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DystopiaGround - AugoEidEs

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Topic Starter
nhlx
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 lutego 2016 at 02:01:01

Artist: DystopiaGround
Title: AugoEidEs
Tags: Demetori nao
BPM: 207
Filesize: 26016kb
Play Time: 06:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. oyasumi (7,22 stars, 1675 notes)
Download: DystopiaGround - AugoEidEs
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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if you read this for some reason please play skystar's version:

beatmapsets/95701#osu/300689

it's so much better than this and it was used as an inspiration for this map. thanks
Kawatta
The timing feels all good, and i really like how you have a lot of variety where the cursor needs to go.
The only tip i have is that when all the short sliders come after one another, where they finish felt a little odd, so maybe make them compliment each other a bit more.

The slider at 01:44:755 felt really odd to play, i tried to reverse the slider and it complimented the flow of all the other sliders better.

The slider at 02:22:291 feels a little odd too, i think that re-derecting the finish point of the slider could make it way better.
Startrick
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Buttercup
this is awesome
Topic Starter
nhlx

Nhawak wrote:

this is awesome
omg!!! thx

i love your maps nhawak
qwr
Suggestions
Combo colors. Maybe some gray and color to emphasize stronger parts?
01:16:349 (1,2,3,4,5) - abrupt movement after slow slider. Could move 01:17:509 (1) - up
01:45:190 (3,4) - move closer
02:27:219 (1) - jumpy parts get pretty extreme, change if want. 03:52:581 (2) - move down to fit with pattern
03:58:088 (1,2) - greater angle
04:10:262 (1) - Nicer looking slider here (does not fit in with rest of map) A zigzag or a smooth curve could work
04:26:059 (1) - move right
04:30:987 (3) - move up a bit. It is a tad confusing
05:56:349 (4) - move so no overlap
05:56:494 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about others but this square is harder than the rest of the jumps
06:27:798 (2) - Very large diff spike from here. Are full screen jumps necessary
06:33:740 (7,8,1) - very abrupt direction change
06:35:190 (1,2,3,4) - instead of stack, make a condensed stream like other patterns
06:50:117 (1) - random shape? lol


Very nice map. Personally I think overlap notes make a map harder to read but that is your decision.
Topic Starter
nhlx

qwr wrote:

Suggestions
Combo colors. Maybe some gray and color to emphasize stronger parts? will do later
01:16:349 (1,2,3,4,5) - abrupt movement after slow slider. Could move 01:17:509 (1) - up done
01:45:190 (3,4) - move closer done
02:27:219 (1) - jumpy parts get pretty extreme, change if want. 03:52:581 (2) - move down to fit with pattern no need
03:58:088 (1,2) - greater angle done
04:10:262 (1) - Nicer looking slider here (does not fit in with rest of map) A zigzag or a smooth curve could work this slider is my very own child :(
04:26:059 (1) - move right ait
04:30:987 (3) - move up a bit. It is a tad confusing dun
05:56:349 (4) - move so no overlap no need
05:56:494 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about others but this square is harder than the rest of the jumpsit's due to the buildup
06:27:798 (2) - Very large diff spike from here. Are full screen jumps necessary i will nerf it soon due to lots of controversy about this whole pattern
06:33:740 (7,8,1) - very abrupt direction change ^
06:35:190 (1,2,3,4) - instead of stack, make a condensed stream like other patterns ^
06:50:117 (1) - random shape? lol it's a heart...


Very nice map. Personally I think overlap notes make a map harder to read but that is your decision.
thx for mod!
Skubi
Hello! ^^

[Oyasumi]
[General]

05:12:436 - Feels better for a preview point ;)
Combo colours a little brighter please :)
Uhh, this girl screaming in the background... ohhhhhhh

[Mapping]

Beginning is very properly mapped for me, congratulations for that ^^

00:43:740 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1) - <3 <3 <3

00:52:001 (1,3) - weird touch, ugh... ugly... i would move it to have no touch
00:54:320 (4,1) - ^
01:13:306 (2,1) - not stacked properly?
01:15:045 (4,1) - touches.. ugh..
01:16:929 (2) - move it to the left, feels more blanketed
01:17:509 (1) - like with the girl, spread her legs a little bit ( ͡͡ ° ͜ ʖ ͡ °)
01:31:711 (4,1) - it's hard to read because of the combo colours, lighten them or move the 1,2,3 somewhere else
01:39:972 (1,2,3,4) - (2,3,4) higher... the touch at (1,4) feels weird.
01:54:175 (1,2,3,4) - You can blanket them nicely :) like that :)
01:56:494 (2,1) - weird touch &
01:56:784 (3,1) - move (1) Liiiiiiitttle bit lower for blanket
01:57:943 (3,1) - rotate (3) to the right like 15 degrees
02:02:146 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - <3
02:08:668 (1) - rotate the ending like 1 grid square to the right for blanket
02:14:320 (1) - rotate the ending like 3 grid square to the left for blanket
02:23:595 (1) - rotate the ending like 1 grid square to the right for blanket
02:25:914 (1) - rotate the ending like 1 grid square to the left for blanket
02:33:233 (2,3,4,5,6) - move everything to blanket the (1) slider: http://puu.sh/jIaRi/a9fec7a53a.jpg
03:16:349 (2,3) - make (3) parallel to (2)
03:23:306 (1.2) - make (1) parallel to (2)
03:49:827 (1,2) - make (1) parallel to (2)
04:10:262 (1) - waste of notes, delete that and make something here, be more creative ;)
04:19:900 (4,1) - make (4) parallel to (1)
04:26:494 - 04:31:784 - <3 <3
04:32:291 (4) - weird touch at the beggining at ending of slider
04:54:320 (1,2) - make (2) parallel to (1)
05:00:987 (4,1) - repair the blanket
05:06:784 (3) - move that like that: http://puu.sh/jIbwS/8ba25d89a4.jpg
05:52:436 (1,2) - spread their legs ( ͡͡ ° ͜ ʖ ͡ °)
06:13:451 (2,3,4) - it's hard to read because of the combo colours, lighten them or move the 1,2,3 somewhere else
06:16:639 (4) - omg this hitsound <3
06:27:436 - Halozy - Sentimental Skyscraper by Hollow Wings

[NC Section]

01:48:523 (1) - Delete NC
02:40:552 (4) - NC
02:40:987 (6) - NC
06:33:595 (6) - NC

[Overall]

Map is REAAALLY fun to play! Hope it will get Approved soon! Good Luck! :3
Topic Starter
nhlx

CptSqBany wrote:

Hello! ^^

[Oyasumi]
[General]

05:12:436 - Feels better for a preview point ;)
Combo colours a little brighter please :)
Uhh, this girl screaming in the background... ohhhhhhh

[Mapping]

Beginning is very properly mapped for me, congratulations for that ^^

00:43:740 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1) - <3 <3 <3

00:52:001 (1,3) - weird touch, ugh... ugly... i would move it to have no touch
00:54:320 (4,1) - ^
01:13:306 (2,1) - not stacked properly?
01:15:045 (4,1) - touches.. ugh..
01:16:929 (2) - move it to the left, feels more blanketed would be kinda hard to play that way, because it would be too close to the ending of the slider, thus reducing the flow
01:17:509 (1) - like with the girl, spread her legs a little bit ( ͡͡ ° ͜ ʖ ͡ °) like your moms last night?

