plz change the bpm and offset as kiou2 said
the last diff is scary

dsdadsa, fixed timing in my diff

Alace wrote:

the last diff is scary

what do you exactly mean?

Download: eufonius - Phosphorus (TV Size) (Slanox) [fartownik].osu

kioukiou wrote:

BPM : 160.00 / Offset : 1200

star.

Okay, thanks.

Timing fixed.

fartownik wrote:

dsdadsa, fixed timing in my diff

Alace wrote:

the last diff is scary

what do you exactly mean?

Thanks.

Uploaded.

Download: AngelHoney.rar

Thanks.

Uploaded.

[Fartownik]

1. I don't like the anti jumps to be quite honest, and the beginning is full with anti jumps ):

00:13:200 (5) - Make this note soft please~
00:14:700 (timing section) - Please increase volume, this plays horrible with such soft hitvolume now.
00:25:575 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:45:262 (4,5) - Stack (5) under slider end (4) please.
01:21:262 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:21:825 (1) - ^
01:28:293 (1) - Make this spinner end on 01:29:700.


[Hard]

1. Increase Overall Difficulty by one.

00:12:450 (break) - Remove it please~
00:37:575 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:52:762 (1) - ^


[AngelHoney]

1. Slider Tick Rate 1 please~

[Easy]

00:02:137 (2) - End slider 1/1 earlier.
00:12:450 (break) - Remove it~
00:55:575 (1) - Delete this note.
01:27:637 (1) - Make this spinner end on 01:29:700.


Starred~

some changes, will remap this diff though later

Download: eufonius - Phosphorus (TV Size) (Slanox) [fartownik].osu

Okay.

Uploaded.

Just suggestion Slanox~ ignore it if you don't like or feel weird

Easy

00:58:200 (4) - I think stop slider at 00:58:575 and 1 return is better ~


HOney

fine for me ~


Hard

00:31:012 (3) - stop silder at 00:31:200 and move 00:31:575 (4) to 00:31:387 ?
00:38:512 (1) - use simple note ? note slider
00:39:262 (3) - add note ?

if you change plz change spacing too XD

00:47:700 (5) - add new combo?
00:48:262 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:137 (1) - ^
00:56:700 (2) - new combo ?
01:27:637 (6) - delete slider ?
01:27:825 - 01:28:012 - 01:28:200 - add note ?
01:28:387 (1) - start spiner and stop at 01:29:700


fartownik

00:31:012 - add note ?
00:31:575 (3) - delete note ?
00:34:950 (9) - new combo
00:45:637 (5) - I think move it for stack is look good ~
01:25:762 (2) - move to 01:25:950

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Download: eufonius - Phosphorus (TV Size) (Slanox) [fartownik].osu

S i R i R u wrote:

Just suggestion Slanox~ ignore it if you don't like or feel weird

Easy

00:58:200 (4) - I think stop slider at 00:58:575 and 1 return is better ~


HOney

fine for me ~


Hard

00:31:012 (3) - stop silder at 00:31:200 and move 00:31:575 (4) to 00:31:387 ?
00:38:512 (1) - use simple note ? note slider
00:39:262 (3) - add note ?

if you change plz change spacing too XD

00:47:700 (5) - add new combo?
00:48:262 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:137 (1) - ^
00:56:700 (2) - new combo ?
01:27:637 (6) - delete slider ?
01:27:825 - 01:28:012 - 01:28:200 - add note ?
01:28:387 (1) - start spiner and stop at 01:29:700


fartownik

00:31:012 - add note ?
00:31:575 (3) - delete note ?
00:34:950 (9) - new combo
00:45:637 (5) - I think move it for stack is look good ~
01:25:762 (2) - move to 01:25:950

Thanks.

Fixed.

fartownik wrote:

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Uploaded.

[Easy]
00:09:075 (1) - Mets des notes à la place du spinner (Conseille)
00:12:262 (T) - Ajoute un spinner d'ici jusqu'à 00:13:762 (Conseille)

[AngelHoney]
00:55:200 (T) - This part feels empty :/ put some beats?

[Hard]
Les notes sont un peu trop proche entre eux D:
00:10:387 (1) - Mets des notes à la place du spinner (Conseille)
00:12:262 (T) - Ajoute un spinner d'ici jusqu'à 00:13:762 (Conseille)

[fartownik]
Fine to me

Starred~

Easy:
01:17:137 (1,2,3) - one grid right? so it's symmetrised with the one before.

