From my queue
[General]
Adding Kiai time Pls
[Easy]
pls DS be fixed 0.8
00:11:456 (2,3) - So near in easy Diff not overlap
00:30:829 - Why you not mapped this part?
I think 01:05:825 (1) - This slider is waste rhythm
01:09:575 (3) - Many reverse in Easy Diff so confused for easy user
01:12:075 (1) - DS check
01:31:135 - Why you not mapped this part?
[Advanced]
00:10:206 (1,1,2,3,1,2) - So confused in this Diff
00:30:829 - why not mapped
01:31:135 - ^
01:59:882 (1) - offscreen
[Insane]
00:30:829 - Insane diff must mapped all sound
01:30:823 - ^
01:09:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - remapped this stream so near with circles
02:09:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^
02:39:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
02:59:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - ^
03:04:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - ^


you'll must be made many map

Thanks a lot for the mod! and damn it, just accidentaly cancelled the reply i already did before finishing it

Osuology wrote:

[Easy]
00:10:831 (1,2) - You start off by not overlapping but then you start overlapping, which might be kinda hard for easy players to read. Just a suggestion. mmm... i just did it like the distance snapping suggested it. if i do it differently it'll be spaced wrong if i really got what you meant right
00:18:330 (1) - Not rankable because it goes off screen. alright. interesting issue. i didn't pay attention to this but i'll look out for this and change it in the different difficulties. thanks! fixed!
00:52:702 (4) - This guy needs to move a little off the 2 slider. Also, is this diff not finished or was that break intentional? If it was intentional, I suggest you map it. fixed. and yeah it's intentional! xD why do you guys dislike my breaks so much? i already reasoned about this and sorry but i'll just keep it a while longer. if a BN also says that i'll change it up!
01:20:824 (3) - Again, you might not believe it, but this is hard for easy players. I couldn't do stuff like this when I was a easy player. alright. i get what you mean. had to remap the whole part a bit but fixed.
01:30:823 (3) - Intentional break? yeah, intentional! xD
01:54:570 (2,3,4) - That's a little of a difficulty boost. Might be too much, a BN or experienced modder would really have to say. fixed.
02:14:568 (2) - Yeah, this is a little hard to read not just because of the first slider but also the second. really? i can't see the issue to be honest but i found a off-screen slider again thanks to this
02:30:816 (1) - It shouldn't be here, it's not rankable, because it's off the grid. fixed
02:50:814 () - Intentional break again? yeeeeeah, intentional

[Advanced]
Is this a hard? I'm going to assume it is. well. technically yeah. it was intended to be somewhere in between normal and hard. but rather a hard- than a normal+.
00:13:956 (2) - Try to make the follow point flat. It's not right now. fixed
00:31:141 (1) - Once again with the break. once again intended
00:51:452 (2,3,1,2,3) - This whole thing needs to be redone, I'm afraid. The pattern just can't go together looking like that. really? aww. i didn't think it was wrong but changed.
00:58:014 (4,1) - Why the anti jump here? It's really not needed. it's just a square jump + distance snapping. i don't see anything wrong with it
00:59:576 (1,1) - Hmm... perhaps put the OD down a little to not induce slider breaks here. done. i dislike high od's anyways.
01:01:295 (2,3,4,5,6) - Difficulty is way too high for this part. Nerf it by putting some 1/2 sliders here and there along with the hit circles. ahh! huge kudosu to you for that! i hated that part yet i didn't know what to do with it and the other mods didn't seem to dislike it. but this is a really simple yet solid solution! huge bonus to me liking my own map, so thanks!
01:08:325 (1) - Once again, unrankable slider. fixed.
01:18:012 (5) - Put sliders in these parts so it's complete. Also nerf again. uh... i guess fixed?
01:30:823 (5) - These are unfinished aren't they, there's no SB I just realized. no they aren't!!!! xD this mapset is finished! but if someone wants me to i can do the lyrics there too. i mean yeah, it's a little inconsistent not to do it there i guess. alright. let's do that then i guess.
02:01:757 (5,6,1) - Whoa there sonny, this is not consistent. Also nerf. alllright, fixed.
02:06:913 (6,1) - Jeez that jump is much. Nerf plz. fixed.
02:20:817 (1) - Ooph. Unrankable. fixed.
02:23:317 (1,2,3,4,1) - WHOA that inconsistency. That will be impossible for hard players to read. fixed.
02:30:816 (1) - This slider has to be redone, it's unrankable as is, and you can't move it. fixed. but had to change the whole thing before that.
02:35:816 (1) - ^ ^
02:48:315 (1) - AGH ^

