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Ayumi. - Hanagoyomi short version

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alacat
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Joined May 2011
alacat
Hello :3

[General]
  1. "normal-hitclap4"のファイルに遅延が見られたのでこちらの修正した物を使用してください。http://puu.sh/kOoHy/f4b92d4930.zip
  2. Ashemu's Extraにビデオが追加されていないので追加してください。
  3. Tagsに"Yasaija_714"があったほうがいいと思います。
  4. コンボカラーの(2)と(4)があまり大差ないので、(2)をもう少し薄くしてみてはどうでしょう？
  5. 00:16:839 - すべての難易度で、ここのセクションでスライダーの速度を変更していないので緑線を消してください。重複しています。

[Easy]
  1. サークルサイズ2、スペーシングがx1.0なのでかなりプレイしていて窮屈に感じます。サークルサイズの値を少しあげるかスペーシングを少しあけてみてはどうでしょう？サークルサイズの変更はSDの値が変わりますが、すべてのオブジェクトのスペーシングを調節するよりかは簡単にできると思います。
  2. 00:03:506 (2,2,2) - ピアノの音があるのでwhistleを追加してみてください
  3. 00:18:838 (4,5) - 直線に配置してしまうと前後のスライダーからの流れが悪くなります少し角度をつけて配置してみてください。
    SPOILER
  4. 00:22:838 - clapがあると00:16:839 (1,2) - 前のここと同じようなパターンを作ることができ、より良いと思います。
  5. 00:24:505 - clapを追加。定期的に追加することでリズムが取りやすくなります。
  6. 00:24:172 (4,2) - ここの2つの間隔が狭いので余裕があるくらいに広げてください。
    SPOILER
  7. 00:26:172 (1) - New comboはいらないと思います。
  8. 00:28:838 - ここからのsoft-hitnormalは音に合っていないのと、かなり煩く感じました。ピアノとボーカルだけなのでsoft-hitwhistleなんかを使って音をつけるべきだと思います。またそうすることで00:42:172 - ここからのパートと区別がつき抑揚もできます。Ashemuさんの難易度を参考にするといいかもしれません。
  9. 00:38:172 (1) - New comboを削除
  10. 00:39:672 - 右上のボタンでBreak timeを追加してください。
  11. 00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish
  12. 00:52:838 (1,2) - スライダーのノイズが目立つので無音の"soft-sliderslide2"を追加してみてはどうでしょう？また00:52:838 - ここをSoft Custom 2に設定してください。
  13. 00:56:838 (4) - 前の３つ00:55:505 (1,2,3) - でボーカルを取っているのでこちらもボーカルを取ったほうがわかりやすく叩きやすいリズムになると思います。
    SPOILER
  14. 00:58:505 (2,3,4) - デフォルトのclapは音に合っていないので変わりにデフォルトのwhistleを使用してみてください。
  15. 01:04:838 (1) - 始点のclap入らないと思います。
  16. 01:24:838 (1) - New comboを削除
  17. 01:35:505 (3) - 01:34:172 (1,2) - ここの始点で取っている音があるので終点にfinishを追加？
  18. 01:37:505 (2) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:506 - Easyでも指摘しましたがスライダーのノイズがここでも気になるので無音の"soft-sliderslide2"の追加をお勧めします。
  2. 00:01:506 (1,2,1) - 終点にwhistleを追加
  3. 00:09:506 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - この部分も一定のリズムでwhistleを入れてあげるとリズムが取りやすくなります。パターンはお任せします。
  4. 00:20:838 (3) - Normalという低難易度であるのでわかりにくい形のスライダーは良くないので、終点を曲げるのであればよりわかりやすく作成してください。
  5. 00:25:338 (2) - どちらかというと終点にfinishかな・・・？両方でもいいかもです。
  6. 00:26:172 (1) - new comboを削除
  7. 00:43:505 (3,4,1) - ちょっと(4)の位置が窮屈なので30度ほど曲げてみてはどうでしょう？
    SPOILER
  8. 00:52:838 (1) - 上記と同じ00:20:838 (3) -
  9. 01:38:172 (1) - new comboを削除
    リズムに関してはいいと思いますがスライダーの形や01:31:838 (2,4) - こういった重なりが気になりました。もう一度確認してみてください。
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:006 (4) - ここから1/2スライダーを使用して00:09:256 - ここにあるボーカルの音を取ってみてはどうでしょう？
  2. 00:15:256 (1) - ここのスピナーでボーカルを取るなら00:15:131 - ここから開始したほうがよりよいと思います。
  3. 00:25:505 (3) - finishを追加
  4. 00:51:172 (5,1) - 、01:32:172 (3,4,1) - プレイしていて窮屈に見えるのでもう少し間を空けてください。
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:006 (6) - Hardと同じです。
  2. 00:25:505 - ,00:26:838 - finishを追加
  3. 00:39:505 (1) - ここにはfinishを追加するほど大きな音が無いので削除したほうがいいと思います。
  4. 01:04:505 (1) - new comboを削除。
  5. 01:20:838 - ,01:37:338 - ,01:37:505 - finishを追加
    Normal,Hard同様に窮屈な配置が多く見られるのでなおした方がより見やすくなると思います。01:28:838 (1,2) - or 00:51:838 (2,3,4,5) -
[Ashemu's Extra]
  1. いくつかスナップされていないところがあるのでなおしておいてください。
  2. 00:11:256 (3) - ここのwhistleはピアノの音が無いので浮いて聞こえます。
  3. 00:12:506 (1) - ,00:14:506 (1,2) - new comboいらないと思います。
  4. 00:15:006 (2,1) - Hard diffと同じです。
  5. 00:16:839 (1,2,3) - 後の00:22:172 (1,2,3) - ここと同じようにx1.0で配置してみてはどうでしょう？より00:17:505 (4) - ここのジャンプが強調できていいと思います！
  6. 00:24:672 (6) - 次の00:24:838 (1) - ここの流れを考えるともう少し左に移動したほうが流れが自然になると思います。
  7. 00:25:338 (3) - ここにもfinishあってもいいかもです
  8. 00:39:838 (2) - ここの折り返しが隠れてしまっているのでアウトです見えるように配置しなおしてください。
    SPOILER
    RC : 全てのスライダー上のリバースアロー(矢印)は見えるようにしなくてはいけません。前のオブジェクトがヒットバースト(300, 100, 50など)によってスライダーのリバースや道、終わりを隠していないことを確認して下さい。(その確認にはデフォルトのスキンを用いてください。)これならスライダーの視認性を落とさず、簡単にプレイすることが出来ます。しかし短いリピートを繰り返すスライダー(一般的にキックスライダーと呼ばれる1/4や1/8で高速でリピートを連続して行うスライダー)は最初のリバースが見えているだけで問題ありません。(早いスライダーのリバースをすべて見ることは難しい上に、カーソルによって動く範囲の多くが隠されるためです。)
  9. 00:40:505 (3,4,5) - ここの(4)の音が正しくスナップされていないです。1/6の音が正しいので一度配置して25%の速度で聞いて試してみてください。(Rankedしているほうは1/4ですが、あれはアウトです)
    SPOILER
  10. 00:44:172 (3) - ここ00:44:422 - のギターの伸びている音を取っているのでここも1/4の音のキックスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう？
  11. 00:46:672 (4) - 特にここまで大きくジャンプさせるような音が無いのでスペーシングを減らしてください。
  12. 00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish
  13. 00:56:505 (4) - ここはwhistleの音があるのでclapの代わりに入れてみてはどうでしょう？
  14. 01:02:255 (1) - ,01:04:172 (1,2) - finishの音が無いので削除してください。変わりにwhistleを入れてみるといいかもしれません。
  15. 01:12:172 (5) - 終点のwhistleはいらないと思います。
  16. 01:13:838 (5) - clapを追加
  17. 01:25:505 (3,4,5) - (3,4)で大きくジャンプした後に(5)から連打となるとやりにくいと思います。(4,5)の間隔をもう少し空けてみてはどうでしょう？
  18. 01:28:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped。青線の上に音が無いので削除してください。
  19. 01:33:838 (5,6,7,8) - ^
  20. 01:38:005 - ,01:38:422 - 強い音があるのでnote欲しいです。
[Extra]
  1. HP Drain Rateは7でいいと思います。
  2. 00:08:506 (5) - 終点に音が無いので変わりにノートにしてみてはどうでしょう？
  3. 00:10:256 - ここだけピアノを取らないのは不自然に感じました。他の静かなパートではすべて追加してあったのでここも追加したほうがいいと思います。
  4. 00:16:839 - finishを追加
  5. 00:18:005 (4) - 次の00:18:172 (1) - ここで大きくジャンプさせたいので、00:18:005 (4) - このノートを右上に少し移動してみてください
  6. 00:19:338 (7) - 前の連打00:18:339 (2,3,4) - に合わせて配置してみてはどうでしょう？
    SPOILER
  7. 00:25:338 (1) - new comboを削除。
  8. 00:25:505 - finishを追加
  9. 00:28:505 (1,2,1) - 音に対してジャンプがでかすぎると思います。改善案としては全体的に小さくするか、２つずつ間隔を空けるのではなく、画像のように４つで二段階、間隔を広げていくのもよさそうです。
    SPOILER
  10. 00:40:672 (2,3,4) - Ashemu's Extraと同じです。
  11. 00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加
  12. 00:56:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped。ここまで多くの音は聞こえませんでしたもう一度聞いてノートを減らしてください。
  13. 01:10:505 (2) - もうすこし01:10:172 (1) - との間隔を空けたほうが、見た目と流れが良くなります。
  14. 01:16:255 (5) - overmapped。
  15. 01:19:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここの連打で仮にピアノの音を取るとしたら1/3の音になるので、通常通りボーカルを取り1/2などのリズムをお勧めします。
    SPOILER
  16. 01:20:838 (1) - 01:10:505 (2) - と同じで01:20:838 (1) - このスライダーを少し上に移動してみてください
  17. 01:28:839 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加
    00:43:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 、00:48:172 (5,6,7) - このあたりのスペーシングが音に合っていなく大きく感じたので、強い音はジャンプを置いてこういった部分は通常のスペーシングにして抑揚をつけるとより良い内容になると思います。
以上です。Easyで指摘したヒットサウンドなどの提案はすべての難易度に適応してください～がんばってください～ :)
A s h e m u
376 posts
Joined February 2013
A s h e m u

alacat wrote:

Hello :3
[Ashemu's Extra]
  1. いくつかスナップされていないところがあるのでなおしておいてください。
  2. 00:11:256 (3) - ここのwhistleはピアノの音が無いので浮いて聞こえます。 - delete note
  3. 00:12:506 (1) - ,00:14:506 (1,2) - new comboいらないと思います。 - fix
  4. 00:15:006 (2,1) - Hard diffと同じです。- fix
  5. 00:16:839 (1,2,3) - 後の00:22:172 (1,2,3) - ここと同じようにx1.0で配置してみてはどうでしょう？より00:17:505 (4) - ここのジャンプが強調できていいと思います！- fix
  6. 00:24:672 (6) - 次の00:24:838 (1) - ここの流れを考えるともう少し左に移動したほうが流れが自然になると思います。- fix
  7. 00:25:338 (3) - ここにもfinishあってもいいかもです- fix
  8. 00:39:838 (2) - ここの折り返しが隠れてしまっているのでアウトです見えるように配置しなおしてください。- fix
    SPOILER
    RC : 全てのスライダー上のリバースアロー(矢印)は見えるようにしなくてはいけません。前のオブジェクトがヒットバースト(300, 100, 50など)によってスライダーのリバースや道、終わりを隠していないことを確認して下さい。(その確認にはデフォルトのスキンを用いてください。)これならスライダーの視認性を落とさず、簡単にプレイすることが出来ます。しかし短いリピートを繰り返すスライダー(一般的にキックスライダーと呼ばれる1/4や1/8で高速でリピートを連続して行うスライダー)は最初のリバースが見えているだけで問題ありません。(早いスライダーのリバースをすべて見ることは難しい上に、カーソルによって動く範囲の多くが隠されるためです。)
  9. 00:40:505 (3,4,5) - ここの(4)の音が正しくスナップされていないです。1/6の音が正しいので一度配置して25%の速度で聞いて試してみてください。(Rankedしているほうは1/4ですが、あれはアウトです) - fix
    SPOILER
  10. 00:44:172 (3) - ここ00:44:422 - のギターの伸びている音を取っているのでここも1/4の音のキックスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
  11. 00:46:672 (4) - 特にここまで大きくジャンプさせるような音が無いのでスペーシングを減らしてください。- fix
  12. 00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish- fix
  13. 00:56:505 (4) - ここはwhistleの音があるのでclapの代わりに入れてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
  14. 01:02:255 (1) - ,01:04:172 (1,2) - finishの音が無いので削除してください。変わりにwhistleを入れてみるといいかもしれません。- fix
  15. 01:12:172 (5) - 終点のwhistleはいらないと思います。- fix
  16. 01:13:838 (5) - clapを追加- fix
  17. 01:25:505 (3,4,5) - (3,4)で大きくジャンプした後に(5)から連打となるとやりにくいと思います。(4,5)の間隔をもう少し空けてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
  18. 01:28:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped。青線の上に音が無いので削除してください。- fix
  19. 01:33:838 (5,6,7,8) - ^- fix
  20. 01:38:005 - ,01:38:422 - 強い音があるのでnote欲しいです。- fix　再配置できて嬉しいです
以上です。Easyで指摘したヒットサウンドなどの提案はすべての難易度に適応してください～がんばってください～ :)
Thanks for modding !!
指摘に見合った更新ができたか不安も少しありますが自分の理解でき得る範囲で全体の配置を見直しました！

Update plz
SPOILER
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Title:Hanagoyomi short version
TitleUnicode:華暦 short version
Artist:Ayumi.
ArtistUnicode:Ayumi.
Creator:Yasaija 714
Version:Ashemu's Extra
Source:花の野に咲くうたかたの
Tags:hana no no ni saku utakata no opening A_s_h_e_m_u
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72,48,84005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,144,84172,1,10,0:0:0:0:
40,292,84338,2,0,P|76:328|132:332,1,107.999996704102,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,200,84672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,324,84838,6,0,P|344:324|385:278,1,107.999996704102,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,148,85172,2,0,L|388:40,1,107.999996704102,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,20,85505,1,10,0:0:0:0:
148,76,85672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,260,85838,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,292,85922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,300,86005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,296,86088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,280,86172,6,0,B|328:160|328:160|344:208,1,161.999995056153,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,300,86505,2,0,P|428:304|480:276,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,216,86838,2,0,B|336:96|336:96|320:148,1,161.999995056153,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,236,87172,2,0,P|244:256|188:244,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,190,87505,5,10,0:0:0:0:
120,20,87672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,190,87838,1,10,0:0:0:0:
26,85,88005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,94,88172,2,0,P|281:130|341:126,1,107.999996704102,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,128,88505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,40,88672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,127,88838,6,0,P|294:87|218:99,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,176,89172,2,0,P|99:183|40:152,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,68,89505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,4,89672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,92,89838,2,0,L|212:204,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,304,90172,5,8,0:0:0:0:
292,328,90338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,328,90422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,328,90505,2,0,L|320:216,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,90838,2,0,P|469:110|472:40,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,0,91172,2,0,P|258:44|252:120,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,91505,5,8,0:0:0:0:
404,204,91672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,140,91838,2,0,P|248:156|216:204,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,308,92172,2,0,P|204:348|272:348,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,188,92505,2,0,P|292:148|224:148,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,132,92838,6,0,L|184:80,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,96,93088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,108,93172,2,0,L|376:60,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,244,93505,2,0,L|158:283,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,376,93838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,320,94005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,168,94172,6,0,P|20:112|60:84,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,108,94505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,212,94672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,94838,2,0,P|76:336|120:364,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,177,95172,2,0,P|294:133|239:96,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,80,95505,5,8,0:0:0:0:
136,220,95672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,92,95838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,228,96005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,144,96172,2,0,P|472:168|500:224,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,96505,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,336,96672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,128,96838,2,0,P|248:96|324:128,1,161.999995056153,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,148,97172,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,336,97338,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,96,97505,2,0,P|228:60|308:96,1,161.999995056153,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,124,97838,2,0,L|296:248,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,312,98172,6,0,P|280:336|340:328,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,285,98422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,285,98505,2,0,L|360:180,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,24,98838,1,12,0:0:0:0:

追記：ビデオの追加よろしくお願いします(｀･ω･´)ゞ
DeletedUser_423548
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_423548

alacat wrote:

Hello :3

[General]
  1. "normal-hitclap4"のファイルに遅延が見られたのでこちらの修正した物を使用してください。http://puu.sh/kOoHy/f4b92d4930.zip
  2. Ashemu's Extraにビデオが追加されていないので追加してください。
  3. Tagsに"Yasaija_714"があったほうがいいと思います。
  4. コンボカラーの(2)と(4)があまり大差ないので、(2)をもう少し薄くしてみてはどうでしょう？
  5. 00:16:839 - すべての難易度で、ここのセクションでスライダーの速度を変更していないので緑線を消してください。重複しています。

[Easy]
  1. サークルサイズ2、スペーシングがx1.0なのでかなりプレイしていて窮屈に感じます。サークルサイズの値を少しあげるかスペーシングを少しあけてみてはどうでしょう？サークルサイズの変更はSDの値が変わりますが、すべてのオブジェクトのスペーシングを調節するよりかは簡単にできると思います。
  2. 00:03:506 (2,2,2) - ピアノの音があるのでwhistleを追加してみてください
  3. 00:18:838 (4,5) - 直線に配置してしまうと前後のスライダーからの流れが悪くなります少し角度をつけて配置してみてください。
    SPOILER
  4. 00:22:838 - clapがあると00:16:839 (1,2) - 前のここと同じようなパターンを作ることができ、より良いと思います。
  5. 00:24:505 - clapを追加。定期的に追加することでリズムが取りやすくなります。
  6. 00:24:172 (4,2) - ここの2つの間隔が狭いので余裕があるくらいに広げてください。
    SPOILER
  7. 00:26:172 (1) - New comboはいらないと思います。
  8. 00:28:838 - ここからのsoft-hitnormalは音に合っていないのと、かなり煩く感じました。ピアノとボーカルだけなのでsoft-hitwhistleなんかを使って音をつけるべきだと思います。またそうすることで00:42:172 - ここからのパートと区別がつき抑揚もできます。Ashemuさんの難易度を参考にするといいかもしれません。
  9. 00:38:172 (1) - New comboを削除
  10. 00:39:672 - 右上のボタンでBreak timeを追加してください。
  11. 00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish
  12. 00:52:838 (1,2) - スライダーのノイズが目立つので無音の"soft-sliderslide2"を追加してみてはどうでしょう？また00:52:838 - ここをSoft Custom 2に設定してください。
  13. 00:56:838 (4) - 前の３つ00:55:505 (1,2,3) - でボーカルを取っているのでこちらもボーカルを取ったほうがわかりやすく叩きやすいリズムになると思います。
    SPOILER
  14. 00:58:505 (2,3,4) - デフォルトのclapは音に合っていないので変わりにデフォルトのwhistleを使用してみてください。
  15. 01:04:838 (1) - 始点のclap入らないと思います。
  16. 01:24:838 (1) - New comboを削除
  17. 01:35:505 (3) - 01:34:172 (1,2) - ここの始点で取っている音があるので終点にfinishを追加？
  18. 01:37:505 (2) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:506 - Easyでも指摘しましたがスライダーのノイズがここでも気になるので無音の"soft-sliderslide2"の追加をお勧めします。
  2. 00:01:506 (1,2,1) - 終点にwhistleを追加
  3. 00:09:506 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - この部分も一定のリズムでwhistleを入れてあげるとリズムが取りやすくなります。パターンはお任せします。
  4. 00:20:838 (3) - Normalという低難易度であるのでわかりにくい形のスライダーは良くないので、終点を曲げるのであればよりわかりやすく作成してください。
  5. 00:25:338 (2) - どちらかというと終点にfinishかな・・・？両方でもいいかもです。
  6. 00:26:172 (1) - new comboを削除
  7. 00:43:505 (3,4,1) - ちょっと(4)の位置が窮屈なので30度ほど曲げてみてはどうでしょう？
    SPOILER
  8. 00:52:838 (1) - 上記と同じ00:20:838 (3) -
  9. 01:38:172 (1) - new comboを削除
    リズムに関してはいいと思いますがスライダーの形や01:31:838 (2,4) - こういった重なりが気になりました。もう一度確認してみてください。
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:006 (4) - ここから1/2スライダーを使用して00:09:256 - ここにあるボーカルの音を取ってみてはどうでしょう？
  2. 00:15:256 (1) - ここのスピナーでボーカルを取るなら00:15:131 - ここから開始したほうがよりよいと思います。
  3. 00:25:505 (3) - finishを追加
  4. 00:51:172 (5,1) - 、01:32:172 (3,4,1) - プレイしていて窮屈に見えるのでもう少し間を空けてください。
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:006 (6) - Hardと同じです。
  2. 00:25:505 - ,00:26:838 - finishを追加
  3. 00:39:505 (1) - ここにはfinishを追加するほど大きな音が無いので削除したほうがいいと思います。
  4. 01:04:505 (1) - new comboを削除。
  5. 01:20:838 - ,01:37:338 - ,01:37:505 - finishを追加
    Normal,Hard同様に窮屈な配置が多く見られるのでなおした方がより見やすくなると思います。01:28:838 (1,2) - or 00:51:838 (2,3,4,5) -
[Ashemu's Extra]
  1. いくつかスナップされていないところがあるのでなおしておいてください。
  2. 00:11:256 (3) - ここのwhistleはピアノの音が無いので浮いて聞こえます。
  3. 00:12:506 (1) - ,00:14:506 (1,2) - new comboいらないと思います。
  4. 00:15:006 (2,1) - Hard diffと同じです。
  5. 00:16:839 (1,2,3) - 後の00:22:172 (1,2,3) - ここと同じようにx1.0で配置してみてはどうでしょう？より00:17:505 (4) - ここのジャンプが強調できていいと思います！
  6. 00:24:672 (6) - 次の00:24:838 (1) - ここの流れを考えるともう少し左に移動したほうが流れが自然になると思います。
  7. 00:25:338 (3) - ここにもfinishあってもいいかもです
  8. 00:39:838 (2) - ここの折り返しが隠れてしまっているのでアウトです見えるように配置しなおしてください。
    SPOILER
    RC : 全てのスライダー上のリバースアロー(矢印)は見えるようにしなくてはいけません。前のオブジェクトがヒットバースト(300, 100, 50など)によってスライダーのリバースや道、終わりを隠していないことを確認して下さい。(その確認にはデフォルトのスキンを用いてください。)これならスライダーの視認性を落とさず、簡単にプレイすることが出来ます。しかし短いリピートを繰り返すスライダー(一般的にキックスライダーと呼ばれる1/4や1/8で高速でリピートを連続して行うスライダー)は最初のリバースが見えているだけで問題ありません。(早いスライダーのリバースをすべて見ることは難しい上に、カーソルによって動く範囲の多くが隠されるためです。)
  9. 00:40:505 (3,4,5) - ここの(4)の音が正しくスナップされていないです。1/6の音が正しいので一度配置して25%の速度で聞いて試してみてください。(Rankedしているほうは1/4ですが、あれはアウトです)
    SPOILER
  10. 00:44:172 (3) - ここ00:44:422 - のギターの伸びている音を取っているのでここも1/4の音のキックスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう？
  11. 00:46:672 (4) - 特にここまで大きくジャンプさせるような音が無いのでスペーシングを減らしてください。
  12. 00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish
  13. 00:56:505 (4) - ここはwhistleの音があるのでclapの代わりに入れてみてはどうでしょう？
  14. 01:02:255 (1) - ,01:04:172 (1,2) - finishの音が無いので削除してください。変わりにwhistleを入れてみるといいかもしれません。
  15. 01:12:172 (5) - 終点のwhistleはいらないと思います。
  16. 01:13:838 (5) - clapを追加
  17. 01:25:505 (3,4,5) - (3,4)で大きくジャンプした後に(5)から連打となるとやりにくいと思います。(4,5)の間隔をもう少し空けてみてはどうでしょう？
  18. 01:28:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped。青線の上に音が無いので削除してください。
  19. 01:33:838 (5,6,7,8) - ^
  20. 01:38:005 - ,01:38:422 - 強い音があるのでnote欲しいです。
[Extra]
  1. HP Drain Rateは7でいいと思います。
  2. 00:08:506 (5) - 終点に音が無いので変わりにノートにしてみてはどうでしょう？
  3. 00:10:256 - ここだけピアノを取らないのは不自然に感じました。他の静かなパートではすべて追加してあったのでここも追加したほうがいいと思います。
  4. 00:16:839 - finishを追加
  5. 00:18:005 (4) - 次の00:18:172 (1) - ここで大きくジャンプさせたいので、00:18:005 (4) - このノートを右上に少し移動してみてください
  6. 00:19:338 (7) - 前の連打00:18:339 (2,3,4) - に合わせて配置してみてはどうでしょう？
    SPOILER
  7. 00:25:338 (1) - new comboを削除。
  8. 00:25:505 - finishを追加
  9. 00:28:505 (1,2,1) - 音に対してジャンプがでかすぎると思います。改善案としては全体的に小さくするか、２つずつ間隔を空けるのではなく、画像のように４つで二段階、間隔を広げていくのもよさそうです。
    SPOILER
  10. 00:40:672 (2,3,4) - Ashemu's Extraと同じです。
  11. 00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加
  12. 00:56:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped。ここまで多くの音は聞こえませんでしたもう一度聞いてノートを減らしてください。
  13. 01:10:505 (2) - もうすこし01:10:172 (1) - との間隔を空けたほうが、見た目と流れが良くなります。
  14. 01:16:255 (5) - overmapped。
  15. 01:19:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここの連打で仮にピアノの音を取るとしたら1/3の音になるので、通常通りボーカルを取り1/2などのリズムをお勧めします。
    SPOILER
  16. 01:20:838 (1) - 01:10:505 (2) - と同じで01:20:838 (1) - このスライダーを少し上に移動してみてください
  17. 01:28:839 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加
    00:43:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 、00:48:172 (5,6,7) - このあたりのスペーシングが音に合っていなく大きく感じたので、強い音はジャンプを置いてこういった部分は通常のスペーシングにして抑揚をつけるとより良い内容になると思います。
以上です。Easyで指摘したヒットサウンドなどの提案はすべての難易度に適応してください～がんばってください～ :)
mod有難うございます！
すべて変更させていただきました
DeletedUser_423548
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_423548

