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Chaoslitz
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年11月14日 at 21:03:49

Artist: Tojo Nozomi (CV.Kusuda Aina)
Title: Love Live! NOZOMI Mix Songs Compilation
Source: ラブライブ！ School idol project
Tags: u's Kanaete Violet Moon 愛してるばんざーい！ Mermaid festa vol.1 WILD STARS Oh,Love&Peace! baby maybe 恋のボタン 輝夜の城で踊りたい もぎゅっと"love"で接近中！ 友情ノーチェンジ 知らないLove*教えてLove START:DASH!! Wonder zone きっと青春が聞こえる Wonderful Rush 夏色えがおで1,2,Jump! Snow halation 乙女式れんあい塾 僕らは今のなかで No brand girls 僕らのLIVE 君とのLIFE あ・の・ね・が・ん・ば・れ! lilywhite
BPM: 90
Filesize: 32180kb
Play Time: 15:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Spiritual Amethyst (5.28 stars, 3085 notes)
Download: Tojo Nozomi (CV.Kusuda Aina) - Love Live! NOZOMI Mix Songs Compilation
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#17
Karen__ Gaia _ Rizia___
- W A R N I N G -


IF YOU HEAR SOUND "IKUYO", PREPARE TO SINGLETAPPING 220 BPM


History
  1. 8/11/2015: Added sound elements
  2. 5/11/2015: Storyboard added
  3. 1/11/2015: Changed background
  4. 31/10/2015: Added hitsound
Last edited by Chaoslitz , edited 38 times in total.
lit120
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lit120
lel Nozomi ver. XD

call me for free NM
Vicho
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Vicho
NOZOMI IS BEST GIRL
Chaoslitz
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Vicho wrote:

NOZOMI IS BEST GIRL
YES
Jemmmmy
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Jemmmmy
这个歌手唱的节奏有点不准啊
像00:22:718 (4) - 00:26:718 (8) - 之类的其实都可以放蓝线上，不过随意吧
01:00:158 -
01:47:737 (3,4) - 距离短了一点点
02:23:506 (8,9) - 02:24:429 (2,3) - 两个间距不一样呢
03:08:678 (3) - 删？
04:50:909 (1,2,5) - 有点挤
05:05:369 (1,2,3,4) - 不搞规则点的四方？
06:20:836 (8,10) - 这没音呢
08:35:611 (1,2,3) - 间距不等
08:51:429 (5,1,2) - 干脆叠起来
11:43:565 (4,5) - 调整下曲度？
11:46:339 (5,6) - ^6 有点太弯了吧
12:47:394 (7,1) - 间距远了点
12:55:236 (3) - 弯点
13:54:097 (1) - 离2远些

结果还是水了。摸不出啥来 :o
Chaoslitz
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Jemmmmy wrote:

这个歌手唱的节奏有点不准啊 是有點不準...;w;
像00:22:718 (4) - 00:26:718 (8) - 之类的其实都可以放蓝线上，不过随意吧 這個我是跟鼓的
01:00:158 -
01:47:737 (3,4) - 距离短了一点点 fixed
02:23:506 (8,9) - 02:24:429 (2,3) - 两个间距不一样呢 fixed
03:08:678 (3) - 删？先留住
04:50:909 (1,2,5) - 有点挤 fixed
05:05:369 (1,2,3,4) - 不搞规则点的四方？不了;w;
06:20:836 (8,10) - 这没音呢 怎麼我聽到有音OAO..還是先留住吧
08:35:611 (1,2,3) - 间距不等 fixed
08:51:429 (5,1,2) - 干脆叠起来 想弄些所以沒叠了
11:43:565 (4,5) - 调整下曲度？ fixed
11:46:339 (5,6) - ^6 有点太弯了吧 fixed
12:47:394 (7,1) - 间距远了点 是downbeat所以我放遠了點
12:55:236 (3) - 弯点 好
13:54:097 (1) - 离2远些 好

结果还是水了。摸不出啥来 :o
謝謝;w;
lit120
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lit120

-Hakurei- wrote:

lel Nozomi ver. XD

call me for free NM
and now, someone has forgotten about this :p

ohh anyway, hitsound stuff~~~
Chaoslitz
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-Hakurei- wrote:

-Hakurei- wrote:

lel Nozomi ver. XD

call me for free NM
and now, someone has forgotten about this :p

ohh anyway, hitsound stuff~~~
yea hitsounds are missing =w=
so can still mod it if you want lol or if not I will call you once hitsounds are added xD
lit120
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lit120
LMAO, I'll just wait for that, cuz i need to check the hitsounds on every parts =w=
DreaM117er
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DreaM117er
我努力看看能不能摸出什麼 :?

