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DystopiaGround - Dirac no Umi yori Tsurugi o

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Kiddo-Kun
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on October-10-10 at 5:35:38 PM

Artist: DystopiaGround
Title: A Sword From Dirac Sea
Tags: Roddie Ari-chan Euclidean Sallad4ever
BPM: 145
Filesize: 7408kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ari-Nyan (1.17 stars, 77 notes)
  2. Kiddo's Hard (4.61 stars, 339 notes)
  3. Roddie's Intense (4.95 stars, 598 notes)
  4. Sallad's Normal (3.4 stars, 231 notes)
Download: DystopiaGround - A Sword From Dirac Sea
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Hello!

WIP Ready for mod

forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=30109

Thanks to Roddie and Ari-chan for their diffs

I thank S I R I R U for the skin stuff ~
Last edited by Kiddo-Kun , edited 12 times in total.
happy30
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Offset 523 (+5)

go go! :3
Roddie
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Roddie
★~

SPOILER
And post #300. 8-)

Edit: You forgot to add Roddie in the Tags. :P
Kiddo-Kun
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Roddie wrote:

★~

SPOILER
And post #300. 8-)

Edit: You forgot to add Roddie in the Tags. :P

Thanks for the reminder Roddie

Edit: Lol Congrats

Edit2: Thanks for the Offset happy :3
Haneii
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Haneii
~Hard~
00:14:178 (1,2,3,4) – make it look the same as 00:12:936 (3,4,5)?
00:55:143 (1) – have this spinner start at 00:54:936 and end at 00:55:867
00:56:798 – add a note here

~Roddie's Intense ~
nothing



~Twinkle twinkle little star ~
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun

Haneii wrote:

~Hard~
00:14:178 (1,2,3,4) – make it look the same as 00:12:936 (3,4,5)? Sure, why not?
00:55:143 (1) – have this spinner start at 00:54:936 and end at 00:55:867 That's weird, but I ended up changing the spinner in some other way
00:56:798 – add a note here Sure

~Roddie's Intense ~
nothing Cool



~Twinkle twinkle little star ~
Thanks~
Fapfrit
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Fapfrit
Moestar~ from Famfrit :3
Ari-chan_old
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Ari-chan_old
~

Download: DystopiaGround - Dirac no Umi yori Tsurugi o (Death_the_kid) [Ari-Nyan].osu
Kiddo-Kun
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Thanks ^_^

Edit: I lol'ed at the 1 star
Alace
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Alace
offset +5ms (move all timing lines and resnap all notes)
delete the silly .osb and full submit
Roddie's Intense is pretty nice
Roddie
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Roddie

Alace wrote:

Roddie's Intense is pretty nice
Ahhh!!!! :o

Thanks, Alace! >~<
Dangaard
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Dangaard
I like it
Roddie
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Roddie

Dangaard wrote:

I like it
Thanks, Dan! 8-)
Kiddo-Kun
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^_^ Thanks guys
James2250
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Offset is different on Hard than the other 2 difficulties, make sure they are all the same and resnap
Start kiai time at 00:56:803 on white tick, not blue tick

Ari-Nyan:
why does this have a lead-in time
00:14:183 (2) - new combo
00:26:390 (4) - move to 00:26:493

Hard:
02:37:764 - this is a longggg break, I would map some of it

Roddie's Intense:
why does this have a lead-in time
nice

*star*
NatsumeRin
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Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Ari-Nyan]
slider tick rate: 1 , will sound better. (also some more scores XD)
00:10:252 (3,4) - change to a slider since it's a Easy.
00:17:079 (5) - ...Angel Beats...?
00:23:700 (3,4,5) - better not to stack these notes, hard to read for newbies.
01:08:803 (1) - finish
02:05:493 (1) - too short for beginners. no.
02:16:252 (3) - finish at the end.

