Lenfried- wrote:

30% done w/ HS also fixed sampleset and tags

http://pastebin.com/SkJ1LhxG

ArcherLove wrote:

hi I tried but it's really good, so it is just suggestion

[Len 7K] col = 1~7

02:13:901 (133901|2,134066|4,134066|1,134066|0,134231|1,134231|2,134396|3) - this section, how about swapping 02:14:231 (134231|2,134396|3) - or http://puu.sh/ncaCb/01f3daa302.jpg ? (I prefer the 2nd one but.. your choice ww) went for the ss
02:34:011 (154011|4) - I think it's better at 4 (for me, playability) eh doesnt help much
03:04:753 - 03:04:794 - add, it has 1/8 sound hh right
03:15:467 - I think adding at 4 it's good for playability also if i do that i would have to add notes on all other similar sounds, w/c are a lot and i dont really have any intentions on fully charting the weak sound :c
04:18:599 - add? ok

I don't know if this go as m4m (and I can't mod 4K orz)
in case I already request ;;

good luck!~ nice mapset!

hannanos wrote:

Here is my mod as requested by Lenfried-

I couldn't actually play the song because it's too hard, so some high density sections have very few recommendations

Columns: |1|2|3| 4 |5|6|7|

Gourmet Chocolate

General: I think you need to uncheck Widescreen Support

Hitsounds

I also think it is a good idea to look at using some custom hitsounds in some places. For example using some beat sound to emphasise the strong beats at the beginning of the song, since they are quite significant and soft normal hitsounds don’t quite do them justice.
01:03:846 - I suggest putting the finish on one note and clap on another, unless that particular note is representing two layers. Basically what you did here 01:24:945 -
01:06:154 (66154|3) - same as above
01:05:989 - I think you could put some heavy-ish custom hitsound here but this is up to you. I feel that this is significantly loud and in a place that warrants some hitsound
01:47:528 (107528|1,107610|1,107692|4,107775|4,107857|2,107940|2,108022|5,108104|5,108187|1,108269|1) - I recommend using the soft whistle hitsounds on these 5 pairs of minijacks. I’m not sure if they are necessary for the minijacks in the voice part throughout the song, but I like them here.
02:07:143 - You can experiment with using the soft clap on every second beat throughout this klai, since it adds a little variation and may sound nicer. I know the previous klai is not hitsounded like this but you should try it out and see if it works. I think this because you used the clap for 2nd beats earlier on
02:28:242 - In this bit you can try using the soft whistle to emphasise the main melody, e.g. the following notes for the first bit: 02:28:242 (148242|4,148736|4,149231|5,149725|4,150220|3,150550|4,150714|5,150879|6) -
03:38:132 (218132|6,218297|1,218462|4,218626|2,218791|0,218956|3,219121|6,219286|1) - You can use soft whistle for these notes, making them stand out more
I really like some of the hitsounding in certain places though, the rest of it seems fine to me. You could perhaps play around with it a bit in places where you only use the drum clap on every beat. But I don’t currently have any ideas on what you can do there so feel free to leave it as it is.

Notes

00:37:143 (37143|2,37143|6) - These two notes should start 1/2 beat later oh right
The following up to about 1 min mark is stuff I would do differently based on pitch from here on, ill either agree and not reply or say no on pitch stuff
00:43:407 (43407|3) - Move to 1 for better pitch
00:46:703 (46703|4,46868|1,47033|3,47198|5) - Maybe make this 6-4-1-5
00:51:319 (51319|3,51484|0) – Make this 1-4 instead
00:52:637 (52637|1) - Move this note to 4
00:55:110 (55110|5,55275|6,55440|3,55604|5,55769|3) – I suggest making this into 5-7-6-4-7
00:56:099 - This is missing a note, maybe add in 1 or 4 since this isnt a pitch check, added 4
00:57:088 (57088|2,57253|0,57418|3) – Make this 2-3-1 instead
01:09:039 - Remove a note here since it is much quieter than the 2 chord before it kk
01:11:676 - Same as above apparently there is no sound here as it was expressed by either a reference chart for a faint non-beat sound, removed note
01:16:786 - I’m not sure if the 3 doubles are necessary here but it’s up to you looks cool wont change it
01:19:588 - Remove a note here since it is much quieter than the 2 chord before it kk
01:51:978 (111978|4,112143|3) - ctrl + g gives better pitching also did some note lane changes to basic notes
01:52:473 (112473|2) - You may consider moving this to 1 for pitch and because there are no LNs in 1 for that bar, but it does create a jack which seems to have been avoided in this section done thanks to previous lane changes
01:55:110 - Extend the LN here for 1/4 beat since there is no new sound on the bar line and change 01:55:275 (115275|5) - into a short note can't do that. Layer switches on 4/4 are the best
01:58:736 (118736|4,118901|6) - ctrl + g for better pitch
02:29:890 (149890|1,150055|0) - ctrl + g for better pitch
And so on throughout this section as you like, I prefer having it pitched more but leaving them could give it more variation
02:31:044 (151044|2,151209|0) - Could change this to 2-4 if you like
02:32:857 (152857|2,153187|2) - Move these to 4 because that lane will otherwise be empty for 3 bars
02:33:352 (153352|5) - Move this to 7 for pitch
02:34:011 (154011|4) - Move to 6
02:41:099 (161099|5,161264|4) - ctrl + g for better pitch
02:43:242 (163242|3) - Move to 7 because this is high pitched
02:49:341 - I would prefer if you map this section more strictly in terms of pitch (relative pitch of adjacent notes) because there is only 1 layer i would want to but my sense of pitch is generally bad :c I actually attempted to pitch chart it with an influence of other stuff w/o referencing the 4k diff
02:55:769 (175769|4) - Move this to 4 because it fits the sound better and also the column is empty for a while
04:05:824 (245824|1,246044|0) - Move these to 4 and 2 for pitching
04:12:912 (252912|0,252953|1,252995|2,253036|3) - This should be a triplet using 1/6 snap instead of using 1/8, so remove 1 note and rearrange done
04:26:593 - The notes within the next beat could really just be doubles; triples are awkward to play (this could just be me) going full retarded i mean crazy here
04:49:670 - Add a note here since every second beat has been 4 notes and this only has 3
04:58:901 - As above resolved ^

Good luck!