[哇！超市！]

  • 00:15:051 - 這裡沒有要circle嗎?? 聲音很明顯
    00:51:654 (2,1) - 為什麼這裡是轉換跟vocal了?? 強烈建議改回跟聲音
    02:21:775 (6) - 我個人強烈建議這個circle不要比較合曲
    03:38:356 (3,4,1) - 這裡你用1/1跳，03:45:467 (4,5,6) - 這裡你卻填滿了...把1/1的space填起來吧，裡面也有拍手聲
    05:26:834 - 這裡還有個聲音，要不要跟上??
    06:50:103 (3) - 重音的分布很奇怪...都換成circle??
    06:56:816 - 嗚哇...這裡的聲音超級不明顯耶 :)
    09:10:884 (2) - Ctrl+G吧
    09:41:247 (2) - 我感覺這個稍為跳得有些遠
    09:52:884 (2,3,4) - 整個Ctrl+G??
    10:25:537 (2) - NC
    11:52:235 (3) - 換成circle+三連打感覺比較合曲
    12:16:125 (2) - 就這樣整個排列，這個circle是多餘的，不要比較好
    12:38:506 (5) - ^
    12:44:696 (4) - NC
    14:12:784 - 加個circle??
    14:45:284 - ^, 中間有鼓聲漏掉了
  1. 最後一段，旋轉的三角形，每三個一個NC，方便讀圖（跟這裡一樣）

我喜歡LoveLive! 可是我不太喜歡她的個人單曲 :?
總之...飛吧 :)
Chaoslitz
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DreaM117er wrote:

我努力看看能不能摸出什麼 :?

[哇！超市！]

  • 00:15:051 - 這裡沒有要circle嗎?? 聲音很明顯
    00:51:654 (2,1) - 為什麼這裡是轉換跟vocal了?? 強烈建議改回跟聲音
    02:21:775 (6) - 我個人強烈建議這個circle不要比較合曲
    03:38:356 (3,4,1) - 這裡你用1/1跳，03:45:467 (4,5,6) - 這裡你卻填滿了...把1/1的space填起來吧，裡面也有拍手聲
    05:26:834 - 這裡還有個聲音，要不要跟上??
    06:50:103 (3) - 重音的分布很奇怪...都換成circle?? 這個我覺得滑條還可
    06:56:816 - 嗚哇...這裡的聲音超級不明顯耶 :) 還可以啦0.0
    09:10:884 (2) - Ctrl+G吧 我想09:10:884 (2,3) 有跳
    09:41:247 (2) - 我感覺這個稍為跳得有些遠
    09:52:884 (2,3,4) - 整個Ctrl+G?? 不了音樂很弱
    10:25:537 (2) - NC
    11:52:235 (3) - 換成circle+三連打感覺比較合曲 不了
    12:16:125 (2) - 就這樣整個排列，這個circle是多餘的，不要比較好 這兒音樂漸強呀
    12:38:506 (5) - ^
    12:44:696 (4) - NC 我覺得不必要
    14:12:784 - 加個circle??
    14:45:284 - ^, 中間有鼓聲漏掉了
  1. 最後一段，旋轉的三角形，每三個一個NC，方便讀圖（跟這裡一樣）

我喜歡LoveLive! 可是我不太喜歡她的個人單曲 :?
總之...飛吧 :)
謝謝~
lit120
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lit120
incoming long mod from Nozomi since it has 20 parts :/