[Insane]
00:10:831 (9) - Ok so, here's the deal. When you get empty places that skip a 1/2 beat, put a 1/2 slider. Simple solution. Too bad you skip it all the time. wat? sorry, i don't get what you mean. sounds right to me
00:21:142 (1,2,3) - Also, these are not triples. They are quintuplets. That means a 5 burst, not 3. fixed. (oh damn, that part has been changed soooo often. hope it's finally right)
00:24:892 (1,2,3,4) - This needs to be a proper triangle. Set the 2's position to 312, 144. And put the 4 under the one. You will have to move the next beats. it used to be a proper triangle! xD some previous mod said i should change it to a non-triangle to have it distance snapped right. you know what. i'm just gonna make that damn triangle since it's inconsistent otherwise and then there will just be a jump to the 4. it can be reasoned within the song and it's a decent solution i guess. ahrg. i hope THIS is finally right as well <.<
00:51:764 (9,10,11,12) - oh no... Oh No.... OH NO.... You put a slider end on a white tick. That's terrible. You need to make the slider START on the white tick, and end on red. wait. wait. that's what i did in pretty much the whole map. i totally tried around with it and it sounds good as it is now and it plays decent. if i change it up it gets worse in my opinion. but it sounds like this is a really huge issue for you oO uhm. i'll look whether i can find anyone to consult about that in #modhelp. let's see how this goes.
00:55:826 (4,1,2,3) - Way way way WAY too close. alright. stacked instead.
01:01:919 (5,1) - You should either stack em, or DS em. Either way. (DS = distance snap) stacked.
01:04:575 (1) - You did good here with the sliders, now just do that everywhere else. thanks and i guess done? idk oO
01:10:747 (16) - Stop with this. Fix it anywhere else it occurs please. ^4
02:01:913 (6,1) - Do you realize even high score's highest diff don't have these jumps often? Nerf. uh.... yeah, i guess you're right. it's a little harsh. changed.

thanks a lot! really helpfull mod there :3

WazZzaA123 wrote:

Modding queue

CONSIDER ADDING KIA TIME SOMEWHERE

[Easu]
00:11:456 (2,3) - Overlaping huh? spaced correctly according to ds and aimod D:
00:18:330 (1) - Offscreen move up fixed.
00:20:830 (1) - Remap this whole section where the Spinner is because theres already a spinner here 00:29:579 (1) - i also had this in mind but didn't do it yet since the other modders seemed to have no problem with it. fixed.
00:50:827 (1,2,3) - Spacing a little bit see nr. 1 D:
01:00:826 (1) - You should map this instead of putting a slider, I suggest to put some 1/2 circles alright. done. but i think a little different than you suggested?
01:12:700 (2,3,4) - Space those a little bit again nr. 1 : x
01:15:199 (2) - Lower that circle a bit done
02:13:318 (1) - Offscreen move up fixed
02:30:816 (1) - Put a spinner instead mm.... i think i'll let it stay like this since you know, there is a break in between those 2 sliders yet the sound is the same. so i'd had to do 2 different spinners which would feel weird to me.
02:39:566 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - I suggest you remake this whole section into something more appropriate ahrg. if someone else also says this i'll do it but for now i don't see a big problem with it. maybe it's a bit monotonous.

[Advanced]
00:17:080 (1) - Lower this becasue its a tad offgrid fixed.
00:58:326 (1,2,3,1) - Move this whole pattern to the left fixed.
01:06:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These are too far from each others for that difficulty already changed with the last mod.
01:08:325 (1) - Can you stop with those sliders going off grid, Did you just copy paste from each difficulty ? wakata, wakata. but that's mean, i didn't copy anything (from other diffs) fixed.
01:15:824 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This whole section needs to be redone uhm... already changed it slightly with the previous mod. i hope it's alright now D:
01:21:605 (3) - plssssssss offgrid fixed.
01:59:882 (1) - Lower this fixed.
02:01:913 (6,1) - A little bit too far from each others fixed.
02:02:538 (2,3,4,5,6) - what are those jumps or stream ? make them closer already changed.
02:20:817 (1) - Offgrid fixed.
02:30:816 (1) - Offgrid fixed.
02:23:317 (1,2,3,4) - Remake this already changed.
02:34:566 (1) - Offgrid fixed.
02:35:816 (1) - Offgrid fixed.

