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Krisom
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 01 de noviembre de 2010 at 10:05:37

Artist: Hirano Aya
Title: Dondake Fanfare
Source: Lucky Star
Tags: Konata Izumi Mafiamaster Rokodo Roko-Don
BPM: 175
Filesize: 8463kb
Play Time: 03:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,47 stars, 194 notes)
  2. Insane (4,9 stars, 473 notes)
  3. Mafiamaster's Hard (4,8 stars, 365 notes)
  4. Normal (3,37 stars, 276 notes)
  5. Roko-Don's Taiko (5 stars, 1222 notes)
Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Because Konata deserves it... <3!

Hard: 100% Mafiamaster lovely goodness~

Enjoy!

If you downloaded before Oct 20, redownload, mp3 change
Mafiamaster
lovhin456
Hola ~
Solo vine a decirte, si es que puedes hacer el color verde y el rojo de los circulos un poco mas suave, tambien ... eh, usa uno de estos BG ??
Star ~ pero igual me gustaria moddearlo cuando tengas todas las diff, y todo este completo :3


Topic Starter
Krisom
Gracias, ok, haré mas suaves esos colores XD! Ah, si, trabajaré en el normal durante esta semana, a mas tardar el viernes. Pero sobre los fondos, la verdad no me gusto mucho ninguno XD! (y adoro el que tengo *-*)
lovhin456

Krisom wrote:

Gracias, ok, haré mas suaves esos colores XD! Ah, si, trabajaré en el normal durante esta semana, a mas tardar el viernes. Pero sobre los fondos, la verdad no me gusto mucho ninguno XD! (y adoro el que tengo *-*)
Ahh okk, solo avisame por PM cuando todo este listo xD
CapnDavid
You should add a normal difficulty, Star :)
lovhin456
Holaa ~ :3

General;
- Todo bien (song folder)

Easy;
- 00:58:222 >> haz el slider asi ??
- 01:41:079 >> haz que el kiai time termine aqui ??
- 03:42:792 >> termina el kiai time aqui ??

Normal;
- 01:41:079 >> haz que el kiai time termine aqui ??
- 03:18:792 >> agrega un whistle ??
- 03:42:792 >> termina el kiai time aqui ??

Mafiamaster's Hard;
- 01:41:079 >> end kiai time here ??
- 03:42:792 >> end kiai time here ??

Insane;
- 02:53:422 >> terminalo el slider en 02:57:536 ??

* Ya te mi estrella xD asi que buena suerte Krisom ~ :3
Topic Starter
Krisom

lovhin456 wrote:

Holaa ~ :3

General;
- Todo bien (song folder)

Easy;
- 00:58:222 >> haz el slider asi ?? No exactamente así, pero lo cambié

Normal;
- 03:18:792 >> agrega un whistle ?? Nope

Insane;
- 02:53:422 >> terminalo el slider en 02:57:536 ?? Nah, termina bien con el fin de las trompetas~

* Ya te mi estrella xD asi que buena suerte Krisom ~ :3
;D Gracias por el mod, si necesitas que te devuelva el favor avísame por PM
I didn't change anything about the kiai times, sorry :v
Garven
<3

[Easy]
01:11:936 (1,2) - Hrm, may be confusing to new players as to when this slider is going to end.
01:16:565 - Unneeded timing section.
02:25:993 (1,2) - Hrm, may be confusing to new players as to when this slider is going to end.
02:30:793 - Unneeded timing section.
Kind of saddening seeing the first two chorus/verses are carbon copies of each other. It's almost a 4 minute map. T_T
02:52:050 (1) - Why silence the end of this slider?
03:11:935 (2) - Raise a couple grids to reduce overlap?
03:20:849 (1,2) - orz, that overlap... would require you moving a lot of notes one grid left and right accordingly. Same with the copy paste later.
03:34:564 (1) - Sticking waay into the HP bar there.
03:37:307 (1) - Maybe try to do a squiggly slider to reduce overlap with 03:35:935 (2) ?

