Modding at KRZY's request! Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit.
[osz File Scan!]
Try to remove the audio from the video to reduce filesize.
mp3 bitrate is 320 kbps, reduce to 256 kbps or lower.
[General]
Use 2 seconds audio lead-in on all your diffs
Disable countdown on all diffs as it doesn't even fit.
[Timing]
Offset -18 ms Make sure you do this:
http://puu.sh/exC after fixing the unsnapped timing sections or else you'll get unsnapped timing sections again.
00:53:297 - Kiai must start here on the long white tick.
[Dk's Color]00:01:020 (1) - Pointless note... remove or map through 00:02:208 this break and 00:06:663 this section.
00:20:029 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start of the slider.
00:43:792 (1) - ^
00:48:544 (1) - Add hitsound finish.
00:50:623 (1,2) - ^
00:53:198 - Unsnapped timing section (Ignore if you fix kiai as i mentioned on [Timing])
00:56:762 (6) - Add hitsound finish at the start of the slider.
01:02:703 (1) - ^
01:12:604 (1) - Silence this spinner so the "vroooooom" that sounds when spinning is unhearable, then add a timing section at the end with the volume back and a finish hitsound.
01:22:109 (1) - ^
[KRZY's Color]00:01:020 ~ 00:07:851 - Reduce hitsound volume but not enough to silence it on this section.
00:08:148 (1,2) - Make a mirror of each other. Also could try a better arc if possible.
00:19:435 (5,6,7) - Make a Decrescendo instead of the sudden silence at (7) and possibly use whistle hitsounds on each as well. Also i think it would fit better if you rearrange them and the previous slider so that they go down instead of up, since the pitch goes lower on the instrument in this point.
00:31:218 (6) - Use a finish hitsound instead of a whistle?
00:31:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Change the finishes for whistles, then add finish on (4) and (7) and a whistle on (1).
00:55:574 (6) - Pac-Man slider, try to make a smooth curve instead?
01:00:425 (1,2) - Make a mirror of each other. Also could try a better arc if possible. (lolz copy/paste)
01:06:267 (10) - Add hitsound finish.
01:14:683 (1,2) - I guess you know what im going to say about theese. Refer to 00:08:148 (1,2)
01:17:059 (1) - Lower the volume of this spinner, so that you dont hear the "vrooooom" from it.
01:19:435 (1,2) - Same as 00:08:148 (1,2)
01:21:812 (1) - Same as 01:17:059 (1) (inb4 copy pasted and flipped horizontally orz)
[Bima's Color]Your wave sliders like 00:18:247 (4) Can look a lot better if the waypoints fly off the slider like for example:
00:50:623 (1,2,3) - This rythm feels awkward, idk what the combo is following the lyrics or the instruments X_X or maybe just (2) feels weird.
01:03:396 (6) - Barely visible note and appraoch circle. Unrankable.
[Easy]Due to the softness of the song i recommend you silence all spinners spins with timing sections, then add another timing section right at the end so the hitsound can still be heard.
Considering you have guest diffs with InsertName's color, why not name this one My Color or something
00:01:020 ~ 00:07:752 - Reduce hitsound volume in this section.
00:34:287 (1,2) - Spacing too close! it looks even like an anti-jump, i suggest you stay away from changing spacing distance on the easiest diff, specially sudden changes like this.
00:50:623 (1,2) - Stack?
00:58:049 (1,2,3,4) - Align properly (that is align (1) below (3) while keeping (2) below (4) or something of the like)
[Overall]
I would prefer if you had less guest diffs and more own diffs