[General]
  1. find someone who can do timing check for you, just to make sure on everything first
  2. check all of the parts for the hitsound stuff carefully by using Playback Rate 25%
[Hitsound suggestion]
  1. it would be good idea if you set a mixed hitsound (whistle+clap) like 02:54:900 (3) - head, 02:55:345 (1) - tail, and so on, because it will be more sense if you follow like 2 instrument beats on it
[Part 1]
  1. 00:10:163 (4) - nope, it should be clap
  2. 00:10:163 (4) - remove this finish
  3. 00:10:829 (1) - finish
  4. 00:17:329 - clickable object here. add a note
  5. 00:20:829 (1) - try to remove a whistle since there is no instrumental stuff on it, just a vocal of course
  6. 00:26:663 (8) - blue tick
  7. 00:30:163 (2) - don't forget to add clap
  8. 00:35:496 (2) - remove finish
  9. 00:36:163 (3) - finish
  10. 00:37:496 (1) - finish
  11. 00:40:829 (2) - clap
[Part 2]
  1. 00:52:363 (1) - remove this finish, cuz i don't think using finish should be good
  2. 00:57:796 (4) - stack on 00:56:615 (7) - ?
  3. 00:59:922 (7) - missing head clap
  4. 01:06:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - starting from that green line timing, use clap for all of them, since i have checked them many times by using playback rate 25%
  5. 01:08:899 (3) - clap
  6. 01:09:843 (6) - clap
  7. 01:10:788 (2,5) - clap
  8. 01:17:875 (1,2) - i don't think finish is suitable for this
  9. 01:19:292 (3) - drum finish
[Part 3]
  1. i think 88345 will do for this offset part
  2. LL SIF BG menu ehh?
  3. 01:56:045 (1) - finish here, like what you did on 01:54:199 (1) -
  4. 02:11:737 (4) - 2nd part, normal sampleset
  5. 02:15:429 (6) - ^ on tail
  6. 02:18:660 (2,10) - ^, not 02:18:890 (4,8,12) -
[Part 4]
  1. 02:34:011 (1,3) - someone needs to neat this blanket a bit
  2. 02:39:345 (1) - clap tail
  3. 02:40:678 (3) - clap head
  4. 02:41:122 (1) - clap tail
  5. 02:42:456 (6) - clap head
  6. 02:42:900 (1) - clap tail
  7. 02:46:122 (9) - remove this clap. it doesn't follow any instrument there
  8. 02:53:567 (1) - clap tail
  9. 02:54:900 (3) - clap head
  10. 02:55:345 (1) - clap tail
  11. 02:56:678 (6) - clap head
  12. 03:09:567 (1) - remove finish
  13. 03:16:011 (4) - whistle (head + tail)
[Part 5]
  1. offset: 231013
  2. 03:21:468 - 03:35:690 - KIAI
  3. 03:27:690 (4) - whistle
  4. 03:30:356 (1) - whistle
  5. 03:34:134 (1,2) - i'd use a normal sampleset for this
  6. 03:39:245 (1) - whistle, not finish
  7. 03:42:134 (3) - normal sampleset
  8. 03:45:467 (4) - whistle
  9. 03:46:356 (1) - whistle, not finish
  10. 03:47:245 (3) - normal sampleset at tail
[Part 6]
  1. 04:06:223 (4) - tail clap
  2. 04:12:334 (1) - remove finish
  3. 04:19:445 (1) - ^
[Part 7]
  1. Offset: 273629
  2. 04:38:391 (6) - clap default like 04:41:844 (5) - , or did you even made an error at 04:41:844 (5) - timing set?
  3. 04:45:729 (1,2) - neat this blanket
  4. 04:53:714 (5) - normal sampleset, not clap
  5. 04:58:463 (3) - finish
  6. 04:59:542 (1) - ^
  7. 05:06:017 (4) - it doesn't make any sense for this normal sampleset
[Part 8]
  1. 05:24:156 (4,5) - (5) should be normal sampleset, not (4)
  2. 05:27:584 (1) - normal sampleset
  3. 05:56:084 (4,5,6) - lower this volume since the music fades out
[Part 9]
  1. Offset: 357650
  2. 06:13:600 (1,3) - would be good idea if you set a whistle on these 2 ((3) head)
  3. 06:22:201 (1,2,3) - looks like finish spam here
  4. 06:29:124 (5) - clap
  5. 06:33:320 (2) - clap
  6. 06:35:418 (3) - i get the point why you set 3/4 slider + reverse only, but here's my preference though if you want to follow the instrument parts better http://puu.sh/lcHcC/a8ceeab9ac.jpg (this should apply on the other 3/4 sliders)
  7. 06:38:669 - i heard a note here. add it please
[Part 10]
  1. offset: 422525
  2. 07:04:137 (1) - clap tail
  3. 07:05:337 (3) - clap
  4. 07:06:537 (4) - remove finish
  5. 07:10:137 (5) - tail clap
  6. 07:10:537 (1) - whistle
  7. 07:13:737 (1) - missing whistle/finish
  8. 07:16:937 (1) - finish
  9. 07:23:337 (1) - whistle
  10. 07:24:937 (1) - whistle
  11. 07:26:537 (1) - ^
  12. 07:28:137 (1) - ^
  13. 07:29:737 (1) - ^
  14. 07:31:337 (1) - ^
  15. 07:34:237 (7,8,9) - clap
  16. 07:36:137 (1) - whistle
