Huuge thanks for the mod. I'll do a standard sumbition for now, but I'll do a full one, to add hitcircle overlay and approach circle, in a few hours.James2250 wrote:
You need a hitcircle overlay and approach circle in folder (from the template skin should be fine)
Have all the spinners at the end, end at the same place (on your difficulties) if possible
Easy:
OD/HP/AR + 1
00:43:207 (1) - you might want to make this 1 long slider with no repeats just to be nicer on beginners
00:46:134 (1) - ^
00:48:329 (3) - ^
00:57:842 (3) - move down to make the line straight
01:24:185 (3) - this sounds really off, I'm not sure if it is the timing as the note before it sounds fine, but move 1/6 later for now (and shorten by 1/6)
Normal:
looks good
Hard:
OD -1/ -2
map looks fine, I don't think the spacing for the kiai time is too bad
Dk's Insane:
OD -1 in my opinion, too slow song for that high
looks good
*star*
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YAY FAILMOD INCOMING!
i'm going to write this post in polish (except dk's diff), so don't complain :3
[Easy]
0:10:279 (1) - wyrzuć nowe combo
0:17:596 (4) - wzorując się na jednym z poprzednich sliderów, ułóż tego w wąską literkę U, powinno o wiele lepiej wyglądać
0:21:987 (1) - wyrzuć nowe combo
0:35:158 (1) - wyrzuć
0:54:915 (x) - przenieś tą Timing Section o 1/1 dalej, tj. 0:55:647. to powtarza się w każdym diffie
rozpiska, jak wg. mnie powinny być ułożone comba, oczywiście zgadzać się ze mną nie musisz w tej kwestii (tak samo jak i w innych :p) (w danym momencie nowe combo):
(jak Kuba Bogu, tak Bóg Kubie ;) )
[Normal]
0:11:377 - 0:12:291 (1, 2) - przesuń o jedną kratkę w lewo
0:30:768 - 0:31:499 (2, 3) - dwójkę ustawiłbym gdzieś nad jedynką i nieco w prawo, zaś trójkę na poprzednim miejscu dwójki
0:32:231 (1) - jedna kratka w lewo
0:43:407 (3) - jako, że nie jestem fanem randomowych stacków, to radziłbym Ci ustawić to gdzieś na dole, pomiędzy poprzednim kółkiem a sliderem
0:54:915 (x) - tak jak w reszcie diffów; przenieś tą Timing Section o 1/1 dalej, tj. 0:55:647
1:17:547 (3) - drugiego sliderpointa (tego najbardziej po lewej) szarpnąłbym o cztery kratki w dół
no i spoilerbox:
[Hard]
0:36:987 (4) - niezbyt ciekawie ułożone, może pomiędzy 3 a 5, przenosząc nieco w prawo?
0:54:915 (x) - przenieś tą Timing Section o 1/1 dalej, tj. 0:55:647
1:24:185 (4) - randomowy slider, meh. postawiłbym zamiast niego zwykłą nutkę podczas 1:24:368, w miejscu, gdzie się kończy
[Dk's Insane]
come ooon, OD -1?
0:26:743 (3) - move it to x:216 y:152 ? looks way better for me :)
0:46:134 (1) - delete this new combo and put it in at 0:46:866
0:49:427 (1) - similiar situation, just like before
[General]
ładnie zmapowane, drobne błędy jednak są, a hitcircle mi się podobają, bo nie są jakieś oczojebne, tylko ładne i czytelne :) gwiazdeczka poleciała, idę spać u.u
i'm going to write this post in polish (except dk's diff), so don't complain :3
[Easy]
0:17:596 (4) - wzorując się na jednym z poprzednich sliderów, ułóż tego w wąską literkę U, powinno o wiele lepiej wyglądać
0:35:158 (1) - wyrzuć
0:54:915 (x) - przenieś tą Timing Section o 1/1 dalej, tj. 0:55:647. to powtarza się w każdym diffie
rozpiska, jak wg. mnie powinny być ułożone comba, oczywiście zgadzać się ze mną nie musisz w tej kwestii (tak samo jak i w innych :p) (w danym momencie nowe combo):
SPOILER
podobną będziesz dostawać do każdego diffa, bo jak dla mnie średnio ułożone są te comba0:08:815;
0:11:742;
0:14:669;
0:17:596;
0:20:523;
0:23:450;
0:26:377;
0:29:304;
0:32:321;
0:35:158;
0:38:085;
0:41:744;
0:44:671;
0:47:598;
0:49:793;
0:52:720;
0:55:647;
0:58:574;
1:01:501;
1:04:428;
1:07:355;
1:09:550;
1:13:209;
1:16:136;
1:19:063;
1:21:990.
0:11:742;
0:14:669;
0:17:596;
0:20:523;
0:23:450;
0:26:377;
0:29:304;
0:32:321;
0:35:158;
0:38:085;
0:41:744;
0:44:671;
0:47:598;
0:49:793;
0:52:720;
0:55:647;
0:58:574;
1:01:501;
1:04:428;
1:07:355;
1:09:550;
1:13:209;
1:16:136;
1:19:063;
1:21:990.
