fffffff Krisom ninja'd me with the taiko drumroll stuff ):
[General]Time for some SB naziing!
*endpass: "become" should be "becoming". Also, if you're capitalizing "Champion", then shouldn't "Rhythm" be capitalized as well? Also also, capitalizing "ARE" instead of "REALLY" would sound a bit better (when saying it out loud).
*taikotext3: Uh.. I think that "were" would be more grammatically correct than "was", but I'm not positive.
*text1: Change "that" to "this"
*text2: Maybe change "you acquired" to "you have acquired"
*text3: Capitalize "That" to stay consistent with taikotext3? :p
*text5: "anything" would sound better than "everything" imo
*text6: Possibly omit "to" from "to play"
*Unnecessary .os-oh wait. :I
*Is the source really needed? The title already includes "osu!". This reminds me of an NND map I saw before. Artist: NicoNicoDouga Title: NicoNicoDouga (something) Source: (you guessed it) NicoNicoDouga :V
*Why do two of the five difficulties have an audio lead-in? This seems unnecessary o-o;
[Rookie]*Spacing could be nazi'd in a few spots, but otherwise very nice.
[Futsuu]Nice.
[Advanced]01:46:497 (1) - A bit short... (even for a "Hard" diff) Could you end this on the next white tick or start it earlier?
Pro]01:32:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Stacking looks bad on this (when comparing it to the end of the slider). Move it down and to the right a bit and then check it in test mode. Krisom mentioned this too ffff
01:46:497 (1) - Again, a bit short, but expected since it's an Insane diff. :c
[Oni]*So fast at the end ;~;
Great job on this! (I love the storyboard especially) Lemmie know if you make changes and I'll rebubble. (:
EDIT:
errr uh
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