Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Halozy - Brilliant Colors [OsuMania Modding]

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Beatmap Nominator Modding / Iconning

Mod Requested by Feerum

[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: 1370 (fix this after fix mod)
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Will be changed
- Folder’s problem: Seems like soft-hitwhistle.wav is used but where? i can't find it // 00:28:432 (28432|0,28852|1,29272|2) - etc. On the Red ticks o:
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

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“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kuds if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~
means I will come back

[Thousand Colors]

SPOILER

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  It looks good, very nice! I will just points out some stuffs
  00:13:108 (13108|1,13108|3,13108|2) - hmm ... on here cymbal sound very lightly, i suggest you to add 2 notes only I will keep here the 3 noted chord to emphasize the difference. I Mapped the claps with 2 Notes and this is audible different
  00:14:996 (14996|2,15206|2) - this jack mean nothing, i recomended you to move 00:15:206 (15206|2) - to 4, for pitch and balance Sure
  00:27:164 - i would suggest you this for hand feeling but also for rhythm, it would be good if you follow the main kick on 4th column: http://puu.sh/mKiLz/8e4ba5f76b.jpg Thats really nice i take this
  00:50:241 - how about this one: http://puu.sh/mKiPb/9395e8cfb7.jpg Nice! Take this
  01:13:859 - switch those notes, for paterns also for balance i don't see the problem here
  01:19:821 - Why this flow changes on here? it's sounds exactly same as 01:18:667 Actually i don' know anymore haha. Changed(78667|2,78772|1,78877|3,78982|0,79087|2,79192|1,79297|3,79401|0,79506|2,79611|1,79716|3,79821|0) - i suggest you to change them back to [1324], also if you keep, you may give players have a weird feeling of 1/4 and 1/8 because of http://puu.sh/mKiX2/9255abf8f7.png I keep. somehow i like these 1324
  01:36:185 (96185|2) - move this to 1 for balance, it looks hard: 01:35:975 (95975|3,96185|2,96394|2) - okay
  02:01:569 (121569|0,121569|1,121569|2) - i know you follow both vocals and high-up sound but 3 notes here is not good imo, i suggest you to remove one note removed one
  02:22:548 (142548|1,142653|2,142758|1) - how about: 1-4-1, it sound different than 02:22:968 (142968|2,143073|1,143178|2) - tho Yeah thats nice
  02:48:353 - i suggest you to follow rhythm-only on here, it sounds like the music paused on here (don't count that bass) so i would suggest you this: http://puu.sh/mKjjH/a2b45c1eaf.jpg (you can rearrange by your own ideas) I think the missing note in the Middle plays kinda weird but i rearranged it a little bit better to music
  03:30:311 (210311|0,212828|3) - it sounds like, pitch is going up and then down, i would recomended you to Ctrl + H this, which suitable for this part Sure
  04:00:940 (240940|1) - this one sound different than 03:59:681 (239681|1,239891|1,240101|1,240415|1,240625|1) - then i suggest you to Ctrl + G this 04:00:940 (240940|1,241150|3) - Changed
  04:20:031 (260031|0) - for pitch, you must move this to 3, and also you do them the same after this spot Okay
  05:01:779 (301779|0,301832|1,301884|2,301936|3,301989|0,302041|1,302094|2,302146|3,302199|0,302251|1,302304|2,302356|3,302408|0,302461|1,302513|2,302566|3,302618|0,302671|1,302723|2,302776|3,302828|0,302880|1,302933|2,302985|3,303038|0,303090|1,303143|2,303195|3,303248|0,303300|1,303353|2,303405|3) - keep continue this may not good, how about change the half of it to [12] [43]: http://puu.sh/mKjEY/b17647a433.jpg okay

[Overall]
Halozy, as always, a very good song, compared with it is an excellent beatmap made by Feerum, great job Thank you >w<
Catch me up anytime you done fixing

puxtu wrote:

nice first bubble from a non-mania ex-bn you have there feerum

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  [General]

