Hatsune Miku - Love Tamago · forum

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-02T02:29:31+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年9月23日 at 23:36:50

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Love Tamago
Source: VOCALOID
Tags: Sleepman ccbp
BPM: 155
Filesize: 10179kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:

Sleep Style (4.58 stars, 187 notes)
Spec.C (2.44 stars, 109 notes)
Yuca Style (4.95 stars, 317 notes)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Love Tamago
Download: Hatsune Miku - Love Tamago (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Love Tamago～～～～～(ﾉ｡･ω･)ﾉ　○

Hatsune miku song~~~♪♪

Do you know Tamago~?? >w<

*+☆+*――*+☆+*――*+☆+*
Nomal★ccbp

Hard★Sleepman

Insane★yuca
*+☆+*――*+☆+*――*+☆+*

thx diff cc and sleepmanヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ゛

give you Tamago~~~○　ヽ(･ω･｡ヽ)～～～～～
And this is my third map,hope eveyone will enjoy it~ >w<

Last edited by y u c a 2010-11-07T12:03:37+00:00, edited 46 times in total.

gowww

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gowww 2010-09-02T03:23:57+00:00

DeadAlready

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DeadAlready 2010-09-02T10:25:48+00:00

>w</

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-02T11:15:11+00:00

>>gowww,quintitem

～～～～～(ﾉ｡･ω･)ﾉ　thx star★゛

ccbp

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ccbp 2010-09-09T04:32:18+00:00

ゆかねの譜面が見た後「くどより上手」と思いますが。。意外に今度くどさんの譜面も完璧に作られた！くどさんよーくがんばった！

lovhin456

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lovhin456 2010-09-13T02:24:08+00:00

Hi ~

Skin;
- Section pass and section fail are...not my style, at all, I mean the gray big circle for section pass doesn't fit, and the gray cross for section fail doesn't fit either, probably is better if you just put the miku image without the big circle and the cross, and put some words with it like pass, good, fail, bad, etc ~
- Score BG is too small...
- Play skip is too small
- Where's spinner-spin ??
- The center of the spinner circle has a green light, doesn't fit

SB;
- I'm not an expert but make the "beatmap by ..." fade ??

General;
- Make an easier diff.
- Not sure about countdown...
- The yellow is killing my eyes ... :<

Sleep Style;
- Umm, Sleep's Tamago ~
- 01:49:675 >> curve this better ot make it a linear slider
- Lower the sound of the normal hitsound parts
- Create a pattern with claps, they fit the song.

Yuca Style;
- Yuca's Tamago ~
- Lower the sound of the normal hitsound parts

* Star ~ :3

James2250

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James2250 2010-09-13T05:55:05+00:00

-There are 2 osb files, delete the empty one
-300 and 300g are the same, make them different?
-Include an approach circle
-I agree the playskip is too small
-Make a difficulty below 3 stars
-I don't think countdown really fits
-You don't need hatsune miku in the tags as it is in the artist
-Section pass and fail actually don't bug me that much but anyway

Sleep Style:
Is audio lead-in needed?
00:50:062 (6) - seperate start and end point more
00:56:255 (8) - new combo
01:09:030 (1) - could be made more interesting
01:18:707 (1) - ^ long repeating sliders are boring
01:45:030 (11) - shorten by 2 repeats
01:48:901 (5) - new combo

Yuca Style:
more hitsounds~
HP Drain the same as the other difficulty?
00:05:159 (10) - new combo
00:37:675 (1) - extend to next white tick
01:03:997 (1) - ^
01:50:449 (1) - ^
01:58:578 (1) - not even sure if this is really needed, the song sounds fine ending on a single note

*star*

banvi

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banvi 2010-09-14T10:36:31+00:00

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-09-14T15:23:41+00:00

>~</

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-15T03:37:21+00:00

lovhin456 wrote:
Hi ~

Skin;
- Section pass and section fail are...not my style, at all, I mean the gray big circle for section pass doesn't fit, and the gray cross for section fail doesn't fit either, probably is better if you just put the miku image without the big circle and the cross, and put some words with it like pass, good, fail, bad, etc ~
no

- Score BG is too small...
no
- Play skip is too small
fixed
- Where's spinner-spin ??
?
- The center of the spinner circle has a green light, doesn't fit
no

SB;
- I'm not an expert but make the "beatmap by ..." fade ??

