sasakure.UK - Atropos (Short Edit) [OsuMania]

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_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

M4M XD/ |1|2|3|4|


[Shiki's Another+]

00:23:558 (23558|0,23558|3) - I don't know It's really need two notes. ok

00:25:042 (25042|3,25097|2,25152|1) - It should be 1/4 snap I think. thanks

00:43:174 (43174|3) - Ghost I think nice

01:08:723 - This timing also has a sound. yes i follow piano only

01:23:146 - ^ added



Good luck :3/

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Song: sasakure.UK - Atropos (Short Edit) (Satoshi Kazuki
Number of difficulty modded in my map: 3 - HD, MX, WARNING


Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but please reason them out with sense. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to remove or ctrl function moves on certain note/s, be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• Tags conflict. MUST FIX
Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|
[SHiki's Another+]
00:15:646 (15646|1) - move to 1 so it can be a counter part of 00:15:811 (15811|3,15894|3) - like these guys also: 00:15:976 (15976|1,16058|1,16141|2,16223|2) - but with that being moved, you might want to move 00:15:482 (15482|0) - to 3 as well since left hand is quite awkward here. rearrange

00:21:086 (21086|3) - move to 2 for pitch stair pattern. rearrange new pattern

00:23:476 (23476|1) - no sound here. remove. it had synth sound , but i still remove

00:27:679 - add note to 2 for bass + synth ok

00:29:712 (29712|2,29822|2,29932|2,30042|2) - this is too much, rearrange the pattern here to avoid this sudden jacks. rearrange

01:04:108 - add note to 4 just like other piano sound 01:04:602 (64602|2,64602|3) - ok

01:09:383 - ^ to 3^

01:21:910 (81910|1,81992|2) - swap column for comfortability. ok

01:34:025 (94025|3) - move to 1 ok

01:51:910 - add LN to 4 same as 01:51:910 (111910|0) - ^


[Overall]
Cool map~ keep it up and good luck! Thank you for the contract ^ o ^)b
2nd Update with 2 mods :v
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

M4M XD/ |1|2|3|4|


[Shiki's Another+]

00:23:558 (23558|0,23558|3) - I don't know It's really need two notes. ok

00:25:042 (25042|3,25097|2,25152|1) - It should be 1/4 snap I think. thanks

00:43:174 (43174|3) - Ghost I think nice

01:08:723 - This timing also has a sound. yes i follow piano only

01:23:146 - ^ added



Good luck :3/

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Song: sasakure.UK - Atropos (Short Edit) (Satoshi Kazuki
Number of difficulty modded in my map: 3 - HD, MX, WARNING


Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but please reason them out with sense. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to remove or ctrl function moves on certain note/s, be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• Tags conflict. MUST FIX
Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|
[SHiki's Another+]
00:15:646 (15646|1) - move to 1 so it can be a counter part of 00:15:811 (15811|3,15894|3) - like these guys also: 00:15:976 (15976|1,16058|1,16141|2,16223|2) - but with that being moved, you might want to move 00:15:482 (15482|0) - to 3 as well since left hand is quite awkward here. rearrange

00:21:086 (21086|3) - move to 2 for pitch stair pattern. rearrange new pattern

00:23:476 (23476|1) - no sound here. remove. it had synth sound , but i still remove

00:27:679 - add note to 2 for bass + synth ok

00:29:712 (29712|2,29822|2,29932|2,30042|2) - this is too much, rearrange the pattern here to avoid this sudden jacks. rearrange

01:04:108 - add note to 4 just like other piano sound 01:04:602 (64602|2,64602|3) - ok

01:09:383 - ^ to 3^

01:21:910 (81910|1,81992|2) - swap column for comfortability. ok

01:34:025 (94025|3) - move to 1 ok

01:51:910 - add LN to 4 same as 01:51:910 (111910|0) - ^


[Overall]
Cool map~ keep it up and good luck! Thank you for the contract ^ o ^)b
2nd Update with 2 mods :v
Updated
Gomuryuu
Hi Satoshi, NlHIL & Shiki~ :)