[Insane]
00:10:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Movethis to the right fixed + stacked (hope this is fine)
00:50:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe remake this into Back and forth sliders instead of stream ( I know it will downgrade the difficulty but yeah..) mmm.... i'd rather stay away from that. not to keep the difficulty (i don't really care that much about the diff. it's just a normal map, not a pp farm map) but because it would be inconsistent.
I'm just going to stop here and tell you that you have alot of work into this Insane difficulty. I HIGHLY suggest a full remade of the difficulty since it will be easier (?).[/color] is it really that bad? i hope i don't have to do this. i worked hard on it and had many mods done to it

Thanks a lot for the mod!

Moa wrote:

From my queue
[General]
Adding Kiai time Pls i don't see where i should put it i think it's fine as it is.
[Easy]
pls DS be fixed 0.8 alriight. done. which changed a lot in the map.
00:11:456 (2,3) - So near in easy Diff not overlap ahrg. i just distance snap it. i changed it a little but i don't know whether it's good now
00:30:829 - Why you not mapped this part? does really everyone dislike my breaks
I think 01:05:825 (1) - This slider is waste rhythm fixed.
01:09:575 (3) - Many reverse in Easy Diff so confused for easy user i think they're alright. i at least hope so
01:12:075 (1) - DS check fixed.
01:31:135 - Why you not mapped this part? does really everyone dislike my breaks
[Advanced]
00:10:206 (1,1,2,3,1,2) - So confused in this Diff think it's alright as well
00:30:829 - why not mapped does really everyone dislike my breaks
01:31:135 - ^ ^
01:59:882 (1) - offscreen fixed.
[Insane]
00:30:829 - Insane diff must mapped all sound does really everyone dislike my breaks
01:30:823 - ^ ^
01:09:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - remapped this stream so near with circles
02:09:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^
02:39:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
02:59:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - ^
03:04:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - ^
you think the streams are to uh... dense / close ? well. if someone else also suggests this i guess i can do that. but for now i kinda think they're fine


you'll must be made many map first one xD but thanks!

thanks a lot for the mod! :3


and to the 3 last modders!! i changed some parts i said i wouldn't change since the other modders recommended it as well / did something where i had to change it anyways!

alright. some more updates + asked in #modhelp for advice on said issues.
people told me:

a.) it is right that the slider usually starts on a white tick and ends on a red tick. but not in all circumstances. it depends on the song. in my opinion it sounds right as it is, but if you tell me otherwise i'll listen. if this is mentioned more often or by a bn i'll change it.
b.) the breaks are fine. i know myself (just as they said) that the parts could be mapped. but i simply think some rest in a >2:30 min song should exist. 2 breaks are Deeefinitely reasonable for me. this has been mentioned often. yet i don't understand this point to be honest if this will be a reason that keeps the map from getting ranked i will map that part, but i honestly think that is fine as it is. and the parts are not as interesting and good to map as the rest so one more point.

don't get me wrong. it's good that you point those things out since it is your opinion. i just wanted to clarify why i didn't change it according to that opinion so far. sorry

mulraf wrote:

Thanks a lot for the mod! and damn it, just accidentaly cancelled the reply i already did before finishing it

[Insane]
00:10:831 (9) - Ok so, here's the deal. When you get empty places that skip a 1/2 beat, put a 1/2 slider. Simple solution. Too bad you skip it all the time. wat? sorry, i don't get what you mean. sounds right to me

What I mean is instead of having a hit circle on that note, have a slider that lands on the next red/white tick. It feels much less empty. Also, the breaks seem fine, I was just wondering, but you definitely should do the SB on all breaks.

Osuology wrote:

mulraf wrote:

Thanks a lot for the mod! and damn it, just accidentaly cancelled the reply i already did before finishing it

[Insane]
00:10:831 (9) - Ok so, here's the deal. When you get empty places that skip a 1/2 beat, put a 1/2 slider. Simple solution. Too bad you skip it all the time. wat? sorry, i don't get what you mean. sounds right to me

What I mean is instead of having a hit circle on that note, have a slider that lands on the next red/white tick. It feels much less empty. Also, the breaks seem fine, I was just wondering, but you definitely should do the SB on all breaks.

basically something along those lines



if that's what you meant i have to say i preffer it as it is because it sounds good as it is and this will make the map really hard in my opinion

but yeah, i'll make the storyboard for the other break too then :3 it's just a bit hard in that part since you hear the growling in the background but can't really make out what they're singing and it would be sad if i only used the clean vocal's lyrics. but there aren't any lyrics which have the growling part on the internet
i'll try it though.