01:31:711 (4,1) - it's hard to read because of the combo colours, lighten them or move the 1,2,3 somewhere else will be done after map is finished
01:39:972 (1,2,3,4) - (2,3,4) higher... the touch at (1,4) feels weird. doesnt really imo
01:54:175 (1,2,3,4) - You can blanket them nicely :) like that :)
01:56:494 (2,1) - weird touch &
01:56:784 (3,1) - move (1) Liiiiiiitttle bit lower for blanket no need
01:57:943 (3,1) - rotate (3) to the right like 15 degrees
02:02:146 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - <3
02:08:668 (1) - rotate the ending like 1 grid square to the right for blanket
02:14:320 (1) - rotate the ending like 3 grid square to the left for blanket
02:23:595 (1) - rotate the ending like 1 grid square to the right for blanket
02:25:914 (1) - rotate the ending like 1 grid square to the left for blanket
02:33:233 (2,3,4,5,6) - move everything to blanket the (1) slider: http://puu.sh/jIaRi/a9fec7a53a.jpg maybe i'm some sort of purist that wants to make maps look like they're some fucking baroque era church, but this would sorta look weird
03:16:349 (2,3) - make (3) parallel to (2) aren't
03:23:306 (1.2) - make (1) parallel to (2) they
03:49:827 (1,2) - make (1) parallel to (2) all already?
04:10:262 (1) - waste of notes, delete that and make something here, be more creative ;) no place for anything creative tho
04:19:900 (4,1) - make (4) parallel to (1)
04:26:494 - 04:31:784 - <3 <3
04:32:291 (4) - weird touch at the beggining at ending of slider
04:54:320 (1,2) - make (2) parallel to (1) looks better w/o it
05:00:987 (4,1) - repair the blanket
05:06:784 (3) - move that like that: http://puu.sh/jIbwS/8ba25d89a4.jpg
05:52:436 (1,2) - spread their legs ( ͡͡ ° ͜ ʖ ͡ °)
06:13:451 (2,3,4) - it's hard to read because of the combo colours, lighten them or move the 1,2,3 somewhere else
06:16:639 (4) - omg this hitsound <3
06:27:436 - Halozy - Sentimental Skyscraper by Hollow Wings

[NC Section]

01:48:523 (1) - Delete NC
02:40:552 (4) - NC
02:40:987 (6) - NC
06:33:595 (6) - NC

[Overall]

Map is REAAALLY fun to play! Hope it will get Approved soon! Good Luck! :3
thx so much!
cyprianz5
kykh
Skubi

CypCypCyprian wrote:

ja tu tylko po to żeby powiedzieć że fajne i ogulnie no moja ocena subiektywna (nwm czy wiesz co to znaczy jbc to se wygugluj) to 5/5, ale teraz czekaj bo to zalezy tez od ruznych kategori!
w skali od 1 do 5 oceniam
ładność mapki na 5
trudnosc mapki na 5
łatwość mapki na 1
fajna nutka na 5
hinska nutka na 1
no i to by bylo na tyle tylko powiedz adminowi co daje mapki czyli pepy, to powiedz mu zeby dal mniej gwaizdek bo ja tez chce przejsc -.- a nie ze tylko np. rafis
żal troche ale mam nadzieje ze to zalatawisz to elo fajne
Gud polisz maj friend. Ja to prawie passam (ostatnie pare jumpow) a mam 5k ranku wiec troche nie tylko dla Rafisa :)
cyprianz5
co ja tu odpierdalalem
Skubi
.____.
Linada
THIS BEATMAP IS AMAZING !!!!! I love it !

Osu! needs more AugoEidEs ! :D

Ahem, i'm bad at modding so i can't really help on a such difficult map, so i'll just give my opinion
i've heard that reducing BPM to manipulate slider is not allowed anymore (ask QAT ?)
EDIT:NO it isn't

[oyasumi]
00:59:972 (4,1) - is stacking leniency 0 allowed ? (even if i had no problem reading) EDIT 2: Stack leniency under 2 isn't rankable
01:01:132 (4,1) - ^
(i'll pass the stacking problem because the list may be too long lol too lazy to tell them all)
02:04:030 (1) - i think the SV change is too high, reduce it to 1 ?(and let 1.25 after ?)
04:09:248 (3) - to 04:14:393 (4) - you change instrument here, i really had troubles (since i know the song) when i testplayed it, keep the same instrument ?
04:18:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^
04:21:856 (4) - ^
04:40:407 (1) - ^
04:41:567 (1) - ^
04:43:885 (3) - ^
06:27:509 (1) - HW !!! hmm, last kiai is really brutal, i think you will make all player die (since i can't play it without NF i can't tell lol) make sure you'll don't kill all players
06:36:494 (1,1) - is it passable with HR ? since i was still losing hp without HR i wonder

Even if i'ts 7.24 stars and i'm struggling to clear 6 stars, i really enjoyed playing this map ! will shoot some star when i'll have some kudos :3
GL on ranking this ! i'm waiting for it
Topic Starter
nhlx

Linada wrote:

THIS BEATMAP IS AMAZING !!!!! I love it !