From MODHOUSE

Sorry for the delay, Here's my mod as requested~

Column 1|2|3|4

00:43:174 (43174|1,43256|0) - better to use LN here like you did on 01:45:482
00:54:218 (54218|2) - move to 1 for balance
01:23:229 (83229|1) - i suppose this LN is there to cover the 1/4 sound there. But still, there should be another LN starting on 01:23:064 - because the previous LN doesn't last that long. My suggestion is either removing LN for the 1/4s like you did on 01:44:163 or do something like this http://puu.sh/kETaO/5f2f644bfe.jpg

nothing much found here, cleverly done :D
00:06:745 - why not add note here like you did on 00:09:383 (9383|3,9547|2)
00:06:910 - ^
00:08:064 - ^
00:08:229 - ^
00:15:564 - add note, still same sound with 00:15:317 (15317|2,15399|1)
00:26:113 - ^
00:41:361 - the LN start&end should be on 00:41:525 - listen carefully
00:42:350 - start new LN, end previous LN
00:51:992 - add note
00:55:949 - ^
01:33:778 - start new LN, end previous LN
01:34:108 - here too^
00:15:482 - add note, for kick sound
00:20:591 (20591|2,20674|1) - double note
00:26:113 - add note, still same sound with 00:25:949 (25949|3)
00:31:306 (31306|1) - double note
00:31:800 (31800|1) - ^
00:41:361 - the LN start&end should be on 00:41:525 - listen carefully
00:41:855 (41855|2) - what is this LN for?
00:42:350 - start new LN, end previous LN
01:34:108 - ^
00:11:773 - add note, still the same sound with 00:11:608 (11608|2)
00:16:883 - ^
00:17:047 - ^
00:26:113 (26113|0) - double note
00:29:163 (29163|2,29163|0,29328|1) - no short LNs here? like you did on 00:28:668 (28668|3,28668|1)
00:43:174 - add note
01:16:855 (76855|2,76910|1) - what are these 1/6s for? should be 1/4
01:45:482 - add note
00:11:773 - add note, still the same sound with 00:11:608 (11608|3)
00:17:047 - ^
00:33:201 - add note
00:35:179 - ^
00:37:817 - ^
01:14:657 (74657|3) - double note for kick sound
01:13:833 (73833|1) - double note like you did on 01:19:108 (79108|1,79108|0)

Good Luck! :)
Fuuyu


-me next- will mod after you apply
NlHIL

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi NlHIL:)
00:43:174 (43174|1,43256|0) - better to use LN here like you did on 01:45:482bai bai chicken~
00:54:218 (54218|2) - move to 1 for balance ...ok
01:23:229 (83229|1) - i suppose this LN is there to cover the 1/4 sound there. But still, there should be another LN starting on 01:23:064 - because the previous LN doesn't last that long. My suggestion is either removing LN for the 1/4s like you did on 01:44:163 or do something like this http://puu.sh/kETaO/5f2f644bfe.jpg consider