[Hard]
00:27:010 (1) - finish.
00:27:424 (2,5) - add whistle at the reverse.
00:43:562 (1) - align with (4)?
01:02:183 (2) - miss a clap?
01:22:459 (4) - make it a 3/4 slider sounds better imo.
01:59:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - ..

02:04:665 (1,2,3) - this fits the song better i guess

02:46:045 (1,2,3,4) - these are put a little random...? i guess you should turn on grid snap for this part.

[Roddie's Intense]
slider tick rate:0.5. 2 is hell if you use many 3/4 sliders, also HP-1?
00:38:700 (1,2,3) - these sounds strange.
01:06:734 (1,2,3,4) - just think it's better not to stack them, looks not so good.
01:08:803 (5,6,7,8...) - this curve... could be better.
01:59:493 - add a note?
02:00:528 (5) - this note looks strange. why not keep the shape...
02:16:252 (1,2,3,4) - same problem. and also i hate copy & paste ._.
02:18:528 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
02:31:769 (12) - make it stack with 9, otherwise the jump is a bit too sudden.
02:36:734 (2,3) - spacing.
03:14:803 (8) - 1 grid down+ 1grid left is a better position.

Roddie
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Roddie

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Roddie's Intense]
slider tick rate:0.5. 2 is hell if you use many 3/4 sliders, also HP-1? Fixed, but not the HP. :3
00:38:700 (1,2,3) - these sounds strange. No. ._.
01:06:734 (1,2,3,4) - just think it's better not to stack them, looks not so good. It's fine.
01:08:803 (5,6,7,8...) - this curve... could be better. Fixed.
01:59:493 - add a note? No. ._.
02:00:528 (5) - this note looks strange. why not keep the shape... Fixed.
02:16:252 (1,2,3,4) - same problem. and also i hate copy & paste ._. I will leave it as that. Besides, its only one copy & paste that I did. :P
02:18:528 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ Fixed.
02:31:769 (12) - make it stack with 9, otherwise the jump is a bit too sudden. Nah.
02:36:734 (2,3) - spacing. Fixed.
03:14:803 (8) - 1 grid down+ 1grid left is a better position. Fixed.
Thanks for the mod, Rin! :)

Download: DystopiaGround - Dirac no Umi yori Tsurugi o (Death_the_kid) [Roddie's Intense].osu
Krisom
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General-
Add another diff (Normal) to reduce the gap between the easiest one and Hard

Ari-Nyan-
00:40:517 - Such a weird placed break
00:56:803 (1) - Add a finish at the start
01:03:424 (1) - ^
02:07:976 (1) - Remkove the new combo
02:19:562 - Make the last kiai time end here

Hard-
IRC mod

Roddie's-
01:01:769 (1,2,3,4) - Suprised by the fact that this isn't a jump~
02:11:286 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:35:183 (5,6) - Not stacked correctly under (5)'s end. You may want to move it or stack it manually.
02:40:148 (2,3) - Not stacked correctly under (1)'s end. You may want to move it or stack it manually.
02:40:976 (4,5) - Not stacked correctly under (3)'s end. You may want to move it or stack it manually.
03:04:665 (7) - New combo?
Hmm, I smell some copy pasta~, though it fits, I'd like you to use it with some symmetry the next time.

Good job everyone!

Star~
Roddie
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Krisom wrote:

Roddie's-
01:01:769 (1,2,3,4) - Suprised by the fact that this isn't a jump~ Fixed.
02:11:286 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:35:183 (5,6) - Not stacked correctly under (5)'s end. You may want to move it or stack it manually. I tried. :(
02:40:148 (2,3) - Not stacked correctly under (1)'s end. You may want to move it or stack it manually. ^
02:40:976 (4,5) - Not stacked correctly under (3)'s end. You may want to move it or stack it manually. ^
03:04:665 (7) - New combo? Its fine.
Hmm, I smell some copy pasta~, though it fits, I'd like you to use it with some symmetry the next time. Okay. :roll:
Thanks for the mod, Krisom. 8-)

Download: DystopiaGround - Dirac no Umi yori Tsurugi o (Death_the_kid) [Roddie's Intense].osu
Gabi
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Gabi
Pretty nice mapset ;)
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun
Thanks ^^
Lesjuh
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Lesjuh
Remove .osb file!