Osu! needs more AugoEidEs ! :D

Ahem, i'm bad at modding so i can't really help on a such difficult map, so i'll just give my opinion
i've heard that reducing BPM to manipulate slider is not allowed anymore (ask QAT ?)
EDIT:NO it isn't

[oyasumi]
00:59:972 (4,1) - is stacking leniency 0 allowed ? (even if i had no problem reading) EDIT 2: Stack leniency under 2 isn't rankable stack leniency is 2 tho...
01:01:132 (4,1) - ^
(i'll pass the stacking problem because the list may be too long lol too lazy to tell them all)
02:04:030 (1) - i think the SV change is too high, reduce it to 1 ?(and let 1.25 after ?) doesn't really fit imo
04:09:248 (3) - to 04:14:393 (4) - you change instrument here, i really had troubles (since i know the song) when i testplayed it, keep the same instrument ? i don't really know what you mean by this, care to explain?
04:18:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^
04:21:856 (4) - ^
04:40:407 (1) - ^
04:41:567 (1) - ^
04:43:885 (3) - ^
06:27:509 (1) - HW !!! hmm, last kiai is really brutal, i think you will make all player die (since i can't play it without NF i can't tell lol) make sure you'll don't kill all players it's passable, although near impossible to FC, so this part will be reworked
06:36:494 (1,1) - is it passable with HR ? since i was still losing hp without HR i wonder got rid of BPM change, now it should be passable with slider rework EDIT: FUCK IT ISNT

Even if i'ts 7.24 stars and i'm struggling to clear 6 stars, i really enjoyed playing this map ! will shoot some star when i'll have some kudos :3
GL on ranking this ! i'm waiting for it
thx for mod!
Myko
it's modding time! (though this mod is probably gonna be shit)

HP6 maybe? I see why you HP5 but eh, your choice on that

the "why QQ" slider collection (basically sliders I don't understand at all why they even exist) THEY ARE NOT PART OF THE MOD and warning, VERY long
SPOILER
00:38:088 (1)
00:39:248 (1)
00:41:567 (1)
00:45:045 (1)
00:49:682 (1)
00:50:842 (1)
00:51:277 (2)
00:51:711 (5)
00:52:001 (1)
01:16:349 (1)
01:17:509 (1)
01:19:827 (1)
01:26:784 (1)
01:52:291 (1)
01:57:509 (2)
01:59:248 (1)
02:01:567 (1)
02:09:827 (3)
02:10:987 (1)
02:24:900 (1)
02:35:190 (1)
02:54:900 (1)
03:04:175 (1)
03:07:653 (1)
03:13:161 (2)
03:30:842 (1)
03:46:059 (1)
03:48:378 (1)
03:58:088 (1)
03:58:378 (2)
03:59:972 (1)
04:06:784 (1)
04:07:364 (4)
04:21:856 (4)
04:32:291 (4)
04:35:045 (2)
04:35:769 (1)
04:38:088 (1)
04:40:407 (1)
04:41:567 (1)
04:43:885 (3)
04:58:958 (1)
05:01:277 (1)
05:01:711 (2)
05:02:436 (1)
05:03:595 (1)
05:04:755 (1)
05:07:219 (1)
05:34:900 (4)
05:36:204 (1)
05:38:523 (1)
05:38:958 (2)
05:39:538 (1)
05:44:175 (1)
05:52:436 (1)
05:52:871 (2)
05:53:451 (5)
05:57:074 (1)
06:05:190 (1)
06:06:349 (1)
06:18:958 (1)
06:21:277 (1)
06:22:436 (7)
06:24:755 (1)

the actual mod
00:34:755 (1,2,3) - I'd keep it as a repeat slider to follow with the rythm before
00:47:798 (2,3,4) - why not make it a 1/2 circle into a 2 circles in a 1/4 rythm? like this http://puu.sh/jKCgA/6f4f36aa2f.jpg
01:03:306 (4) - I'd make it a 1/2 repeat slider (once)
01:16:349 (1) - I'd make 2 ticks shorter and add a circle where it used to end (in rythm)
01:21:856 (4,5) - I'd just put 2 circles instead. the 1/4 rythm here isn't really implied in the song
01:23:306 (1) - I'd change for a repeat 1/2 slider or a 1/2 slider with a circle
01:23:813 (3) - I'd remove
01:29:103 (1) - random hitsound?
01:41:204 (3) - I'd remove
01:45:987 (2) - I'd remove and add a circle at 01:46:277 to make a stream that goes to the slider
01:55:842 (5) - I'd remove. no reason to put a stream here
02:04:248 (2) - I'd remove
02:06:349 (1) - ew.
02:09:755 (2) - I'd remove
02:17:943 (1) - eh nice slider but it doesn't perfectly turn around the circle. I'd recommend remaking it to turn around the circle better
03:07:653 (1) - nice slider
03:13:523 (3) - I'd remove
03:15:335 (3) - I'd make it 2 ticks shorter, start 2 ticks later and add a circle before it to continue on the rythm
03:41:422 (1) - doesn't turn perfectly around the circle either
04:27:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why progressive augmentation on the spacing?
04:29:538 (1,2,3,4) - lower the spacing please >.>
04:40:407 (1) - nice slider
04:43:885 (3) - doesn't turn perfectly around the circle
04:51:567 (1) - the spacing starts to be a bit too much here
04:57:798 (1) - this stream has a bit too much spacing too
05:01:277 (1) - move to x:402 and y:131 to make it a bit more around the circle
05:39:538 (1) - nice slider
05:45:480 (1) - wow wtf lol
06:26:059 (1) - this is the stream of doom for me. from here on it's basically insane spacing everywhere (which I can't stand) so I'll be leaving the mod here. Though the slow end is really nice and fitting
Topic Starter
nhlx

The Mykonian wrote:

it's modding time! (though this mod is probably gonna be shit)

HP6 maybe? I see why you HP5 but eh, your choice on that

the "why QQ" slider collection (basically sliders I don't understand at all why they even exist) THEY ARE NOT PART OF THE MOD and warning, VERY long
SPOILER
00:38:088 (1)
00:39:248 (1)
00:41:567 (1)
00:45:045 (1)
00:49:682 (1)
00:50:842 (1)
00:51:277 (2)
00:51:711 (5)
00:52:001 (1)
01:16:349 (1)
01:17:509 (1)
01:19:827 (1)
01:26:784 (1)
01:52:291 (1)
01:57:509 (2)
01:59:248 (1)
02:01:567 (1)
02:09:827 (3)
02:10:987 (1)
02:24:900 (1)
02:35:190 (1)
02:54:900 (1)
03:04:175 (1)
03:07:653 (1)
03:13:161 (2)
03:30:842 (1)
03:46:059 (1)
03:48:378 (1)
03:58:088 (1)
03:58:378 (2)
03:59:972 (1)
04:06:784 (1)
04:07:364 (4)
04:21:856 (4)
04:32:291 (4)
04:35:045 (2)
04:35:769 (1)
04:38:088 (1)
04:40:407 (1)
04:41:567 (1)
04:43:885 (3)
04:58:958 (1)
05:01:277 (1)
05:01:711 (2)
05:02:436 (1)
05:03:595 (1)
05:04:755 (1)
05:07:219 (1)
05:34:900 (4)
05:36:204 (1)
05:38:523 (1)
05:38:958 (2)
05:39:538 (1)
05:44:175 (1)
05:52:436 (1)
05:52:871 (2)
05:53:451 (5)
05:57:074 (1)
06:05:190 (1)
06:06:349 (1)
06:18:958 (1)
06:21:277 (1)
06:22:436 (7)
06:24:755 (1)


uhhhhhhhhhhh... my mapping style can't be helped.

