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Gotta say, your maps are surely improving with each new installment. Nice work! 
The map is actually pretty good design-wise. It's even much better in regards to mapping, so this time I'll actually go further than just modding the general aspects of it.
[Easy Normal]
*Just something to consider: the easy diff. feels a little more like a normal diff than it does an easy diff.; albeit a lower-end normal diff.
---Irregardless, you might consider changing CS to 4 & AR to 5 Already applied
*Try to avoid sliders that repeat more than once, unless they finish a phrase and are directly followed by a break
Timing
---Now, this is going to be pretty vague (almost list-like) simply because there's a lot to cover. If you need me to be more specific, just let me know!
Objects that need to be re-snapped (either forward or backward in time) and\or adjusted (i.e. slider lengths or rhythms)
00:13:361 (2)
00:23:955 (1)
00:37:361 (2) - Move forward & remove repeat. Also (Ctrl+G) it.
00:41:298 (1)
00:42:236 (1)
00:45:891 (1)
00:51:798 (3)
00:51:798 (3)
00:52:548 (1)
00:54:986 (1)
00:55:080 (1) - Just turn this slider into a circle on 00:54:986
00:56:861 (1)
01:02:392 (1)
01:03:798 (2)
01:08:298 (3)
01:10:173 (1)
01:11:298 (1) - End the spinner on 01:14:298
01:20:111 (1) - Remove 1 repeat
01:20:767 (2,3,4)
01:23:673 (2)
01:30:891 (4)
01:34:454 (3)
01:37:455 (7)
01:44:298 (1)
01:45:986 (1) - Try this rhythm {current time in image @ 01:45:986}
01:47:955 (1)
01:49:454 (2)
01:53:110 (1)
01:54:142 (1)
01:55:548 (2) - Shorten slider by 1 tick
01:57:798 (1)
02:03:236 (2)
02:03:892 (3,1,2) - Needs to be revised
02:06:892 (1)
02:08:580 (1)
02:10:173 (1,2)
02:11:861 (1) - End spinner on 02:13:923
02:14:298 (1,2,3) Try this rhythm {current time in image @ 02:19:548}
02:22:173 (1)
02:23:767 (1) - End spinner on 02:26:298 (adjust time point as well)
02:27:423 (1,2)
02:31:361 (2,1)
Hitsounds
*I'll add the more feedback as new updates arrive
The map is actually pretty good design-wise. It's even much better in regards to mapping, so this time I'll actually go further than just modding the general aspects of it.
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---Irregardless, you might consider changing CS to 4 & AR to 5
*Try to avoid sliders that repeat more than once, unless they finish a phrase and are directly followed by a break
Timing
(Already applied)
*Set BSD to 1/2 for the following changes*Keeping the time signature at 4/4,
00:02:673 (2) - Move 2 ticks forward in time
00:06:892 (2,3,4) - Move forward 1 tick in time
00:08:673 (5) - Move forward 2 ticks in time and shorten the slider by 1 tick in time
00:10:455 (6,7) - Move forward 1 tick in time
00:12:892 (1) - ^ (Same as above)
00:13:173 (2) - Move forward 4 ticks in time and remove the repeat
00:15:798 (2) - Move forward 2 ticks in time
00:16:455 (3) - Move forward 1 tick in time
00:17:767 (1) - ^
00:18:330 (2) - ^
00:19:830 (1,2) - ^
00:20:580 (3) - Move forward 3 ticks in time, extend the slider by 1 tick in time, and add a repeat
00:21:423 (4) - Delete this slider
00:22:642 (1) - Move backward 1 tick in time
00:23:205 (3) - Move forward 1 tick in time and shorten the slider by 1 tick in time
00:25:361 (2) - Move forward 2 ticks in time
You can download a sample of what your map would look like with these changes implemented here.
00:02:673 (2) - Move 2 ticks forward in time
00:06:892 (2,3,4) - Move forward 1 tick in time
00:08:673 (5) - Move forward 2 ticks in time and shorten the slider by 1 tick in time
00:10:455 (6,7) - Move forward 1 tick in time
00:12:892 (1) - ^ (Same as above)
00:13:173 (2) - Move forward 4 ticks in time and remove the repeat
00:15:798 (2) - Move forward 2 ticks in time
00:16:455 (3) - Move forward 1 tick in time
00:17:767 (1) - ^
00:18:330 (2) - ^
00:19:830 (1,2) - ^
00:20:580 (3) - Move forward 3 ticks in time, extend the slider by 1 tick in time, and add a repeat
00:21:423 (4) - Delete this slider
00:22:642 (1) - Move backward 1 tick in time
00:23:205 (3) - Move forward 1 tick in time and shorten the slider by 1 tick in time
00:25:361 (2) - Move forward 2 ticks in time
You can download a sample of what your map would look like with these changes implemented here.
