1. Beast (4,82 stars, 562 notes)
2. Human (0,42 stars, 148 notes)
3. Phantom (2,74 stars, 272 notes)

Neethime wrote:

Pink words:You have to fix these,they are mistakes.
Black words:Just suggestions.

[General]
Normal hitsound is a bit too loud for me, try to turn down volume,or use some soft hitsound at some place. Fixed

[Human]

Ahhh..OK www


[Phantom]

01:19:208 (6) - 1 grid down. Fixed
02:17:517 (1) - Delete this? Fixed


[Beast]

Now the person who said "I hate anti-jumps"use lots of them lol.
OD9 feels crazy to me D: maybe use OD8? Fixed
(02:30:616 - 02:36:532)New combos here seem strange to me, Fixed
How about like this? 02:30:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)
02:41:602 (6,1) - Change to (1,2) NO
02:42:447 (5,1) - ^ NO

Yeah that's all, great map.

TheVileOne wrote:

General
It would be great if there was a difficulty in between phantom and beast

BATS are not going to like the fact that your easy difficulties are so much shorter than your longer difficulty.

Human

00:55:968 (1) - Add claps to all ends of this?
00:59:348 (1) - ^

02:25:546 (3) - Slightly curve the start of the slider inward. I think that it looks off centered because of how it is angled.

Phantom

02:11:602 (3) - Move here 02:11:496 - ??
02:11:813 - Add note??
Space like this??

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21782

Beast

00:56:391 (3) - Move right 1 unit.

00:57:658 (7,8,9) - Space like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21783

01:30:194 (2) - Move left and down 1 unit. (Use distance snap)

03:53:433 - OMG x2 Death stream time. xD

Maybe you should warn us for that.


It was so soothing under the x2 section and then it became hell to hit. xD


Good enough for a star.

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hi Leo-chan :33

[Human]
00:51:320 (1) - Move 1/1 earlier and extand by 1/1 YES
01:16:250 (1) - Finish at the end ? NO
01:24:701 (1) - The end is too close to the top border, that's hide by the lifebar, so I recommend to you to change the form of this slider :> NO
01:27:236 (2) - Too close to the top border NO
01:32:306 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier ?NO
I think you must map all of the song

[Phantom]
02:21:320 (2,3) - Too close to the top border, that's hide by the lifebar NO
I think you must map all of the song

[Beast]
00:51:320 (1) - Move 1/1 earlier and extand by 1/1YES
03:37:165 (4) - Too close to the top border NO

:33 Star

Hum... If you can, can you give the 4.jpg in a better quality ? (1024*768)
Post here if you can :33

Lissette wrote:

Try this offset: 176

Beast
01:05:686 (3,4) - plays better if you switch these two notes >< also will be a jump between 4 and next combo, that i think fits well ^^ YES
01:09:489 (1) - see this jump? i think fits good, and i think u should put a jump like this, in the other parts like this, like here 01:12:870 (1) and 01:16:250 (1) etc ^^ (just a suggestion ofc) <: YES

Phantom ALL NO
01:23:433 (1) - too near to the spinners end, since this is normal diff ><
02:03:978 (1) - same

Nice map!
Star! ^^

DiamondCrash wrote:

Phantom;

If this is a normal, which I'm assuming it is, get rid of those 1/4 repeating sliders, they're rather inappropriate for a normal.
Kiai in this the same as the other 2 difficulties, thanks. Fixed

Beast;

I'm not entirely comfortable with this 2x section, perhaps you'd like to wait until the next build of osu! so you can have a 1.33x or 1.5x section instead? I wish the next bulid of osu! is released now

Cut your .mp3. No, I want to keep it

1. Map is lacking Soft Hitwhistles~ Add some more please! Especially in the kiai time parts.
2. 25% is not used at the ending of the .mp3 file. I will also say: Cut it like DiamondCrash said.

1. Tick Rate 2 ?

1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by one ?

GladiOol wrote:

[General]

1. Map is lacking Soft Hitwhistles~ Add some more please! Especially in the kiai time parts.
2. 25% is not used at the ending of the .mp3 file. I will also say: Cut it like DiamondCrash said.

[Beast]

1. Tick Rate 2 ?

01:15:598 (2,3,4) - Delete these notes? I think it'll sound better if you delete them~
02:14:542 (4,5) - Make this part the same as 02:11:161 (4) So it will follow the music better?
02:43:591 (x) - Extra note here? To increase stream length?
03:37:359 (5,6,7,8,9) - Make this part the same as 03:33:978 (5) - again? To follow the music better?
03:41:584 (7) - Add New Combo.
03:50:880 (4,5,6) - Make this part the same as 03:47:499 (5) ~


[Phantom]

01:05:880 (10) - Either move this one grid level up, or make 01:06:091 (1) go one grid level down. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)
01:12:429 (6) - Move 2 grid levels to the right.
03:37:781 (5,6,7) - Move these 1 grid level to the right.
03:43:274 (8) - Add New Combo.


[Human]

1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by one ?