i didn't only mean you in terms of the breaks, but if you go trough my mods you can see that about 1/2 if not even 2/3 are either asking me to map that part or think i'm not done with the map

and thanks for taking your time and going over my reply as well! that really shows dedictation

Heya from my Q

digging this song

General


Green lines dude they help

Gonna mainly focus on rythm modding for this reminds me of my first maps aswell and you're definitly gonna change the aesthetics later on
Kiai could be added to the solo/chorus
Try to play around with volume setttings, for slower sections like 02:33:316 (1) - turn the volume a bit down, during the kiai turn to volume up etc
(mainly last diff) Same with slider velocity, you can put like 1.3-1.4sv during the solo, 1.2 kiai, 0.7 during the slower parts etc to emphasize these

Easy

-00:16:455 (2,3) - sliders like these would look nicer if they were the same in form (just copy/paste) because they're mapped to the exact same sound, you can still rotatem around after that if you want
- 00:54:576 (3,4,1,2) - would change these around like this and blanket (2) will look nicer -01:09:575 (3) - It's an easy diff so you generally want only 1 return so I'd change it into somethign like so it makes the end clickable aswell
-01:27:073 (1) - why not stack this on 01:25:198 (2) -
-02:09:569 (3) - change into 2 1/1 sliders here
-02:39:566 (1) - maybe something like this so that can get the beginning of the guitarsolo in -02:44:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could make this like a little stair because the music clearly reaches a high here on (3) and looks a bit better than just lineair same for02:49:564 (1,2,3,4) -

Advanced

-Lower AR/OD/HP by 2 way too high because you're gonna need a diff between advanced and insane if you wanna get it ranked because of the large gap
-00:20:830 (1) - Would start directly with the slider here, so you start every other slider with a strong sound + it makes the end of 00:23:955 (1) - clickable
-00:59:576 (1) - would end this a tick sooner and not stack it, this is extremely hard to play for newcomers otherwise and will guarentee miss the next slider
-01:13:637 (2) - 1 return less => put note on 01:13:637 (2) - got the same lenght of kicks in each slider and it makes the end clickable
-01:28:948 (3,4,5,1) - this overlap is hell when you're gonna reduce the AR so would spread it out a bit
-02:01:132 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - would emphasize the vocals here with a rythm like this maybe -02:05:819 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - like above suggestion -02:49:564 (1) - same as in 00:59:576 (1)


Insane

Green lines reminder

-01:00:826 (1) - these 3/2 sliders in this section are a would sound better if divided into 1/1 slider and a circle imo
-01:11:762 (5) - and 01:13:012 (5) - make into a 1/1 slider here, feels empty
-01:16:762 (5) - and 01:18:012 (5) - ^
-01:14:574 (1,2,3,4,5) - move this pattern to the right abit so it starts on the (4) of the previous combo, same for 01:19:574 (1) - pattern, you wanna build further on the previous combo and the starting DS is way too low as it is now.
-01:21:136 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) to 0 01:30:823 (1) - so yeah this is basicly the privious section flipped over, you alrdy Maybe try something different in terms of patterns here. Might become a bit repetitive because you use it later on aswell 02:21:130 (1) -
-02:45:815 (1) - again on the slidervelocity thing these could be like 1.3 into 1.0 into 0.7 because the guitasr also drops, now they look and play exactly the same even though you can hear the clear drop in guitar tune
-03:05:813 (1) - would divide these bit too long for an insane you might try to work with 3/4 muted slider ends here so it still sounds like its one long note

Thats about it, GL with the map man

awesome, thanks :3 might take a while until i realized the suggestions since i have a lot to do but there's definitely a lot of things i'm going to change in the map (and have already changed, just not updated ) will reply with the comments once i changed everything and have more time

well, i'm kinda sorry but it's a bit hard to reply to that mod because i made the changes over several days and don't really remember what i exactly did anymore but a few points:

first of all: i kinda thought that you'd like this song too since i saw that your m4m map was wintersun

about the speed changes: i kinda get what you mean. especially the one exact part you mentioned in the insane difficulty, but i really don't like those that much and i think they aren't a necessity so i will stay away from that i guess

volume changes: done

things you mentioned in the modding: did about uh... 80% of the things you suggested. really nice mod which helped me a lot, thanks! and sorry again for being that lazy and not looking at everything once again Dx if you want me to i can still do that.

So, servus aus meiner Modding Que.

- Gadian - wrote:

So, servus aus meiner Modding Que.