AngelHoney:
I am guessing this is a normal difficulty?
you used grid level 3 for the easy? but level 2 for the normal. oh man the logic
01:00:825 (3) - one grid level 2 left
I am a bit surprised that you used 1/2 notes in the easy but in normal for every 1/2 combo you used sliders.
Just saying.

Hard:
00:12:356 (x) - insert break time?


fartownick:
00:36:825 (13) - one grid up?

All of these are suggestions
Nice map, Star~

EDIT : All fixed.

[General]:

1. disable countdown

[Easy]:

1. 00:04:200 (1) - decrease 1 repeat, and add a slider start at 00:04:762 and end at 00:05:137.
2. 00:23:137 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't fit this part orz
3. 01:08:512 (1) - move this to 01:08:700, remember to change the following spacing
4. 01:17:512 (3) - add 1 repeat

[AngelHoney]:

1. 01:07:200 (4) - 第二次和第三次折返中间的敲水桶声被忽略了啊...

[Hard]:

1. 00:12:450 (T) - set this section at 00:12:356.
2. 00:37:575 (T) - set this section at 00:37:481.
3. 00:56:606 (T) - set a section here with same volume of 00:56:700 but with out KIAI.

[fartownik]:

1. very cool, and the default normal-hitwhistle is a bit noisy though.

hitsounding in Easy is quite poor now. Easy diff is the most difficult diff to map X3.

star~

Remapped~

Download: eufonius - Phosphorus (TV Size) (Slanox) [fartownik].osu

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. disable countdown

[Easy]:

1. 00:04:200 (1) - decrease 1 repeat, and add a slider start at 00:04:762 and end at 00:05:137.
2. 00:23:137 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't fit this part orz
3. 01:08:512 (1) - move this to 01:08:700, remember to change the following spacing
4. 01:17:512 (3) - add 1 repeat

[AngelHoney]:

1. 01:07:200 (4) - 第二次和第三次折返中间的敲水桶声被忽略了啊...

[Hard]:

1. 00:12:450 (T) - set this section at 00:12:356.
2. 00:37:575 (T) - set this section at 00:37:481.
3. 00:56:606 (T) - set a section here with same volume of 00:56:700 but with out KIAI.

[fartownik]:

1. very cool, and the default normal-hitwhistle is a bit noisy though.

hitsounding in Easy is quite poor now. Easy diff is the most difficult diff to map X3.

star~

Thanks.

Fixed.

fartownik wrote:

Remapped~

Thanks.

Uploaded.

Change the title of the song to "phosphorus" instead of "Phosphorus" (Source: http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/encyclo ... p?id=10415) (Also, looking at the video, the title is lowercase)

Not really sure if the C in "Crimson" should be lowercase. ANN and MAL differ on this, but the logo does suggest that the C is lowercase. Still, the lowercase C looks unappealing to me, so I'll let you decide if you want to change it.

Easy:
Timing section mod: (If you are wondering why I want you to do these things, please read the link in my signature)
00:37:575 - move back a quarter note
00:56:700 - a quarter note before this timing section, add another timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai

AngelHoney:
Normal mod:
00:37:575 (4,2) - some of these partial overlaps in your diff are visually unappealing, so I advise changing the formation if you can (other examples include 01:00:825 (3,5) and 01:19:200 (1,3))

Timing section mod:
00:56:700 - a quarter note before this timing section, add another timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai

Hard:
Normal mod:
This diff was a little boring with almost every circle/slider a half note apart with the same spacing. It felt like a long slow stream at times.
It doesn't really help that arrangement of some of the notes are visually unappealing at times. For example look at 01:04:575 (1,2,3,4,5) . Now look at it here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22696. I slightly rearranged the notes, but it flows quite a bit better imo. I advise you try doing stuff like this the rest of your map
00:59:700 (1) - this jump felt a little random to me (especially since these jumps only occur after the first line of each verse of the chorus. Not after every line. If you want to keep them, add jumps throughout the rest of the chorus (not advised but it would work)
01:11:700 (1) - ^

Combo mod: (I didn't really understand how you added combos to this diff, so I made a lot of guesses)
00:09:075 (5) - new combo for lyrics?
00:30:637 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:24:637 (4)
00:58:762 (1) - having a separate combo for lyrics when you did not do it for any previous part of the song was quite weird, so I suggest removing it

fartownik: (I really liked the use of 2x sliders in this diff)
Normal mod:
01:14:887 (1,2,3,4) - it would be nice if you rearranges these notes so the previous purple slider 4 does not touch 2 and 4 (currently it looks a little messy)
01:16:388 (2,4) - swap 2 and 4 to prevent the partial overlap between 2 and the blue 5?

