetics changed this part
7. 00:40:990 (1,2,1,2,1) - why NC happy now? makes it way easier to read, as else it easily mislead people to think they have to hit 00:40:990 (1,1) - and not 00:40:990 (1,2) -
8. 00:42:631 (2,3) - same comment about unnecessary 1/8 rhythm here this feels so nice imo
9. visually, it would look nicer if you moved some notes down so that 00:45:678 (1) - ends right in the center of the map done

[Hard]

1. 00:41:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the consecutive triples feel a little too difficult for a hard diff. maybe use some repeat sliders instead should be fine, the bpm is low and there is also an advanced diff for people that can't handle that one

One last thing. Is the kiai really necessary? It's a short song that's basically one big build-up to the last note w/o an obvious place to start the kiai.
place for kiai is fine, just listen to the part starting from 00:30:678 (1) - there is a new "background sound" added so it feels fine to make that part harder and kiai it


Hope that helps and good luck with ranking!

1. Personally, I think AR2.7-3.0 will be totally fine for this difficulty. D:
2. 00:00:678 (1) - Um, well... The transition from this note to another one could be nicer, like, how about you make it like *THIS so the transition between two notes is nicer?
3. 00:43:803 (1) - If you compare this moment with 00:13:803 (3) - this you'll notice NCing inconsistency, so just remove a NC from the first note or create a NC on the second one.
4. 00:43:803 (1,2,3) - Aaaaand this would play better if you made a circular flow because now it can confuse noobs with this rather sharp and inconsistent flow if you ask me, so I recommend something like *THIS*.

1. 00:05:834 (4) - I don't really think it's a good idea to use a slider that ends at 00:06:068 - due to it being different than breaks at 00:02:318 - 00:04:193 - 00:07:943 - . Concluding my idea, the accurate patterning might be confusing for players since it appears kind of random.
2. 00:08:178 (1,1,1) - Since those have NCs, how about you create a NC at 00:10:990 (4) - as well? There's nothing different there. D:
3. 00:13:803 (1,2,3) - This plays kind of odd to me because you're ignoring some important beats there and the structure is kind of lol when it comes to the rhythm thing. How about *THIS* so the rhythm can be played like *THAT*?

Krfawy wrote:

Hi, a mod as requested in my Bleeding Queue! :3

Easy

1. Personally, I think AR2.7-3.0 will be totally fine for this difficulty. D: 3.2 it is :v
2. 00:00:678 (1) - Um, well... The transition from this note to another one could be nicer, like, how about you make it like *THIS so the transition between two notes is nicer? I think the current movement is fine and it looks nice
3. 00:43:803 (1) - If you compare this moment with 00:13:803 (3) - this you'll notice NCing inconsistency, so just remove a NC from the first note or create a NC on the second one. right, removed
4. 00:43:803 (1,2,3) - Aaaaand this would play better if you made a circular flow because now it can confuse noobs with this rather sharp and inconsistent flow if you ask me, so I recommend something like *THIS*. sure

Normal

1. 00:05:834 (4) - I don't really think it's a good idea to use a slider that ends at 00:06:068 - due to it being different than breaks at 00:02:318 - 00:04:193 - 00:07:943 - . Concluding my idea, the accurate patterning might be confusing for players since it appears kind of random. Yes it is differen, but unlike the others this is so audible so it feels fine, if they all were the same sound I'd make a break here too. the tapping pattern stays teh same so eh
2. 00:08:178 (1,1,1) - Since those have NCs, how about you create a NC at 00:10:990 (4) - as well? There's nothing different there. D: sure
3. 00:13:803 (1,2,3) - This plays kind of odd to me because you're ignoring some important beats there and the structure is kind of lol when it comes to the rhythm thing. How about *THIS* so the rhythm can be played like *THAT*?
   the rhythm you suggest is the same I used for 00:43:803 (1) - , which is way better, idk why this is different. applied

Extra and Insane difficulties are scary as hell... :vvvvvvvvv

Good luck! \:3/

Ster wrote:

i feel that that countdown has a british accent

Not used to modding MB's high-CS style, so found little issues.

[Rain]
00:24:115 (3) - Move this a bit closer to the previous object. - Done.
00:26:342 (4) - Move this closer to the next object. - Done.
00:43:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Reduce the spacing by a bit. - I think this is better flowwise how it is now.

[imageenasheun]
I suggest reducing the AR to 9.3; it's an intense song/difficulty but the song itself has a pretty slow pace. - Done.

00:30:092 (8) - Move this a bit farther from the previous object. - I wanted a decreasing curve to ease into the next hyper.
00:45:678 (1) - Try copypasting 00:45:209 (6) - and Ctrl+H it. - I prefer how it is now simply because that's in the middle of the plate with a dash from 6 how it is now.

all that i could find o.o

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- Magic Bomb - wrote:

Thanks for the mod! Lasse, please make my Imagination diff AR9.3, no point sending the code just for that.

1. I think you should add Touhou to the tags, I'm aware this track is not an arrangement but the full album is related to it, and as an intro the track becomes related as well. You could also add the catalog number if you want ("HLZY-0022"), some people use it xd

1. 00:19:896 (2,4) - you could make these have the same shape, the pattern almost looks symmetrical but the sliders ruin that look
2. 00:44:271 (5,6) - flow here doesn't feel right, move 6 a bit more to the right
3. You have some useless green timing points in this diff, naming 00:15:560 - and 00:45:736 - , the second one isn't completely useless but you only lower the volume by 10% for less than half a second, so it would be better to just delete it imo, the one at 00:46:146 - will do the job just fine