CometicRush wrote:

Hello - ID9 -! ( from modding queue )

Feel free to reject my suggestions, but please explain me the reason!

Column : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

Lenfreid's 7K Gourmet Chocolate

- 00:02:445 (2445|5) - 'If' you want to put note according to the vocal, remove this note. play in 75% or less, there's some vocal
- 00:02:692 (2692|1) - Same as ^^^ ^
- 00:11:346 (11346|0) - Move to 2 ok, also did some other stuff
- 00:11:429 (11429|3) - Move to 1 was covered by ^
- 00:30:137 (30137|3) - Add note to 2, and move to 6 while it might contain a sound i might not have heard, ill keep it as is for consistency with other similar note usages
- 01:08:956 (68956|4,68956|1) ~ 01:09:286 (69286|0,69286|3) - My suggestion : http://puu.sh/nePXJ/404a726e53.png ; can be more smooth i like the suggestion but this certain note usage was changed during hannanos' mod. My newer version hasnt been updated yet so there is that difference between the online version and what i have now.
- 01:21:731 (81731|5,81896|5) - Consider adding notes here (in column 6), melody-change exists. im not charting synth here . Current layers are: beats, weak chip sound and something associated with the short LNs.
- 01:35:495 (95495|3) ~ I think LNs are pretty off-music here. I suggest to move like these ; http://puu.sh/neQdo/595473f802.png (1/12 snap) ( This may increase judging difficulty for this part.) nice catch
- 01:47:198 (107198|1) - Move to 4 did a bunch of column changes instead
- 01:56:099 (116099|2,116181|1,116264|0) - Move these notes 1 column right, pretty better playing. going for that mirror pattern so ill pass
- 02:04:506 (124506|3,124506|0) ~ 02:05:824 (125824|5,125824|2) - One-sided stairways. -- http://puu.sh/neQxI/4b58d4bf9b.png ?? did the reverse of what you suggested where it goes left first before right, makes more sense with the music
- 02:21:484 (141484|1) - Add note here? yeah sure
- 03:04:753 (184753|6,184794|3) - Consider adding some notes in these beats. I thought that's pretty similar to these ; 02:54:203 (174203|6,174245|4) rest section, not doing this
- 03:07:143 (187143|3,187198|4,187253|5) - Move these to look like [1][3][5][7] PR, pass this one.
- 03:07:473 (187473|4,187637|1) - Move these to look like [2][4] PR too
- 04:18:681 (258681|4) - Move to 4 nope, charted some sound so now it is impossible to move to 4
- 04:26:593 (266593|1,266593|4,266593|0) - http://puu.sh/neRa1/c02325b2f1.png -- Can make smoothier fingermoves (?) fair enough
- 04:30:879 (270879|2,270962|3,271044|4,271126|5,271209|4) - Move these to look like [2][3][4][5][6] avoiding those trills, so ill pass

Others look great for me

Awesome 7K map! I hope this beatmap get ranked soon

Good luck!

Lenfried- wrote:

update:
http://pastebin.com/iRcwatUF

Lenfried- wrote:

Will be checking on it when i get access to a computer

Edit:
Checked the ss
It's a very simple fix. You should do it.

IamKwaN wrote:

btw, forgot to tell you in the PM. The Unicode title is éclair au chocolat (extended bittersweet mix) while Romanised title is eclair au chocolat (extended bittersweet mix).

Reyzra wrote:

hi there, M4M here

lets just started, just some suggestion from me feel free to reject it~

4K Pretzel Bread

COL |1|2|3|4|
00:21:648 from this part to 00:41:429 i seems feels repetitive pattern on this part, maybe you can make variation on this? how about change of pattern from here 00:26:923 and here 00:32:198 and here 00:37:473 try different pattern for that part, it will be more fun to have variation re pattern
00:51:319 (51319|1,51319|0) - remove one HS of these youve got 2 whistle
00:53:297 remove one note here , i think 1 LN 1 note is enough , more balance
00:55:275 i think the stream part start here, i can hear series of kick sound here, add note for stream from this part
00:56:264 (56264|1,56346|3) - ctrl +J ?
00:57:006 (57006|2,57088|1) - CTRL + H and then move 1 col to the right
00:57:253 (57253|2,57418|2,57582|2,57747|2,57912|2) - i think you need to something re pattern about this.
01:03:187 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4591383 try like this?
01:05:989 add 1 note here for more impact kick
01:07:802 (67802|2) - what is LN for? chime sound, i think normal note is more fit keep it
01:12:088 (72088|1) - move to col 4?
01:14:396 add note for cymbal?
01:16:703 (76703|0) - delete, i dont see why use 3 note here
01:18:681 (78681|3,78846|1) - CTRL + G for balance
01:19:506 (79506|3) - move to col 2
01:20:989 (80989|0) - move to col 3
01:22:473 (82473|1) - move to col 1
01:22:637 (82637|0) - move to col 4
01:24:945 (84945|1,85110|2,85440|1,85522|2) - CTRL + H for balance
01:28:077 (88077|2,88242|1) - ^
01:29:396 (89396|2,89478|1) - ^
01:35:165 (95165|3) - move to col 2?
01:41:593 i hear 1/8 hear maybe?
01:42:253 (102253|1) - move to col 4
01:43:901 (103901|2) - move to col 1?
01:50:000 (110000|1,110165|2,110247|1) - CTRL + H tahan buat pitch
01:52:637 this part of SV is slow and making hard to hit especially that stream, maybe increase it to 0,85 for a better accuracy
01:54:286 (114286|3) - move to col 2
02:05:824 try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4591464
02:07:802 (127802|2) - move ti col 4?
02:17:692 add note for cymbal and also from this onward i felt same flow pattern like 02:07:143 maybe try variation a bit?
02:31:374 (151374|2) - this note (also there is more than this i notice) you dont follow like this one? 02:44:066 nein(164066|3,164231|1,164396|0,164396|2,164560|3,164560|1) -
02:57:912 (177912|2) - move to col 4 and this 02:58:077 (178077|0) - go to col 3
03:13:736 (193736|1) - delete for consistency like this one 03:11:099
03:16:374 ^
03:19:011 ^
03:26:511 (206511|0,206593|1) - CTRL + G for balance after that this too 02:57:912 (177912|2,206593|2,206676|3) - 02:57 yg mana ini ka Rey? CTRL + G
03:28:077 (208077|2,208159|1,208242|2) - CTRL + H
03:28:571 (208571|1,208654|3) - CTRL + G
03:46:044 (226044|0) - move to col 2
03:54:039 (234039|1) - move to 1 and 03:54:039 (234039|2) - move to 4
04:13:654 too slow SV i guess
04:15:385 (255385|3) - move to 3
04:34:835 add note for cymbal
04:38:626 (278626|2) - move to col 1
04:43:077 (283077|1) - ^
04:43:242 (283242|0) - move to col 4
04:15:385 (255385|3,295769|2,295934|0) - swap collumn semoga bener swap nya kaya gini
04:59:725 (299725|2) - move to col 2
05:00:879 (300879|1) - move to col 4
05:04:341 (304341|2,304506|1) - swap collumn semoga bener swap nya kaya gini
05:27:582 add note here there a kick sound here

Lenfried's 7K Gourmet Chocolate

COMING SOON lol

Sry i got busy suddenly, i mod 7k diff tomorrow, so i do 4K mod for now~

Nivrad00 wrote:

Hi Len!

Seems like a really fun map to an upbeat song, and you've got some interesting LN, jacks, and SVs to spice things up. Good work

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[Lenfried's 7K Gourmet Chocolate]
00:06:978 (6978|2) - move a 1/4 snap backwards? seems like the same sounds as 00:01:539 - for example kk
03:48:434 - same here i think? im not sure i probably missed this same mistake like 5 times fixed this and another one
00:34:011 - should add LN for consistency with 00:32:692 - and 00:35:330 - etc kk
00:37:802 - this LN pattern seems inconsistent as well, and i'm not sure you were following a slight change in the music or if it was an accident. specifically this LN ending is 1/2 shorter than you'd expect based on the previous patterns and the LN at 00:38:132 - doesn't seem to exist in any of the previous patterns either
there was an issue with my layering. Fixed
00:50:000 - this is the only "bar" (two notes side by side) in this entire slow section... felt out of place while I was playing! made a [57]
01:04:011 (64011|6,65000|6) - if you move these two to lane 6 it would stop the four consecutive LNs in lane 7, which is very conspicuous but doesn't seem to be representative of the music. Also bonus to pitch relevacy ill take it since you mentioned PR
01:11:593 (71593|6) - how come there are two single notes here? i guess i had the additional sound in mind but had no actual intention of charting it. Fixed
01:15:220 - and 01:15:879 - missing single notes? (might be on purpose but i'm listing here cus i can't figure out why) remembered worrying about something and i now realized how it didn't matter. Added note
01:22:967 - nice jack patterns >[/color]
01:35:824 (95824|6) - this LN doesn't sync very well with the record scratch sound, since it's defo before the downbeat. other than that this LN part is very fun! LN is apparently 1/8 below
01:41:593 - the 4k version uses 1/8 snap here but the 7k version uses 1/6... that's prob DQ material ;n; my bad
01:53:874 (113874|3) - try moving this to the left, it'll preserve the trill for right-thumb players (cus it is a very trill-like sound) kk
02:14:973 - can't hear this note mistook weak sound for repeating. fixd
02:49:341 - should this be a single note? the drum layer drops out suddenly here and i'm not sure what else you would be charting entry point plus that high pitched "pew" sound
04:08:791 - how come this LN is so short? my bad
04:09:286 - missing piano note added
04:09:945 - same but for kicks eh sure
04:09:698 - not sure if i hear the piano here... kinda sure it's there
04:23:132 (263132|2,263297|2,263462|2,263791|2,263956|2) - jacks put a lot of stress on this single lane, try spreading them out swapped two columns
04:26:923 - you got an accidental four-note jack on lane 7 bud silly me
04:27:500 - i think the LN starts here (also a problem in the 4k maybe you should tell him) fixd
04:43:901 - and 04:44:560 - could take out the single notes here to represent the break in the drums sure

ok drive safe

Lenfried- wrote:

thanks a lot ill send in my reply and update later this day

Nivrad00 wrote:

Hi Len!