General;
- Make an easier diff.now making
- Not sure about countdown...
- The yellow is killing my eyes ... :<
no

Sleep Style;
- Umm, Sleep's Tamago ~
- 01:49:675 >> curve this better ot make it a linear slider
- Lower the sound of the normal hitsound parts
- Create a pattern with claps, they fit the song.
no

Yuca Style;
- Yuca's Tamago ~
- Lower the sound of the normal hitsound parts
no

* Star ~ :3

thx mod

lovhin456

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lovhin456 2010-09-15T03:48:59+00:00

y u c a wrote:
- Where's spinner-spin ??
?

Spinner set is divided into two big parts, the images part which are the pictures you use to make the spinner in the game and the words part which are the spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin:

- Spinner-clear: when you clear the spinner, the one you have says "Clear"
- Spinner-osu: when the spinner ends and a word comes up, in your map case that word is "Success"
- Spinner-spin: tells you to spin is shown at the bottom of the spinner when it starts, you're missing this, without this your spinner set looks incomplete and kind of bad.

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-15T03:53:40+00:00

James2250 wrote:
-There are 2 osb files, delete the empty one fixed
-300 and 300g are the same, make them different? fixed
-Include an approach circle fixed
-I agree the playskip is too small fixed
-Make a difficulty below 3 stars making~
-I don't think countdown really fits fixed
-You don't need hatsune miku in the tags as it is in the artist fixed
-Section pass and fail actually don't bug me that much but anyway

Sleep Style:
Is audio lead-in needed?
00:50:062 (6) - seperate start and end point more
00:56:255 (8) - new combo fixed
01:09:030 (1) - could be made more interesting
01:18:707 (1) - ^ long repeating sliders are boring
01:45:030 (11) - shorten by 2 repeats
01:48:901 (5) - new combo fixed

Yuca Style:
more hitsounds~ fixed
HP Drain the same as the other difficulty? fixed
00:05:159 (10) - new combo fixed
00:37:675 (1) - extend to next white tick fixed
01:03:997 (1) - ^ fixed
01:50:449 (1) - ^ fixed
01:58:578 (1) - not even sure if this is really needed, the song sounds fine ending on a single note fixed

*star*

thx mod~～～～～～(ﾉ｡･ω･)ﾉ　○

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-15T04:01:56+00:00

>>banvi and AngelHoney

thx star~★
tamago give you~～～～～～(ﾉ｡･ω･)ﾉ　○

ccbp

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ccbp 2010-09-15T06:56:17+00:00

0

Download: Hatsune Miku - Love Tamago (y u c a) [Spec.C].osu

Last edited by ccbp 2010-09-19T08:48:13+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

Muya

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Muya 2010-09-15T09:32:15+00:00

Cute

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-15T09:54:00+00:00

>>ccbp

ありがとうー(*´ｪ｀)
good map~♪♪
～～～～～(ﾉ｡･ω･)ﾉ　○　ｃｃにもたまごあげるー

>>Muya

ありがとーっ★ヾ(･∀･｡)ﾉ
～～～～～(ﾉ｡･ω･)ﾉ　○　たまごたまご～！！

happy30

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happy30 2010-09-15T16:52:18+00:00

funny map, the skin is also very nice

small mod in IRC

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-15T16:56:33+00:00

>>happy30

happy30 wrote:
funny map, the skin is also very nice

small mod in IRC

thx chat mod~>w<!!
○　ヽ(･ω･｡ヽ)～～～～～tamago give you~

kioukiou

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kioukiou 2010-09-16T13:32:50+00:00

Could not find too much problems.

[Sleep Style] and [Spec.C]

remove Lead-in

that's all i can find.

star.

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-16T14:52:23+00:00

>>kioukiou

kioukiou wrote:
Could not find too much problems.

[Sleep Style] and [Spec.C]

remove Lead-in　　　　　　
that's all i can find.

star.

fixed~!!