A s h e m u wrote:

alacat wrote:

Hello :3
[Ashemu's Extra]
  1. いくつかスナップされていないところがあるのでなおしておいてください。
  2. 00:11:256 (3) - ここのwhistleはピアノの音が無いので浮いて聞こえます。 - delete note
  3. 00:12:506 (1) - ,00:14:506 (1,2) - new comboいらないと思います。 - fix
  4. 00:15:006 (2,1) - Hard diffと同じです。- fix
  5. 00:16:839 (1,2,3) - 後の00:22:172 (1,2,3) - ここと同じようにx1.0で配置してみてはどうでしょう？より00:17:505 (4) - ここのジャンプが強調できていいと思います！- fix
  6. 00:24:672 (6) - 次の00:24:838 (1) - ここの流れを考えるともう少し左に移動したほうが流れが自然になると思います。- fix
  7. 00:25:338 (3) - ここにもfinishあってもいいかもです- fix
  8. 00:39:838 (2) - ここの折り返しが隠れてしまっているのでアウトです見えるように配置しなおしてください。- fix
    SPOILER
    RC : 全てのスライダー上のリバースアロー(矢印)は見えるようにしなくてはいけません。前のオブジェクトがヒットバースト(300, 100, 50など)によってスライダーのリバースや道、終わりを隠していないことを確認して下さい。(その確認にはデフォルトのスキンを用いてください。)これならスライダーの視認性を落とさず、簡単にプレイすることが出来ます。しかし短いリピートを繰り返すスライダー(一般的にキックスライダーと呼ばれる1/4や1/8で高速でリピートを連続して行うスライダー)は最初のリバースが見えているだけで問題ありません。(早いスライダーのリバースをすべて見ることは難しい上に、カーソルによって動く範囲の多くが隠されるためです。)
  9. 00:40:505 (3,4,5) - ここの(4)の音が正しくスナップされていないです。1/6の音が正しいので一度配置して25%の速度で聞いて試してみてください。(Rankedしているほうは1/4ですが、あれはアウトです) - fix
    SPOILER
  10. 00:44:172 (3) - ここ00:44:422 - のギターの伸びている音を取っているのでここも1/4の音のキックスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
  11. 00:46:672 (4) - 特にここまで大きくジャンプさせるような音が無いのでスペーシングを減らしてください。- fix
  12. 00:47:505 (1) - 始点にfinish- fix
  13. 00:56:505 (4) - ここはwhistleの音があるのでclapの代わりに入れてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
  14. 01:02:255 (1) - ,01:04:172 (1,2) - finishの音が無いので削除してください。変わりにwhistleを入れてみるといいかもしれません。- fix
  15. 01:12:172 (5) - 終点のwhistleはいらないと思います。- fix
  16. 01:13:838 (5) - clapを追加- fix
  17. 01:25:505 (3,4,5) - (3,4)で大きくジャンプした後に(5)から連打となるとやりにくいと思います。(4,5)の間隔をもう少し空けてみてはどうでしょう？- fix
  18. 01:28:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped。青線の上に音が無いので削除してください。- fix
  19. 01:33:838 (5,6,7,8) - ^- fix
  20. 01:38:005 - ,01:38:422 - 強い音があるのでnote欲しいです。- fix　再配置できて嬉しいです
以上です。Easyで指摘したヒットサウンドなどの提案はすべての難易度に適応してください～がんばってください～ :)
Thanks for modding !!
指摘に見合った更新ができたか不安も少しありますが自分の理解でき得る範囲で全体の配置を見直しました！

Update plz
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TitleUnicode:華暦 short version
Artist:Ayumi.
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Source:花の野に咲くうたかたの
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ビデオ追加とアプデしました
Lavender
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Good luck on ranking!
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Lavender wrote:

Good luck on ranking!
Thank you! :)
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request via PM 遅れてごめんなさい!!

[Easy]
  1. 00:39:172 (4) - blanketがちょっと汚く見えます。slider endのgridを右に２つ移動させるだけでもだいぶ良くなります。
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  2. 01:15:505 (1) - 手前の(4)と重なってるのが気になります。(1)の真ん中のgridを右に１個移動させるだけで重なりは解消され見栄えもよく見えます。試してみてください。
[Normal]

  • 特に無かったです。
[Hard]
  1. 01:04:838 (1) - このスライダーの終点は1/16でスナップされてますが、特に理由がなければ1/4で配置する事をお勧めします。01:05:005 - ここまで移動。
[Insane]
  1. 特に無かったです。
[Ashemu's Extra]
  1. 00:05:006 (3) - このスライダーの終点ですが。1/16にスナップされています。よっぽどの事で無い限り1/4でスナップするのが妥当だと思います。音聴いてみましたが、1/16に拘る理由が見つかりませんでした。 00:05:256 - ちなみに終点はこのtimeです。
  2. 01:17:505 (5,6) - ↑に同じく。 (5)の終点は01:17:672 - に。 (6)の終点は01:18:005 - に移動させましょう。
[Extra]
  1. 01:32:838 (1,2) - 曲をよく聴く限りこういう音取りの方が自然かと思います。
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力になれなかったですが、ranked目指して頑張ってください。
DeletedUser_423548
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_423548

P o M u T a wrote:

request via PM 遅れてごめんなさい!!

[Easy]
  1. 00:39:172 (4) - blanketがちょっと汚く見えます。slider endのgridを右に２つ移動させるだけでもだいぶ良くなります。fix
    SPOILER
  2. 01:15:505 (1) - 手前の(4)と重なってるのが気になります。(1)の真ん中のgridを右に１個移動させるだけで重なりは解消され見栄えもよく見えます。試してみてください。fix
[Normal]

  • 特に無かったです。
[Hard]
  1. 01:04:838 (1) - このスライダーの終点は1/16でスナップされてますが、特に理由がなければ1/4で配置する事をお勧めします。01:05:005 - ここまで移動。!!!1/16にした覚えがないですが変更しました
[Insane]
  1. 特に無かったです。

[Extra]
  1. 01:32:838 (1,2) - 曲をよく聴く限りこういう音取りの方が自然かと思います。
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A s h e m u wrote:

[*]00:20:839 (1,2) - こんなのどうでしょう
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http://puu.sh/kN99t.png
変えてみました

力になれなかったですが、ranked目指して頑張ってください。
modありがとうございます！
A s h e m u
376 posts
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A s h e m u

P o M u T a wrote:

request via PM 遅れてごめんなさい!!

[Ashemu's Extra]
  1. 00:05:006 (3) - このスライダーの終点ですが。1/16にスナップされています。よっぽどの事で無い限り1/4でスナップするのが妥当だと思います。音聴いてみましたが、1/16に拘る理由が見つかりませんでした。 00:05:256 - ちなみに終点はこのtimeです。
  2. 01:17:505 (5,6) - ↑に同じく。 (5)の終点は01:17:672 - に。 (6)の終点は01:18:005 - に移動させましょう。
なぜかスライダーの終点おかしかったのに気付きませんでした！ご指摘ありがとうございましたー！

Update ｐｌｚ- :3

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[Ashemu's Extra]
  1. 00:05:006 (3) - このスライダーの終点ですが。1/16にスナップされています。よっぽどの事で無い限り1/4でスナップするのが妥当だと思います。音聴いてみましたが、1/16に拘る理由が見つかりませんでした。 00:05:256 - ちなみに終点はこのtimeです。
  2. 01:17:505 (5,6) - ↑に同じく。 (5)の終点は01:17:672 - に。 (6)の終点は01:18:005 - に移動させましょう。
なぜかスライダーの終点おかしかったのに気付きませんでした！ご指摘ありがとうございましたー！

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okです
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
Hello, from my queue! (sorry, I don't speak japanese)

[General]
  1. The map it's overpassing the 24MB with video limit. Put the video in 854x480.
[Easy]
00:30:838 (2) - Getting out of the grid
00:31:505 (3) - Fix distance
00:36:838 (1) - Same
00:39:672 - 00:42:005 - Delete break
00:54:172 (2) - Fix distance
00:56:838 (4) - Same

[Normal]
00:49:338 - (AiMod) This slider is far
00:56:838 (3) - Fix distance

Hard and Insane are fine
Well beatmapped and good luck with rank! :D
DeletedUser_423548
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_423548

AlejandroMedia wrote:

Hello, from my queue! (sorry, I don't speak japanese)

[General]
  1. The map it's overpassing the 24MB with video limit. Put the video in 854x480.
[Easy]
00:30:838 (2) - Getting out of the grid fix
00:31:505 (3) - Fix distance fix
00:36:838 (1) - Same fix
00:39:672 - 00:42:005 - Delete break No Change
00:54:172 (2) - Fix distance fix
00:56:838 (4) - Same fix