Roddie
02:26:390 (1,2,3) - Put some space between these sliders. Makes it easier to read.

That's it!
Roddie
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Roddie

Lesjuh wrote:

Remove .osb file!

Roddie
02:26:390 (1,2,3) - Put some space between these sliders. Makes it easier to read. Fixed.

That's it!
Thanks.

Download: DystopiaGround - Dirac no Umi yori Tsurugi o (Death_the_kid) [Roddie's Intense].osu
thepianist
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thepianist
Ari-Nyan
Is fine :3

Hard
00:53:493 (5) - Center between 4, which should be more symmetrical? :3
01:15:010 (1) - Up the slider speed a bit (ie .7x?)
01:51:424 (7) - Align with 6
03:18:321 (3) - Make this curvy :3

Intense
Oh gosh 00:03:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) should be volume hitsounded to gradually increase, fade away, and increase again <3 Hahahaha
02:57:631 (1) - Consider:
SPOILER

Wow nice job :3
*star
Lilac
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Lilac
Eeeyyy, first mod with these colour system things.

[Ari-nyan]
Dat difficulty name. Also, those whistle slides that you use don't seem to work very well. It hurt my ears more than anything. D:

00:17:079 (5) - I tried to shape it better...
00:48:528 (2,3) - The distance here is...pretty big.
02:05:493 (1) - As much as I love two spinners in a row, this doesn't seem to fit well and it's also quite hard to play.

[Hard]
IRC Modded by request.

[Roddie's Insane]
Pretty good. I thought this was going to be a horrible difficulty.

02:46:045 (1,2,3) - Is that supposed to be offcenter?

Other than that, pretty good. Star.
hawkzor
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hawkzor
great maps !

Roddie
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thepianist wrote:

Intense
Oh gosh 00:03:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) should be volume hitsounded to gradually increase, fade away, and increase again <3 Hahahaha Good thinking. Fixed.
02:57:631 (1) - Consider: Nah. Its fine.
SPOILER

MarioBros777 wrote:

[Roddie's Insane]
Pretty good. I thought this was going to be a horrible difficulty. OH WOW. Thanks. :P

02:46:045 (1,2,3) - Is that supposed to be offcenter? Fixed.
Thanks for the mod, you two! 8-)

Download: DystopiaGround - Dirac no Umi yori Tsurugi o (Death_the_kid) [Roddie's Intense].osu
IceBeam
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IceBeam
[Ari-Nyan]
00:26:596 (4) - Move this note to previous blue tick(00:26:493).
00:30:114 (3) - There's a beat,and my ears cannot unhear it.Add a note?
00:34:872 (2) - Add a note.
00:45:217 (1) - I'd finish this spinner at 00:46:459 and added 2 notes at 00:46:872 and 00:47:286.Cause atm it's like smth is missing.
00:50:596 (3) - Lyrics,beats..what else do you need to add a note? Dx
00:53:079 (5) - ^
01:30:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well,it fits with beats,but not with the rhytm and music,tbh.
02:05:493 (1) - This spinner is too sudden and short for beginner players.
Also,I'd add like tonns of notes to it,but it's yours.Fine otherwise.

[Hard]
00:36:941 (5) - Spacing is uneven.
02:21:217 - Um,silence it?

[Roddie]
Haha,I loled at your sig,appreciated.
Nice work with beats,I like it.
01:46:148 (2) - Remove it,it sounds better w/o it.Moreover it's rough to me and starting new rhytm with such an unexpected stream is blah.
02:27:941 (1) - Move to 02:27:838.