the actual mod
00:34:755 (1,2,3) - I'd keep it as a repeat slider to follow with the rythm before y
00:47:798 (2,3,4) - why not make it a 1/2 circle into a 2 circles in a 1/4 rythm? like this http://puu.sh/jKCgA/6f4f36aa2f.jpg y
01:03:306 (4) - I'd make it a 1/2 repeat slider (once) no need y
01:16:349 (1) - I'd make 2 ticks shorter and add a circle where it used to end (in rythm) if you listen to voice closely, it fits
01:21:856 (4,5) - I'd just put 2 circles instead. the 1/4 rythm here isn't really implied in the song y
01:23:306 (1) - I'd change for a repeat 1/2 slider or a 1/2 slider with a circle would ruin the flow
01:23:813 (3) - I'd remove y
01:29:103 (1) - random hitsound? wait... there is no hitsound in there
01:41:204 (3) - I'd remove y
01:45:987 (2) - I'd remove and add a circle at 01:46:277 to make a stream that goes to the slider no need
01:55:842 (5) - I'd remove. no reason to put a stream here y
02:04:248 (2) - I'd remove
02:06:349 (1) - ew. im sorry for ugly wiener sliders
02:09:755 (2) - I'd remove idk what to replace it with
02:17:943 (1) - eh nice slider but it doesn't perfectly turn around the circle. I'd recommend remaking it to turn around the circle better fixed
03:07:653 (1) - nice slider lol thanks
03:13:523 (3) - I'd remove done
03:15:335 (3) - I'd make it 2 ticks shorter, start 2 ticks later and add a circle before it to continue on the rythm would make an unnecessary triple
03:41:422 (1) - doesn't turn perfectly around the circle either fixed
04:27:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why progressive augmentation on the spacing? cuz song gets more and more intense
04:29:538 (1,2,3,4) - lower the spacing please >.> y
04:40:407 (1) - nice slider ...thanks? it's the ugliest slider i could have ever done, will be redone probably
04:43:885 (3) - doesn't turn perfectly around the circle y
04:51:567 (1) - the spacing starts to be a bit too much here nerfed
04:57:798 (1) - this stream has a bit too much spacing too it's the cumulation of the solo tho
05:01:277 (1) - move to x:402 and y:131 to make it a bit more around the circle y
05:39:538 (1) - nice slider thanks lol
05:45:480 (1) - wow wtf lol will be changed cuz ugly
06:26:059 (1) - this is the stream of doom for me. from here on it's basically insane spacing everywhere (which I can't stand) so I'll be leaving the mod here. Though the slow end is really nice and fitting will be nerfed
thanks for mod!
Nezzar
nice map, will return with a mod later :D
Khora
Nice map ! Ill mod later too :D
Topic Starter
nhlx

Khora wrote:

Nice map ! Ill mod later too :D

clp012345 wrote:

nice map, will return with a mod later :D
thank you both guys!

holy shit clp! very nice score
Khora
BTW , take my star virginity ! This map is just too fun to play xD , good lluck with it !
Topic Starter
nhlx

Khora wrote:

BTW , take my star virginity ! This map is just too fun to play xD , good lluck with it !
<333333
Nezzar
Oops +0.01star!
[oyasumi]
01:20:987 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - i think it's a bit overmapped
01:35:624 (3,4,5) - I really don't think that putting 1/2 in short ds is good idea on this
part of the song :(
01:45:914 (1,2,3) - the choice made here(i mean the triple) conflicts with this 01:48:233 (2,1) - heavily,
personally i'd suggest removing the "2"
02:52:146 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe a bit more regular on ds?
03:52:436 (1,2,3) - this is actually very difficult to read ._.
04:12:726 (1,2,3) - maybe some streams?
04:21:856 (4) - i'm sure some sounds are missing during the later part of the slider ._.
04:42:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - this does not look good to me in terms of shape :s
05:56:639 (2,3) - personal opinion, but swapping 2 and 3 would be better? (i hate squares :(
06:32:871 (4,5,1) - i think something is wrong here about the ds, it just looks starnge
06:50:407 (1) - Kappa will hr player meet difficulty here? but it's not important, as i dun think
a HR FC would happen in the next year

dunno how to mod :( that's all i can do :(
Topic Starter
nhlx

clp012345 wrote:

Oops +0.01star!
[oyasumi]
01:20:987 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - i think it's a bit overmapped
01:35:624 (3,4,5) - I really don't think that putting 1/2 in short ds is good idea on this
part of the song :(
01:45:914 (1,2,3) - the choice made here(i mean the triple) conflicts with this 01:48:233 (2,1) - heavily,
personally i'd suggest removing the "2"
02:52:146 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe a bit more regular on ds?
03:52:436 (1,2,3) - this is actually very difficult to read ._.
04:12:726 (1,2,3) - maybe some streams?
04:21:856 (4) - i'm sure some sounds are missing during the later part of the slider ._.
04:42:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - this does not look good to me in terms of shape :s
05:56:639 (2,3) - personal opinion, but swapping 2 and 3 would be better? (i hate squares :(
06:32:871 (4,5,1) - i think something is wrong here about the ds, it just looks starnge
06:50:407 (1) - Kappa will hr player meet difficulty here? but it's not important, as i dun think
a HR FC would happen in the next year

dunno how to mod :( that's all i can do :(
thanks so much for mod!
hent2222
Ło kurde zacna mapka. Powodzenia :3
Topic Starter
nhlx

hent2222 wrote:

Ło kurde zacna mapka. Powodzenia :3
dzięki<3
Jensen
So goddamn beautiful, Can't get enough of playing this map. May try to mod soon, but keep up the good work! Hope to see it quad/ranked some day :)
-NeBu-
Nie
Nawidzę
Streamów