Seems like a really fun map to an upbeat song, and you've got some interesting LN, jacks, and SVs to spice things up. Good work

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[Lenfried's 7K Gourmet Chocolate]

04:27:500 - i think the LN starts here (also a problem in the 4k maybe you should tell him) fixd fixed

ok drive safe

thanks a lot!

http://pastebin.com/39gN08Xh

Reyzra wrote:

hi there, M4M here

lets just started, just some suggestion from me feel free to reject it~

4K Pretzel Bread

COL |1|2|3|4|
00:21:648 from this part to 00:41:429 i seems feels repetitive pattern on this part, maybe you can make variation on this? how about change of pattern from here 00:26:923 and here 00:32:198 and here 00:37:473 try different pattern for that part, it will be more fun to have variation
00:51:319 (51319|1,51319|0) - remove one HS of these youve got 2 whistle
00:53:297 remove one note here , i think 1 LN 1 note is enough , more balance
00:55:275 i think the stream part start here, i can hear series of kick sound here, add note for stream from this part
00:56:264 (56264|1,56346|3) - ctrl +J ?
00:57:006 (57006|2,57088|1) - CTRL + H and then move 1 col to the right
00:57:253 (57253|2,57418|2,57582|2,57747|2,57912|2) - i think you need to something re pattern about this.
01:03:187 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4591383 try like this?
01:05:989 add 1 note here for more impact kick
01:07:802 (67802|2) - what is LN for? chime sound, i think normal note is more fit
01:12:088 (72088|1) - move to col 4?
01:14:396 add note for cymbal?
01:16:703 (76703|0) - delete, i dont see why use 3 note here
01:18:681 (78681|3,78846|1) - CTRL + G for balance
01:19:506 (79506|3) - move to col 2
01:20:989 (80989|0) - move to col 3
01:22:473 (82473|1) - move to col 1
01:22:637 (82637|0) - move to col 4
01:24:945 (84945|1,85110|2,85440|1,85522|2) - CTRL + H for balance
01:28:077 (88077|2,88242|1) - ^
01:29:396 (89396|2,89478|1) - ^
01:35:165 (95165|3) - move to col 2?
01:41:593 i hear 1/8 hear maybe?
01:42:253 (102253|1) - move to col 4
01:43:901 (103901|2) - move to col 1?
01:50:000 (110000|1,110165|2,110247|1) - CTRL + H
01:52:637 this part of SV is slow and making hard to hit especially that stream, maybe increase it to 0,85 for a better accuracy
01:54:286 (114286|3) - move to col 2
02:05:824 try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4591464
02:07:802 (127802|2) - move ti col 4?
02:17:692 add note for cymbal and also from this onward i felt same flow pattern like 02:07:143 maybe try variation a bit?
02:31:374 (151374|2) - this note (also there is more than this i notice) you dont follow like this one? 02:44:066 (164066|3,164231|1,164396|0,164396|2,164560|3,164560|1) -
02:57:912 (177912|2) - move to col 4 and this 02:58:077 (178077|0) - go to col 3
03:13:736 (193736|1) - delete for consistency like this one 03:11:099
03:16:374 ^
03:19:011 ^
03:26:511 (206511|0,206593|1) - CTRL + G for balance after that this too 02:57:912 (177912|2,206593|2,206676|3) - CTRL + G
03:28:077 (208077|2,208159|1,208242|2) - CTRL + H
03:28:571 (208571|1,208654|3) - CTRL + G
03:46:044 (226044|0) - move to col 2
03:54:039 (234039|1) - move to 1 and 03:54:039 (234039|2) - move to 4
04:13:654 too slow SV i guess
04:15:385 (255385|3) - move to 3
04:34:835 add note for cymbal
04:38:626 (278626|2) - move to col 1
04:43:077 (283077|1) - ^
04:43:242 (283242|0) - move to col 4
04:15:385 (255385|3,295769|2,295934|0) - swap collumn
04:59:725 (299725|2) - move to col 2
05:00:879 (300879|1) - move to col 4
05:04:341 (304341|2,304506|1) - swap collumn
05:27:582 add note here there a kick sound here

Lenfried's 7K Gourmet Chocolate

COMING SOON lol

Sry i got busy suddenly, i mod 7k diff tomorrow, so i do 4K mod for now~

Reyzra wrote:

Sry i got busy suddenly, i mod 7k diff tomorrow, so i do 4K mod for now~

Lenfried's 7K Gourmet Chocolate

Collumn |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
00:10:604 (10604|5) - move to 5 col 6 jack intentional
00:10:687 (10687|0) - move to 3 for balance
if ^ applied 00:10:934 (10934|4,11017|2) - CTRL + G this including ^, right hand stress works out well for transition
00:11:676 (11676|4,11758|5) - ^ ok
00:17:363 (17363|4,17445|3) - CTRL +G for balance moved something else for said reason
00:23:297 (23297|4) - move to 4 kk
00:26:593 - Delete 1 note? you use 3 note before, for consistency things initially thought this had some other sound. fixd
00:28:901 (28901|4) - move to 7 for a better space kk
00:31:539 (31539|5) - Delete, you use 2 note for kick not 3 right? same issue. fixd
00:36:978 (36978|4) - move to 3? [13] 1 is not really nice
00:41:099 (41099|5) - move to 4 balance stuff
00:55:275 - the stream part start from here actually i know that, i just dont want to ditch the current layer after only one whole measure
00:57:995 - missing note for stream
00:58:159 - ^
00:58:324 - ^
00:58:489 - ^ best to start at the "bar"
00:59:148 (59148|0,59231|1) - CTRL + G dont like the [13] 2
01:00:879 (60879|2,60962|6) - ^ looking good
01:06:154 - add 1 note, this kind of impact sound is need more note lol true
01:19:835 (79835|3,80000|2) - CTRL + G kk
01:34:753 - this is actually a kick sound, delete 1 note here, and that actually 3 was here 01:34:670
01:35:000 - this too a kick sound so delete 1 note, and 3 note should here 01:34:918 despite it only being a kick, using doubles is a good diff raise transition
01:35:783 (95783|6) - unsnap? or are you following scratch sound? scratch
01:37:143 - add note? nu
01:37:802 try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4610009 should work well
01:40:604 - delete 1 note, its just a kick ok :c
01:44:396 (104396|1,104725|1) - these move to col 1 and this 01:44:560 (104560|0) - move to 2 for balance kk
01:45:385 (105385|2) - delete
01:45:879 (105879|0) - ^ deleted in red line triples
01:47:692 (107692|6) - delete for consistency eh how was that a quad
01:55:934 (115934|2,116099|2) - this kinda odd isnt it? not really, its just a 313 trill that looks intimidating
01:56:593 - add 1 note for impact sound eh sure
02:02:198 - the stream part start here only want to chart the stream starting at the "bar"
02:06:813 - add note here? seems its not high enough for just 1 note justified by col 4 usage
02:12:747 - youve got 2 Finish HS here i generally have big issues with stacked HS, will delete all samples and copy from base diff
02:13:407 - ^
02:14:725 - ^
03:12:665 (192665|4,192747|5) - CTRL + G? nop
03:22:308 (202308|1) - move to 3 ok
03:27:582 - delete 1 note, you usually use 2 note (but somehow i think from like part should use 3 note in white line, since it carry the same sound to me) my bad
03:30:714 (210714|5,210714|2,210714|3,210797|1,210797|4,210797|0,210962|1,210962|6,210962|2,211044|5,211044|4,211044|3) - this is just same prob like i mention in here 01:34:753 refer to last blue comment
03:41:758 - try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4610142 sure
03:47:033 - add note (it seems the pattern consistency getting harder from this point 3 note for kick and 4 for snare) ditched consistency due to diff spike
03:48:352 - add note ^ kk
03:48:352 - ^
03:49:670 - ^ refer to last red comment
03:50:330 - ^
03:50:989 - ^ ok ^
04:02:280 - want to try like this pattern? just my suggestion tho https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4610206 amazing eyecandy
04:18:681 (258681|5) - move to col 4 no
04:39:780 (279780|5) - move to col 1 done + other stuff
04:54:945 (294945|1) - move to 7 kk
04:57:582 (297582|1) - ^ kk
04:59:890 (299890|2) - move to col 2 nop
05:02:198 (302198|0) - move to col 6 nop
05:15:714 (315714|0) - move to col 4? nop
05:27:582 (327582|3) - i think the LN should end here 05:32:857 just like in 4k diff fair enough

