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MillhioreF wrote:

Heya! I still don't think this map is as good as it could be, especially A's Insane. Some especially troubling spots are as follows.

[A's Insane]
- Inconsistent spacing. This is especially notable in areas like 00:22:074 (2,3,1) and 00:26:246 (1,2) where the spacing of the 1/2 notes just cuts in half for the duration of the combo, but is present everywhere in the map.
- Generally sloppy patterns. 00:48:299 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) for example should be entirely remapped with the polygon tool.
- Overmapping. Mostly in repeat sliders - certain places like 00:54:061 (5,6) - are mapped with 1/4 sliders when the music is only 1/2, and 01:10:749 (1) - is a 1/8 slider that's mapped to 1/4 in the music.


[General]
- Please remove "TV Size" from the song title. I haven't been able to find any official source calling this TV Size, and it isn't labeled as such in the ending credits either.
- I feel like your soft-hitclap.wav is a bit too loud and forceful for the music, especially since you're using it all through a generally calm song. This is just a personal preference, but I'd still rather get more opinions on this.
- On a related note I'd recommend upping the volume slightly on your soft-hitnormal too, it's drowned out heavily by the rest of the hitsounds.

[Doyak's Easy]
- Widescreen storyboard support is enabled on this difficulty, but none of the others. Please disable it for mapset consistency.
- It feels weird having a note at 01:07:173 but not at 01:08:763. I'd recommend deleting 01:07:173 (2) - and remapping the sliders around it somewhat, but it's up to you.

[Normal]
- The new combos at the beginning are strange since they follow the vocals instead of the instruments. I'd recommend changing it so there's an NC on every downbeat like the rest of the map.

[Hard]
Same NC weirdness at the start as in Normal.
I also strongly recommend removing the NC from 01:26:445 (1) and 01:28:233 (1) and putting one on either 01:27:239 (3) or 01:27:438 (5).

[Light Insane]
01:04:789 (2) - I recommend evening out the spacing on this note, it's in a pretty weird spot.
01:13:729 (3,1,2,3) - This plays really weirdly, I'd suggest either shortening 01:13:729 (3) to the red tick or extending it to the white tick and deleting 01:14:127 (1).
01:15:120 (5) - A little nazi thing, but this note is spaced slightly weirdly :P

[A's Insane]
00:11:147 (3,4) - These don't seem to be mapped to anything in the music at all. Also, it's a bit weird how you gave this part high spacing, but then only mapped a couple of slow, low spacing repeat sliders the next 2 times that rhythm repeats. Although slightly overmap, the triplet is a small build up to the sliders that start on the song's strong notes. The low spacing repeat sliders are to emphasize the same notes while slowing down as before the next part in the music, idk it just felt natural.
00:13:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I understand what you're trying to do here (increasing distance spacing as the music intensifies) but IMO it doesn't look very good, and the flow between 00:13:729 (2,3) isn't very good either. It's probably decent enough that you don't really have to change it, but I'd recommend at least moving 00:14:127 (3,4,5) higher. Um, I see. I changed the single notes to a 1/4 slider, should transition better.
00:22:074 (2,3,1) - I got a second opinion on this and it's probably all right after all.
Either 00:24:458 (5) or 00:25:054 (6) should have an NC instead of 00:25:650 (1) to match your NC scheme. Okay.
00:26:246 (1,2) - This is still a pretty jarring and unnecessary spacing drop, though. I'd recommend to Ctrl+J on 00:26:842 (2,3,4,5) - and then move it back upwards. Alright, it seems fine too I guess, changed some patterns around to fit the change.
00:31:213 (2,3) - I see what you're doing here by putting a circle on the start of the vocal instead of on the instrument, but the same early vocal happens during 00:33:200 (3) and you continue to follow the instrument. Please change one or the other of these for the sake of consistency. Changed the slider to a triplet, I think it goes well both ways now.
00:33:597 (4,5,6) - This caught me off guard because the rest of the streams thus far have been compressed, yet this triple isn't (and in a much calmer section of the song too). Please consider compressing it too, or even turning it into a stack on top of the slider. I didn't really think it'd be a problem, but I don't really have any objections on compressing it, had to change the pattern a bit around.
00:44:127 (1,2) and 00:47:306 (1,2) - Every other time there's a note stacked under a sliderend, there's a 1/4 time gap between them, but these two have a 1/2 gap, which is confusing for reading. I strongly suggest to change the pattern here somewhat to make it clear when the notes are. (Also, 00:47:902 (2) isn't stacked quite perfectly, but myeh.) The stacking is kinda part of the music, it's not like the music is identical and I'm just being incosistent for no reason.
00:48:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I still recommend remapping this slightly so it looks nice, but I guess it's probably fine as is if you're too lazy for that. Rotated, moved, fixed, should look better.
00:54:061 (5,6) - There is a faint instrument here after all. It's a bit weird because the instrument is still playing at 00:53:564 despite there not being a note here, but that's probably okay. V
00:59:225 (4,5) - I don't really like the spacing gap here since there's no musical justification for it, but I guess it plays well enough. The music transitions into the chorus with the triplet, so I think it is justified.
01:06:478 (4) and 01:08:067 (4) - There's no music playing on these sliderheads at all. I am following vocals here. However, I removed the claps on the heads.
01:10:749 (1) - This is absolutely a 1/4 rhythm in the music and not a 1/8 one, I've listened to it many times and still uphold my decision on that. Alright I guess, I'd prefer to avoid any possible DQs.
01:22:670 (5) - This one has 1/8 in the background so it's fine to keep though, just pointing it out.
01:27:239 (1,2,3) - Another weirdly uncompressed stream. I'd also recommend getting rid of the NCs on 01:27:239 (1) and 01:28:829 (1) entirely for consistency with the rest of the map. Compressed it a bit and removed NCs.