[Normal]
00:49:338 - (AiMod) This slider is far fix
00:56:838 (3) - Fix distance fix

Hard and Insane are fine Thank you
Well beatmapped and good luck with rank! :D
Thank you for modding :)
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-
hihi
頑張ってModしてくれた感あったのでお礼にYasaiさんのDiffのみ軽くつっこんだModします
Kudosuはいりません

すべてHighly recommended.です

Easy

  1. 今時CS2は無いと思います、貼ってあるCodeはCS3で置いてるのでそのあたり気を付けてください
  2. 00:18:838 (4,5,1) - ここらへん配置が手前に比べ直線すぎます、また00:20:172 (2,1) - の重なりや00:20:838 (3,4,1) - の流れも強引すぎると思います、Code貼っておくので参考にするもよし、そのまま使うもお好きに00:23:172 (2,3) - ここは弄ってません
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    128,133,24172,2,0,P|171:122|232:93,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    　
  3. 00:32:838 (4,5) - 手前と同じ2/1sliderでいいです
  4. 00:30:172 - 00:39:505 - まで静かなパートなのでポンポン鳴らす必要ないですVol30のSC2などにしましょう、全Diffです
  5. 00:31:505 (3,4,1) - ↑と同じ理由でsliderBodyに入ってるwhistle外してください
  6. 00:42:172 - うるさいです、KiaiでVol70から80だと思うので10％下げてください
  7. 00:42:838 - Finishいりません
  8. 00:43:838 (4) - 何をフォローしているか伝わりません３とrhythm入れ替えましょう
  9. 00:50:838 (2) - いきなり真上に上がりすぎです、また00:50:838 (2,3) - の見た目00:49:505 (4,3) - Overlap 00:50:838 (2,4) - ^00:51:505 (3,4) - の流れなど理解できないので置き直し推奨します
  10. 00:52:838 (1,2) - Bodywhistleうっさいです
  11. 00:58:505 (2,3) - 窮屈＆00:55:505 (1,2,3) - ここと同じエリアを使うのは好ましくないです、右に２を置き上に向かう感じにするといいと思います
  12. 01:04:838 (1) - 頭のClapを終点に
  13. 01:06:505 - Clap
  14. 01:08:838 - Clapいらないです
  15. 01:11:505 (4) - ５の位置からして曲げ方悪いです、また01:12:505 (5,3) - この重なりも醜いので、
    SPOILER
    こんな感じでつなげましょう
  16. 01:25:172 - 01:25:838 (5) - Clap
  17. 01:29:505 - Finishいらないです
  18. 01:32:172 - ^
  19. 01:34:838 - ^
  20. 01:37:838 (3) - 292/107が自然です

Normal

  1. 00:20:838 (3) - やりすぎですNormalの形じゃないですし意味も分かりません
  2. 00:22:838 (2) - 00:22:172 (1) - これの形を考えて真上にあるのはおかしいです
  3. 00:38:172 (4,5,1,2) - Bodywhistleいらないです
  4. 00:43:505 (3,4) - 見た目流れともにBadです
  5. 00:44:838 (1) - 曲げ方の意図が分かりません２への流れもよくないです
  6. 00:46:172 (3,4) - 何故に直線なんでしょう、全然繋がってませんし苦し紛れにみえます、手前とともに修正しましょう
  7. 00:52:838 (1) - 4からこのsliderは繋がりませんし曲げ方も悪いです
  8. 00:58:172 (1,2,3) - 言い方悪いですがこういう直線の配置はるか昔のクソ譜面連想します
  9. 00:58:172 - Easyにも書いたとうり70はうっさいです
  10. ルール上問題ないので私なら01:04:172 - 01:04:505 - circleおきます
  11. 01:13:838 (2,3) - 何故いきなり1/2からのVofollow？手前の密度とかみ合いませんし盛り上がるのは01:12:838 - からなので
    01:12:838 - 1/1　01:13:338 - circle 01:13:505 - 1/1 01:14:005 - circle　01:14:172 - 1/1 or 2/1でいいと思います
  12. 01:28:838 (1,2,3,4) - ごちゃごっちゃしすぎです
  13. 01:32:838 (4) - 無理に曲げなくていいと思います
  14. 01:34:172 (1,2,3) - 直線云々
  15. 01:35:505 - 01:29:172 - Finishいらない

Hard

  1. いろいろとアレなのでよければ作りましょうか？
    自分で頑張るのであれば後日みます

Insane

  1. 00:07:506 (1,2,3,4) - SlowPartでこの広さ、配置は神経使います、また00:08:006 (3,4,5) - この振り下ろす感じのAIMも場違いです
  2. 00:11:506 (3) - なぜ２と重なるこの位置？いろいろと置く場所あるはずです
  3. 00:18:339 (2,3,4,5) - 流れ的には配置逆なはずです
  4. 00:21:338 (5,6) - Bad stack
  5. 00:22:172 (1,2,3,4) - この運動は悪いです
  6. 00:24:838 (1) - ここは強調されるべきBeatです
    00:24:672 (5) - を170/174に　00:24:838 (1) - を00:25:172 (2) - にスタックさせた方がいいかと
  7. 00:26:172 (1) - 離すなら離す、つけるならつけるはっきりさせましょう
  8. 00:28:172 (3,4,5,6) - Exでもそうですが徐々に音よわくなっていっているにも関わらずなぜcircle？00:27:505 (1,2) - と逆かいっそのこと全てsliderにしてSV下げていく方がいいと思います
  9. 00:28:838 - 00:42:088 - までSV0.5まで落としましょう、どうみても速すぎます
  10. 00:33:838 (4) - Remove Note
  11. 00:34:172 (1,2) - Body whistle
  12. 00:35:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - このDSは場違いです
  13. 00:37:505 (3) - 遅いところで拡張Beatは使うべきではありません
  14. 00:41:838 (2,1) - 00:42:672 (2,3) - 流れ謎すぎませんか
  15. 00:43:672 (2,3,4) - whistleいらないです４にClapだけで充分、いうていきなりの三連浮きすぎてるので00:43:755 (3) - 削除でいいと思いますが
  16. 00:44:505 (7) - 窮屈ですし00:44:505 (7,1) - 繋がってません
  17. 00:45:338 (2) - Clapは１の終点です
  18. 00:44:838 - Finishではなくwhistleで充分です
  19. 00:47:172 (7,1) - まあこの流れは理解できるんですが、00:45:838 (4,1) - 00:46:838 (6,7) - の流れや00:46:672 (5) - の重なり具合的に再配置推奨します
  20. 00:50:672 (3,4,5,6) - あたりのwhistleは何をフォローしてるんですか？
  21. 00:52:338 (4) - Remove note,00:52:172 - から1/1でもいいと思いますが好きな方で
  22. 00:52:838 - 何故にNoremalsoundなのでしょう
  23. 00:55:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 全く再生されません、よく音を聞いてください
  24. 01:07:338 (7) - 謎の流れ
  25. 01:16:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
    うーｍ、まだまだサビはいきなりの直線flow無意味なOverlapが目立ちすぎます、ここでリタイアしときますlol
    Vol関係やsound関連は全Diff修正してください

謎なHitsoundばかりだと見ていてイライラしてくるので言い方悪くなってたらすみません :o
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-Nanaka- wrote:

hihi
頑張ってModしてくれた感あったのでお礼にYasaiさんのDiffのみ軽くつっこんだModします
Kudosuはいりません

すべてHighly recommended.です

Easy

  1. 今時CS2は無いと思います、貼ってあるCodeはCS3で置いてるのでそのあたり気を付けてください
  2. 00:18:838 (4,5,1) - ここらへん配置が手前に比べ直線すぎます、また00:20:172 (2,1) - の重なりや00:20:838 (3,4,1) - の流れも強引すぎると思います、Code貼っておくので参考にするもよし、そのまま使うもお好きに00:23:172 (2,3) - ここは弄ってません
    SPOILER
    308,220,16839,6,0,P|224:194|131:231,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    67,277,17839,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    15,203,18172,2,0,P|-7:118|31:18,1,180
    108,13,19172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    150,92,19505,6,0,P|187:116|238:124,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    308,76,20172,2,0,P|351:84|389:108,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    447,176,20838,2,0,P|474:137|468:69,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    385,242,21838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    316,183,22172,6,0,P|240:190|158:277,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    124,336,23172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    68,268,23505,2,2,P|52:224|56:164,1,90,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    128,133,24172,2,0,P|171:122|232:93,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    　
  3. 00:32:838 (4,5) - 手前と同じ2/1sliderでいいです
  4. 00:30:172 - 00:39:505 - まで静かなパートなのでポンポン鳴らす必要ないですVol30のSC2などにしましょう、全Diffです
  5. 00:31:505 (3,4,1) - ↑と同じ理由でsliderBodyに入ってるwhistle外してください
  6. 00:42:172 - うるさいです、KiaiでVol70から80だと思うので10％下げてください
  7. 00:42:838 - Finishいりません
  8. 00:43:838 (4) - 何をフォローしているか伝わりません３とrhythm入れ替えましょう
  9. 00:50:838 (2) - いきなり真上に上がりすぎです、また00:50:838 (2,3) - の見た目00:49:505 (4,3) - Overlap 00:50:838 (2,4) - ^00:51:505 (3,4) - の流れなど理解できないので置き直し推奨します
  10. 00:52:838 (1,2) - Bodywhistleうっさいです
  11. 00:58:505 (2,3) - 窮屈＆00:55:505 (1,2,3) - ここと同じエリアを使うのは好ましくないです、右に２を置き上に向かう感じにするといいと思います
  12. 01:04:838 (1) - 頭のClapを終点に
  13. 01:06:505 - Clap
  14. 01:08:838 - Clapいらないです
  15. 01:11:505 (4) - ５の位置からして曲げ方悪いです、また01:12:505 (5,3) - この重なりも醜いので、
    SPOILER
    こんな感じでつなげましょう
  16. 01:25:172 - 01:25:838 (5) - Clap
  17. 01:29:505 - Finishいらないです
  18. 01:32:172 - ^
  19. 01:34:838 - ^
  20. 01:37:838 (3) - 292/107が自然です

Normal

  1. 00:20:838 (3) - やりすぎですNormalの形じゃないですし意味も分かりません
  2. 00:22:838 (2) - 00:22:172 (1) - これの形を考えて真上にあるのはおかしいです
  3. 00:38:172 (4,5,1,2) - Bodywhistleいらないです
  4. 00:43:505 (3,4) - 見た目流れともにBadです
  5. 00:44:838 (1) - 曲げ方の意図が分かりません２への流れもよくないです
  6. 00:46:172 (3,4) - 何故に直線なんでしょう、全然繋がってませんし苦し紛れにみえます、手前とともに修正しましょう
  7. 00:52:838 (1) - 4からこのsliderは繋がりませんし曲げ方も悪いです
  8. 00:58:172 (1,2,3) - 言い方悪いですがこういう直線の配置はるか昔のクソ譜面連想します
  9. 00:58:172 - Easyにも書いたとうり70はうっさいです
  10. ルール上問題ないので私なら01:04:172 - 01:04:505 - circleおきます
  11. 01:13:838 (2,3) - 何故いきなり1/2からのVofollow？手前の密度とかみ合いませんし盛り上がるのは01:12:838 - からなので
    01:12:838 - 1/1　01:13:338 - circle 01:13:505 - 1/1 01:14:005 - circle　01:14:172 - 1/1 or 2/1でいいと思います
  12. 01:28:838 (1,2,3,4) - ごちゃごっちゃしすぎです
  13. 01:32:838 (4) - 無理に曲げなくていいと思います
  14. 01:34:172 (1,2,3) - 直線云々
  15. 01:35:505 - 01:29:172 - Finishいらない

