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Faylan - Dark Side of the Light

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Joon
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Joon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 10월 4일 월요일 at 오후 7:22:17

Artist: Faylan
Title: Dark Side of the Light
Source: Ga-Rei Zero
BPM: 153
Filesize: 3593kb
Play Time: 02:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.42 stars, 238 notes)
  2. Insane (4.96 stars, 378 notes)
  3. Normal (2.02 stars, 159 notes)
Download: Faylan - Dark Side of the Light
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
3rd beatmap
(my last map.. can't anymore)

all diff done.

Thx Fight69 , Leorda , James2250 , wmfchris , LesTrucsRose , Sakura Hana , Garven
KRZY , SadKangaroo , Mafiamaster , Alace

Enjoy~ :)
Last edited by Joon , edited 71 times in total.
chocomint
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
202 posts
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chocomint
star _~
Shana
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Shana
ㄱ;기기기기기기기기ㄱ;기기기기기기기기
phj02670267
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phj02670267
Give stars!
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
인센보다 쉬운데 ㅡㅡ;
not done

Download: Faylan - Dark side of the Light (hujune) [hutka's Hard].osu
Tomoka Rin
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Tomoka Rin
star~
KanaRin
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KanaRin
sTARRRRRRRRRRR!!
<3 hujune
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
and also evil star+
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
-maJu
nice map.

★
Fight69
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Joined January 2010
Fight69
Hi there o/

If something is in bold, you MUST fix it
Everything else are just suggestions

[Normal]

00:04:901 (2) - New combo
00:09:607 (1,2) - Try to curve them a bit better (something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25300 )
00:20:979 (1) - Align with 00:20:195 (5)
00:39:411 (1) - This circle appear too fast after the spinner for a normal !
01:07:058 (2) - New combo
01:32:352 (1) - This circle appear too fast after the spinner for a normal !
01:41:960 (x) - Add a circle
01:38:038 (1) - A bit short, don't you think ?
01:59:411 (1) - ^
02:07:254 (1) - This circle appear too fast after the spinner for a normal !

[Hard]

00:04:901 (2) - New combo
01:48:430 (3) - New combo

[Insane]

00:04:901 (2) - New combo
01:08:430 (5) - No new combo ?
01:48:430 (3) - New combo

Well...you just have to fix some few spinners on Normal, but it's not bad : ~Star
Faust
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Faust
"3rd Beatmap"*

Not 3nd beatmap. lol
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Joon

Fight69 wrote:

Hi there o/

If something is in bold, you MUST fix it
Everything else are just suggestions

[Normal]

00:04:901 (2) - New combo
00:09:607 (1,2) - Try to curve them a bit better (something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25300 )
00:20:979 (1) - Align with 00:20:195 (5)
00:39:411 (1) - This circle appear too fast after the spinner for a normal !
01:07:058 (2) - New combo
01:32:352 (1) - This circle appear too fast after the spinner for a normal !
01:41:960 (x) - Add a circle
01:38:038 (1) - A bit short, don't you think ?
01:59:411 (1) - ^
02:07:254 (1) - This circle appear too fast after the spinner for a normal !

[Hard]

00:04:901 (2) - New combo
01:48:430 (3) - New combo

[Insane]

00:04:901 (2) - New combo
01:08:430 (5) - No new combo ?
01:48:430 (3) - New combo

Well...you just have to fix some few spinners on Normal, but it's not bad : ~Star
Normal nice~ all fix done. kudous~

"3rd Beatmap"*

Not 3nd beatmap. lol
Ha ha ;) Thx
Faust
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Faust
"Welcome Modding now!"*

lulz.
Joon
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Topic Starter
Joon

Faust wrote:

"Welcome Modding now!"*

lulz.
:o GJ
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Annyeonghaseyo

[Normal]
00:11:175 (2) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25693
00:17:058 (1) - Can you replace this slider into 2 circle? It's waay too confusing when I test it
00:23:332 (1) - ^
00:23:332 (1) - Finish at end is not fit, IMO
00:26:469 (5) - Perhaps, allign with 4? I kinda don't like overlapping slider, though
00:45:293 (1) - End at 00:46:273? I guess this slider is following vocal, like 00:46:862 (3)
00:48:822 (1,2,3,4) - Make a square pattern?
01:53:920 (4) - Move 1 grid up?
01:54:705 (1) - Try using 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor and place the repeating slider at blue tick and end of slider end at red tick
01:56:273 (1) - ^
01:57:842 (1) - ^
01:59:411 (3) - New combo? Since the pattern change?
02:00:979 (1) - Remove 1 repeating slider, use 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor and place the repeating slider at blue tick. So this slider is fit at music
02:02:548 (1) - ^
02:04:116 (1) - ^
02:21:371 (6) - Allign with 02:19:803 (2)?