1. 00:05:834 (4) - I know what you're following here, but this slider still makes it really confusing for this diff, as you don't want to remove it what about adding a note on 00:06:068 - , instead of the slider end? As the highlighted part changes, the player will at least click and realize it changed
2. 00:15:560 - timing point is not needed
3. 00:44:740 (3) - would look and flow better if it was around x:112 y:240, then you'd have to adjust 00:45:209 (4,1) -
4. This is just a little note, the calmer part from 00:23:178 - until 00:30:678 - when the hi-hat stops should be mapped differently from the other parts because it expresses a weaker sound, so imo you could have used a slider like 00:25:990 (4) - throughout the whole section (on the fitting parts ofc) instead of using a heavier pattern like 00:27:865 (4,5,6) - . I'd exclude 00:29:740 (4,5,6) - because it follows the vocals. This is just my opinion though, map's fine ^^

1. Only found one thing on this diff, on 00:29:506 (4) - the vocals start mid slider, and they are strong enough to be clicked, at least 00:29:740 - , so I think you could let a note on 00:29:506 - and then start the slider where you have the preview point, the current pattern makes it really confusing to get into 00:30:209 (5) - timing wise

1. 00:05:834 (6,1) - this flow is meh xd the direction you gave 00:06:303 (1) - makes it really uncomfortable while changing sliders

1. Why do 00:20:131 (4,5,6,7) - , 00:22:006 (4,5,6,7) - and 00:27:631 (4,5,6,7) - have smaller spacing between (5) and (6)? it does make a difference when playing, and as they are kind of randomly between the higher spaced ones, it might cause some combo breaks
2. 00:29:271 (1) - why'd you put a slider here ;w; we have to focus a lot on cursor placement on this part, and because this slider is there now we also have to focus on rhythm because we can't click on 00:29:388 - , what I'm trying to say is that the slider makes the player break the rhythm and probably mess it up if he's focused on cursor placement (which on this part will most likely happen)
3. 00:29:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the flow here is terrifying, it's definitely playable, but it's so compact that it makes the cursor movement weird
4. 00:33:256 (4,5,6,7) - and 00:35:131 (4,5,6,7) - simply feel overdone, the spacing between (5) and (6) doesn't feel right and is not consistent with the rest of the diff

1. Diff seems fine, if only I could play the bursts, but I'm slow xD Only thing is that I just can't play 00:44:154 (4,1) - might be me, but this jump seems pretty unplayable in general, while it looks pretty it isn't that fun to play

- Milhofo - wrote:

Hi, from my queue ^^

[General]

1. I think you should add Touhou to the tags, I'm aware this track is not an arrangement but the full album is related to it, and as an intro the track becomes related as well. You could also add the catalog number if you want ("HLZY-0022"), some people use it xd added the hlzy thing, idk about adding touhou, will think about it

[Easy]

1. 00:19:896 (2,4) - you could make these have the same shape, the pattern almost looks symmetrical but the sliders ruin that look made perfectly symmetrical
2. 00:44:271 (5,6) - flow here doesn't feel right, move 6 a bit more to the right think it'S fine, stars with simple movement down and the chnages direction at 00:44:740 (6) - which puts nice emphasis on the drum souns
3. You have some useless green timing points in this diff, naming 00:15:560 - and 00:45:736 - , the second one isn't completely useless but you only lower the volume by 10% for less than half a second, so it would be better to just delete it imo, the one at 00:46:146 - will do the job just fineoverlooked the first one it seems, removed. second one is needed to end the kiai at exact same spot for all diffs and the one 1/8 before too since I want this last finishing note to be a bit louder than before

[Normal]

1. 00:05:834 (4) - I know what you're following here, but this slider still makes it really confusing for this diff, as you don't want to remove it what about adding a note on 00:06:068 - , instead of the slider end? As the highlighted part changes, the player will at least click and realize it changed changed some stuff and added a circle there
2. 00:15:560 - timing point is not needed o
3. 00:44:740 (3) - would look and flow better if it was around x:112 y:240, then you'd have to adjust 00:45:209 (4,1) - moved this around
4. This is just a little note, the calmer part from 00:23:178 - until 00:30:678 - when the hi-hat stops should be mapped differently from the other parts because it expresses a weaker sound, so imo you could have used a slider like 00:25:990 (4) - throughout the whole section (on the fitting parts ofc) instead of using a heavier pattern like 00:27:865 (4,5,6) - . I'd exclude 00:29:740 (4,5,6) - because it follows the vocals. This is just my opinion though, map's fine ^^ well that makes sense and I thought about it, but I think keeping the diff simpler is fine too and I mainly focus on the main melody for the whole map anyways

[Advanced]

1. Only found one thing on this diff, on 00:29:506 (4) - the vocals start mid slider, and they are strong enough to be clicked, at least 00:29:740 - , so I think you could let a note on 00:29:506 - and then start the slider where you have the preview point, the current pattern makes it really confusing to get into 00:30:209 (5) - timing wise wanted to be consistent with music on 00:25:990 (4) - but I agree I doen't go well with the vocals even if they are never my main focus here, changed

[Hard]

1. 00:05:834 (6,1) - this flow is meh xd the direction you gave 00:06:303 (1) - makes it really uncomfortable while changing sliders true, changed sldiershapes

[Insane]

1. Why do 00:20:131 (4,5,6,7) - , 00:22:006 (4,5,6,7) - and 00:27:631 (4,5,6,7) - have smaller spacing between (5) and (6)? it does make a difference when playing, and as they are kind of randomly between the higher spaced ones, it might cause some combo breaks true, don't even know anymore as I made this diff some months ago, made them consistent
2. 00:29:271 (1) - why'd you put a slider here ;w; we have to focus a lot on cursor placement on this part, and because this slider is there now we also have to focus on rhythm because we can't click on 00:29:388 - , what I'm trying to say is that the slider makes the player break the rhythm and probably mess it up if he's focused on cursor placement (which on this part will most likely happen) hm, the sldier plays like a kickslider, so only need to tap and not to hold. which would even allow to tap that blue tick without anything happening, makes the pattern abit more technical/finger control, I think it's fine. also 00:29:388 - just doesn't seem as strong to me as the others
3. 00:29:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the flow here is terrifying, it's definitely playable, but it's so compact that it makes the cursor movement weird lol I personally really like the movement here with the song http://i.imgur.com/ZpUSedR.png
4. 00:33:256 (4,5,6,7) - and 00:35:131 (4,5,6,7) - simply feel overdone, the spacing between (5) and (6) doesn't feel right and is not consistent with the rest of the diff seems about right, I ctrl-g'd them to be in line with the others