Genreal Thoughts

- UNCREATIVE in terms of rythm/patterns/emphasis i know. i'm a new mapper, and in my opinion it should be fine for starters if i do a map that plays well and fits the ranking criteria. but oh well, i'm trying :/
- If you are serious about this map, consider reampping it from the ground up now that sounds really harsh :/ is it really that bad? i mapped several months on this and everytime i think 'well, i hope now it's good enough to be shown to a BAT and maybe get ranked' people tell me how bad this is once again

Insane

00:10:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try a constant shape i'm kinda bad with stream shapes as the rest of the map probably shows, but i thought about it and found a good trick to improve my shapes i guess. hope it's fine now
00:10:675 (7,8,9,1) - That looks and plays bad, try to separate them from each other totally agreed, thought about doing this as well.
00:11:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - try to rotate them more and space them further apart, right now they are really boring alright. don't know if it's better now. looks a bit chaotic in my opinion. but it's less boring i guess.
00:13:643 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - I highly recommend sliders here with a medium velocity sorry, i like this as it is
00:54:889 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:59:888 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:15:830 (1,2) - Stack them properly done
01:00:826 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:16:143 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as with the triangles before done
00:18:643 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Same as the other time. Be creative and experimental with patterns done
00:21:142 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try more spacing, diffrerent angles, and flow directions for the streams. done
00:26:142 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
00:50:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
00:56:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ i like those, left them as they are.
01:50:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:56:133 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
02:39:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ changed.
02:49:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ ^
02:55:501 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^ ^ but left the stream at the end as it was.
03:04:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^ changed.
00:25:829 (1,2) - More spacing so you know the timing difference fixed
00:24:892 (1,2,3) - Space them further apart, else it takes away the movement fixed.
00:29:892 (1,2,3,4) - ^ left as it is since i guess it's fine to take away the movement as the map is about to take a break.
01:00:826 (1) - The silders take away the momentum at this point, make them faster 01:08:325 (1) - up to here sorry, i like it as it is :/
01:09:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Accelerate the stream through spacing i really, really dislike streams that change their snapping throughout the stream. i think this is a subjective change and i will probably never do something like this unless told by a BAT or QAT (and even then i'd only do it since it's for getting the map ranked )
02:09:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^ ^
01:13:012 (5) - Mirror the previous slider huh? it already is, isn't it? oO
01:14:574 (1,2,3,4) - Try some different patterns done

I am going to stop here, because i think you might get the general idea that i have about this map and how it is right now and how you can improve it. Please do so and be creative

well, thanks a lot for the mod!
i really made massive changes to the map now and also finally decided on putting kiai and some green lines in there. i hope i will soon reach the point where some people say that this is fine or at least decent :/

heys....from queue!
err...please don't mind but, tbh, visually, your map is well......terrible...may need full re-map...
well lemme point out stuff as best as i can-
(please dont kill me Dx im sorry for making it soo.......brutal x,x)
im too tired ._. your other difficulties also have similar mistakes so resolve as much as you can (sorry for the huge burden e.e)
in the last difficulty, please...there wayy too much circle spams....calm them down e.e
also, id recommend getting a 3.5/4 star difficulty for a proper spread.
thats all for this mod e.e

[ Argon ] wrote:

heys....from queue! ello!
err...please don't mind but, tbh, visually, your map is well......terrible...may need full re-map...
well lemme point out stuff as best as i can-
(please dont kill me Dx im sorry for making it soo.......brutal x,x) SAVAGE! no, it's fine i guess :/ i really made huge changes after this. same goes for the last mod that was just as brutal. i guess bad maps need to be confronted with reality in order to get better but i hope this is the last time i hear this for the now normal and the insane diff! D: i guess it's fine for the now hard diff since no one was that rough at that one so far you even managed to change this easy into a normal! D: but i guess NHI is just as fine if not better than EHI in terms of the spread.

General Easy Aesthetics mod

First off all....space...
00:11:456 (2,3) - For example, are over lapping even if they are 1/1 beats apart, looks terrible, plays stuffy and choked.
->Try using a locked DS of about 1.2 through out the map.It may sound high but its perfectly fine because, most beats are 1/1 apart which is (in terms of higher difficulties) a huge amount of time to get ready for the next objects. [ many notes are 2/1 notes apart it seems, for them even 0.8x ds seems like an exaggeration... test around with your Ds and Sv amounts to get the perfect fit!] yeah. 1.2 ds is really harsh for an easy map. i can't see that working........ that's why it's a normal map now D: but you're right. just looks a lot better now.
00:52:077 (3,1) - I would recommend you against using such over-laps in easier difficulties. Sure, its clearly visible, far away in time and play-able, but just look at it....
->try making shapes like in the image below, looks much better! and use a small grid size for accurate distance snap. Its ok to do them only if they are very far away in time, also depends highly on circle Ar, the lower the ar, the higher the time should be between such overlaps.