Starred~

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
Hmmm you have a Storyboarded pulse before every diff starts. I personally have nothing against it but because most peple skip it seems kinda pointless. <- you don't have to change this if you don't want No
mp3 quality 128 kbps. hmmmm could you maybe find a better mp3? I can't find any

Human:
02:12:040 (3) - align the end point like this Yes

SPOILER

03:43:308 (5) - also align this end point to the start point like before. Yes
04:01:779 (1) - ^ Yes

Phantom:
01:25:139 (4) - raise the end of the slider by one tick Yes
02:58:519 (3) - ^ Yes
03:07:181 (4,5) - one grid left? Yes
04:14:998 (4) - one grid left and down. No

Beast:
01:14:681 to 01:15:104 - I feel like something is missing here, it sounds odd. Yes
04:19:857 - from here on I expected a 1/8 slider because the SB is also implying a 1/8 stream. maybe change that Yes

Really nice map Leorda^^
Star~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remember, some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit.

[osz File Scan!]
After a fresh download it asks me to update the .osu files, make sure your osz is being uploaded properly

[Beast]
I think the 2x section is too extremist, try 1.5x?
01:26:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the spacing on theese is too close, i throught i had to click faster
01:46:688 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:57:674 (1) - This curve could be less sudden try something like this?

SPOILER

[Phantom]
04:22:181 Is this timing section supposed to be unsnapped? Will sound awkward at it's current position.

[Human]
01:24:717 (1) - Overlapping with Hp bar looks ugly.
04:22:181 Once again an unsnapped timing section

VanMoNky wrote:

Star.

Agnes wrote:

Leorda. <3 Long time, no see, buddy!
~Agnes' Rage Modding Queue service

[General]
At around 00:38:200, while I was testing the map, I saw the SB Load blink red for a second. Check the storyboard images and make sure there's not a lot of transparent images.

[Human]
O.K.!

[Phantom]
01:05:914 (10) - New combo?

[Beast]
O.K.!

Nothing much to really get in depth with, just a small storyboard hiccup I've noticed. Star'd!

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
02:44:571 - Maybe map through this break? It's kinda soon after the previous one. NO

[SB]
4.jpg looks really pixely in art style compared to the other images. Perhaps find a different one that would fit with the other three? Changed

[Human]
The switching between the soft whistle and the hit normal sounds weird to me. No, you
01:29:782 (1) - Make the slider ends line up or make it more obvious that you wanted it tilted. No thx
02:12:035 (3,4) - Maybe something more like this? MOE!!!

SPOILER

02:57:669 - I was expecting a note here. :< Added
03:25:979 (1,1,1) - Eh, I dunno about the new combo spam. Fixed
03:50:909 (1) - Center this with the slider. No, thank you

[Phantom]
00:55:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Kind of a boring pattern. Done
02:04:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ color=#00FF00]Done[/color]
02:27:247 (1,2) - Maybe use copy/paste on these so they look neater? color=#00FF00]Done[/color]
02:34:007 (1) - Maybe use some regular beats instead of just this really long repeating slider? color=#00FF00]Done[/color]
03:07:388 (5) - One grid left color=#00FF00]Done[/color]
03:25:979 (1,1,1) - Yay new combo spam color=#00FF00]Done[/color]

[Beast]
03:25:979 (1,1,1) - Geh, you know what I'm going to say.
Some of the jumps felt a bit over the top like 01:05:275 (1,2,3,4) - and 02:39:923 (1,2,3,4) - but ah well. Decent difficulty. Kinda linear though. -3-

There you go.

samiljul wrote:

yo 'w'
I want make taiko

Leorda wrote:

ok, but I want Inner Oni diff ;-;

samiljul wrote:

Leorda wrote:

ok, but I want Inner Oni diff ;-;

That means you want very hard map?

samiljul wrote:

ok...
It's half ver,ask me when you want full ver

1. Timing looks fine to me

Doomsday wrote:

Hey
Ehh, This map isn't bad, but it's not very interesting. Human and Phantom feel rushed and boring, while Beast is more interesting. It's still overmapped, but it's alright, bar the odd jump here and there. It's not bad, but not quite enough for a star I'm afraid.

James2250 wrote:

Might as well resize black.png to 640x480?
Wow that sb at the end

Human:
You might want to add a few more hitsounds as they seem pretty far apart at times but up you
02:58:937 (3) - move down to align with others?
03:00:627 (6) - ^
03:06:543 (4,5,6) - align?
03:21:331 (1) - extend to 03:24:500 like the other difficulties?

Phantom:
01:17:106 (2) - add whistle or clap?
02:34:007 (1) - could be made most interesting

Beast:
Prob could have some more hitsounds with all the notes around but ok
01:05:275 (1,2,3) - decrease distance of jumps?
01:14:571 (1,2,3,4,1) - jump doesn't fit
02:20:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - odd spacing change
02:59:359 (7) - new combo
03:29:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - odd spacing change
03:43:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
Isn't the timing change only 1.5 (warning could say Speed up! or something but meh)

The last difficulty was pretty fun~
*star*

kioukiou wrote:

Sorry for my nazi mod.

Resnap all of green lines.(especially kiai time)

Nothing else I could find.

Nice map.

kioukiou wrote:

Bubbled.

dksslqj wrote:

I'm very sorry that I can't mod your map

abalee wrote:

Fine.

Faust wrote:

Your grammar is particularly amusing.

And congratulations!