nothing much found here, cleverly done :D


Good Luck! :)
thx

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64,192,54877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,55042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,55207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,55372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,55372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,55701,128,0,55866:0:0:0:0:
448,192,55866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56196,128,0,61471:0:0:0:0:
64,192,61471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,61965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,62130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62624,128,0,62954:0:0:0:0:
64,192,62954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,63284,128,0,63613:0:0:0:0:
448,192,63613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,64108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,64273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,64438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,64602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,64767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,65097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,65262,128,0,65591:0:0:0:0:
320,192,65591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,65756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,65921,128,0,66745:0:0:0:0:
448,192,66745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,66745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67899,128,0,68229:0:0:0:0:
64,192,68229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,68558,128,0,68888:0:0:0:0:
448,192,68888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,69218,128,0,69547:0:0:0:0:
320,192,69547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,69712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,69877,128,0,70207:0:0:0:0:
448,192,70207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,70372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,70536,128,0,73339:0:0:0:0:
64,192,73339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,73339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,73668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,73833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,73998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,74163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,74328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,74492,128,0,74822:0:0:0:0:
64,192,74822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,74987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,75152,128,0,75482:0:0:0:0:
448,192,75482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,75811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,75976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,76141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,76965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,77130,128,0,77460:0:0:0:0:
320,192,77460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,77624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77789,128,0,78613:0:0:0:0:
320,192,78284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,78613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,78943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79767,128,0,80097:0:0:0:0:
64,192,80097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80427,128,0,80756:0:0:0:0:
320,192,80756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,80921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81086,128,0,81416:0:0:0:0:
192,192,81251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,81580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,81745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82405,128,0,83888:0:0:0:0:
64,192,82569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83229,128,0,83888:0:0:0:0:
64,192,83558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83888,128,0,84383:0:0:0:0:
64,192,83888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,84383,128,0,84877:0:0:0:0:
64,192,84383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,84877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84877,128,0,86525:0:0:0:0:
64,192,85207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,85536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,86196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86525,128,0,87020:0:0:0:0:
448,192,86525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,86855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,87020,128,0,87514:0:0:0:0:
320,192,87350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,87514,128,0,87844:0:0:0:0:
192,192,87514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,87844,128,0,88339:0:0:0:0:
64,192,87844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,88339,128,0,88833:0:0:0:0:
64,192,88339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88833,128,0,89163:0:0:0:0:
192,192,88833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,89163,128,0,89657:0:0:0:0:
320,192,89163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,89657,128,0,90152:0:0:0:0:
448,192,90152,128,0,91800:0:0:0:0:
64,192,91141,128,0,91800:0:0:0:0:
192,192,91800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,92295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,92295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,92789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,93284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,93284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,93778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,93778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,94108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,94438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,94602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,94767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,94932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,95097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,95427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,95591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,96251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,96580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,96745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,98064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,98558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,99712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,99877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,100042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,100207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,100207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,100372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,100536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,100701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,100866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,101196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,101361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,101525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,101855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,102020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,102185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,102514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,102844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,103174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,103503,128,0,104163:0:0:0:0:
448,192,103668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,104163,128,0,104987:0:0:0:0:
448,192,104163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,104657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,104987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,104987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,105482,128,0,105646:0:0:0:0:
320,192,105646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,105811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,105976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,106141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,106635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,106800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,107295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,107460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,107789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,108201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,108284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,108449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,108531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,108613,128,0,109108:0:0:0:0:
192,192,109108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,109438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,109602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,109767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,109932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,110042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,110152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,110262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,110372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,110482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,110591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,110701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,110811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,110921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,111031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,111141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,111251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,111361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,111471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,111580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,111690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,111800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,111910,128,0,117020:0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

xLoupGarou wrote:



-me next- will mod after you apply
sorry!! totally forgot about our m4m...will mod ur map right now!!!
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi Satoshi, NlHIL & Shiki~ :)

From MODHOUSE

Sorry for the delay, Here's my mod as requested~

Column 1|2|3|4

00:06:745 - why not add note here like you did on 00:09:383 (9383|3,9547|2)
00:06:910 - ^
00:08:064 - ^
00:08:229 - ^
00:15:564 - add note, still same sound with 00:15:317 (15317|2,15399|1) that sound are 00:15:317 (15317|2,15399|1) - here and i not using 1/6 in hyper diff
00:26:113 - ^ ^
00:41:361 - the LN start&end should be on 00:41:525 - listen carefully there have 2 different sound there and at red and white line..i choose white line since difficult hyper(below 3 star)
00:42:350 - start new LN, end previous LN
00:51:992 - add note
00:55:949 - ^
01:33:778 - start new LN, end previous LN
01:34:108 - here too^
00:15:482 - add note, for kick sound
00:20:591 (20591|2,20674|1) - double note
00:26:113 - add note, still same sound with 00:25:949 (25949|3) no..not suitable
00:31:306 (31306|1) - double note
00:31:800 (31800|1) - ^
00:41:361 - the LN start&end should be on 00:41:525 - listen carefully
00:41:855 (41855|2) - what is this LN for? my mistake..fixed
00:42:350 - start new LN, end previous LN nope
01:34:108 - ^
00:11:773 - add note, still the same sound with 00:11:608 (11608|2)
00:16:883 - ^
00:17:047 - ^
00:26:113 (26113|0) - double note
00:29:163 (29163|2,29163|0,29328|1) - no short LNs here? like you did on 00:28:668 (28668|3,28668|1)
00:43:174 - add note
01:16:855 (76855|2,76910|1) - what are these 1/6s for? should be 1/4
01:45:482 - add note
00:11:773 - add note, still the same sound with 00:11:608 (11608|3) no
00:17:047 - ^ ^
00:33:201 - add note
00:35:179 - ^
00:37:817 - ^
01:14:657 (74657|3) - double note for kick sound
01:13:833 (73833|1) - double note like you did on 01:19:108 (79108|1,79108|0)