Level 51 wrote:

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7| but i think i only reference columns once
[7K Gourmet Chocolate]
00:01:374 (1374|2) - add a second note here? the sound at 00:03:022 (3022|2,3022|6) - sounds similar but has two notes, so hay consistency etc wot what was that a double ?_?
00:03:104 - add a note here? i think there's a vocal thing at this time
^ there are a few more instances of these, i'll just dump the ones i notice here but there may be more. probably up to your discretion so i don't want to crowd out the mod with them.

here

add a second note?
00:06:648 (6648|4) -
00:11:923 (11923|2) -

add a note?
00:08:050 -
00:08:626 -
00:09:203 -
00:13:654 -

yep the doubles were my mistake

00:10:604 (10604|5) - second note here to match with 00:10:934 (10934|4,10934|5) - ? i am now questioning my life choices
00:19:423 (19423|1) - this note doesn't sound like it should be a jack imo sounds the same as previous, im keeping this
00:37:390 (37390|4) - not sure there's a sound here weird sound, removed
00:40:275 (40275|5,40275|2) - remove one of these for consistency? unless there's some extra sound i can't hear yep, really questioning myself
00:43:407 (43407|0,43407|5) - notes here have the same sound as at (e.g.) 00:44:066 (44066|5) - or 00:45:385 (45385|6) - , why is it 2 notes as opposed to 1?
eh the echoed kick is more deserving for a double than the normal kick. Also sets that difference between two sounds.
01:04:011 (64011|5) - this sound appears to start at 01:03:846 - ill have to think about it considering the laning and the unwanted trill if this were to be done.
01:05:989 - add some LNs here? just a suggestion maybe nop
01:06:484 - why did you choose to focus on the beat as compared to the main melody? seems to make the map a tad monotonous over here following the melody could add more variety to this section, since you have a wider range of sounds (you could try layering them!) and even different rhythms (e.g. the 1/6 sounds over at 01:21:648 - could be taken advantage of) diff curving + setting a difference between this chorus and the other
01:34:176 (94176|3,94176|0,94341|1,94341|4) - consider making these notes 3-chords for greater emphasis. i like that
01:36:648 (96648|4) - i think this note starts and ends 1/8 later sounds correct
01:37:473 (97473|2,97473|1) - add a note here to emphasise the bass? not a very good spot to triple
01:38:132 (98132|1) - ^ previously done
01:48:352 - you could even incorporate jacks into this chord section here if you wanted to be mean LN usage after prevents me from doing it
01:55:934 (115934|2) - might wanna move this note somewhere so it doesn't create a reverse shield with the note after nu
02:12:047 (132047|4) - p sure this note doesn't exist but could just be me. referenced from 4k ver. Also kinda sure that it is there
03:30:385 (210385|0,210385|4) - add a note here? to emphasise the beat nah, no convincing lane to place another note
04:29:313 (269313|4,269478|4) - a pretty nasty reverse shield D: yes it is
04:32:363 (272363|2,272610|2) - ^ ;)
04:39:739 (279739|1) - i feel like if you put a note here there should be another one at 04:39:698 - for flow. perhaps put that on column 1?previously changed
04:46:703 - section again feels a tad monotonous but i'm not sure you can do much about it. ran out of creative juice here

good luck with getting rank~!

deadbill wrote:

hello o/

this is a M4M as requested
i will try to be brief and clear in modding your map.
and i will try to give the best shot.

okay here we go!

First thing first,

Design.

No problemo.
Nekopara <3

Metadata.

according to https://remywiki.com/Eclair_au_chocolat and http://vgmdb.net/album/51316

the bittersweet remix is from:

SOUND VOLTEX ULTIMATE TRACKS -LEGEND OF KAC- album

original title: éclair au chocolat (extended bittersweet mix)
original artist: kamome sano

no problem on source either.

I will mod the 7K diff

Offset.

No problem

Hitsound.