[Extra]

1. Diff seems fine, if only I could play the bursts, but I'm slow xD they are stacked, just doubletpa mash :v
   Only thing is that I just can't play 00:44:154 (4,1) - might be me, but this jump seems pretty unplayable in general, while it looks pretty it isn't that fun to play did some rotational stuff to keep the same circular flow and lowered the distance of the jump, should be fine now and still look nice

[Overall]
Fun map, actually found it weird that I found less problems on the Extra lolExtra was mapped quite some time after Insane with way more experiecne :v
Good luck on ranking :3

TequilaWolf wrote:

these are only suggestions.

Extra-

00:00:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kinda repetitive, maybe change some to 1/4 sliders like you did 00:04:662 (2,3) - here? nothing really in the music to support 1/4 sliders here, so I'll keep the jumps, also makes the buildup feel nicer
00:06:303 (1,2) - move these away from the sliderend? not sure, they feel better somewhere else o: ruins the whoel strcuture of this part ;_;
00:14:740 (1) - is this intentionally placed further away xD I think since there is no follow-up for that it's good to stick to original 00:14:271 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
It is consistent with before, increased spacing every 4 notes/nc, would be wierd to not jave it like that imo
00:43:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - hmm..I selected 00:44:271 (1,2,3,4) - and dragged it somewhere a little bottom right it feels better o: don't really enjoy the current overlap Yes, I remade this again, hope it is better this time

gl c:

1. 00:14:740 (1,2,1) - Stack these.
2. 00:05:834 (6) - Curve this slider like this. http://puu.sh/mmuPT.png Adjust the blanket.
3. 00:13:803 (1,2,3,4) - Straighten this out.
4. 00:14:506 (2) - Try placing this slider here. I think this plays better. http://puu.sh/mmv3c.png
5. 00:20:365 (4) - Ctrl+> and place around x: 281 y: 214. I think this looks and plays much better.
6. 00:22:240 (4) - http://puu.sh/mmxdt.png ?
7. 00:27:865 (5) - You get the idea.
8. 00:44:740 (1,1,1) - Stack these?

1. 00:04:896 (3) - Angle this to look more like this. http://puu.sh/mmxkV.png
2. 00:18:256 (4,5) - I'm not a huge fan of these. Why not make these plain bursts instead? Maybe reverse sliders?

_vanity wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue. o/
[Hard]

1. 00:14:740 (1,2,1) - Stack these. custom stack fits better here
2. 00:05:834 (6) - Curve this slider like this. http://puu.sh/mmuPT.png Adjust the blanket. current curving looks fine
3. 00:13:803 (1,2,3,4) - Straighten this out. sure
4. 00:14:506 (2) - Try placing this slider here. I think this plays better. http://puu.sh/mmv3c.png like the current angles more
5. 00:20:365 (4) - Ctrl+> and place around x: 281 y: 214. I think this looks and plays much better. not my intended movement, current one plays fine
6. 00:22:240 (4) - http://puu.sh/mmxdt.png ? ruins the 00:21:537 (2,3,4,5,6) - square
7. 00:27:865 (5) - You get the idea. again not my intention :v
8. 00:44:740 (1,1,1) - Stack these? same as before

[Insane]

1. 00:04:896 (3) - Angle this to look more like this. http://puu.sh/mmxkV.png sure
2. 00:18:256 (4,5) - I'm not a huge fan of these. Why not make these plain bursts instead? Maybe reverse sliders? they are pretty essential and used all the time here

[]
Fun song. I did take a look at the Extra difficulty, but I don't feel as though I am experienced enough to help you. Sorry about that. Good luck!

Momizi wrote:

hello,M4M request ;W;
new record of FELT ：D
[Extra]
00:00:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to make it like equilateral triangle？not my intention, but I polished some other stuff here
00:05:834 (7) - here i think change into two 1/2 slider is better to reflect the end of slider's accent.puu.sh/moYjf/fe242d8072.png I'm mapping the jumps/taps to drums, there are no drums on the sliderend so the only other option would be a stack which I don't like here
some sliders i dont like,00:17:553 (1) - 00:33:490 (1) - 00:35:365 (1) - look not good yeah I made most of them look nicer and changed some others
[Insane]
00:21:303 (1) - make it like 00:19:428 (1) - this slider didnt use that shape, but remade it

other diffs look is no problem
good luck

Nekomata wrote:

from your m4m queue

Easy
00:09:115 - it would probably be best to stick to a faster/smoother moving 1/1 rhythm instead of the long slider which sounds a bit strange imo. the rest of the map doesn't even have a 1/2 beat mapped. suggested rhythm (and maybe cool nc for each count)
seems fine to me, plays more interesting and a bit less dense, also combo 4 on vocal four :v

one thing i also noticed is that the tapping rhythm has some inconsistency:

this slider 00:16:615 (3) - starts after the lower note (00:16:146 (2) - )
but this slider 00:19:896 (2) - starts at the lower note (not really a problem because it's a repeat slider), but afterwards each slider starts on that lower note until 00:27:396 (2) - where it goes back originally.

maybe not really a big deal but thought i would point it out I get that, but the song is just the (nearly) same loop all the time and even at such a short length it would be kinda boring, since all taps are on 1/1 anyways here it still plays fine for beginners