Nice work!
Star~
Roddie
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Roddie

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Roddie]
Haha,I loled at your sig,appreciated.Yes. 8-)
Nice work with beats,I like it.
01:46:148 (2) - Remove it,it sounds better w/o it.Moreover it's rough to me and starting new rhytm with such an unexpected stream is blah. Fixed.
02:27:941 (1) - Move to 02:27:838.No. ._. Its placed on the guitar part and I like it there.
Thanks for the mod, Kangaroo. ;)

Oh and a Kudosu star for me! 8-)

Download: DystopiaGround - Dirac no Umi yori Tsurugi o (Death_the_kid) [Roddie's Intense].osu
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Add the album title, Euclidean, to the tags.
Note (for others): A variable bit-rate was used to encode this song, and the average bit-rate is under 256kbps (rankable).

Ari-Nyan:
Normal mod:
....01:10:459(break) -Why does the part of the song with the strongest vocals not get mapped? It makes very little sense to me
02:03:424 (1,1) - I agree with MarioBros777. These double spinners do not work

Combo mod:
00:37:355 (3) - new combo for the new line of lyrics?
01:00:114 (4) - ^
01:07:148 (3) - ^

Death_the_kid:
Normal mod:
01:42:734 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Going around this diamond twice was a little boring
02:07:976 (1) - With the 300 from the 2, this area looks a little messy, so I advise moving this note
02:46:045 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - more diamonds........ (Thinking about it some more, there were also 4 trapezoid patterns in the song. I guess try to think of some more idea for patterns, please)
03:00:941 (1) - same as 02:07:976 (1)

Combo mod:
01:11:700 (4,7) - new combo to follow the lyrics since you have favored shorter combos throughout the song so far (or you could alternatively add combos in the same way you did in the second part of the song that contains this style of singing)
02:51:010 (6) - new combo for the guitar (I am not exactly sure what instrument it is)?
02:55:976 (4) - new combo to follow the lyrics?

Roddie's Intense:
Normal mod: (I really don't like all these stacks, esp since the stacks keep changing in timing intervals)
00:13:562 (4,1) - This antijump feels so weird when the beat is so strong
00:27:321 - if you are following vocals, y is there no beat here?
02:31:976 (1) - I could not hear anything in the music to suggest a jump this large and unexpected

This diff was probably my least favorite, mostly because of the stacks.

=============================
Overall nice mapset. Not too many technical errors, so here is your star.
Roddie
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Roddie

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Roddie's Intense:
Normal mod: (I really don't like all these stacks, esp since the stacks keep changing in timing intervals) I disagree. It plays fine the way it is. I asked the other MAT members to check and its fine.
00:13:562 (4,1) - This antijump feels so weird when the beat is so strong Fixed a bit.
00:27:321 - if you are following vocals, y is there no beat here? Fixed.
02:31:976 (1) - I could not hear anything in the music to suggest a jump this large and unexpected Rin said the same thing, but I'll take it as a consideration. If someone says the same thing again, I'll do something about it.

This diff was probably my least favorite, mostly because of the stacks. Ugh....
Thanks.

Download: DystopiaGround - Dirac no Umi yori Tsurugi o (Death_the_kid) [Roddie's Intense].osu
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Garven
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Garven
As per your request:

[Skin]
Think you could make the hitcircleoverlay not as fuzzy? It kind of clashes with the slidertracks. :/

[Ari-Nyan]
It'd be nice if you could map to the end like the other difficulties.
00:17:079 (5) - New combo? Love this slider shape btw
00:26:493 (4,5) - I wouldn't recommend putting this kid of rhythm as a stack on the easiest difficulty. I'd space them out so it's easier to read and tell that a different rhythm is coming.
00:56:803 (1) - Really soon after a short spinner on the easiest difficulty... It may be best to map through the spinner.
01:10:252 - This break doesn't feel right to me. It's in the middle of the chorus when the player should be getting pumped up, not kicking back for a rest. It also makes the pacing bad when you have the other long break right after a short playing spurt.
Other than the pacing issues and not mapping to where everyone else mapped to, really nice difficulty.