[00:52:077 (3,1) - 00:51:452 (2,1) - 02:08:944 (2,1) - 02:28:317 (1,2,3) - ] changed most of them after changing DS anyways. i think one of them is still stacked since i just think it's fine there.
01:50:821 (1,2) - Make them symmetrical, everyone loves symmetry <3
->copy paste and rotate/flip is very helpful. (ctrl+g h j for flips)(ctrl+r for degree rotations)(ctrl+. , for 90 degree insta rotations)
[01:02:076 (2,1) - 01:05:825 (1,2) - 01:50:821 (1,2) - 01:55:820 (1,2,1) - 02:05:819 (1,2) - 02:12:068 (2,1) - 02:15:818 (1,2,1) - 02:21:442 (2,3) - 02:25:817 (1,2,1) - ] done <3
01:52:070 (2,1) - try placing objects at direct flow paths sometimes for smooth easy movements! And take care about note to slider entry or exist angles xO
->for example, placing 01:53:945 (1) - at x:176, y:128
[00:12:081 (3,4,5,1) - 01:50:821 (1,2) - 01:52:070 (2,1) - 01:55:820 (1,2) - 01:57:070 (2,1) - ] changed most of that now anyways and tbh i'm not good with flow i hope it's decent now though.
01:55:820 (1,2,1) - try not going back the same way you came from, gotta keep stuff interesting and keep moving forward in life right?
->make interesting patterns by combining various other patterns and also its ok to break flow sometimes! like try this->
changed with DS as well :/
02:39:566 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,1) - this isnt 2010, straight motion is boring!
03:00:813 (1,2,1) - for example -
allllright. best paint skills 2k16 inc. xD changed it. not exactly like in your masterpieces but not straight (cough) anymore and i think it might be to your liking.

Easy Beat Mod

00:11:143 - Quite strong musical part, should have been a note. fixed
00:14:893 - 00:15:518 - ^ and considering 00:11:456 (2,3,4,5) - it should have been mapped. Either map this, or adjust 00:11:456 (2,3,4,5) - to remove notes so that your beat formatting is consistent. fixed i think : x
00:18:018 - nothing is here when 00:13:018 - had a note...please make your rhythm formatting consistent through out similar sections, especially in lower difficulties. fixed i think but i'm bad with doing this kind of stuff on my own. i'll try to find errors and fix them but i hope it is understandable if i, as a rather new mapper, still have some errors D:
01:10:825 (5,1) - that random rythic gap tho.... uhm. i kinda thought it was fine but changed to somethin else. better now
01:55:820 (1,1) - bad stacking. fixed.
02:05:819 (1,2) - rip ds fixed. i already knew there was something wrong when changing this in the last mod but just couldn't figure out that i just messed up the ds xD
02:14:568 (2,1) - blanket? done i guess? (i don't really know what blanket means i just guess that you mean blanket slider (google at least shows that as the only result of osu blankets ))
02:20:817 (1,2) - ^? (^)
welp, its all basically the same consistency errors mostly, im sure you can find out any others and resolve them.
remember-similar sections should be mapped in similar styles, though they may contain a little variation sometimes

im too tired ._. your other difficulties also have similar mistakes so resolve as much as you can (sorry for the huge burden e.e)
in the last difficulty, please...there wayy too much circle spams....calm them down e.e i think that's perfectly fine oO you probably only subjectively dislike stream-heavy maps or something
also, id recommend getting a 3.5/4 star difficulty for a proper spread.
thats all for this mod e.e

alright, thanks a lot! really helped! and i don't know why but your name is framed in the 'thanks to'-list. => gonna get fame soon!

Hello! Mod from my queue!