Normal
00:06:068 (5) - this 1/2 beat just feels out of place considering you were doing those 1 beat pauses that fit really well there is a sound I dont want to ignore there thogh, guess a slider is a fine compromise
00:13:803 (1,2,3,4) - how about this kind of rhythm to better emphasize the vocals focus on the drums
00:40:990 (4,1) - mind the (quite noticeable) gap seems fine
00:43:803 (1,2,3,4) - same see above

after a closer look it looks like you alternate tapping patterns every 2 measures but i would rather just keep things simple for the lower diffs (incl. easy), and do the switch on strong beats such as 00:37:709 (5) - 00:22:709 (6) - 00:30:209 (6) - (in other words, switch it up every 4 measures instead of 2) pretty much what I said on easy, also the bpm is very low too, making tapping even easier anyways

Advanced
00:00:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - well after this rhythm, i would actually expect the next one to be just like it because it's pretty much the same rhythm in the music too but whatever basically same as before, also the rhythm is the same, just the tapping differs a bit
00:05:834 (6) - why no pause (it seems you are following that other sound but it really isn't expected IMO since you were just following the drums for a while) slider should make this comprehensible enough :v

Hard
00:05:834 (6) - same like before, it just doesn't sound great in these diffs imo ^
00:20:131 (3,4,5,6) - the rhythm before (00:18:256 (4,5,6,7,8) - ) was perfectly fine, but this just literally adds unnecessary difficulty by forcing a read for the sudden double and unexpected 1/4 slider jump (at least it's consistent but still) :/ it is consistent like you said, bpm is low and it is a hard diff after all, I actually think putting 1/4 taps would be harder to play
00:30:209 (1) - this would actually be some really interesting flow if it were going right instead of left :p movement seems nice to me actually
00:29:740 (3,4) - how about rotating these counter-clockwise a bit? i think it will flow better into the next slider (regardless of its direction) ^ movement in this pattern works quite well imo
00:41:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit hard to follow/read considering tapping into a 1/4 stream part, might be better to just do a rhythm like this since 5-streams don't really come close to how difficult the rhythm was earlier anyway fits really well with the song and plays fine here :v

Insane
those double jumpy things really betray the star rating imo.
tbh i'm more comfortable playing the Extra over the Insane :p
singletap them :v But yeah they are bot kinda gimmicky in their own ways, lol

i just find 00:16:381 (4,5,6,7) - really difficult to read
however, it was better when i set the AR to 8.5 so consider that idk, the high sv feel kinda shitty with lower ar and the double things dont get easier that way


well, good luck and hope my suggestions help :3

Tyrell wrote:

A little mod on the Ctb difficulties. c:

General

1. Nothing really major to point out.

Rain
Opening thoughts: This plays really well to me. It's both challenging and follows a nice rhythm in relation to the song. Great job. c:

1. 00:29:506 (6) - the dash to this is pretty harsh and requires very strict timing, i would reduce the dash to this after the hyper to be more forgiving. It feels like an Overdose pattern the way it is right now. - Reduced both the dash to this and the HDash before it, plays a lot better now.
2. 00:37:592 (5,6,7) - I feel like this hyper chain is a bit much for this Rain. I would recommend only have a hyper on the last 2 notes of this chain. I feel it would work better for a Rain. - Got rid of the HDash to 7 instead, I felt like this was the weaker note.
3. 00:43:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section, although crazy good and fun, seems a bit too much. I think it may help if you lighten the distance between the notes in each set of 4 so it's easier to keep flow and catch them. - I think I managed to fix this without ruining the intensity of the section.

Song Setup Recommendations: none really
Closing Thoughts: This rain is very well done in my opinion. I think some parts are a bit too challenging but still a very good rain nonetheless.

Let it be known that I am not modding the Imagination diff as I feel I am not of the proper skill level to mod it, but I will say that around 00:38:881 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think the spacing should be reduced a bit so that pattern flows a bit better. I already mentioned this to MB already tho. c: - Yeah I fixed this now.

Anyways, I hope this mod was helpful. If you have questions feel free to message me in-game if you see me on, or message me via forum. Good luck with this set.

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[Metadata]
Title:864 melody
TitleUnicode:864 melody
Artist:Halozy
ArtistUnicode:Halozy
Creator:Lasse
Version:MBomb's Imagination
Source:
Tags:HLZY-0022 sumijun すみじゅん Reitaisai 12 Magic Bomb
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RVMathew wrote:

Hi there.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

General
1) For emphasizing the countdown sequence (where she says 10, 9, 8 etc.), I was thinking that for that part, put 70-80% volume to have a big buildup.

2) 00:47:084 I like the idea of silencing the spinner, but I recommend adding more timing points after that for a smoother fade out; more timing points = smoother decrease in volume.

Easy
No major concerns.

Normal
1) You use 1.25x distance snap. Some parts such as 00:06:537 (2,3) have 1.3x distance snap. I know you can have at least a 0.05x uncertainty, but I will try and be more anal with distance snap. Try and get it as close to 1.25x. It is a small thing but can make a lot of difference.
- Applies to 00:40:990 (4,1) -
fixed the second one. I'll keep 00:06:537 (2,3,4) - because it looks way better with the stack and the actual difference is really minimal

Advanced
1) 00:08:178 (1,2,3,4) - You give 1 and 2 a tighter blanket compared to 3 and 4. yeah, I made the first blanket nicer and made the second a copy of it (idk why it wasn't)

2) 00:30:209 (6,1) - Why the huge change in distance (1.1x compared to 1.0x)? Probably a mistake? intended, small "jump" if you can even call it that to lead into the kiai

Hard
1) 00:05:834 (6) - Considering the previous patterns, shouldn't this slider be a single note? The rhythm is perfectly fine though, but you also leave a break in the next pattern as well. There is this high pitched sound on the red tick which I feel the need to cover, and having a sliderend for that is perfect imo