Hard

  1. いろいろとアレなのでよければ作りましょうか？
    自分で頑張るのであれば後日みます

Insane

  1. 00:07:506 (1,2,3,4) - SlowPartでこの広さ、配置は神経使います、また00:08:006 (3,4,5) - この振り下ろす感じのAIMも場違いです
  2. 00:11:506 (3) - なぜ２と重なるこの位置？いろいろと置く場所あるはずです
  3. 00:18:339 (2,3,4,5) - 流れ的には配置逆なはずです
  4. 00:21:338 (5,6) - Bad stack
  5. 00:22:172 (1,2,3,4) - この運動は悪いです
  6. 00:24:838 (1) - ここは強調されるべきBeatです
    00:24:672 (5) - を170/174に　00:24:838 (1) - を00:25:172 (2) - にスタックさせた方がいいかと
  7. 00:26:172 (1) - 離すなら離す、つけるならつけるはっきりさせましょう
  8. 00:28:172 (3,4,5,6) - Exでもそうですが徐々に音よわくなっていっているにも関わらずなぜcircle？00:27:505 (1,2) - と逆かいっそのこと全てsliderにしてSV下げていく方がいいと思います
  9. 00:28:838 - 00:42:088 - までSV0.5まで落としましょう、どうみても速すぎます
  10. 00:33:838 (4) - Remove Note
  11. 00:34:172 (1,2) - Body whistle
  12. 00:35:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - このDSは場違いです
  13. 00:37:505 (3) - 遅いところで拡張Beatは使うべきではありません
  14. 00:41:838 (2,1) - 00:42:672 (2,3) - 流れ謎すぎませんか
  15. 00:43:672 (2,3,4) - whistleいらないです４にClapだけで充分、いうていきなりの三連浮きすぎてるので00:43:755 (3) - 削除でいいと思いますが
  16. 00:44:505 (7) - 窮屈ですし00:44:505 (7,1) - 繋がってません
  17. 00:45:338 (2) - Clapは１の終点です
  18. 00:44:838 - Finishではなくwhistleで充分です
  19. 00:47:172 (7,1) - まあこの流れは理解できるんですが、00:45:838 (4,1) - 00:46:838 (6,7) - の流れや00:46:672 (5) - の重なり具合的に再配置推奨します
  20. 00:50:672 (3,4,5,6) - あたりのwhistleは何をフォローしてるんですか？
  21. 00:52:338 (4) - Remove note,00:52:172 - から1/1でもいいと思いますが好きな方で
  22. 00:52:838 - 何故にNoremalsoundなのでしょう
  23. 00:55:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 全く再生されません、よく音を聞いてください
  24. 01:07:338 (7) - 謎の流れ
  25. 01:16:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
    うーｍ、まだまだサビはいきなりの直線flow無意味なOverlapが目立ちすぎます、ここでリタイアしときますlol
    Vol関係やsound関連は全Diff修正してください

謎なHitsoundばかりだと見ていてイライラしてくるので言い方悪くなってたらすみません :o
All fix!がつがつ言ってくれる分かなり信用できます！(暴言喰らうと一瞬でへこみますが)
Hardに関してなのですが・・・プレイしてくださった方々にもやりづらいといわれていました :o
どうmodされてもやりづらいと言われてました :o (自分がmodへの対応が悪いだけかも）
  1. いろいろとアレなのでよければ作りましょうか？
    自分で頑張るのであれば後日みます
お願いしてもよろしいでしょうか？
-Nanaka-
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-Nanaka-
Done
SDの希望聞いてなかったので適当に作りましたが問題ないと思います、とりあえず最後の３連消せば3.31まで落ちます
無音のNormalside2とSoftside2の追加お願いします

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StackLeniency: 0.7
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TitleUnicode:華暦 short version
Artist:Ayumi.
ArtistUnicode:Ayumi.
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Version:7ka's Hard
Source:花の野に咲くうたかたの
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SDの希望聞いてなかったので適当に作りましたが問題ないと思います、とりあえず最後の３連消せば3.31まで落ちます
無音のNormalside2とSoftside2の追加お願いします

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TitleUnicode:華暦 short version
Artist:Ayumi.
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Creator:Yasaija 714
Version:7ka's Hard
Source:花の野に咲くうたかたの
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ありがとうございます！
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Avaricious
37 posts
Joined October 2013
Avaricious
PMより～遅くなってごめんなさい
[Extra]
  1. 00:21:088 (2) - ここの緑線はvol20%ですがいりますかね？
  2. 00:22:005 (9) - ここはスタックしない方がやりやすいと感じたのですがもしよかったら変えてみてください
  3. 00:27:505 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ここのvolumeは音楽聞いてるとだんだん下がっていってるので40%、30%の順の方がいいと思います
  4. 00:44:505 (7) - はじめにclap追加
  5. 00:45:838 (7) - ＾
  6. 01:14:505 (1,2) - 2にclapではなく1にしてみてはどうでしょうか
  7. 01:18:838 (4) - はじめにclap追加
  8. 01:19:505 (1) - clap追加
  9. 01:19:838 (3) - ＾
[Ashemu's Extra]
  1. 00:10:506 (2) - スライダーを00:11:256まで伸ばしてみてください
  2. 00:32:672 (4) - 流れ的にx:158 y:145に配置した方がいいと思います
  3. 00:53:172 (1,2) - 音取りがちょっと違和感あったので00:53:172 (1,2,3) - このようなのはどうでしょうか？配置は参考程度で！
    SPOILER
  4. 01:01:838 (1) - clap追加
  5. 01:22:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - サビ部分なので×0.6だとやりにくかったです。あとvolume65%だと小さい気もがしますので75%とかどうでしょうか
  6. 01:28:838 (1) - はじめにfinish追加
  7. 01:34:172 (1) - ＾
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - この地帯だけすごくやりにくかったです。stackなくして配置し直してみてください。参考程度に
    SPOILER
  2. 00:26:838 (6) - これを00:26:838 (6) - におくのはどうでしょうか？終端のwhistleいらないのとここだけvolume低くしてみてください
  3. 00:42:172 (1) - はじめにfinish追加、終端にclap追加
  4. 00:51:838 (2) - 最後にclap追加
  5. 00:52:172 (3) - ＾
  6. 01:00:172 (3) - whistle追加
  7. 01:14:838 (3) - ここNC追加してもいいかも
  8. 01:19:838 (2,3) - 3のclapいらないので2にclapを
  9. 01:35:505 (1,2) - stackさせない方がいいかと
  10. 最後の部分のfinishが多い気がするので修正してください。01:31:505 (1,2) - のfinishは全て除いて2にclap追加してみてください
  11. 01:35:838 (3) - clap追加
  12. 01:36:172 (5) - 終端にclap追加
時間なかったのでEasyとかは今度時間があれば～gl! :oops:
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Topic Starter
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A r i e wrote:

PMより～遅くなってごめんなさい
[Extra]
  1. 00:21:088 (2) - ここの緑線はvol20%ですがいりますかね？
  2. 00:22:005 (9) - ここはスタックしない方がやりやすいと感じたのですがもしよかったら変えてみてください
  3. 00:27:505 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ここのvolumeは音楽聞いてるとだんだん下がっていってるので40%、30%の順の方がいいと思います
  4. 00:44:505 (7) - はじめにclap追加
  5. 00:45:838 (7) - ＾
  6. 01:14:505 (1,2) - 2にclapではなく1にしてみてはどうでしょうか
  7. 01:18:838 (4) - はじめにclap追加
  8. 01:19:505 (1) - clap追加
  9. 01:19:838 (3) - ＾
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - この地帯だけすごくやりにくかったです。stackなくして配置し直してみてください。参考程度に
    SPOILER
  2. 00:26:838 (6) - これを00:26:838 (6) - におくのはどうでしょうか？よくわからなかったのでこのままで終端のwhistleいらないのとここだけvolume低くしてみてください
  3. 00:42:172 (1) - はじめにfinish追加、終端にclap追加
  4. 00:51:838 (2) - 最後にclap追加
  5. 00:52:172 (3) - ＾
  6. 01:00:172 (3) - whistle追加
  7. 01:14:838 (3) - ここNC追加してもいいかも
  8. 01:19:838 (2,3) - 3のclapいらないので2にclapを
  9. 01:35:505 (1,2) - stackさせない方がいいかと
  10. 最後の部分のfinishが多い気がするので修正してください。01:31:505 (1,2) - のfinishは全て除いて2にclap追加してみてください
  11. 01:35:838 (3) - clap追加
  12. 01:36:172 (5) - 終端にclap追加
時間なかったのでEasyとかは今度時間があれば～gl! :oops:
modありがとうございます！
大切な時間を使ってしまい申し訳ないです :o
一部除いて All fix!
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-
onegaishimasu
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osu file format v14

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ChristieBell
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Joined August 2013
ChristieBell
random mod
playして気になったところをすこし書いてきます！ 2diffですが...

Ashemu'sExtra
00:33:838 - このnoteは流れ的にないほうがいいかもしれません
00:36:505 -^
00:39:338 - このnoteはなくていいと思います
　　　　　　　　　それかnoteではなくsliderにすると流れ的にも音的にもいいと思います
　　　　　　　　
00:41:505　- ここですが2のスライダーと3のnoteを離すなら　スライダーとnoteは重ねておいた方がいいかもしれません
00:44:672 - このスライダーはなくてもいいと思います
00:57:338 -　しっかりblanketがとれているのでこのnoteは　00:56:672　の始点に重ねたほうがより綺麗になると思います
01:06:172 - yを184
01:06:338 - yを336
01:11:505 - ここの4つのジャンプはSDをそろえて形を整えたほうがいいと思います

01:22:172 -スライダーの速度が急に落ちてかなりやりにくかったです　速度は落とさない方がいいです
01:28:172 - yを85

音取や配置のmodは提案ですので変更するかはお任せします
スライダーの速度は変更した方がいいと思います　
5角形ですこしずれている部分があったのでyの位置は↑の位置に変えることをお勧めします
全体的に楽しい譜面でした！ :) 　


Extra
00:16:839 - NCしなくていいと思います
00:30:172 - 終点をx80 y 236
00:30:838 - x152 y 348
00:38:172 - NCなし
00:42:172 - もう少しスライダーの形を整えたほうがいいと思います
00:52:172 - ＾
01:02:172 -　1個まえの4のnoteは同じ音取でstackされているのでここもstackした方がいいと思います
01:07:338 - x252 y108

いい譜面です！　全体的にカーブのスライダーを綺麗に整えればもっとよくなると思います
01:23:505 - これを　↓　こんな感じに
すこしでもrankedするための助けになれば嬉しいです　 :)
DeletedUser_423548
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_423548

fdfdfdf wrote:

random mod
playして気になったところをすこし書いてきます！ 2diffですが...