The hitsound is great! btw you should turn up the volume, please

Pattern.

00:07:143 - did you miss the 3 notes? .-. ye :c added
00:21:319 - 00:21:648 - i suggest to make it jacks on the left hand and single notes at the right hand (braketing), since the kick is strong on this one :p

just a pattern suggestion
location 00:21:319 - 00:21:648 -
i like the current finger motion more gonna pass thisone

00:21:648 - also if you want, you can add a note since there is a crash cymbal here added

i understand that you are using synth as reference. therefore, for consistency, i suggest you to add LN for each sustained note of synth

add LN, from; to
00:23:462 - 00:23:626 -
00:24:780 - 00:24:945 -
00:27:418 - 00:27:582 -
00:28:736 - 00:28:901 -
00:30:055 - 00:30:220 -

intentionally dropped that certain synth because the section will be overly difficult considering that it is just the early part of the song

and also... i think quarter notes are not necessary... since rhythm synth on the song are filling half notes that my chosen layering :c

please consider to remove these notes..
00:22:225 (22225|2) -
00:23:544 (23544|2) -
00:24:863 (24863|2) -
00:26:181 (26181|5) -
00:27:500 (27500|5) -
00:28:819 (28819|1) -
00:30:137 (30137|3) -
00:31:456 (31456|1) -
00:32:775 (32775|4) -
00:34:093 (34093|1) -
00:35:412 (35412|1) -
00:36:731 (36731|4) -
00:38:050 (38050|2) -
00:39:368 (39368|1) -

omg the SV is beautiful <3 00:37:473 - ;)

at this part.. 01:06:484 - I suggest you to refer to main melodic synth instead of backing/rhythmic synth.
And also for consistency, i suggest you to add LN refering to sustained note of synth done this for the reason that this is a rather long map and that variety is of the essence

please extend the jacks from
01:13:736 - to 01:14:231 - did sth else

omg scratch part 01:35:495 - is that a good thing?

for consistency.. 01:52:637 - why not using LN for scratch ? will consider

yeah this is what im talking about! 02:07:143 - well added LNs! (beat wise)

next part, sustained notes detected you should save yourself the effort of listing all these :c I regard these sounds as too weak to have LNs
please add LN, from; to
02:49:835 - 02:50:165 -
02:50:495 - 02:50:824 -
02:51:154 - 02:51:484 -
02:51:978 - 02:52:308 -
02:52:637 - 02:52:967 -
02:53:626 - 02:53:956 -
02:53:956 - 02:54:203 -
02:54:286 - 02:54:615 -
02:54:615 - 02:54:863 -
02:54:945 - 02:55:275 -
02:55:769 - 02:56:099 -
02:56:429 - 02:56:758 -
03:00:385 - 03:00:714 -
03:01:044 - 03:01:374 -
03:01:703 - 03:02:033 -
03:02:528 - 03:02:857 -
03:03:187 - 03:03:517 -
03:04:176 - 03:04:506 -
03:04:506 - 03:04:753 -
03:04:835 - 03:05:165 -
03:05:165 - 03:05:412 -
03:05:495 - 03:05:824 -
03:06:319 - 03:06:648 -

umm.. refering to what? .-. ?? additional follow-up synth sounds(?) dunno what to call them
03:10:934 (190934|2,190934|1) -
03:13:571 (193571|5,193571|6) -
03:16:209 (196209|4,196209|5) -
03:18:846 (198846|6,198846|0) -
03:21:484 (201484|0,201484|3) -
03:24:121 (204121|6,204121|3) -
03:26:758 (206758|6,206758|1) -
03:29:396 (209396|2,209396|0) -

beat wise this part 03:35:659 - is great.. but pitch wise is a no no ... i suggest you to revise, pitch wisely. that example nerfed my layering :c did something else but has a very similar stream usage
location 03:35:495 - 03:36:154 -


04:46:703 - i kinda against these mini LNs due to consistency.. since from the beginning of the song, this kind of note do not added as mini LNs. However, it is your choice sure is ahaha

thats all~ thank you for your attention. and goodluck

Paradoxq13 wrote:

Here's my part of our M4M~.

[General]

- SV's are mostly fine. I commented below which ones need fixing. (FIX!)

- Timing seems fine to me (OK!)

- Metadata is probably fine lmao (OK!)

1 | 2 | 3 | 4

[7K Gourmet Chocolate]

Mmmmm... Chocolate... Also I have absolutely zero clue how to mod 7k, so I tried my best just to find a couple things to help ^^

1. 00:45:385 (45385|6,45879|0) - It would be nice to see notes like these be in the same column. Just to emphasise the repetition of that sound. This applies to the rest of this little section as well. While you haven't explicitly mapped that sound like the 4k diff did, it's still nice to bring attention to it when it's so prominent.would have done that if this section didnt repeat as long as it currently does
2. 01:19:258 - It feels like there should be a note here somewhere. the lead synth is the only sound there, and it is not included in my layers for that section so no
3. 02:12:047 (132047|4) - You picked up on this gliding note half the time, otherwise you don't map it. I'd try to pick one of the other: to map them or not to map them. not sure what you meant by a gliding note but all the notes ignoring the LN follows a triple - double alternation for every beat. Might have been covered unintentionally or idk.
4. 02:28:407 - I LOVE your pitch relevancy in this section <3 had some help from another modder to pull this off ;w;
5. 04:52:143 (292143|0,292143|1) - Lol this feels weird to play with all the spread notes around it. Maybe spread this one out too.done!

Overall, some really nice mapping. I wish you two the best of luck for getting this ranked!

Paradoxq13 wrote:

Here's my part of our M4M~.

[General]

- SV's are mostly fine. I commented below which ones need fixing. (FIX!)

- Timing seems fine to me (OK!)

- Metadata is probably fine lmao (OK!)

