JUDYDANNY wrote:

Rebirth of Juda (3rd)

Symbol meaning

　

1. >> Normal suggestion.
   Big text >> Strong suggestion.
   >> Questionable imo.
   >>> Needs to improve some. (Rhythm is not good , plays or sounds weird)
   No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.

[notice]

くろかみ

1. kiaiのパターンに関しては最初のTestplayで言いたいことは殆ど言ってるのでほぼノータッチで 、英語わからんかったら聞いてください、ok
   
2. 00:21:412 – no finisher, this is no echo, splash sounds cut.　ok~
   
3. 00:27:008 – change to k , comparing with 00:21:723 (1,2) – ,00:24:210 (1,2) - and 00:26:697 (5,6) - , 00:26:697 (5,6) – back sounds added for little build up. Variation sounds better. fm, ok changed.
   
4. 00:29:028 – change to d? and 00:29:339 - change to k? ok~, changed.
   d suggestion is same as 00:26:541 - (before patterns are linked 00:22:344 (6,7,8,9,10) – and 00:24:831 (6,7,8,9,10) -).
   
5. 01:20:790 – k? For expression the bulid up (comparing with befor 1/2-5plots > dddkd 01:19:546 -). ok,
6. 01:23:588 - k? followed the snare (tha gap between to 01:23:588 (158) -) ok,changed
   
7. 01:51:101 – remove? consective 1/2s , not enough rest ( 1/1-over 4plots ) from 01:46:282 – to 01:58:717 -. Too Long. ok~
   
8. 01:57:008 (42,43) – change to kk ? ok~
9. If you express the drums, 01:59:650 - k. And if you express the vocal, 01:59:961 (57,58) – kk ? fm, I want to give priority to drum. change k.
   
   変化を大事にするならドラム寄りにする方がしっくりくると思います、滑らかさを維持するなら同様にボーカル取りで
   
   02:07:111 – remove the finisher ? lol -w-... ok remove.
   
   finishers….??? K>Dとピッチを下がるのを演出するのか、KKで統一するのかよくわからないです、以下を参照してください ベストな配色でないと感じたのですが…多分これは私だけの気のせいじゃないと思います。
   02:07:888 (104) - , K
   02:01:826 - , 02:02:914 - K>D,
   02:04:313 - , 02:05:401 – K>K?
   02:06:800 – , 02:08:044 - K>K…?
   
   • IDK how adjust the best. But feels not good, this may not be my imagination.
   1. 02:05:401 change to D (if you hope, 02:05:246 - change to k too, )
   2. 02:08:044 – change to D (and if you hope, 02:07:733 – change to k?)

ok, 02:07:733 (104) - change k & 02:08:044 (106) - is D

[*]02:10:531 - D , For emphasized to 02:12:863 – K . 気合いの入りまであえてDで抑えることでKのタイミングでより盛り上がりに合わせられると感じました ok, changed.


Finishers should improve.
02:52:811 - Finish > be a consistent with other 1st impact. good
03:01:360 - No Finish > no accent with back sound, same as 02:58:873 - , 02:59:650 – ok
03:05:246 – Finish > similer as above, enhance the impact sounds. ok~
03:06:800 – change to k , making a different color next 03:06:956 - , (sounds splash same as other place). nice, changed.




[*]03:27:629 – D , ピッチがどえらく下がってるし手前のKKと噛み合いませんw lol ok, changed.
[*]03:54:598 – remove, 03:52:500 - ~ 03:54:365 – you ignore the many drum sounds for expression the calm, If that’s true, this 1/4 sounds over power. ok

[*]04:31:673 (81,82,83) - 詰められます、1st ,2nd 同様に ok,　つめました。

Hype the best of 2016 taiko mapヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ" GoGo
That’s all for now, I will come again for recheck (¦3[___]

Thanks random mod ><
It was very helpful!

