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fhana - Wonder Stella

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Crystal
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年8月14日 at 22:53:04

Artist: fhana
Title: Wonder Stella
Source: Fate/kaleid liner プリズマイリヤ ツヴァイ ヘルツ!
Tags: Prisma☆Illya 2wei Herz! Illya Prisma Herz Towana Yuxugi Waga Kevin Mitsunaga Junichi Sato Collaboration Skystar Amamiya Yuko anime opening full m1223961117 DreaM117er Narcissu yf_bmp Vert Sharlo
BPM: 193
Filesize: 8589kb
Play Time: 04:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Easy (1.52 stars, 278 notes)
  2. Amamiya Crystal's Celestial (6.02 stars, 1190 notes)
  3. Hard (3.45 stars, 760 notes)
  4. Narcissu's Insane (4.77 stars, 952 notes)
  5. Sharlo's Normal (2.31 stars, 483 notes)
  6. yf & Vert's Extra (5.51 stars, 1184 notes)
Download: fhana - Wonder Stella
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#14
Collab with Skystar
(I mapped Crystal he mapped Amamiya)
fhana <3

Download Ag's Extra HERE!
PLZ Re-DL if you did it before 2016/2/8 (y/m/d) for mp3 file change!

collab parts
Skystar - 01:38:513 - 03:10:378
zyoi
fhana <3
Skystar
Nathan
( ˘ω˘ )
hvick225
Depths
OWO
moonlightleaf
[<3]

这啥diff名 好像很流行

我觉得那个大粉color可以换美游衣服的淡紫色

01:48:321 加note

02:53:139 (1,2) - 我觉得换一下节奏比较好

02:54:694 clap

03:05:264 (3) - 这边移一下和前面那个2对齐吧(;w;

03:11:015 (1) - ctrl+g 好

03:35:419 (2) - 试试拆成这样

04:00:134 (5) - 放4滑条尾?

摸不出啥,orz
Mollon
我目前的水平打这图困难,摸图也是菜鸡水平 主要摸点细节排列部分吧,尽力了

00:01:999 (2) - to 304 228 这里是要拼三角吧
00:08:683 (4) - to 212 328
00:47:388 (1) - 戳到误差条上啦
00:52:362 (2) - 滑条头戳到了 还是感觉有点低 头可能影响比滑条尾大一点
01:40:393 (6,7) - 这里和前后同类节奏下的都不太一样,要不要改成滑条加单点
02:32:932 (1) - clap?
02:38:683 - 还是有音的感觉,加个note嘛
02:59:512 (3) - 其他好像都放滑条尾上了,这个要不要也放一下 好像没啥影响(强迫症
04:31:222 (1,2) - 这个间距感觉还是有点容易断滑条尾。。是我太菜,不知道其他modder打的时候会不会有这种感觉,就提一下
开了hr看了一下04:01:533 (1,1,1,1) - 段发现血量大概会掉到三分之二左右好像不到一点,不知道如果出100的话会不会有影响,试不了。。

好图阿,只能灌水了 射个星吧
Narcissu
這歌的rank版本……一隻手已經數不過來了……
Mafumafu
As your request! :D

00:33:243 (1) - a little sad that the vocal here is covered within the slider. Better map it out imo.
00:35:885 (4,5,1) - The flow is a bit weird because of the curve of the slider.
00:49:564 (2,3,4) - This triplet sounds really weird.
00:57:181 (1,2,1) - right triangle?
01:02:077 No sound here, better remove the note. Also the effect of it is not nice.
01:20:186 (3,4) - You are always using a considerable spacing throughout the whole map, so the spacing here is quite little compared to other parts. There's also a downbeat at 01:20:497 which deserves a larger spacing.
01:20:497 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Use larger spacing for these notes, too.
01:50:808 (3,1) - Consider a jump here?
01:58:269 (3,1) - ^
03:54:383 (1) - Remove NC
04:26:015 (6) - Effect of this overmap is not as good as expected, better remove.
04:43:424 (5) - ^
05:05:419 (1,1,1) - antijump may provide better effect here?