(jak Kuba Bogu, tak Bóg Kubie ;) )
[Normal]
0:11:377 - 0:12:291 (1, 2) - przesuń o jedną kratkę w lewo
0:30:768 - 0:31:499 (2, 3) - dwójkę ustawiłbym gdzieś nad jedynką i nieco w prawo, zaś trójkę na poprzednim miejscu dwójki
0:32:231 (1) - jedna kratka w lewo
0:43:407 (3) - jako, że nie jestem fanem randomowych stacków, to radziłbym Ci ustawić to gdzieś na dole, pomiędzy poprzednim kółkiem a sliderem
0:54:915 (x) - tak jak w reszcie diffów; przenieś tą Timing Section o 1/1 dalej, tj. 0:55:647
1:17:547 (3) - drugiego sliderpointa (tego najbardziej po lewej) szarpnąłbym o cztery kratki w dół
no i spoilerbox:
SPOILER
0:08:815;
0:12:291;
0:14:669;
0:17:596;
0:20:523;
0:23:450;
0:26:377;
0:30:036;
0:32:231;
0:35:707;
0:38:085;
0:41:012;
0:43:939;
0:46:866;
0:54:915;
0:56:379;
0:58:574;
1:00:769;
1:04:428;
1:08:086;
1:10:282;
1:13:940;
1:16:867;
1:21:990.
0:12:291;
0:14:669;
0:17:596;
0:20:523;
0:23:450;
0:26:377;
0:30:036;
0:32:231;
0:35:707;
0:38:085;
0:41:012;
0:43:939;
0:46:866;
0:54:915;
0:56:379;
0:58:574;
1:00:769;
1:04:428;
1:08:086;
1:10:282;
1:13:940;
1:16:867;
1:21:990.
[Hard]
0:36:987 (4) - niezbyt ciekawie ułożone, może pomiędzy 3 a 5, przenosząc nieco w prawo?
0:54:915 (x) - przenieś tą Timing Section o 1/1 dalej, tj. 0:55:647
1:24:185 (4) - randomowy slider, meh. postawiłbym zamiast niego zwykłą nutkę podczas 1:24:368, w miejscu, gdzie się kończy
SPOILER
0:08:815;
0:11:742;
0:14:669;
0:17:596;
0:20:523;
0:23:450;
0:26:377;
0:29:304;
0:32:231;
0:35:158;
0:39:000;
0:41:012;
0:43:939;
0:46:866;
0:49:793;
0:52:720;
0:54:915;
0:57:110;
0:58:574;
1:00:952;
1:02:233;
1:04:428;
1:06:623;
1:08:086;
1:09:550;
1:13:209;
1:16:136;
1:19:063;
1:23:087.
0:11:742;
0:14:669;
0:17:596;
0:20:523;
0:23:450;
0:26:377;
0:29:304;
0:32:231;
0:35:158;
0:39:000;
0:41:012;
0:43:939;
0:46:866;
0:49:793;
0:52:720;
0:54:915;
0:57:110;
0:58:574;
1:00:952;
1:02:233;
1:04:428;
1:06:623;
1:08:086;
1:09:550;
1:13:209;
1:16:136;
1:19:063;
1:23:087.
[Dk's Insane]
come ooon, OD -1?
0:26:743 (3) - move it to x:216 y:152 ? looks way better for me :)
0:46:134 (1) - delete this new combo and put it in at 0:46:866
0:49:427 (1) - similiar situation, just like before
[General]
ładnie zmapowane, drobne błędy jednak są, a hitcircle mi się podobają, bo nie są jakieś oczojebne, tylko ładne i czytelne :) gwiazdeczka poleciała, idę spać u.u
Hey.
[Easy]
Seems fine.
[Nromal]
Seems fine.
[Hard]
Seems fine.
[DK's Insane]
Seems fine.
Good Map
~STAR
[Easy]
Seems fine.
[Nromal]
Seems fine.
[Hard]
Seems fine.
[DK's Insane]
Seems fine.
Good Map
~STAR
Topic Starter
@ rEdo
Sry, nie chce mi się cytować i później kolorować. Zmieniłem kilka rzeczy(głównie przesunięcia), ale większość zostawiłem. Dzięki za moda i gwiazdke.
@Zetsubou Sensei
Thanks for the star.
Sry, nie chce mi się cytować i później kolorować. Zmieniłem kilka rzeczy(głównie przesunięcia), ale większość zostawiłem. Dzięki za moda i gwiazdke.
@Zetsubou Sensei
Thanks for the star.
As your request.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.
[General]
1. Are you sure you are going to put only the hitcircle alone? Why not put the approachcircle and hitcircle-overlay at once? Some players may use different skin with different approachcirlce and hitcircle-overlay which may be doesn't fit to your custom hitcircle.
2. Better silence the sliderslide.
3. The kiai time should start on 00:55:647.
[Easy]
-- Lower the volume of the hitsound.
-- Move the beat snap divisor to 1/4.
-- Ahh, looks like your combo pattern is a little distracted.
00:10:279 (1) - I prefer you remove the new combo.
00:17:596 (4) - Add new combo. [?]
00:21:987 (1) - I prefer you remove the new combo.
00:29:304 (4) - Add new combo. [?]
00:50:342 (2) - I'm afraid this note will be too hard for beginner players since this note is on blue tick. I suggest you to change (1), (2), and (3) become a slider with one repeat one blue tick.
00:57:842 (3,1) - Based on the combo pattern, the new cobmo should be swapped.
01:00:769 (4,1) - ^
01:25:648 (1) - Silence it. Make it stop like other diff.
[Normal]
00:21:987 (1) - Remove new combo. [?]
00:28:938 (5) - New combo.
00:41:012 (5) - ^
01:04:428 (5) - ^
01:25:282 (1) - Better silence it.
[Hard]
Overall, nice.
[Dk's Insane]
-- This diff's overmapped.
-- The combo patterns are great.
00:37:536 (7,8,9) - Overmapped.
00:43:207 (5,6) - ^
01:22:172 (1) - Better silence it.
Star.1. Are you sure you are going to put only the hitcircle alone? Why not put the approachcircle and hitcircle-overlay at once? Some players may use different skin with different approachcirlce and hitcircle-overlay which may be doesn't fit to your custom hitcircle.