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Rebirth of Juda (3rd)

Symbol meaning

　

1. >> Normal suggestion.
   Big text >> Strong suggestion.
   >> Questionable imo.
   >>> Needs to improve some. (Rhythm is not good , plays or sounds weird)
   No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.

Nardo

1. 00:15:039 – change to k? For making a variation with before dkddd. It sounds well too with drums. fixed
2. 03:13:173 - , 03:15:660 – finisher , making a more power! ^
3. 03:19:546 - , 03:22:034 - same as above, build up more! Hmm, no change here as this would hinder the flow a bit.
4. 04:42:554 – change to k, same as 1st part. fixed
5. 04:49:316 – can add d, more build up! ^
6. 04:51:254 - , 04:53:741 - , 04:56:228 - , 04:58:716 – little over power , but you can put the finisher as Last climax! Remain unchanged as I think it would be a bit overemphasized.

Hype the best of 2016 taiko mapヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ"
That’s all for now, I will come again for recheck (¦3[___]

Bubbled #1

BlackHairEND wrote:

熱い太陽！　　青い海！
そして・・・
tenga-0216！

newyams99 wrote:

こんにちは、言い忘れたことがあります。Artist は「fhana」ではなく、「 fhána」です。変更してくださいね

週末に Nardo さんのパーツをモッドできると思いますのでそれまで待ってください

指摘ありがとうございます！　修正しておきました

1. 01:13:173 (95) - Delete? Since in this kiai, patterns are short, so this one being long is strange.
   
   
2. 02:43:173 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Here, the map is dense.
   02:53:122 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - But here it's shorter? Maybe switch (easy-->hard)?
   02:56:697 - This one is very long too, but 02:59:961 is not, so it's weird to have hard--->easy--->hard--->easy so suddenly. Maybe save hard patterns for the last kiai?
3. 02:58:717 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113) - d kkd k d d k? I think it sounds nicer.
   
   
   
4. 03:22:500 (94) - Since this is a simple map, maybe delete this note as a break before the hard part?
5. 03:29:339 - Missing a note?
   
   
6. Since last kiai is very intense, maybe it can be harder at 04:19:860 to 04:28:409?
7. 05:00:736 - I think kiai end here is a better effect, because wada-don will not dance during silence...

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Hello]

1. 03:22:500 (94) - Since this is a simple map, maybe delete this note as a break before the hard part? Hmm... I would prefer keeping this note as it could cohere with 03:20:013 (76) - well imo.
2. 05:00:736 - I think kiai end here is a better effect, because wada-don will not dance during silence... fixed

Small mod, I like the map (and want to sleep...)!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Hello]

1. 01:13:173 (95) - Delete? Since in this kiai, patterns are short, so this one being long is strange.　　ok,delete~
   
   
2. 02:43:173 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Here, the map is dense.
   02:53:122 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - But here it's shorter? Maybe switch (easy-->hard)?
   02:56:697 - This one is very long too, but 02:59:961 is not, so it's weird to have hard--->easy--->hard--->easy so suddenly. Maybe save hard patterns for the last kiai?　hmm, 02:58:951 (108,109) - this note delete,
3. 02:58:717 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113) - d kkd k d d k? I think it sounds nicer.　good! changed~
   
   
4. 03:29:339 - Missing a note? No, I do not intentionally placed.
   
5. Since last kiai is very intense, maybe it can be harder at 04:19:860 to 04:28:409? It was to densify the last part

Small mod, I like the map (and want to sleep...)!

newyams99 wrote:

Check Suggestion for Nardo's part

01:33:536 - I personally think that adding a hit here and at 01:43:484 would be better since the rest of the whole section is 1/1 to match the background instrumentals at places such as 01:28:562 (2). This doesn't seem to be the most suitable place for a 2/1 gap imo, after the finisher would be better. I suppose you did this for the extended violin melody here. As this session is rather calm, I would prefer using some 2/1 breaks here compared to the previous dense kiai. And yeah, I put these breaks at 01:33:536 and 01:43:484 - in attempt to match the stretches of violin.