  17. 07:37:737 (1) - ^
  18. 07:39:337 (1) - ^
  19. 07:52:137 (1) - ^
  20. 07:53:737 (1) - ^
  21. 07:54:937 (5,1) - lower this volume a bit
[Part 11]
  1. what's with maki and nico doing over there? owo
  2. 08:23:214 (2,4) - neat this blanket
  3. 08:29:881 (7,8) - 1) lower this volume. 2) (8) tail finish
[Part 12]
  1. offset: 514151
  2. LMAO dat BG though
  3. 08:34:884 (1,2) - (1) tail clap drum, (2) head finish drum
  4. 08:39:975 (1,2) - blanket should be more neater i guess huehuehuehue
  5. 08:47:975 (3) - wut? it's clap, not whistle
  6. 08:50:157 (1) - 2nd part clap
  7. 08:52:520 (2,1) - this blanket could be more neater huehuehue
  8. 09:11:975 (1,2,3) - what's this spacing? 09:11:975 (1,2) - is 1.54x, but 09:12:157 (2,3) - is 1.5x. so, move 09:11:975 (1) - to 14|192
  9. 09:11:429 (4,5) - neat this blanket please
  10. 09:14:702 (1) - clap tail
  11. 09:15:701 (5,7,3,7) - clap
  12. 09:16:338 (5) - NC
  13. 09:17:247 (9) - just confirmed myself that the head should be drum clap
  14. 09:27:793 (1) - clap tail
  15. 09:28:520 (3,4,5,6) - clap (soft)
  16. 09:28:883 (7,8,9) - (7) and (8) should be drum clap, while (9) is drum finish
  17. 09:49:793 - on this timing here, there are missing claps on some notes :/
[Part 13]
  1. offset: 594281
  2. 09:57:490 (2,4) - clap/normal sampleset
  3. 09:59:975 - 10:22:697 - KIAI
  4. 10:09:916 (1) - finish
  5. 10:10:626 (3) - ^
  6. 10:14:176 (1) - tail normal sampleset
  7. 10:16:306 (3) - finish
  8. 10:20:301 (3) - normal sampleset
  9. 10:20:744 (8) - finish drum
[Part 14]
  1. lewd Chaoslitz who selected this BG owo
  2. 10:35:076 - 10:57:664 - KIAI
  3. 10:33:841 (2,3,4) - i heard a drum here, so normal sampleset here please
  4. 10:40:194 (4) - i know that you used a normal sampleset as a clap sound, but this one doesn't :/
  5. 10:41:429 (3,1,2) - someone needs to fix this blanket a little bit
  6. 10:44:958 (1,2) - normal sampleset ((1)'s 2nd part)
  7. 10:45:841 (4,6) - ^
  8. 10:57:664 - on this timing right here, all those white ticks should be normal sampleset due to drums on it
[Part 15]
  1. 11:16:513 (1,2,3,4) - i heard a drum here. clap please
  2. 11:18:940 (5) - clap
  3. 11:33:680 (3,4) - fix this blanket a bit
  4. 11:41:310 (6,7) - clap
  5. 11:43:565 (4) - clap
  6. 11:43:912 (5) - remove clap
  7. 11:46:339 (5,6) - ^
  8. 11:48:420 (1,2) - (1) tail clap, not (2)
  9. 11:49:114 (4,5) - wrong hitsound set. remove (5) clap, and add (4) head clap
[Part 16]
  1. offset: 719290
  2. lewd Chaoslitz, dat BG of Nozomi's "stuff" >///<
  3. 12:06:919 (1) - finish
  4. 12:14:538 (1) - ^
  5. 12:16:919 (1) - ^
  6. 12:18:030 (4,1) - almost neat for me
  7. 12:28:506 (1,2) - (1) all normal sampleset, (2) Auto sampleset (soft of course)
  8. 12:28:982 (3) - finish
  9. 12:42:950 (3,4) - neat this blanket
[Part 17]
  2. 13:01:804 (1,2) - neat this blanket
  3. 13:10:375 (1) - finish
  4. 13:12:824 (1) - ^
  5. 13:17:110 (2,1) - almost neat blanket
  6. 13:21:549 (1) - finish
  7. 13:22:161 (3,4,5) - normal sampleset
  8. 13:22:620 (1) - finish + normal sampleset on tail
  9. 13:23:232 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - normal sampleset
  10. 13:31:804 (3) - i heard a cymbal here, so finish
  11. 13:37:773 - i heard a note here. add a note + normal sampleset
[Part 18]
  1. offset: 819458
  2. 13:41:000 (2) - don't forget to add clap
  3. 13:50:747 (2) - ^
  4. 13:55:239 - i heard a drum note here, so add a note with clap
  5. 13:55:315 (1) - clap tail
  6. 13:57:295 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - clap
  7. 13:58:208 (2,3) - neat this blanket
  8. 14:02:625 (1) - finish
  9. 14:06:584 (2) - finish
  10. 14:07:498 (1) - ^
[Part 19]
  1. 14:19:213 (7) - normal sampleset
  2. 14:30:784 (1) - finish
  3. 14:32:213 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - normal sampleset
  4. 14:36:356 (1) - http://puu.sh/lgmDg/834fc1dab3.jpg (better do something on this in a different way)
[Part 20]
  1. offset: 896481
  2. nico's trying to get the cake from eli =w=
  3. fuck those triangles stuff LOL
  4. 15:15:439 (2,3) - neat this blanket
  5. 15:21:575 (1) - you added finish on the previous note, but this one doesn't
i'll continue to mod this later
OK, IT'S DONE!!!

