1. Impossiblexu's Easy (2.45 stars, 244 notes)
2. Insane (4.92 stars, 620 notes)
3. Normal (4.01 stars, 307 notes)

wmfchris wrote:

[insane]
0:09:070 (5) down 1 grid
0:45:268 (4) up 1 grid
1:05:866 (5) left 1 grid
1:18:265 (4) up 1 grid
1:34:264 (7) right 1 grid
3:26:457 (5,6,7) uneven spacing, considering (4,7), I suggest (6) left 0.5 grid
3:40:656 (4) up 1 grid
-delete unused timing sections- (or you'll finish it?

[normal]
not much problem with it

:3

• Source: Memories Off 6: T-wave
  Artist: Ayumi Murata
  Tags: Add Takeshi Abo (composer of the music?) visual novel galgame? (Maybe delete KID? It's..already bankrupted...)
  
  BPM: 150.000
  Offset: +5ms
  
  You'd better cut your .mp3 file since the last part isn't used...
  
  Why don't you just map the opening ver...o.O?
  
  Also custom combo color? Default color looks terrible...

• 00:07:077 (T) - note here and 00:07:077 (1,1,1) - move 1/2 beat forward and remove new combo
  00:11:677 (T) - Based on your previous pattern, I think you'd better add a note here to follow vocal...
  00:11:877 (T) - ^
  00:33:475 (1) - Remove new combo
  00:36:675 (1) - ^
  00:39:875 (1) - ^
  00:46:274 (1) - ^
  00:51:074 (1) - ^
  ...etc.
  01:29:472 (T) - add a note here and 01:29:472 (2,1) move 1/2 beat forward
  02:53:666 (2,3) - Stacking

• 00:05:670 (3) - Finish beginning
  02:00:862-02:13:662 (T) - Sigh...why jump?
  02:13:562 (T) - Add a note?
  02:52:059 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+H to make symmetry
  02:57:259 (5,1,2) - Hard to read...shift 1 for 90°?
  03:00:059 (2) - Shorten 1/4 and make a reverse?
  03:00:858 (3,4) - ^
  03:31:056 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ...? What're these...
  03:44:256 (4) - Shorten 1/4 beat.
  03:44:856 (T) - End your beatmap here? Or map the whole song...

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Source: Memories Off 6: T-wave
  Artist: Ayumi Murata
  Tags: Add Takeshi Abo (composer of the music?) visual novel galgame? (Maybe delete KID? It's..already bankrupted...)
  
  BPM: 150.000
  Offset: +5ms
  
  You'd better cut your .mp3 file since the last part isn't used...
  
  Why don't you just map the opening ver...o.O?
  
  Also custom combo color? Default color looks terrible...

[Normal]

You need a easier diff...The Normal isn't easy enough.
Hitsounds???
Reconsider the new combo plz.

• 00:07:077 (T) - note here and 00:07:077 (1,1,1) - move 1/2 beat forward and remove new combo
  00:11:677 (T) - Based on your previous pattern, I think you'd better add a note here to follow vocal...
  00:11:877 (T) - ^
  00:33:475 (1) - Remove new combo
  00:36:675 (1) - ^
  00:39:875 (1) - ^
  00:46:274 (1) - ^
  00:51:074 (1) - ^
  ...etc.
  01:29:472 (T) - add a note here and 01:29:472 (2,1) move 1/2 beat forward
  02:53:666 (2,3) - Stacking

[Insane]

Hitsound, New combo!
._.

• 00:05:670 (3) - Finish beginning
  02:00:862-02:13:662 (T) - Sigh...why jump?
  02:13:562 (T) - Add a note?
  02:52:059 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+H to make symmetry
  02:57:259 (5,1,2) - Hard to read...shift 1 for 90°?
  03:00:059 (2) - Shorten 1/4 and make a reverse?
  03:00:858 (3,4) - ^
  03:31:056 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ...? What're these...
  03:44:256 (4) - Shorten 1/4 beat.
  03:44:856 (T) - End your beatmap here? Or map the whole song...

Edit: If a mod is helpful, don't forget to kds. ._.

• 
  建议去掉开头那段Kiai Time
  要对齐重音的话 offset应该是876
  建议每个难度都在弱拍上加Clap
  如果觉得按照我的建议加Finish很乱的话 就看看我的难度里的蓝线 Finish加在那里就好了
  另外别忘了加Tag

• 
  00:04:076 (2): Finish
  00:18:476 (1): 转盘在这停止并加Finish音效
  00:58:476 (1): 开头加Finish
  01:11:276 (1): Finish
  01:25:676 (2): 开头加Finish Kiai Time从这开始
  01:27:076 (2,3,4): 建议Slider在这结束 下个Slider和Circle提前半拍
  01:33:276 (2,3,4): ^
  01:37:676 (4): Slider在这里结束
  01:38:076 , 01:38:276: 加个Circle 原来的Slider缩小半拍
  02:02:476 (1): 转盘和Kiai Time这里结束
  02:40:876 (1): 开头加Finish
  03:08:076 (2): 开头加Finish Kiai Time从这开始
  03:43:276 (1): 加Finish

