Monstrata wrote:

woof Awoooo

01:02:008 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - A lot of stacking here. I would have liked to see some more movement going into the sliders. I think stacks are okay, but here you ahve 3 in a row which is quite different from the norm. Aight, unstacked the last one, makes more sense that way
01:13:479 (2) - You could always try emphasizing the guitar with a 3/4 slider too. Just an idea tho But then I can't hitsound 01:13:773 - this
01:27:891 (3,4) - Maybe a jump here for the pitch? Anyways, the spacing didn't really fit that nicely especially since 01:28:773 (5,6,7) - are so far apart for notes that are more or less the same. Maybe rethink the jumps here. Did that
02:03:849 (1,2,1) - I think 1>2 should be the larger jump here, not 2>3. 2 efinitely stands out. True, fixed that, also fixed and cleaned up some redlines in this section while I was at it xd
02:05:502 (4,5) - Same here, larger spacing from 4>5 compared to 3>4 Fixed too
03:59:413 - 04:09:299 - I cannot figure out what those streams are following xP. They just sound so overmapped to me. Maybe there's a 1/4 track? But if there is, it's so soft it just doesn't fit imo xP.
04:11:481 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - etc.. these i can understand cuz of the guitar, but not the earlier ones xP
04:34:388 - etc... So basically, for this solo, the guitar is doing constant 1/6s, they aren't one held note at a time. It's same technique as used here for example, altough those are clearer. It isn't overmapped, even if the 1/6s are blend together and not crystal clear, they do exist.
06:02:626 (7) - Clicking here felt kinda out of place. Emphasize the snare drum instead with your clicking rhythm? Well, the snare is already clicked at 06:02:538 (6) - here :v Altough the quad is mostly for the guitar doing a 1/6 here
06:10:784 (5) - Wait what is this following. Red tick circle?? It just deviates from your usual rhythm unnecesarily imo It's following the kick drum going full 1/3, it's also consistent with 06:23:240 (1,2,3,4) - and 06:52:714 (1,2,3) - and 07:01:135 (1,2) - and to some extent, 07:13:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this one aswell, altough it has 1/6 guitar going over it, but the drums are still doing 1/3s, and also 07:43:240 (3,4,5) - at last :v
06:43:503 (2,3) - Felt really odd to stack after those jumps right before. Uh weird, it should be a triangle like so xd not sure why it's stacked
06:44:906 (7,1) - L:arger jump to emphasize the guitar pitch? Okay

Oh yeah also changed 07:29:424 (3) - this circle to two 1/6 circles, while checking the map again I just noticed this was a 1/6 snare roll and not 1/4 xd

Wow, last kiai was really awesome. Thanks!

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I think my main concern is the streams in the middle. I don't really see much justification for them, but maybe you can shed some light. I might have to find some more opinions on them if you really want to keep. Hope I shed enough light on them and why I mapped them as is!

GoldenWolf wrote:

yo it's not even qualified yet calm down you guys xD

GoldenWolf wrote:

yo it's not even qualified yet calm down you guys xD