1. Hana (3.21 stars, 285 notes)
2. Namida (4.88 stars, 587 notes)

kioukiou wrote:

IRC modded(Timing、SB).

star.

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Think you could find an image for comboburst-0 that doesn't have an edge cut off like the other two? It sticks out against them a bit.
The first red timing section should be at 110 BPM. Don't forget to readjust your sliders (I'd just set the entire section to .5 for an easy fix, hehe) good idea

[Storyboard]
Your strobes seem to be going off a little early. Please double check these so they they occur right on the beat instead of a little before it.
It'd be cool if you cut along the gray line instead of straight down for 5, 5-1, and 5-2. :< :( poor SB

[Hana]
In general, your combos run fairly long. Here are some suggestions: thanks your suggestions

SPOILER

00:09:174 (4) - New combo?
01:03:151 (5) - New combo?
01:16:591 (2) - New combo
01:24:271 (8) - New combo.
01:25:231 (1) - Remove new combo
01:35:791 (3) - New combo
01:40:351 (1) - New combo
Anyway, maybe try to follow that pattern of new combos and see what you can find.

There are a lot of soft finishes you could have used throughout the difficulty that you missed out on. Maybe give it a listen and see where you can add them?
04:32:431 (2) - Eeh, just delete this, and add a note at 04:33:871. Do the added note as a new combo. Hrm, although the slight ritardando makes things a bit iffy... maybe do the added note and the last note as a slider? ok.

A nice normal diff here.

[Namida]
01:25:951 (1) - Remove new combo ok
Your combo usage is so weird to me, haha. Well, nothing else to really pick at really except the lack of finish usage.

Nice and relaxing pair of maps here~

orioncomet wrote:

[Namida]
01:19:831 (2) - sound wrong to me (listen to the drum), move this note 1/4 toward (01:19:951) and replace sound whitle with clap, dont forgot about spacing change.
04:06:871 (7) - ^ (04:06:991)
04:34:431 (1) - this note sound 1/8 to me lol T_T 1/6 is a bit late, use beat snap divisor 1/8 and move it to 04:34:411

+_+ Hana is fine ~

Garven wrote:

Sorry for the delays. ;_;

[Storyboard]
The strobes are still going off a little early. If you fixed this, you need to do a full resubmit for it to be changed here. Same goes with any skin changes and such.
02:25:711 - Make the image transition here instead of the really early point where it's at right now.
02:48:751 - And the last transition should be here instead of where it's at now. Feels unnatural right now.
03:40:591 - Image transition here
03:48:271 - ^

[Skin]
The comboburst-0 is the same... did you change it like you said you did and forget to full-resubmit?

[Hana]
03:38:191 - Remove the kiai here and move it to 03:40:591 -
03:56:431 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner.
04:17:071 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - <3 this pattern btw
04:26:191 - Maybe add a note here? The way the slider before this spot ends sounds odd.

[Namida]
01:00:991 (6) - That overlap. :< Lower the 6 1 grid, and raise the 7 one grid, 8 right two grids
03:38:191 - Kill this kiai, move it to 03:40:591 -
03:58:231 (7) - Raise one grid? The overlap is still bad, but it looks better there.
04:34:831 (1) - Hrm, maybe start this at 04:35:071 - ?

Get the storyboard fixed up. :<

Garven wrote:

[Skin]
Crop the unnecessary transparency from comboburst-1 and comboburst-2 fixed

[Storyboard]
Okay, with strobes, you want them to START on the beat, not peak on the beat. So:

01:08:911 - Strobe starts here
01:16:591 - ^
01:24:271 - ^
01:31:951 - ^ all fixed

01:06:991 - Maybe start the bg transform here? Feels really early at it's current spot. OK ~

[Hana]
Okay, massive combo mod coming your way here: ;_;

SPOILER

00:25:711 (1) - Remove new combo K
00:26:671 (2) - New combo K
00:28:591 (5) - New combo K
00:47:791 (7) - New combo K
00:50:191 (1) - Remove new combo K
00:51:631 (4) - New combo K
01:02:431 (4) - New combo either here or on the next slider K
01:16:591 (6) - New combo K
01:23:311 (6) - New combo K
01:25:231 (1) - Remove new combo K
01:35:791 (3) - New combo K
01:40:111 (4) - New combo? NO
02:04:591 (6) - New combo K
02:06:031 (1) - Remove new combo K
02:06:511 (2) - New combo K
02:21:871 (4) - New combo K
02:48:031 (1) - Remove new combo K
02:48:751 (2) - New combo K
02:52:591 (7) - New combo K
02:53:071 (1) - Remove new combo K
03:24:751 (1) - Remove K
03:25:231 (2) - New K
03:36:751 (4) - New K
03:59:791 (5) - New K
04:02:191 (1) - Remove K
04:03:631 (4) - New NO. but new combo in 04:02:671
04:10:111 (4) - New K
04:12:271 (1) - Remove K
04:15:151 (1) - New K
04:17:071 (1) - Remove NO
04:23:071 (6) - Remove NO

It's kind of inconsistent still, but the way you mapped some parts made it kind of impossible without making things a bit too long.

[Namida]
01:00:991 (6,7,8) - I'm not sure what it is about these, but it never feels right to me. No need to change it, but I thought I'd mention it in case you agree. OK
01:33:871 (7,8,9,10) - I keep wanting to play these with the big vocal hits. hmm...ok

Anyway, I mostly want the strobes fixed. They still just look wrong to me.

qinche wrote:

i found no error with the sb, star =3