Mod thx~>w<
tamago give you~　
○"　ヽ(･ω･｡ヽ)～～～～～

Ex Boy

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Ex Boy 2010-09-17T06:10:13+00:00

Well...good song, good map...

Some little problems

[Spec.C]
01:58:191 (2) - head and tail of sliders can't overlap

[Sleep Style]
all right

[Yuca Style]
AR and OD are too low to read. maybe 7 or 8

star

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-17T06:40:32+00:00

>>Ex Boy

Ex Boy wrote:
Well...good song, good map...

Some little problems

[Spec.C]
01:58:191 (2) - head and tail of sliders can't overlap fixed

[Sleep Style]
all right

[Yuca Style]
AR and OD are too low to read. maybe 7 or 8 fixed

star

Mod thank you~>w<
tamago～～～～～(ﾉ｡･ω･)ﾉ　○

Deye

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Deye 2010-09-17T06:42:35+00:00

lovely map~:)

A little problem:

NORMAL
00:50:062 (6) If no open snaking sliders, i don't konw the slider will go right or left...

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-17T07:26:56+00:00

>>Dr_dy

Dr_dy wrote:
lovely map~:)

A little problem:

NORMAL
00:50:062 (6) If no open snaking sliders, i don't konw the slider will go right or left... fixed~

thx mod and star~★
tamagooo~~~○　ヽ(･ω･｡ヽ)～～～～～

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-09-17T11:28:46+00:00

Konnichiwa yuca-san

[General]
1) In SB, you have to double check your keyframe, I see some lots of keyframe that makes lag for bad PC (look here http://puu.sh/czh). You have to remove the unnesescary keyframe, like this http://puu.sh/czi

2) Make sure you have to make fade out at start and fade in at end of SB
3) Source : Vocaloid 2

[Spec.C]
00:23:352 (1) - Clap at start are not fit
01:05:546 (5) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
01:53:546 (5) - ^

[Sleep Style]
You need add more hitsound

00:15:997 (6) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
00:19:094 (6) - ^
00:22:191 (5) - ^
00:25:288 (6) - ^
00:35:739 (5) - ^
00:42:320 (5) - ^
00:50:062 (6) - Ugly slider, and don't let the startpoint overlap endpoint
00:54:707 (5) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
01:04:191 (6) - ^
01:38:062 (4) - ^
01:44:255 (9) - ^
01:49:675 (4) - Ugly slider

[Yuca Style]
00:03:610 (6) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
00:08:255 (5) - ^
00:15:997 (5) - ^
00:19:094 (5) - ^
00:22:191 (5) - ^
00:34:578 (7) - ^
00:42:320 (8) - ^
00:48:513 (9) - ^
00:51:610 (8) - ^
00:54:707 (5) - ^
00:57:804 (7) - Ugly slider
01:38:062 (7) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
01:45:804 (1,2,3,4) - Make a diamond pattern?

Nice song
STAR

P.S sorry for long mod about combo issue

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-17T12:57:12+00:00

>>Leorda

Leorda wrote:
Konnichiwa yuca-san

[General]
1) In SB, you have to double check your keyframe, I see some lots of keyframe that makes lag for bad PC (look here http://puu.sh/czh). You have to remove the unnesescary keyframe, like this http://puu.sh/czi

2) Make sure you have to make fade out at start and fade in at end of SB
3) Source : Vocaloid 2

[Spec.C]
00:23:352 (1) - Clap at start are not fit
01:05:546 (5) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
01:53:546 (5) - ^

[Sleep Style]
You need add more hitsound

00:15:997 (6) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
00:19:094 (6) - ^
00:22:191 (5) - ^
00:25:288 (6) - ^
00:35:739 (5) - ^
00:42:320 (5) - ^
00:50:062 (6) - Ugly slider, and don't let the startpoint overlap endpoint
00:54:707 (5) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
01:04:191 (6) - ^
01:38:062 (4) - ^
01:44:255 (9) - ^
01:49:675 (4) - Ugly slider

[Yuca Style]
00:03:610 (6) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
00:08:255 (5) - ^
00:15:997 (5) - ^
00:19:094 (5) - ^
00:22:191 (5) - ^
00:34:578 (7) - ^
00:42:320 (8) - ^
00:48:513 (9) - ^
00:51:610 (8) - ^
00:54:707 (5) - ^
00:57:804 (7) - Ugly slider
01:38:062 (7) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
01:45:804 (1,2,3,4) - Make a diamond pattern?