I think that's about it! Most of the mapset looks ready to go, but I feel like a bit more care and polish should be put into the highest difficulty of this mapset before it's ready for ranking.
Best of luck, I do love the song and hope this is ranked quickly! Call me back for a bubble once you've taken care of everything.
Although almost everything seems subjective, I've accepted some stuff because I prefer avoiding any further DQs, evne though I don't feel like they're a big change whatsoever.

Thanks.

osu file format v14

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Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:[Sc4v4ng3r]
Version:A's Insane
Source:DOG DAYS
Tags:ドッグデイズ Ending ED tv_size Doyak Avishay
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MillhioreF wrote:

[Doyak's Easy]
- Widescreen storyboard support is enabled on this difficulty, but none of the others. Please disable it for mapset consistency. I'll let [Sc4v4ng3r] to fix it, but wow, no modders have pointed that out still.
- It feels weird having a note at 01:07:173 but not at 01:08:763. I'd recommend deleting 01:07:173 (2) - and remapping the sliders around it somewhat, but it's up to you. I don't think it's weird, since it's a common thing to have the 4th beat empty on Easy, and also 01:05:981 (1,2,3) - these whole section have some vocal, while there is a gap between 01:08:365 - and 01:09:160 - , therefore, I think it's good to un-emphasize 01:08:763 -
Thanks for your mod!

@[Sc4v4ng3r]: Please turn Widescreen Support OFF on my diff, thanks!
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Ok so I'm not sure if I should give a kudos, but gave it anyways since it is a mod anyway.
Thanks everyone, guess I'll have to make it re-ranked ;-;

MillhioreF wrote:

Heya! I still don't think this map is as good as it could be, especially A's Insane. Some especially troubling spots are as follows.

[A's Insane]
- Inconsistent spacing. This is especially notable in areas like 00:22:074 (2,3,1) and 00:26:246 (1,2) where the spacing of the 1/2 notes just cuts in half for the duration of the combo, but is present everywhere in the map.
- Generally sloppy patterns. 00:48:299 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) for example should be entirely remapped with the polygon tool.
- Overmapping. Mostly in repeat sliders - certain places like 00:54:061 (5,6) - are mapped with 1/4 sliders when the music is only 1/2, and 01:10:749 (1) - is a 1/8 slider that's mapped to 1/4 in the music.


[General]
- Please remove "TV Size" from the song title. I haven't been able to find any official source calling this TV Size, and it isn't labeled as such in the ending credits either. Alright since I am not good at metadata stuffs, removed. Although not really sure as the recently ranked mania mapset has "TV Size" in its Title...
- I feel like your soft-hitclap.wav is a bit too loud and forceful for the music, especially since you're using it all through a generally calm song. This is just a personal preference, but I'd still rather get more opinions on this. Hmm okay then, reduced the volume by a little.
- On a related note I'd recommend upping the volume slightly on your soft-hitnormal too, it's drowned out heavily by the rest of the hitsounds. Okay ;-; I guess it wasn't loud enough...

[Normal]
- The new combos at the beginning are strange since they follow the vocals instead of the instruments. I'd recommend changing it so there's an NC on every downbeat like the rest of the map. Lol I just noticed that o.o Consider it done.

