Shiirn wrote:

Suggestions
Major suggestions
Unrankable issues

Clever strats for 2 kudosu! Baka!

Stars

1. 00:14:745 (7) - You use this pattern a lot, and I feel like it'd work better if this note is stacked the same as the rest of the pattern, and not autostacked. - Fix
2. 00:16:807 (2) - not 0.21x, might be better to just have 1,2 and 3,4 parallel or copy/pasted - Fix
3. 00:28:620 (1) - Continue the stack below the previous 3. That'd put this, this combo's 2, and the previous 4 at a slightly lower bit, bear in mind. - I don't really get it, and I don't see anything wrong here :c
4. 00:34:245 (4) - Might not be my place to judge, but this note feels like it should be spaced further considering the kicks have always had spacing/angle changes before this. Up to you, though, as this is a transitional combo. - Since this circle is a part of a pattern from this music part, I prefer keep the spacing constant as a transition as you said.
5. 00:38:932 (7) - even up the distance between the starts of 6,7,1. - Tried to adjust it :c
6. 01:58:620 (1) - This isn't symmetrical or even - Fix
7. 02:06:120 (1) - The curve here only makes it look weird, the next two sliders dont even have curves. - Fix
8. 02:13:620 - This is personal preference, but I seriously think there should be a click here. The jump from 6-7 feels much more forced and awkward than 3-4 as well. - I didn't make it play because the sound is mostly a bass and like it was muffled, that's why I put directly a spinner because it fit more it.
9. 03:00:120 - ^ re: click - Fix
10. 03:13:620 (1,2,3) - I freaking hate these kinds of sliders. With your current OD, the border for 100s is +- 74.5ms. (why is it 8.1 anyway? lol) but these sliders only last for 46 milliseconds! This means that there is a 30-ish millisecond window where a player can click and instead of getting a 100, they break for no reason - you can't click a slider after it's over! This heavily encourages clicking early, and anyone who has played these types of notes knows it. It's fine for speedier maps that use them over and over - at that point it becomes about consistent click accuracy and low unstable rate - but for large pauses for over half a second? It's just stressful, and, if I may, plays like ass. I'd stick to circles. - I want to keep them, that's a originality I put on this map when I did this contest, and judges like it so I want to keep them.
11. 04:13:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These feel really randomly placed and the distance snap changes also feel random >.< 1.4 and 2.0 changing fairly inconsistently is weird. - I like than no one can see how I construct this. It's just splited into kick + snare and spaced each of them to create emphasis on this. That's not random AT ALL !
12. 04:16:854 - screw your random stream section i always combobreak here - Hehe :3

Aldwych wrote:

Bon je te dois bien ca.
Note que je ne suis plus du tout un expert des std et que je suis passé au coté obscur du tacos hue.

[Stars]

00:00:120+ : Je comprends pas trop pourquoi tu met les extremes assez forts, ok ils doivent être audible mais la je les trouve trop justement tbh. Même a 5% tu les entends, à la rigueur 10 si tu veux être safe. - Moins fort now.
00:06:120 ! C'est très le nazisme mais tu vois que le cercle est pas ultra parfait sur la gauche, surement du au point rouge imo, vu que le slider est assez long ca casse un peu. - J'arrive pas à faire mieux :c

00:17:370 : Si je compare les patterns similaire, je comprends pas l'idée d'un reverse slider ici. De plus, tu impose un jump alors que sur les autres, tu stack. - La diversité c'est bien~

00:23:182 : Trop collé pour moi, essaie de l'espacer de (1), un peu comme avec 00:18:682. De plus ca n'a ptet aucun rapport mais pourquoi sur les 3 premiers cercles tu fais un jump de 2.20 et sur les deux dernier tu fais un jump de 2.0? - J'ai un poil plus espacé.

00:44:182 : Sur les deux autre combos, tu as slider x2 et ici non. Pourquoi? - Je trouve le beat moins fort sur celui-là et je trouvais que c'était pas plus mal pour la transition avec la suite.

01:18:120 : Pourquoi un stack sur ceux là alors que plus tard tu n'en fais pas? - Ca fit la batterie et diversité.

01:45:120 : Je sais plus si ça m'a porté confusion sur slow ici, mais ça parait bizzare sur le coup, dunno. Need Testplay x) - Meh ça va perso :c

02:31:432 : Wait wat? - Oui ce son est un peu plus fort alors je le map.

02:52:338 : Je suis pas fan de tes 1/4, c'est trop silencieux imo. Même moi j'ai pas de 1/4 ici en taiko xD - Meh pas ma faute si tu es noo...

03:13:620 : Back to HELIX? ¦:^) ¦:^) ¦:^) Je trouve le style bizzare pour cette map mais pourquoi pas, a voir. - Je veux le garder si possible ;w; Leader avait aimé ça :c

04:41:210+ : WWWWWWW ;w; - Wat ?

04:23:182 : Space up ton contenu, la le slider est trop proche du (1) et (2), ca améliorait la visibilité de l'ensemble. - J'ai essayé.

04:27:120 : J'trouve pas que ce contenu mérite a être kiai. j'trouve même surprenant que t'ai pas mis un slow down général à partir d'ici. - N'est plus kiai. C'était pour qu'il soit comme le 1er en fait.

Bon sinon je trouve l'ensemble assez cool
Gl Hf for rank! o/

Prends ma tacos map hueeeeeee

Cherry Blossom wrote:

C'est long un an.
#1

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Stars]

1. 00:00:120 (1) - Long and low sv slider, so it is possible to make the loop bigger for a clearer slider path :3
2. 01:15:682 (3,4,1) - The spacing here is quite misleading tho
3. 02:22:620 (1) - 04:51:120 (1) - 04:57:120 (1) - A small loop like this doesn't really look well tbh x.x I like them, and they're clearly easy to read, so I want to keep them ;w;
4. 02:38:745 (4,6) - I am not sure if the reverse is completely overlapped during gameplay, yea so better prevent this
5. 02:41:745 (4,6) - Doesn't look good when the sliderbody overlaps with note
6. 04:15:495 - The sound here is quite strong so better start the stream here instead of slider end

Call me backkkkkkk

Ovoui wrote:

lol t'es lent nozhomi^^

Va donc plutôt map pour le fbc de cet année

Alé salut et bonne chance, je ferais en sorte de faire un mod apres qualification pour que tu ai une dq

jtm la bise c:

Ascendance wrote:

anti poi

Secretpipe wrote:

gz

Nozhomi wrote:

Finally...almost 1 year after.