Sunny Holic wrote:

better quality 视频 http://puu.sh/esr
反正大小差不多，用就用好点的吧

[Hard]
more like insane

all fine to me

Lovely Crab wrote:

前几天比较忙来晚了不好意思
[General]
转盘的时候和指针重合了,相当不好辨认,建议把指针的颜色变一下.
TAG呢?不知道的话http://osu.ppy.sh/s/20780抄下就好

[Eazy]
没什么问题.

[Normal]
00:06:426(2) - 这个slide换成3个1/2的NOTE或者来回的slide 太短了=w=
00:32:513 - 00:45:339 - 这段节奏有点问题,有点强迫跟着人声下NOTE的感觉.而00:52:295这段开始节奏就很不错.按照后面的来修改下吧. remapped
01:08:382(1) - 缩短半拍到01:08:817,同时绿线提前 感觉节奏有点松=w=
01:10:121(1) - 缩短半拍到01:10:556,同时绿线提前 ^
01:21:208(4) - 移到01:21:426 ^

[Phantasm]
00:14:035(6,7) - 个人感觉是很多余的跳. remapped
00:59:687(1,2,3) - 把2拉到下面去,然后把1和3拉到和00:57:947(1,2,3)里1,3相同的位置. little change in this part but not as what you said
01:12:947(x) - add a note? 后面有连打，这里节奏就松一点吧=w=
01:15:556(1) - 去掉这个NOTE,然后new combo转到下一NOTE上 这个停顿有点奇怪……
01:20:774 - 这里为什么要消音? 后面有停顿这里调整一下节奏
01:30:556(3,4,1) - 最后转到中间吧..可以这么排

SPOILER

fixed


my star~

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:

Hi Hi There
Sorry For My Late Mod ~.~

Btw, Here Is My Mod

Easy

00:18:165 (1) - Remove The Clap Or Finish ?
00:45:774 (1) - Add Finish ?
00:47:078 (3) - Add Whistle ?
00:48:399 (4) - ^ ?
00:48:817 (5) - ^ ?
00:49:252 (1) - Remove Whistle ?
00:49:687 (2) - Remove Clap & Add Whistle ?
01:00:133 (1) - Add Whistle ?
01:14:904 (3) - Extend The Reverse By 1 ? fixed
Other Is Fine

Normal

00:11:426 (7) - Add Whistle ?
Other Is Fine

Hard

00:09:687 (4) - Add Whistle ?
00:09:904 (1) - Remove Finish ?
00:10:121 (2) - Add Whistle ?
00:11:426 (4) - Add Whistle ?
Other Is Fine

Okay, That's All, Maybe Some Part Doesn't Need A " Sound Change " IMO.
But, Nice Map Nice HitSound
Good ~

kanpakyin wrote:

Queue輪到幫你mod-v- (順面支持下沙包豬)
----------------------------------------------
藍色=意見而已
紅色=我覺得你需要修改這項

Easy
01:10:121(2)不建議和1重疊 fixed
01:12:730(1)在尾部加個clap? fixed
01:12:726(3)^ some adjust with hitsound here
01:24:034(3)不建議和(2)重疊 fixed

Normal
01:09:469(1)向左移一格 fixed
在這個難度slider沒EASY排得漂亮0.0稍微可以修改一下 一直觉得很难排=w=先这样吧

Phantasm
00:29:469(4)和(1)對稱? 这样距离就有点纠结了- - 而且间隔比较长，没啥必要=w=
01:15:556(1.2.3)這個調比較噁心.可能是連打後跳-_-||建議把條的距離弄小 已降低难度……

沒什麼大的問題..就這樣
(如果你不是Pending的話我還真想幫你做個Taiko>.>) 都MOD这么久了，以后有机会吧>.>
kud star~

xierbaliti wrote:

-General-
似乎你有用无声tick unrankable 因为你没拿来做音效 已种草……

-Phantasm-
00:55:339 (6) - 右移2格
00:55:991 (7) - 右移3格
改变了一下整体位置总之和中轴对称了>_>

Sakura Hana wrote:

No tags? added
Your hitbursts are very similar among their same type (like hit100 and hit100k, hit300 and hit 300k) also hit300k and hit300g are identical. it's a skin from ztrot and I didn't change anything of it
Please dont use muted sliderslide, and i dont know why you would silence sliderwhistle when you can just not use hitsounds on slider bodies. sliderwhistle.wav removed. But sliders would be too loud without muted sliderslide, is it unrankable?
Why does the sliderball change colors while rotating? i think it's pretty cool, but i'm not sure if it's alright. it's also a element of this skin and I think it matches this song very good xD
Considering you have some 1.5 beat sliders i recommend you use Slider Tick rate 2 on all difficulties.it seems there would be many ticks...so I'd rather not make any change here
Why are there 10 seconds of silence at the end of the mp3? fixed and reuploaded

[Timing]
I'm leaning to think that the red lines of the song are true BPM changes, i'd recommend you halve the BPM of the first red line for all diffs and turn all 0.5x sections into 1.0x sections this way you avoid some awkward ticks on sliders going invisible on [Easy]
followed this in Easy and Normal

[Phantasm]
Remove unnecessary audio lead-in. fixed
00:21:208 (4,5) - This is an ugly overlap, i recommend you rotate this slider or something. fixed
01:03:165 (4) - You should try rotating this a bit so it isn't overlapped by (3) fixed and remapped here

[Normal]
Remove unnecessary audio lead-in fixed
00:06:426 (2,3) - I suggest you delete (3) and extend (2) until the place (3) was at. fixed
00:08:817 (4) - Do the contrary here, shorten (4) by 1/2 and add a note at the place (4) used to end. fixed

[Easy]
Remove unnecessary audio lead-in fixed
If you don't follow the suggestion in [Timing] then make all the slider speeds be the same.