[Hard]
02:21:217 - Did you mean to turn kiai off here?
02:47:286 (4) - Align this with the 2
This was mapped quite cleanly. Good job!

[Roddie's Intense]
01:16:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This part wasn't very visually appealing since it kind of got all clustered up in the center there.
01:48:114 (4) - Maybe try to make this more symmetrical? It's kinda lopsided as it.

Really nice mapset here. Just wish the easy was a bit more conformed to the rest of the set, hehe.
happy30
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happy30
English title: A Sword From Dirac Sea
:P
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun
Thanks ^&^
Roddie
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Roddie

Garven wrote:

[Roddie's Intense]
01:16:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This part wasn't very visually appealing since it kind of got all clustered up in the center there. *Sigh* Fixed.
01:48:114 (4) - Maybe try to make this more symmetrical? It's kinda lopsided as it. Fixed.
Thank you.

Oh, I did put some hitsounds that I missed. Silly me. :roll:

I'm surprised no one has told me about it.

Download: DystopiaGround - A Sword From Dirac Sea (Death_the_kid) [Roddie's Intense].osu
Dangaard
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Dangaard
Oh man, I was really shocked when I updated the map today (referring to Roddie's diff). The intuitive gameplay and flow is gone partly, especially on some stacks (or the remains of the stacks). Each modder pointed out something different and now it's mixed up somehow, really, don't you know: too many cooks spoil the broth!
>:(
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun

Dangaard wrote:

Oh man, I was really shocked when I updated the map today (referring to Roddie's diff). The intuitive gameplay and flow is gone partly, especially on some stacks (or the remains of the stacks). Each modder pointed out something different and now it's mixed up somehow, really, don't you know: too many cooks spoil the broth!
>:(
....hmmmm.... I should rank this before I reallly screw up the broth -.-
Verdisphena
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Verdisphena
Nice song :3
Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever
I'm still going to update the hitsound, but the notes placement are done :3

Download: DystopiaGround - A Sword From Dirac Sea (Death_the_kid) [Sallad's Normal].osu

Edit: whoops the star xD
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun
Filling the diff gap ^
Thanks Sallad :3
Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever
Finish the hitsound :D
Download: 19329 DystopiaGround - A Sword From Dirac Sea.rar
Please full submit :3

Good Luck getting this ranked :)
I have to finish my part of the project too xD
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Roddie ask me to check his diff, but I'll mod the entire map now that I'm here n.nU

Roddie's Intense
00:10:252 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i missed this anti jumps ;_; are kinda confusing to me, that's probably cuz I'm a bad player n.nU
01:36:424 (1) - start in next white tick
02:47:493 - add note here?
02:50:803 - ^

Kiddo's Hard
00:17:079 (5,6) - too close together

Sallad's Normal
00:49:355 (5) - how about end this in the next white tick

Ari-Nyan
00:21:010 (1,2) - this sliders i feel it out of rhythm
00:56:803 (1) - too fast after the spinner imo
01:34:872 (1) - you could start this spinner before to fill that blank space
01:57:217 (1) - add a repeat

star~
Roddie
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Roddie

Lizbeth wrote:

Roddie ask me to check his diff, but I'll mod the entire map now that I'm here n.nU

Roddie's Intense
00:10:252 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i missed this anti jumps ;_; are kinda confusing to me, that's probably cuz I'm a bad player n.nU ._.
01:36:424 (1) - start in next white tick Fixed.
02:47:493 - add note here? No. :(
02:50:803 - ^ Yes. :)
Thanks, Liz. <3

Download: DystopiaGround - A Sword From Dirac Sea (Death_the_kid) [Roddie's Intense].osu
Doomsday
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Doomsday
Hey again o/

  1. Timing looks good
[ARI-CHAN] (Rename to "Ari-Chan's Easy? Since the other difficulty names have Normal/Hard/Intense by them)

Finally, an interesting easy that isn't all straight horizontal/vertical sliders :D. Good stuff

Map this to the end of the song? like the other difficulties do. This one feels incomplete since it cuts the song short.