i think you should add a credits to this link http://llsif-audio.tumblr.com/ since you took those sounds from it LOL

GL!
Last edited by lit120 , edited 5 times in total.
Lily Bread
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Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
tiny mod.

04:05:112 (5) - 和之后的滑条圆弧方向不一致 往右调整一下
04:28:112 (4) - 可以考虑删掉
06:41:082 (1) - 反向？
僕らは今のなかで 的offset好像有点问题。
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho


[Storyboard]
  1. 第5和第6首歌沒了BG，BG文件夾裡面也沒見有BG5和BG6

    第10首歌沒了歌曲名稱，看了下是代碼弄錯了，應該是"sb\t10.png"
    SPOILER

[Spiritual Amethyst]
  1. 00:34:718 (7) - 這個我覺得去掉比較好，因為實際上沒有音，打起來有點難觸摸

    00:41:496 (4,5) - 間距可以大一點，2.5x左右吧

    01:12:206 (1,2) - 01:12:914 (3,4) - 這裡間距小點比較好，始終是1/4，特別前面12容易誤認1/2

    02:51:345 (6,1) - Blanket好

    03:29:245 (2) - 03:31:023 (2) - 這兩個滑條換成1圓圈+1滑條比較合適
    SPOILER

    03:59:445 (6) - 這個位置滑條用1.25x如何，可以突顯vocal也沒這麼單調，另外如果改的話記得加NC
    SPOILER

    04:27:889 (3,4) - 這裡換成滑條？向上面說的那樣用1.25x

    03:53:223 (4,5) - 03:54:112 (2,3) - 這兩個地方也一樣可以改，看你個人意願吧

    06:12:551 (4,1) - 我覺得4疊到1上面會好點

    06:25:348 (3) - 建議NC

    09:09:611 (2) - 換成1滑條+1圓圈？因為09:09:975 - 這個位置我覺得clickable會比較好

    09:12:520 (4,5) - 跟vocal的話像這樣會好點
    SPOILER

    10:24:295 (2) - NC？

    12:14:538 (1,2) - 2放遠一點，因為隔了1拍而不是1/2拍

    12:48:823 (1,2,3,4) - 間距可以再大一點

    13:37:328 (1,2) - 這個2必須放遠點，玩的時候讀錯了，或者我覺得可以刪掉也行

    13:45:569 (1,2) - 這裡太空了，要不把12都換成滑條

    13:48:005 (1,2,3) - 這裡也是，123都可以換成滑條

    14:12:784 (2) - 強烈建議NC

    14:13:213 (3) - 這個應該放在和4比較近的地方，而不是和2近的地方，或者我覺得直接疊在4上面就好了

    14:56:894 (3) - 強烈建議NC

    14:57:166 (2) - 應該放遠點，因為和前面隔了1拍，可以試試這樣放
    SPOILER

    15:20:894 (3,4) - 這個位置和上面說的一樣，3要NC，4放遠點

    15:00:848 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 不知道有多少人會死在這串三角orz，還有後面那些，如果是我的話肯定不會放這種尾殺了
[ Drop ]
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[ Drop ]
Hitsound
15:31:394 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - ----> http://puu.sh/lbEP0/a143b3db7c.wav
15:27:030 (1) - ----> http://puu.sh/lbDkA/ff951dee02.wav
10:35:076 - 10:57:311 ---> http://puu.sh/lbFy4/b2d95f71d3.wav
Maybe I Don't really know ;w;
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Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
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Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Lily Bread wrote:

tiny mod.

04:05:112 (5) - 和之后的滑条圆弧方向不一致 往右调整一下 好
04:28:112 (4) - 可以考虑删掉 這個我覺得還可以
06:41:082 (1) - 反向？不了距難太大
僕らは今のなかで 的offset好像有点问题。改了

Kencho wrote:



[Storyboard]
  1. 第5和第6首歌沒了BG，BG文件夾裡面也沒見有BG5和BG6 我有呀

    第10首歌沒了歌曲名稱，看了下是代碼弄錯了，應該是"sb\t10.png" 我是故意不用0的,不知道為啥每次用"10"都有問題
    SPOILER

[Spiritual Amethyst]
  1. 00:34:718 (7) - 這個我覺得去掉比較好，因為實際上沒有音，打起來有點難觸摸 原本是想跟vocal,原來那是1/4,改了

    00:41:496 (4,5) - 間距可以大一點，2.5x左右吧 好

    01:12:206 (1,2) - 01:12:914 (3,4) - 這裡間距小點比較好，始終是1/4，特別前面12容易誤認1/2 ok

    02:51:345 (6,1) - Blanket好 好

    03:29:245 (2) - 03:31:023 (2) - 這兩個滑條換成1圓圈+1滑條比較合適 個人還是覺得1/1比較好
    SPOILER

    03:59:445 (6) - 這個位置滑條用1.25x如何，可以突顯vocal也沒這麼單調，另外如果改的話記得加NC 不用了也太多>_>
    SPOILER

    04:27:889 (3,4) - 這裡換成滑條？向上面說的那樣用1.25x

    03:53:223 (4,5) - 03:54:112 (2,3) - 這兩個地方也一樣可以改，看你個人意願吧

    06:12:551 (4,1) - 我覺得4疊到1上面會好點 jump會變得有點怪

    06:25:348 (3) - 建議NC ok

    09:09:611 (2) - 換成1滑條+1圓圈？因為09:09:975 - 這個位置我覺得clickable會比較好 不了

    09:12:520 (4,5) - 跟vocal的話像這樣會好點 不是vocal w
    SPOILER

    10:24:295 (2) - NC？ok

    12:14:538 (1,2) - 2放遠一點，因為隔了1拍而不是1/2拍 好

    12:48:823 (1,2,3,4) - 間距可以再大一點 好

    13:37:328 (1,2) - 這個2必須放遠點，玩的時候讀錯了，或者我覺得可以刪掉也行 ok

    13:45:569 (1,2) - 這裡太空了，要不把12都換成滑條 我覺得沒問題

    13:48:005 (1,2,3) - 這裡也是，123都可以換成滑條

    14:12:784 (2) - 強烈建議NC 好

    14:13:213 (3) - 這個應該放在和4比較近的地方，而不是和2近的地方，或者我覺得直接疊在4上面就好了 ok

    14:56:894 (3) - 強烈建議NC ok

    14:57:166 (2) - 應該放遠點，因為和前面隔了1拍，可以試試這樣放 好啊
    SPOILER

    15:20:894 (3,4) - 這個位置和上面說的一樣，3要NC，4放遠點 ok

    15:00:848 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 不知道有多少人會死在這串三角orz，還有後面那些，如果是我的話肯定不會放這種尾殺了 因為高pp啦,而且我覺得這個挺好的, pp得來不易

choikapo wrote:

Hitsound
15:27:030 (1) - ----> http://puu.sh/lbEP0/a143b3db7c.wav
15:27:030 (1) - ----> http://puu.sh/lbDkA/ff951dee02.wav
10:35:076 - 10:57:311 ---> http://puu.sh/lbFy4/b2d95f71d3.wav added
Maybe I Don't really know ;w;
Thanks!
Lily Bread
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Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
widescreed support跟letterbox应该关掉，没有SB也没有break time

[Basic]
01:25:248 (2,3,4) - 很不合曲..既然Easy没法押到这么多音，那就用一根滑条带过去吧，感觉比用3个什么音都没押到的滑条好上不少。

[Medium]
AR4？感觉5好一点
00:16:005 (2,3) - stack
01:28:654 (2,3) - ^
00:28:167 - 这里没有音乐，考虑不折返？
01:40:492 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:28:330 (3) - 这里乍看像是1/4，做为hard来说稍稍有坑人嫌疑
01:12:276 (5,6,7,8,1) - 这种bpm下出现这种串就已经不能算hard了吧...至少也是hyper了