Normal

1. 00:13:018 (6,1) - Blanket improve
2. 00:17:705 (5,6,1) - Make perfect triangle?
3. 00:18:330 (1,2) - Blanket improve
4. 00:24:580 (2) - Copy 00:23:330 (1) and rotate about 180°
5. 00:59:576 (3) - Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J, Ctrl + G, cause flow broken
6. 01:11:450 (2,1) - Stack this?
7. 01:16:449 (2,3) - Blanket improve
8. 01:18:949 (1,2,3,1) - Make square here?
9. 01:21:449 (2,3) - Broken flow
10. 02:10:819 (1,2) - Blanket improve
11. 02:12:068 (2,1) - ^
12. 02:13:318 (1,2) - ^
13. 02:15:818 (1,2) - ^
14. 02:17:068 (2,1) - ^
15. 02:21:442 (2,3) - ^
16. 02:22:692 (3,1) - ^
17. 02:24:567 (2,1) - Try to avoid this overlap
18. 02:25:817 (1,2) - Blanket improve
19. 02:27:067 (2,1) - ^
20. 02:28:317 (1,2) - ^
21. 02:35:816 (1,1) - Stack this two
22. 03:02:063 (2,1) - Make it parallel
23. 03:05:813 (1,2) - ^

Hard

1. 00:14:893 (2,1) - Blanket this two??
2. 00:15:830 (1,2,1,2) - Do it evenly
3. 00:18:330 (1,1) - Stack it?
4. 00:18:955 (3,2) - ^
5. 00:25:829 (1,1) - Try to avoid thsis overlap
6. 00:51:452 (2,3,3) - Overlap
7. 00:52:077 (1,4) - ^
8. 00:57:076 (1,1) - ^
9. 01:03:950 (2,1) - You can make it better
10. 01:04:575 (1) - This slider looks old, Make two sliders and circle
11. 01:08:950 (2) - Copy 01:08:325 (1) and rotate about 180°
12. 01:11:137 (1) - Make two sliders and circle or something like this. Be creative!
13. 01:12:387 (2) - ^
14. 01:13:637 (2) - ^
15. 01:16:762 (5,1) - Unreadable stack
16. 01:18:012 (5,1) - ^
17. 01:24:417 (4) - IT LOOKS LIKE 2008 MAP! Be creative!
18. 01:29:573 (1) - Make jumps here!
19. 01:30:354 (2,3,4,5) - Make square here
20. 02:01:444 (3,4) - DS
21. 02:03:007 (4,2) - Stack it
22. 02:06:132 (6) - NC
23. 02:13:318 (1) - Make three circles and slider here't good and it
24. 02:18:786 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Remap this part. It's unclickable
    Make it like here: %image%
25. 02:23:317 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - It's very unreadable. Unstack all sliders.
26. 02:27:536 (2) - Make two sliders here
27. 02:45:815 (1,1) - Avoid overlap here.
28. 02:50:814 (1) - Weird slider. Make it normal
29. 02:52:064 (1,1) - Make two sliders here
30. 02:57:689 (2,1) - Overlap
31. 02:58:939 (2,1) - ^
32. 02:59:563 (1) - Another weird slider
33. 03:02:063 (1,2,1,2) - Try to avoid overlaps here
34. 03:03:938 (2,3) - ^

END!
Tbh it isn't good and it isn't bad.
GOOD LUCK!

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! Mod from my queue!

Hey! and thanks a lot for the mod!

Chalwa wrote:

Normal

1. 00:13:018 (6,1) - Blanket improve changed
2. 00:17:705 (5,6,1) - Make perfect triangle? changed
3. 00:18:330 (1,2) - Blanket improve changed
4. 00:24:580 (2) - Copy 00:23:330 (1) and rotate about 180° changed
5. 00:59:576 (3) - Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J, Ctrl + G, cause flow broken changed
6. 01:11:450 (2,1) - Stack this? changed
7. 01:16:449 (2,3) - Blanket improve changed
8. 01:18:949 (1,2,3,1) - Make square here? changed
9. 01:21:449 (2,3) - Broken flow completely changed the whole section because ^
10. 02:10:819 (1,2) - Blanket improve changed
11. 02:12:068 (2,1) - ^
12. 02:13:318 (1,2) - ^
13. 02:15:818 (1,2) - ^
14. 02:17:068 (2,1) - ^
15. 02:21:442 (2,3) - ^
16. 02:22:692 (3,1) - ^ tried to fix all of them, seemingly i'm not to good with blankets yet. i hope they are better now. for some i could tell why you thought they were wrong. for others i didn't really see the problem. for some i saw the problem but there were spacing issues or similar things preventing me from what i would've liked to do
17. 02:24:567 (2,1) - Try to avoid this overlap changed complete section
18. 02:25:817 (1,2) - Blanket improve
19. 02:27:067 (2,1) - ^
20. 02:28:317 (1,2) - ^ tried to fix those too
21. 02:35:816 (1,1) - Stack this two done
22. 03:02:063 (2,1) - Make it parallel i actually prefer it the way it is. creates a bit of differentiation in my opinion
23. 03:05:813 (1,2) - ^ ^

thanks a lot once more! finally get to update this after such a long time. i will edit the rest into this tomorrow oh and:

Chalwa wrote:

Tbh it isn't good and it isn't bad.
GOOD LUCK!

hey, that's probably the most positive comment i've had on this so far, so thanks. i guess.