2. Better silence the sliderslide.
3. The kiai time should start on 00:55:647.
[Easy]
-- Lower the volume of the hitsound.
-- Move the beat snap divisor to 1/4.
-- Ahh, looks like your combo pattern is a little distracted.
00:10:279 (1) - I prefer you remove the new combo.
00:17:596 (4) - Add new combo. [?]
00:21:987 (1) - I prefer you remove the new combo.
00:29:304 (4) - Add new combo. [?]
00:50:342 (2) - I'm afraid this note will be too hard for beginner players since this note is on blue tick. I suggest you to change (1), (2), and (3) become a slider with one repeat one blue tick.
00:57:842 (3,1) - Based on the combo pattern, the new cobmo should be swapped.
01:00:769 (4,1) - ^
01:25:648 (1) - Silence it. Make it stop like other diff.
[Normal]
00:21:987 (1) - Remove new combo. [?]
00:28:938 (5) - New combo.
00:41:012 (5) - ^
01:04:428 (5) - ^
01:25:282 (1) - Better silence it.
[Hard]
Overall, nice.
[Dk's Insane]
-- This diff's overmapped.
-- The combo patterns are great.
00:37:536 (7,8,9) - Overmapped.
00:43:207 (5,6) - ^
01:22:172 (1) - Better silence it.
Wej
[General]
If you always use 2x BPM Adjustment. Try 168,00. If you don't want to use and want to use 2x BPM Adjustment, make sure you don't use the 2x BPM Adjustment in Easy diff and Normal diff
[Easy]
00:29:304 (4) - New combo?
00:49:793 (1,2,3) - This is makes me confusing, especially for new player. Try replace this into one slider
01:21:990 (1) - Ugly slider.....
[Normal]
*) Approach Rate -2?
*) Why you use 2x BPM Adjustment in all timing points??? Use 1x BPM Adjustment, it's not good for normal diff
01:25:282 (1) - Sound better if this end at 01:27:234 (use 1/6 Beat Snap Divisor)
[Hard]
01:07:355 (4) - Not stack perfectly with 01:06:989 (3)
01:08:635 (4) - Not stack perfectly with 01:09:184 (5)
01:24:185 (4) - This slider is make no sense. Delete this, and add note at 01:24:307 (use 1/6 Beat Snap Divisor)
01:25:282 (1) - End at 01:27:234?
[Dk's Insane]
Approach Rate -1, -2, or -3. It's veeery Insane and hard to read, I guess~
00:15:218 (5) - Move 1 grid right?
00:23:450 (1,2,3) - Like this? http://puu.sh/ezP
Nice song
STAR
[General]
If you always use 2x BPM Adjustment. Try 168,00. If you don't want to use and want to use 2x BPM Adjustment, make sure you don't use the 2x BPM Adjustment in Easy diff and Normal diff
[Easy]
00:29:304 (4) - New combo?
00:49:793 (1,2,3) - This is makes me confusing, especially for new player. Try replace this into one slider
01:21:990 (1) - Ugly slider.....
[Normal]
*) Approach Rate -2?
*) Why you use 2x BPM Adjustment in all timing points??? Use 1x BPM Adjustment, it's not good for normal diff
01:25:282 (1) - Sound better if this end at 01:27:234 (use 1/6 Beat Snap Divisor)
[Hard]
01:07:355 (4) - Not stack perfectly with 01:06:989 (3)
01:08:635 (4) - Not stack perfectly with 01:09:184 (5)
01:24:185 (4) - This slider is make no sense. Delete this, and add note at 01:24:307 (use 1/6 Beat Snap Divisor)
01:25:282 (1) - End at 01:27:234?
[Dk's Insane]
Approach Rate -1, -2, or -3. It's veeery Insane and hard to read, I guess~
00:15:218 (5) - Move 1 grid right?
00:23:450 (1,2,3) - Like this? http://puu.sh/ezP
Nice song
STAR
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding and stars. I fixed most of what you pointed.
As per your request:
[Timing]
Just set the BPM to 82.000.
[Skin]
You need a hitcircle overlay.
[Easy]
Soo sloooow. But fine.
[Normal]
Ugh, such a tiny increase in slider velocity. Still mega-slow. D:
00:15:767 (3,4,1) - And having such a tiny spacing set makes rhythms like this a little harder to discern visually. Try to space it out a tiny bit.
01:11:745 (5) - Maybe position this somewhere else so it isn't overlapping with the 3 slider?
00:54:915 - Ah, finally it's playing like a normal difficulty.
[Hard]
00:54:915 (1) - Okay, the 2x spacing here is going way beyond the hard difficulty range compared to the other difficulties. Maybe do 1.5x or something. This is way too much. It feels too fast even for the song itself. :/
[Dk's Insane]
OD 9. -_-
In general it felt fast compared to the song like the last part of Hard, but the map itself is pretty nice.
The easier diffs felt way too similarly slow and the harder diffs were just way too quick... Just didn't get a good feeling from the mapset for the song.
[Timing]
Just set the BPM to 82.000.
[Skin]
You need a hitcircle overlay.
[Easy]
Soo sloooow. But fine.
[Normal]
Ugh, such a tiny increase in slider velocity. Still mega-slow. D:
00:15:767 (3,4,1) - And having such a tiny spacing set makes rhythms like this a little harder to discern visually. Try to space it out a tiny bit.
01:11:745 (5) - Maybe position this somewhere else so it isn't overlapping with the 3 slider?
00:54:915 - Ah, finally it's playing like a normal difficulty.