Also, I'd appreciate if you could mod [url]my Wonder Stella[/url] map (perhaps even bubble). If you decide to mod it, I'd like to warn you that it's extremely overmapped Thanks~ I have got quite a number of requests recently. You may ask again when I cleared most of them.

Raiden wrote:

hey congrats!!

but why does Nardo start and end the beatmap? have you counted the minutes that you do and made sure you did more than the guest mapper? x.x

SPOILER

Bakari wrote:

I believe that density doesn't matter at all here, the amount of work put into low-density parts is also pretty serious.

This being said, I disqualify the set for the reasons already mentioned here. Let's hope we can quickly address the issue or come to an agreement here.

1. Removed excessive kiai time ( 04:45:818 - ~ 04:50:792 - ).
   
   The role is similar as (03:07:733 - ~ 03:12:707 - ) , for expression the build up the next part.
2. @New BHE part , unified the some patterns on the 1st kiai. It's too different from there.

10:40 JUDYDANNY: ヨウ
10:40 BlackHairEND: オウ
10:41 *JUDYDANNY is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/801206 fhana - Wonder Stella [Taiko Collab]]
10:41 *BlackHairEND is away: now Playing AVA.
10:41 JUDYDANNY: 04:45:818 - 
10:41 JUDYDANNY: ここまで伸ばしたんだよね?
10:41 BlackHairEND: sodane
10:42 BlackHairEND: new comboついてるとこが区切りだから
10:42 BlackHairEND: 一応パートの問題も解消されてるはず
10:42 BlackHairEND: あ、まって　はらいたい
10:42 BlackHairEND: うんち
10:45 BlackHairEND: バッチコイ
10:45 JUDYDANNY: 04:42:554 - ,  01:23:588 -     disunified        
10:45 JUDYDANNY: 04:37:269 -   ,01:18:303 -   disunified  
10:45 JUDYDANNY: 01:25:764 (171) -   , 04:44:730 -  disunified
10:46 JUDYDANNY: 2こめと３こめはfinisherがってことね
10:48 BlackHairEND: あら～
10:49 BlackHairEND: 1個目はddkに変えました
10:49 JUDYDANNY: ddkにかえたのかw
10:49 BlackHairEND: えぇ？
10:49 BlackHairEND: 違うかな
10:49 JUDYDANNY: 2コメの方をkdkに変えた方がいいかなぁと思ってたけどw  modで言ったしここ
10:50 BlackHairEND: 2個目って元からkdkじゃね？
10:50 BlackHairEND: kdkでいいか
10:50 JUDYDANNY: 01:23:588 (157,158,159) -  kdk ,04:42:554 (153,154,155) -  ddk 
10:50 JUDYDANNY: になってますよ
10:51 BlackHairEND: あぁ～～
10:51 JUDYDANNY: 一応 http://puu.sh/nDmGB/16d1f014f2.png
10:51 BlackHairEND: タイムスタンプ逆にはってるだけやんけ！！！！
10:51 BlackHairEND: おけおけ
10:51 JUDYDANNY: ああw そゆことかw
10:52 BlackHairEND: あれ？今気づいたけど最後の部分ほぼ同じ音じゃん
10:52 BlackHairEND: 俺が作った床
10:52 BlackHairEND: とこ
10:53 BlackHairEND: 全然違う音取りしててワロタ