Ashemu'sExtra
00:33:838 - このnoteは流れ的にないほうがいいかもしれません
00:36:505 -^
00:39:338 - このnoteはなくていいと思います
　　　　　　　　　それかnoteではなくsliderにすると流れ的にも音的にもいいと思います
　　　　　　　　
00:41:505　- ここですが2のスライダーと3のnoteを離すなら　スライダーとnoteは重ねておいた方がいいかもしれません
00:44:672 - このスライダーはなくてもいいと思います
00:57:338 -　しっかりblanketがとれているのでこのnoteは　00:56:672　の始点に重ねたほうがより綺麗になると思います
01:06:172 - yを184
01:06:338 - yを336
01:11:505 - ここの4つのジャンプはSDをそろえて形を整えたほうがいいと思います

01:22:172 -スライダーの速度が急に落ちてかなりやりにくかったです　速度は落とさない方がいいです
01:28:172 - yを85

音取や配置のmodは提案ですので変更するかはお任せします
スライダーの速度は変更した方がいいと思います　
5角形ですこしずれている部分があったのでyの位置は↑の位置に変えることをお勧めします
全体的に楽しい譜面でした！ :) 　


Extra
00:16:839 - NCしなくていいと思います 強い音で局長も変わるので変えません
00:30:172 - 終点をx80 y 236 このままで
00:30:838 - x152 y 348　よくわかりませんでした
00:38:172 - NCなし とても長く感じたので変えてません
00:42:172 - もう少しスライダーの形を整えたほうがいいと思います fix
00:52:172 - ＾ fix
01:02:172 -　1個まえの4のnoteは同じ音取でstackされているのでここもstackした方がいいと思います　あまりスピン前のstackはしたくない
01:07:338 - x252 y108 fix

いい譜面です！　全体的にカーブのスライダーを綺麗に整えればもっとよくなると思います
01:23:505 - これを　↓　こんな感じに fix
すこしでもrankedするための助けになれば嬉しいです　 :)
modありがとうございます！
参考になったところもあるので指摘点以外で汚いスライダーを見直してみます
DeletedUser_423548
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_423548

-Nanaka- wrote:

onegaishimasu
aaaaa
osu file format v14

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更新しました :)
A s h e m u
376 posts
Joined February 2013
A s h e m u

A r i e wrote:

PMより～遅くなってごめんなさい
[Ashemu's Extra]
  1. 00:10:506 (2) - スライダーを00:11:256まで伸ばしてみてください
  2. 00:32:672 (4) - 流れ的にx:158 y:145に配置した方がいいと思います
  3. 00:53:172 (1,2) - 音取りがちょっと違和感あったので00:53:172 (1,2,3) - このようなのはどうでしょうか？配置は参考程度で！
    SPOILER
  4. 01:01:838 (1) - clap追加
  5. 01:22:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - サビ部分なので×0.6だとやりにくかったです。あとvolume65%だと小さい気もがしますので75%とかどうでしょうか
  6. 01:28:838 (1) - はじめにfinish追加
  7. 01:34:172 (1) - ＾
Thanks For modding !!
A s h e m u
376 posts
Joined February 2013
A s h e m u

fdfdfdf wrote:

random mod

Ashemu'sExtra
00:33:838 - このnoteは流れ的にないほうがいいかもしれません
00:36:505 -^
00:39:338 - このnoteはなくていいと思います
　　　　　　　　　それかnoteではなくsliderにすると流れ的にも音的にもいいと思います
　　　　　　　　
00:41:505　- ここですが2のスライダーと3のnoteを離すなら　スライダーとnoteは重ねておいた方がいいかもしれません
00:44:672 - このスライダーはなくてもいいと思います
00:57:338 -　しっかりblanketがとれているのでこのnoteは　00:56:672　の始点に重ねたほうがより綺麗になると思います
01:06:172 - yを184
01:06:338 - yを336
01:11:505 - ここの4つのジャンプはSDをそろえて形を整えたほうがいいと思います

01:22:172 -スライダーの速度が急に落ちてかなりやりにくかったです　速度は落とさない方がいいです
01:28:172 - yを85

音取や配置のmodは提案ですので変更するかはお任せします
スライダーの速度は変更した方がいいと思います　
5角形ですこしずれている部分があったのでyの位置は↑の位置に変えることをお勧めします
全体的に楽しい譜面でした！ :) 　
Thanks for modding - !
A s h e m u
376 posts
Joined February 2013
A s h e m u
寝るつもりでしたが先に更新してしまいましたヽ(=´▽`=)ﾉ

Update plz :3

画像差し替え忘れてるかもしれないので画像のとこだけお願いしますorz (DLし直してないままデシタ）

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Version:Ashemu's Extra
Source:花の野に咲くうたかたの
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A s h e m u wrote:

寝るつもりでしたが先に更新してしまいましたヽ(=´▽`=)ﾉ

Update plz :3

画像差し替え忘れてるかもしれないので画像のとこだけお願いしますorz (DLし直してないままデシタ）

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更新しましたー :)
-Yuzuriha
574 posts
Joined March 2012
-Yuzuriha
みかけたので軽くmodですー

General

tagが同じじゃないようなんで修正
https://gyazo.com/e3f15bc3b66effe9f1cd56c3bb4b7269

Audio Lead Inを1500くらい入れるのをおすすめします

同一効果の線なので削除
https://gyazo.com/e3cbc3953ac017cd2d4d223aa55f3ac7
他にもいくつかあるので確認してみてください


　Extra　


00:28:839 (1,2) - 　ちょっとだけ重なってるのでもう少しずらしたほうがいいかもです

00:35:505 (3,4,5) - 00:32:838 (3,4,5,6) - 　この２つのパートは同じなので、同じリズムを作ったほうが自然です

00:41:505 (1) - 　　00:41:838 (1,2,3) - この３つのｄｓと同じにしたほうがたたきやすいです


Ashemu's Extra　

00:26:422 (2) - 　このようにずらしてみるとかっこいいかもしれません
https://gyazo.com/f9603bc4b35fcde497fbf760fe2f4682


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以上です
譜面の設定などをメインにmodしました
GL! :)
DeletedUser_423548
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_423548

-Yuzuriha wrote:

みかけたので軽くmodですー

General

tagが同じじゃないようなんで修正 修正しました
https://gyazo.com/e3f15bc3b66effe9f1cd56c3bb4b7269

Audio Lead Inを1500くらい入れるのをおすすめします

同一効果の線なので削除 修正しました
https://gyazo.com/e3cbc3953ac017cd2d4d223aa55f3ac7
他にもいくつかあるので確認してみてください


　Extra　


00:28:839 (1,2) - 　ちょっとだけ重なってるのでもう少しずらしたほうがいいかもです　fix

00:35:505 (3,4,5) - 00:32:838 (3,4,5,6) - 　この２つのパートは同じなので、同じリズムを作ったほうが自然です fix

00:41:505 (1) - 　　00:41:838 (1,2,3) - この３つのｄｓと同じにしたほうがたたきやすいです fix


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以上です
譜面の設定などをメインにmodしました
GL! :)
modありがとうございます！！！
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
From Forum-PM NM request.

[General]
  1. おそらくゲストの方も日本人だと思うので、日本語でmodします。英語訳が必要の場合はもう一度呼んでください。
  2. Normal -> Hardのdiff spreadが少し問題かもしれません、NormalのCSを3.5あたりに変更してみてはどうでしょうか？
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:506 (3) - add whistle ? ここだけwhistleを抜いているのは連続してwhistleを鳴らすのは少しうるさく感じるからでしょうか？Volumeを調節して追加するほうがいいと思います。意図的に抜いているのであれば、00:14:006 (2) - こちらのwhistleを消して、00:14:506 (3) - こちらに追加したほうが良くなると思います。
  2. 00:35:838 (3) - Remove note. Easy diffではCircleを3連続で配置するのは好ましくないと思います。それか、00:35:505 (2,3) - こちらを1/1sliderを用いてフォローするなりしたほうが良くなると思います。
  3. 00:38:172 (3,4) - 音取りに少し違和感がありました、以下の音取りを試してみては如何でしょうか？
  4. 00:54:172 (2) - Sliderの終点にもwhistleを追加しては如何でしょうか？
  5. 00:55:838 (2) - 00:35:838 (3) - こちらと同様の理由です。
  6. 01:20:505 (4) - 前後のDistance snapが少しずれています、確認して修正してみては。
  7. 01:25:838 (5) - 00:35:838 (3) - こちらと同様の理由です。
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:006 (3) - add whistle. 裏のピアノ?音に合わせて追加したほうが合うと思います。
  2. 00:39:505 (1,2) - 何もHitsoundが入っていませんが意図的でしょうか？ご自身で作成されたInsaneやExtraではhitsoundが追加されているので、そちらを参考にwhistleを追加したほうが好ましいかと思います。
  3. 01:18:172 (1) - 前後の流れが悪いです。 X : 261 Y : 280 あたりに移動させたほうが視認性も向上し流れも良くなると思います、一度お試しください。
  4. 01:26:838 (2) - 前後のDistance snapが少しずれています、確認して修正してみては。
[7ka's Hard]
  1. 00:05:006 (1) - add whistle. 00:04:506 (3) - こちらにwhistleが入るのであれば、自然と 00:05:006 - こちらにも追加したほうが良くなると思います。
  2. 00:25:172 - この場所の音は意図的に抜いているのでしょうか、私はここに何かあったほうがリズムがとりやすく、プレイもしやすくなると思いました。
  3. 00:56:172 (1) - この場所に新しいnew comboは不要だと思います、Slider速度も変動しているわけでもないので。
  4. 01:37:172 - 00:25:172 - と同様に。
ごめんなさい、申し訳ありませんが高bpm見るのは得意じゃないので具体的な提案はできません・・・。
ただプレイしていて、Insaneの、00:37:505 (3,4) - ここは少し3/4slider読みづらく感じました。それともう１つ
00:40:505 (1,2) - こちらの、00:40:505 (1) - これを1/2sliderにしてあげるとプレイしやすくなると思いました。

頑張ってください =w=/
DeletedUser_423548
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_423548

Satellite wrote:

From Forum-PM NM request.

[General]
  1. おそらくゲストの方も日本人だと思うので、日本語でmodします。英語訳が必要の場合はもう一度呼んでください。
  2. Normal -> Hardのdiff spreadが少し問題かもしれません、NormalのCSを3.5あたりに変更してみてはどうでしょうか？
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:506 (3) - add whistle ? ここだけwhistleを抜いているのは連続してwhistleを鳴らすのは少しうるさく感じるからでしょうか？Volumeを調節して追加するほうがいいと思います。意図的に抜いているのであれば、00:14:006 (2) - こちらのwhistleを消して、00:14:506 (3) - こちらに追加したほうが良くなると思います。
  2. 00:35:838 (3) - Remove note. Easy diffではCircleを3連続で配置するのは好ましくないと思います。それか、00:35:505 (2,3) - こちらを1/1sliderを用いてフォローするなりしたほうが良くなると思います。
  3. 00:38:172 (3,4) - 音取りに少し違和感がありました、以下の音取りを試してみては如何でしょうか？
  4. 00:54:172 (2) - Sliderの終点にもwhistleを追加しては如何でしょうか？
  5. 00:55:838 (2) - 00:35:838 (3) - こちらと同様の理由です。
  6. 01:20:505 (4) - 前後のDistance snapが少しずれています、確認して修正してみては。
  7. 01:25:838 (5) - 00:35:838 (3) - こちらと同様の理由です。
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:006 (3) - add whistle. 裏のピアノ?音に合わせて追加したほうが合うと思います。
  2. 00:39:505 (1,2) - 何もHitsoundが入っていませんが意図的でしょうか？ご自身で作成されたInsaneやExtraではhitsoundが追加されているので、そちらを参考にwhistleを追加したほうが好ましいかと思います。
  3. 01:18:172 (1) - 前後の流れが悪いです。 X : 261 Y : 280 あたりに移動させたほうが視認性も向上し流れも良くなると思います、一度お試しください。
  4. 01:26:838 (2) - 前後のDistance snapが少しずれています、確認して修正してみては。
ごめんなさい、申し訳ありませんが高bpm見るのは得意じゃないので具体的な提案はできません・・・。
ただプレイしていて、Insaneの、00:37:505 (3,4) - ここは少し3/4slider読みづらく感じました。それともう１つ
00:40:505 (1,2) - こちらの、00:40:505 (1) - これを1/2sliderにしてあげるとプレイしやすくなると思いました。

頑張ってください =w=/
全て変更させていただきました！
modありがとうございます :)
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
you update Easy's BG to cover …… maybe you wish use the Extra's BG as your preview BG ??