[Hard]
00:54:915 (1) - Okay, the 2x spacing here is going way beyond the hard difficulty range compared to the other difficulties. Maybe do 1.5x or something. This is way too much. It feels too fast even for the song itself. :/
[Dk's Insane]
OD 9. -_-
In general it felt fast compared to the song like the last part of Hard, but the map itself is pretty nice.
The easier diffs felt way too similarly slow and the harder diffs were just way too quick... Just didn't get a good feeling from the mapset for the song.
General:
Easy:
Dk's Insane:
- Add: "Hitcircleoverlay.png" & "Approachcircle.png" .Otherwise The hitcircle will mix with other skins
Easy:
- 00:15:767 (X) - Suggestion: Add a note here.
- 00:51:622 (2) - Place this somewhere else, Too hard for this kind of map.
- 00:56:379 (1) - Remove New Combo.
- 01:13:026 - What's the use of this timing point? I don't see the difference of this one with the last one.
- 01:13:392 - ^
- 01:14:489 - ^
- 01:14:855 - ^
- 01:27:478 - This timing point is not necessary, You may delete it.
- Beat Snap Divisor: 1/4
- 00:56:379 (4) - Remove New Combo.
- 01:25:19 - Place this Timing Point here:01:25:099
- The last Timing Point is not necessary, You may delete it.
- Your notes can't be placed using Beat Snap Divisor: 1/6, please change it to 1/4.
- 00:26:743 (X) - Add a note here.
- 00:26:926 (X) - ^
- 01:06:806 (2) - Suggestion: Place it somewhere else.
- 01:14:306 (5) - New Combo.
- 01:14:672 (1) - Remove New Combo.
- 01:24:307 (4) - Place this note here: 01:24:185
Dk's Insane:
- Overmapped but fine.
Add a hitcircleoverlay and an approach circle.
[Easy]
01:24:307 (3) - Imo, this should be a note while the spinner: 01:25:648 (1) starts on 01:25:282 like in [Normal]
[Normal]
Move the HP Drain Rate, Overall Difficulty, and to the left 1 tick.
[Easy]
01:24:307 (3) - Imo, this should be a note while the spinner: 01:25:648 (1) starts on 01:25:282 like in [Normal]
[Normal]
Move the HP Drain Rate, Overall Difficulty, and to the left 1 tick.
Sorry for the delay, better late than never :')
Insane
End the last spinner one tick further on the timeline. (1/4)
Hard
I think the difficulty gap between the first half and the chorus is too large. I suggest you decrease the spacing in the chorus, also because its wider than in [Insane].
01:24:307 (4) - Snap this beat to the yellow tick left from it on the timeline. (Same as in [Normal])
Normal
01:25:282 (1) - End this spinner @ 01:27:112 (Same as in [Hard])
Easy
01:25:648 (1) - Same thing ^
Fix that, contact me again and I'll bubble it! :>
Insane
End the last spinner one tick further on the timeline. (1/4)
Hard
I think the difficulty gap between the first half and the chorus is too large. I suggest you decrease the spacing in the chorus, also because its wider than in [Insane].
01:24:307 (4) - Snap this beat to the yellow tick left from it on the timeline. (Same as in [Normal])
Normal
01:25:282 (1) - End this spinner @ 01:27:112 (Same as in [Hard])
Easy
01:25:648 (1) - Same thing ^
Fix that, contact me again and I'll bubble it! :>
Topic Starter
Hey, sorry for not replaying for all your modding before. I'm short on time last these so I can't spend it on osu too much. I fixed more important things that you pointed out, but mostly I didn't use your modding(no time to do a new spacing in new diff etc.).
So thank you for everyone who modded my map.
So thank you for everyone who modded my map.
Easy
01:24:364 (3) - Snap this slider to that yellow tick @ 01:24:273 and end it @ 01:25:279 
Bubble'd!
Bubble'd!
Needs a hitcircle apporach circle and a hitcircle overlay in folder (template skin ones will be fine)
Mafia said it but was never fixed?
Popped until fixed~
quick mod while I am here
Easy:
00:36:620 (3) - move down to align with 1,2
00:56:376 (1,2,1) - align these too
Normal:
HP/OD/AR -1?
Map checks out
Hard:
00:55:462 (4,5) - would prefer if these were aligned more
Dk's Insane:
OD -1? (doesn't really fit the song)
Could prob nazi it more but maps are basically ok
Call me back after fixes and I will take a slightly more detailed look at it and rebubble~
Mafia said it but was never fixed?
Popped until fixed~
quick mod while I am here
Easy:
00:36:620 (3) - move down to align with 1,2
00:56:376 (1,2,1) - align these too
Normal:
HP/OD/AR -1?
Map checks out
Hard:
00:55:462 (4,5) - would prefer if these were aligned more
Dk's Insane:
OD -1? (doesn't really fit the song)
Could prob nazi it more but maps are basically ok
Call me back after fixes and I will take a slightly more detailed look at it and rebubble~
Topic Starter
Did you re-download it today? I did a full sumbition today with these in a folde(but maybe the uploading failed...).
Fixed other issues.
Fixed other issues.
Yes I re-downloaded twice (and again just now)nante wrote:
Did you re-download it today? I did a full sumbition today with these in a folde(but maybe the uploading failed...).
Fixed other issues.
Just asked mafia to double check, if you have it you didn't upload it~
Topic Starter
awww, gonna do it tomorrow. seems that uploading really failed(I've got really screwed uploading >.>)James2250 wrote:
Yes I re-downloaded twice (and again just now)nante wrote:
Did you re-download it today? I did a full sumbition today with these in a folde(but maybe the uploading failed...).
Fixed other issues.
Just asked mafia to double check, if you have it you didn't upload it~
I apologize for the long wait
Maybe a bubble will make up for it?
