Kirin wrote:

Osuology wrote:

[Life's Meaning]
Maybe you should add audio offset to the beginning. Just saying. idk what do you mean, maybe you mean a green line on the offset because of 70% audio? No I meant to add audio offset to mp3 file but it plays fine so you should be fine
00:16:382 (7) - Why does this note exist? removed :v
00:44:227 (2) - Also remove this one nope, it fits imo
00:56:554 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Dont stop doing this all of a sudden lol didn't have any idea on how to do that part so made it like that, also i wouldn't like to continue that pattern like adding some slider on 00:58:278 - and 00:58:623 - the sliders on 00:56:554 - was only a special case (?)
01:23:968 (3,4) - Delete 4 and move 3 1/2 to the right on timeline. before i submit this map, i asked to a friend of mine to check it (since he is very good at mapping) and told me to do like that so i don't think i'll change it
03:51:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Fix hitsounds argh didn't notice that horrible hitsounding, fixed
other than tha, WEll dets 👌👀👌👀 some good shizz 👌👀 thats some ✔ re✔lly goo👌d shiz👌zle ✔✔✔✔ my niz👌zle ✔✔if i doƽaү somy self 💯 i say so 💯 thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ💯 👌👌 👌НO0ଠOଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ👌 👌 💯 👌 👀 👀 👀 nice ghetto maymays m8 :^) thank you

Thank you two and sorry for the delay D: I was very busy with real life ;_;

Synpoo wrote:

hi, from my q hi!

Life's Meaning

1. 00:03:623 (6) - (This applies to every slider in the intro/outro that ends on this beat) This slider starts on a weak beat but ends on a very very strong one making it play poorly. I suggest two circles here for better emphasis on the strong beats like you did 00:01:037 (4,4) -
   If this is because you want variety then use a slider elsewhere in the rhythm, not here done in most of the intro
2. 00:22:934 (4) - Passive slider here again, don't end a slider on that strong beat actually replacing that slider would ruin the pattern imo
3. 00:31:209 (4) - ^ same
4. 00:37:589 (1) - Doesn't fit well here, recommend a circle instead since nothing is audible on this blue tick and the white doesn't need the emphasis from this 1/4 slider i'm still not sure about changing it because there starts the fast beat on that part so imo it fits
5. 00:42:761 (1) - This would be a lot better if you mapped it instead of a spinner imo idk how to map that part, and the spinner still fits
6. 00:44:227 (2) - Delete, this has absolutely no place here and the music has a very clear 1/2 rhythm ok finally removed
7. 01:23:968 (3) - The spacing here is weird because it indicates a 1/1 beat gap instead of a 1/2, either lower the spacing to reflect that or move this to the white tick so it plays properly i did something worse but if you say so, fixed
8. 01:28:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Soooo these kicksliders don't make any sense and are insanely overmapped, these notes can just be represented with circles and 1/2 sliders as they don't need crazy emphasis that these kicksliders are currently giving them uhm ok, i'll make something different
9. 01:33:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^ fixed
10. 01:39:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - These kicksliders and the other ones in this buildup are fine since they properly emphasize the music as it gets more and more intense yup
11. 01:50:003 (4) - Plays much better as 1/2 slider -> circle, currently you miss the bass on the red tick and end this slider on a really strong beat/new measure/start of kiai i don't listen to any bass on the red tick and that slider fits imo
12. 02:21:037 (3,4) - Blanket the blanket is ok imo
13. 02:24:830 (1,4) - Small overlap fixed
14. 03:54:485 (1) - Maybe lower SV here? This thing moves pretty fast for what it represents...0.75x works pretty well i'm not sure about it,
15. 04:02:244 (6,7) - 7 definitely needs more spacing from 6 yup, fixed
16. 04:23:968 (3,4,5) - 4 needs more spacing than 3 and 5 because the beat is far stronger on it remade all the jump, fixed
17. 05:08:278 (5) - Remove the repeat and place a circle instead nope it fits

gl~ thank you!