152 、 88.58.83

by the way …… the 180BPM should be here 00:15:506 - ……
DeletedUser_423548
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_423548

Narcissu wrote:

you update Easy's BG to cover …… maybe you wish use the Extra's BG as your preview BG ?? I do not know to change...

152 、 88.58.83

by the way …… the 180BPM should be here 00:15:506 - ……　Thanks!!
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-

Satellite wrote:

From Forum-PM NM request.

[7ka's Hard]
  1. 00:05:006 (1) - add whistle. 00:04:506 (3) - こちらにwhistleが入るのであれば、自然と 00:05:006 - こちらにも追加したほうが良くなると思います。
    むしろpattern的にはここと同じなのとピアノ音云々でいうなら00:05:006 (1) - ここより00:04:506 (3) - こっちの方が強いので、そこは入れないほうが合ってると思いました
  2. 00:25:172 - この場所の音は意図的に抜いているのでしょうか、私はここに何かあったほうがリズムがとりやすく、プレイもしやすくなると思いました。
    yes、そこの音は非常に弱いのでcircleで音を取るのはナンセンスだと思いますし、かといって00:25:172 - から1/2sliderも始点より終点に強い音がくるのでありえない、そうすると自然に選択肢は00:24:838 - から1/1sliderになるんですが力強さというか区切り、差別化されないので空けてます、個人的にPlayしにくいとは思えないのでKeepで、ごめんなさい
  3. 00:56:172 (1) - この場所に新しいnew comboは不要だと思います、Slider速度も変動しているわけでもないので。ok
  4. 01:37:172 - 00:25:172 - と同様に。same
頑張ってください =w=/
ありがとうございました :)
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
e …… maybe my kd should be rejected

SPOILER
13:16 Narcissu: hi XD
13:16 Narcissu: i update Easy's BG to cover …… how to use the Extra's BG as i preview BG ??
13:16 Raose: HI
13:16 Raose: oh do you mean like on the website image?
13:17 Narcissu: yes
13:17 Raose: you have 2 different bg?
13:17 Raose: hmm
13:17 Narcissu: o o
13:17 Raose: let me ask >:D
13:17 Narcissu: ;w;
13:31 Raose: jonny said
13:31 Raose: "it either uses the first alphabetical named bg or the first difficulty created"
13:31 Narcissu: thx ;w;
DeletedUser_423548
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_423548

Narcissu wrote:

e …… maybe my kd should be rejected

SPOILER
13:16 Narcissu: hi XD
13:16 Narcissu: i update Easy's BG to cover …… how to use the Extra's BG as i preview BG ??
13:16 Raose: HI
13:16 Raose: oh do you mean like on the website image?
13:17 Narcissu: yes
13:17 Raose: you have 2 different bg?
13:17 Raose: hmm
13:17 Narcissu: o o
13:17 Raose: let me ask >:D
13:17 Narcissu: ;w;
13:31 Raose: jonny said
13:31 Raose: "it either uses the first alphabetical named bg or the first difficulty created"
13:31 Narcissu: thx ;w;
oh...sorry :o
Doyak
osu! Alumni
2,621 posts
Joined November 2012
Doyak

PM request (though I hope you read just some of the userpage lol)

[General]
* 01:15:505 - You could make a burst effect by seperating the kiai into 2 piecies. An example is one of my ranked maps: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/777263 or just the one Hard used is another good way.

[Easy]
* 01:11:172 (3,4,5) - You can make this an equilateral triangle
* 01:20:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flow seems ugly for me. How about this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4143023 (ignore the timing)
* 01:30:172 (3,4) - Fix blanket

[Normal]
* I honestly don't feel much difference than Easy on this diff on non-kiai parts (only the sv and spacings are much bigger), like you could definitely use some more 1/2s and fill most 1/1s out. Right now the gap between Hard is too big as well since it's mostly filling 1/2s out. If you ask me about the star rating, it's much less important. An 1.9 star Normal that uses more 1/2s is safer than 2.3 star Normal that has less 1/2s. I'll try to give some examples.
* 00:18:505 - You can fill this out, there is a strong drum there. You can reduce 00:18:172 (4) - to an 1/1 and make it a reverse slider or something.
* 00:21:172 - Same here
* 00:34:505 - Same here, as you were following most of the major piano sounds.
* 00:41:838 - Same here. 1/3 * 3 = 1/1 so it's not confusing at all.
* 00:42:505 - 00:45:172 - 00:47:838 - 00:51:838 - 01:09:172 - 01:17:172 - 01:30:505 - Same
* 00:44:005 - 00:46:672 - 00:49:338 - 01:24:005 - You can also fill these out. Normal is not something you should only maintain 1/1s with 180bpm. It would make the rhythm more fun.
* 00:56:505 - 00:57:838 - Having those empty also feels too Easy-like. Try filling out them.
* 01:02:338 (1) - I'd rather say this is a little more dangerous. The spinner is only about 1 measure and it's only 1/4 after a note, and there's only 2 beat-gap after the spinner on 180bpm(actually that itself could be dangerous). Removing 01:02:172 (2) - and start the spinner from there would reduce the risk a little.
* 00:25:838 (3,2) - Might be much cleaner if you can properly stack these, try it
* 00:32:838 (2,3) - 00:43:172 (2,3) - 01:31:505 (1,2) - Fix blanket, or at least make it curve around the center. Current blanket is so unbalanced.

[7ka's Hard]
* 00:38:172 (1,2,3,4) - Why different spacings? If I should say, 00:38:838 (4) - this is rather strong too, like 01:38:672 (5,1) -
* 00:39:588 (1,1) - This is a little hard, since 180bpm 1/1 gap is already pretty short but the next note appears on the corner. How about finishing it on 00:41:505 - , where the 1/3 piano starts and the vocal starts to end the voice.
* 00:52:838 - I think you can just map this break. It's a short version, mapping where you can map would be nice.
* 01:02:255 (1) - Same for this one, the vocal wants to end it on 01:03:505 - . It's more reasonable to finish it where the actual sound-thing occurs rather than just lengthening it to represent the long sound but nothing really happens on the end.
* 01:15:338 - 01:26:005 - Triples from here? It's kiai and you already used semi-triples like 00:18:172 (1,2,3) - 00:20:838 (1,2,3) - before.

[Insane]
* 00:10:006 - 00:10:256 - 00:12:256 - 00:13:756 - 00:14:256 - 00:14:756 - Compare these with 00:01:756 - 00:02:256 (2) - 00:02:506 (3) - 00:07:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - . I mean, you were trying to follow most of the piano sounds at the start, but suddenly ignoring them and only focus on the vocals. Consider making them consistent.
* 00:02:756 - This beat is totally empty. I highly recommend to not put a note there.
* I should say, some distance gaps you put on the map are rather small so that they seem to be 'random spacings'. For example, 00:22:838 (4,5,1) - I don't know why there should be a jump between 00:22:838 (4,5) - and why 00:23:338 (5,1) - is even smaller. The 'smaller' thing isn't very obvious too, so it looks like just a distance error.
* 00:18:672 (5,6,7,1) - Same for these, as you are using 1.5x distance as the 'base' distance you should try to maintain that here as well. Suddenly decreasing spacing doesn't make sense. Again 00:18:838 (6,7) - and 00:19:338 (7,1) - isn't equal as well.
* 00:19:505 (1,3,4) - If you look at those 3 notes, (1) is on obscure place between 3 and 4. You can make it prettier by doing something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4143323
* 00:20:172 (4,5) - Again this note isn't worth emphasized, but it has bigger spacing than the previous notes. Just use one 'base' distance when they doens't need to be emphasized, or create a good pattern. In this case, just 1.5x is good.
* 00:21:505 (6,7,8,1) - Same for these, do something about it. If they should have different spacing then 00:22:005 (8,1) - deserves the biggest one.
* 00:22:172 (1,2,3) - Yeah unreasonably big spacing as well. So to say, 'random jumps'. There are only drums, they're just regular base rhythm.
* 00:25:172 (2,3) - I suggest unstacking them. Having multiple stacks on one place disconnects the flow.
* 00:26:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can also make 6 to get through the middle of the triangle to make it prettier.
* 00:29:505 (3,4,1,2,3) - Still seems too random. As 00:30:172 (1) - this is a strong beat you could give some more distance to that. OR, if you want to keep 00:29:505 (3,4) - this bigger, make it more "obvious." You used 3.00x for 00:28:838 (1,2) - but 2.44x for 00:29:505 (3,4) - is inconsistent, and 00:30:172 (1,2,3) - these have even bigger spacing so there's no real meaning on those distances. So maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4143395 You actually did well on 00:31:505 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
* 00:34:838 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - BUT this is unreasonable too. There's no reason to use bigger spacing here than the previous ones.
* 00:37:505 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Meh flow, try to improve it. I'm bad at flows so I cannot really give you suggestions.
* 00:40:505 (1) - Please don't ignore piano sounds inside the slider.
* 00:40:505 (1,2,3) - Also unreasonsable random spacings. These are continous pianos and I don't see any reason to make them different. Also that distance itself is a little big imo.
* 00:41:838 (2,1) - Would be better flow if you rotate (2) clockwise a bit.
* 00:42:172 (1,2) - 00:42:838 (3,4) - I'm gonna say simply from now, as you can find the reasons from what I said already. Too large distance
* 00:43:505 (1,2,3,4) - Better if you make it a equilateral triangle, or make a pattern more obvious.
* 00:44:172 (5,6,1) - They should have same distance, or 6-1 should be bigger. Actually 5-6 is too big.
* 00:44:838 (1,2) - Too big
* 00:46:338 (2,3,4) - You didn't use many triples before, and this one doesn't look very nice too, as I don't hear any 'obvious' 1/4s there.
* 00:47:505 (1,2,3,4) - If you're gonna use same distance, reduce it. Or give that big distance only between 00:48:005 (2,3) -
* 00:51:505 (1,2,3) - They should have same distance.
* 00:55:838 (3,1) - Move 3 to stack it properly
* 00:57:005 - No rather than that, try to put a note here. It's same as 00:55:672 (2) - and it has a vocal.
* 01:04:505 (2,1) - I would put a bigger distance to discriminate the intro of the kiai part.
* 01:12:338 (4,5,6) - I won't recommend a triple here, since I don't hear 1/4s here as well.
* 01:14:005 (6,1) - Just use 1.5x
* 01:15:338 - If you want to use some triple then this is the right place, rather than 01:15:672 (2,3,4) - these
* 01:15:838 (4,5) - Compare this with 01:15:172 (2,1) - . 1/2 and 1/4 but similar.
* 01:16:422 - If you're gonna use 3/4 sliders then this is the right place (to end it), rather than 01:17:505 (5) - this
* 01:22:172 (1,2) - I don't see why these are wider than 01:20:838 (1,2,3,4) -
* 01:23:005 (4,5,6) - Unncessary triples imo
* 01:25:838 (4,5,1) - Just keep 1.5x, no reason to suddenly decrease the distance while the song is still consistent.
* 01:27:505 (1,2,3,4) - Consistent spacing please
* 01:34:172 (1,2,3,4) - No big spacings
* 01:35:672 (2,3,4) - Consistently
* 01:36:172 (4,5,1) - Do not reduce distance
* 01:38:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These are strong. Try with larger jumps at the end.

I'm not going to mod Extra. Extras are much harder to rank and you need good reasons on every patterns, but you need more practice. If you want to rank this mapset I suggest to exclude the Extra and improve your Insane instead.

And do not hesitate to remap. There are limits to fix everything on a map only with mods. When you learned something and you think your mapping skills have been improved a lot then remapping makes far much better quality and saves a lot of time.