2) I notice that you stack a lot. On one hand it does look a lot nicer, but on the other it does make the map feel boring. Try and reduce the amount of stacks you have to spice up the beatmap. Don't really feel the need to change sth about the 1/4, don't want to put a ton of spaced ones on this hard so the only spaced one will be 00:43:803 (1) - as this is drastically different

3) 00:43:803 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern is not a straight line. It is a really small thing if you want to fix it though, but it does look a lot better if you make it perfectly straight. done

Insane
1) 00:05:834 - Considering the previous patterns, shouldn't this slider be a single note? The rhythm is perfectly fine though. same as hard

2) 00:15:209 (2,1,2,3) - This part feels really cramped in my opinion. chanaged abit, but feels fine to me

3) 00:16:381 (4,5,6,7) - This is the part that I do not like. It feels really awkward to play in my opinion with the double 1/8 sliders, while transitioning to the next 2 notes; in fact the 1/8 stacks in your extra diff were much easier to hit, despite the lower tolerance in the extra difficulty. For me I would just go with a 1/8 repeating slider.
- 00:42:631 (2,3,1) - This part was fine, but not fun to play.
those are pretty much the "core" of this diff and the whole map is built around them

Extra
1) 00:05:834 - Considering the previous patterns, shouldn't this slider be a single note? The rhythm is perfectly fine though. like other diffs

2) 00:39:349 (2,3) - 2 and 3 are not symmetrical arrow sliders so it does look a bit weird. didnt really like htis anymore either way, remapped

Final thoughts.
Everything except Insane was really good. Insane is fine but those 1/8 sliders ruin it for me. I was very anal with some things but they can make a huge difference.

Good luck.

1. Song Folder: Looking at the audio waveform tells me your mp3 has a bitrate of 320kbps which is unrankable. Ordinarily I'd say to take the mp3 from the ranked version, but I noticed that I faded mine out slightly differently to yours, so I decided it would be easier to just encode you a new 192kbps version, which you can find here.
2. Song Setup: No issues, but damn those are some funky looking difficulty settings ay xD
3. Metadata: You can add some more tags to make the map easier to search, such as "Touhou" (even though it's not a remix, it's still a related work produced by a th circle, "Kiss & and Crazy" (the second song on the album that this serves as an intro to) and some genre label; dubstep, electronic, or whatever. I got coerced into adding "here we go now" into tags for mine to support a meme, up to you whether you choose to partake in this or not
4. Timing: No issues
5. Hitsounds: No issues
6. AImod: No issues

STD:

Easy

1. 00:00:678 (1,2) - Off-blanket intentional? (1) could be curved more to look a bit neater imo, as you did at 00:16:146 (2,3)
2. 00:19:896 (2) - Nitpicky, but this might overlap with some skinned life bars, any chance you could move it down a tiny bit?
3. 00:45:678 (1,1) - 1/2 note+spinner spacing might catch some players off guard, as the spinner appears midway through the movement between 00:44:740 (6,1) - To make this as clear as possible to read and play for a beginner, I'd recommend pushing the spinner start back to 00:46:146

Normal

1. 00:05:834 (4) - Reasoning for this being a slider when you emphasized the other snare hits with a circle? If it's for the high-pitch synth sound here, you could also make 00:07:709 (4) a 1/2 slider for consistency, though at this difficulty I think a circle would fit better to maintain a sensible note density and difficulty curve. It might not seem like it, but to newer players the difference between leaving a 1/1 space and filling it in can be significant, even on short maps like this
2. 00:17:318 - I'm a little concerned with this rhythm to be honest - using 3/2 sliders is nice for variety I guess, but considering the relative equality in prominence between this and 00:17:553 (1) - having one as a slider end and one as a clickable object makes no sense. Changing 00:16:615 (4) into a 1/1 slider and circle would play much better imo, since the snare sound at 00:17:084 is also reasonably prominent. Applies to the other 3/2 slider patterns in this diff, since they're all mapping the same extended synth sound
3. 00:45:795 (1) - Similar to the Easy, a larger note+spinner spacing would ease readability here for newer players. Consider starting the spinner at 00:45:912 instead

Advanced

1. 00:05:834 (6) - Similar to the Normal there's a small isuue of consistency here, except here you for the higher difficulty you should consider making 00:07:709 (5) into a slider as well to create some differentiation from the previous diff. If youi choose to apply this, do it on the higher diffs as well, since you used the same idea there
2. 00:20:599 (4,5) - Consider reversing the order of these to make the strong synth sound at 00:21:068 clickable. I understand that you're trying to vary the rhythm, but this is really throwing me at the moment. I guess if you wanted to vary anything here, changing 00:19:428 (1,2) into circle + 1/2 repeat slider would work; since the drum sound at 00:19:896 is less prominent than the synth, it doesn't feel quite so odd as a non-clickable object to me, but this is just a suggestion. You can still create variety by changing direction on the playfield if you don't want to make further rhythm changes. Apply this throughout again if you decide to change it here
3. 00:22:240 (4,5,6) - Related to the above, this could be slider + 2 circles, since both 00:22:709 and 00:22:943 are strong sounds (snare and synth respectively)
4. 00:45:678 (1,1) - I think players at this difficulty should probably be able to contend with a 1/4 note+spinner spacing at this bpm, but I'm bringing it up regardless, up to you whether you decide to keep it or change to 1/2 as in the Normal

Hard

1. 00:13:803 (1,2,3,4) - Despite this being a nice buildup section, the 1/4 5plet really caught me off guard here. Considering the small amount of reaction time from the previous object (also 1/4), I think that replicating 00:14:271 (1,2) to use 4 1/4 sliders would be easier to read at this point and present less of a difficulty spike to the player
2. 00:35:131 (3,4) - Flow here is quite awkward for me due to an unexpected direction change. You have to move slightly away from (4) during the transition before you can start moving down. I found that rotating (3) to point directly away from the head of (4), roughly 15 degrees clockwise, played a little more comfortably
3. 00:45:678 (1,1) - No need to go with 1/8 spacing on a Hard diff, 1/4 will be enough

A lot more 1/4 tapping than I was expecting, but a quick look at the Insane tells me it's pretty much necessary due to the 1/8 kicksliders and such to avoid a spread issue. Gap from Advanced might be a little high since that diff uses almost exclusively 1/2, relative to this using almost exclusively 1/4, but would ask some more opinions before changing anything drastically.

