Linkin Park - Guilty All The Same (Feat. Rakim) · forum

BriedisLT

Joined August 2013

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BriedisLT 2015-10-09T11:42:20+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016 m. rugpjūčio 30 d., antradienis at 10:56:17

Artist: Linkin Park
Title: Guilty All The Same (Feat. Rakim)
Tags: linkin park linkinpark lp guilty all the same rakim rock alternative english
BPM: 200
Filesize: 10093kb
Play Time: 05:51
Difficulties Available:

Guilty (6,26 stars, 1401 notes)

Download: Linkin Park - Guilty All The Same (Feat. Rakim)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Lincoln Park
[Current version: 0.86]

Changelog

[0.86][2016-08-30]
added a lot of timing and inherited points
tweaked ending's timing
thanks to BOUYAAA for pointing out things like these
fixed AiMod's whining except the kiai
[0.85][2016-08-07]
1/4 backsliders and ministreams changed to 1/3
other updates that didn't bother to specify
[0.845][2016-08-03]
05:47:566 - to 05:52:008 - remapped
05:47:566 - 201 BPM modifier added
05:51:496 - 205 BPM modifier added
[0.84][2016-07-28]
05:10:280 - to 05:51:932 - remapped
05:44:030 - added 205 BPM modifier
[0.83][2016-07-18]
With a consultation of BOUYAAA
03:36:680 - to 04:39:080 - remapped
[0.82][2016-07-17]
03:22:280 - to 03:36:980 - remapped
[0.815][2016-07-11]
03:03:208 (1,2,3,4) - increased spacing for more challange
03:06:358 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remapped for more spacing
03:12:808 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - increased spacing
[0.81][2016-07-10]
02:23:758 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - tweaked for 02:23:833 (3) - to exist
02:28:558 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - tweaked for 02:28:633 (3) - to exist
02:28:708 (4) - flipped and repositioned because of 02:28:633 (3) -
02:32:608 - to 02:59:608 - remapped
02:36:658 (8) - 02:39:058 (8) - 02:39:658 (2) - 02:40:258 (4) - & etc. - added for faster, less boring pace
02:56:008 - to 02:58:258 - spinner is kill, replaced with highest pace notes in this section
02:58:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - tweaked
[0.80][some time to 2016-06-15]
01:22:408 - to 01:24:658 - slightly changed
01:25:408 (3) - changed shape
01:34:408 - to 02:21:208 - remapped
[0.79][2016-05-27]
01:15:208 - 01:34:408 - remapped
[0.78][2016-05-25]
offset tweaks
00:08:178 - added a timing point
01:05:026 - to 01:15:058 - remapped
01:15:208 (1) - 01:24:808 (1,3) - variety
[0.77][2016-04-21]
01:00:489 (1,2) - changed AGAIN
01:05:026 (1,2,3,4) - weird shape, uncertain about it
01:06:208 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - changed flow
01:08:008 (1,2,3) - sliders instead of drum-mapping for guitar
01:08:908 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - changed flow
01:10:408 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - slight remap and move to the left
[0.76][2016-03-06]-[2016-03-31]
Thank you, Lumin and MokouSmoke.
00:08:780 (3,4) - edited placement
00:09:680 - to 00:17:630 - remapped 00:10:880 (1) - nc
00:56:030 - Remapped until this point
01:00:492 (1,2,3) - changed again to hit the drums more accurately
offset changed
[0.755][2016-02-21]
03:21:830 (2,3) - added
03:40:580 (2) - 03:47:780 (2) - 03:50:180 (2) - 03:59:780 (2) - 04:04:580 (2) - 04:09:380 (2) - 1.5x spacing from 1x
[0.75][2016-02-02]
Thank you for the mod, jyu
00:26:630 (4,5,6,7) - spaced out
00:31:880 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - remapped
00:35:930 (2) - 00:40:730 (2) - 01:25:430 (3) - 01:28:730 (3) - 01:30:530 (5) - 01:31:130 (3) - 02:42:230 (3) - 02:44:630 (2) - removed nc
03:53:180 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - remapped
04:27:080 (1,2,3,4) - remapped
[0.74][2016-01-20]
Thank you a lot, sjoy & P A N
00:14:330 (4) - added a circle
00:14:480 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - part adjusted
00:46:130 (2,2) - stacked
00:43:880 - to 00:56:030 - changed the flow
01:09:530 (7) - slider instead of two circles
01:09:830 (1,2,3,4) - circles instead of two sliders
01:11:030 (3) - added a slider
01:11:030 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - remapped
01:12:830 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - added more circles to emphasise the guitar
01:17:930 (2,3) - removed nc
01:37:280 - to 01:45:080 - adjusted
01:59:780 (2,4) - stacked
03:03:530 (2) - snapped, nice catch, P A N
03:26:630 (4) - 03:29:180 (5) - changed to sliders instead of circles
03:46:880 (3) - added a slider
[0.73][2016-01-01]
00:00:080 - to 00:08:930 - section adjusted on more time
00:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - changed layout to be more linear and readable
04:50:180 (2,3,4) - added a triple to fit the song better, as a result 04:50:480 (5,6,7) - were a bit moved
05:41:255 - to 05:51:980 - adjusted to better fit the rhythm and the stream's spacing reduced to 0,75 from 1
Haganenno's mini-mod, thanks!
04:53:480 (5) - spacing increased from 1,5 to 1,75
04:48:755 - removed note that was here
[0.72][2015-12-29]
00:00:080 - to 00:08:930 - section adjusted
00:13:280 (1,2,3) - spacing fixed between these phaZ's catch
05:36:830 (1) - end fixed to snap
[0.71][2015-12-28]
05:09:830 (8,9) - changed from a back slider
sections 05:10:280 - to 05:33:230 - & 05:34:430 - to 05:51:980 - changed, remapped, adjusted
[0.70][2015-12-27]
04:48:830 - to 05:09:230 - major overhaul because of the 1.70x slider velocity change
05:09:830 (8) - this added for no reason
[0.69][2015-12-26]
03:22:280 - to 04:35:930 - major changes
[0.68][2015-12-25]
03:00:830 - to 03:21:230 - changed to 1.70x velocity and major changes
[0.67][2015-12-24]
section 00:09:680 - to 00:17:630 - reduced spacing to 1.35
section 01:36:230 - to 02:21:230 - made it better
01:25:430 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - adjusted to better fit
02:22:430 - to 02:32:330 - adjusted to 1.65x slider velocity change
02:32:630 - to 02:55:730 - tweaked
[0.66][2015-12-23]
Major changes from 00:06:680 - to 01:12:830 - this might as well be pretty much the final major overhaul for this section.
01:13:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - added these, no idea if they are here to stay.
Section's 01:15:230 - to 01:34:430 - slider velocity reduced to 1.65x (thanks to Mazzerin's advice) and remapped to fit the said velocity as well as major flow changes.