• 
  00:18:476 (1): 转盘在这停止并加Finish音效
  00:58:476 : 开头加Finish
  01:25:676 (2): 开头加Finish Kiai Time从这开始
  02:02:476 : Kiai Time这里结束
  02:39:276 (1,2,3,4): 稍微统一一下间距
  02:40:876 (1): Finish
  03:08:076 (3): 开头加Finish Kiai Time从这开始
  03:46:476 : Kiai Time这里结束
  04:02:076,04:02:476 : 加两个Circle 在后面的Circle上加Finish

impossiblexu wrote:

完成~

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[attachment=0:9ccc3]Murata Ayumi - Triangle Wave (mjw5150) [Impossiblexu's Easy].osu[/attachment:9ccc3]

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另外我的建议:

[General]

• 
  建议去掉开头那段Kiai Time
  要对齐重音的话 offset应该是876
  建议每个难度都在弱拍上加Clap
  如果觉得按照我的建议加Finish很乱的话 就看看我的难度里的蓝线 Finish加在那里就好了
  另外别忘了加Tag

[Normal]

• 
  00:04:076 (2): Finish
  00:18:476 (1): 转盘在这停止并加Finish音效
  00:58:476 (1): 开头加Finish
  01:11:276 (1): Finish
  01:25:676 (2): 开头加Finish Kiai Time从这开始
  01:27:076 (2,3,4): 建议Slider在这结束 下个Slider和Circle提前半拍
  01:33:276 (2,3,4): ^
  01:37:676 (4): Slider在这里结束
  01:38:076 , 01:38:276: 加个Circle 原来的Slider缩小半拍
  02:02:476 (1): 转盘和Kiai Time这里结束
  02:40:876 (1): 开头加Finish
  03:08:076 (2): 开头加Finish Kiai Time从这开始
  03:43:276 (1): 加Finish

[Insane]

• 
  00:18:476 (1): 转盘在这停止并加Finish音效
  00:58:476 : 开头加Finish
  01:25:676 (2): 开头加Finish Kiai Time从这开始
  02:02:476 : Kiai Time这里结束
  02:39:276 (1,2,3,4): 稍微统一一下间距
  02:40:876 (1): Finish
  03:08:076 (3): 开头加Finish Kiai Time从这开始
  03:46:476 : Kiai Time这里结束
  04:02:076,04:02:476 : 加两个Circle 在后面的Circle上加Finish

最后祝早日Rank~

James2250 wrote:

-Try -6 for offset? It sounds slightly late at the moment. Don't forget to resnap all notes
-I guess background can be ranked..still prob better idea to change it just in case though
-Try and make kiai time start and end at the same places on your difficulties
-In source put a space between : and T-wave?
-Cut the mp3 to save filespace

Impossiblexu's Easy:
Looks nice

Normal:
Map seems pretty solid but could use alot more hitsounds to make it sound nicer. It sounds very empty at alot of parts at the moment. Look at Easy if you need some ideas~

Insane:
Resnap all notes
01:57:477 (1,2) - avoid hidden repeat
Same comments as Normal~

Not bad, just needs some hitsound improvement and the maps will look pretty well done
Star'ed

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

BPM: 149.989
Offset: 894

thats all i can really find wrong :/

good mapping, but my policy is: if theres timing issues, don't star.

please fix, and repost in my queue for a star

kioukiou wrote:

Timing : BPM : 150.00 / offset : 890

Don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.


[Impossiblexu's Easy]

After timing fix,don't forget resnap all notes.


[Normal]

After timing fix,don't forget resnap all notes.

More hitsounds?


[Insane]

After timing fix,don't forget resnap all notes.

Same as [Normal]

Max score : over 18 million, it's too much in my opinion.

有關hitsounds : 你可以參考NatsumeRin的post,當然你也可以用自己喜歡的下法

NatsumeRin wrote:

as james2250 said it needs some hitsounds improvement...

well, first half of [Insane]'s hitsounds.

[attachment=0:62fef]Murata Ayumi - Triangle Wave (mjw5150) [Insane stress].osu[/attachment:62fef]

Alace wrote:

<Easy>
01:22:490 (3,4) - bug sliders
01:54:490 (1) - ^
02:51:290 (3) - ^
這問題可以放著等下一個更新版出來就就會搞定
也可以重拉一次slider (不要用紅色的點就沒有問題了)

<Normal>
AR+1 ?

<Hard>
you really need a break IMO
210 secs nonstop playing time is abit too long
as i said in IRC, if you refuse to do it, post it here

EDIT:BUG SLIDERS ARE FIXED AFTER THIS NEW PATCH

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Impossiblexu's Easy]

Stack leniency is too high. Reduce it by 1 or 2 ticks at least.

[Normal]

Stack leniency is too high. Reduce it by 1 or 2 ticks at least.

[Insane]

Score is too high. Try to reduce it a bit.

Very well done for a first beatmap, just fix what I've pointed out and I'll rank!