10:55 JUDYDANNY: すぎってことはないと思うけど まぁCAPとまでは言わずとも 似てなさ過ぎたらねぇ
10:55 BlackHairEND: 同じ配置にしていいか？ｗ
10:55 BlackHairEND: 全部
10:55 JUDYDANNY: それはどうかなぁw
10:56 BlackHairEND: ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
10:56 JUDYDANNY: まぁリズム似せるくらいでいいのでは
10:57 JUDYDANNY: たとえば 04:39:290 (132) - の1/4を1,2打目remove  , 04:45:196 - 　finisher 
10:57 JUDYDANNY: 04:42:554 -  kは言ったね これくらい？
10:58 JUDYDANNY: で01:25:764 - finisher?
10:59 JUDYDANNY: 4:45のところは ノーツかさましでもいいんじゃない 
10:59 JUDYDANNY: 最後のビルドアップ演出で
10:59 BlackHairEND: ん、おけ
10:59 JUDYDANNY: 1番 kddkddkd  >  Last  KddKddkD  か   1番  KddkddkD  > Last  K-dk-kkD
11:00 JUDYDANNY: 的な
11:00 BlackHairEND: KddKddkDにする
11:00 JUDYDANNY: ｵｳｲｪ
11:02 BlackHairEND: あと大丈夫そう？
11:03 BlackHairEND: 04:38:512 (128) - ここkにした
11:03 BlackHairEND: 1個目もkだったから
11:03 BlackHairEND: 01:19:546 -
11:04 JUDYDANNY: dddkdでもよかったけどね
11:04 JUDYDANNY: 1番
11:04 BlackHairEND: dddkdにしてみる？ｗｗ
11:04 JUDYDANNY: 01:17:526 -  がDできてるから  dddkdで落ち着いてもいいかなと
11:04 BlackHairEND: あ、
11:04 BlackHairEND: ごめん俺が
11:04 JUDYDANNY: Lastは04:36:492 - Kできてるぶん ddkkdはまぁアリかなぁと
11:04 BlackHairEND: 間違ってる
11:04 BlackHairEND: 1個目が
11:04 BlackHairEND: dだから
11:04 BlackHairEND: dddkdにする
11:04 BlackHairEND: だわ
11:05 BlackHairEND: ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
11:05 JUDYDANNY: Lastをdddkdにするってことかw
11:05 BlackHairEND: そうそう
11:05 BlackHairEND: 最後ddkkdだから
11:05 JUDYDANNY: それならまぁいいんじゃないでしょうか
11:05 BlackHairEND: おっけー
11:05 BlackHairEND: アップデートするわ
11:05 JUDYDANNY: ホイ
11:06 BlackHairEND: アップデートしたー
11:08 JUDYDANNY: ごめんやっぱ 01:26:230 - finisher統一しろって言われるかもw  もう一度考えてみて
11:10 JUDYDANNY: これも今気づいたわ 04:45:818 -   ~04:50:792 -  kiai無でもいいわ  03:07:733 -  ~03:12:707 - 同様
11:11 BlackHairEND: あぁ、finisherはいれとくわ
11:13 BlackHairEND: kiaiタイム多いっていわれてるし削るか
11:14 BlackHairEND: 04:50:948 - ここからkiaiでいい？
11:14 JUDYDANNY: 792
11:15 JUDYDANNY: 04:50:792 - 
11:15 JUDYDANNY: kkd Kのとこ
11:16 BlackHairEND: 04:50:944 - こっちにはいってる緑線はこのままでいいのね
11:16 JUDYDANNY: えっと
11:17 JUDYDANNY: まぁそうですね  792に緑線+kiai  
11:17 JUDYDANNY: 一応944の赤線にも+kiaiしといて
11:17 BlackHairEND: わかった
11:18 BlackHairEND: よし
11:18 BlackHairEND: アップデートするで
11:22 JUDYDANNY: ww
11:22 JUDYDANNY: 04:50:944 - 緑線要るぞw  x1.1SVだからw
11:23 JUDYDANNY: 緑 792 x1.1  + kiai    赤944 +kiai       緑  944 x1.1 + kiaiってこと
11:23 BlackHairEND: aa
11:23 BlackHairEND: そういうことね

toara_fict wrote:

BHE ome w

toara_fict wrote:

BHE ome w