1. Easy (2 stars, 69 notes)
2. Hard (4,84 stars, 144 notes)
3. kino's Insane (4,93 stars, 241 notes)
4. Normal (4,18 stars, 115 notes)

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hi

[Normal]
00:36:107 (2) - Move 1/4 earlier i dont think so
00:37:785 (2) - Remove 1 reverse, move 3/4 later and add note done
00:39:464 (2) - Move 1/4 earlier i dont think so
01:12:715 (1) - Hum... A Jump in a Normal diff ...omg, thanks, fixed it

That looks fine for me, Star~~

EvianBubble wrote:

SPOILER

Easy
00:14:576 (1) - This is too far away from the end if (3). Also, slider beginning and end should NOT overlap completely - I had absolutely no idea which way the slider was going. Re - design this slider
fixed
00:31:569 - Insert break?
done
00:49:009 (1) - I'm not too sure beginners will be able to hit the note right after this spinner. Shorten it by one beat or so? Maybe also remove finish?
-length/-finish/+clap
01:03:065 (1 - 7, 1 - 7) - Uh, what exactly are you following here? This confused the heck out of me on my first playthrough >_<
I'm following the hats and really have no intention to change that, sorry

Normal
00:15:758 (2, 3, 4) - (2) should be moved one grid left, (3, 4) one grid down
placed them another way
00:26:353 (1) - Why don't you delete this and just make it one spinner?
well, because i dont want to, those 2 spinners just seem to fit the music :3
00:36:107 (2) - Why is this on the blue tick? Move to the previous white tick (00:36:002) and fix spacing
no, thanks
00:37:785 (2) - Same thing. Extend the slider so it's one beat long
^
00:39:464 (2) - Same here
^
01:02:436 - Yea, this part onwards really confused me :S I couldn't keep the beat and ... bleh
just listen to the song more carefully, you'll see that those beats are motivated :3

Texhnolyzed
00:31:597 - Break here
i just love it how HP drains without the break, it fits the music
00:36:107 (2) - Move to white tick? Fix spacing
no, seriously
00:37:785 (2) and 00:39:464 (2) - Same here
^
01:02:436 - I guess it's more a thing of not really having a strong beat to follow, more than anything ...? Maybe
*confused* just what has a strong beat to follow then? *___*
Nice map ... but I want to see if you make any changes to that last part, I'm kinda concerned about it. No star for now, but tell me your opinion on the last bit and call me back (you'll probably get it next time, haha) Don't forget to change the .mp3 file!
didnt change the last part, sorry for that

Bikko wrote:

SPOILER

[Easy]
Increase HP drain a little bit.
done
00:14:604 (1) Unrankable issue. I understand your intentional and it seems readable, but end of slider can not be overlaped itself. some old map has this kind of slider with SB, but as far as I know this is not allowed anymore. well, already EvianBubble point out this fixed
00:31:597 (x) Insert Break Time
done

[Normal]
01:12:715 (1) move it right 1 gird for overlap with 01:11:457 (2) and perfect symmetry .
placed them another way
01:13:974 (3) if you follow previous suggestion, move it left 1 gird.
^
01:14:184 (1) What's up here? huh? is it intentional? It is diffrent with [Easy]
...

[Texhnolyzed]
How about change name of diff to just [Hard]?
Hard.
00:31:597 (x) Insert Break Time
no break here :3
01:06:422 (4) spacing
fixed
01:14:184 (1) seriously, what's going on here? is it really intentional?
what? where?

Leorda wrote:

SPOILER

[Easy]
00:14:604 (1) - Unrankable Slider (Don't let startpoint overlap endpoint, because many player can't follow which way to start)
fixed
00:55:722 (1) - This slider is too far from spinner, would beginner player hard to click it[/color]
wasnt it too close? :3

[Texhnolyzed]
Please Capitalize to "Texhnolyze" in source
oh fixed
00:22:157 (2) - Make symetric?
found a better solution, thanks for pointing this out
00:23:835 (2) - ^
^
00:50:687 (1) - ^
^

P.S I remember this song from game when I child, but I don't know this? From Rhythm Game?
Googled it, still no idea which game you're talking about

wmfchris wrote:

Sorry for late modding

[hard]
0:31:638 (x) needs a break

[normal], [easy] nice.

star*2

The spacing is really nice, just scary for me ._.

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Easy]
Очень хочется более сложные ритмы,но ладно,это изи,пусть таким и будет.
00:13:386 - Свисток?
тут нет
00:14:226 - ^
а тут да
00:42:391 (1) - Я б сюда ещё Финиш добавил,всё же начало нового куска,и вроде подходит неплохо.
добавлено
01:08:615 (3) - На 1 вниз.
ok

[Normal]
00:36:202 (2) - Ритм помоему неверный.Нужно передвинуть на 00:36:097.
Так же и дальше,перетянуть остальные ноты с синего тика на предыдущий белый.
00:43:230 (3) - Попробуй следующие ноты: [00:43:230,00:43:545,00:43:859]
Можно их чередовать по очереди с тем,что сейчас у тебя.
над этим буду думать

[Hard]
00:25:135 - Вообще такой очень слышный бит,может хлопок добавить или какой другой хитсануд?
добавлено
00:26:813 - ^
^
00:43:230 (3) - Я бы на твоём месте чередовал ритмы,или хотя бы начинал с нового комбо другим ритмом,тем более в музыке чётко слышится: [00:43:230,00:43:545,00:43:859]
возможно...
01:09:768 (2) - Как-то он одиноко смотрится,и не в том направлении,может просто двумя сирклами заменить?
мда, заменила

На счёт брейка в нормале:
Может раз уж так,убрать эти 2 спиннера,заменив одним,и довести его всё же до 00:31:428 как в остальных сложностях?
а я там просто все переделала.