建议把现有hard再做难点然后改个难度名，再新增一个简单的hard
4.5星以上摸不动，抱歉

可以求m4m吗？


贴错串了...........><
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Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Lily Bread wrote:

widescreed support跟letterbox应该关掉，没有SB也没有break time

[Basic]
01:25:248 (2,3,4) - 很不合曲..既然Easy没法押到这么多音，那就用一根滑条带过去吧，感觉比用3个什么音都没押到的滑条好上不少。

[Medium]
AR4？感觉5好一点
00:16:005 (2,3) - stack
01:28:654 (2,3) - ^
00:28:167 - 这里没有音乐，考虑不折返？
01:40:492 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:28:330 (3) - 这里乍看像是1/4，做为hard来说稍稍有坑人嫌疑
01:12:276 (5,6,7,8,1) - 这种bpm下出现这种串就已经不能算hard了吧...至少也是hyper了

建议把现有hard再做难点然后改个难度名，再新增一个简单的hard
4.5星以上摸不动，抱歉

可以求m4m吗？
你在摸啥呀....這可是馬拉松
-Tochi
Elite Storyboarder
1,444 posts
Joined November 2013
-Tochi
M4M


  • General

  1. This map may need an epilepsy warning, as it contains frequently toggled storyboards.
  2. No tags? :o


  • Spiritual Amethyst

  1. 05:25:227 (2) - Maybe move to 328|212 for better jump? Maybe move 05:25:441 (3) - too if the jump here 05:25:441 (3,4) - is too big.
  2. 06:32:690 (1,2) - Improve this blanket from: http://puu.sh/lcShP/a0fcde2cbe.png to: http://puu.sh/lcSjY/a6cf7be71b.png
  3. 15:33:439 - Add a circle maybe?


  • Feedback


    Sorry, couldn't find much D:
    Nice map, good luck on it!
    I'll give it a kd!
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

-Tochi wrote:

M4M


  • General

  1. This map may need an epilepsy warning, as it contains frequently toggled storyboards. probably fine, it isn't flashy at all
  2. No tags? :o later, later ww


  • Spiritual Amethyst

  1. 05:25:227 (2) - Maybe move to 328|212 for better jump? Maybe move 05:25:441 (3) - too if the jump here 05:25:441 (3,4) - is too big.
  2. 06:32:690 (1,2) - Improve this blanket from: http://puu.sh/lcShP/a0fcde2cbe.png to: http://puu.sh/lcSjY/a6cf7be71b.png
  3. 15:33:439 - Add a circle maybe? nah this seems fine to me