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGQqi1iHPYg

Ogółem spoczko gdyby nie streamy, więc takie 2/10 :[
Topic Starter
nhlx

NeBuSC2 wrote:

Nie
Nawidzę
Streamów

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGQqi1iHPYg

Ogółem spoczko gdyby nie streamy, więc takie 2/10 :[
właściwie to dzięki za przypomnienie, bo muszę jeszcze to naprawić XD
Exote
a bit of modding
18:57 *Exote is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/764082 DystopiaGround - AugoEidEs]
18:57 Exote: duuude
18:57 Exote: this map
18:57 Exote: really impressed me
18:57 Exote: lol
18:58 Exote: and when I saw it I felt the need to give some suggestions awa
18:58 Exote: away*
18:58 Raikozen: o
18:58 Raikozen: thats nice to hear
18:58 Exote: so I can give them now or in the forum
18:58 Raikozen: i'd love to rank it but
18:59 Exote: hm?
18:59 Raikozen: you can give them now
18:59 Raikozen: i think
18:59 Raikozen: ranking stuff is hard ;;
18:59 Exote: sure but what;s the problem with ranking it
18:59 Exote: well
18:59 Exote: it is yea
18:59 Exote: most of the things imma point out are hitsound relating or blanket stuff a.k.a polishing the map
18:59 Exote: but feel free to not apply them
19:00 Raikozen: hitsounding is what i need the most
19:00 Raikozen: to be fixed
19:00 Raikozen: i think
19:00 Exote: but good hitsounds
19:00 Raikozen: since i suck at it lol
19:00 Exote: I liked em
19:00 Exote: soo
19:00 Exote: some of the first points
19:01 Exote: are with 100% volume
19:01 Exote: I wouldnt go with 100, 90 or sth would be better
19:01 Raikozen: 00:33:596 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ?
19:01 Raikozen: use timestamps if you can, it will make it a lot easier for me
19:01 Exote: this
19:01 Exote: you can leave
19:01 Exote: sure
19:01 Exote: so
19:02 Exote: from00:35:769 - to 00:53:016 -
19:02 Exote: its just really loud
19:02 Raikozen: yeah
19:02 Raikozen: i'll lower it to 85%
19:02 Exote: 90 is enough
19:02 Exote: dw
19:02 Exote: I mean the song itself is pretty epic there
19:03 Raikozen: yeah 90 works just fine
19:03 Raikozen: i think
19:03 Exote: so next think in this area again
19:03 Raikozen: just so hitsounds don't overcome the music
19:03 Exote: 00:49:682 (1) - this hitsounds with the water drop or whatever
19:03 Exote: is just enough
19:03 Exote: cuz
19:03 Exote: I mean so
19:03 Exote: 00:50:842 (1) - 00:52:001 (1) -
19:03 Exote: those u can remove
19:03 Raikozen: yeah
19:03 Exote: they feel overdone
19:03 Raikozen: i have the syndrome of overusing them
19:03 Raikozen: just like my friend mazzerin
19:03 Raikozen: xD
19:04 Exote: ik that feel
19:04 Raikozen: i think in his newest map
19:04 Raikozen: he literally did a stream
19:04 Raikozen: with 1/2 of sounds
19:04 Raikozen: having this hitsound
19:04 Raikozen: lol
19:04 Exote: lmfao
19:04 Exote: for real
19:04 Raikozen: it actually sounds well for whatever reason lol
19:04 Exote: oh I wanna point out sth
19:05 Raikozen: maybe it fits the song idk
19:05 Exote: the first kiai
19:05 Raikozen: yeah
19:05 Exote: feels a biiiit not like the rest
19:05 Exote: what I mean is
19:05 Exote: for example
19:05 Exote: 00:58:958 (1) - from here
19:05 Exote: to the first kiai
19:05 Exote: is
19:05 Exote: pretty good in quality
19:05 Exote: aand the kiai seems like you had to hurry mapping it
19:05 Exote: idk if its the big sliders or
19:06 Exote: but not the entire kiai
19:06 Exote: anyway back to hitsounds
19:06 Raikozen: big sliders make that kind of feel
19:06 Raikozen: because it's really fucking hard to make a good map with high SV
19:06 Raikozen: trust me on that ;;
19:06 Exote: 01:22:146 (1) -
19:06 Raikozen: but when you do
19:06 Raikozen: it plays awesome
19:06 Exote: the water drop
19:06 Exote: unnecessary
19:06 Exote: here
19:07 Raikozen: removed
19:07 Exote: w8 w8
19:07 Exote: might have mistaken sth
19:07 Exote: ill hear that part again
19:07 Exote: aand yea bout the big sv thing
19:07 Raikozen: it actually sounds better without it
19:07 Raikozen: imo
19:07 Exote: good
19:07 Exote: one of my maps was with pretty big sliders in the final kiai
19:07 Exote: aand
19:07 Exote: woh
19:08 Exote: but its fun
19:08 Raikozen: yeah
19:08 Raikozen: i think i kinda exaggerated it
19:08 Raikozen: i was tired of mapping and i went full HW back then lol
19:08 Raikozen: still didnt fix
19:08 Exote: 01:39:972 (2,3,4) -
19:08 Exote: this
19:08 Exote: if u can make it like that http://puu.sh/krjCT/de55268c81.jpg
19:08 Exote: would be awesome looking
19:08 Exote: oh yea
19:08 Exote: when I saw the ending
19:09 Exote: I instantly thought of HW
19:09 Exote: lol
19:09 Raikozen: dude
19:09 Raikozen: nice
19:09 Exote: another thing that caught my eye was
19:09 Raikozen: this looks good
19:09 Exote: 01:45:335 (4) - this little thing
19:09 Exote: XD
19:10 Exote: looks squishy
19:10 Exote: but
19:10 Exote: not that appealing
19:10 Exote: u can just
19:10 Exote: ctrl c/v the slider 3
19:10 Exote: and invert it
19:10 Exote: I mean rotate lol
19:10 Exote: oh yea and sometimes im quite picky when it comes to such little things
19:10 Raikozen: same as me
19:11 Exote: sooo
19:11 Raikozen: <3
19:11 Exote: the another
19:11 Exote: thing is
19:11 Exote: 01:45:624 (2,2) -
19:11 Exote: if u can
19:11 Exote: oh wait let me just check strh
19:11 Exote: yea same so
19:11 Exote: if u can
19:11 Raikozen: ait
19:11 Exote: move them a bit to the left so they could not touch slider4
19:12 Raikozen: yeah i just noticed that myself too
19:12 Raikozen: i hate when things touch sliders
19:12 Raikozen: ;;
19:12 Exote: yea me2 lol