Nice song
STAR

P.S sorry for long mod about combo issue

no~..
sorry;_;
thx mod~>w<

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-09-17T13:27:38+00:00

y u c a wrote:
no~..
sorry;_;
thx mod~>w<

No for all, it's ok

If you want to give some kudosu, you have to check my mod first, before you give me a kudsou, otherwise, BAT will deny my kudosu. Next time please check my mod first before give me a kudosu. Thanks for osuplayer111 for deny my kudosu

Sakura

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Sakura 2010-09-17T16:40:07+00:00

[osz File Scan!]
BG has a long name, please shorten it, make it something simple like BG.jpg or something, dont forget to edit the .osu files with this new change
bit rate is too low bit rates lower than 128 are unrankable, consider getting a higher quality mp3

[Yuca Style]
00:01:868 (2) - I suggest you remove this note
00:09:997 (2,3,4) - I suggest you dont alter the rythm you have, that is, note note triplet note note triplet.
00:31:868 (4,5) - Unintutive jump and add place for it too.
00:47:546 (4,5,6) - Theese play awkward, i recommend you remove (5) as it doesnt appear to have the same rythmical pattern with it there, if you want a triplet, put it in between (3) and (4) instead
01:07:868 - Weird way of using kiai time, kiai time should enphasize certain parts of the song, not the video, i recommend you rethink your kiai
01:45:804 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesnt really fit... try a parallelogram?
01:57:417 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Dont see the need for another stream here, only felt a stream on the previous one.

[Sleep Style]
00:50:062 (6) - Unrankable slider, beginning and end touch each other.

[Spec. C]
This diff is ok.

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-18T07:54:11+00:00

>>Sakura Hana

Sakura Hana wrote:
[osz File Scan!]
BG has a long name, please shorten it, make it something simple like BG.jpg or something, dont forget to edit the .osu files with this new change fixed
bit rate is too low bit rates lower than 128 are unrankable, consider getting a higher quality mp3 this is the best mp3 sample I can get

[Yuca Style]
00:01:868 (2) - I suggest you remove this note fixed
00:09:997 (2,3,4) - I suggest you dont alter the rythm you have, that is, note note triplet note note triplet. no,sorry
00:31:868 (4,5) - Unintutive jump and add place for it too. no,sorry

00:47:546 (4,5,6) - Theese play awkward, i recommend you remove (5) as it doesnt appear to have the same rythmical pattern with it there, if you want a triplet, put it in between (3) and (4) instead no,sorry

01:07:868 - Weird way of using kiai time, kiai time should enphasize certain parts of the song, not the video, i recommend you rethink your kiai
01:45:804 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesnt really fit... try a parallelogram? no,sorry

01:57:417 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Dont see the need for another stream here, only felt a stream on the previous one. no,sorry

[Sleep Style]
00:50:062 (6) - Unrankable slider, beginning and end touch each other. no,sorry

[Spec. C]
This diff is ok.

thx mod~>w<

Alace

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Alace 2010-09-18T21:08:15+00:00

<Yuca>
01:31:868 (5) - new combo here

<Extra> you can ask ccbp to translate XD and i made a .osu to show what i did
00:03:223 (4) - remove this note may make this part sounding better
00:08:255 (5,6,7,8) - usually triples sound good from red tick,
00:14:449 (1) - normalclap fits the song well, you put enough notes so it is easy to make a hitsound pattern (i-10% volume for 1st red line)
00:26:836 (1) - i add a finish sound because of BGM finish
00:34:578 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - really good job here, i add more finish
00:39:513 (3) - this note didn`t follow any thing i change it a bit