Fix and i'll bubble

Tags: te kamasetora iceon fantasy kaleidoscope ~the memories of phantasm~ mountain of faith iro wa nioedo chirinuru o the gensokyo gods loved nitori kawashiro pokedigi

Tags: Manpuku Jinja Reitaisai SP ZUN Yuuhei Satellite Kamasetora Iceon Fantasy Kaleidoscope ~The Memories of Phantasm~ Mountain of Faith Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o The Gensokyo Gods Loved Nitori Kawashiro pokedigi

Pokie wrote:

來源:満福神社(例大祭SPにて頒布)
曲名:色は匂へど 散りぬるを(幽閉サテライト)
原曲:神々が恋した幻想郷



Artist應該是幽閉サテライト (這首同人曲的arr所屬的同人社團)
而Title則是色は匂へど 散りぬるを

満福神社和萬華鏡應該被丟入tags才對...

no kds

Pokie wrote:

Tags: te kamasetora iceon fantasy kaleidoscope ~the memories of phantasm~ mountain of faith iro wa nioedo chirinuru o the gensokyo gods loved nitori kawashiro pokedigi

紅字注意

Tags: Manpuku Jinja Reitaisai SP ZUN Yuuhei Satellite Kamasetora Iceon Fantasy Kaleidoscope ~The Memories of Phantasm~ Mountain of Faith Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o The Gensokyo Gods Loved Nitori Kawashiro pokedigi

這一團Mafia那張的完整tags

Pokie wrote:

來源:満福神社(例大祭SPにて頒布)
曲名:色は匂へど 散りぬるを(幽閉サテライト)
原曲:神々が恋した幻想郷



Artist應該是幽閉サテライト (這首同人曲的arr所屬的同人社團)
而Title則是色は匂へど 散りぬるを

満福神社和萬華鏡應該被丟入tags才對...

no kds

不解釋

多谢提醒 我尽快解决这个问题

Pokie wrote:

Tags: te kamasetora iceon fantasy kaleidoscope ~the memories of phantasm~ mountain of faith iro wa nioedo chirinuru o the gensokyo gods loved nitori kawashiro pokedigi

紅字注意

Tags: Manpuku Jinja Reitaisai SP ZUN Yuuhei Satellite Kamasetora Iceon Fantasy Kaleidoscope ~The Memories of Phantasm~ Mountain of Faith Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o The Gensokyo Gods Loved Nitori Kawashiro pokedigi

這一團Mafia那張的完整tags

Pokie wrote:

來源:満福神社(例大祭SPにて頒布)
曲名:色は匂へど 散りぬるを(幽閉サテライト)
原曲:神々が恋した幻想郷



Artist應該是幽閉サテライト (這首同人曲的arr所屬的同人社團)
而Title則是色は匂へど 散りぬるを

満福神社和萬華鏡應該被丟入tags才對...

no kds

不解釋

Verdisphena wrote:

wtf
image

Sakura Hana wrote:

Verdisphena wrote:

wtf
image

wtf indeed, did you even read my post =/

Sakura Hana wrote:

Verdisphena wrote:

wtf
image

wtf indeed, did you even read my post =/

Verdisphena wrote:

Okay ~

Mafiamaster wrote:

You shouldn't have two BPMs for this song. (69 and 138 BPMS).
Just make the first timing section at 138.00 and halve the BPM with a inherited timing section using 0.5x until you get to the other uninherited timing section. Then just use 1x inherited timing sections for the rest of the song.

fixed and changed tick rate back to 1

I'm hitting late. At least 10ms should be added. You should get another timer just to make sure.

10ms added >< hears accurate now

Delete default-comma, dot, percent, and x. They are not needed in the folder. fixed

[Easy]
00:52:730 (3) to 00:58:817 (3) - Why is the volume so low. Turn it up! fixed

[Normal]
00:52:730 (3) to 00:58:817 (3) - Same thing as [Easy]. fixed

[Phantasm]
00:52:730 (3) to 00:58:817 (3) - Same thing as [Easy] & [Normal]. fixed
01:27:730 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Sorry, but this doesn't go with the music at all. Probably should add a spinner like the other difficulties. changed into a spinner

Alace wrote:

offset should +7ms (move all green lines and resnap all notes too )

Xgor wrote:

Random bubble check~

Nice map with a nice video.
01:07:747 (1,1,1,1) and 01:09:486 (1,1,1,1) - is spaced weird weird but I think they works well with the tempo of the song.
I liked the use of 0,5x and nice hitsounds.
Bit too low stacking latency on [Normal] but it doesn't hurt that much and it would be silly popping a bubble just for that.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

You are missing the skin element called "spinner-approachcircle.png". Add it and make sure to do a full submission.

That's all, fix and I'll rank this.