---Now, this is going to be pretty vague (almost list-like) simply because there's a lot to cover. If you need me to be more specific, just let me know!
Objects that need to be re-snapped (either forward or backward in time) and\or adjusted (i.e. slider lengths or rhythms)
00:13:361 (2)
00:23:955 (1)
00:37:361 (2) - Move forward & remove repeat. Also (Ctrl+G) it.
00:41:298 (1)
00:42:236 (1)
00:45:891 (1)
00:51:798 (3)
00:51:798 (3)
00:52:548 (1)
00:54:986 (1)
00:55:080 (1) - Just turn this slider into a circle on 00:54:986
00:56:861 (1)
01:02:392 (1)
01:03:798 (2)
01:08:298 (3)
01:10:173 (1)
01:11:298 (1) - End the spinner on 01:14:298
01:20:111 (1) - Remove 1 repeat
01:20:767 (2,3,4)
01:23:673 (2)
01:30:891 (4)
01:34:454 (3)
01:37:455 (7)
01:44:298 (1)
01:45:986 (1) - Try this rhythm {current time in image @ 01:45:986}
01:47:955 (1)
01:49:454 (2)
01:53:110 (1)
01:54:142 (1)
01:55:548 (2) - Shorten slider by 1 tick
01:57:798 (1)
02:03:236 (2)
02:03:892 (3,1,2) - Needs to be revised
02:06:892 (1)
02:08:580 (1)
02:10:173 (1,2)
02:11:861 (1) - End spinner on 02:13:923
02:14:298 (1,2,3) Try this rhythm {current time in image @ 02:19:548}
02:22:173 (1)
02:23:767 (1) - End spinner on 02:26:298 (adjust time point as well)
02:27:423 (1,2)
02:31:361 (2,1)
Hitsounds
(Already applied)
02:31:736 (1) - Finishes are a biiit excessive in volume*You'll needa fix the timing issues listed above in order to implement the following design aspects
*Remember that the following design suggestions are merely of my opinion and are not mandatory
00:06:985 (2) - Remove whistle(W) & add clap(R)
00:07:548 (3) - Add W
00:08:298 (4) - Add R
00:10:548 (6) - Add R & W
00:10:923 (7) - Add R
00:12:986 (1) - Add R
00:13:548 (2) - Add R & W
00:14:298 (1) - Add finish(E) & R
00:14:861 (1) - Add R & w
00:15:423 (1) - Add R
00:15:986 (2) - Remove W & add R
00:16:548 (3) - Add W
00:17:298 (3) - Add E
00:17:861 (1) - Add R
00:18:986 (1) - ^
00:19:548 (1) - Add R & W
00:20:861 (3) - ^
00:21:423 (3) - Add R
00:21:986 (3) - ^
00:22:548 (1) - Add R & W
00:22:923 (2) - Remove E
00:23:298 (3) - Add R & E
00:25:548 (2) - Add R & W
00:25:923 (2) - Add R
00:26:298 (2) - Add R & E
*Remember that the following design suggestions are merely of my opinion and are not mandatory
00:06:985 (2) - Remove whistle(W) & add clap(R)
00:07:548 (3) - Add W
00:08:298 (4) - Add R
00:10:548 (6) - Add R & W
00:10:923 (7) - Add R
00:12:986 (1) - Add R
00:13:548 (2) - Add R & W
00:14:298 (1) - Add finish(E) & R
00:14:861 (1) - Add R & w
00:15:423 (1) - Add R
00:15:986 (2) - Remove W & add R
00:16:548 (3) - Add W
00:17:298 (3) - Add E
00:17:861 (1) - Add R
00:18:986 (1) - ^
00:19:548 (1) - Add R & W
00:20:861 (3) - ^
00:21:423 (3) - Add R
00:21:986 (3) - ^
00:22:548 (1) - Add R & W
00:22:923 (2) - Remove E
00:23:298 (3) - Add R & E
00:25:548 (2) - Add R & W
00:25:923 (2) - Add R
00:26:298 (2) - Add R & E
*I'll add the more feedback as new updates arrive
huehuehuehuehuehue
IRC
Mod
2015-09-28 14:54 TotoiZn: tell me when you want me to start, we have a lot to talk T.T
2015-09-28 14:56 NyarkoO: okay im back
2015-09-28 14:56 TotoiZn: well...