[Normal]
00:52:051 (5,1) - ;_;
00:53:765 (2,3) - Scoot 'em out a grid please~
01:22:050 (3) - Left a grid?
01:27:536 (3) - Right a grid?
01:28:393 (1) - Smooth out this slider's curve. :< :(
01:36:622 (1) - :3
02:53:422 (4) - Why silenced?
03:22:221 (2,3) - Left/right half a grid?
03:27:706 (2,3) - ^
03:29:078 (1,2) - This didn't look so hot. :/

[Mafiamaster's Hard]
There were a lot of sliders grazing the edge of the HP bar... eh.
00:29:765 (5) - Raise the anchor point so the slider tick is right in the center of it~
00:55:136 (1) - Remove new combo
02:31:565 - Re-add kiai please~
03:05:078 (3,4) - The overlap on these two look really bad. :/
You seriously copy/pasted the chorus three times in a row? :( At least have a different pattern set for the last chorus.
03:40:049 (1) - Uh, the note and the spinner are on the same point in time.

[Insane]
Maybe reduce the stack leniency a bit? 00:10:050 (4,5,6) - gets stacked and looks kinda weird.
02:14:679 (7,8,9,10) - Hrm, maybe form this with a slight curve to go with/against the curve at the start of the slider?
02:48:965 (6) - Raise a grid?
02:51:708 (6) - ^
03:10:221 (2,3) - If you could maybe somehow get these two to the opposite side without messing your patterns up too much, it'd be great~ (overlap, blah blah)

Yay
Topic Starter
Krisom

Garven wrote:

<3

[Easy]
01:11:936 (1,2) - Hrm, may be confusing to new players as to when this slider is going to end. Will change upon someone else's suggestion
01:16:565 - Unneeded timing section. Wrong :P, The section before this one has volume 0, and the section after this one has normal hitsounds with volume, and it lands on a note. So I need this one, as if someone hits the next note too early, it wont sound.
02:25:993 (1,2) - Hrm, may be confusing to new players as to when this slider is going to end.Will change upon someone else's suggestion
02:30:793 - Unneeded timing section.Wrong :P, The section before this one has volume 0, and the section after this one has normal hitsounds with volume, and it lands on a note. So I need this one, as if someone hits the next note too early, it wont sound.
Kind of saddening seeing the first two chorus/verses are carbon copies of each other. It's almost a 4 minute map. T_T FFFFFine <___<
02:52:050 (1) - Why silence the end of this slider? Whoops
03:11:935 (2) - Raise a couple grids to reduce overlap? Ok
03:20:849 (1,2) - orz, that overlap... would require you moving a lot of notes one grid left and right accordingly. Same with the copy paste later. Lol nooooooo XD
03:34:564 (1) - Sticking waay into the HP bar there. Ok, fixed
03:37:307 (1) - Maybe try to do a squiggly slider to reduce overlap with 03:35:935 (2) ? Done

[Normal]
00:52:051 (5,1) - ;_;<_<
00:53:765 (2,3) - Scoot 'em out a grid please~Fixed, but not exactly a grid =P
01:22:050 (3) - Left a grid? Done
01:27:536 (3) - Right a grid?^
01:28:393 (1) - Smooth out this slider's curve. :< :( Fine <_<
01:36:622 (1) - :3 YESSS; SOMEONE NOTICED IT!!!!
02:53:422 (4) - Why silenced? Because I'm silly
03:22:221 (2,3) - Left/right half a grid?
03:27:706 (2,3) - ^ I like these ones ~
03:29:078 (1,2) - This didn't look so hot. :/ Better now?

[Insane]
Maybe reduce the stack leniency a bit? 00:10:050 (4,5,6) - gets stacked and looks kinda weird. Fine
02:14:679 (7,8,9,10) - Hrm, maybe form this with a slight curve to go with/against the curve at the start of the slider? Done
02:48:965 (6) - Raise a grid? Fine
02:51:708 (6) - ^ Fine
03:10:221 (2,3) - If you could maybe somehow get these two to the opposite side without messing your patterns up too much, it'd be great~ (overlap, blah blah) Is this ok now?

Yay
Yay
Agnes
Another fellow MAT. Hi Krisom buddy~ <3
~Agnes' PM Modding service

[General]
Nothing to poke at.

[Easy]
02:31:479 (1,2,3) - Bring these closer? D:
02:36:965 (1,2,3) - ^

[Normal]
O.K.!

[Mafiamaster's Hard]
O.K.!

[Insane]
O.K.!

Star'd. x3
Mafiamaster
Yeah Krisom, you can do all the mods for my difficulties. -_-

Fixed necessary stuff except HP bar-touching notes.

Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Krisom) [Mafiamaster's Hard].osu
Beuchi
Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore :P

~All Diffs~
- Add "Mafiamaster" to tags~
- White + Kiai = x_x;

~Easy~
02:53:507 (1) - This note isn't snapped!!
03:37:307 (1) - This slider looks weird D:

~Normal~
01:27:022 (2) - NAZI!! - Align with the previous slider like in the previous pattern~

~Mafiamaster's Hard~
01:16:222 (5) - New Combo here? The spacing is different >:
02:30:279 (5) - ^
02:30:622 (1) - Delete New Combo.
03:40:135 (1) - Finish the spinner 1/4 earlier (white tick)

~Insane~
02:20:508 (1,2) - <3
02:53:422 (1) - T.T The ticks sound horrible here... I'm not totally sure about if silent ticks are rankable, but if they are, it would work well here...

That's all!! Fun map for a fun song~
*star*
Topic Starter
Krisom

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore :P

~All Diffs~
- Add "Mafiamaster" to tags~ Whoops, done
- White + Kiai = x_x; Ugh, I may change it to my color scheme number 1 if someone else complains x_x

~Easy~
02:53:507 (1) - This note isn't snapped!! Whoops, thanks, /me snaps to 1/8
03:37:307 (1) - This slider looks weird D: >_< gomen, I hope it's prettier now.

~Normal~
01:27:022 (2) - NAZI!! - Align with the previous slider like in the previous pattern~ Ok, now it's a copy/paste of the previous one.

~Mafiamaster's Hard~
01:16:222 (5) - New Combo here? The spacing is different >: Ok done
02:30:279 (5) - ^
02:30:622 (1) - Delete New Combo. Both done
03:40:135 (1) - Finish the spinner 1/4 earlier (white tick) Whoops, done

~Insane~
02:20:508 (1,2) - <3 Thanks ^.^
02:53:422 (1) - T.T The ticks sound horrible here... I'm not totally sure about if silent ticks are rankable, but if they are, it would work well here... I'll ask if silent ticks are rankeable and add them if they are

That's all!! Fun map for a fun song~ Thehee, thank Beuchi ^^!
*star*
ilu <3!!
Derekku
[General]
*Such a popular song, but only a 128kbps mp3? Can't you find a better one. =x
*Offset is fine unless you find a new mp3.

[Easy]
*Nice tags :u
*Difficulty settings (Drain/OD) could be upped a notch at least.
00:06:106 (1,1,1,1,1,2) - Less beats doesn't necessarily mean less difficulty. The timing on these notes (especially since the music doesn't start until the first beat) are a bit hard to hit accurately (especially for new players). Some sliders would probably work better here for the intro.
01:19:479 (1,3) - Too confusing for an easy. (nearly unrankable)
01:24:965 (1,3) - ^
01:39:450 (1) - Move to the red tick and shorten (pops up on screen too early for an easy diff)
02:33:536 (1,3) - same as before
02:39:022 (1,3) - ^
02:50:679 (2) - Aww, and I thought you made these just for Triple Baka. ): Top left "bubble" of the slider is noticeably smaller than the others. (nazi)
02:53:593 (1) - Use soft instead of normal to get rid of the little "pop" noise at the end
03:29:764 (3) - (nazi) Horizontally flip (2) and you'll see that (3) is off.
03:40:135 (1) - move to the red tick and shorten
*Overall, the distance spacing was a bit high for my liking. It's a fast paced song, which adds to the difficulty. You don't need to re-distance space this (that would be horrible of me to ask), but next time try to use a lower distance spacing (like I've seen on some of your other maps) <3

[Normal]
*OD could be turned up a notch or two.
01:39:450 (1) - I'd rather that this was on the red tick (and shortened)
02:17:765 (3,4) - Unrankable
02:53:593 (1) - soft instead of normal (like in Easy)
03:40:135 (1) - red tick and shorten please (:
*This Normal is a bit difficult, so I'd be much happier and comfortable with it if it used the largest circle size. (So please give it some thought)

[Mafiamaster's Hard]
00:29:765 (5) - (nazi) Turn grid snap off and move the bottom control point up roughly half a tiny grid so that the head and tail of the slider are lined up symmetrically. :>
00:47:422 (1) - a bit short (even for a Hard)... actually, how about lowering the OD in this diff one tick?
00:56:336 (4) - It's a bit hard to see that this is a slider under all of the hitbursts...
00:57:707 (4) - ^
01:17:079 (4) - How about angling this to the right a little bit so that it's not overlapping the next slider so much?
02:00:965 - expected a note here
02:31:136 (4) - angle to the left? (similar to previous suggestion)
*20 spinners... oh my <3

[Insane]
00:16:222 (3) - expected a slider until 00:16:736.
03:40:049 (1) - Why not add a note here like in the other diffs?