Good Luck!
Narcissu
  1. 那個啥……打圖會有123go……
  2. 音效略悲催……至少安靜的段落消掉slider , 第一個滑條拖的聲音就觸發我強迫症了
  3. 這BG有人用過了啊,還有CP頭像呢
  4. 00:12:414 (4,5) - 我比較喜歡這樣的→00:21:119 (7,1) - ……看上去率性一點,然而實際上前面那個出現頻率比較高
  5. 01:38:217 (8,1) - 這個太順了而且鋼琴是四個,強烈建議補圈或者antijump
  6. 01:48:321 - 補圈的話這里應該也要加上
  7. 02:07:751 (1) - 這簡直強行複製對稱……從音樂看這裡應該都是圈
  8. 02:15:678 - normal-whistle連續用太難聽了,個人意見保留02:16:922 (2,3,1,2,3) - 即可,中間02:17:854 - 也去掉會更合節奏

    瞎了後面一大片,第二個kiai 簡直毀歌,都是默認音效和這個歌出入很大聽上去很明顯,每一種的位置又相當隨機和原曲參雜一起和火鍋一樣……我傾向CelsiusLK 的版本

    03:08:062 - 03:08:528 - 03:08:994 - 相對的這邊連續切分音才是適合放finish 或者哨子的地方,正常的講,不過我不喜歡哨子
  9. 03:18:010 - 這一片超超超長單點建議混幾個小DS進去……
  10. 04:04:681 - 我HRAuto看了一邊,SS是掉血3/4,前面的單點大概可能也許多幾個100會陣亡,HP降到6如何
  11. 這歌之前fhána都默默無聞呢……
Lyric
这歌真好听。
[<3]

  • 00:08:217 (3) - 是不是漏音了,改成一个1/2slider+一circle?
    00:12:569 (5) - 感觉中间白线不该略,改为一circle+一1/2slider试试。
    00:33:243 (1) - 这个是不是该照顾一下Vocal。
    00:50:186 (1) - ^
    00:51:429 (2) - ^
    01:38:372 - 这里感觉不该空,很容易造成误解。不过为了保持节奏一致,可以考虑把 01:38:217 (8) 的位置挪到后面的slider头上?
    01:49:098 (3) - 这个用circle其实更好?
    01:55:471 (2) - 拆成一circle+一1/2slider更合适。
    01:57:492 (2) - 换成首尾两circle?
    03:07:673 - 漏了个音。
Hakurei Yoru
Topic Starter
Crystal

moonlightleaf wrote:

[<3]

这啥diff名 好像很流行

我觉得那个大粉color可以换美游衣服的淡紫色

01:48:321 加note

03:35:419 (2) - 试试拆成这样 不啦 还是喜欢这样

04:00:134 (5) - 放4滑条尾? 暂时不了

摸不出啥,orz

Mollon wrote:

我目前的水平打这图困难,摸图也是菜鸡水平 主要摸点细节排列部分吧,尽力了

00:01:999 (2) - to 304 228 这里是要拼三角吧
00:08:683 (4) - to 212 328
00:47:388 (1) - 戳到误差条上啦 没事吧
00:52:362 (2) - 滑条头戳到了 还是感觉有点低 头可能影响比滑条尾大一点 没出屏幕 应该没事
01:40:393 (6,7) - 这里和前后同类节奏下的都不太一样,要不要改成滑条加单点 改了一下其他地方
04:31:222 (1,2) - 这个间距感觉还是有点容易断滑条尾。。是我太菜,不知道其他modder打的时候会不会有这种感觉,就提一下 感觉问题不大的
开了hr看了一下04:01:533 (1,1,1,1) - 段发现血量大概会掉到三分之二左右好像不到一点,不知道如果出100的话会不会有影响,试不了。。

好图阿,只能灌水了 射个星吧

Regraz wrote:

As your request! :D

00:33:243 (1) - a little sad that the vocal here is covered within the slider. Better map it out imo. it is on purpose
00:35:885 (4,5,1) - The flow is a bit weird because of the curve of the slider.
00:49:564 (2,3,4) - This triplet sounds really weird.
00:57:181 (1,2,1) - right triangle? no lol
01:02:077 No sound here, better remove the note. Also the effect of it is not nice. i prefer this, will focus on it in further modding
01:20:186 (3,4) - You are always using a considerable spacing throughout the whole map, so the spacing here is quite little compared to other parts. There's also a downbeat at 01:20:497 which deserves a larger spacing.
01:20:497 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Use larger spacing for these notes, too.
03:54:383 (1) - Remove NC
04:26:015 (6) - Effect of this overmap is not as good as expected, better remove.
04:43:424 (5) - ^ same as mentioned above
05:05:419 (1,1,1) - antijump may provide better effect here? ive considered about that but i prefer this pattern here

Good Luck!

Narcissu wrote:

  1. 那個啥……打圖會有123go……
  2. 音效略悲催……至少安靜的段落消掉slider , 第一個滑條拖的聲音就觸發我強迫症了
  3. 這BG有人用過了啊,還有CP頭像呢 orz
  4. 00:12:414 (4,5) - 我比較喜歡這樣的→00:21:119 (7,1) - ……看上去率性一點,然而實際上前面那個出現頻率比較高 咦 这个感觉问题不大呀
  5. 01:38:217 (8,1) - 這個太順了而且鋼琴是四個,強烈建議補圈或者antijump
  6. 01:48:321 - 補圈的話這里應該也要加上
  7. 04:04:681 - 我HRAuto看了一邊,SS是掉血3/4,前面的單點大概可能也許多幾個100會陣亡,HP降到6如何 改了圈
  8. 這歌之前fhána都默默無聞呢……

Lyric wrote:

这歌真好听。
[<3]

  • 00:08:217 (3) - 是不是漏音了,改成一个1/2slider+一circle?感觉不需要
    00:12:569 (5) - 感觉中间白线不该略,改为一circle+一1/2slider试试。中间没音吧 反正不重
    00:33:243 (1) - 这个是不是该照顾一下Vocal。
    00:50:186 (1) - ^
    00:51:429 (2) - ^ 故意跟鼓
    01:38:372 - 这里感觉不该空,很容易造成误解。不过为了保持节奏一致,可以考虑把 01:38:217 (8) 的位置挪到后面的slider头上?
no comment = fixed
thanks!!
Karen
[General]
  1. 关了那啥widescreen support
[<3]
  1. 02:43:176 (1) - unsnap
  2. 02:53:124 (1) - ^
  3. 01:15:819 (1,1) - 看你其他地方3/4滑条后面都overlap这个也碰起来吧
  4. 01:50:171 (2,1) - 感觉太远了吧,这里前后都比较平和,这么大间距有点突然
  5. 03:22:580 - 加note?前后类似的地方这里都是三连
  6. 05:00:741 (1,2,3,4) - 后面同样地方05:03:228 (2,3,4,5) - 距离是7.4,这里1.0是不是有点不好

找点东西摸好难 orz
Topic Starter
Crystal

Karen wrote:

[General]
  1. 关了那啥widescreen support
[<3]
  1. 02:43:176 (1) - unsnap
  2. 02:53:124 (1) - ^
  3. 01:15:819 (1,1) - 看你其他地方3/4滑条后面都overlap这个也碰起来吧
  4. 05:00:741 (1,2,3,4) - 后面同样地方05:03:228 (2,3,4,5) - 距离是7.4,这里1.0是不是有点不好

找点东西摸好难 orz
things that are mentioned above are fixed
thanks :D
Karen
Boom
Karen
popped the bubble for now
@BNs, please don't move it forward before we get the result of this discussion.
ZZHBOY

Karen wrote:

popped the bubble for now
@BNs, please don't move it forward before we get the result of this discussion.
这么怂还是人给给?
另外bn没理由去刻意调查一个歌是不是改过的 不可能让你背锅
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