Post-update Madokaaa's mini-mod:
00:17:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - changed to a curve instead of three-line curve (like the sliders)
00:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - circles changed to be non-linear style, i.e. curve shapes, as a result 00:13:280 (1,2,3) - is flipped and adjusted accordingly
[0.65][2015-12-20]
00:00:080 - to 00:11:930 - almost everything changed
00:42:080 - to 00:46:580 - changed sliders to edgy and similar pattern to the very beginning
00:46:730 - to 00:56:030 - made jumps between "jump blocks" from 4x to 3x
[0.64][2015-12-19]
01:15:680 - to 01:31:880 - tried to make it better with less 2x and more 1.5x and some 1x spacing and systemic jump placement
03:07:055 (2,3) - stacked
03:16:655 (2,3) - stacked
01:24:830 (1) - caught the beast out of boundaries Mancis' catch (since update 0.66, the ugly slider is gone as well as the problem)
[0.63][2015-12-14]
00:44:780 - to 00:56:030 - corrected to better fit the rhythm
[0.62][2015-12-12]
Thank you, Strategas.
Jumpy parts have been made more systemic.
OD changed to 8.
TODO: make Kiai time more systemic as well.
[0.61][2015-12-11]
00:00:080 - to 00:07:880 (2) - completely changed
00:14:480 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - new shapes 00:17:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - moved
00:36:061 - fixed something somewhere here to not be linear flow but get back
00:41:630 - to 00:56:030 - section changed
05:47:630 (5,6,7,8) - as I said in 0.59, nerfed
minor changes \(^-^)/
[0.60][2015-12-10]
Major map changes at the beginning.
Some perfections.
[0.59][2015-12-09]
05:19:880 - 05:51:980 - remapped
05:46:730 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - not sure about this monstrosity, probably going to be nerfed. (added +0.04 diff. rating by itself)
[0.58][2015-12-08]
04:48:755 - to 05:09:230 - section remapped accordingly to the new 2x velocity
05:09:230 - added an inherited point to stop kiai time
[0.57][2015-12-06]
tweaks in middle kiai time section
02:19:430 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - remapped
03:22:280 - 04:39:080 - revamp
04:43:430 (1,2,1) - tweaked
[0.56][2015-12-05]
middle kiai time remapped to 2x sliders
minor improvements up until that
[0.55w][2015-12-04]
Changed wallpaper
minor snapping corrections
[0.55][2015-11-30]
02:22:430 - to 02:31:580 - adjusted to 2x sliders
[0.54][2015-11-24]
EXPERIMENTAL 01:15:230 - to 01:34:430 - 2X slider velocity -- when this is close to perfect, ONLY then other kiai time will be more like this.
00:22:280 - to 00:56:030 - rehashed
[0.535][2015-11-22]
Tweaked from 03:00:830 - to 04:39:080 -
[0.53][2015-11-18]
Edited the custom sample timings.
00:08:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rearranged
00:14:480 (1,2) - moved a little more to left
01:15:830 (1) - from a single slider to a back-slider
01:16:280 (2,3,4,5,6) - rearranged
01:17:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remapped
02:03:230 - more minor remappings and improvements using the new 2+ distance spacing tool
[0.52s][2015-11-07]
Added custom hit samples (edited until 03:00:830 - )
[0.52][2015-11-06]
This update is possible, and more will be too, only because of BOUYAAA.
Unchecked "letterbox during breaks"
01:26:930 (8) - minor fix
00:13:280 (1,1) - made these ugly things
01:53:330 (5,6) - moved a bit to right, to avoid collision with incoming slider
00:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remapped again to better fit the beat
between 03:36:680 - and 04:39:080 - changed1/2 sliders to linear, from curved
00:22:280 - 00:35:555 - section remapped
01:29:031 (1,2,3) - moved, tried avoiding straight jumps
02:52:280 (3) - added slider instead of two circles
04:49:730 (5) - removed 1/4 slider, added a back slider instead
04:26:330 (2,3,4) - 04:22:880 (7,8,9,10) - tweaked straight line jumps
[0.51][2015-11-03]
05:41:180 (3) - Added a stream instead of triple sliders
00:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - section remapped
01:18:530 (5) - triple slider instead of three circles.

Last edited by BriedisLT 2016-08-30T07:56:47+00:00, edited 139 times in total.

BOUYAAA

396 posts

Joined July 2010

BOUYAAA 2015-11-05T20:08:35+00:00

Sooo general tips first as promised
I'll often point out several examples in your map. I won't point out all of them though because I think it's important you understand my points and juge by yourself if something is wrong. So IF you accept my suggestion please go through the whole map and search for other occurences.
Most of this stuff can be situational depending on if you have a clear idea of what you are doing or not.

General stuff :

Seeing how hard your map is I'd say OD+1 AT LEAST
I'm not very fond of AR that high in not-spammy maps like that
Your combo colors are risky. Imo the black one is too dark to be seen clearly and white should be avoided too
uncheck letterbox during breaks
audio bitrate is too high. Check AI mod
the map would benefit alot from custom hitsounds

Aesthetics :

So you might argue that this isn't that important and I'd probably agree with you. But looks in a beatmap is probably comparable to looks irl. You'll always get juged by how you look first. If your map is inconsistent and seems to have random placement it'll sometimes be juged as bad by people that havent even played it.

t/187043/start=15 read popner's post, it explains how to achieve consistency. Alot of your map uses alot of different curvatures in the same place. this makes up for very inconsistent visuals and kind of a "random slider and note placement" feel.
Here are a few examples : 02:17:330 (1,2) - 02:26:930 (10,1) - 02:32:030 (1,2) - 02:34:430 (1,2) - 02:39:230 (1,2) - 01:26:930 (1,2) - etc

When doing curve slider things like that it's also better to keep you curves kind of low. This is more subjective but 02:39:230 (1) - 02:50:030 (1) - and sliders like that are too curved which doesnt fit your general style of flat ish sliders

Consistency in angles used is also kind of important to keep a map good looking imo. Most of the time it's better to have your angles kept between 5-15° of the x and y axis.