19:12 Exote: so
19:12 Exote: 01:45:480 (1) -
19:12 Exote: the hitsounds here
19:12 Exote: which sounds like WOWOHWOHW or sth
19:12 Exote: is enough
19:12 Exote: the rest in this section
19:12 Exote: like
19:12 Exote: 01:47:219 (4) -
19:13 Exote: 01:47:798 (1) -
19:13 Exote: those above
19:13 Exote: u can remove the HS
19:13 Exote: still feels overdone
19:13 Raikozen: i removed it on the first one
19:13 Exote: waa
19:13 Exote: on 4>
19:13 Exote: >
19:13 Exote: ?
19:13 Raikozen: i dont know about the second one
19:13 Raikozen: ye
19:13 Exote: cool
19:13 Exote: 4 was the main problem
19:13 Exote: the 2nd is cool
19:13 Exote: 01:51:856 (3) -
19:13 Exote: the clap here
19:14 Exote: I dont get what were u trying to emphasis
19:14 Exote: feel free to remove it
19:14 Raikozen: you mean
19:14 Raikozen: the whistle?
19:14 Raikozen: there's no clap on this slider xd
19:14 Exote: oh w8
19:15 Exote: but
19:15 Exote: there is a clap here ._.
19:15 Exote: 01:51:856 (3) -
19:15 Exote: on the head
19:15 Raikozen: i actually added a clap right now
19:15 Raikozen: and it sounds good
19:15 Raikozen: LOL
19:15 Exote: double click it
19:15 Raikozen: ok whether it was there
19:15 Raikozen: or not
19:15 Raikozen: it's not there anymore
19:15 Exote: cool
19:15 Exote: 01:57:509 (2) -
19:15 Exote: this
19:16 Exote: must lower the position
19:16 Exote: u cant make
19:16 Exote: any elements touch the hp bar
19:16 Exote: or else
19:16 Exote: unrankable
19:16 Raikozen: oh
19:16 Exote: idk if u knew that if u didnt, now u do
19:16 Raikozen: alright
19:16 Raikozen: well...
19:16 Raikozen: TIL
19:17 Exote: http://puu.sh/krk5O/10ba1a25b2.jpg
19:17 Exote: 01:58:233 (1) -
19:17 Exote: this here
19:17 Exote: curve dat slider
19:17 Raikozen: i lowered the SV
19:17 Exote: and make it hug slider3 lol xD
19:17 Raikozen: and made it smaller
19:17 Exote: the SV of slider 2 only?
19:17 Raikozen: ye
19:17 Raikozen: just so it's smaller
19:17 Exote: well u could've just moved it to the left actually
19:18 Raikozen: oh well...
19:18 Raikozen: whatever
19:18 Raikozen: alright curved the (1)
19:18 Exote: cool
19:19 Exote: 02:20:697 (4) - 02:20:987 (5) - 02:21:277 (6) -
19:19 Exote: the claps dont really go well imo
19:19 Raikozen: wanted to do buildup for 02:21:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) -
19:20 Exote: yea I got that but
19:20 Exote: idk
19:20 Exote: if u like em there leave em np
19:20 Raikozen: yeah i'd rather leave them
19:21 Raikozen: unless i find some other way to make buildup with different hitsounding
19:21 Exote: ill think of another way but
19:21 Exote: 03:09:393 (1,2) -
19:21 Exote: this sampleset is different from the rest in this area
19:21 Exote: is that on purpose
19:22 Exote: cuz sounds dull
19:22 Raikozen: oh god
19:22 Raikozen: ys
19:22 Raikozen: i wanted to fix that long time ago
19:22 Exote: it should be sc1 if it wasnt on purpose
19:22 Raikozen: thanks
19:22 Exote: oh damn
19:23 Raikozen: 03:23:306 (1) -
19:23 Raikozen: i think i missed the clap
19:23 Exote: 03:59:682 (6) - the whistle here is meh
19:23 Exote: oh u did?
19:24 Exote: thought it was on purpose
19:24 Exote: cuz doesnt sound bad
19:24 Exote: 04:03:595 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) -
19:24 Exote: daaaaamn
19:24 Exote: the water drop HS spam is real
19:24 Exote: it pierces through my heart
19:24 Exote: xD
19:25 Exote: 04:03:306 (1) - this one is just enough imo
19:25 Exote: 04:05:624 (1) - and this
19:25 Raikozen: this whistle was accidental
19:25 Raikozen: on (6)
19:25 Raikozen: xd
19:25 Raikozen: also ye
19:25 Exote: happens
19:25 Raikozen: it kinda pierces the ears
19:25 Raikozen: one hitsound all over
19:26 Exote: 04:35:335 (3) -
19:26 Exote: adjust this a bit
19:26 Exote: so it forms a blanket with slider1
19:26 Exote: like it hugs it
19:26 Exote: lolll
19:27 Exote: the whole stream part is 100%
19:27 Exote: ok thats acceptable
19:27 Raikozen: dun
19:27 Exote: but
19:27 Exote: 04:36:059 - from here to the kiai end
19:27 Raikozen: ye
19:27 Exote: is way too loud just cuz of the hitsounds
19:28 Exote: 90 again ?
19:28 Raikozen: yeah
19:28 Raikozen: its good now
19:28 Exote: 04:40:407 (1) -
19:28 Exote: ahhhhh
19:28 Exote: a picky one too
19:28 Exote: adjust that a bit
19:28 Exote: so it huuuuuggggggg the clircles inside
19:29 Exote: or the mini sliders w/e
19:29 Exote: their heads
19:29 Exote: xD
19:29 Raikozen: yeah
19:29 Raikozen: i tried my best
19:29 Raikozen: but it's really hard to blanket stacked circles
19:29 Raikozen: with such a small space
19:29 Exote: oh
19:29 Exote: wait
19:29 Raikozen: at least for me ;;
19:29 Exote: let me see with the stacking
19:30 Exote: oh well
19:30 Exote: its still gonna be meh
19:30 Exote: cuz
19:30 Exote: yea stacking
19:30 Exote: well do whatever u want there it's k anyway
19:30 Raikozen: i wonder if stack leniency 0 would be rankable Kappa
19:30 Exote: well
19:30 Exote: even tho we allll know it isnt
19:30 Exote: it actually is
19:30 Exote: a lot of maps got ranked with 0
19:30 Exote: recently*
19:30 Exote: but
19:30 Exote: leave it like that
19:30 Raikozen: chloe maps with stack leniency 0
19:31 Exote: I mean the stack leniency
19:31 Raikozen: atm xd
19:31 Raikozen: yeye
19:31 Raikozen: gotchu
19:31 Exote: 04:41:567 -
19:31 Exote: this here
19:31 Exote: http://puu.sh/krkVx/f4e5e26cf9.jpg
19:31 Exote: idk if thats the guitar u tried following
19:31 Exote: but like the image in puush
19:31 Exote: sounds better imo
19:32 Exote: plus u are missing one clap but that exactly aint anything bad