2015-09-28 14:56 TotoiZn: look
2015-09-28 14:57 TotoiZn: first of all
2015-09-28 14:57 TotoiZn: this is a normal, there is not necesary to map in 1/4 http://puu.sh/krqkp/a580276ccb.jpg
2015-09-28 14:57 TotoiZn: you can map this in 1/2
2015-09-28 14:57 TotoiZn: cuz a LOT of your timing probles are for the blue ticks
2015-09-28 14:59 TotoiZn: hello ?
2015-09-28 15:00 NyarkoO: i am here
2015-09-28 15:00 NyarkoO: i just dont know how to respond
2015-09-28 15:00 NyarkoO: haha
2015-09-28 15:00 TotoiZn: oh
2015-09-28 15:00 TotoiZn: well, im gonna post some timings, you reply to me if you can understand me or not, okay ?
2015-09-28 15:00 NyarkoO: sure
2015-09-28 15:01 TotoiZn: this 00:04:455 (3) - should be 00:04:548 (3) -
2015-09-28 15:01 NyarkoO: okay
2015-09-28 15:01 TotoiZn: 00:13:548 (2,1) - this space
2015-09-28 15:01 NyarkoO: whats next
2015-09-28 15:01 TotoiZn: its too big
2015-09-28 15:01 TotoiZn: you need to use Snap Distance in a Normal diff
2015-09-28 15:02 NyarkoO: okay
2015-09-28 15:02 TotoiZn: 00:22:548 (1,2,3,1) -
2015-09-28 15:02 TotoiZn: this dosnt fit well with the song
2015-09-28 15:02 TotoiZn: try to change that
2015-09-28 15:03 TotoiZn: this 00:32:205 (1) - should be 00:32:298 (1) -
2015-09-28 15:03 TotoiZn: same here 00:33:330 (2) -
2015-09-28 15:03 TotoiZn: dont use the blue ticks in a Normal diff
2015-09-28 15:03 TotoiZn: same here 00:35:205 (2) -
2015-09-28 15:04 TotoiZn: and here 00:41:017 (1) -
2015-09-28 15:04 TotoiZn: 00:44:205 (1,1,2,3) -
2015-09-28 15:05 NyarkoO: okaay
2015-09-28 15:05 TotoiZn: the spinner should start here 00:47:298 (1) - and add a note 00:49:923 (1) - there
2015-09-28 15:05 TotoiZn: 00:51:330 (2) - move to the white tick
2015-09-28 15:05 TotoiZn: here too 00:52:455 (1) -
2015-09-28 15:06 TotoiZn: change this 00:54:798 (1) - just a little
2015-09-28 15:06 TotoiZn: 00:56:580 (1) - this should start on the White tick
2015-09-28 15:07 TotoiZn: (i hope youre understanding me xD)
2015-09-28 15:07 NyarkoO: i am
2015-09-28 15:07 NyarkoO: dont worry
2015-09-28 15:07 TotoiZn: okay ! lets continue !
2015-09-28 15:07 TotoiZn: 00:59:111 (2) - move this to the white tick
2015-09-28 15:08 TotoiZn: the spinner should start here 01:00:048 (1) -
2015-09-28 15:08 TotoiZn: 01:02:298 (1) - this finish in a blue tick, change that
2015-09-28 15:08 TotoiZn: 01:03:705 (2) - move to the white tick
2015-09-28 15:08 TotoiZn: 01:05:205 (3) - and here
2015-09-28 15:08 TotoiZn: 01:07:455 (1,2,3,1) - all of them are in blue ticks, move to the white ticks
2015-09-28 15:09 TotoiZn: spinner should finish 01:14:298 (1) - here
2015-09-28 15:10 TotoiZn: 01:20:767 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3) - ALL of them are on blue ticks, move to the white ticks
2015-09-28 15:10 NyarkoO: wait should i move the note on 1:03:705 (2)- forward or backward?