Your shapes are also not very varied. You basically use 98% curves when there are alot of more viable safe shapes you could use. S shapes, Z shapes, L shapes, and straight lines are very safe to use and fit most maps yet you ignored them completely.

01:53:330 (5,1) - small overlaps like that are really meh visually, either make a good looking one that overlaps a bit more or avoit the overlap completely

Spacing and emphasis :

You spacing and note placement should always express the song imo. You often use very consistent spacing which kind of ignores beat and sound strenght.
00:12:980 (7,8,1) - here for example you have 3 objects spaced exactly the same. All 3 have different strenght though. 00:13:280 (1) - is a downbeat and has a very strong sound on it so it should be expressed by higher spacing or at least some sort of sharp angle/direction change. 00:37:730 (1,2,3,4) - 4 is a downbeat here and shoudl have more spacing etc etc

00:23:180 (5) - these kind of sliders are also problematic imo. If you listen to the song you can clearly hear the slider end has a snare sound while the beginning lands on a guitar hit. The end is clearly stronger than the head so when planning rythm you should make the tail clickable here. pointing out a bit more : 00:25:430 (6) - 00:27:530 (2) - (repeat slider end on a strogn sound) 00:28:280 (5) - 00:29:780 (2) - 02:25:730 (4) - etc
You can google strong/weak beat on google if you want to know the music theory backing this up

Playability :

This is more the kind of stuff you'll see in the mods you're used to see

01:41:030 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - you have a 1/4 stream pattern with a very slose 1/2 note following it which is not good. 12 should be spaced more to make the 1/2 more clear and for playability 00:37:730 (1,2,3,4) - 01:36:380 (5,6,7,8) - 01:45:830 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - etc

03:34:280 (1,2) - sudden extended sliders like that are confusing, you can't really tell if the slider is 1/2 or 3/4 here. I'd say if you really wanna use extended sliders like that stack the note unther the slider's tail 03:35:480 (1,2) -.

01:29:031 (1,2,3) - straight line jumps are weird because they don't really rely on your aim to hit them but more on your capacity to keep the right speed. this makes you lose emphasis on the strong beat just after since there is no spacing / direction change. It alsko makes the player tense up during this series of notes which you don't really want because 2 here is weak. 04:18:380 (2,3,1) - 04:22:880 (7,8,9,10) -

01:29:031 (1) - you ncing is random, you should only change NCs when there is a clear change in the music. Most of the time in rock songs like that change is on downbeats so NCing on every downbeat fits usually. 01:26:930 (1) - 01:25:430 (1) - 01:17:330 (1) - 00:26:330 (1) -

01:34:730 (2,3,4,5,6) - flower shape should be kept here. Flow isn't that important there is a 1/1 gap anyways

02:52:280 (3,4,5) - slider from 3 to 4 to avoid confusion between 1/1 and 1/2

04:06:680 (1,2) - pls make that look good 04:17:030 (3,1) -

04:50:030 (6,7) - overmap

Make sure you read my first paragraph
idk what I can say more. I'm pretty shit at explaining sometimes so if you wanna discuss things with me ingame feel free to do so
gl

Strategas

1,378 posts

Joined July 2013

Strategas 2015-12-12T17:34:37+00:00

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2015-12-12 18:58 BriedisLT: sw
2015-12-12 18:58 BriedisLT: neuzsiemes?
2015-12-12 18:58 Strategas: nope
2015-12-12 18:58 BriedisLT: tai gal general mapping pravesi man per beatmapa?
2015-12-12 18:58 BriedisLT: kas blogai kas netinka ir tt
2015-12-12 18:58 Strategas: duok
2015-12-12 18:58 Strategas: pirma testplay
2015-12-12 18:59 BriedisLT: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/798854 Linkin Park - Guilty All The Same (Feat. Rakim)]
2015-12-12 18:59 Strategas: pasakysiu kas labiausiai kliūna
2015-12-12 18:59 Strategas: per daug detailed nebūsiu
2015-12-12 18:59 BriedisLT: tie kur per kiai time eina
2015-12-12 18:59 BriedisLT: juos tvarkyt bet kokiu atveju reikia
2015-12-12 18:59 BriedisLT: ten gali tik kas geriau tiktu gerai butu
2015-12-12 19:05 Strategas: nice
2015-12-12 19:05 Strategas: patobulėjai
2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: ok so
2015-12-12 19:06 BriedisLT: nuo kada?

2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: kažkada davei man veela map
2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: kažkokį ten
2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: nu ždž
2015-12-12 19:06 BriedisLT: ai
2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: visu pirm
2015-12-12 19:06 BriedisLT: nu pamenu
2015-12-12 19:06 BriedisLT:

2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: od per mažas tikrai
2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: tokiam diff ir bpm
2015-12-12 19:06 BriedisLT: od per mazas
2015-12-12 19:06 BriedisLT: nes yra drum
2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: pvz lengva užsilockint
2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: note
2015-12-12 19:06 BriedisLT: kurie netiksliai i ritma
2015-12-12 19:06 BriedisLT: eina
2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: vistiek
2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: geriau aukštesnis
2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: nes toks bpm easy to lock
2015-12-12 19:06 Strategas: ten kur streamai
2015-12-12 19:07 BriedisLT: 7.5od daryciau td
2015-12-12 19:07 Strategas: arba jump kartojas
2015-12-12 19:07 Strategas: toliau
2015-12-12 19:07 Strategas: naudoji įstrižus slider
2015-12-12 19:07 Strategas: geriau avoid
2015-12-12 19:07 Strategas: rotate juos kad būtų kitokio angle
2015-12-12 19:07 BriedisLT: man kazka vienas rase per modus
2015-12-12 19:07 BriedisLT: 5-15 laipsniu nuo asiu
2015-12-12 19:07 Strategas: jo
2015-12-12 19:07 Strategas: bet ne 45
2015-12-12 19:07 Strategas: just no
2015-12-12 19:07 BriedisLT: slideriai
2015-12-12 19:07 BriedisLT: ane
2015-12-12 19:08 Strategas: taip
2015-12-12 19:08 Strategas: lėvai žaidžias ir atrodo
2015-12-12 19:08 Strategas: toliau
2015-12-12 19:08 Strategas: repeat slider su dideliu velocity kur
2015-12-12 19:08 Strategas: tai pure cancer
2015-12-12 19:08 BriedisLT: no repeat ant 2x
2015-12-12 19:08 BriedisLT: k
2015-12-12 19:09 Strategas: hitsoundai man pasirodė garsūs labai
2015-12-12 19:09 Strategas: muzika vos girdėjau
2015-12-12 19:09 BriedisLT: 100% per visa
2015-12-12 19:09 BriedisLT: man tai vos girdisi ant kai kur
2015-12-12 19:09 BriedisLT: wtf

2015-12-12 19:10 Strategas: tai iki 70 sumažink kokių
2015-12-12 19:10 Strategas: bus gerai
2015-12-12 19:10 BriedisLT: o ant kiai irgi per garsiai?
2015-12-12 19:10 BriedisLT: cia gal kazkas pas mane susivele
2015-12-12 19:10 Strategas: tai kiai tai px
2015-12-12 19:10 Strategas: gali būt garsiausi
2015-12-12 19:10 Strategas: bet pradžioj ten 100
2015-12-12 19:10 Strategas: neturi būt
2015-12-12 19:11 BriedisLT: oke
2015-12-12 19:11 Strategas: po to matau
2015-12-12 19:11 Strategas: naudoji 1.40 sv
2015-12-12 19:11 Strategas: ir tiesiog uždėjai 1.5 x
2015-12-12 19:11 Strategas:

2015-12-12 19:11 BriedisLT: soviau kazka
2015-12-12 19:11 BriedisLT: nzn
2015-12-12 19:11 Strategas: galėjai tiesiog default pakeist sv
2015-12-12 19:11 Strategas: ir tada 1x palikt
2015-12-12 19:11 Strategas: bet čia nesvarbu
2015-12-12 19:11 Strategas: nieko nekeičia
2015-12-12 19:11 Strategas: tik in general
2015-12-12 19:12 BriedisLT: yra kur 1.0x velocity
2015-12-12 19:12 BriedisLT: ai tipo galima td 0.5 padaryt jei noriu
2015-12-12 19:12 Strategas: 01:15:230 (1) -
2015-12-12 19:12 BriedisLT: bet vps px
2015-12-12 19:12 Strategas: čia tai belenkaip nustebino
2015-12-12 19:12 BriedisLT: jo makaronas
2015-12-12 19:12 Strategas: toks ultra greitas

2015-12-12 19:12 BriedisLT: nzn ka daryt su tokiais
2015-12-12 19:12 Strategas: px tas makaronas
2015-12-12 19:13 Strategas: tik kažkaip reik ispėt dėl sv
2015-12-12 19:13 Strategas: pvz
2015-12-12 19:13 Strategas: sutrumpink iki red tick
2015-12-12 19:13 Strategas: tada matysis kad greit eina
2015-12-12 19:13 Strategas: ai nu šiaip nžn
2015-12-12 19:13 BriedisLT: Civilization V
2015-12-12 19:13 Strategas: taip ar taip suprising
2015-12-12 19:13 BriedisLT: oj
2015-12-12 19:13 BriedisLT: 01:15:380 -
2015-12-12 19:13 BriedisLT: tipo iki cia
2015-12-12 19:14 BriedisLT: sulauzyt su kampais gal pabandyt uzriest kazkaip
2015-12-12 19:14 Strategas: kažkaip jo
2015-12-12 19:14 Strategas: nes db
2015-12-12 19:14 Strategas: ultra suprise
2015-12-12 19:14 Strategas: bet gal ir gerai
2015-12-12 19:14 Strategas: taip ir turi būt nes intense part
2015-12-12 19:14 BriedisLT: kinder surprise mothafuka
2015-12-12 19:15 Strategas: 01:18:530 (5) -
2015-12-12 19:15 Strategas: slider end toks
2015-12-12 19:15 Strategas: lėvas
2015-12-12 19:15 BriedisLT: jo minejai
2015-12-12 19:15 Strategas: ant downbeat
2015-12-12 19:15 BriedisLT: backslideris
2015-12-12 19:15 Strategas: tai ir repeat blogai jo
2015-12-12 19:15 Strategas: bet ir
2015-12-12 19:15 Strategas: kad baigiasi
2015-12-12 19:15 Strategas: ant downbeat
2015-12-12 19:15 Strategas: turi būt clickable jie
2015-12-12 19:15 Strategas: nes strong
2015-12-12 19:16 Strategas: new combo biški irgi inconsistant bent man atrodo
2015-12-12 19:17 Strategas: 01:25:430 (1,3) -
2015-12-12 19:17 BriedisLT: nlb pastebiu su savo skinu rip
2015-12-12 19:20 Strategas: su astetikom biški nelabai irgi
2015-12-12 19:21 Strategas: daug kur unstructure patern atrodo man bent
2015-12-12 19:21 BriedisLT: as nesiorentuoju mappinime
2015-12-12 19:21 Strategas:

2015-12-12 19:21 BriedisLT: psl halp
2015-12-12 19:21 BriedisLT: nes taip ir yra?
2015-12-12 19:22 Strategas: nžn sunku paaiškint iš tirko
2015-12-12 19:22 BriedisLT: D:
2015-12-12 19:22 Strategas: šitie pvz
2015-12-12 19:22 Strategas: 02:02:630 (5,7) -
2015-12-12 19:22 Strategas: 02:02:780 (6,8) -
2015-12-12 19:22 Strategas: ir šitie
2015-12-12 19:22 Strategas: vieni overlap kiti ne
2015-12-12 19:22 Strategas: geriau kad skirtingas distance tarp jų būtų visually
2015-12-12 19:23 BriedisLT: jie ir yra skirtingi distance
2015-12-12 19:23 BriedisLT: kaip dar padaryt

