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Its cool to hit those sliders, but man is it off-putting when you have to play an 8-note (9 with slider) while the song is still in its chill phase :/
you should get some more professional modders on this
this dog tho wtf it that thing...
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- 00:01:629 (1,2,3,4) - this doesn rly follow anything. The guitar isnt going with the vocals here. 00:02:072 - guitar note 00:01:951 (3,4) - arent rly on anything. If you did this intentionally i would recommend you lower the spacing (scale it down) since its confusing to play (confused me 5 timesi tried till i decided to look wtf was going on) smth that isnt in the music.
00:03:562 (1) - having a slider this cramped in itself makes it look edgy (no pun intended). You could "unfold" it a bit more
00:03:562 (1,1) - space this out a bit more so there is some space between them. Looks betetr imo. i mean you have this space between all the other sliders aswell 00:04:529 (2,3) - rly wierd since they play on nothing...
What are the green lines following? Vocal range? Actual notes sung? Intensity of said vocals? I wont tell you to not do this but it plays wierd when you 0.8 on this 00:05:818 - and this 00:06:463 (1) - when they feel so much different.
00:07:752 (1,1,1,1) - why gradually reduce the speed but increase the spacing between them? Are you trying to enhance the song by slowing things down or making it harder by having sharper drops from 3/4 to 3/4 sliders?
00:10:330 - you should add some of those sv changes around here aswell.
00:12:264 (2,3) - wierd again (at this point i wouls suggest you atleast use some propper hitsounds so they dont feel so out of place :/ )
00:14:842 (2,3) - ^
00:15:486 (1) - did you intend the wistle on the slider body? This whistle sound while dragging the slider is annoying
00:21:287 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ok now whis rly takes the cake... You cant just start adding rythms they dont exist just because you want there to be this rythm. Not following the music is worse than overmapping imo, but adding an 8 note stream is quite a strech. Its like you want to run into trouble..
00:26:754 (5,6,1) - it would be better not to have these three one one circular 3 note pattern since 00:27:088 (1) - changes the timing by quite a bit dont you think? I would suggest you change this 00:26:431 (4) - to 2 notes and 00:26:754 (5,6) - to a 1/2 slider 00:29:988 (3) - move this to 324|296 so the pattern has more space and looks better overall
00:39:260 (3) - this is overmapped but it doesnt hurt that much since its barely noticeable
00:43:127 (4) - do this like you did those 01:00:634 (1,2,3) -
00:50:620 (2) - you think you can put this infornt of the slider. It looks kinda meh
00:58:056 (1,2,3) - change 1 and 2 for a slider since the intensity drops almost instantly after 00:57:895 (5) - . It played very wierd...
01:01:762 (6) - cant you do smth more visualy apealing ? Like... atleast the other sliders looked kinda ok and cool
01:03:212 (1,2) - Can you atleast put a 1/2 slider so 01:03:714 - can be made clickable. You did this rythm other times aswell but this time it even felt off-putting in all my plays.
01:04:197 (1,2,3,4) - less off-putting since you get used to it... but if ou change the above than change this aswell.
01:13:865 - its kinda wierd to ignore the strong guitar for the overmapped stream + kickslider
01:21:277 - This should be clickable. A new verse starts here. 01:21:116 (6) - this doesnt look or play good (prolly the akward flow) so you can replace it by a circle and then add a sldier for the verse.
01:27:400 (2,1) - move either of the two away so that 01:27:722 (1) - gets more emphasis.
01:27:722 (1) - you could aslo reduce the sv back to 1 here so the transition happens more smoothly (creating stress through emphasis is more dinamic than relative speed slider speed changes. (or just reduce the sv to 1.0x)
01:31:912 (2,3,4) - this is rly hard to hit considering its the only patern spaced like this in the whole map
01:34:973 (8) - it woul fit better if these two kicks were with the others together 01:35:134 (1,2,3,4,1) - .
01:35:457 - Since the song is cut you wont be able to map the next section in the song... so why start it. It feels wierd to end in the middle of a new section.
01:36:934 - this kinda off, the fuck timing?
Its cool to hit those sliders, but man is it off-putting when you have to play an 8-note (9 with slider) while the song is still in its chill phase :/
you should get some more professional modders on this
this dog tho wtf it that thing...