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NU-KO - Pochiko no Shiawase na Nichijou (Long Version) [Taik

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tasuke912
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2018
1,347 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
tasuke912

Raiden wrote:

SPOILER
Hey!

[ General]

  • AiMod
  1. ok
    Audio
  2. ok
    Background
  3. ok
    Inconsistencies
  4. 0
    Folder
  5. ok
[ Beginner]
  1. Why does this diff even exist ;_; Kantan is easy enough for completing all web icons
  2. 00:37:359 - 00:39:859 - So empty ww, maybe add spinner? beginners need long breaks, since this song is long. also it works for avoiding continuous pattern
  3. 01:32:359 - 01:34:859 - too empty? Maybe add spinner? ^
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:35:484 (23,24) - Beginner already is too easy, maybe ctrl+g these 2? So 24 is more represented as deep drum hit. fixed.
  2. 00:37:359 - 00:39:859 - same as Beginner same reason.
  3. 00:47:359 - Hmmm... I think you should not skip this beat. for making various patterns. doublet fits to sound especially vocal well.
  4. 00:50:484 (5,6) - Similar suggestion as first in Kantan. one color fits more well imo, and kantan needs enough it.
  5. 00:51:734 - Similar ^. Maybe add a kat?
  6. 01:22:359 - Similar as above ^
  7. 01:32:359 - ;__;
  8. 02:00:796 - Hmmm... why did you skip this one if it's stronger than 01:58:296 (5) - ? because it follows the vocals.
  9. 02:03:609 - ;w;w;w;w;
  10. 02:29:859 - This part has a spinner on Beginner, why not here? i don't know. added.
  11. 03:36:265 - 03:37:202 - I think you can put a slider here, it feels super empty. I think beginners need a break here, and slider can't have a after break here imo.
  12. 03:42:984 (38,39) - OCD ctrl+g? So it is dK kD dK (39) is lower pitch than (38), kd dk+dk kd is fine.
[ Inner Oni]
  1. awesome diff no complaints
Also adjust HP settings please, all diffs 5 except Inner Oni that has 6, maybe do 7 6 5 5 5 6 6? right, fixed.

You may call me back :3[____]
Thanks for your mod, Raiden! :)
updated.

waiting WoahE (¦3[▓▓]
WoahE
41 posts
Joined September 2013
WoahE

Raiden wrote:

Hey!

[ WE's Oni]
  1. OD6 WHY??This is an Oni diff.
  2. 00:26:421 (95,99) - ctrl+g? 95 is a clear drum hit. I pressed ctrl+g and nothing happened
  3. 00:29:780 (119) - I'd remove for a small break between patterns. instrument sound at 00:29:780 (119) ,so i put a 1/4 pattern instead of 1/2
  4. 00:30:796 (129) - Move to 00:30:952 - and add a kat to 00:31:030 - to get the better offbeat rhythm+represent the melody at the same time. I start a "part" at the vocal
  5. 00:32:984 (145) - Move to 00:33:140 - and change 00:33:296 (146) - to a kat? It's a better offbeat rhythm that way imo.
  6. 00:57:202 (329) - Finisher like you did on the rest. same
  7. 00:59:780 (344) - Remove? It doesn't really sound too good here. changed in another way,it did sound weird
  8. 01:21:109 (485,489,492) - Finishers are not necessary imo. Big kat for the vocal.Dons are for matching the other part like 00:36:109 (167)
  9. 01:23:140 (497,498) - KK instead? Tone is quite different same(matching)
  10. 01:31:109 (557,561) - Finishers are not necessary. let's talk about necessity:most of the notes in most of the maps are unnecessary, I add finishers for the whole feeling of the song/map
  11. 01:47:280 (692) - 01:48:140 (703) - If you're using melody contrast to map this stream, you should make these 2 dons for better contrast and more flow changed these two 01:48:140 (703,704) to don instead -
  12. 02:13:452 (910) - Finisher like in first kiai. added
  13. 02:39:624 (1116) - Would fit much more if you deleted this and made 1117 a Finisher. The 4 words in lyrics are continuous and have no strong beat

You may call me back :3[____]
Raiden
osu! Alumni
2,419 posts
Joined January 2013
Raiden
alright mapset overall seems pretty good :3[___]

good luck!

edit: move to pending pls

edit2: gogo
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi tasuke. It's time to clean some bubbles and I'm beginning with this.