1. 00:05:003 - Non ci andrebbe un clap qui?
2. 00:10:692 (7) - Finish qui? Mi fa strano che sia vuota
3. 00:22:934 (4) - Uhm, di solito non è una buona idea far iniziare slider da 1/2 sui tick rossi, siccome suonano un po' male. Non ti dico di cambiarli, però fai attenzione perchè qualcuno potrebbe romperti i coglioni su questo
4. 00:30:175 (7) - Questo è 1/6, non 1/8 (se ascolti con 25% te ne accorgi subito)
5. 00:32:416 (1) - Invece questo è 1/8 lol. Magari mettici uno o due kickslider, te lo dico anche perchè è l'unico stream da 1/8 della map, e potrebbe confondere i giocatori, e tra l'altro farebbe rompere la combo nel 90% dei casi
6. 00:38:623 (5) - NC qui assolutamente
7. 00:41:209 (1) - 1/6
8. 01:31:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - Questo è molto strano. Hai messo dei jump molto grossi, e poi subito dopo hai usato questo ritmo, con slider da 6/4, nonostante la musica non cambi per niente. Ti consiglio di metterci altri jump, o almeno di continuare a usare un ritmo da 1/2, come hai fatto da 01:33:796 - in poi
9. 01:44:140 (4) - NC? E magari per enfatizzare il tutto potresti dividerlo in 3 note
10. 01:46:727 (4,1) - Molto strano come antijump...
11. 02:19:830 (4,5) - Overlap, sposta un pochino a destra il (4)
12. 03:18:623 (1,2,3,4) - Questo invece non mi piace proprio, cerca magari di metterli a quadrato, o comunque non allineati in modo strano, tra l'altro l'(1) overlappa lo slider
13. 03:40:778 (1) - Non so cosa sia successo ma come vedi inizia e finisce 1/4 troppo avanti, rimettilo a posto. Poi ti consiglio di aggiungere un whistle sia su questo spinner che su quello successivo
14. 03:46:123 (1) - Questo deve iniziare sulla linea bianca immediatamente successiva
15. 03:51:727 (1) - Finish?
16. 04:01:899 (4,5,6,7,8) - Questa stella è un po' troppo "schiacciata", se capisci cosa intendo
17. 05:15:692 (6,2) - Altro overlap, sposta il (2) un pochino

RikiH_ wrote:

Primo mod in italiano da anni.

Life's Meaning

1. 00:05:003 - Non ci andrebbe un clap qui? ok l'ho messo
2. 00:10:692 (7) - Finish qui? Mi fa strano che sia vuota lol l'avevo messo al beat prima, fatto
3. 00:22:934 (4) - Uhm, di solito non è una buona idea far iniziare slider da 1/2 sui tick rossi, siccome suonano un po' male. Non ti dico di cambiarli, però fai attenzione perchè qualcuno potrebbe romperti i coglioni su questo si me lo avevano già detto in precendeza, vedo cosa fare
4. 00:30:175 (7) - Questo è 1/6, non 1/8 (se ascolti con 25% te ne accorgi subito) e infatti me ne sono accorto, fixed
5. 00:32:416 (1) - Invece questo è 1/8 lol. Magari mettici uno o due kickslider, te lo dico anche perchè è l'unico stream da 1/8 della map, e potrebbe confondere i giocatori, e tra l'altro farebbe rompere la combo nel 90% dei casi ci ho messo un repeat, era da tempo che volevo cambiarlo
6. 00:38:623 (5) - NC qui assolutamente messo
7. 00:41:209 (1) - 1/6 fixato
8. 01:31:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - Questo è molto strano. Hai messo dei jump molto grossi, e poi subito dopo hai usato questo ritmo, con slider da 6/4, nonostante la musica non cambi per niente. Ti consiglio di metterci altri jump, o almeno di continuare a usare un ritmo da 1/2, come hai fatto da 01:33:796 - in poi boh in un modo ho sistemato e imho è anche migliorata la qualità
9. 01:44:140 (4) - NC? E magari per enfatizzare il tutto potresti dividerlo in 3 note NC messo ma non sono sicuro sul farlo in 3 note..
10. 01:46:727 (4,1) - Molto strano come antijump... non so, non vedo nulla di male
11. 02:19:830 (4,5) - Overlap, sposta un pochino a destra il (4) fatto
12. 03:18:623 (1,2,3,4) - Questo invece non mi piace proprio, cerca magari di metterli a quadrato, o comunque non allineati in modo strano, tra l'altro l'(1) overlappa lo slider fixato tutto
13. 03:40:778 (1) - Non so cosa sia successo ma come vedi inizia e finisce 1/4 troppo avanti, rimettilo a posto. Poi ti consiglio di aggiungere un whistle sia su questo spinner che su quello successivo il whistle l'ho messo ma non vedo errori di flow etc
14. 03:46:123 (1) - Questo deve iniziare sulla linea bianca immediatamente successiva non saprei, sta bene dove sta imho
15. 03:51:727 (1) - Finish? mmh si, aggiunto
16. 04:01:899 (4,5,6,7,8) - Questa stella è un po' troppo "schiacciata", se capisci cosa intendo non avevo l'intenzione di fare una star comunque, se proprio è grave vedo di cambiare in futuro
17. 05:15:692 (6,2) - Altro overlap, sposta il (2) un pochino sistemato