Good Luck! :)
Thanks For Mod :D
Beatmap Updated
Fuuyu


Nyan-pasu~

Diifs to mod : NlHIL's Normal and Hyper

Column : 0|1|2|3


NlHIL's Normal


00:26:690 - add note to 0 change of pace
00:30:646 - add note to have more consistency than just some 1/1 double notes though I know that 00:30:317 - this exist but it still lacks some crisp to the map. Which "why the hell am I talking about crisps" :?

00:43:174 (43174|1) - change to note? Why not change this to notes, since this is not a EZ diff plus short LNs are hard to 320 :lol:

^ if followed add notes to 00:43:174 - col. 0 and 00:43:256 - col. 1, don't forget to remove the LN :roll:

00:55:701 (55701|1) - ^ same everything

00:56:031 - add note to 0
00:56:113 - add note to 1

^ to maintain consistency since after this it's a loooooong LN :lol:

01:24:218 - add note
01:24:712 - add note

^ don't stop the flow of the notes now :(

01:25:701 - add note to have pattern with 01:26:031 (86031|1,86196|0)
01:28:174 - add note
01:28:668 - ^ same
01:43:998 - miss? or something else?
01:44:492 - 01:44:822 - add note I don't think you really need to skip this part too.

01:45:482 (105482|1) - same with the short LN part above "change to notes" :roll:

Hyper


00:46:306 - add LN then extend until 00:46:635 - why not emphasize the *toooot* sound?

00:51:745 - until 00:52:240 - I think there's too much burden to the right hand so maybe follow this pattern instead?


moving on...

01:13:503 (73503|2) - move to 0 since a release then note jack is much more simple than a note to note jack
01:31:471 - add a note a suggestion out of nowhere
01:48:613 - add a LN that extends until here 01:48:943 - same reason "emphasis stuff"


That's All, feel free to reject them. Good Luck~ :)
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

- Kafuuchii - wrote:



Nyan-pasu~

Diifs to mod : NlHIL's Normal and Hyper

Column : 0|1|2|3


Hyper


00:46:306 - add LN then extend until 00:46:635 - why not emphasize the *toooot* sound?

00:51:745 - until 00:52:240 - I think there's too much burden to the right hand so maybe follow this pattern instead?


moving on...

01:13:503 (73503|2) - move to 0 since a release then note jack is much more simple than a note to note jack
01:31:471 - add a note a suggestion out of nowhere nope i adding LN cause that sound combined with 1/6
01:48:613 - add a LN that extends until here 01:48:943 - same reason "emphasis stuff"[/box]

That's All, feel free to reject them. Good Luck~ :)
Thanks For Mod :D
Beatmap Updated
SReisen

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi Satoshi, NlHIL & Shiki~ :)

From MODHOUSE

Sorry for the delay, Here's my mod as requested~

Column 1|2|3|4


00:11:773 - add note, still the same sound with 00:11:608 (11608|2)ok
00:16:883 - ^
00:17:047 - ^
00:26:113 (26113|0) - double note
00:29:163 (29163|2,29163|0,29328|1) - no short LNs here? like you did on 00:28:668 (28668|3,28668|1)
00:43:174 - add note
01:16:855 (76855|2,76910|1) - what are these 1/6s for? should be 1/4
01:45:482 - add not
oke
3rd Update
NlHIL

- Kafuuchii - wrote:



Nyan-pasu~

Diifs to mod : NlHIL's Normal and Hyper

Column : 0|1|2|3


NlHIL's Normal
00:26:690 - add note to 0 change of pace
00:30:646 - add note to have more consistency than just some 1/1 double notes though I know that 00:30:317 - this exist but it still lacks some crisp to the map. Which "why the hell am I talking about crisps" :?