Combo mod:
00:19:575 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 00:31:200 (1)?

Timing section mod:
00:26:687 - move back a quarter note
00:41:687 - unneeded timing section, please remove
00:56:687 - a quarter note before this timing section, add another timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai

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Nice map overall. Hard needs to be cleaned up a bit, but that is the only large complaint I have. Star.

Hi Slanox, just a few suggestions

[hard]
00:02:700 (6) - make this more symmetrical? (6) looks slightly different than (5)
00:42:825 (8,9) - move one grid up?
00:58:762 - just me, but I dont reallt like all the claps here

awsome map

Fix the title as blissfulyoshi said.

[Hard]

01:21:825 (7) - Inconsistent.

[fartownik]

00:47:325 (4) - No.

Not sure of the timing so I got Lybydose to check it.

Timing seems good to me.

One thing I noticed while testing on the fartownik difficulty:

01:15:731 (5) - this is awkward as hell. it plays much better if you add a note at 01:15:637 on the red tick. if you do that I would suggest making the slider just be two notes instead.

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

love this song. since there's already BAT's post i won't mod much.

[Easy]
00:22:387 (4) - this slider's beat is a little strange to me.
why not use custom hitsounds for the normal hitsound part... much better than default one.

[AngelHoney]
can't find sth wrong. fell a little bored to the front part so here's some hitsounds. your choice.

[Hard]
00:12:450 (1,2) - if you have to silence them why you need them...
00:32:700 (1) - change the slider's shape a little to get the end align with 234.
still the hitsounds thing. default clap sucks.
hitsounds could be improved but we already have BATs so be a little lazy...k...

[fartownik]
00:05:325 (3) - remove whistle at the reverse.
00:06:450 (4,6) - remove whistle at 4 and add at 6.
00:23:512 (3) - remove sliderwhislte.
00:39:262 (3,4) - can't say it's good...
00:49:200 (1) - should have a volume increase start from here, increase again at 3
hating default normal-hitwhistle.
also. it's better to use AngelHoney's custom hitsounds for this part imo.

Download: eufonius - Phosphorus (TV Size) (Slanox) [AngelHoney hitsounds].osu

EDIT : All fixed.

I was late to your last mod request, so I grabbed some of your pending n.nU

AngelHoney
00:55:200 - how about filling this lil space? maybe with a 1 beat slider with a repeat starting at 00:55:575
but is just a suggestion, map is fine

Easy
A bit hard to follow in my opinion.. You follow the vocals in some parts and the music in others, so is kinda confuse me a bit.
Map is technically good though.

Others diff are lovely <3
star!

I do not want to change my diff.
And AngelHoney do not want too.

Sorry.

c

Download: eufonius - phosphorus (TV Size) (Slanox) [fartownik].osu

Thanks.

Uploaded.

Hi : )
May I make Taiko diff?

No.

Sorry.

One thing I noticed. Perhaps you can use the silent sliderslide on all difficulties? It's pretty noisy.

star

Thanks for your star :3

I want to do a Guest Diff.

Download: eufonius - phosphorus (TV Size) (Slanox) [spirit's Insane].osu

I don't add it.

Sorry.

Alright, you wanna leave OD8 and HP Drain 8 on fartownik, but I still think it doesn't follow much with the song, meh.

Bubbled~

Bon boulot

~Star

Et GG pour la bubble

Thanks.

The song audio file should also be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself - ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file should be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 256kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BAT - they will be more than happy to find one for you.

Sadly, the 320 kbps bit rate mp3 you used for this map is not rankable under the new ranking standards.

If you want to re-encode the mp3 yourself, here is a nice guide to help you.
Otherwise, you can post on this thread to ask for help.

Also, I forgot to say to remove the audio from from your video.

thanks yet again blissfulyoshi :p

EDIT: Mp3 Changed.

poof

I hate to do this but I've got to pop this bubble for now.

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fartownik

00:15:075 - (2) - This slider is covered up by the splash from the spinner when being played. Move it away from the center to prevent this.

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Everything else checks out just fine at this point, but that kind of overlap I feel needs to be addressed before it can be ranked.

s

Download: eufonius - phosphorus (TV Size) (Slanox) [fartownik].osu

Thanks.

EDIT : Uploaded.

Everything looks ok now, rebubbled.

Ready to go.

Ranked~

GG >w<

Thanks guys ~

Nice job Slanox ^^

Thank you :3