Insane

1. 00:09:584 (4,1) - Stacking these is really counterintuitive to me, since you're in a building up section, why suddenly utilise a drastic reduction in spacing? Players will expect to continue the patterning of 00:08:178 (1,2,3,4) so I feel a placement such as [142,126] would be far easier to read, and would also create a neat even spacing between this and the slider tails of 00:08:178 (1,3)
2. 00:29:974 (5,6,1) - Potential readability issue here, since it's difficult to tell that (1) is a slider without using peripheral vision to see the slider end distance away. I like the effect you're going for here, but I feel that it somehow causes more harm than good. Avoiding the overlap here might be a better option

Usage of 1/8 sliders is an interesting touch, though since I'm a scrub Std player it's not something I'm entirely comfortable with. Definitely recommend getting some more opinions on this, since it might be totally fine - I just can't say for sure, and wouldn't want to ruin your concept unnecessarily.

Extra

1. 00:22:709 (1) - Why such a high SV? This is totally unexpected considering it can't be played as a kick slider and requires movement to hold. 1,5x SV as you used at 00:24:584 (3) would be enough here. In addition, the more sudden stop necessary to play 00:23:178 (1) really destabilizes the flow at this point, so reducing SV will make this smoother and more comfortable to play

Yeah, not really much I can say about this unfortunately without being able to play it adequately. Sorry.

CTB:

Rain

1. 00:10:404 (2,3) - This 1/4 spacing is really unexpected, please reduce the distance by moving (2) to the left, since the 00:10:053 (1,2) is kinda small. x-152 feels much better to me
2. 00:13:216 (4,5) - This spacing is also a little uncomfortable due to the slight movement to the left required to hit 00:12:865 (1,2,3,4) - it's very easy to miss this by jumping too early. Consider reducing the spacing here a little to provide a smoother buildup in difficulty
3. 00:22:709 (5,6) - This spacing is uncomfortably small and kills the flow for me, it's possible to overshoot even without dashing to the right, the expected movement here given the previous patterns. If you rotate 00:21:303 (1) anticlockwise slightly you can move 00:22:006 (2,3,4,5) slightly to the left to allow yourself more space here. Just a suggestion, feel free to do this another way if you want
4. 00:37:592 (5,6,7,1) - This one goes too much the other way, fairly strong movement to (7) after a strong hyper in the opposite direction of (5,6) can make it hard to hit the next hyper to (1). Try reducing the spacing between (6,7) if possible
5. 00:43:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd strongly recommend reducing the amount of wiggle required for these, since right now they present a major difficulty spike right at the end of the map which is really uncool. Moving 00:44:037 (3,4) to x-168 and 00:44:505 (7,8) to x-344 would be more fitting here for this difficulty imo

Imagination

1. 00:06:303 (1,2) - Would consider reducing the spacing on this a tiny bit, the antiflow so early into the song is pretty unexpected here, and the high AR makes reading a little problematic
2. 00:19:193 (9,1) - Strong-ish hyper into antiflowing slider is just asking for droplet misses. Reducing the sharpness on this and/or the hyper strength would be nice here
3. 00:32:553 (1,2,3) - I find the movement to (3) here pretty uncomfortable, like I'm not quite sure whether the spacing requires a dash or not. Stacking (2) on the head of (1) and moving the red anchor point on (1) to the right slightly feels more comfortable for me
4. 00:37:592 (6,7,8,1) - Kiai or not, are you sure you need to emphasize these allwith hdash? Feels pretty excessive to me considering they are all of differing strengths and the use of CS5 makes it really easy to miss here without precise timing
5. 00:43:803 (1,2,3,4) - So this was a wiggle pattern in the Rain, but in the Overdose it's a plain old left/right hyper chain? C'mon man you can do better than that, at least use some inverted sliders, utilize a wiggle pattern in the previous measure or something, since right now this is easier than the Rain despite being the climax to the song!

JBHyperion wrote:

Sorry for the delay, some real life stuff got in the way :/

General Comments:

1. Metadata: You can add some more tags to make the map easier to search, such as "Touhou" (even though it's not a remix, it's still a related work produced by a th circle, "Kiss & and Crazy" (the second song on the album that this serves as an intro to) and some genre label; dubstep, electronic, or whatever. I got coerced into adding "here we go now" into tags for mine to support a meme, up to you whether you choose to partake in this or not
   will consider some tag stuff and maybe add some when I'll also have to update ctb diffs

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

STD:

Easy

1. 00:00:678 (1,2) - Off-blanket intentional? (1) could be curved more to look a bit neater imo, as you did at 00:16:146 (2,3) fixedwith a nicer blanket
2. 00:19:896 (2) - Nitpicky, but this might overlap with some skinned life bars, any chance you could move it down a tiny bit? I really like the pattern here 00:19:896 (2,3,4) - as it is. also http://i.imgur.com/O26tURq.jpg it's got quite some spacing left with the default one
3. 00:45:678 (1,1) - 1/2 note+spinner spacing might catch some players off guard, as the spinner appears midway through the movement between 00:44:740 (6,1) - To make this as clear as possible to read and play for a beginner, I'd recommend pushing the spinner start back to 00:46:146 sure