00:43:174 (43174|1) - change to note? Why not change this to notes, since this is not a EZ diff plus short LNs are hard to 320 :lol:

^ if followed add notes to 00:43:174 - col. 0 and 00:43:256 - col. 1, don't forget to remove the LN :roll:

00:55:701 (55701|1) - ^ same everything

00:56:031 - add note to 0
00:56:113 - add note to 1

^ to maintain consistency since after this it's a loooooong LN :lol:

01:24:218 - add note
01:24:712 - add note

^ don't stop the flow of the notes now :(

01:25:701 - add note to have pattern with 01:26:031 (86031|1,86196|0)
01:28:174 - add note
01:28:668 - ^ same
01:43:998 - miss? or something else?
01:44:492 - 01:44:822 - add note I don't think you really need to skip this part too.

01:45:482 (105482|1) - same with the short LN part above "change to notes" :roll: [/color]Thank you. remaked. xd
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi Satoshi, NlHIL & Shiki~ :)

From MODHOUSE

Sorry for the delay, Here's my mod as requested~

Column 1|2|3|4


00:11:773 - add note, still the same sound with 00:11:608 (11608|2)ok
00:16:883 - ^
00:17:047 - ^
00:26:113 (26113|0) - double note
00:29:163 (29163|2,29163|0,29328|1) - no short LNs here? like you did on 00:28:668 (28668|3,28668|1)
00:43:174 - add note
01:16:855 (76855|2,76910|1) - what are these 1/6s for? should be 1/4
01:45:482 - add not
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3rd Update
Updated
Shinzo-

MOD READY


M4M

M4M with Satoshi Kazuki


4K

[1|2|3|4]


[General]

AiMod
  1. please fix that tags conflict

Timing
  1. No Problem

Hitsound
  1. No Problem

Metadata/Song Setup
  1. add Tags "beatmania iidx"

File/BG/etc.
  1. Clear

[Black Another]
00:07:405 - missing drum ? i hear a drum like 00:07:240 (7240|0) - there, and 00:07:899 - here too
00:07:405 (7405|2) - actually if u follow these kind of sound, then u should add an LN too at 00:08:064 - here
00:09:712 (9712|0) - the LN is for the fading sound, then it means u just missing 1 note for the sound like 00:05:262 (5262|1,6580|3,7899|1,9218|2) - please add note there
00:11:608 (11608|3) - highly recomend to delete this, because you just add on the wrong snap, it should be on 00:11:635 - 1/6 snap.. and because its will be conffusing, i recomend to delete
00:11:855 - why u didnt add the note for that ticking sound ? please add a note here, 00:13:174 - here too and the others... please more look at it and i think it's ok cause this is the hardest diff
  • 00:13:998 (13998|0,14080|0,14163|0,14245|0) - seriously, if u really want to make a jack then its better if u make a 2 jack not 4... i mean like
  1. 00:13:998 (13998|3,13998|0,14080|2,14080|0) - move to 34
  2. 00:14:163 (14163|0,14163|3,14245|0,14245|1) - move to 12

00:14:328 (14328|2,14438|1,14492|2) - 00:15:591 (15591|2) - please look more carefully, you have a diffrent snap with shiki's diff, please talk it with shiki
00:14:987 - 00:15:152 - u should add a note here, u can hear a bass is it ? same like 00:12:350 (12350|1,12350|3,12432|2,12432|0,12514|1,12514|3,12597|0,12597|2) -
00:20:262 (20262|3,20344|1,20427|3,20509|0,20756|3,20839|1) - what about to delete this ? 00:20:839 (20839|0) - and move this to 4, cause 00:20:921 (20921|1,20921|2,21003|0,21003|3,21086|2,21086|1,21168|0,21168|3,21251|1,21251|2,21333|3,21333|0,21416|1,21416|2,21498|0,21498|3) - this is like a loud sound, it will be not fair when you make it same with this part
00:26:141 (26141|3) - please, why LN ? if you want to make an LN, then 00:26:196 (26196|2) - make this LN instead.. and change 00:26:141 (26141|3) - to normal note
00:34:355 (34355|0) - you still have a empty room on 2, why u make it jack instead ?
00:40:042 - so.... no more 2 note like before ?
00:43:174 (43174|3) - move to 1 and 00:43:229 (43229|2,43284|1,43339|0) - move 1 column to right, cause 00:43:174 (43174|3) - this and 00:43:229 (43229|2,43284|1,43339|0) - has a diffrent kind of piano, i recomend to not make a continous pattern like this
00:43:668 (43668|1,43833|3) - Ctrl G ? for the pitch
00:45:152 (45152|0,45152|3,45482|1,45482|2) - actually, it's more fit to the song if you Ctrl G this, and sure, u must re-arrange 00:44:328 (44328|1,44492|2,44657|3,44822|2,44987|1) - this to make it more fit to the pitch too, u can see Shiki's diff i think he already follow the pitch corrrectly
  • some suggestion to make it more fit to the pitch
  1. 00:47:954 (47954|1,48064|2,48174|3) - Ctrl G and
  2. 00:48:284 (48284|1) - move to 4