[Hard]
00:11:175 (3) - New combo?
00:28:822 (7) - Clap?
01:23:332 (5) - New combo, since the pattern are change
01:42:156 (x) - Perhaps, insert break time here? Since this space are too long?
01:46:077 (x) - ^
02:26:077 (3) - New combo? Since the pattern change?

[Insane]
00:13:332 (1) - Wow, this sound is toooo noisy for me, lower the volume, or else, some player become deaf and you responbile for this (lol)
00:19:018 (6) - New combo?
00:25:292 (6) - ^
00:35:587 (9) - Same concept as 00:13:332 (1)
00:42:548 (8) - New combo, since the pattern are change
00:45:685 (8) - ^
01:04:705 (x) - Perhaps, insert break time here? Since this space are too long?
01:10:979 (x) - ^
01:18:038 (4,5,6) - Move 1 grid down?
01:25:685 (1) - Same concept as 00:13:332 (1)
02:07:254 (1) - A bit too far for me, I guess

Nice song
STAR
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Joon

Leorda wrote:

Annyeonghaseyo

[Normal]
00:11:175 (2) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25693
00:17:058 (1) - Can you replace this slider into 2 circle? It's waay too confusing when I test it
00:23:332 (1) - ^
00:23:332 (1) - Finish at end is not fit, IMO
00:26:469 (5) - Perhaps, allign with 4? I kinda don't like overlapping slider, though
00:45:293 (1) - End at 00:46:273? I guess this slider is following vocal, like 00:46:862 (3)
00:48:822 (1,2,3,4) - Make a square pattern?
01:53:920 (4) - Move 1 grid up?
01:54:705 (1) - Try using 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor and place the repeating slider at blue tick and end of slider end at red tick
01:56:273 (1) - ^
01:57:842 (1) - ^
01:59:411 (3) - New combo? Since the pattern change?
02:00:979 (1) - Remove 1 repeating slider, use 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor and place the repeating slider at blue tick. So this slider is fit at music
02:02:548 (1) - ^
02:04:116 (1) - ^
02:21:371 (6) - Allign with 02:19:803 (2)?

[Hard]
00:11:175 (3) - New combo?
00:28:822 (7) - Clap?
01:23:332 (5) - New combo, since the pattern are change
01:42:156 (x) - Perhaps, insert break time here? Since this space are too long?
01:46:077 (x) - ^
02:26:077 (3) - New combo? Since the pattern change?

[Insane]
00:13:332 (1) - Wow, this sound is toooo noisy for me, lower the volume, or else, some player become deaf and you responbile for this (lol)
00:19:018 (6) - New combo?
00:25:292 (6) - ^
00:35:587 (9) - Same concept as 00:13:332 (1)
00:42:548 (8) - New combo, since the pattern are change
00:45:685 (8) - ^
01:04:705 (x) - Perhaps, insert break time here? Since this space are too long?
01:10:979 (x) - ^
01:18:038 (4,5,6) - Move 1 grid down?
01:25:685 (1) - Same concept as 00:13:332 (1)
02:07:254 (1) - A bit too far for me, I guess

Nice song
STAR
lol good modding.. most fix [maybe all..]
James2250
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James2250
-As far as I know it is "Dark Side of the Light" , I would folllow this thread so you don't make a mistake when changing the title
-Add tags if possible
-Remove countdown from all difficulties
-Add a .5 - 1 second lead-in time

Normal:
00:09:607 (1,2) - make sure these two don't touch
00:18:234 (2,3) - ^
01:20:195 (1,2) - make 2 further away
01:23:332 (1,3) - move 3 further away
01:26:469 (5) - new combo
01:28:234 (1) - remove new combo
01:37:058 (4) - center between 2 and 3
01:40:587 (3,4,5) - spacing error
01:53:332 (3,4) - align
02:15:096 (5,1) - don't overlap
02:21:371 (6,1) - ^
02:32:352 (4) - add note

