Heyo, m4m.
[Easy]
00:13:786 (1) - This might confuse new players since the slider end is touching 00:11:214 (3)
00:27:928 (5) - Maybe for this you can make it a curved slider and do this
http://puu.sh/kMZ5N/8f9c55acb4.jpg Although you'd have to move 00:29:214 (1) a bit
01:03:071 (4) - i'd move this down so the previous slider end points to the circle
01:28:786 (2) - ^
01:36:071 (1) - would remove NC
02:07:357 (2,1) - move a little to the right, i feel like (2) is a bit to close to the previous slider unlike (2,1)
02:32:643 (1,2) - these two look a bit cluttered since the slider ends are so close to the next slider's body compared to the other similar cleaner patterns
02:42:928 (1,2) - ^
[Normal]
I think Normal could use a small boost in OD, like maybe 4 or 3.5
00:39:500 (1,2) - i'd avoid the (1) overlapping the slider body of (2)
00:52:357 (1) - would remove NC
01:15:714 (1) - ^ this one too, it feels random
01:54:928 - Starting at this section, i feel like you should NC every 8 beats instead of 4
02:46:143 (1) - idk about a triplet in normal, but since it's a slider i guess it's fine
[Hard]
00:04:786 (5) - NC
00:12:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't see why this whole pattern uses 1.0x spacing, it sounds just as intense as the previous that used 1.3x spacing
00:31:357 (2,3) - this jump feels random, there's none after that
01:00:071 (1) - i wouldn't put this under the previous slider, i feel it just stops the movement and there's no other one like this in that section so it feels random zz
01:09:500 (3) - i would make this just a slider with no repeat, and put a triplet here 01:10:143 into the kiai and having a circle there would feel better cause there's a finish there.
01:11:964 (5) - this feels random to me since that's the only triplet in this kiai
01:19:786 (1) - remove NC
01:40:786 (4,5,6,7) - since this part is kind of quiet, i'd make this a repeat slider for the stream instead
01:45:500 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i think this is too long of a stream for hard, maybe you can keep the first half and make 01:45:928 (8) a repeat slider for the second half of the stream
02:00:071 (1) - move up one like this
http://puu.sh/kN0xk/2ee9a0ba19.jpg i think the slider end is too close to 01:59:643 (4) and it would make it more neat
02:31:786 (3) - i'd give this a better curve to make the blanket more neater
02:37:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't know about this, it's fine but might be confusing for some
02:46:143 (6,1) - i'd put these under the previous slider or stack them and move them, instead of making it like this because it
might be mistaken for a triple
[Insane]
01:02:214 (2,3) - I feel this should use way bigger spacing, was expecting a jump there
02:17:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - the star here could be bigger imo, it's kind of small compared to the Extra's really huge jump at this spot
[Nanaka's Hall]
00:04:143 (3) - making this end on a white tick feels weird, i'd use a circle to start the stream for the white tick instead
00:45:607 (5) - maybe use circles for this instead, i thought it was a slider jump into the next slider
02:17:643 (3,1) - the low spacing between these two feels awkward to play mixed with the really huge jumps, consider increasing the spacing
02:40:143 (1) - remove NC, similar pattern like 02:22:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) has full 8 combo
02:44:428 (4,1) - maybe make a jump between these instead of stacking since it makes the player stop in the middle of the big jumps, feels weird but up2u
I really liked how this difficulty played, very fun
Well, that's all from me I guess, cool map.
Good luck with the contest!