(this is a rebubble so don't yell at me for giving too many bubbles, but will stop now anyway >_>)
Maybe a bubble will make up for it?
(this is a rebubble so don't yell at me for giving too many bubbles, but will stop now anyway >_>)
Topic Starter
It's not like I was mad or sonethingJames2250 wrote:
I apologize for the long wait
Maybe a bubble will make up for it?
(this is a rebubble so don't yell at me for giving too many bubbles, but will stop now anyway >_>)
Thanks for the bubble.General
Fixed a problem of diffs not appearing when downloading the map.
Maybe lower the volume a bit ? Hitsounds seem to be really loud right now.
Easy
00:49:791 (1,2) - Unstack ?
Normal
The rhythms used seemed to be a bit hard for a Normal diff.
00:11:376 (1,2,3) - Do this:
on the timeline ? It'll be a bit easier to play.
00:15:767 (3,4,1) - circle then repeat slider ? for the same reason
00:27:840 (3,4) - slider ? for the same reason
00:34:791 (1,2,3) - same as 00:11:376 - ?
00:46:864 (3,4) - Include (3) in the slider ? (making it a repeat slider) On top of making it a bit easier to play it will follow the lyrics better (since the singer holds (3) )
00:48:328 (5) - Make it symmetrical ?
00:50:340 (1,2) - Make them a single slider that starts at (1) and ends where (2) begins ? You've been following the lyrics pretty strictly so far, why did you add the note that ends (2) ?
00:58:571 (2,3,4) - Repeat slider ?
01:19:059 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make them two repeat sliders, then a note, then add a note at 01:23:084 - ? It makes more sense to me.
like this
Hard
Reduce the OD by at least 2 ticks and the AR by one.
The sliders in the beginning are way too slow compared to the spacing and AR. It makes a huge contrast that makes that part of the diff feel as if the sliders and circles were being completely separated.
00:17:596 (6) - Make symmetrical ?
00:26:925 - that part feels blank, make a slider to link the patterns before and after it ?
00:38:449 - ^
00:40:096 (6,1) - These are hidden by the previous combo, move them away.
Dk's Insane
Overmapped, imo... Also reduce the OD
00:15:218 (5,1,2,3,4) - Move (2) and (3) so that the spacing is even.
00:27:474 (5,1) - This jump is way too sudden... And doesn't make sense according to the music.
00:37:535 (7,8,9) - Does this triple make sense ? :/
00:43:206 (5,6) - ^
00:45:401 (4,5,6) - ^
00:49:059 (8) - ^
01:00:035 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Make the diff end at the same time as the others ?
Fixed a problem of diffs not appearing when downloading the map.
Maybe lower the volume a bit ? Hitsounds seem to be really loud right now.
Easy
00:49:791 (1,2) - Unstack ?
Normal
The rhythms used seemed to be a bit hard for a Normal diff.
00:11:376 (1,2,3) - Do this:
00:15:767 (3,4,1) - circle then repeat slider ? for the same reason
00:27:840 (3,4) - slider ? for the same reason
00:34:791 (1,2,3) - same as 00:11:376 - ?
00:46:864 (3,4) - Include (3) in the slider ? (making it a repeat slider) On top of making it a bit easier to play it will follow the lyrics better (since the singer holds (3) )
00:48:328 (5) - Make it symmetrical ?
00:50:340 (1,2) - Make them a single slider that starts at (1) and ends where (2) begins ? You've been following the lyrics pretty strictly so far, why did you add the note that ends (2) ?
00:58:571 (2,3,4) - Repeat slider ?
01:19:059 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make them two repeat sliders, then a note, then add a note at 01:23:084 - ? It makes more sense to me.
like this
Hard
Reduce the OD by at least 2 ticks and the AR by one.
The sliders in the beginning are way too slow compared to the spacing and AR. It makes a huge contrast that makes that part of the diff feel as if the sliders and circles were being completely separated.
00:17:596 (6) - Make symmetrical ?
00:26:925 - that part feels blank, make a slider to link the patterns before and after it ?
00:38:449 - ^
00:40:096 (6,1) - These are hidden by the previous combo, move them away.
Dk's Insane
Overmapped, imo... Also reduce the OD
00:15:218 (5,1,2,3,4) - Move (2) and (3) so that the spacing is even.
00:27:474 (5,1) - This jump is way too sudden... And doesn't make sense according to the music.
00:37:535 (7,8,9) - Does this triple make sense ? :/
00:43:206 (5,6) - ^
00:45:401 (4,5,6) - ^
00:49:059 (8) - ^
01:00:035 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Make the diff end at the same time as the others ?
Topic Starter
Thanks, fixed some of it, not everything though.Odaril wrote:
General
Fixed a problem of diffs not appearing when downloading the map.
Maybe lower the volume a bit ? Hitsounds seem to be really loud right now.
Easy
00:49:791 (1,2) - Unstack ?
Normal
The rhythms used seemed to be a bit hard for a Normal diff.
00:11:376 (1,2,3) - Do this:
00:15:767 (3,4,1) - circle then repeat slider ? for the same reason
00:27:840 (3,4) - slider ? for the same reason
00:34:791 (1,2,3) - same as 00:11:376 - ?
00:46:864 (3,4) - Include (3) in the slider ? (making it a repeat slider) On top of making it a bit easier to play it will follow the lyrics better (since the singer holds (3) )
00:48:328 (5) - Make it symmetrical ?
00:50:340 (1,2) - Make them a single slider that starts at (1) and ends where (2) begins ? You've been following the lyrics pretty strictly so far, why did you add the note that ends (2) ?
00:58:571 (2,3,4) - Repeat slider ?
01:19:059 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make them two repeat sliders, then a note, then add a note at 01:23:084 - ? It makes more sense to me.
like this
Hard
Reduce the OD by at least 2 ticks and the AR by one.