Normal

1. 00:05:834 (4) - Reasoning for this being a slider when you emphasized the other snare hits with a circle? If it's for the high-pitch synth sound here, you could also make 00:07:709 (4) a 1/2 slider for consistency, though at this difficulty I think a circle would fit better to maintain a sensible note density and difficulty curve. It might not seem like it, but to newer players the difference between leaving a 1/1 space and filling it in can be significant, even on short maps like this well since apparently everyone who mods this complained I'll remove it now, lol
2. 00:17:318 - I'm a little concerned with this rhythm to be honest - using 3/2 sliders is nice for variety I guess, but considering the relative equality in prominence between this and 00:17:553 (1) - having one as a slider end and one as a clickable object makes no sense. Changing 00:16:615 (4) into a 1/1 slider and circle would play much better imo, since the snare sound at 00:17:084 is also reasonably prominent. Applies to the other 3/2 slider patterns in this diff, since they're all mapping the same extended synth sound I think you'll have to agree when I say "this song is extremely reptitive" and using the same rhythm for this pattern (which pretty much makes up the song) would be really boring to play, also gives players some time to "recover" as the diff has quite some 1/2
3. 00:45:795 (1) - Similar to the Easy, a larger note+spinner spacing would ease readability here for newer players. Consider starting the spinner at 00:45:912 instead sure

Advanced

1. 00:05:834 (6) - Similar to the Normal there's a small isuue of consistency here, except here you for the higher difficulty you should consider making 00:07:709 (5) into a slider as well to create some differentiation from the previous diff. If youi choose to apply this, do it on the higher diffs as well, since you used the same idea there done
2. 00:20:599 (4,5) - Consider reversing the order of these to make the strong synth sound at 00:21:068 clickable. I understand that you're trying to vary the rhythm, but this is really throwing me at the moment. I guess if you wanted to vary anything here, changing 00:19:428 (1,2) into circle + 1/2 repeat slider would work; since the drum sound at 00:19:896 is less prominent than the synth, it doesn't feel quite so odd as a non-clickable object to me, but this is just a suggestion. You can still create variety by changing direction on the playfield if you don't want to make further rhythm changes. Apply this throughout again if you decide to change it here
3. 00:22:240 (4,5,6) - Related to the above, this could be slider + 2 circles, since both 00:22:709 and 00:22:943 are strong sounds (snare and synth respectively)
4. 00:45:678 (1,1) - I think players at this difficulty should probably be able to contend with a 1/4 note+spinner spacing at this bpm, but I'm bringing it up regardless, up to you whether you decide to keep it or change to 1/2 as in the Normal

I fixed the spinner, rhythm stuff is partially applied as I remapped some stuff to add some more 1/4 rhythm

Hard

1. 00:13:803 (1,2,3,4) - Despite this being a nice buildup section, the 1/4 5plet really caught me off guard here. Considering the small amount of reaction time from the previous object (also 1/4), I think that replicating 00:14:271 (1,2) to use 4 1/4 sliders would be easier to read at this point and present less of a difficulty spike to the player I reduce the spacing, reducing the amount of 1/4 isn't really needed I think as the bpm is quite low and this is a hard after all
2. 00:35:131 (3,4) - Flow here is quite awkward for me due to an unexpected direction change. You have to move slightly away from (4) during the transition before you can start moving down. I found that rotating (3) to point directly away from the head of (4), roughly 15 degrees clockwise, played a little more comfortably did sth like that
3. 00:45:678 (1,1) - No need to go with 1/8 spacing on a Hard diff, 1/4 will be enough fine

A lot more 1/4 tapping than I was expecting, but a quick look at the Insane tells me it's pretty much necessary due to the 1/8 kicksliders and such to avoid a spread issue. Gap from Advanced might be a little high since that diff uses almost exclusively 1/2, relative to this using almost exclusively 1/4, but would ask some more opinions before changing anything drastically. did some stuff as mentioned in advanced. the difference in objects is still a bit high, but that is because I put some more 1/4 sliders etc. in which only add "1 object" but make the whole rhythm and all way more dense than a single circle would

Insane

1. 00:09:584 (4,1) - Stacking these is really counterintuitive to me, since you're in a building up section, why suddenly utilise a drastic reduction in spacing? Players will expect to continue the patterning of 00:08:178 (1,2,3,4) so I feel a placement such as [142,126] would be far easier to read, and would also create a neat even spacing between this and the slider tails of 00:08:178 (1,3) pretty much the same as 00:07:709 (7,1) - etc. also while it is building up here 00:10:053 (1) - is not that strong and it is also stacked on the sliderhead, so it has some spacing (even if it is really minor)
2. 00:29:974 (5,6,1) - Potential readability issue here, since it's difficult to tell that (1) is a slider without using peripheral vision to see the slider end distance away. I like the effect you're going for here, but I feel that it somehow causes more harm than good. Avoiding the overlap here might be a better option Don't really think it is problematic, at least it seemed fine for me and people I had testplay it

Usage of 1/8 sliders is an interesting touch, though since I'm a scrub Std player it's not something I'm entirely comfortable with. Definitely recommend getting some more opinions on this, since it might be totally fine - I just can't say for sure, and wouldn't want to ruin your concept unnecessarily. the whole diff is pretty much built around them (also they play much like 1/4 circles) and there is a 1/4 focused hard for those who can't play this

Extra

1. 00:22:709 (1) - Why such a high SV? This is totally unexpected considering it can't be played as a kick slider and requires movement to hold. 1,5x SV as you used at 00:24:584 (3) would be enough here. In addition, the more sudden stop necessary to play 00:23:178 (1) really destabilizes the flow at this point, so reducing SV will make this smoother and more comfortable to play the way this is shaped makes it pretty much impossible to break on, enven if you expected lower sv. actually I testplayed it again and you get a 300 if you just stay on the head and hold
   and this is way louder/stronger than 00:24:584 (3) so higher sv is justified for me.

Yeah, not really much I can say about this unfortunately without being able to play it adequately. Sorry.