2015-12-12 19:23 Strategas: oj
2015-12-12 19:23 Strategas: tas pats*
2015-12-12 19:23 Strategas:

DD
2015-12-12 19:23 BriedisLT: tokios pat distance
2015-12-12 19:23 BriedisLT: ant jumpu?
2015-12-12 19:24 Strategas: ne
2015-12-12 19:24 BriedisLT: bet cia isejimas
2015-12-12 19:24 Strategas: visually
2015-12-12 19:24 Strategas: tuoj sudėliosiu tau
2015-12-12 19:24 Strategas: patern
2015-12-12 19:24 Strategas: 02:02:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2015-12-12 19:24 BriedisLT: ai tipo daugiau laipsniu kampai?
2015-12-12 19:25 Strategas: no
2015-12-12 19:25 BriedisLT: as pametes tave
2015-12-12 19:26 Strategas: http://i.imgur.com/DAarNPt.png
2015-12-12 19:26 Strategas: matai
2015-12-12 19:26 Strategas: objektai
2015-12-12 19:26 Strategas: to pačio atstum
2015-12-12 19:26 Strategas: vienas nuo kito
2015-12-12 19:26 Strategas: tą turiu omeny
2015-12-12 19:27 BriedisLT: pas mane butent toj vietoj +0,25 DS
2015-12-12 19:27 BriedisLT: kas circle
2015-12-12 19:27 Strategas: 02:31:130 (6,7,8,9) -
2015-12-12 19:27 Strategas: čia pvz jau geriau
2015-12-12 19:28 BriedisLT: tai nedaryt didesnio spacingo ten?
2015-12-12 19:28 BriedisLT: nes tie 2x mazdaug
2015-12-12 19:28 Strategas: ne apie spacing kalbu gi
2015-12-12 19:28 Strategas: spacing nesvarbu
2015-12-12 19:29 BriedisLT: vienodai turi sonai but kazkas tokio
2015-12-12 19:30 Strategas: http://i.imgur.com/3xeSwt0.png
2015-12-12 19:30 Strategas: įsivaizduok kad tos raudonos linijos
2015-12-12 19:30 Strategas: vienodas atstumas
2015-12-12 19:30 BriedisLT:

2015-12-12 19:30 BriedisLT: ok
2015-12-12 19:30 Strategas: nu ždž pasitreniruosi suprasi
2015-12-12 19:30 Strategas: monstratos map pažiūrėk
2015-12-12 19:30 Strategas: pamatysi kaip jis deda objects

Slayed_old_1

Slayed_old_1 2015-12-29T14:58:22+00:00

general stuff:

• Change BG size to 1366x768

• Mp3 bitrate is more than allowed maximum (192Kbps):
guilty all the same (ft. rakim).mp3 : 320kbps

• Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitwhistle.wav
normal-slidertick.wav

• Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms:
soft-hitclap.wav

• Delete .osb file because you dont have a SB

map

what about stacking some notes in the beginning? seems like u didnt map this part carefully. overlaps dont work here

00:02:330 (6,3) - or even this 00:03:230 (5,1) - little overlap makes ur map makes ur map messy

00:09:680 (1,4) - probably this can be stacked better too

00:12:830 (6,3) - the curve of this slider seems to be bad imo

00:17:180 (1) - stream. what about to end it here 00:17:780 - and not here 00:17:630. Seems like it will have more sense because i hear sounds up to this 00:17:780 - place

00:18:080 - break cant be in kiai. u should finish kiai here 00:17:630 - or 00:17:780 - here (depends on previous point)

00:44:030 (1,2,4,1) - as u never before used this kind of overlap, probably u should fix it here

also, maybe a blanket here 00:42:830 (1,4) - ?

00:56:030 (1) - moving this note to x=219 y=102 will make a normal triangle

01:30:530 (1,2) - blanket is really needed here

01:36:755 - no need in note here because here is no sound

01:38:426 - this stack can be improved

also, what about reducing SV in this part 01:34:430 ? it probably could be a rest for a player, also this is really quite part

02:03:230 (9) - NC maybe, its a strong big white tick

02:26:780 (6,1) - blanket here ad also i dont like the curve of this slider. seems not carefully a bit

02:41:330 (4,1) - again blanket

03:04:355 (5) - move to x=180 y=112, 03:04:430 (6) - move to x=214 y=119 like here so it will look much better

03:40:580 (2) - move to x=293 y=154 for a better flow

03:53:480 (6) - NC here to avoid 10-11 combos, also here is stong sound, so its gonna be reasonable

04:12:230 (3,1) - this blanket lol. uve never used such balnkets, maybe its nood a good idea to put it here?

04:21:080 (1,2) - correct the overlap

05:14:480 (3,1) - correct the overlap again.

also consider smth about blankets. all your overlaps break the map. and think about these sliders: 05:16:280 (1) - there are 2 much of them (most 1/1 sliders have such curve, this is not working)

gl

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2016-01-15T13:53:36+00:00

M4M
[Guilty]
try to use more color for this map .it's too hard to read the map now :3
00:14:330 add a note for the drum-beat?
00:40:430 (1) - why NC here
00:46:130 (2) - stack with 00:46:730 (2) - it looks neat
01:10:430 (3,4) - changed into 1/1 slider?
01:13:880 add a note for the guitar
01:59:780 (2) - stack with 02:00:230 (4) -
03:26:630 there is a down-beat,try to use the slider here
03:31:430 (4) - ^
03:46:880 add a note or 03:46:730 (2) - change into 1/2 slider
03:56:330 add a note
04:02:630 (2) - it's strange for me to use the whistle here
04:07:430 (2) - ^
04:12:230 (3) - ^
04:17:030 (3) - ^
05:18:680 (1) - CTRL+G
05:24:080 (3,4) - ctrl+g

good luck :3

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2016-01-20T07:07:39+00:00

after I testplayed this, I notice that some part is too repetitive. you used too much 1/2. for example, 00:40:430 and so on. try to use different rhythm like 1/1.
00:15:680 (2,1) - spacing between these two is better farther because (1) has cymbal and strong like you did on 00:14:930 (1,2,1). apply to other similar case.
00:27:530 (1) - remove NC.
00:43:880 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - just did like 00:42:080 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) is better. it's more fit with music.
01:09:830 (1,2) - this is kinda wrong because it's very strong but you use only slider to emphasized it. better change to 4 circles.
01:13:880 - can add note here to make rhythm various.
01:15:080 - ^
01:17:930 (1,1) - unnecessary NC. remove
01:19:431 (1) - remove NC. like you did on 01:28:730 (1,2,3).
01:37:280 (2,3,4,5,6) - umm you can improve this star pattern. it's not symmetry yet.
03:03:530 (2) - unsnapped.
03:22:280 - when I played this part, I think it's too slow and not emphasized the music well. idk

overall this map is quiet great, need to check NC, emphasizing, adjust the pattern to be neater. good luck