00:48:613 - add a note, i hear 2 kind of piano there
00:49:273 - 00:49:438 - 00:49:602 - this is a missing piano
00:51:992 - please, this is a missing, also inconsisten with 00:55:949 (55949|3) -
00:53:229 - 00:53:394 - 00:53:558 - this is a missing piano
01:06:910 (66910|2,66910|1) - delete one of it, there only one kind of sound there
01:07:240 - please its inconsisten, the others are 2 note why this one just 1 ? 01:08:558 - here too
01:07:405 - hey you just missing a piano here
01:11:361 (71361|0,71443|1,71525|0,71608|1,71690|0,71773|1,71855|0,71938|1,72020|0,72102|1,72185|0,72267|1) - please Ctrl G and move 1 column to right for make it more comfortable, if u don't want to then it means u mapping for music not for player
01:22:569 - imo this is overmapped
01:40:042 - really ? just 1 note ? its inconsisten
01:40:317 (100317|1,100317|0) - ok, a diffrent snap again with shiki's diff
01:43:339 (103339|2,103339|1) - i need a explaination about these 2 LN ? can u explain what sound did you follow ? cause i think the LN that must end there should be 01:43:174 (103174|3) - and 01:43:503 - i hear a piano here which means u should make it 2 note

[Shiki's Another+]
just more look to the snap, so many diffrent snap with "Black Another" and "Another" diff

[Another]
just a small check
00:31:306 (31306|3) - move to 1 to make it more better look also more comfortable imo
00:49:108 (49108|3) - better to delete because you just following the main piano
00:55:949 (55949|3) - delete, inconsisten with 00:51:992 -
01:02:624 (62624|3,63284|0) - hmm... you should delete this, cause u didnt following those sound, and why u suddenly following that, i mean then 01:01:471 - 01:01:965 - 01:04:108 - 01:04:602 - etc. should be 2 note if you following htese kind of sound
01:11:361 - you better delete this stream part, cause Shiki's diff (Another+) not even have a note
01:17:954 (77954|0,77954|1,78036|2,78036|3,78119|1,78119|0,78201|3,78201|2,78284|1,78284|0,78366|3,78366|2,78449|1,78449|0,78531|2,78531|3) - overmapped for Another diff
01:39:135 (99135|0,99300|3,99465|0,99630|3) - better delete and re-arrange, seriously this is even harder than Another+
01:35:756 (95756|2,95756|1,95839|0,95839|3,95921|1,95921|2,96003|0,96003|3,96086|1,96086|2) - please just make it 1 note, its inconsisten with 01:41:031 (101031|0,101113|2,101196|0,101278|2,101361|0,101443|2,101525|0,101608|2) -

[ps]
  1. please, more look to the snap betwen your diff and Shiki's diff
  2. more look to the gap between "Another" "Another+" and "Black Another" like... another should be easier than another+, and Black Another should be harder than Another, Another+ should be harder than Another, Another+ should be easier than Black Another


ok, that's all...
good luck for your map
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY


M4M

M4M with Satoshi Kazuki


4K

[1|2|3|4]


[General]

AiMod
  1. please fix that tags conflict

Timing
  1. No Problem

Hitsound
  1. No Problem

Metadata/Song Setup
  1. add Tags "beatmania iidx"