The sliders in the beginning are way too slow compared to the spacing and AR. It makes a huge contrast that makes that part of the diff feel as if the sliders and circles were being completely separated.
00:17:596 (6) - Make symmetrical ?
00:26:925 - that part feels blank, make a slider to link the patterns before and after it ?
00:38:449 - ^
00:40:096 (6,1) - These are hidden by the previous combo, move them away.
Easy
00:52:352 (4,5) - How about moving this one grid up?
00:56:376 (1) - How about removing new combo here?
01:05:157 (3,4) - How about moving this one grid left?
Normal
00:11:376 (1) - How about moving this one grid right?
01:08:084 (2) - How about moving the end of the slider one grid down?
01:12:474 (1) - How about this shape?
01:17:596 (5) - Similar with 01:12:474 (1).
Hard
- Maybe some mild jumps might work...
00:19:059 (8,9,10) - How about a slider from 00:19:059 to 00:19:791?
00:43:206 (8,9) - Move 9 to 00:43:571, or how abou a slider from 00:43:206 to 00:43:571?
Dk's Insane
00:15:218 (5,1,2,3,4) - Spacing of 5~1 and 3~4 is shorter than 1~2 and 2~3. Is it on purpose?
01:00:767 (3,4) - Maybe 1/2 long, non-return slider would be better?
Yeah, that's all. Maybe helpful, maybe not.
00:52:352 (4,5) - How about moving this one grid up?
00:56:376 (1) - How about removing new combo here?
01:05:157 (3,4) - How about moving this one grid left?
Normal
00:11:376 (1) - How about moving this one grid right?
01:08:084 (2) - How about moving the end of the slider one grid down?
01:12:474 (1) - How about this shape?
01:17:596 (5) - Similar with 01:12:474 (1).
Hard
- Maybe some mild jumps might work...
00:19:059 (8,9,10) - How about a slider from 00:19:059 to 00:19:791?
00:43:206 (8,9) - Move 9 to 00:43:571, or how abou a slider from 00:43:206 to 00:43:571?
Dk's Insane
00:15:218 (5,1,2,3,4) - Spacing of 5~1 and 3~4 is shorter than 1~2 and 2~3. Is it on purpose?
01:00:767 (3,4) - Maybe 1/2 long, non-return slider would be better?
Yeah, that's all. Maybe helpful, maybe not.
Hello
this is my some suggestions
[Overall]
offest 5892
maybe to best for me
[Easy]
note doesn't in voice time point
maybe change slider to best?
00:11:742 add slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35729
00:16:681 ^^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35734
i think this diff hard to Normal diff
[Normal]
Nice diff ~
[Hard]
00:37:718 remove new combo
00:37:352 new combo
00:41:931 [3] remove this note? and add some note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35732
OD -1or2 ?
[Dk's Insane]
hmm...i think slider speed too fast for me
good map and song star ~☆
this is my some suggestions
[Overall]
offest 5892
maybe to best for me
[Easy]
note doesn't in voice time point
maybe change slider to best?
00:11:742 add slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35729
00:16:681 ^^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35734
i think this diff hard to Normal diff
[Normal]
Nice diff ~
[Hard]
00:37:718 remove new combo
00:37:352 new combo
00:41:931 [3] remove this note? and add some note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35732
OD -1or2 ?
[Dk's Insane]
hmm...i think slider speed too fast for me
good map and song star ~☆
Topic Starter
Thanks alotlepidopodus wrote:
Easy
00:52:352 (4,5) - How about moving this one grid up? done
00:56:376 (1) - How about removing new combo here? done
01:05:157 (3,4) - How about moving this one grid left? done
Normal
00:11:376 (1) - How about moving this one grid right?done
01:08:084 (2) - How about moving the end of the slider one grid down?done
01:12:474 (1) - How about this shape? doneSPOILER01:17:596 (5) - Similar with 01:12:474 (1). done[attachment=0:c36da]aaa.jpg[/attachment:c36da]
Hard
- Maybe some mild jumps might work...no
00:19:059 (8,9,10) - How about a slider from 00:19:059 to 00:19:791? no
00:43:206 (8,9) - Move 9 to 00:43:571, or how abou a slider from 00:43:206 to 00:43:571? no
For both modding and star.Thanks for the star and your effort, I wont be using much from your modding though.Licnect wrote:
Hello
this is my some suggestions
[Overall]
offest 5892
maybe to best for me
[Easy]
note doesn't in voice time point
maybe change slider to best?
00:11:742 add slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35729no
00:16:681 ^^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35734no
i think this diff hard to Normal diff
[Normal]
Nice diff ~
[Hard]
00:37:718 remove new combo
00:37:352 new combo im going to follow lyrics for combo here
00:41:931 [3] remove this note? and add some note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35732no
OD -1or2 ? done
good map and song star ~☆
Topic Starter
I little hurried with a kudosu, but well, reward for checking/trying. Thanks for the star.karenying wrote:
I will edit this post
Here we go
Easy
00:28:571 - better for me like this less notes at blue/red thicks in [Easy] diff - betterSPOILER00:35:157 - better for me like this less notes at blue/red thicks in [Easy] diff - better[attachment=1:6d75e]XD.PNG[/attachment:6d75e]SPOILER00:50:340(2) - maybe add whistle I don't want to mess my hitsound pattern too much[attachment=0:6d75e]XD.PNG[/attachment:6d75e]
Normal
01:23:449(3) - spacing nothing can be done since there's no room to move it
01:23:084(x) - add a circle?no need
Hard
01:04:425(1) - spacing but... the spacing is ok?