<3~
Topic Starter
Krisom

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*Such a popular song, but only a 128kbps mp3? Can't you find a better one. =x Nope =x
*Offset is fine unless you find a new mp3.

[Easy]
*Nice tags :u :u
*Difficulty settings (Drain/OD) could be upped a notch at least.
00:06:106 (1,1,1,1,1,2) - Less beats doesn't necessarily mean less difficulty. The timing on these notes (especially since the music doesn't start until the first beat) are a bit hard to hit accurately (especially for new players). Some sliders would probably work better here for the intro. Oh c'mon, EBA did this everywhere :v
01:19:479 (1,3) - Too confusing for an easy. (nearly unrankable)
01:24:965 (1,3) - ^ Both fixed
01:39:450 (1) - Move to the red tick and shorten (pops up on screen too early for an easy diff) Done
02:33:536 (1,3) - same as before
02:39:022 (1,3) - ^ Both done
02:50:679 (2) - Aww, and I thought you made these just for Triple Baka. ): Top left "bubble" of the slider is noticeably smaller than the others. (nazi) :U
02:53:593 (1) - Use soft instead of normal to get rid of the little "pop" noise at the end Done
03:29:764 (3) - (nazi) Horizontally flip (2) and you'll see that (3) is off. Whoops
03:40:135 (1) - move to the red tick and shorten
*Overall, the distance spacing was a bit high for my liking. It's a fast paced song, which adds to the difficulty. You don't need to re-distance space this (that would be horrible of me to ask), but next time try to use a lower distance spacing (like I've seen on some of your other maps) <3 blah blah blah :U, ok

[Normal]
*OD could be turned up a notch or two. Just one~
01:39:450 (1) - I'd rather that this was on the red tick (and shortened) Fine done
02:17:765 (3,4) - Unrankable Since when D:!? ok fixed
02:53:593 (1) - soft instead of normal (like in Easy) :U
03:40:135 (1) - red tick and shorten please (: I still don't understand why :/
*This Normal is a bit difficult, so I'd be much happier and comfortable with it if it used the largest circle size. (So please give it some thought) But laytah, you know I hate the biggest circle size, so It's not likely that I'll change it soon

[Mafiamaster's Hard]
00:29:765 (5) - (nazi) Turn grid snap off and move the bottom control point up roughly half a tiny grid so that the head and tail of the slider are lined up symmetrically. :> Done
00:47:422 (1) - a bit short (even for a Hard)... actually, how about lowering the OD in this diff one tick? ok
00:56:336 (4) - It's a bit hard to see that this is a slider under all of the hitbursts... Shinxyn style :v
00:57:707 (4) - ^ ^
01:17:079 (4) - How about angling this to the right a little bit so that it's not overlapping the next slider so much? I like it :<
02:00:965 - expected a note here Won't add unless mafia points it out :<
02:31:136 (4) - angle to the left? (similar to previous suggestion) :v
*20 spinners... oh my <3

[Insane]
00:16:222 (3) - expected a slider until 00:16:736. It's fine :v
03:40:049 (1) - Why not add a note here like in the other diffs? Fine

<3~ Don't "<3~" me, I raged at your modpost :n but I still <3 you~
Verdisphena
Amo la cancion D;<
Jarby
02:53:422 (1) - Please use an inherited section to adjust slider speed.

That is all. Probably.
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay, Teara ;__;

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Ahh nice song. Nice usage of hitsound. You too, Mafia.

[Easy]
-- Please map the rest of the song. They are just some seconds left.

00:16:736 (1) - Dunno why but I prefer clap here lol.
01:53:079 - Ahh why must copy-paste? ;__;
03:34:564 (1) - This one is better replaced with 03:31:821 (1) (flip it of course).

[Normal]
-- Please map the rest of the song. They are just some seconds left.