1. As KK mentioned before, so i checked it again and there is no issues here but . . .
   [Hitsound]
2. first, your soft-hitfinish seems unbalanced between L & R sound but i think it just small different since i still can hear it feels like normally does, will be more good if you can balance it too
3. second, Cheer.wav is have much blank spot in the end, so maybe you need to cut it ==> here is my fix it can be useful to reduce the filesize too
   
   
   |1|2|3|4|
4. 00:23:817 (23817|2,23922|1,24027|0,24027|2,24132|3,24237|1) - i can really sure this part is have different sound/pitch from this part 00:22:139 - i would like suggest to use diifferent pattern form for that
5. 00:35:146 (35146|1,35356|0) - and 00:41:859 (41859|1,42069|2) - will be feels more good if you put them in same column, like your other paet with this kind of sound too
6. 01:00:635 (60635|1) - move to 3? hard to be explained but it just feels like on this part 01:00:950 (60950|1,61055|2,61160|3,61370|2,61474|1,61579|0) - with have different form like you do on 01:05:146 -
7. 01:35:356 (95356|3,95985|3) - is that LN is have same sound ? but i feel it just like similar on here 01:42:069 (102069|2,102698|3) -
8. 01:58:432 (118432|3,118432|2,118642|0,118642|1) - not make this same column like previous part ? or you can make a difference on this pattern 01:55:076 - 01:51:719 -
9. 02:25:915 (145915|3) - better move this one to 3 since it have different sound with this pattern 02:26:125 (146125|1,146125|3) - just i feel weird on that ><
10. 02:29:691 (149691|1,149796|2,149901|3) - Ctrl G . . . it seems more better since we have vocal impact in here 02:29:481 (149481|3,149481|2) - so, using 1/2 jack is very good to express that sound i think
11. 02:36:509 (156509|1) - just my feeling, but this one is more balance if you move that to 4 . . . because you used too much 2nd column in this time
12. 02:50:775 (170775|2,170880|1,170880|2) - dude, this is painful to press xD
13. 03:03:048 (183048|2,183048|0,183153|1,183153|3) - Ctrl G, it just feels like same sound on this part 03:03:572 (183572|1,183572|3,183677|0,183677|2) - and it useful to avoid overused note on 2nd column
14. 04:08:293 - the LN seems different sound, i suggest to map something like this http://puu.sh/pE8Jq/b2d0fc7cea.jpg you can see the same kick sound is have same place too
15. 04:10:810 (250810|0,251020|2) - Ctrl G, same reason as above ^
16. i really loves the kiai end parts :3
    
    [Hitsound]
17. 01:47:104 - 01:47:838 - 01:48:048 - 01:48:153 - 01:48:363 - 01:48:572 - add drum sampleset for the kick sound here
18. 03:16:055 - 03:16:789 - 03:16:999 - 03:17:104 - 03:17:314 - 03:17:523 - same as above ^
19. 05:28:642 - hmm ^

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

aaaa marked for bub #2
damn, this take 15 days . . . i'm sorry // np dude! It was month bubbled so i can wait few more days ahah

Bubble #2 Check

• 
  [General]

1. As KK mentioned before, so i checked it again and there is no issues here but . . .
   [Hitsound]
2. first, your soft-hitfinish seems unbalanced between L & R sound but i think it just small different since i still can hear it feels like normally does, will be more good if you can balance it too
3. second, Cheer.wav is have much blank spot in the end, so maybe you need to cut it ==> here is my fix it can be useful to reduce the filesize too fixed both HS
   