File/BG/etc.
  1. Clear

[Black Another]
00:07:405 - missing drum ? i hear a drum like 00:07:240 (7240|0) - there, and 00:07:899 - here too
00:07:405 (7405|2) - actually if u follow these kind of sound, then u should add an LN too at 00:08:064 - here
00:09:712 (9712|0) - the LN is for the fading sound, then it means u just missing 1 note for the sound like 00:05:262 (5262|1,6580|3,7899|1,9218|2) - please add note there
00:11:608 (11608|3) - highly recomend to delete this, because you just add on the wrong snap, it should be on 00:11:635 - 1/6 snap.. and because its will be conffusing, i recomend to delete
00:11:855 - why u didnt add the note for that ticking sound ? please add a note here, 00:13:174 - here too and the others... please more look at it and i think it's ok cause this is the hardest diff
  • 00:13:998 (13998|0,14080|0,14163|0,14245|0) - seriously, if u really want to make a jack then its better if u make a 2 jack not 4... i mean like
  1. 00:13:998 (13998|3,13998|0,14080|2,14080|0) - move to 34
  2. 00:14:163 (14163|0,14163|3,14245|0,14245|1) - move to 12
not following yours but i changed to 3 jack and i rearranged the pattern
00:14:328 (14328|2,14438|1,14492|2) - 00:15:591 (15591|2) - please look more carefully, you have a diffrent snap with shiki's diff, please talk it with shiki i talk to him about this later
00:14:987 - 00:15:152 - u should add a note here, u can hear a bass is it ? same like 00:12:350 (12350|1,12350|3,12432|2,12432|0,12514|1,12514|3,12597|0,12597|2) -
00:20:262 (20262|3,20344|1,20427|3,20509|0,20756|3,20839|1) - what about to delete this ? 00:20:839 (20839|0) - and move this to 4, cause 00:20:921 (20921|1,20921|2,21003|0,21003|3,21086|2,21086|1,21168|0,21168|3,21251|1,21251|2,21333|3,21333|0,21416|1,21416|2,21498|0,21498|3) - this is like a loud sound, it will be not fair when you make it same with this part deleted and changed some pattern
00:26:141 (26141|3) - please, why LN ? if you want to make an LN, then 00:26:196 (26196|2) - make this LN instead.. and change 00:26:141 (26141|3) - to normal note changed the LN to normal note
00:34:355 (34355|0) - you still have a empty room on 2, why u make it jack instead ?
00:40:042 - so.... no more 2 note like before ? what are you mean?
00:43:174 (43174|3) - move to 1 and 00:43:229 (43229|2,43284|1,43339|0) - move 1 column to right, cause 00:43:174 (43174|3) - this and 00:43:229 (43229|2,43284|1,43339|0) - has a diffrent kind of piano, i recomend to not make a continous pattern like this i changed to 2,1,2,3
00:43:668 (43668|1,43833|3) - Ctrl G ? for the pitch
00:45:152 (45152|0,45152|3,45482|1,45482|2) - actually, it's more fit to the song if you Ctrl G this, and sure, u must re-arrange it's already ok so i keep 00:44:328 (44328|1,44492|2,44657|3,44822|2,44987|1) - this to make it more fit to the pitch too, u can see Shiki's diff i think he already follow the pitch corrrectly
  • some suggestion to make it more fit to the pitch
  1. 00:47:954 (47954|1,48064|2,48174|3) - Ctrl G and
  2. 00:48:284 (48284|1) - move to 4