[General]
Personally I don't think the Beginner difficulty is needed as Kantan is not really hard, but if you want to keep it, then that's fine too. Just leaving my thoughts for future maps.

[ Beginner]
  1. OD2 is too lenient even for beginners, this difficulty should have OD3 at least.
  2. SV1.0 feels a bit slow, try 1.20 instead?
  3. 00:19:859 (9,10,12) - These notes can be removed, so there's a difference between this calm section and the rest of the map.
  4. 00:27:046 - Aren't you missing a note here? You put it in 00:37:046 (17) - . Same for 01:22:046 - and 01:32:046 - . Or probably 00:37:046 (17) - is an extra note.
  5. 02:59:859 (1) - This spinner would be better ending in 03:01:109 - so it covers just the held note.
  6. 03:19:234 - I think you're missing a note here for vocals.
  7. 03:43:765 (1) - I think this spinner should end in 03:45:327 - , covering just the ending notes.
[ Kantan]
  1. Due the few snap changes, 1.40 SV would be good, so they're clearer, imo.
  2. 01:53:609 (1) - This spinner would be better ending in 01:54:859 - so it covers just the held note.
  3. 03:43:765 (1) - Same as Beginner.
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:22:671 (32) - This note could be removed to give more emphasis to 00:22:984 (33) - with the break.
  2. 00:39:390 (87) - Maybe remove this to follow the strong vocals better? Same for 01:55:640 (2) -
  3. 02:39:234 (5) - I think this should be a don, as it has the same bassy sound as previous notes.
[ Muzukashii]

  • Those bookmarks @_@
  1. 02:29:859 (1) - Maybe shorten this for the rare cases where players couldn't complete this spinner? This would give them a bit more time to be ready for this note.
[ Oni (LTL)]
  1. 00:19:859 (49,50,51) - The 3/2 rhythm here is kind of hidden in the background, try a 2/1 rhythm instead, which is more intuitive. Alternatively, add a note in 00:20:484 -
  2. 00:40:796 (174,175,176,177) - Why aren't you using doubles here? Same for 00:43:296 (193,194,195,196,197) - , 00:45:796 (212,213,214,215) - , etc.
  3. 00:51:109 (239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250) - Just a suggestion in case you want to simplify this: kdk k k kdk k k. Same for next parts.
  4. 01:49:624 - Isn't a note missing here for consistency with 01:50:171 (598,599,600,601,602) - ? It's the same sound.
  5. 02:36:734 (1,2,3) - Isn't this 3/4?
[ Oni (WoahE)]

  • This difficulty feels more like an Inner Oni, so consider changing the difficulty name.
  1. 01:02:359 (365) - Use a big note here? Like 01:02:671 (366,367) - . Same for 02:18:609 (946) - .
  2. 01:31:577 (561) - I think this big note should be a normal note instead.
  3. 01:44:312 (669) - The 3/4 rhythm feels a bit awkward and doesn't fit with the music nicely, try moving it to 01:44:234 - .
  4. 01:49:155 - Maybe add a note here to keep your ...ooooo O ooooo O... structure.
  5. 03:02:046 (1285,1286) - I found these SV changes a bit confusing, maybe use the same SV for these two notes?
  6. 03:43:452 (56) - This should be a big note like the next notes.
[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:51:187 - This feels weird being empty, as stream in the music begins in 00:51:109 - , move 00:51:030 (21) - here or add a don? Same for 02:07:437 -
  2. 01:34:155 (6) - I think a pause here would fit nicely with the music.
  3. 01:47:437 - Similar as first suggestion, add a note here for the stream in the music, you could remove 01:46:968 (19) - if you think the resulting pattern is too long.
  4. 01:48:687 (17,19,24,26) - You should remove these notes and add a note in 01:48:999 - , so you keep the consistency in your ...ooooo o ooooo o... structure. Colours can be different.
  5. 02:32:202 (29,30,31) - Probably use kkd instead? So the last note matches with the bassy sound, like you do for 02:37:359 - . 02:34:702 (59,60,61) -
  6. 03:23:609 - The kiai should start here.
That should be all :)
Lost The Lights
566 posts
Joined December 2011
Lost The Lights

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi tasuke. It's time to clean some bubbles and I'm beginning with this.