00:27:010 (1,2) - Stack these on the end of the previous slider? Since in an easy like this, this little gap might throw people off. Stacking them would make it more managable. Don't forget to sort spacing accordingly if you do this.
00:55:148 (1) - Remove this spinner? With that slider being so close to this spinner, and this being a pretty short spinner (Too short for an easy, maybe). It might be best to just leave a little break here, or put something else here instead.

[SALLAD'S NORMAL]

Some pretty little sliders in this one. Pretty fun too.

Turn HP drain up by one notch?

01:37:562 (4,5,6) - Replace these with one repeating slider, like what you did just after this? I just think that that little bit is a little too intense. Maybe it's just me.

[KIDDO'S HARD]

Not too adventurous as a map, but it's solid, so I can't knock too many marks off.

00:40:045 (1) - Remove this beat? On any difficulty, a beat this sudden after a spinner would throw you off, even on an Insane. It's not too major, but I think it would fit better without it.

[RODDIE'S INTENSE]

Doesn't look like much, but it was surprisingly fun.

Turn tickrate up to 1? The rest of the difficulties use Tickrate 1, while this one was 0.5. Tickrate 0.5 is too low anyways.

00:26:183 (1,2,3) - Space these closer together? Since even though they are 2/3 away from each other, closer than the beats just before, but they are spaced further, which is pretty confusing. It confused me when I played through it, so could you space these a bit closer together so it is clearer?

Nice little map you've got going here, even though I think only one of the four difficulties are actually yours. Heh. It's interesting, well made, and pretty fun, so you're onto a winner here. Nice work :)

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Roddie
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Roddie

Doomsday wrote:

[RODDIE'S INTENSE]

Doesn't look like much, but it was surprisingly fun.

Turn tickrate up to 1? The rest of the difficulties use Tickrate 1, while this one was 0.5. Tickrate 0.5 is too low anyways.

00:26:183 (1,2,3) - Space these closer together? Since even though they are 2/3 away from each other, closer than the beats just before, but they are spaced further, which is pretty confusing. It confused me when I played through it, so could you space these a bit closer together so it is clearer?

All fixed.
Thanks!

Download: DystopiaGround - A Sword From Dirac Sea (Death_the_kid) [Roddie's Intense].osu
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun

Doomsday wrote:

00:40:045 (1) - Remove this beat? On any difficulty, a beat this sudden after a spinner would throw you off, even on an Insane. It's not too major, but I think it would fit better without it.
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Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever

Doomsday wrote:

[SALLAD'S NORMAL]

Some pretty little sliders in this one. Pretty fun too.

Turn HP drain up by one notch? I will let it stays for now

01:37:562 (4,5,6) - Replace these with one repeating slider, like what you did just after this? I just think that that little bit is a little too intense. Maybe it's just me. I intended for this part to have increased pace therefore I used 3 notes. So I change 01:44:183 (3) into 3 notes and let 01:40:872 (3) stays as slider
Download: DystopiaGround - A Sword From Dirac Sea (Death_the_kid) [Sallad's Normal].osu

Plz add my name on the tags xD
thx for the mod Dooms
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun
Sure thing Sallad ^_^
Alace
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Alace
yo it`s me again
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claps on the blue ticks don`t sound really good
00:57:631 (2) - like this, they sound abit too hurry
i suggest to remove claps like this
Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever
sorry for the wait
remove them all
Download: DystopiaGround - A Sword From Dirac Sea (Death_the_kid) [Sallad's Normal].osu
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