George

George 2016-01-21T20:26:40+00:00

00:14:480 (1,1,1) - I don't think the slider shapes like these work too well for what you're doing here, I'd try something else
00:35:630 (1) - nice combo
00:40:730 (1) - remove nc
01:07:130 (3) - I'd like to say this slider is too curved but like, I don't know if it is or not because of your mapping style
01:15:230 (1) - Once again, I don't really like this slider shape here and I'd try to change it to something else
02:44:030 (1) - 1 slider combo pls fix
at 03:43:580 and 03:44:780 I think it'd be better to fill these little breaks in with some circles just so it feels as intense as the rest of the map
04:02:630 (2,1) - blanket feels way too tight
04:05:180 (4,1) - theres a tiny annoying overlap here that I'd try to remove
04:06:680 (1,2,1) - oh god, this doesn't really look good because the first (1) overlaps the (2) and is yucky
04:12:230 (3,1) - gross blanket imo
04:17:030 (3,1) - ^
(ALSO for those tight blankets I got an idea of ctrl g'ing the slider that was being blanketed so it does this
04:43:430 (1,2,1) - try something like this or this

I feel like there can be some more pattern adjustments but like, I'm not BN material so idk if they'd really need to be changed so I didn't mention them. As well NC kinda seems wrong but I cant combo either so we're both on the same level

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2016-01-29T10:44:16+00:00

~~p laceholder~~
edit:
ok tbh idk what to mod ok since i have no complain with your mapping styles. just some suggestions tho

For combo colours, idk maybe you can use some colour like the crystal arrow inside the bg, like this? http://puu.sh/mO0FF/9cfe953d61.png

00:26:630 (4,5,6) - its probably because of my skills but these pattern isnt really good to play because the drums youre following here isnt really strong compared to 00:22:280 (1) - and yet you made (1) into a simple reversed slider. i'd suggest to make 00:26:630 (4,5,6) - a kick slider like 00:31:430 (3) -
00:31:880 (5,1) - only suggestion, these would play better if unstacked
00:35:930 (1) - dang why you'd nc this so idk i'd rather not nc this one
00:40:730 (1) - ^

from 01:24:830 - to 01:31:130 - seems that your comboing pattern is a bit weird for me idk if you did it on purpose then you can ignore these

01:25:430 (1) - remove nc
01:26:930 (1) - ^
01:28:730 (1) - ^
01:29:330 (1) - ^
01:30:530 (1) - ^
01:31:130 (1) - ^

02:42:230 (1) - 02:44:630 (1) - remove nc, same combo pattern like 02:46:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
00:44:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - i suggest to make the rhythm in this pattern to be similiar with 00:42:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - since both of them have the same song verse and suddenly making these two 00:44:180 (1,2) - a circle makes it a bit hard to grasp the music youre following
03:02:030 (1,2,3) - only suggestion, i'd make them like this http://puu.sh/mQfAp/cb081f4917.jpg since the previous pattern 03:00:830 (1,2,3,4) - has a crazy jump. but yea the current one is already fine i guess
03:53:180 (4,5,1,2) - hmm tbh the change of rhythm is a bit awkward here. i'd make 03:53:180 (4,5) - into a single slider like this http://puu.sh/mQfJJ/0298737a33.jpg the new rhythm kinda sync with 03:53:480 (1,2,3,4) - and plays better
04:26:780 (4) - this slider also makes the rhythm a bit awkward. i'd delete this slider and make a slider starts from 04:27:080 - and ends at 04:27:230 - http://puu.sh/mQfV6/b1a3d3bb9b.jpg

ok its 200bpm im hella weak with high-bpm songs
also abt aesthetic, tbh i cant help much since i have no problem with your slider shapes because you used it quite constantly and thats good. but yeah people have different taste so yea
this one 01:15:230 (1) - this one is the one you used a lot. even though it has some red nodes but it still looks straight like a broken twig like srsly. plays fine tho. so idk i'd make it like this http://puu.sh/mQgpv/31292a76cf.jpg or like these shape 05:05:930 (2) - 05:34:430 (1) -

kk thats all
anyway you should post something in my map forums since your dissing kinda helped me with my map. i will post the chatlog once you posted in my map forums https://osu.ppy.sh/s/328682
goodluck~

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Lumin 2016-02-21T16:46:41+00:00

M4M from modreqs

[Guilty]