2015-09-28 15:10 TotoiZn: to the big white tick
2015-09-28 15:10 TotoiZn: and 01:05:298 (3) - too
2015-09-28 15:11 TotoiZn: 01:22:455 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - all of them starts or finish on blue ticks, change them
2015-09-28 15:12 TotoiZn: 01:36:423 (5,6,7,8) - here i recommend you this :
2015-09-28 15:12 TotoiZn: http://puu.sh/krrmv/21dcad5048.jpg
2015-09-28 15:12 TotoiZn: 01:44:205 (1,2) - move to white ticks
2015-09-28 15:13 TotoiZn: 01:47:205 (2,1,1,2,1,1) - same here
2015-09-28 15:13 TotoiZn: and here 01:55:548 (2,1) -
2015-09-28 15:13 TotoiZn: 01:58:455 (2,3) -
2015-09-28 15:13 TotoiZn: spinner should start 01:59:298 (1) -
2015-09-28 15:14 TotoiZn: http://puu.sh/krruy/d409e71b30.jpg i recommend you that here 02:03:798 (3,4,5) -
2015-09-28 15:14 TotoiZn: 02:08:486 (1) - move this
2015-09-28 15:14 NyarkoO: gimme asec
2015-09-28 15:14 NyarkoO: im a little late
2015-09-28 15:15 TotoiZn: okay ! tell me and i continue
2015-09-28 15:22 TotoiZn: can i continue ? we're almost on the end
2015-09-28 15:22 NyarkoO: just a little bit
2015-09-28 15:22 TotoiZn: okay !
2015-09-28 15:22 TotoiZn: brb
2015-09-28 15:23 NyarkoO: okaaay
2015-09-28 15:24 NyarkoO: im done with the other things
2015-09-28 15:24 NyarkoO: when you will be back, continue please
2015-09-28 15:26 NyarkoO: brb im gonna get something to eat real quick
2015-09-28 15:28 NyarkoO: okay
2015-09-28 15:28 NyarkoO: back
2015-09-28 15:30 TotoiZn: okay, lets continue
2015-09-28 15:30 TotoiZn: 02:14:204 (1) - move to the white tick
2015-09-28 15:30 TotoiZn: 02:15:611 (2,3) - this sounds really weird, try to change that
2015-09-28 15:30 TotoiZn: 02:18:892 (4) - move this note
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: oh
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: my
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: GOD
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: my game crashed
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: that is amazing...
2015-09-28 15:33 TotoiZn: oh xD
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: i didnt even save!!
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: fuuuuuuuuuuu
2015-09-28 15:33 TotoiZn: omg
2015-09-28 15:33 TotoiZn: well
2015-09-28 15:33 TotoiZn: i have all
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: xDD
2015-09-28 15:33 TotoiZn: when i post the mod IRC inn your topic you can copy everything !
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: please type it in here: t/370448
2015-09-28 15:34 TotoiZn: i'll finsh the mod so then i will post this
2015-09-28 15:34 NyarkoO: maan i hate osu!
2015-09-28 15:34 TotoiZn: xD so sad
2015-09-28 15:34 TotoiZn: well, i will finish !
2015-09-28 15:34 TotoiZn: 02:23:298 (1) - spinner should start here
2015-09-28 15:34 TotoiZn: 02:25:923 (1) - and finish here
2015-09-28 15:35 TotoiZn: 02:29:298 (3,1) - this sounds really weird, try to change a little
2015-09-28 14:56 NyarkoO: okay im back
2015-09-28 14:56 TotoiZn: well...
2015-09-28 14:56 TotoiZn: look
2015-09-28 14:57 TotoiZn: first of all
2015-09-28 14:57 TotoiZn: this is a normal, there is not necesary to map in 1/4 http://puu.sh/krqkp/a580276ccb.jpg
2015-09-28 14:57 TotoiZn: you can map this in 1/2
2015-09-28 14:57 TotoiZn: cuz a LOT of your timing probles are for the blue ticks
2015-09-28 14:59 TotoiZn: hello ?
2015-09-28 15:00 NyarkoO: i am here
2015-09-28 15:00 NyarkoO: i just dont know how to respond
2015-09-28 15:00 NyarkoO: haha
2015-09-28 15:00 TotoiZn: oh
2015-09-28 15:00 TotoiZn: well, im gonna post some timings, you reply to me if you can understand me or not, okay ?