[Normal]
00:55:645 (3) - As long as Finish and Whistle sounds same it's not necessary,but somehow finish fits better,so you better change to it.
01:07:352 - ^
01:19:059 (1) - Finish/Whistle.
[Hard]
00:55:645 (5) - Finish.
01:07:352 (4) - Change to Finish.
[Insane]
Don't have much to say,just: some songs don't need insane at all,maybe even hard as well.
Good luck,star~
00:55:645 (3) - As long as Finish and Whistle sounds same it's not necessary,but somehow finish fits better,so you better change to it.
01:07:352 - ^
01:19:059 (1) - Finish/Whistle.
[Hard]
00:55:645 (5) - Finish.
01:07:352 (4) - Change to Finish.
[Insane]
Don't have much to say,just: some songs don't need insane at all,maybe even hard as well.
Good luck,star~
[General]
[Easy]
Nice =w=
[Normal]
[Hard]
I think some hitwhistle can be replaced by hitfinish, so just some suggestions >_>
[Dk's Insane]
The softhit seems too loud...Reduce volume for 10%?...
Feel littleovermapped ._.
Good luck
- Try my timing
1.BPM:82.000
Offset: 5898 (I'm sure you need +10ms...)
2.BPM:71.000
Offset: 83,459
3.BPM:65.000 (Actually it can be cut into small sections...anyway, this would work fine too...)
Offset: 84,304
Make combo colors same in all diff?
I prefer use the lighter one in Easy
[Easy]
Nice =w=
[Normal]
- 01:09:547 (1,3,5) - Stacking like these are not very readable...
Move 4, 5 down?
[Hard]
I think some hitwhistle can be replaced by hitfinish, so just some suggestions >_>
- 00:08:815 (1,1) - Finish?
00:14:669 (3) - Finish beginning?
00:20:523 (3,3) - Finish?
00:24:913 (6) - ^
00:32:230 (1,4) - ^
01:08:632 (4) - Finish ending?
[Dk's Insane]
The softhit seems too loud...Reduce volume for 10%?...
Feel littleovermapped ._.
- 00:36:986 (6) - The hitsound of the end is covered by the following beats...maybe reduce the volume of 00:37:535 (7,8,9) for 10%?
Good luck
Topic Starter
SPOILER
Move 4, 5 down?Selee wrote:
[General]
- Try my timing
1.BPM:82.000
Offset: 5898 (I'm sure you need +10ms...)
2.BPM:71.000
Offset: 83,459
3.BPM:65.000 (Actually it can be cut into small sections...anyway, this would work fine too...)
Offset: 84,304
Make combo colors same in all diff?
I prefer use the lighter one in Easy
[Easy]
Nice =w=
[Normal]
- 01:09:547 (1,3,5) - Stacking like these are not very readable...
[spoilerbox]
[Hard]
I think some hitwhistle can be replaced by hitfinish, so just some suggestions >_>
- 00:08:815 (1,1) - Finish?
00:14:669 (3) - Finish beginning?
00:20:523 (3,3) - Finish?
00:24:913 (6) - ^
00:32:230 (1,4) - ^
01:08:632 (4) - Finish ending?
[Dk's Insane]
The softhit seems too loud...Reduce volume for 10%?...
Feel littleovermapped ._.
- 00:36:986 (6) - The hitsound of the end is covered by the following beats...maybe reduce the volume of 00:37:535 (7,8,9) for 10%?
Good luck[/spoilerbox]
SPOILER
IceBeam wrote:
[Normal]
00:55:645 (3) - As long as Finish and Whistle sounds same it's not necessary,but somehow finish fits better,so you better change to it.
01:07:352 - ^
01:19:059 (1) - Finish/Whistle.
[Hard]
00:55:645 (5) - Finish.
01:07:352 (4) - Change to Finish.
[Insane]
Don't have much to say,just: some songs don't need insane at all,maybe even hard as well.
Good luck,star~
Thanks both of you. I've fixed most of what you pointed.
hi~first,everytime you change the offset,remember resnap all the note in every diff ><
"timing-resnap all note"
[easy]
01:12:108 (4) - put it at 01:12:117 sounds better?
at the end,01:24:190 remove the slider and add a note,spinner start at 01:24:922 end at 01:27:117
or
let the 01:24:190 (3) - end at 01:24:922
[Normal]
00:53:093 (1) - spinner start at 00:52:727 sounds better
[hard]
good
[dk]
suggestion: I think ar8 is too high...7 or 6 is better.
well done
I like this song><
Topic Starter
Tonoko wrote:
:oops: hi~
first,everytime you change the offset,remember resnap all the note in every diff ><
"timing-resnap all note" oh, I forgot to do it in 2 diffs
[easy]
01:12:108 (4) - put it at 01:12:117 sounds better? the way it is now is better for me
at the end,01:24:190 remove the slider and add a note,spinner start at 01:24:922 end at 01:27:117
or
let the 01:24:190 (3) - end at 01:24:922 the way it is now is better for me
[Normal]
00:53:093 (1) - spinner start at 00:52:727 sounds better I'm following music here, not vocal
[hard]
good
[dk]
suggestion: I think ar8 is too high...7 or 6 is better.Insane must be insane
well done
I like this song><
thanks for the mod and the star
and pm me when you're done.
ok, time to mod
[Hard]
01:04:434 (3) - wrong spacing here, too close to (2) if you look at spacing of (1,2)
[Dk's Insane]
01:07:178 (4,5) - I dont like silder under single note like this, maybe fix silder it to curved or move it or something?
01:22:178 (1) - end this silder at 1/8 toward (01:25:288)
Topic Starter
doneorioncomet wrote:
[Hard]
01:04:434 (3) - wrong spacing here, too close to (2) if you look at spacing of (1,2)
[Dk's Insane]
01:07:178 (4,5) - I dont like silder under single note like this, maybe fix silder it to curved or move it or something?