You should maybe give few tags to your map
00:08:780 (3,4) - I'd put these Like this for consistency, plays better for me
00:09:680 (1) - I don't see kiai fit here, because this is so early and not really the most intense part in the map
00:10:880 (5) - why no NC?
00:13:280 (1,3) - Overlap, easily noticable while playing
00:14:480 (1) - I noticed that you use this slidershape A LOT in this map, you got like 50 sliders like this and I'd change some of them just for variety
00:14:780 (2,2) - stack these or put the later 2 better between those 2s
00:24:530 (1,4) - slight overlap
00:28:430 (5) - why no NC, in this kind of buildup part combos over 10 looks bad
00:34:280 (4,6) - I'd copypaste these
00:22:280 (1) - why the hell are you using 100% sound over this whole section? I'd start from 50% or something and raise it a bit by bit because music is also raising through this part
01:07:130 (3) - looks bad being curved this much
01:20:030 (1) - circle 4 and 2 overlaps this pretty badly
01:26:630 (6,1) - Noticable overlap
01:55:730 (7) - Move this slightly to the left for being linear with stream
02:13:130 (2) - I'd make this lap more with slider
02:22:130 (2,3) - for being pretty silent guitar here I'd remove these and replace them with a slider
02:32:030 (1) - section starting here plays stupid for me because you undermap here a lot and it didn't feel right, you leave pretty much even some strong beats for drum unnoted
02:55:430 (8,9) - I'd use same x with 9 as 8 sliderend
03:05:480 (11) - combo 11 is ugly, try to NC some of those notes in this combo
03:25:430 (4,1) - overlap
03:26:930 (5,3) - why no stack here
03:33:080 (1,2) - slight overlap
03:34:280 (1,2) - lap better or space between
03:40:280 (1,2) - ^
03:50:630 (5,1) - I'd not overlap this, could work better as blanket
03:53:630 (2,5) - easily noticable overlap
04:00:380 (4,1) - looks like overlap while playing
04:02:630 (2,1) - Okay this kind of blankets are just horrible. This same goes for all blankets like this, you never blanket notes so close. This is how blanket should look like
04:06:680 (1,2) - ugh this overlap
04:22:280 (5) - NC here or somewhere else because combo over 10 is ugly~
04:33:080 (1,2) - just don't overlap like this..
04:35:480 (1,2) - looks like overlap
04:47:630 (1,2,3,4) - I'd use MUCH quieter sound in these
04:58:430 (1,2) - Not cool overlap
05:41:255 (4) - stream starting here made so imperfect circle that it made me to cringe
05:51:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe a bit more intensity to this stream, and make kiai end at 7

Pretty awesome map but there were some overlaps that made me cringe.
Good luck!

MokouSmoke

495 posts

Joined May 2013

MokouSmoke 2016-02-21T18:50:27+00:00

from #modreqs
[General]
A couple things to fix if you're trying for rank:

Audio bitrate must be between 128-192kbps. 320 kbps currently isn't rankable
try to find/make BG standard size (1366 x 768)

[Map]

I would recommend using NCs at 00:01:430 (2) - 00:02:780 (3) - instead at the beginning, since the beat here doesn't play like 4/4, so NC on downbeats are a little strange. Actually anywhere that has these extended 3 beat patterns, you could think about changing NC patterns to reflect that
00:13:280 (1,3) - avoid overlap
00:22:280 (1) - maybe triplet?
00:22:430 - rhythm is here is kinda funky in groups of three, but the strong beats land on 00:22:430 - 00:23:330 - 00:23:780 - 00:24:230 - etc... so all of these should be clickable objects to give the right emphasis and follow the music better
00:27:230 (1) - same thing in this section. now there are both drums and piano, so you can try to follow both, but places such as 00:29:030 - 00:29:930 - etc... where the piano and drums align should have a clickable object
00:36:230 (3) - I think the drums here are actually 1/3 not 1/4 beat
00:41:480 (6,1) - prefer bigger spacing here
00:55:430 (3,4,5,6) - ^ should be bigger than 00:54:230 (2,3,4,5) - imo since music intensity is constantly increasing
01:00:492 (1,2) - I think this is actually 1/3 rhythm as well, but you might need to put in a red timing point to fix offset. also recommend using something like this http://puu.sh/ngftF/1f2c25f0a6.jpg to represent the 3 bass hits and then snare drum
01:09:230 - make this clickable
01:14:930 (4,5) - ctrl+g
01:19:730 (1) - 01:20:930 (1) - etc.. some of these NCs seem unnecessary
01:30:081 (2,3,4) - not a fan of linear flow and the spacing between (3,4) feels a little low. suggestion to also help with aesthetics: http://puu.sh/nggbc/dc09ae3fb1.jpg
01:34:430 (1) - i prefer something like [162,273] to keep CCW flow going
01:43:730 (8,9,1) - from the way the stream flows, I would have expected (9) to be where (1) is right now.
01:44:480 (2,3,4,5,6) - also, these almost triangle patterns but not quite are triggering me. suggestion based on above 2 comments: http://puu.sh/nggM6/636474b34a.jpg http://puu.sh/nggOy/007f47c564.jpg
01:55:655 (6,7) - use 1.0x spacing
01:56:180 (2,4) - fix stack
02:00:230 (4) - I wouldn't mind if this was a 5-note stream instead to follow drums
02:12:830 (1) - since there's a beat at 02:12:980 - I would change this into a 1/2 slider instead. same at 02:17:630 (2) -
interesting that you have a slider repeat at 02:32:780 - but the stronger downbeat 02:33:230 - is just a pause. At the very least I would swap them around. same at 02:35:030 (2,3) -
as I'm going through this section, I would also recommend you fill in a lot of those 1/1 gaps to help with flow. I know you're trying to stick to drums as closely as possible, but it wouldn't hurt to map out vocals when the drums are silent
03:06:080 (2,3) - I hear two different sounds here so unstack?
03:11:030 (3) - just an idea, but you could add a red ctrl point to blanket 03:10:430 (1) - better
03:27:080 (1) - maybe mute these sliderends or change volume to like 20% or something
03:51:680 (2) - I'd prefer is these were two notes so 03:51:830 - is clickable. something like this: http://puu.sh/ngikN/27eb6e3f66.jpg
03:54:230 - add finish?
04:02:630 (2,1) - this blanket is so tight, give it some more breathing room http://puu.sh/ngivP/865547eda1.jpg same with all the other patterns
04:04:280 (1,2) - 04:05:180 (4,1) - 04:06:680 (1,2) - more space so they aren't overlapping/touching
04:09:080 (1,2) - yeah, I just noticed you're snapping to 1.5 DS. You should consider upping it to 1.8DS for 1/4 rhythms to avoid these overlaps
04:20:180 - with the addition of the extra drums, I would fill in all the 1/1 gaps with notes or sliders to reflect this. for examples, at 04:22:280 (5) - you could use the same rhythm you used at 04:19:730 (4,1,2) -
04:57:980 (5,6) - prefer bigger spacing here.
04:59:330 (5) - move to [~279,~240] so 04:58:730 (2,3,5) - have equal spacing
05:09:230 (7) - NC
05:30:830 (1,2) - ctrl+g rhythm
05:31:730 (6,1) - ^ putting stuff on downbeats doesn't matter here since the rhythm is in groups of 3 now
05:42:830 - from here on out, I wouldn't mind seeing larger spacing/more 1/4s/more streams in this section since it's the most intense part of the song. Stuff like 05:41:255 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - should be used more frequently or used later in the song so that intensity keeps on building till the end.

