yut wrote:

:)

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:59:249 (1,1,2) - I think they play/sound better this way:
   
   SPOILER

   
   01:08:652 (5) - weird position, how about:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Approach Rate -1, feels more balanced.
   00:52:533 (4,5,6) - 02:18:503 (4,5,6) - i found these quite unintuitive to read, changing the spacing only seems not to be enough. Try a different shape instead of a line?
   
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   00:54:995 (2) - 02:20:965 (2) - trust me, a whole lot of people will misread this spacing as a 1/1 instead of a 3/2. Either have (2) start 1/2 before or move it somewhere else.

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   00:36:189 (3,4) - 00:44:249 (4,5) - 01:07:533 (4,5) - 02:02:159 (3,4) - 02:10:219 (4,5) - 02:33:503 (3,4) - 02:44:249 (4,5) - i could play these because i expected them to be a 1/2, but the pattern suggests that this is a 3/4 as it is spaced like all the 3/4 objects. Anyway, seeing that it's used in a consistent way (and exactly like it was used in the Patchouli's Insane) that actually plays intutively so i guess you can leave it. I wanted to give you my impressions so that you can decide what to do.
   
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Overall Difficulty +1
   00:47:831 - 02:13:801 - most players would expect a beat here
   
3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   00:50:070 (6,1) - unintuitive jump for such a regularly spaced map, 00:50:070 (6) should be closer to (1) because the spacing between 00:49:622 (5,6) is wrong too.

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:25:443 - aw i expected a beat here, you broke the flow ;~;

1. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   Map this to the end. I mean, seriosly, do it because it's great.

• Nothing to say.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- loli_milk's Easy:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:59:249 (1,1,2) - I think they play/sound better this way: Done!
   
   SPOILER

   
   01:08:652 (5) - weird position, how about: Done!
   
   SPOILER

   

- Normal:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Approach Rate -1, feels more balanced. Done!
   00:52:533 (4,5,6) - 02:18:503 (4,5,6) - i found these quite unintuitive to read, changing the spacing only seems not to be enough. Try a different shape instead of a line? Done!
   
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   00:54:995 (2) - 02:20:965 (2) - trust me, a whole lot of people will misread this spacing as a 1/1 instead of a 3/2. Either have (2) start 1/2 before or move it somewhere else. Done!

- Hard:

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   00:36:189 (3,4) - 00:44:249 (4,5) - 01:07:533 (4,5) - 02:02:159 (3,4) - 02:10:219 (4,5) - 02:33:503 (3,4) - 02:44:249 (4,5) - i could play these because i expected them to be a 1/2, but the pattern suggests that this is a 3/4 as it is spaced like all the 3/4 objects. Anyway, seeing that it's used in a consistent way (and exactly like it was used in the Patchouli's Insane) that actually plays intutively so i guess you can leave it. I wanted to give you my impressions so that you can decide what to do. Done!
   
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Overall Difficulty +1 Done!
   00:47:831 - 02:13:801 - most players would expect a beat here Done!
   
3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   00:50:070 (6,1) - unintuitive jump for such a regularly spaced map, 00:50:070 (6) should be closer to (1) because the spacing between 00:49:622 (5,6) is wrong too. Done!

- Patchouli's Insane:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:25:443 - aw i expected a beat here, you broke the flow ;~; Done!

- Rai Rai Dryrice:

1. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   Map this to the end. I mean, seriosly, do it because it's great.

- 31's Taiko:

• Nothing to say.

Send me a PM after you fixed what needs to be fixed.

Qrool wrote:

I finished all the modifications.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Well, actually Rai Rai Dryrice is still half mapped and 00:47:831 & 02:13:801 in Hard are still not fixed D:

If you don't want to map Rai Rai Dryrice until the end at least tell me why D:

About 00:47:831 & 02:13:801, it's ok if you don't add these beats, but at least restore the one at 02:13:466, it's weird not to have that one at least.

Qrool wrote:

If there is no change in difficulty.
*1 If I edit to map at 02:59:697. 21M Score to more than.
*2 Play time is short. However, this map is difficult.
I think these two points(*1,2), I think No change.

I don't make for App

If I do not change, Bad?

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

It's not a real problem if you don't want to change them, what i meant is that writing "Done!" when you actually didn't fix is misleading.
That's why i asked for an explanation: as long as you give me a good reason for refusing something i won't force anything to you.

P.S.: if you want to you can have the Rai Rai Dryrice approved and the other difficulties ranked, by the way.

Nothing else for me, so let's try.

James2250 wrote:

-I can almost let Easy being half mapped go (although I would prefer if it was fully mapped as the mp3 really isn't that long) but why have the hardest difficulty in this mapset only being half mapped, I saw your explanation for it but it really doesn't look good

-What do the last 3 difficulties have an epilepsy warning turned on for?

Normal:
-Remove audio lead-in as it isn't needed Fixed
02:00:592 (3,1) - the repeat is half hidden, might as well be fixed　Fixed

Hard:
-Remove audio lead-in as it isn't needed Fixed
00:42:234 (6,1) - space out more if possible Fixed
02:04:846 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
02:11:786 (7,1) - ^ Fixed

Patchouli's Insane:
00:16:712 (1) - go through and make sure all spinners have a new combo set on them　Fixed
00:55:443 (2,3,4) - make spacing equal Fixed
01:06:861 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal Fixed
01:11:339 (4,1) - some notes like this could look better not overlapping with sliders Fixed

Rai Rai Dryrice:
-Remove audio lead-in as it isn't needed Fixed
But pretty hard to read patters but I don't see anything too badly done

Fight69 wrote:

Nice

R a r e wrote:

:oops:

Saten-san wrote:

Normal:
00:19:398 (2,3) - fix spacing? Done!
00:58:354 (4) - ^ Done!
01:06:861 (1,2) - 1 grid left? Done!
01:19:398 (5) - last curve-point 1 grid down?Done!
01:45:368 (2,3) - fix spacing Done!
02:24:324 (4) - ^ Done!
02:32:831 (1,2) - 1 grid right Done!
02:45:368 (5) - last curve-point 1 grid down Done!

Hard:
00:24:772 (7) - fix spacing (distance spacing 0,9x) Done!
00:41:339 (4) - ^ (0,8x) Done!
01:18:503 (3) - !?
02:09:883 (3) - move this somewhere else? Done!
02:46:488 (3) - fix spacing (distance spacing 0,9x) Done!

Insane:
00:26:115 (3) - 1 grid up Done!
00:34:175 (4) - 1 grid down (lv4) Done!
00:34:622 (1) - 1 grid right (lv3) Done!
00:44:921 (5) - 1 grid up (lv4) Done!
01:04:846 (5) - 1 grid down (lv3) Done!
01:52:533 (4) - 1 grid down (lv4) Done!
02:09:324 (3) - 1 grid right (lv3) Done!
02:12:458 (5) - 1 grid left Done!
02:12:906 (7) - ^ Done!
02:43:577 (1) - 3rd curve-point 1 grid up Done!
02:55:891 (3) - 1 grid down Done!

Rai Rai
00:19:622 (7) - 1 grid down? Done!


(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ ~~★

Where is the bubble~?

01:18:503 (3) - !?

SPOILER

-Moccha_chii- wrote:

hashimoto miyuki have a nice sound :3
star this map ! I hope this ranked faster