1 | 2 | 3 | 4

[4K Pretzel Bread]

1. 00:15:385 (15385|0,15385|1,16044|1,16044|0) - I think in this intro section it would be really nice to avoid the doubles repeating like this. It keeps the nice movement that you've established.
2. 00:19:341 (19341|1,19341|2,20000|2,20000|1) - ^
3. 00:50:989 (50989|1) - remove this to keep it consistent with the patterns before it (they don't use a double)
4. 00:55:275 - It feels *really* weird to start the streams here. It's hard for me to comment on though, because the song definitely suggests that the streams start here. Maybe let the cymbal-based patterns have some time to breathe before starting the stream, if that makes any sense. I started to get into the rhythm of the cymbals and then suddenly streeeeeeeeeeeeams. Maybe start them at 00:58:571? Completely up to you as my reasoning is a tad subjective Im also had a same feeling in here, when cymbal just starting but immediately came a stream
5. 01:00:879 - 01:02:528 - It's really strange that you fell into this pattern for that amount of time lol. Maybe you should vary the patterning a little bit more for this bit. Repetitive patterns in jumpstreams is something I'd expect to be at the end (or the entirety) of a jumpstream or something.
6. 01:11:758 (71758|3,71758|2,72088|3,72088|2,72418|2,72418|3,72747|3,72747|2) - The repetition of [34] is somewhat strange here. Try to vary the double note placement.
   -
7. 01:24:451 (84451|0) - to column |3|
8. 01:25:110 (85110|1,85604|0) - Not quite sure what these are mapped to?
9. 01:33:517 (93517|1) - Possibly delete for consistency. nein
10. 01:41:593 (101593|0,101635|1,101676|3,101717|2,101758|0,101758|1) - Ctrl + H
11. 01:43:407 (103407|2,103407|3,103571|0,103571|1) - I'd probably make these two have identical column placement to really emphasize the repetition in the song.
12. 01:43:901 (103901|0,104066|0) - I wouldn't have these in the same column though.
13. 01:47:528 - 01:48:269 - I recommend this pattern instead. http://prntscr.com/abga8v Or something else that uses the same RLRLRLRL feel.
14. 01:48:681 (108681|0) - Having a chord at the end of this feels so weird. Maybe not have this here.
15. 01:53:379 - 01:53:874 - Try this? http://prntscr.com/abgaw0 ok
    -
16. 02:03:187 (123187|0,123352|0,123517|0,123681|0,123846|0) - Maybe try to avoid anchors here lol
17. 02:06:813 - To make the SV a little more user friendly (because it's really weird when the LN looks the same size as the ones after it and then BAM! sv in your face.) I recommend having a double LN. Just one in column |3| the same length as the one in |4| (removing the note at the end of course.). It just creates a subtle hint that there's an SV. Or maybe you could just change the speed of the SV so it's not so invisible. Up to you. use Len SV
18. 02:26:264 (146264|0,146264|1,146429|0) - This feels really awkward to have right here. Perhaps swap the column placement for these two? 02:26:429 (146429|0,146593|2) -
    -
19. 03:23:297 (203297|0,203297|2,203626|2,203626|0,203956|2,203956|0,204286|0,204286|2) - Maybe try to avoid this repetition. fixed
20. 03:44:396 (224396|0) - I don't think you need this. nein
    03:50:495 (230495|3,230577|2,230659|0,230659|1,230742|2,230824|3,230907|2,230989|1,230989|3,230989|0) - This pattern is an odd choice for this stream. I somewhat recommend changing it slightly?
    -
21. 04:00:220 - The SV here rushes into the LN + Stream way too fast. Tune it a bit more to make the entry as smooth as possible.
22. 04:30:385 (270385|1) - column |3|?
23. 04:37:967 (277967|2) - column |1| for consistency with the rest of the map I think. So far you've only repeated the LN, not the note with it.
24. 05:23:626 - Literally none of the notes in this stream are actually in time with the beeps lmao. But for playability's sake, you should be fine

This diff is wonderful to play! The LN's feel natural and flowy, and your streams are comfortable and a joy to play

Overall, some really nice mapping. I wish you two the best of luck for getting this ranked!

Lenfried- wrote:

Paradoxq13 wrote:

Here's my part of our M4M~.

[General]

- SV's are mostly fine. I commented below which ones need fixing. (FIX!)

- Timing seems fine to me (OK!)

- Metadata is probably fine lmao (OK!)

1 | 2 | 3 | 4

[7K Gourmet Chocolate]

Mmmmm... Chocolate... Also I have absolutely zero clue how to mod 7k, so I tried my best just to find a couple things to help ^^

1. 00:45:385 (45385|6,45879|0) - It would be nice to see notes like these be in the same column. Just to emphasise the repetition of that sound. This applies to the rest of this little section as well. While you haven't explicitly mapped that sound like the 4k diff did, it's still nice to bring attention to it when it's so prominent.would have done that if this section didnt repeat as long as it currently does
2. 01:19:258 - It feels like there should be a note here somewhere. the lead synth is the only sound there, and it is not included in my layers for that section so no
3. 02:12:047 (132047|4) - You picked up on this gliding note half the time, otherwise you don't map it. I'd try to pick one of the other: to map them or not to map them. not sure what you meant by a gliding note but all the notes ignoring the LN follows a triple - double alternation for every beat. Might have been covered unintentionally or idk.
4. 02:28:407 - I LOVE your pitch relevancy in this section <3 had some help from another modder to pull this off ;w;
5. 04:52:143 (292143|0,292143|1) - Lol this feels weird to play with all the spread notes around it. Maybe spread this one out too.done!

Overall, some really nice mapping. I wish you two the best of luck for getting this ranked!