00:42:279 (4) - It's better end on 00:43:479 but of course it will make the pattern bad.
01:36:622 (1,2,3) - :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 <3 <3 <3 <3
02:18:279 (4) - It's better end on 02:19:479 but of course it will make the pattern bad.

[Mafiamaster's Hard]
-- Please map the rest of the song. They are just some seconds left.
-- So cool :3 :3 :3

[simplistiC's Hard]
-- Please map the rest of the song. They are just some seconds left.
-- Nice insane diff.
Star. Sorry, this doesn't help much ;__;
Topic Starter
Krisom

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay, Teara ;__; <------- WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!?!?!?!?!

[General]
Ahh nice song. Nice usage of hitsound. You too, Mafia.

[Easy]
-- Please map the rest of the song. They are just some seconds left.

00:16:736 (1) - Dunno why but I prefer clap here lol. Kept the whistle X:
01:53:079 - Ahh why must copy-paste? ;__; ;___;
03:34:564 (1) - This one is better replaced with 03:31:821 (1) (flip it of course). It would uberly touch the HP bar x:, that's why I changed it

[Normal]
-- Please map the rest of the song. They are just some seconds left.

00:42:279 (4) - It's better end on 00:43:479 but of course it will make the pattern bad. It follows the vocals right now x:
01:36:622 (1,2,3) - :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3333
02:18:279 (4) - It's better end on 02:19:479 but of course it will make the pattern bad. Same as before

[Mafiamaster's Hard]
-- Please map the rest of the song. They are just some seconds left.
-- So cool :3 :3 :3

[simplistiC's Hard]
-- Please map the rest of the song. They are just some seconds left.
-- Nice insane diff.
Star. Sorry, this doesn't help much ;__;
About mapping the rest of the song, I don't really think the end is musically worth it, though I might do it if someone else demands it.

Jarby wrote:

02:53:422 (1) - Please use an inherited section to adjust slider speed.I... I don't think I can go under x0.5 with custom slider speed x:

Thanks!
Jarby

Krisom wrote:

I... I don't think I can go under x0.5 with custom slider speed x:
If you can't, then don't slow down the slider so much. Inherited timing sections for made for a reason, you can't see slow sliders coming if you change the BPM because the slider ticks are placed differently.
Topic Starter
Krisom
Ok done then :v
Lesjuh
Insane
03:09:534 (8) - Unsnapped

Normal
Alot unsnapped notes!

And that's about it actually <3
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

sorry for the very very late orz....

[Easy]
00:16:736 (1,2) - change to a slider?
00:44:165 (5,1) - emm... don't like to stack this, since the rhythm is "moving", but since the map style is very symmetry... ok i guess...
01:06:108 (5,1) - = = same

[Normal]
00:42:279 (4) - end 1/2 later?
01:04:222 (6) - ^
02:03:708 - add a note?
03:07:136 (1,2,3) - there's a small difference between the spacing of sliders...= =...

[Mafiamaster's Hard]
00:26:850 (4) - emm... why not keep the slider's shape same as others.?
02:00:965 - add a note?
02:41:593 (3) - clap?
03:05:592 (4) - ctrl+r = =... well feel better
always can't get all 300 on those spinners T T

[Insane]
02:01:650 (3) - maybe use more beats here to fit the drums? then the next note will get a better effect i think.
03:28:908 & 03:28:993 - add notes?
Topic Starter
Krisom

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

sorry for the very very late orz....

[Easy]
00:16:736 (1,2) - change to a slider? Ok
00:44:165 (5,1) - emm... don't like to stack this, since the rhythm is "moving", but since the map style is very symmetry... ok i guess... I can always keep the symmetry and modify some stuff, also, I agree, so changed
01:06:108 (5,1) - = = same Same

[Normal]
00:42:279 (4) - end 1/2 later?
01:04:222 (6) - ^ I'm still not wanting to change these ones
02:03:708 - add a note? Nah
03:07:136 (1,2,3) - there's a small difference between the spacing of sliders...= =... Fix'd em all

[Mafiamaster's Hard]
00:26:850 (4) - emm... why not keep the slider's shape same as others.? I think it's a nice breaker of the pattern, so I'm leqaving it as it is x:
02:00:965 - add a note? Not done wihout Mafia's permission
02:41:593 (3) - clap? Ok done
03:05:592 (4) - ctrl+r = =... well feel better Did a ctrl+J instead
always can't get all 300 on those spinners T T