OK i may stop here, those mods are general tips of mapping, you don`t need to 100% follow those tips
In fact, it is a very good mapset, even you don`t feel like to change anything that i point out

btw it`s good to think about modder`s mods, don`t just follow the mod posts

Download: Hatsune Miku - Love Tamago (y u c a) [kioukiou is a girl].osu

Kotone

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Kotone 2010-09-19T06:47:50+00:00

Spec. C
00:57:804(3) - 1 grid up and 1 grid left

when you fixed Alace's post I will mod other :3

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-20T06:37:53+00:00

>>Alace

Alace wrote:
<Yuca>
01:31:868 (5) - new combo here

<Extra> you can ask ccbp to translate XD and i made a .osu to show what i did
00:03:223 (4) - remove this note may make this part sounding better
00:08:255 (5,6,7,8) - usually triples sound good from red tick,
00:14:449 (1) - normalclap fits the song well, you put enough notes so it is easy to make a hitsound pattern (i-10% volume for 1st red line)
00:26:836 (1) - i add a finish sound because of BGM finish
00:34:578 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - really good job here, i add more finish
00:39:513 (3) - this note didn`t follow any thing i change it a bit

OK i may stop here, those mods are general tips of mapping, you don`t need to 100% follow those tips
In fact, it is a very good mapset, even you don`t feel like to change anything that i point out

btw it`s good to think about modder`s mods, don`t just follow the mod posts

fixed~~★
thx many time to mod(・∀・)
たまご～～～～～(ﾉ｡･ω･)ﾉ　○

Alace

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Alace 2010-09-20T10:18:52+00:00

sorry for my super nazi modding
bubbled

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-20T14:34:03+00:00

>>karenying

karenying wrote:
Spec. C
00:57:804(3) - 1 grid up and 1 grid left fixed

mod thx>w<!!

>>Alace

Alace wrote:
sorry for my super nazi modding
bubbled

I learn a lot, thanks for your mod~(º n º ⋈)

Kotone

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Kotone 2010-09-22T16:28:11+00:00

>_> go go go rank
~~yeah other no mod~~

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-09-23T13:36:21+00:00

[Yuca Style]

00:39:804 (4,5,6) - Can you make this spacing better? It's a bit hard to read right now.

Fix and I'll rank.

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-23T14:26:52+00:00

>>osuplayer111

osuplayer111 wrote:
[Yuca Style]

00:39:804 (4,5,6) - Can you make this spacing better? It's a bit hard to read right now.

Fix and I'll rank.

fixed~★

S o r d a

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S o r d a 2010-09-23T16:02:55+00:00

Star

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-09-23T16:59:37+00:00

Let's go.

Ranked~

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-09-23T19:28:41+00:00

wtf is tamago º-º

Oh...
Congratz ;3

Krisom

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Krisom 2010-09-23T22:22:53+00:00

Who created the song? I can't find him in the tags :/

I could not find it either, but the niconico douga site http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm4686820 says something like ラヴリーP, wich I THINK It translates as Lovely-P.

Please search the creator of the song for future Vocaloid maps you do

(btw, Tamago means Egg, right?)

Garven

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Garven 2010-09-24T08:55:34+00:00

Tamago = egg, yes.

Charming skin~

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-09-24T09:08:08+00:00

watashitamagopain

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-24T10:19:37+00:00

>>S o r d a

thank you star~★
～～～～～(ﾉ｡･ω･)ﾉ　○

>>osuplayer111

thx mod and Rank~~★゛
give you Ta~ma~go~~○"　ヽ(･ω･｡ヽ)～～～～～

>>Verdisphena

Verdisphena wrote:
wtf is tamago º-º

Oh...
Congratz ;3

lol
thx~~>w<
tamago,tamagooo~~～～～～～(ﾉ｡･ω･)ﾉ　○

Last edited by y u c a 2010-09-24T10:38:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

y u c a

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y u c a 2010-09-24T10:37:43+00:00

>>krisom

Krisom wrote:
Who created the song? I can't find him in the tags :/

I could not find it either, but the niconico douga site http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm4686820 says something like ラヴリーP, wich I THINK It translates as Lovely-P.

Please search the creator of the song for future Vocaloid maps you do

(btw, Tamago means Egg, right?)