La Cataline wrote:

01:14:184 (1) What's up here? huh? is it intentional? It is diffrent with [Easy]
...

01:14:184 (1) seriously, what's going on here? is it really intentional?
what? where?

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

[Easy]
HP Drain Rate: -1
yes
00:18:631 (1,2,3) - these notes are too high up...lower them cause its crossing with the HP Bar
fixed
00:31:638 - insert break here
break is here.

[Normal]
01:14:279 (1) - end this spinner at 01:15:957
done

[Hard]
Use 1.40 Velocity instead (may cause remapping)
done
01:14:279 (1) - end this spinner at 01:15:957
yep
00:31:638 - insert break here
well...ok.

Bikko wrote:

These two spinner is end at 01:16:062, blue tick. but [Easy]'s spinner is end at 01:15:957, correctly white tick, and mute timing section. Why mismatched?
because i'm a careless idiot. fixed it

DiamondCrash wrote:

Delete your .osb and full submit.
deleted.

Normal;

00:36:202 (2) - I think these are a little tricky for a beginner player; perhaps you should move this back 1/4, and similarly to the other combos like this.
since you're a third person telling me this, fixed.
01:14:279 (1) - 1/4 longer like on easy and hard.
fixed.

TKiller wrote:

[Hard]
01:02:551 (1) - разверни вверх
yep.

01:02:970 - добавь круг
yep.
01:03:390 (4) - спейсинг
fixed.
01:09:684 - добавь круг (спейсинг либо не трогай, оставь вместо дабла трипл, либо выстави 0,5х и сделай что-то вроде http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22494 только слайдер ровно подвинь следующий, я забыл)
yep. Порадовало, сделала всю концовку так.
01:12:725 (2) - 1 клетку вниз
~

[Normal]

00:36:831 (4,5,1) - я тут мисснул Я считаю, такое не очень легко с первого раза прочитать с таким маленьким OD
OD +1, мы не ищем сложных путей .

[Easy]

00:56:657 (2,3,4) - во-первых они даже в редакторе не выровнены под конец слайдера горизонтально, во-вторых, я всё равно всегда буду считать что это смотрится лучше когда первый кружок в стеке выровнен под слайдер, а не последний (т.е. двигать стек в редакторе вниз и вправо. И да, не стесняемся нажимать альт с шифтом)
вообще там все переделала.

Vass_Bass wrote:

General
Тут с БМП что-то не то
БМП XDDD

Easy
01:03:160 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4 и т.д.) - мне кажется сложно дня новичка, может вместо какого-нибудь комбо слайдер возвращающийся сделать? Например 01:04:419 (1,2,3,4) - вместо этого. Хотя это просто мнение
nope.

Normal
00:47:426 (1) - 1 вверх
yep.

Vass_Bass wrote:

Ну епт, подумаешь букавки перепутала -_-

kino77 wrote:

[Easy]
01:12:411 (4,1) - Move them closer?
yep

Edit:My diff~If you don't mind >w<
wow,thanks, added

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Timing]
The timing feels weird near the end
Starting from 01:02:551 the cymbals feel earlier than the notes, please recheck your BPM and offset for the 2nd red line
-10 to 2nd offset

[Hard]
00:22:218 (2) - This (and similar ones) look kind of burai, maybe you should redesign them a bit so they dont overlap into themselves.
changed some sliders
[Normal]
Why is countdown enabled here and disabled in the other diffs?
bad me, fixed

[Easy]
Preview point here is 55817 while on the other diffs its set to: 55722 please change accordingly.
yep,fixed
00:56:677 (2,3,4) - Theese sound really odd i dont think 3 1/2s fit here
you're right.

RandomJibberish wrote:

General
play-warningarrow.png is cut off at the bottom
Default dot, comma, percent and x are not used.
alright, play-warningarrow fixed, comma and others deleted.

Easy
00:14:665 (1) - not symmetrical. Move the startpoint, the second point and the third point from the start one grid to the left.
yep.

James2250 wrote:

Didn't check the rest of the map but make the combo burst so it faces the other way? (or is it designed to be like that)

SPOILER

1. 01:00:874 (3) - Add new combo here, to follow combos pattern used earlier.

1. 00:26:425 (5) - New combo here.

1. Approach Rate -1. Current is too hard.

Alace wrote:

<Easy>
AR+3 is easier to read
fixed

did you do this on purpose ?
nope. fixed
<Hard>
maybe AR and OD -1 ?
done
you should save all diffs to let osu file format from v7 to v8
done