Good luck!
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
Wait for long :)
This is your mod

[General]
  1. remove your username in Tags, coz creator is you, no need add again
  2. seems have a big spread between Insane and Extra...
[Easy]

  • 00:03:506 (2) - , 00:07:506 (2) - and 00:11:506 (2) - need NC
    00:26:172 (4) - this bending slider seems very dangerous in Easy diff, try to fix better like this, reduce chance to be DQ
    SPOILER
    00:27:505 (1) - this spinner I think it's fine lol. But maybe other modder could let you change a long slider, the reason is "spinner is too short". Same as this one 01:02:172 (1) -
    00:58:172 - and 00:59:172 - Do you think these sounds are right?? I think it's very strange lol
    01:00:838 (1) - remove this bending point or move it away. The reason same with 00:26:172 (4) -
    SPOILER
    01:25:505 (4) - need NC
  1. rhythm seems no problem for me :)
[Normal]

  • 00:32:838 (2) - wow, this one seems give a bad flow for me. I know it's hard to move, so try to use Ctrl+G to swap slider's head and tail, I think more better to fix here
    00:39:505 - why don't you choose a spinner start 00:39:505 - end 00:41:505 - ?? I think more better to fix sound and vocal :)
    00:47:505 (1) - try to make the last bending point parallel like this one↓
    SPOILER
    01:00:838 (1) - stack more better for this slider, it's very dangerous now (notice arrow)
    SPOILER
  1. Umm...that's all
[7ka's Hard]

  • 00:14:006 (2,3) - need NC
    00:52:672 (6) - I think this circle stack on next circle 00:52:838 (1) - more better. You hide the circle below slider's tail, then make the jump, this will make a big break for players.
[Insane]

  • 00:14:756 (4) - this circle seems unnecessary, no sound and vocal can follow. Strange to me
    01:15:172 (2) - I hear this part have stream here, I think don't ignore them more better :)
    01:28:005 (4) - if you follow vocal just use 4 circles here, but you are not. so this 1/4 is a bad rhythm for me. Advise to fix a circle here
[Ex]

  • 00:53:172 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - no sense this star jumps, not fix the song, just bad jumps. these 00:53:338 (3,5,7) - are unnecessary
    00:58:505 (2) - move far, 468|136 more better
    01:26:505 - 01:27:172 - remove clap

Good luck :)
DeletedUser_423548
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_423548

Doyak wrote:


PM request (though I hope you read just some of the userpage lol)

[General]
* 01:15:505 - You could make a burst effect by seperating the kiai into 2 piecies. An example is one of my ranked maps: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/777263 or just the one Hard used is another good way.

[Easy]
* 01:11:172 (3,4,5) - You can make this an equilateral triangle
* 01:20:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flow seems ugly for me. How about this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4143023 (ignore the timing)
* 01:30:172 (3,4) - Fix blanket

[Normal]
* I honestly don't feel much difference than Easy on this diff on non-kiai parts (only the sv and spacings are much bigger), like you could definitely use some more 1/2s and fill most 1/1s out. Right now the gap between Hard is too big as well since it's mostly filling 1/2s out. If you ask me about the star rating, it's much less important. An 1.9 star Normal that uses more 1/2s is safer than 2.3 star Normal that has less 1/2s. I'll try to give some examples.
* 00:18:505 - You can fill this out, there is a strong drum there. You can reduce 00:18:172 (4) - to an 1/1 and make it a reverse slider or something.
* 00:21:172 - Same here
* 00:34:505 - Same here, as you were following most of the major piano sounds.
* 00:41:838 - Same here. 1/3 * 3 = 1/1 so it's not confusing at all.
* 00:42:505 - 00:45:172 - 00:47:838 - 00:51:838 - 01:09:172 - 01:17:172 - 01:30:505 - Same
* 00:44:005 - 00:46:672 - 00:49:338 - 01:24:005 - You can also fill these out. Normal is not something you should only maintain 1/1s with 180bpm. It would make the rhythm more fun.
* 00:56:505 - 00:57:838 - Having those empty also feels too Easy-like. Try filling out them.
* 01:02:338 (1) - I'd rather say this is a little more dangerous. The spinner is only about 1 measure and it's only 1/4 after a note, and there's only 2 beat-gap after the spinner on 180bpm(actually that itself could be dangerous). Removing 01:02:172 (2) - and start the spinner from there would reduce the risk a little.
* 00:25:838 (3,2) - Might be much cleaner if you can properly stack these, try it
* 00:32:838 (2,3) - 00:43:172 (2,3) - 01:31:505 (1,2) - Fix blanket, or at least make it curve around the center. Current blanket is so unbalanced.


[Insane]
* 00:10:006 - 00:10:256 - 00:12:256 - 00:13:756 - 00:14:256 - 00:14:756 - Compare these with 00:01:756 - 00:02:256 (2) - 00:02:506 (3) - 00:07:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - . I mean, you were trying to follow most of the piano sounds at the start, but suddenly ignoring them and only focus on the vocals. Consider making them consistent.
* 00:02:756 - This beat is totally empty. I highly recommend to not put a note there.
* I should say, some distance gaps you put on the map are rather small so that they seem to be 'random spacings'. For example, 00:22:838 (4,5,1) - I don't know why there should be a jump between 00:22:838 (4,5) - and why 00:23:338 (5,1) - is even smaller. The 'smaller' thing isn't very obvious too, so it looks like just a distance error.
* 00:18:672 (5,6,7,1) - Same for these, as you are using 1.5x distance as the 'base' distance you should try to maintain that here as well. Suddenly decreasing spacing doesn't make sense. Again 00:18:838 (6,7) - and 00:19:338 (7,1) - isn't equal as well.
* 00:19:505 (1,3,4) - If you look at those 3 notes, (1) is on obscure place between 3 and 4. You can make it prettier by doing something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4143323
* 00:20:172 (4,5) - Again this note isn't worth emphasized, but it has bigger spacing than the previous notes. Just use one 'base' distance when they doens't need to be emphasized, or create a good pattern. In this case, just 1.5x is good.
* 00:21:505 (6,7,8,1) - Same for these, do something about it. If they should have different spacing then 00:22:005 (8,1) - deserves the biggest one.
* 00:22:172 (1,2,3) - Yeah unreasonably big spacing as well. So to say, 'random jumps'. There are only drums, they're just regular base rhythm.
* 00:25:172 (2,3) - I suggest unstacking them. Having multiple stacks on one place disconnects the flow.
* 00:26:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can also make 6 to get through the middle of the triangle to make it prettier.
* 00:29:505 (3,4,1,2,3) - Still seems too random. As 00:30:172 (1) - this is a strong beat you could give some more distance to that. OR, if you want to keep 00:29:505 (3,4) - this bigger, make it more "obvious." You used 3.00x for 00:28:838 (1,2) - but 2.44x for 00:29:505 (3,4) - is inconsistent, and 00:30:172 (1,2,3) - these have even bigger spacing so there's no real meaning on those distances. So maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4143395 You actually did well on 00:31:505 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
* 00:34:838 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - BUT this is unreasonable too. There's no reason to use bigger spacing here than the previous ones.
* 00:37:505 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Meh flow, try to improve it. I'm bad at flows so I cannot really give you suggestions.
* 00:40:505 (1) - Please don't ignore piano sounds inside the slider.
* 00:40:505 (1,2,3) - Also unreasonsable random spacings. These are continous pianos and I don't see any reason to make them different. Also that distance itself is a little big imo.
* 00:41:838 (2,1) - Would be better flow if you rotate (2) clockwise a bit.
* 00:42:172 (1,2) - 00:42:838 (3,4) - I'm gonna say simply from now, as you can find the reasons from what I said already. Too large distance
* 00:43:505 (1,2,3,4) - Better if you make it a equilateral triangle, or make a pattern more obvious.
* 00:44:172 (5,6,1) - They should have same distance, or 6-1 should be bigger. Actually 5-6 is too big.
* 00:44:838 (1,2) - Too big
* 00:46:338 (2,3,4) - You didn't use many triples before, and this one doesn't look very nice too, as I don't hear any 'obvious' 1/4s there.
* 00:47:505 (1,2,3,4) - If you're gonna use same distance, reduce it. Or give that big distance only between 00:48:005 (2,3) -
* 00:51:505 (1,2,3) - They should have same distance.
* 00:55:838 (3,1) - Move 3 to stack it properly
* 00:57:005 - No rather than that, try to put a note here. It's same as 00:55:672 (2) - and it has a vocal.
* 01:04:505 (2,1) - I would put a bigger distance to discriminate the intro of the kiai part.
* 01:12:338 (4,5,6) - I won't recommend a triple here, since I don't hear 1/4s here as well.
* 01:14:005 (6,1) - Just use 1.5x
* 01:15:338 - If you want to use some triple then this is the right place, rather than 01:15:672 (2,3,4) - these
* 01:15:838 (4,5) - Compare this with 01:15:172 (2,1) - . 1/2 and 1/4 but similar.
* 01:16:422 - If you're gonna use 3/4 sliders then this is the right place (to end it), rather than 01:17:505 (5) - this
* 01:22:172 (1,2) - I don't see why these are wider than 01:20:838 (1,2,3,4) -
* 01:23:005 (4,5,6) - Unncessary triples imo
* 01:25:838 (4,5,1) - Just keep 1.5x, no reason to suddenly decrease the distance while the song is still consistent.
* 01:27:505 (1,2,3,4) - Consistent spacing please
* 01:34:172 (1,2,3,4) - No big spacings
* 01:35:672 (2,3,4) - Consistently
* 01:36:172 (4,5,1) - Do not reduce distance
* 01:38:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These are strong. Try with larger jumps at the end.

I'm not going to mod Extra. Extras are much harder to rank and you need good reasons on every patterns, but you need more practice. If you want to rank this mapset I suggest to exclude the Extra and improve your Insane instead.

And do not hesitate to remap. There are limits to fix everything on a map only with mods. When you learned something and you think your mapping skills have been improved a lot then remapping makes far much better quality and saves a lot of time.

Good luck!
Thanks for mod! :)
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DreaM117er wrote:

Wait for long :)
This is your mod

[General]
  1. remove your username in Tags, coz creator is you, no need add again
  2. seems have a big spread between Insane and Extra...
[Easy]

  • 00:03:506 (2) - , 00:07:506 (2) - and 00:11:506 (2) - need NC
    00:26:172 (4) - this bending slider seems very dangerous in Easy diff, try to fix better like this, reduce chance to be DQ
    SPOILER
    00:27:505 (1) - this spinner I think it's fine lol. But maybe other modder could let you change a long slider, the reason is "spinner is too short". Same as this one 01:02:172 (1) -
    00:58:172 - and 00:59:172 - Do you think these sounds are right?? I think it's very strange lol
    01:00:838 (1) - remove this bending point or move it away. The reason same with 00:26:172 (4) -
    SPOILER
    01:25:505 (4) - need NC
  1. rhythm seems no problem for me :)
[Normal]

  • 00:32:838 (2) - wow, this one seems give a bad flow for me. I know it's hard to move, so try to use Ctrl+G to swap slider's head and tail, I think more better to fix here
    00:39:505 - why don't you choose a spinner start 00:39:505 - end 00:41:505 - ?? I think more better to fix sound and vocal :)
    00:47:505 (1) - try to make the last bending point parallel like this one↓
    SPOILER
    01:00:838 (1) - stack more better for this slider, it's very dangerous now (notice arrow)
    SPOILER
  1. Umm...that's all

[Insane]

  • 00:14:756 (4) - this circle seems unnecessary, no sound and vocal can follow. Strange to me
    01:15:172 (2) - I hear this part have stream here, I think don't ignore them more better :)
    01:28:005 (4) - if you follow vocal just use 4 circles here, but you are not. so this 1/4 is a bad rhythm for me. Advise to fix a circle here
[Ex]

  • 00:53:172 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - no sense this star jumps, not fix the song, just bad jumps. these 00:53:338 (3,5,7) - are unnecessary
    00:58:505 (2) - move far, 468|136 more better
    01:26:505 - 01:27:172 - remove clap

Good luck :)
Thanks for mod! :)
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