[Hard]
Same NC weirdness at the start as in Normal. Okay ;-;
I also strongly recommend removing the NC from 01:26:445 (1) and 01:28:233 (1) and putting one on either 01:27:239 (3) or 01:27:438 (5). Yea good catch, removed all mentioned NCs and placed one at (3).

[Light Insane]
01:04:789 (2) - I recommend evening out the spacing on this note, it's in a pretty weird spot. Well okay was thinking about this before the qualify too. Applied.
01:13:729 (3,1,2,3) - This plays really weirdly, I'd suggest either shortening 01:13:729 (3) to the red tick or extending it to the white tick and deleting 01:14:127 (1). Well okay, it was originally mapped out the way you've suggested me :o Applied.
01:15:120 (5) - A little nazi thing, but this note is spaced slightly weirdly :PLol I didn't notice that o.o Fixed.

I think that's about it! Most of the mapset looks ready to go, but I feel like a bit more care and polish should be put into the highest difficulty of this mapset before it's ready for ranking.
Best of luck, I do love the song and hope this is ranked quickly! Call me back for a bubble once you've taken care of everything.
Thanks for the mod :D Re-dl for the new hitsound files. Updated with Avishay's update.

Doyak wrote:

@[Sc4v4ng3r]: Please turn Widescreen Support OFF on my diff, thanks!
Yea did that too.
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@MillhioreF: http://www.starchild.co.jp/artist/horie/sp/disco/
http://www.dogdays.tv/1st/

I think "ドッグデイズ " is add to source than DOG DAY!

No KDS~ and good luck for reranked~
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gokugohan12468 wrote:

@MillhioreF: http://www.starchild.co.jp/artist/horie/sp/disco/
http://www.dogdays.tv/1st/

I think "ドッグデイズ " is add to source than DOG DAY!

No KDS~ and good luck for reranked~
For the source, I'm pretty sure it should be DOG DAYS rather than the kanji, they kinda use the English one over the kanji one in the site, even on the discography of Yui Horie.
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About the metadata: I think nobody did any close enough checking on the Mania mapset, because there's absolutely no "(TV Size)" anywhere on any official discographies. So I think excluding it altogether is correct according to the ranking criteria. DOG DAYS is the correct source too, so no worries about that.


The mapset looks just about ready now! I'd just like to ask for a couple more clarifications from Avishay on their diff first.

00:27:438 (4,5) - I think this'd flow better if you did a Ctrl+G so (4) is on the bottom.
00:33:597 (6,7,8) - Is there a reason that this is a triple? I don't hear anything in the music at 00:33:696 (7) at all.
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MillhioreF wrote:

About the metadata: I think nobody did any close enough checking on the Mania mapset, because there's absolutely no "(TV Size)" anywhere on any official discographies. So I think excluding it altogether is correct according to the ranking criteria. DOG DAYS is the correct source too, so no worries about that.


The mapset looks just about ready now! I'd just like to ask for a couple more clarifications from Avishay on their diff first.

00:27:438 (4,5) - I think this'd flow better if you did a Ctrl+G so (4) is on the bottom. Sure, seems alright.
00:33:597 (6,7,8) - Is there a reason that this is a triple? I don't hear anything in the music at 00:33:696 (7) at all. You are wrong.. It is definitely a triplet, I am 100% sure about this.
I think giving the whole code for the diff is just pointless, so please ctrl+g 4 and 5 as stated on Millhiore's post.

Also, why do you refer to me as 'their'? I am one person lol.
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Done and updated~ Now waiting for the bubble.
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Sorry about that. "Their" is a gender-neutral pronoun, which I use since people get offended if I say "his" when they're actually female or the other way around. But sometimes you just can't win. :o

Anyway, the issues have been cleared up now, and I'm happy to rebubble this map~
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Let's go again~!
Will be calling back a BN.
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Avishay's diff misses video
I'll repair bubble afterwards (so JBH or millhi can qualify)
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well I don't like videos anyway.
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Lol every single time ;-; Added and updated.
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k
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All right, let's go~!
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Yea lets go~ Hopefully no further DQs ;-;
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Gratz!
Go Millhi!
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Regrats
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[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Yea lets go~ Hopefully no further DQs ;-;
Regrats (:
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Baraatje123 wrote:

Gratz!
Go Millhi!

-Hakurei- wrote:

Regrats

JBHyperion wrote:

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Yea lets go~ Hopefully no further DQs ;-;
Regrats (:
Thanks guys :D
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