19:33 Exote: 04:54:175 (5) - I'd add a clap here
19:33 Exote: goes pretty good with 04:53:885 (1,3) -
19:33 Raikozen: fixed that
19:33 Exote: like a mini build up
19:33 Raikozen: nice found
19:33 Raikozen: fixed
19:34 Exote: 04:57:798 (1) -
19:34 Exote: there
19:34 Exote: is a whistle
19:34 Exote: but
19:34 Exote: it sounds like it has some delay
19:34 Exote: try putting it
19:34 Exote: 04:57:653 (1) -
19:34 Exote: here
19:34 Exote: imo it sounds better, I mean in time
19:35 Exote: 04:58:958 - 05:03:595
19:35 Exote: the
19:35 Exote: whistles on the mini sliders' heads
19:35 Exote: sound unnecessary
19:36 Exote: would be cleaner without them imo
19:36 Raikozen: sounds cleaner
19:36 Raikozen: i think
19:36 Exote: and u can put ur regular claps there
19:36 Exote: then there is the break 05:13:016 -
19:37 Exote: u sure u aint gonna map it?
19:37 Exote: xD
19:37 Exote: would be cool imo
19:37 Exote: just steal them skystar HSs
19:37 Raikozen: yeah
19:37 Raikozen: it's supposed to be a break
19:37 Raikozen: after deathstream part
19:37 Raikozen: which is pretty stamina killing
19:37 Exote: its black n white
19:37 Exote: u either pass it or not
19:37 Exote: so anyway however u want
19:37 Exote: its fine either way
19:38 Exote: ok
19:38 Exote: another thing
19:38 Raikozen: even if i'd like to
19:38 Exote: that really hurt my ears
19:38 Raikozen: i'll probably be too lazy to do so
19:38 Raikozen: xdddd
19:38 Raikozen: ait go on
19:38 Exote: 05:30:262 (1,2,3,1,2) -
19:38 Exote: really loud
19:38 Exote: I;d suggest
19:38 Exote: oh but its 100%
19:38 Exote: lmao
19:38 Exote: so
19:38 Exote: the 05:30:262 (1,2,3) - this exactly
19:38 Exote: or these*
19:38 Exote: make them like 70 or 80
19:38 Raikozen: dude i have an idea
19:39 Raikozen: 05:30:262 (1,2,3) - 85%
19:39 Exote: yea?
19:39 Raikozen: 05:30:987 (1) - 70
19:39 Raikozen: 05:31:277 (2) - 50
19:39 Exote: exactly what I was going to say
19:39 Exote: lol
19:39 Exote: nice u came with that
19:39 Exote: but the 2 circles
19:39 Raikozen: :D
19:39 Exote: might go for 60/40 or sth
19:39 Exote: cuz 70 is too loud again
19:40 Exote: oh
19:40 Exote: weeeell
19:40 Raikozen: went for it
19:40 Exote: 80/60/50 should be cool
19:40 Exote: or 40 IDK
19:40 Raikozen: 50 is a bit too loud
19:40 Raikozen: imo
19:40 Exote: yea
19:40 Exote: exactly
19:40 Raikozen: lowered it to
19:40 Raikozen: 45
19:40 Exote: and I dont hear any transition between whem then 60/50
19:40 Exote: lol
19:40 Exote: when*
19:41 Raikozen: exatcly lol
19:41 Raikozen: also dont forget to /savelog
19:41 Raikozen: and post it on forum
19:41 Exote: sure
19:41 Exote: wait theres a bit more
19:41 Exote: xD
19:41 Raikozen: yy i know
19:41 Raikozen: just a friendly reminder
19:41 Exote: when im not really for the kudosu
19:41 Exote: cuz I find it useless
19:41 Exote: LOL
19:41 Exote: getting mods get u the SP needed
19:41 Exote: gets*
19:42 Raikozen: y
19:42 Raikozen: but still
19:42 Exote: and i dont usually mod, stopped it cuz too lazy but sometimes I do to maps I'd like to see ranked
19:42 Exote: anyway back to the map
19:42 Raikozen: i feel honored then
19:42 Raikozen: <3
19:42 Exote: xD
19:42 Exote: im not really experienced lol
19:42 Exote: but good that u feel so
19:42 Exote: i feel too
19:42 Exote: ~
19:42 Raikozen: ~
19:43 Exote: 05:49:393 (1,2,3) -
19:43 Exote: the 1/4 gaps
19:43 Exote: u could fill em with 2 more circles and
19:43 Raikozen: no need
19:43 Exote: reduced each one of them with 3% lets say
19:43 Exote: well would be a cool build up imo but u decide
19:44 Raikozen: there is nothing really to be bulit up imo
19:44 Raikozen: in the music
19:44 Exote: well yea
19:44 Exote: but I love to create my own hitsounds to the original song
19:44 Exote: sooo yea xd
19:45 Exote: the final section
19:45 Exote: again way too loud, even tho the music Is REALLY LOUD
19:45 Exote: 90% should work fine her etoo
19:45 Exote: here*
19:45 Exote: 06:17:798 -
19:45 Exote: u can only leave the hitsounds on slider 1
19:45 Exote: head
19:46 Exote: 06:20:552 (2,5) - the whistles here sound meeeh
19:47 Exote: the very ending with the huge sliders might be pain but shouldnt cause in problems
19:47 Exote: now the clock hitsounds
19:47 Exote: 06:36:494 (1) - they sound good here
19:48 Exote: but in the rest of the sliders like that 06:39:393 (1) - and the following ones
19:48 Exote: sound overdone
19:48 Exote: the spinner should end here 06:50:407 (1) -
19:49 Raikozen: you mean start
19:49 Raikozen: xdd
19:49 Raikozen: or
19:49 Exote: where it starts from is fine
19:49 Exote: but with its current state
19:49 Exote: u can just lower the spinners length back to the white tick
19:49 Exote: it ends a bit late
19:50 Raikozen: y
19:50 Raikozen: i actually sounds good
19:50 Raikozen: on blue tick
19:50 Raikozen: right before it
19:50 Exote: oh
19:50 Exote: now that u mention it
19:50 Exote: YEA
19:50 Exote: lmfao
19:50 Exote: blue tick, blue tick!
19:50 Raikozen: just so it's not perfectly to rhythm
19:50 Raikozen: but it fith
19:50 Raikozen: s
19:50 Raikozen: y
19:50 Raikozen: it's perfect
19:51 Raikozen: i think
19:51 Exote: yup
19:51 Exote: so that was it
19:51 Raikozen: dude i can't tell
19:51 Raikozen: how much you've helped me
19:51 Exote: if I find something else cuz I tend to mod a single map multiple times will tell u
19:51 Exote: oh nice to hear
19:51 Raikozen: alright
moya
pretty damn fun, took a lot of tries to pass it though D:
Yoges
Yo! Here's your M4M. Holy shit what a good map. Great job on the hitsounds.
I can't even play stuff above 6 stars let alone mod. I'll do my best.