00:48:613 - add a note, i hear 2 kind of piano there
00:49:273 - 00:49:438 - 00:49:602 - this is a missing piano 00:49:602 - i only heard hit hat cause this one is just a long sound of piano of this note 00:49:438 (49438|1,49438|3) -
00:51:992 - please, this is a missing, also inconsisten with 00:55:949 (55949|3) -
00:53:229 - 00:53:394 - 00:53:558 - this is a missing piano 00:53:558 - reason
01:06:910 (66910|2,66910|1) - delete one of it, there only one kind of sound there there has drum sound
01:07:240 - please its inconsisten, the others are 2 note why this one just 1 ? 01:08:558 - here too what are you mean? there only one note cause there only have one piano sound
01:07:405 - hey you just missing a piano here
01:11:361 (71361|0,71443|1,71525|0,71608|1,71690|0,71773|1,71855|0,71938|1,72020|0,72102|1,72185|0,72267|1) - please Ctrl G and move 1 column to right for make it more comfortable, if u don't want to then it means u mapping for music not for player for music orz
01:22:569 - imo this is overmapped not really since it's in kiai mode
01:40:042 - really ? just 1 note ? its inconsistent
01:40:317 (100317|1,100317|0) - ok, a diffrent snap again with shiki's diff
01:43:339 (103339|2,103339|1) - i need a explaination about these 2 LN ? can u explain what sound did you follow ? cause i think the LN that must end there should be 01:43:174 (103174|3) - and 01:43:503 - i hear a piano here which means u should make it 2 note idk why i add that 2 LN...rearranged all of it

[Another]
just a small check
00:31:306 (31306|3) - move to 1 to make it more better look also more comfortable imo
00:49:108 (49108|3) - better to delete because you just following the main piano
00:55:949 (55949|3) - delete, inconsisten with 00:51:992 - not delete that note but i add at missing one
01:02:624 (62624|3,63284|0) - hmm... you should delete this, cause u didnt following those sound, and why u suddenly following that, i mean then 01:01:471 - 01:01:965 - 01:04:108 - 01:04:602 - etc. should be 2 note if you following htese kind of sound
01:11:361 - you better delete this stream part, cause Shiki's diff (Another+) not even have a note this kinda hard to explain...i already talk about this but shiki doest want to add note at that part...i add note at that part cause i want to increase the star
01:17:954 (77954|0,77954|1,78036|2,78036|3,78119|1,78119|0,78201|3,78201|2,78284|1,78284|0,78366|3,78366|2,78449|1,78449|0,78531|2,78531|3) - overmapped for Another diff star reason
01:39:135 (99135|0,99300|3,99465|0,99630|3) - better delete and re-arrange, seriously this is even harder than Another+ what so hard about it?? unless i make 1,3,2,4 that are harder
01:35:756 (95756|2,95756|1,95839|0,95839|3,95921|1,95921|2,96003|0,96003|3,96086|1,96086|2) - please just make it 1 note, its inconsisten with 01:41:031 (101031|0,101113|2,101196|0,101278|2,101361|0,101443|2,101525|0,101608|2) -

[ps]
  1. please, more look to the snap betwen your diff and Shiki's diff
  2. more look to the gap between "Another" "Another+" and "Black Another" like... another should be easier than another+, and Black Another should be harder than Another, Another+ should be harder than Another, Another+ should be easier than Black Another


ok, that's all...
good luck for your map
Thank You Very Much For The Mod..will mod your map tomorrow :3
Beatmap Updated
GH40z
sorry i can't modding this map because too busy on irl

+1 stars
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

GH40z wrote:

sorry i can't modding this map because too busy on irl

+1 stars
it's okay
lenpai
Black Another:
SVs are great and some sections are already perfect. Problem is, the diff imo kinda has some unnecessary difficulty. Those double trills are everywhere which are reasonable but are just kinda boring to play.

Shiki:
Not a fan of the double trill usage but everything else is great. Minijacks and LNs were great.

00:44:163 rest section but making 1 an LN could be good
00:46:306 add note
00:46:800 ^
Yeah, just that. The diff is already structured properly so I can't really move stuff. Good job though.
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

Lenfried- wrote:

Black Another:
SVs are great and some sections are already perfect. Problem is, the diff imo kinda has some unnecessary difficulty. Those double trills are everywhere which are reasonable but are just kinda boring to play. fixed some of it

00:44:163 rest section but making 1 an LN could be good star will decreased so no
00:46:306 add note suddenly triple piano sound kinda weird
00:46:800 ^ ^
Yeah, just that. The diff is already structured properly so I can't really move stuff. Good job though.
Thanks For Mod
Beatmap Updated
Spy
Mark. When I have time I'll mod it.
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

Spy wrote:

Mark. When I have time I'll mod it.
Thanks :)
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