2015-09-28 15:00 NyarkoO: sure
2015-09-28 15:01 TotoiZn: this 00:04:455 (3) - should be 00:04:548 (3) -
2015-09-28 15:01 NyarkoO: okay
2015-09-28 15:01 TotoiZn: 00:13:548 (2,1) - this space
2015-09-28 15:01 NyarkoO: whats next
2015-09-28 15:01 TotoiZn: its too big
2015-09-28 15:01 TotoiZn: you need to use Snap Distance in a Normal diff
2015-09-28 15:02 NyarkoO: okay
2015-09-28 15:02 TotoiZn: 00:22:548 (1,2,3,1) -
2015-09-28 15:02 TotoiZn: this dosnt fit well with the song
2015-09-28 15:02 TotoiZn: try to change that
2015-09-28 15:03 TotoiZn: this 00:32:205 (1) - should be 00:32:298 (1) -
2015-09-28 15:03 TotoiZn: same here 00:33:330 (2) -
2015-09-28 15:03 TotoiZn: dont use the blue ticks in a Normal diff
2015-09-28 15:03 TotoiZn: same here 00:35:205 (2) -
2015-09-28 15:04 TotoiZn: and here 00:41:017 (1) -
2015-09-28 15:04 TotoiZn: 00:44:205 (1,1,2,3) -
2015-09-28 15:05 NyarkoO: okaay
2015-09-28 15:05 TotoiZn: the spinner should start here 00:47:298 (1) - and add a note 00:49:923 (1) - there
2015-09-28 15:05 TotoiZn: 00:51:330 (2) - move to the white tick
2015-09-28 15:05 TotoiZn: here too 00:52:455 (1) -
2015-09-28 15:06 TotoiZn: change this 00:54:798 (1) - just a little
2015-09-28 15:06 TotoiZn: 00:56:580 (1) - this should start on the White tick
2015-09-28 15:07 TotoiZn: (i hope youre understanding me xD)
2015-09-28 15:07 NyarkoO: i am
2015-09-28 15:07 NyarkoO: dont worry
2015-09-28 15:07 TotoiZn: okay ! lets continue !
2015-09-28 15:07 TotoiZn: 00:59:111 (2) - move this to the white tick
2015-09-28 15:08 TotoiZn: the spinner should start here 01:00:048 (1) -
2015-09-28 15:08 TotoiZn: 01:02:298 (1) - this finish in a blue tick, change that
2015-09-28 15:08 TotoiZn: 01:03:705 (2) - move to the white tick
2015-09-28 15:08 TotoiZn: 01:05:205 (3) - and here
2015-09-28 15:08 TotoiZn: 01:07:455 (1,2,3,1) - all of them are in blue ticks, move to the white ticks
2015-09-28 15:09 TotoiZn: spinner should finish 01:14:298 (1) - here
2015-09-28 15:10 TotoiZn: 01:20:767 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3) - ALL of them are on blue ticks, move to the white ticks
2015-09-28 15:10 NyarkoO: wait should i move the note on 1:03:705 (2)- forward or backward?
2015-09-28 15:10 TotoiZn: to the big white tick
2015-09-28 15:10 TotoiZn: and 01:05:298 (3) - too
2015-09-28 15:11 TotoiZn: 01:22:455 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - all of them starts or finish on blue ticks, change them
2015-09-28 15:12 TotoiZn: 01:36:423 (5,6,7,8) - here i recommend you this :
2015-09-28 15:12 TotoiZn: http://puu.sh/krrmv/21dcad5048.jpg
2015-09-28 15:12 TotoiZn: 01:44:205 (1,2) - move to white ticks
2015-09-28 15:13 TotoiZn: 01:47:205 (2,1,1,2,1,1) - same here
2015-09-28 15:13 TotoiZn: and here 01:55:548 (2,1) -
2015-09-28 15:13 TotoiZn: 01:58:455 (2,3) -
2015-09-28 15:13 TotoiZn: spinner should start 01:59:298 (1) -
2015-09-28 15:14 TotoiZn: http://puu.sh/krruy/d409e71b30.jpg i recommend you that here 02:03:798 (3,4,5) -
2015-09-28 15:14 TotoiZn: 02:08:486 (1) - move this
2015-09-28 15:14 NyarkoO: gimme asec
2015-09-28 15:14 NyarkoO: im a little late
2015-09-28 15:15 TotoiZn: okay ! tell me and i continue
2015-09-28 15:22 TotoiZn: can i continue ? we're almost on the end
2015-09-28 15:22 NyarkoO: just a little bit
2015-09-28 15:22 TotoiZn: okay !