  • Feedback


    Sorry, couldn't find much D:
    Nice map, good luck on it!
    I'll give it a kd!
no reply=fixed
I will update the map later w
Ciyus Miapah
3,011 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah
IRC modding
01:34 Fort: hi chaos
01:34 Fort: im done with fixing mod
01:34 Chaoslitz: hi
01:34 Fort: maybe you can take a look of it
01:34 Chaoslitz: ahh okay
01:34 *Fort is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/793816 cYsmix - Dovregubben's Hall]
01:37 Chaoslitz: 01:24:071 (1,2) - this dont really plays well :V
01:37 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3929530 may be somthing like this?
01:38 Fort: okay fixed
01:38 Chaoslitz: ok done~
01:38 Chaoslitz: update
01:39 Fort: lemme update
01:40 Fort: updated!
01:40 Chaoslitz: ok wait :3
01:41 Chaoslitz: ah k lemme bubble
01:42 Fort: yeah i think so :))
01:42 Chaoslitz: done :3
01:42 Fort: thank you so much >3<
01:42 Chaoslitz: >3<
01:44 Chaoslitz: fort do you have time to have a quick mod now lol
01:46 Fort: sure
01:46 Fort: np the map
01:46 *Chaoslitz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/774903 Tojo Nozomi (CV.Kusuda Aina) - Love Live! NOZOMI Mix Songs Compilation [Spiritual Amethyst]]
01:47 Chaoslitz: xdd
01:47 Fort: wow
01:47 Chaoslitz: too long just mod part of it
01:47 Fort: long artist name
01:47 Fort: eh long title name
01:47 Chaoslitz: yea :V
01:47 Chaoslitz: ahhh can you download it?
01:47 Chaoslitz: i just changed the metadata
01:47 Chaoslitz: havent update
01:47 Fort: O.O
01:47 Fort: 15:33 duration
01:47 Chaoslitz: yea ;w;
01:48 Fort: HR pp intensifies
01:48 Chaoslitz: Stamina xD
01:51 Fort: finally
01:51 *Fort is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/774903 Tojo Nozomi CV.Kusuda Aina - Love Live! NOZOMI Mix Songs Compilation [Spiritual Amethyst]]
01:52 Chaoslitz: xd
01:52 Fort: intro
01:52 Fort: aishiteru banzai
01:52 Fort: dem 1/4+1/6 fusion
01:53 Chaoslitz: yea
01:53 Fort: 00:25:163 (3,4,5,6) - 
01:53 Chaoslitz: music + vocal
01:53 Fort: it's like same distance with different snap
01:54 Fort: 00:25:718 (5,6) - maybe put less distance on here
01:54 Fort: like this 00:26:496 (7,8,1) - 
01:55 Chaoslitz: okie
01:56 Fort: 01:06:536 (1,2) - make this spacing begger i think
01:56 Fort: bigger*
01:57 Fort: yeah i was noticed this sliders looks good 01:07:009 (3,4) - 
01:58 Chaoslitz: ok
01:58 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3929647 like this?
01:59 Fort:  a
01:59 Fort: yeah i can explain this because this spacing like anti jump
02:00 Fort: well spacing like this
02:00 Fort: 01:06:300 (8,3,4) - 
02:00 Chaoslitz: because the spacing is increasing here >_>
02:01 Fort: ooh
02:01 Fort: http://puu.sh/lcWwJ/6c27d5de7d.jpg -> yeah this think on my mind
02:02 Chaoslitz: hmmm ok
02:02 Chaoslitz: changed some pattern tho
02:03 Fort: umm ya
02:07 Fort: btw you made SB?
02:08 Chaoslitz: yea
02:08 Fort: yeah i can say tbh i have 4:3 ratio monitor
02:08 Fort: and the title got cutted
02:08 Fort: like this
02:08 Chaoslitz: oh owo
02:08 Fort: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3929715
02:10 Chaoslitz: D:
02:10 Chaoslitz: i will fix it
02:10 Fort: yeah
02:10 Fort: very nice :D
02:10 Chaoslitz: :D
02:11 *Fort didnt have idea to mod this inb4 10/10 cant find anything wrong
02:11 Chaoslitz: 0.0
02:12 Fort: 04:28:334 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why you map this fade out part?
02:12 Fort: weird i think
02:12 Chaoslitz: i think it is fine tho 0.0
02:12 Fort: but idk
02:12 Fort: the volume on music too low i think
02:13 Chaoslitz: :o
02:13 Fort: especially on 04:29:223 -
02:13 Chaoslitz: oh rip my last marathon map
02:13 Fort: put 20% volume maybe
02:13 Chaoslitz: that sb it cutted as well is 4:3
02:13 Chaoslitz: but ranked :V
02:13 Fort: on this 04:29:223 -
02:13 Chaoslitz: ok
02:14 Fort: 04:29:667 - this feels like 10% volume
02:14 Chaoslitz: k
02:14 Fort: yeah it rankable but how to read title if it cutted lol
02:15 Fort: inb4 100% BG dim
02:15 Chaoslitz: xd
02:15 Fort: LOL
02:15 Chaoslitz: trre tho c:
02:15 Chaoslitz: true*
02:17 Fort:  06:40:243 (4,5) - looks this distance too smal
02:18 Fort: maybe move 06:40:662 (5) - to 256|324
02:20 Fort: 07:53:737 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this is more weird with really fast slider
02:21 Chaoslitz: ok
02:21 Fort: but idk if this can works
02:21 Chaoslitz: i will lower the av
02:21 Chaoslitz: sv*
02:21 Chaoslitz: ?
02:21 Fort: yeah it's fine if SV being lowered
02:23 Fort: 09:19:247 (1,2,3) - like this maybe http://puu.sh/lcXVc/76bcfb85b7.jpg
02:23 Fort: idk but it looks better if that circle clearly visible like that
02:23 Fort: just for this part only
02:25 Chaoslitz: i think it is still readable owo
02:25 Fort: 09:50:338 (3) - maybe change to this pattern http://puu.sh/lcY2T/e82d6b59fc.jpg
02:25 Fort: becuase it provide guitar and finish sound
02:26 Fort: 09:19:247 (1,2,3) - oh yeah it clearly visible but at average on your mapping, that pattern kinda one circle overlapped
02:26 Fort: 09:24:702 (4,1) - it's really different compare with this
02:27 Fort: and looks i didnt see you map same pattern on this part :D
02:27 Chaoslitz: okok
02:27 Fort: #HowToExplainWithEnglish?
02:27 Fort: xDDD
02:27 Chaoslitz: xd
02:29 Fort: 10:05:300 (5) - ummm
02:29 Fort: im sure this sliders needs to be changed to circle