   
   |1|2|3|4|
4. 00:23:817 (23817|2,23922|1,24027|0,24027|2,24132|3,24237|1) - i can really sure this part is have different sound/pitch from this part 00:22:139 - i would like suggest to use diifferent pattern form for that Arranged this one
5. 00:35:146 (35146|1,35356|0) - and 00:41:859 (41859|1,42069|2) - will be feels more good if you put them in same column, like your other paet with this kind of sound too Both have here clearly different sound so same column would be wrong
6. 01:00:635 (60635|1) - move to 3? hard to be explained but it just feels like on this part 01:00:950 (60950|1,61055|2,61160|3,61370|2,61474|1,61579|0) - with have different form like you do on 01:05:146 - Yep, seems cool for me
7. 01:35:356 (95356|3,95985|3) - is that LN is have same sound ? but i feel it just like similar on here 01:42:069 (102069|2,102698|3) - They have same sound so i arranged the 2nd LNs
8. 01:58:432 (118432|3,118432|2,118642|0,118642|1) - not make this same column like previous part ? or you can make a difference on this pattern 01:55:076 - 01:51:719 - Arranged!
9. 02:25:915 (145915|3) - better move this one to 3 since it have different sound with this pattern 02:26:125 (146125|1,146125|3) - just i feel weird on that >< Arranged in other way since even in low bpm i wanted to avoid "tri-jacks"
10. 02:29:691 (149691|1,149796|2,149901|3) - Ctrl G . . . it seems more better since we have vocal impact in here 02:29:481 (149481|3,149481|2) - so, using 1/2 jack is very good to express that sound i think Done
11. 02:36:509 (156509|1) - just my feeling, but this one is more balance if you move that to 4 . . . because you used too much 2nd column in this time Keep because same pitch
12. 02:50:775 (170775|2,170880|1,170880|2) - dude, this is painful to press xD idk why but i think it was the mini-jack, right? If yes. I fixed this already before but it wasn't updated xP
13. 03:03:048 (183048|2,183048|0,183153|1,183153|3) - Ctrl G, it just feels like same sound on this part 03:03:572 (183572|1,183572|3,183677|0,183677|2) - and it useful to avoid overused note on 2nd column Changed
14. 04:08:293 - the LN seems different sound, i suggest to map something like this http://puu.sh/pE8Jq/b2d0fc7cea.jpg you can see the same kick sound is have same place too Basically you are right, the two LN's there have different sound, but i gonna keep it because this part is overall to PR mapped so i think it's okay when i keep only these two LN's on same col
15. 04:10:810 (250810|0,251020|2) - Ctrl G, same reason as above ^ Here i change it
16. i really loves the kiai end parts :3 Thanks (:
    
    [Hitsound]
17. 01:47:104 - 01:47:838 - 01:48:048 - 01:48:153 - 01:48:363 - 01:48:572 - add drum sampleset for the kick sound here
18. 03:16:055 - 03:16:789 - 03:16:999 - 03:17:104 - 03:17:314 - 03:17:523 - same as above ^
19. 05:28:642 - hmm ^ Thanks for mention it. Actually i didn't hitsound single notes in the 1/8 intentionally because it could sound strange but i decided to add these hitsounds so yeah. Done!

OK just that from me . . . call me back after fix

Julie wrote:

Month of waiting

00:31:370 (31370|1) - Hmmm, did you maybe forgot your whistle here for that hithat? Since you kept your whistle consistent, and your soft-hitnormal is only use on those double stairs + each new stanza on that part. Oh you got me, i really forgot. Added

00:50:775 (50775|0,50985|0) - Move one of those on the 3rd column, since 00:28:223 - to 00:51:719 - you never did stack a end of a double + the begining of a double in the same column. Also your probably having a bit too much of note on the 1st column 00:50:251 (50251|0,50460|0,50775|0,50985|0,51300|0,51509|0) - XD. Oki moved c:

01:35:251 (95251|0,95251|1) - Woops forgot your drum sampleset on one of those note for the drum xP. Awww... added xD

02:09:237 - You've been matching the synth a lots, mostly with those double, your probably more focus on that. 02:09:237 - The triplet here is pretty loud and clear, maybe add a note? The melody gets hear clearly louder and that's what i wanted to Map, follow the clear melody now. Basically for variety since the map could get pretty boring otherwise that's why i want to keep this. I also did this in other Part of the map

03:04:202 (184202|0,184202|1) - Same mistake as 01:35:251 (95251|0,95251|1) - , pretty sure this is not intentional, maybe some mistake from copy pasta or inatention, since the drum still continue here. Also you did continue the drum hitsound at 05:16:789 - . Nyaa.. just a mistake qwq added!

03:52:978 (232978|2,232978|0) - Make one of those notes a drum sampleset. Same drum sound as those you put a drum sampleset xP Done!

03:53:188 (233188|0,233397|1,233502|2,233712|1,233922|1,234027|0) - So yeah I kinda notice your not really a huge PR fan for this part, but personnally I find it less random when you at least try to match the same sound like you did here 03:59:691 (239691|1,239901|1,240111|1,240216|2,240425|1,240635|1,240740|2) - , which feel a bit more cool. That's just my opinion. Thanks for notice it. Yeah i kinda "forgot" a bit to re-arrange the beginning since later i also tried to follow pitch, maybe it was just hard to hear for me back than. I tried to arrange as good as i can to PR now! At least, same sounds -> same column. Especially in such a "calm" and slow part this is pretty cool!