[Insane]
02:01:650 (3) - maybe use more beats here to fit the drums? then the next note will get a better effect i think. I dunno how, and I like this place X:
03:28:908 & 03:28:993 - add notes? Ok, :3
Thanks for the nice mod Rin ^^!
Gonzvlo
Violet kgo ;D ~

General
  1. Clean~
Easy
  1. Ok this is just nazi modding.
  2. 01:20:165 (3,2) - Fix Ovelapping.
  3. 01:25:651 (3,2) - ^
  4. 01:37:993 (1) - Move it 1 little grid down.
  5. 01:11:936 (1,2) - Consider changing that stream for something like this, So you can keep the symmetry of the map.
  6. 02:25:993 (1,2) - ^
  7. 02:33:536 (1) - Move it 1 grid left.
  8. 02:39:022 (1) - Move it 1 grid right.
  9. 02:50:679 (2) - Lol <3
  10. 03:11:935 (2) - Break Spacing and move it 1 grid up? :3
  11. 03:20:849 (1) - Move it 1 grid right & 1 grip up. (It's ovelapping with 2)
  12. 03:26:335 (1) - Move it 1 grid left & 1 grid up.
Normal
  1. 02:15:022 (1,4) - I don't like these sliders ._. They look weird due to the red points.
  2. 02:50:679 (1) - Lol <3 again :3
  3. 03:40:222 (1) - This spinner ends here: 03:42:793 but The same spinner ends here: 03:42:792 on the other difficulties, weird.
Mafiamaster's Hard
  1. 01:11:936 (1,2,3,4) - Some jumps might look cool here~
  2. 02:25:993 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  3. <3333
Insane
  1. 00:51:193 (9,1) - I don't like this stack, You should unstack this imo.
  2. 00:56:679 (9,1) - ^
  3. 02:01:222 (10,1) - Same thoughts for this one.
<3 , Star~
Oh wait Star~ too.

Topic Starter
Krisom

Gonzvlo wrote:

Violet kgo ;D ~

General
  1. Clean~
Easy
  1. Ok this is just nazi modding.
  2. 01:20:165 (3,2) - Fix Ovelapping. Fine
  3. 01:25:651 (3,2) - ^ Fine
  4. 01:37:993 (1) - Move it 1 little grid down. Fine
  5. 01:11:936 (1,2) - Consider changing that stream for something like this, So you can keep the symmetry of the map.That patterns is too hard for an easy, so no
  6. 02:25:993 (1,2) - ^ Besides, these ones are horizontal flips, so it keeps the symmetry, just not an inmeadiate symmetry
  7. 02:33:536 (1) - Move it 1 grid left.Nah
  8. 02:39:022 (1) - Move it 1 grid right.^
  9. 02:50:679 (2) - Lol <3 <3
  10. 03:11:935 (2) - Break Spacing and move it 1 grid up? :3 Fine
  11. 03:20:849 (1) - Move it 1 grid right & 1 grip up. (It's ovelapping with 2)
    Trust me, I really never cared much about overlaps :x
  12. 03:26:335 (1) - Move it 1 grid left & 1 grid up.
Normal
  1. 02:15:022 (1,4) - I don't like these sliders ._. They look weird due to the red points. Awww they are nice D:
  2. 02:50:679 (1) - Lol <3 again :3 <3
  3. 03:40:222 (1) - This spinner ends here: 03:42:793 but The same spinner ends here: 03:42:792 on the other difficulties, weird.
    Huh? They all end on 793 for me
Mafiamaster's Hard
  1. 01:11:936 (1,2,3,4) - Some jumps might look cool here~
  2. 02:25:993 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  3. <3333
Uhh, I realli like those patterns, so I'll leave this up to mafia

Insane
  1. 00:51:193 (9,1) - I don't like this stack, You should unstack this imo.
  2. 00:56:679 (9,1) - ^
  3. 02:01:222 (10,1) - Same thoughts for this one.
    Awww c'mon :/
<3 , Star~
Oh wait Star~ too.
Thanks for the look gonz!