This is all from me for now. If you have any questions or want to discuss things further, please don't hesitate to get back to me and I'll see what I can do to help.

Good luck! (:

1. Opening jumps are a bit sporadic and I think should make a bit more sense. This is just a personal opinion so I'm not marking anything.
2. 00:04:662 (2,3) - These don't really have a good "flow" (to coin a beaten down term) to each other or the four (00:05:131 (4) - ).
3. 00:06:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - A lot of your jump sequences in general just don't make much sense to me for a quiet/calm opening to a song. The DS just seems to be over the top more than anything.
4. 00:08:178 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Like, why are these all spaced in increasing DS when the song is getting only slightly more intense?
5. 00:10:287 (2,3,4) - In my opinion, for a song like this a triplet's direction should be similar to the trajectory of the mouse. Right now its kind of perpendicular to the trajectory.
6. 00:13:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I don't really like this as a triangle. I think it looks pretty bad and jump straight line spaced streams and stream jumps (even though its low BPM and you could probably just single tap it) are a lot harder to play than curved streams in my opinion. I think the current shape just makes it unnecessarily difficult for the song.
7. 00:17:318 (4) - Move this to the end of 00:17:553 (1) - instead?
8. 00:19:193 (4,1) - Same for these?
9. 00:30:678 (1) - You build intensity really well through the chorus, but it doesn't seem to have much of a structure, or at least I can't see it. Personally, I think a map with a more complex rhythm then just 1/2 spam should be somewhat structured in a way that makes it sight readable. For me, this is a bit hard to read.

1. 00:10:053 (1) - This note placement doesn't follow the placement of the previous notes. It wasn't very intuitive to play.
   
   Thats really the only issue I have with the insane. To me its significantly more polished than the Extra and plays fine.

CrypticMech wrote:

I'm here from #modreqs like 7 or 8 days later than you posted it, sorry

[Extra]

1. Opening jumps are a bit sporadic and I think should make a bit more sense. This is just a personal opinion so I'm not marking anything.
2. 00:04:662 (2,3) - These don't really have a good "flow" (to coin a beaten down term) to each other or the four (00:05:131 (4) - ). the way those sliders will be played the movement is fine
3. 00:06:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - A lot of your jump sequences in general just don't make much sense to me for a quiet/calm opening to a song. The DS just seems to be over the top more than anything.
4. 00:08:178 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Like, why are these all spaced in increasing DS when the song is getting only slightly more intense?
   Because it is getting more intense, like you just said, I changed it a little bit though
5. 00:10:287 (2,3,4) - In my opinion, for a song like this a triplet's direction should be similar to the trajectory of the mouse. Right now its kind of perpendicular to the trajectory. plays fine imo
   
   as for the spacing of the part, the whole thing is basically palys like 256bpm so they are moe 1/1 than 1/2 and for that it seems okay
6. 00:13:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I don't really like this as a triangle. I think it looks pretty bad and jump straight line spaced streams and stream jumps (even though its low BPM and you could probably just single tap it) are a lot harder to play than curved streams in my opinion. I think the current shape just makes it unnecessarily difficult for the song.
   I changed this part anyways to be more fitting with the song/buildup, but the straigh lines stay for the quads
7. 00:17:318 (4) - Move this to the end of 00:17:553 (1) - instead?
8. 00:19:193 (4,1) - Same for these?
   would make the whole map inconsistent since my concept for 1/2 before nc is to stack them
9. 00:30:678 (1) - You build intensity really well through the chorus, but it doesn't seem to have much of a structure, or at least I can't see it. Personally, I think a map with a more complex rhythm then just 1/2 spam should be somewhat structured in a way that makes it sight readable. For me, this is a bit hard to read.the rhythm itself is quite consistent/repetitive so I don't really lsee a problem

[Insane]

1. 00:10:053 (1) - This note placement doesn't follow the placement of the previous notes. It wasn't very intuitive to play. changed
   
   Thats really the only issue I have with the insane. To me its significantly more polished than the Extra and plays fine.

Sorry I couldn't be of more help. Good luck.

Zectro wrote:

Hello, I hope you are having a great day

Let me start off with a small comment on Hard;
00:14:271 (1) - I don't feel like the NC is necessary here, remove it please sure

On Insane, I recommend toning down the sv of 00:41:928 (1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - as it feels a bit too fast gottagofast.jpeg

On Extra, I suggest not ncing 00:08:646 (1,1,1) - I think using nc purely for visuals is fine here, not having nc draws followpoints that look weird with those stacks

You could also rotate 00:11:459 (8) - like -50 with selection centre for better flow towards 00:11:928 (1) - rotated it by much more actually. It's kind of a leftover from the old pattern, should be nicer now

00:15:209 (1) - Not sure if this NC is necessary either. I guess it looks better but I'm speaking technichally It looks nicer and makes the drastic sv change better to anticipate

My biggest concern with this map however is that 00:15:678 - till 00:28:568 - and 00:30:678 - till 00:37:943 - does not flow well at all because of the awkward breaks in between. In the insane diff you compensate for that by using cooler patterns but here it feels incredibly gray/boring/meaningless. I feel as if you could have done something way cooler in this difficulty if you are creative enough.

My other big concern is that even though I fully understand how throughout the kiai time it's building up to the climax of the song, 00:42:631 - to 00:43:685 - honestly feels exagerated. I would let it slide if you adjust the positioning of the sliders so they flow easier and it feels less as if you are throwing your cursor over the screen. Specially 00:42:865 (1,2) - the whole diff is kinda exaggerated and I don't really know if I'll keep this diff anyways. But for this pattern, with how lenient the sliders are it plays fine as it can be played as some kind of back and forth with slight rotation

The lower star rating difficulties are all technichally correct, and I have no extra recommendations on enhancing them; I like how they are.


Sorry for this 'weird' kind of mod, I just felt as if it was apropriate for this specific map. Good luck!