Sarà perchè non moddo da mesi, ma non vedo altri grossi problemi, ti lascio una stella. Good luck!

iYiyo wrote:

Hey! M4M as we talked in-game yo

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  [General]
  

1. Why no custom hitsounds? It isn't hard to add some :3 you know, laziness xD
   
   [Life's Meaning]
2. 00:04:140 (1,2,3) - I suggest you to keep the distance consistence from what you did 00:02:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here. kinda fixed (?)
3. 00:05:865 (2,3) - ctrl+g those for better flow? as you can see the transition is smoother if you do so, also you can move 00:06:554 (4) - where the (1) slider ends and stack it. done, looks cool
4. 00:10:692 (7,8,1) - since this part is a little bit difference, you can make a little jump to emphasize the new note (8) uhm, fixed
5. 00:14:485 (5,6) - this jump look a bit random placed, maybe try this to keep consistence with the pattern: http://puu.sh/q2L44/1a15c9f7f4.jpg Also you can add some distance between 6 & 7 to emphasize. fixed
6. 00:16:382 - why not add a note here? since you did the same with 00:10:865 (8) - this done
7. 00:21:899 - ^ ^
8. 00:18:106 (2,3) - this transition lacks of flow since the movement you're doing here feels a bit unnatural to play. Also the spacing is too low compared from what you were doing in all this section, maybe try doing something like this: http://puu.sh/q2LnC/1b596fe62d.jpg stacking 1 & 4. i actually managed to get some testplays and no one missed that part or complained, but you're right about the spacing tho
9. 00:22:934 (4) - Since the strong beat is 00:23:106 - I suggest to better start the slider there instead, basically you emphasize more if you do so so it plays better. done
10. 00:32:330 - You're missing a note here, so what i suggest you is to follow this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/q2LJu/151f40d209.jpg nah, i just added a note
11. 00:37:761 (2,1) - stack those? nope
12. 00:36:554 (5,6) - maybe try some symmetry here? http://puu.sh/q2LUM/c002a95b84.jpg nah, it's cool as it is
13. 00:38:278 (4) - ctrl g for better flow done
14. 00:56:382 (8) - start with a slider instead? for emphasize purpose the note is on a red tick, so no
15. This part is a little bit inconsistence since you map a lot 00:55:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here but then there're just a few notes. I highly recommend you to be more consistence here. eh right, i think i'll just delete the "note spam" and continue with the few notes or viceversa, idk for now
16. 01:06:209 - 01:17:244 - Same as before, here you make a strong change from what u were doing, I think you should follow the instruments here, fit better imo. i am kinda undecided, i want that part to stay the same tho, it fits the rhythm but it's undermapped and that is what i kinda wanted to do ;-;
17. 01:50:003 (4) - instead of a 1/1 slider, you can do a 3/4 and then stack a circle 01:50:347 - with 01:50:520 (2) - it creates more emphasis. i still prefere the 1/1 slider, sorry
18. 02:17:934 (1,2) - blanket? fixed
19. 02:29:313 (2,3,4) - For this part, I feel like the jump is a little bit high and sudden, try to reduce it a bit. reduced
20. 03:04:313 (2,3) - Make the distance like 03:02:934 (2,3) - this kinda done
21. 03:46:209 (1) - the spin should end 03:51:209 - here done
22. 04:10:003 (2) - ctrl g for better flow done
23. 04:21:382 (3,5) - maybe blanket? nah i didn't want to make a blanket on that, but maybe in the future i could
24. 04:28:278 (3) - ctrl g done
25. 05:31:037 - the kiai should end here i think nope, there is a calm part at 05:20:003 - so it's kinda pointless to let the kiai continue
    
    I don't know but the hitsounds in general seem to be a little bit random or awkward for me, try adding some custom ones and check them. Also some jumps are come a bit random and sudden, I suggest you to build like a path for those jumps and be a bit more consistence with de spacing. yea, hitsounding is not my best that's why i didn't tried custom ones (also this is one of my first attempt of serious hitsounding so ;_;) btw i'm working about the jumps, some that fits with the rhythm and some that dont
    
    Well that's all, nice song and map, good luck!