EDIT: Changed the white combocolor to purple
Mint Bunny
insane:
03:38:679(1,2,3) jump? :D

good job! :)
star~
Mafiamaster
Hello! I've fixed my difficulty a little bit. |・ω・`)
Added a note at 00:13:308.
Added a few missing hitsounds.
00:42:450 (2,3) - Made these kinds of sliders more symmetrical.
Bye now! ミ(o*・ω・)ノ

Download: Hirano Aya - Dondake Fanfare (Krisom) [Mafiamaster's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Krisom
Ok updated. Also, sorry animelover but I wan't to keep that as an stack :x
Rokodo
Taikorz + custom bg. http://puu.sh/imD

Don't forget to Full Submit.
braian5234
STAR! 8-)
Dusty
I don't really know/can't tell if this mp3 is better but try it out: http://puu.sh/jop

(no kds please if you use it, maybe I'll mod this later...)
Verdisphena
Orz

You need a bbl
Topic Starter
Krisom
Finally added the mp3 and (manually, orz) fixed the timing sections.
Uhh, the offset should be pretty much fine (inb4 derek comes and says +/- 5 ms ;_;)
And dusty, you don't need to mod this if you don't like the song ;x;

New mp3, redownload
Derekku
+/- 5ms, your choice! :D

(jk I'll double check the offset for you once I'm done with piles of homework aka tomorrow)
Lalarun
:oops:
Derekku
I felt like I was hitting late, but it seems that I was actually early. A -5 should feel much more comfortable.

Also, those silenced spinners sound weird D:

(also why doesn't this have a star yet)

EDIT: Also the silence before 02:58:885 in each difficulty plays weird. It's just random silence and made me wonder what's going on. <.> Maybe add a silder or some notes or SOMETHING? D:!
Topic Starter
Krisom

Derekku wrote:

I felt like I was hitting late, but it seems that I was actually early. A -5 should feel much more comfortable.
FFFFFFFFFFFFF I knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Also, those silenced spinners sound weird D: Nope they don't~

(also why doesn't this have a star yet)
I dunno *3*

EDIT: Also the silence before 02:58:885 in each difficulty plays weird. Nope it doesn't~ It's just random silence and made me wonder what's going on. <.> Maybe add a silder or some notes or SOMETHING? D:! Nope I won't~
Derek stop being in drugs~
They're bad for ya! Besides, Chocolate milk > Drugs~
Derekku

Krisom wrote:

Besides, Chocolate milk > Drugs~
B-But! I'm allergic to milk! D: (no really I am)
Dusty
[Easy]
00:16:713 (1) - would this be better vertical?

[Normal]
00:49:970 (1,2) - maybe move it right?
00:51:170 (3,4,5) - maybe move it left? this pattern tripped me up a bit, also it overlaps 00:52:713 (1) a little :(
01:53:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - maybe move this bunch of stuff down more? IMO it looks better that way
02:50:656 (1,2,3,4) - super picky, but these stack weirdly

[Insane]
00:32:485 (6) - down a pixel (lol)
02:53:399 - ff 0.5x slider D:
Topic Starter
Krisom

Dusty wrote:

[Easy]
00:16:713 (1) - would this be better vertical? Ok, it's pretty much the same anyway...

[Normal]
00:49:970 (1,2) - maybe move it right?
00:51:170 (3,4,5) - maybe move it left? this pattern tripped me up a bit, also it overlaps 00:52:713 (1) a little :( Ugh, i dont think I'll fix the overlap, but both done.
01:53:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - maybe move this bunch of stuff down more? IMO it looks better that way Ok...
02:50:656 (1,2,3,4) - super picky, but these stack weirdly Hm? How s-oh, you mean that 2 stacks under 1's end, but 3 and 4 are unsacked? Uhhh, imo is really un-noticeable buried by (2)'s hitsplash, and I like the current placement.

[Insane]
00:32:485 (6) - down a pixel (lol) huh? Oh well...
02:53:399 - ff 0.5x slider D: <3
<3
James2250
Ok I PM'ed you about timing section fix (make sure they are all snapped to ticks)
Only reason I noticed was because of 02:25:113 on mafia's, but check them all

I wouldn't post but 01:48:942 (557,558,559,560) on taiko sounds odd to me, double check it?

Will be happy to bubble after fixes
Topic Starter
Krisom
Ok, all the timing sections should be snapped now.
James2250
(Stupid internet is stupid) But ok I am back now

Deserves a bubble~
Shinxyn
wheeeeee
Ranked~
Galkan
Congratz!
Verdisphena
Congratz Krisom :D
lovhin456
Congrats :3
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