2015-09-28 15:22 TotoiZn: brb
2015-09-28 15:23 NyarkoO: okaaay
2015-09-28 15:24 NyarkoO: im done with the other things
2015-09-28 15:24 NyarkoO: when you will be back, continue please
2015-09-28 15:26 NyarkoO: brb im gonna get something to eat real quick
2015-09-28 15:28 NyarkoO: okay
2015-09-28 15:28 NyarkoO: back
2015-09-28 15:30 TotoiZn: okay, lets continue
2015-09-28 15:30 TotoiZn: 02:14:204 (1) - move to the white tick
2015-09-28 15:30 TotoiZn: 02:15:611 (2,3) - this sounds really weird, try to change that
2015-09-28 15:30 TotoiZn: 02:18:892 (4) - move this note
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: oh
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: my
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: GOD
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: my game crashed
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: that is amazing...
2015-09-28 15:33 TotoiZn: oh xD
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: i didnt even save!!
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: fuuuuuuuuuuu
2015-09-28 15:33 TotoiZn: omg
2015-09-28 15:33 TotoiZn: well
2015-09-28 15:33 TotoiZn: i have all
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: xDD
2015-09-28 15:33 TotoiZn: when i post the mod IRC inn your topic you can copy everything !
2015-09-28 15:33 NyarkoO: please type it in here: t/370448
2015-09-28 15:34 TotoiZn: i'll finsh the mod so then i will post this
2015-09-28 15:34 NyarkoO: maan i hate osu!
2015-09-28 15:34 TotoiZn: xD so sad
2015-09-28 15:34 TotoiZn: well, i will finish !
2015-09-28 15:34 TotoiZn: 02:23:298 (1) - spinner should start here
2015-09-28 15:34 TotoiZn: 02:25:923 (1) - and finish here
2015-09-28 15:35 TotoiZn: 02:29:298 (3,1) - this sounds really weird, try to change a little
Timing :
Just my timing preference, may or may not clash with your design.
00:13:548 (2) move 2 ticks right.
00:23:955 (1) move 1 ticks left, lengthen the slider by 2 ticks (so it began and end on red)
00:32:298 (1) lengthen the slider by 1 tick. (end on red)
00:37:361 (2) move 2 ticks right, shorten the length to 5 ticks (began and end on white)
00:45:892 (1) move 1 tick right.
00:51:798 (3) move 2 tick right,
00:52:548 (1) lengthen the slider by 2ticks (end on white)
00:53:205 (2) move 6 ticks right , shorten by 1 tick.
01:02:298 (1) move 1 tick left , lengthen by 1 tick
02:04:361 (1) lengthen by 2 ticks.
02:05:111 (2) move 2 ticks right , shorten by 1 (began and end on white)
02:08:580 (1) move 3 ticks right , shorten by 1
02:15:705 (2) move 1 tick right
02:17:205 (3) move 1 tick right
02:18:986 (4) - 02:20:111 (3) move everything 2 ticks to the right.
00:23:955 (1) move 1 ticks left, lengthen the slider by 2 ticks (so it began and end on red)
00:32:298 (1) lengthen the slider by 1 tick. (end on red)
00:37:361 (2) move 2 ticks right, shorten the length to 5 ticks (began and end on white)
00:45:892 (1) move 1 tick right.
00:51:798 (3) move 2 tick right,
00:52:548 (1) lengthen the slider by 2ticks (end on white)
00:53:205 (2) move 6 ticks right , shorten by 1 tick.
01:02:298 (1) move 1 tick left , lengthen by 1 tick
02:04:361 (1) lengthen by 2 ticks.
02:05:111 (2) move 2 ticks right , shorten by 1 (began and end on white)
02:08:580 (1) move 3 ticks right , shorten by 1
02:15:705 (2) move 1 tick right
02:17:205 (3) move 1 tick right
02:18:986 (4) - 02:20:111 (3) move everything 2 ticks to the right.
Just my timing preference, may or may not clash with your design.