02:30 Fort: oh i was skip previous pattern
02:30 Fort: ah im drunk now
02:30 Fort: 10:19:857 (1) - maybe move to 336|308
02:31 Chaoslitz: ok
02:33 Fort: 10:47:605 (1) - move 2nd node to 216|308
02:33 Fort: to make some little circular flow for 10:47:076 (3,4,1) - 
02:34 Chaoslitz: ok
02:34 Fort: 11:18:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/6
02:35 Fort: yeah blame composer xDDDDDD
02:35 Chaoslitz: it is 1/4 owo
02:36 Fort: really?
02:36 Fort: i feel like it's 1/6
02:36 Chaoslitz: at least i think those piano are not 1/6
02:36 Chaoslitz: try 25% 0.0
02:37 Fort: well 173 bpm on that piano thing kinda like boom
02:37 Fort: a 1/6 burst
02:37 Chaoslitz: then ignore it xD
02:37 Chaoslitz: this stream more tends to the rhythm tho
02:37 Fort: yeah maybe im just drunk
02:37 Fort: who suggesting put 1/6 circles
02:38 Chaoslitz: too tired xd
02:38 Fort: on 12 minutes drain time :V
02:38 Chaoslitz: :V
02:38 Fort: 11:36:628 (3) - overlap combo
02:39 Fort: with 11:35:588 (3) - and 11:35:935 (1) - 
02:39 Chaoslitz: okie
02:39 Fort: try this maybe
02:39 Fort: http://puu.sh/lcZ2S/58c44edf14.jpg
02:40 Chaoslitz: i think overlap 11:35:588 (3,3) is acceptable
02:41 Chaoslitz: so I just moved away from 11:35:935 (1)
02:41 Fort: oh okay
02:41 Fort: it's nice too
02:41 Fort: and this
02:41 Fort: 12:04:696 (2) - 
02:41 Fort: 12:04:643 - maybe on here
02:42 Chaoslitz: you mean vocal?
02:42 Fort: yeah vocal
02:42 Fort: feels glitched
02:43 Chaoslitz: ohh forgive the singer it is not sing onbeat :(
02:43 Fort: 12:04:657 - or maybe on this
02:43 Fort: ah
02:43 Fort: this makes me confused
02:43 Fort: 12:04:379 (1,2) - change to slider more simple beat
02:43 Chaoslitz: ;w;
02:44 Fort: without any glitched clicks
02:44 Fort: :D
02:44 Chaoslitz: still nozomi for live :V
02:44 Fort: still i like dubstep
02:44 Fort: :V
02:44 Chaoslitz: 11:59:300 (1,2) - similar owo
02:44 Chaoslitz: both :V
02:44 Fort: why not change both?? :V
02:45 Chaoslitz: tho i think two notes can emphasize the vocal more >_>
02:45 Fort: yeah it can be but this glitched vocal makes hit error more bigger
02:46 Fort: to prevent that thing maybe use slider can help it
02:46 Chaoslitz: hmm i will leave it first
02:46 Fort: 12:38:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think you doing wrong job here
02:46 Fort: especially on 12:38:823 (2,3) - 
02:47 Fort: slider (3) fits on 12:39:141 - i think
02:48 Chaoslitz: http://puu.sh/lcZAt/4d8a299705.jpg
02:48 Chaoslitz: how about this
02:48 Fort: wow cool
02:49 Fort: 13:06:855 (1) - this slider stack makes this one hard to read
02:49 Fort: especially after dense pattern like 13:05:630 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
02:49 Fort: it can be possible if you map 13:06:702 - i think
02:50 Chaoslitz: but 13:05:937 (3) - is already faded out 0.0
02:50 Chaoslitz: ah sure then
02:50 Chaoslitz: i will use a slider
02:51 Fort: make this slider and do like this http://puu.sh/lcZNN/bb78ad0d6f.jpg :D
02:51 Fort: Crreative rainbow pattern
02:51 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3929922 i placed like this
02:51 Chaoslitz: :oo
02:52 Fort: yeah same thing i guess
02:52 Fort: 13:37:314 (1,2) - you doing wrong job again
02:52 Fort: +SV too fast 
02:52 Chaoslitz: ahh dam ;_;
02:52 Fort: 13:37:926 (2) - move this to 13:37:773 - 
02:54 Fort: 13:40:696 - why this song has 197bpm? i mean i know this song is 200bpm
02:54 Fort: but idk
02:54 Fort: maybe composer nerf bpm
02:55 Chaoslitz: owo
02:55 Fort: 13:56:533 (1) - dem SV
02:55 Chaoslitz: ?
02:55 Fort: it feels really fast with 13:55:315 (1) - 
02:55 Fort: 0.9x is enough i think
02:56 Chaoslitz: ah ok
02:56 Fort: idk why this slider so fast 13:56:533 (1) - 
02:56 Fort: and i guess 1.0x slider better on 13:57:752 (1) - 
02:57 Chaoslitz: i made 13:56:533 (1) - this 0.9x
02:57 Fort: yeah good
02:58 Fort: 15:00:848 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - dem taps
02:59 Fort: oh now i know why this map has 5.28 stars
02:59 Chaoslitz: blame the bpm :V
03:00 Fort: 15:21:575 (1,2) - this spacing could be higher i guess
03:01 Chaoslitz: ah yea
03:01 Fort: move 15:21:575 (1) - to 504|368
03:01 Fort: i guess
03:01 Fort: 15:25:939 (1,2,3,4) - make this pattern more dense
03:01 Fort: not just 1/1
03:01 Chaoslitz: did something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3929972
03:02 Fort: blame the BPM + song :V
03:02 Chaoslitz: xd
03:04 Chaoslitz: thats all? xd
03:04 Fort: 1 thing
03:04 Fort: uncheck Letterboc
03:04 Fort: letterbox*
03:05 Chaoslitz: but there are breaks 0.0
03:05 Fort: yeah short breaks doesnt need that letterbox i think
03:05 Chaoslitz: okie
03:05 Fort: put tags
03:05 Chaoslitz: yea did it
03:06 Fort: put all u's title song out there
03:06 Fort: xDDDDDDDDD
03:06 Fort: put genre
03:06 Fort: "Dubstep"
03:06 Chaoslitz: already c:
03:06 Chaoslitz: ahh :V
03:07 Chaoslitz: oh you can place the irc w
03:07 Fort: faild sound
03:08 Fort: dat failsound doe
03:08 Fort: too long
03:08 Chaoslitz: hmm i guess i will find another one
03:08 Fort: yeah up to you

i think we discussed something here:

-> OMG This song too long and im drunked cant explain what i change here im just remembered like
+ circles and sliders placement
+ change some map patterning
+ fix some glitched snapping
- remove letterbox on general

good luck chaoslitz!
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