[General]
ehh 7.1 stars.. you might aswell crank that up to AR 10. Otherwise stuffs a bit weird to read. Like there will be too much stuff on the screen at once and you get thrown off even tho the flow and spacing is perfect (in most places).
Maybe add the taggs "rock" and "marathon" aswell.
The stack latency is probably going to be an issue.

[oyasumi]
01:00:117 (1,3) - I don't like nazis but the stack is a bit off.
01:04:755 (1,3) - Move the 3 over a bit to the left so the 1's not overlapping onto it. It doesn't look nice.
01:13:595 (3,4,1) - Maybe increase the spacing between these?
01:15:624 (2,3,4,5) - If you're going to keep it like that then fix the follow lines from the 2 to the 3 and the 3 to the 4 so that it makes a single straight line like this (move the 2 down and to the right a little). I personally wouldn't tho. I'd make it so that there's a change in direction after the 3. Something like this because it fits the music better for me.
02:21:277 (6,1) - Jeez the spacing between these.
02:33:306 (2,6) - Stack
03:02:581 (3,5) - ^
03:35:335 (4,1) - Not good flow.
03:39:827 (5,1) - ^
04:10:262 (1,2) - Overlap
05:06:832 (4) - That's a 1/6 note See?
05:11:567 (5,1,2) - Yeah that spacing doesn't feel right at all

Good luck with ranking. This one will be tricky to qualify.
I literally had to fucking mod that with 50% playback speed the whole way through
cyprianz5
DAM GWIAZDKE KURDE MIEJ SE CHOPAKU RZYCZE RANKEDA SERIO
Myko
Random posting time ~

The map being 7* after the revamp I thought it would be like most 6.5*+ maps....tryhard
Hell how wrong was I....this map is hard and challenging in its own way, but stays hella fun and incredibly well mapped

Hope this thing gets ranked as SOON as possible. This just deserves it.
cyprianz5
KOLEJNA GWIAZDKA DLA CIEBIE XD
Falenphist
I love this Map <3
interprais
like map
Kalibe
A o to jestem

general:

napraw to w AiModzie : http://puu.sh/lgsLv/f04ad69776.png

00:33:596 - zmień w zielonej sekcji na normal sample lub czerwony na drum, nie mogą być 2 naraz !

twoje BG ma wymiary 1365x768. Brakuje jednego piksela lol (1366x768 powinno być)

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00:54:320 (4,1) - Ten overlap jest specjalny? Dla mnie jest trochę dziwny
00:56:204 (1) - usuń NC?
01:23:088 - tripla tu zrób
01:23:306 (1) - slider na czerwonej linii akurat dziwnie brzmi imo
01:31:711 (1,2,3) - nie słyszę aby był tu triplet
01:35:769 (4,5) - a te kółka powinny mieć większy spacing. Nie czujesz tego rytmu? ja zrobiłem coś takiego : http://puu.sh/lgtl6/b527b9f7d8.jpg
01:45:045 (2,4) - te 1/4 slidery wyglądają trochę ciasne. Mógłbyś lekko spacing zwiększyć?
02:03:451 (1,2) - IMO nie ma dźwięków na czerwonych snapach
02:08:378 (5,1) - ten łuk jest trochę dla mnie krzywy. Spróbuj przesunąć 02:08:668 (1) - do x: 156 y: 301
02:09:755 (5) - overmapped jak myślę :o
02:14:320 (1) - jak wcześniej, x: 108 y: 355
02:17:798 (4) - nie przesadziłeś trochę ze spacingiem? Czerwone snapy zazwyczaj mają mniejszy od białych :o
02:17:943 (1) - Szczerze, ten slider kończący się na czerwonej linii brzmi okropnie, poprostu skróć go do białej
02:20:480 (2) - overmapped
02:23:595 (1) - leciutko przesuń w prawo
02:58:595 (2,3) - overmapped, ten strim zaczyna się od 02:58:813 (4) - lol
03:16:349 (2,3) - powinnieneś je na NC zrobić, ponieważ zmienia się ich SV
03:23:885 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - coś chyba brakuje tu hitsoundów czy to specjalnie?
03:41:422 (1) - tak samo jak wcześniej, serio on dziwnie brzmi na czerwonej
03:45:480 - ma ten sam rytm jak to 02:22:001 - tylko że tam masz 1/4 a tu dwie 1/2. O co chodzi?
03:50:117 (2,3) - również na nich powinno być NC
03:52:871 (4) - bosze ten spacing na czerwonych :o i przy okazji usuń clapa z niego, bo jest dziwny i nie pasuje
04:09:248 (3) - wydaje mi się że taki powinnien być snap : http://puu.sh/lgucr/484ca64607.jpg ale mogę się mylić
04:21:856 (4) - ehh wiem że podkreślasz tą gitarę ale omijasz te hard bębny, a je by się przydało zmappować. Przemyśl to
04:30:117 (1,2,3) - mam pomysł : na (1 i 2) ctrl + g, a na (3) zrób coś takiego : http://puu.sh/lgunr/6acd040205.jpg według mnie flow powinnien być lepszy i bardziej zrozumiały
04:41:422 (4,5,1) - a to przez przypadek nie jest 1/3 snap?

I to tyle ode mnie, tak trzymaj ! :3
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