@ID9, im too lazy to paste in pastebin and repaste the unicode stuff so if possible just apply it for me <3. Effort is rather unnecessary for such a quick fix.
ok Len XD
04:52:143 (292143|0) - goes to 5
04:52:308 (292308|4) - goes to 3

Thanks Redball for the kudo

Tohkazumi wrote:

M4M :>

4K

It is based on the pitch of the notes from the keyboard/piano
it feels better(I mean ung tono ng keys XD)

(01:56:758-02:01:703)
01:56:923 (116923|0) - move to col 4
01:57:088 (117088|2) - move to col 1
01:57:418 (117418|0) - move to col 3
01:57:582 (117582|3) - move to col 1
01:57:912 (117912|1) - move to col 4
01:58:242 (118242|3) - move to col 3
01:58:407 (118407|2) - move to col 2
01:58:571 (118571|1) - move to col 3
01:59:396 (119396|2) - move to col 4
01:59:560 (119560|3) - move to col 2
01:59:725 (119725|1) - move to col 3
01:59:890 (119890|2) - move to col 4
02:00:055 (120055|0) - move to col 2
02:00:220 (120220|1) - move to col 3
02:00:385 (120385|2) - move to col 1
02:00:550 (120550|3) - move to col 3
02:01:209 (121209|3) - move to col 2
02:01:539 (121539|1) - move to col 4


(02:55:440-03:03:517)
02:55:604 (175604|2) - move to col 4
02:55:769 (175769|3) - move to col 3
02:56:099 (176099|2) - move to col 1
02:56:429 (176429|0) - move to col 3
02:56:923 (176923|2) - move to col 1
02:57:088 (177088|3) - move to col 3
02:57:253 (177253|3) - move to col 4
02:57:418 (177418|1) - move to col 3
02:57:582 (177582|0) - move to col 2
02:57:747 (177747|1) - move to col 3
02:57:912 (177912|3) - move to col 1
02:58:077 (178077|2) - move to col 2
02:58:242 (178242|1) - move to col 4
02:58:407 (178407|3) - move to col 1
02:58:571 (178571|1) - move to col 3
02:58:736 (178736|0) - move to col 2
02:59:231 (179231|1) - move to col 1
02:59:396 (179396|0) - move to col 2
02:59:560 (179560|1) - move to col 3
02:59:725 (179725|2) - move to col 2
03:00:220 (180220|1) - move to col 3
03:00:385 (180385|3) - move to col 2
03:01:539 (181539|2) - move to col 4
03:01:703 (181703|3) - move to col 3
03:02:033 (182033|1) - move to col 1
03:02:198 (182198|0) - move to col 3
03:02:363 (182363|1) - move to col 4
03:02:528 (182528|2) - move to col 2

(03:04:176-03:07:802)
03:04:176 (184176|3) - move to col 1
03:04:506 (184506|1) - move to col 4 and end the ln here 03:04:753
03:04:753 - add note to col 2 at this section, add note to 3
03:04:794 - add note to col 3 using beat snap divisor 1/8 add to 2
03:04:835 (184835|0) - move to col 2 to 1
03:06:978 (186978|3) - move to col 1
03:07:143 (187143|0) - move to col 3
03:07:198 (187198|1) - move to col 4
03:07:308 (187308|3) - move to col 2
03:07:473 (187473|2) - move to col 1

Thats all~ Sry I could only do 4K :<
Im not that good yet on modding but hoped diz helped
good luck!~

Kaito-kun wrote:

Just passing by:

[General]
Source shouldn't be "SOUND VOLTEX ULTIMATE TRACKS -LEGEND OF KAC-". That's the album's name, and album name is never as source. So remove the current source and add it to tags.

- ID9 - wrote:

Kaito-kun wrote:

Just passing by:

[General]
Source shouldn't be "SOUND VOLTEX ULTIMATE TRACKS -LEGEND OF KAC-". That's the album's name, and album name is never as source. So remove the current source and add it to tags.

How about now?

Kaito-kun wrote:

Can't be "SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH" either. Since this is both a remix and an extended version of the original song. My bet would be to leave Source empty, since only actual source for that specific song is only on the album, and album should be on tags, not source :p

Minseo2000 wrote:

From the RRM Mania Modding Queue

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7K as requested~

7K Gourmet Chocolate

00:12:582 - A bit hard to read imo. Maybe you can use a pattern like this? did something else
00:41:429 - Slow scroll speed + LN = hell not complex so ill keep it, also suits the current situation
01:04:341 (64341|5) - The LN ends at a somewhat unexpected time. may seem "off" but it perfectly follows the layer
01:35:495 - 01:35:495 (95495|3,95632|4,95632|2) - These three LNs ends at 01:35:824 but 01:35:783 (95783|6) This LN starts at 01:35:783 OH MY GOD NO, I can't place the LN end on the proper time because of 1/12 and 1/8th conflict the QAT should determine how to fix this issue
02:12:047 (132047|4) - Ghost note? nope

Can't mod anymore
The map is pretty good already.
Quite hard for a 5* imo
Good luck on ranking

CloudHolic wrote:

Hi from ArtaHolic's modding queue!
Here are my suggestions. You can reject all of them.

0|1|2|3|4|5|6

Lenfried's 7K Gourmet Chocolate

1. 01:35:495 (95495|3,95632|2,95632|4) - These LNs end with 01:35:783. found out a way how to do this
2. 02:12:006 - Add a note. Sounds in 02:12:047 (132047|4,132088|3) starts with here.done!
3. 03:26:181 - I think there should be another note, but it doesn't looks good... space usage justifies lack of second note
4. 04:24:286 (264286|6) - This LN ends with 04:26:841. have to give way to the bracket
5. 04:39:698 - Same with 02:12:006. done!
6. 04:46:703 ~ 05:27:582 - This part is too long with same pattern. And these short LNs are too hard. can't really think of an alternative pattern scheme for this section

Yeah, that's all.
I can't mod it anymore; it's really good.