01:22:178 (1) - end this silder at 1/8 toward (01:25:288)
good map and nice song 
Topic Starter
thanks for a starabcde1234qaz wrote:
good map and nice song
Whoa, wasn't this bubbled a while back? Anyway, here's your requested recheck:
[General]
I'd silence the final spinners on all diffs except for the hit at the end. Sounds better that way.
[Easy]
00:54:922 (1) - I'd shift these combos forward one. Makes more sense musically. So remove here, add on next note. Repeat for all combos afterward until 01:04:434 (1) -
01:09:556 (1) - Remove new combo, new combo on next note
01:19:068 (1) - Move left and up 1 grid
[Normal]
00:53:093 (1) - Feels really short for a spinner in this difficulty.
Weird combo things going on in the kiai here too. See if you can keep things consistent.
01:17:605 (5) - Think you can reduce the overlap here?
[Hard]
s'fine
[Dk's Insane]
Feels disproportionately fast to the song, but oh well.
HP drain -1? It's hard to recover health that's been lost. Also makes this slider 01:04:434 (1) - stupid on health drain.
Call me back~
[General]
I'd silence the final spinners on all diffs except for the hit at the end. Sounds better that way.
[Easy]
00:54:922 (1) - I'd shift these combos forward one. Makes more sense musically. So remove here, add on next note. Repeat for all combos afterward until 01:04:434 (1) -
01:09:556 (1) - Remove new combo, new combo on next note
01:19:068 (1) - Move left and up 1 grid
[Normal]
00:53:093 (1) - Feels really short for a spinner in this difficulty.
Weird combo things going on in the kiai here too. See if you can keep things consistent.
01:17:605 (5) - Think you can reduce the overlap here?
[Hard]
s'fine
[Dk's Insane]
Feels disproportionately fast to the song, but oh well.
HP drain -1? It's hard to recover health that's been lost. Also makes this slider 01:04:434 (1) - stupid on health drain.
Call me back~
Topic Starter
all fixedGarven wrote:
Whoa, wasn't this bubbled a while back? Anyway, here's your requested recheck:
[General]
I'd silence the final spinners on all diffs except for the hit at the end. Sounds better that way.
[Easy]
00:54:922 (1) - I'd shift these combos forward one. Makes more sense musically. So remove here, add on next note. Repeat for all combos afterward until 01:04:434 (1) -
01:09:556 (1) - Remove new combo, new combo on next note
01:19:068 (1) - Move left and up 1 grid
[Normal]
00:53:093 (1) - Feels really short for a spinner in this difficulty.
Weird combo things going on in the kiai here too. See if you can keep things consistent.
01:17:605 (5) - Think you can reduce the overlap here?
[Hard]
s'fine
[Dk's Insane]
Feels disproportionately fast to the song, but oh well.
HP drain -1? It's hard to recover health that's been lost. Also makes this slider 01:04:434 (1) - stupid on health drain.
Call me back~
"Thinks of my never ending to do list"
After modding break I should look at this~ But again I say I didn't pop it..anyway sorry for wait
(you can smack me later for it)
End kiai time at the end of the spinner?
Easy:
00:54:922 (1,2,3) - align?
Normal:
Why does this difficulty use 1.0 spacing when your other ones use 1.5. It would look better using 1.5 in my opinion. Up to you~
01:09:556 (1,2,3) - could look nicer?
01:14:678 (1) - remove new combo
Hard:
Looks ok
Dk's Insane:
Looks ok
After modding break I should look at this~ But again I say I didn't pop it..anyway sorry for wait
(you can smack me later for it) End kiai time at the end of the spinner?
Easy:
00:54:922 (1,2,3) - align?
Normal:
Why does this difficulty use 1.0 spacing when your other ones use 1.5. It would look better using 1.5 in my opinion. Up to you~
01:09:556 (1,2,3) - could look nicer?
01:14:678 (1) - remove new combo
Hard:
Looks ok
Dk's Insane:
Looks ok
Topic Starter
James2250 wrote:
"Thinks of my never ending to do list"
After modding break I should look at this~ But again I say I didn't pop it..anyway sorry for wait
I was sure you'll never check it, so I'm happy that you modded it even so late
End kiai time at the end of the spinner? no need
Easy:
00:54:922 (1,2,3) - align? done
Normal:
Why does this difficulty use 1.0 spacing when your other ones use 1.5. It would look better using 1.5 in my opinion. Up to you~ 2 reasons for no: 1) distance is wider in kiai time, 2) I'd have to place everything from the begginig(I'm too lazy ;p)
01:09:556 (1,2,3) - could look nicer? done
01:14:678 (1) - remove new combo done
Hard:
Looks ok
Dk's Insane:
Looks ok
Double-checked with James2250, and we're okay with the bubble making it's triumphant return.
:U
:U
Topic Starter
Uff, finally. Thanks a lot both of you and sorry for that I bothered you for so long
I blame me
sorry nante
sorry nante
Topic Starter
Why do you blame yourself?dksslqj wrote:
I blame me
sorry nante
Don't blame yourself, since this is going to be...
Ranked~
Ranked~
Congrats~~~ 
Topic Starter
Wow, that was fast ^^. Thanks a lot.osuplayer111 wrote:
Don't blame yourself, since this is going to be...
Ranked~
thanksJames2250 wrote:
Congrats~~~
beautiful song > . <
Topic Starter
Saying "thanks" would be weird, wouldnt it? So I'll just say that I agree with youh3k1ru wrote:
beautiful song > . <
Congrats !!