Hello world.

I'm sorry for letting all the efforts everyone put into this slide, wasting time [just keep it goin' and goin']. I came to a realization: i suck at mapping. But! the normal difficulty seemingly wasn't thaat horrible. and the hard diff was slightly horrible but not as bad as the insane which seemingly was beyond repair.
I came to the conclusion to delete the Insane diff and finish this as a 2 difficulty map set. The hard diff. got a major overhaul (not 100% finished but almost) and once it is done this'll be ready for modding again and hopefully ranked somehow.

thanks for all the efforts so far, hope i can finish this :3

HI from my Q

these are not the best suggestions but I hope this helps you
good luck on your map!
well yea, if you think you suck at mapping so what? The thing you can do is to improve!! How can u improve? (well this is my way) check on mods for you, they help you to learn how to map better and know the reason why you should put circles, sliders...etc there , secondly, look at some maps and see how they were mapped. I hope you get better and better on mapping!

tiffany yu tyu wrote:

01:14:262 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - is there a reason to put on circles but not sliders? I can't hear that much important beats in there but circles are usually for important beats, plus I think it's not too comfortable to put a lot circles (except jumps) so I think I will be better to have some changed to sliders instead (like this one 01:19:261 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - is good) same as this 02:14:256 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - ...there are some more

i definitely know what you mean. there is a reason. if you listen closely (best at 25%) there's some extra drums everytime i use sliders. it is a bit hard for a hard map, i get that. so i'll reconsider after the next mod agrees to this or i'll ask for other opinions on this :3

tiffany yu tyu wrote:

02:06:288 (2) - move to left a bit, u can make a blanket here

done

tiffany yu tyu wrote:

making the map clean and neat is also important, the beginning of the map was great, but till the last part, they kinda squish together like this 02:58:314 (1,2,3,4,1) - you can make the map clean by moving them but avoid putting on them

once again this was something intentional. the whole part with the guitar solo is a bit more chaotic and messy but still doesn't go overboard in my opinion (correct distance spacing, nc, etc.). i was thinking about this part a lot too. i think it isn't too hard for the diff, the 'chaos' fits to the song part and yeah. but as above i will definitely reconsider if more people agree with your opinion

tiffany yu tyu wrote:

good luck on your map!

thanks a lot really appreciate the efforts. i'll make sure to look into the 2 points i didn't fix right now too


edit: also fixed some hitsounds and beatmap folder stuff

M4M from my modding queue o/


Good luck o/

-Tochi wrote:

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  [Hard]

1. 00:20:830 (1) - Why not blanket this circle like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9213638 instead of stacking it? tried it but i think it looks better the way it is.
2. 00:51:764 (3,1,2) - Fix the stacking here. done.
3. 01:03:950 (2,1) - Stack the sliderends properly. done.
4. 01:11:606 (1) - The NC here is not needed. You didn't add it at 01:12:700 (3) - or 02:11:600 (3) - done.
5. 02:30:504 (4) - Either add a NC on this slider, or remove the NC on this slider 01:30:510 (1) - to keep the consistency. done.
6. 02:45:815 (1) - You could improve this slider so it looks like a blanket like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9213675 done. i hope. was originally inteded to be a blanket but i'm not that great with sliders but i tried to recreate it as well as possible.
7. 02:52:064 (1,2) - This overlap seems rather ugly, try to avoid it as much as possible or stack the repeat slider with the next slider, like you did here 02:53:314 (1) - changed it.
8. 02:59:251 (4,1) - Also try to avoid the tiny overlap with these as it looks unintentional. done.
9. 03:03:938 - Why didn't you map to the sound here? It's too strong to avoid. done.
10. 03:07:063 (1) - Stack this repeat slider's head with 03:06:438 (2) - this circle. That way you will avoid the bad overlap. changed it but did it a little different to your suggestion.
11. 03:08:313 (1) - Move this to x:290 y:216 for better visuals: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9213701

due to the change above also changed this in a different way

Good luck o/

thanks a lot, appreciate it :3

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