[ Oni (LTL)]
  1. 00:51:109 (239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250) - Just a suggestion in case you want to simplify this: kdk k k kdk k k. Same for next parts. Won't simplify this, it sounds really weird like that.
  2. 01:49:624 - Isn't a note missing here for consistency with 01:50:171 (598,599,600,601,602) - ? It's the same sound. Ah, this was intentional, just to make it easy.
That should be all :)
What's not on the mod was applied. Thanks Dake.

LTL's Oni
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TitleUnicode:ポチコの幸せな日常 (Long Version)
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Nardoxyribonucleic
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Nardoxyribonucleic

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi tasuke. It's time to clean some bubbles and I'm beginning with this.

[General]
Personally I don't think the Beginner difficulty is needed as Kantan is not really hard, but if you want to keep it, then that's fine too. Just leaving my thoughts for future maps.

[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:22:671 (32) - This note could be removed to give more emphasis to 00:22:984 (33) - with the break. fixed
  2. 00:39:390 (87) - Maybe remove this to follow the strong vocals better? Same for 01:55:640 (2) - As the instrument here is quite strong, I would like to integrate it into the vocal.
  3. 02:39:234 (5) - I think this should be a don, as it has the same bassy sound as previous notes. I would prefer keeping it as k since the vocal at 02:39:234 (5,6,7) - could be grouped together.
That should be all :)
Thanks for your mod Dake~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/nUNAP.rar
tasuke912
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DakeDekaane wrote:

SPOILER
Hi tasuke. It's time to clean some bubbles and I'm beginning with this.

[General]
Personally I don't think the Beginner difficulty is needed as Kantan is not really hard, but if you want to keep it, then that's fine too. Just leaving my thoughts for future maps.

[ Beginner]
  1. OD2 is too lenient even for beginners, this difficulty should have OD3 at least. fixed.
  2. SV1.0 feels a bit slow, try 1.20 instead? fixed.
  3. 00:19:859 (9,10,12) - These notes can be removed, so there's a difference between this calm section and the rest of the map. great, fixed.
  4. 00:27:046 - Aren't you missing a note here? You put it in 00:37:046 (17) - . Same for 01:22:046 - and 01:32:046 - . Or probably 00:37:046 (17) - is an extra note. removed (17).
  5. 02:59:859 (1) - This spinner would be better ending in 03:01:109 - so it covers just the held note. I wanted avoiding short spinner in low diffs. shortened until 1/1 tick left instead.
  6. 03:19:234 - I think you're missing a note here for vocals. wanna keep empty, i don't want to use 1/1s too much in this calm part.
  7. 03:43:765 (1) - I think this spinner should end in 03:45:327 - , covering just the ending notes. fixed.
[ Kantan]
  1. Due the few snap changes, 1.40 SV would be good, so they're clearer, imo. changed to 1.3 instead.
  2. 01:53:609 (1) - This spinner would be better ending in 01:54:859 - so it covers just the held note. i felt 4/1 spinner is too short for beginners, so i will keep it. other spinners are fixed in the same way as beginenr.
  3. 03:43:765 (1) - Same as Beginner.
[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:51:187 - This feels weird being empty, as stream in the music begins in 00:51:109 - , move 00:51:030 (21) - here or add a don? Same for 02:07:437 - i know it, it's intentional. i don't wanna move it for keeping the flow consistency (00:49:077 (4,5,6) -, 00:49:702 (9,10,11) -, 00:50:327 (14,15,16) - ) and add a note for avoiding the inappropriate long stream. also i think don't have to follow completely
  2. 01:34:155 (6) - I think a pause here would fit nicely with the music. not to me;;
  3. 01:47:437 - Similar as first suggestion, add a note here for the stream in the music, you could remove 01:46:968 (19) - if you think the resulting pattern is too long. i felt current streams position makes more natural flow. also i didn't change prev point, so i could keep it for consistency probably?
  4. 01:48:687 (17,19,24,26) - You should remove these notes and add a note in 01:48:999 - , so you keep the consistency in your ...ooooo o ooooo o... structure. Colours can be different. ummm,,, i felt changing the rhythm to xxxxx-x at 4th measure is too suddenly, current pattern works to mitigate the flow's gap imo, i'd like to keep it. (also xxxxx-x x4 is bit too monotone to me tbh.)
  5. 02:32:202 (29,30,31) - Probably use kkd instead? So the last note matches with the bassy sound, like you do for 02:37:359 - . 02:34:702 (59,60,61) - i already tried it, but i felt it doesn't fit to the piano well. i'm focusing the piano mainly in this part. also i think putting k to the kick is okay.
  6. 03:23:609 - The kiai should start here. should be fine same as other kiai start points. (I used different point with beginner and kantan, because these diffs start the pattern from 1/1 left, so i felt starting at same point looks weird. Inner is original.)
That should be all :)
Thanks for the mod, Dake. :)
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WoahE
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DakeDekaane wrote:

[ Oni (WoahE)]

  • This difficulty feels more like an Inner Oni, so consider changing the difficulty name. changed
  1. 01:02:359 (365) - Use a big note here? Like 01:02:671 (366,367) - . Same for 02:18:609 (946) - . changed to kat instead..I thought for a really long time for this, nice suggestion but don't really suit my style..
  2. 01:31:577 (561) - I think this big note should be a normal note instead. nice suggestion too..but considering 00:26:577 (96) , I decided not to change it
  3. 01:44:312 (669) - The 3/4 rhythm feels a bit awkward and doesn't fit with the music nicely, try moving it to 01:44:234 - .changed
  4. 01:49:155 - Maybe add a note here to keep your ...ooooo O ooooo O... structure. changed
  5. 03:02:046 (1285,1286) - I found these SV changes a bit confusing, maybe use the same SV for these two notes? not really a big change..but changing that makes the flow not that fluent
  6. 03:43:452 (56) - This should be a big note like the next notes.changed
That should be all :)
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DakeDekaane wrote:

[ Muzukashii]

  • Those bookmarks @_@
  1. 02:29:859 (1) - Maybe shorten this for the rare cases where players couldn't complete this spinner? This would give them a bit more time to be ready for this note.
    :arrow: Made a little shoter.
That should be all :)
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tasuke912
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everything updated!
Prophecy
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JUDYDANNY
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wow, thank you for playing ! ヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ"
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Rechecking.

[ WoahE]
01:02:359 (365) - I feel a don plays better than a kat here, you can keep it as a normal note.
03:19:390 (1) - Probably I forgot to mention, but this spinner having 5% volume feels weird after all the notes with 65%. Use 40-50% maybe?
01:31:577 (561) - I see you removed the finish here, but you kept it in 00:26:577 (96) - . Make them consistent, I'd suggest to remove the finisher in 00:26:577 (96) - .

[ tasuke]
Are you still sure about the last kiai? 03:23:609 - has more emphasis in the song and it looks weird having the kiai begin 1 beat later. Other difficulties use the kiai here.
03:22:827 (55) - I think a pause would add a bit of emphasis to the stream.
tasuke912
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first, I still feel current point is better, but I remember RC rules. Fixed.
second, I prefer keeping it to mitigate the gap of the density.

Thanks again!
WoahE
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WoahE

DakeDekaane wrote:

Rechecking.

[ WoahE]
01:02:359 (365) - I feel a don plays better than a kat here, you can keep it as a normal note.
03:19:390 (1) - Probably I forgot to mention, but this spinner having 5% volume feels weird after all the notes with 65%. Use 40-50% maybe?
01:31:577 (561) - I see you removed the finish here, but you kept it in 00:26:577 (96) - . Make them consistent, I'd suggest to remove the finisher in 00:26:577 (96) - .
first point, I still feel like kat matches more with the vocal pitch at 01:02:359 (365) , so no change
for the spinner, I don't like having a small break time there..meanwhile spinner sound bothers me, so I only tuned up to 30% volume.

so here 00:26:577 (96) - it follows by some strong beat while it isn't at 01:31:577 (561) - ,so I kept the finisher for the former note.
tasuke912
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Updated!
DakeDekaane
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Alright.
Qualified!

Good luck in TWC!
tasuke912
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DakeDekaane wrote:

Alright.
Qualified!

Good luck in TWC!
Ty! <3
Charlotte
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Gratz :)
RuberusuScarlet
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おめでと！！
Feerum
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Yay Grats, i like this song. And finally a Full vers!
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おめでとうございます :D
Niko-nyan
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Congratulations tasuke
:3

edit : @Dake you forgot to point the 02:10:015 - on WE's lol but at least i noticed it (00:53:768 - )

owo but overall is fine for me (but tasuke forgot some pitching style :C and i may need to point out but i'm quite lazy to do it D: )
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