Good luck and let me know if you have any questions!

biwegas

13 posts

Joined December 2014

biwegas 2016-07-17T10:50:42+00:00

map is overall good but need some work on sliders you should change some sliders to streams

02:33:808 (7) - change sliders to stream
02:36:208 (7) - ^
02:38:608 (8) - ^
05:47:630 (1,2,3) - ^

Haganenno

247 posts

Joined July 2014

Haganenno 2016-08-30T10:36:53+00:00

This is pretty fucking hard to mod. The map has flow issues and lack of fun elements in it.

[Guilty]
00:22:425 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - everything is going fine and then the flow suddenly changes to 00:24:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this for literally no reason. It feels extremely awkward to play. Even if most people don't notice it, this is pretty much a perfect example of why most of the map feels more tedious than fun (for me).
00:26:008 (1,2) - unneccessary jump out of nowhere. It would be okay if it the flow was good, the short distance between (2) and (3) feels weird when it's an obtuse angle. The jump is executed much better here 00:26:908 (6,7) - though.
Another main reason why the map feels dull is because the most spacing takes place on one dimension. This goes for the entire sections even. 00:26:008 (1,2,3,4,5) - this entire pattern feels so compressed. Space em out in vertical dimension (y-axis). Another perfect example would be 00:29:008 (4) - there is no reason to just not put it a bit more up. 00:29:308 (5,6,1,2) - this feels also compressed. Whatever is not compressed is low spacing for some reason. 00:38:458 (3,4,5) - this is also an example where x axis feels compressed. Just put it a few grid pieces to the left and then much more movement will be involved in the map. More movement = more fun.
00:48:508 (2,3,4,5) - any reason you broke circular flow here?
You don't use spacing correctly to express the way the song goes. For example, 00:50:308 (1,2,3,4,5) - this feels dull. I changed it to something like

SPOILER

- slider ctrl+g'd for flow with the pattern, pattern spaced out and not compressed to express the emo song.
00:53:776 (5) - once again, compressed af
01:07:408 (2,3,4) - no reason to break circular flow again. I did something like this

SPOILER

and it works better.
01:22:408 (1,2,3) - the chorus feels bad because of such patterns. The jumps are fun and cool, but the lack of originality with the flow of sliders makes it stagnant and dull. Also, playing the same uninteresting pattern four times in a 15 second section is a bit cancerous. Change the pattern and make more of them. Make them unique.
01:52:408 (1,2,3) - spacing is used incorrectly to emphasise the pause and the flow on 2-3-4 makes it awkward
01:53:458 (6,1) - massive jump out of nowhere
01:55:408 (3) - another example of how compressed in y axis the map feels
02:03:058 (8,1) - make the angle sharper to make it express the edgyness (pun unintended) of the singer.
02:12:808 (1,2,3,4) - plays pretty ass. Changed it to this

SPOILER

and it seems miles better - emphasises the pause with spacing to 02:13:708 (5) - and flows well into 02:14:008 (1) -
Terrible flow between 02:15:208 (1,2,3) - and 02:15:808 (4,5,6) -
02:17:008 (4,5) - spacing is uninteresting and meh
02:18:658 (6) - the placement is extremely bad for this. Place it somewhere like x:4 y:272, but goddamn this forced overlap has bad spacing, bad readability and bad flow.
02:23:908 (4) - ctrl+g
02:24:508 (7,1) - this slider dynamic is a lot more interesting than. 02:24:808 (1,2,3) - place more interesting slider patterns, just like I told you in the last chorus.
02:25:408 (3,4) - this pattern makes you wait. I don't like waiting. More aim = more action = more fun.
02:28:108 (5) - ctrl+g and space it out and make the entire combo piece more spaced out horizontally to fit with the spacing thematic of the chorus
02:28:708 (4) - ctrl+g
02:29:008 (5,6) - ctrl+g
What I want you to do with these parts I told you to do ctrl+g:

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- 02:27:658 (2,3,4,5) -

- 02:28:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

02:38:908 (8,9,1) - meh lineair flow that is not too optimal

I'm not going to mod the 3rd chorus much because I've already did it twice and it's the same problems repeating over and over - 03:11:908 (4) - this would be better off ctrl+g'd etc etc 03:14:908 (4) - this placement makes the flow look compressed again, you already catch the drill I hope.
03:40:280 - honestly have no idea what to do to make this section any way fun. The entire section of the song is pretty boring because the vocals and the instrumental is boring. Try to get as much circular flow in, not something as fragmented as this - 03:50:330 (3,4,5,6) - something as this which already feels bad because there is movement on x-axis, then it halts and only goes to y axis, then it's again movement in x-axis. Such jumps are anti-flow (watch this

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03:54:980 (2) - this slider changes the angular momentum, yet you map like it hasn't changed.
04:18:380 (2,3) - drum hitsounds when there is no percussion sounds in the song.
04:22:430 (2,3) - bad pause emphasis
04:25:280 (4,5) - bad flow. ctrl+g might be fun, haven't tested though.
04:31:730 (5) - bad pause emphasis, this looks like a jump pattern without pauses and constant 1/2 beat. Make it stand out.
04:35:180 (6) - Syncopation (Sinkopė)
04:36:080 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Syncopation (Sinkopė) - pretty much the strong beat ends on the red tick while you are mapping like syncopation wasn't in the song. You end the sliders on strong beats, that is bad.
04:49:430 (4) - ctrl+g
04:57:680 (3,4,5) - that's pretty cruel
05:00:830 (1) - ctrl+g
05:02:030 (1,2,3) - boring and spacing lowered so much for little reason.
05:18:380 (5,6,1) - circular flow switched to lineair flow here, not entirely good.
05:43:730 - make all the tripples spaced and 05:47:570 (1,2,3,4) - change these into some sort of a very dynamic and spaced stream.

Remember, many problems I've listed I didn't repeat. There are many more problems that are in the map, I just didn't point them out every time because I've mentioned them enough. Good luck

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