Hard:
00:16:665 (1) - remove new combo
00:17:450 (7) - new combo
00:19:803 (1) - remove new combo
00:23:332 (1) - remove new combo
00:23:724 (7) - new combo
00:26:077 (1) - remove new combo
00:26:862 (10) - new combo
go through the combos for the rest of the map and try and make them match the music like this~ (don't want a huge list)
00:42:548 (1,2,3,4) - could look better
00:48:822 (1,2,3,4) - make into a diamond shape?
01:36:862 (5,6) - don't really like long repeating sliders
01:39:803 (1,2) - align

Insane:
00:08:038 (1,2,3) - odd spacing
01:35:881 (8) - new combo
01:59:411 (1) - extend by 1/2
02:08:822 (7) - new combo
02:11:960 (7) - ^

*star*
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Joon

James2250 wrote:

-As far as I know it is "Dark Side of the Light" , I would folllow this thread so you don't make a mistake when changing the title
-Add tags if possible
-Remove countdown from all difficulties
-Add a .5 - 1 second lead-in time

Normal:
00:09:607 (1,2) - make sure these two don't touch
00:18:234 (2,3) - ^
01:20:195 (1,2) - make 2 further away
01:23:332 (1,3) - move 3 further away
01:26:469 (5) - new combo
01:28:234 (1) - remove new combo
01:37:058 (4) - center between 2 and 3
01:40:587 (3,4,5) - spacing error
01:53:332 (3,4) - align
02:15:096 (5,1) - don't overlap
02:21:371 (6,1) - ^
02:32:352 (4) - add note

Hard:
00:16:665 (1) - remove new combo
00:17:450 (7) - new combo
00:19:803 (1) - remove new combo
00:23:332 (1) - remove new combo
00:23:724 (7) - new combo
00:26:077 (1) - remove new combo
00:26:862 (10) - new combo
go through the combos for the rest of the map and try and make them match the music like this~ (don't want a huge list)
00:42:548 (1,2,3,4) - could look better
00:48:822 (1,2,3,4) - make into a diamond shape?
01:36:862 (5,6) - don't really like long repeating sliders
01:39:803 (1,2) - align

Insane:
00:08:038 (1,2,3) - odd spacing
01:35:881 (8) - new combo
01:59:411 (1) - extend by 1/2
02:08:822 (7) - new combo
02:11:960 (7) - ^

*star*
ok title fix & all fix
James2250
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James2250
Thread title needs to be fixed too~
(Don't kudosu)
Joon
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Topic Starter
Joon

James2250 wrote:

Thread title needs to be fixed too~
(Don't kudosu)
Thx :D
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[Insane]
0:01:862 (x) ...break after (1) and next combo's (1,2)...? Although it's hard to fail here...
0:42:156 (5,6,7) spacing of (5,6) different from (6,7)
0:52:352 (2,3) spacing
1:16:862 (8,9,10) same as 0:42:156
1:42:352 same as the beginning
1:53:920 (7,8) spacing
just too much 1/8?

[hard]
0:19:999 (8) left 1 grid
0:26:273 (8) right 1 grid
others seems fine~
Joon
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Topic Starter
Joon

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
0:01:862 (x) ...break after (1) and next combo's (1,2)...? Although it's hard to fail here...
0:42:156 (5,6,7) spacing of (5,6) different from (6,7)
0:52:352 (2,3) spacing
1:16:862 (8,9,10) same as 0:42:156
1:42:352 same as the beginning
1:53:920 (7,8) spacing
just too much 1/8?

[hard]
0:19:999 (8) left 1 grid
0:26:273 (8) right 1 grid
others seems fine~
ok.. break time fix & spacing fix
hmm... 1/8 I have to watch more.
LesTrucsRoses
271 posts
Joined July 2010
LesTrucsRoses
[Normal]
SPOILER
00:09:803 (1) - Make this slider start 2 ticks later and make it 2 ticks shorter.
00:45:489 (1) - Make this slider start 2 ticks laterand make it 2 ticks shorter.
01:11:175 - Add a break in here.

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:40:195 (3) - In Grid level 3, move this slider 4 gridspaces upward and 2 gridspaces to the right.
00:40:979 (4) - In Grid level 3, move this slider 2 gridspaces upward and 4 gridspaces to the right.

[Insane]
SPOILER
00:52:744 (4) - Flip this slider vertically, then put it back where it was.
01:26:665 (2) - It's kind of heard to see this beat.
Sakura
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Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Everything here looks ok

[Timing]
02:07:156 - Move this timing section to the next white tick

[Insane]
00:06:469 - Insert break? Hp is going down right here if you dont.
01:41:371 (4) - New combo, your switching patterns here, plus it looks better when you link them like this.
01:46:862 - Insert break here?
01:48:430 (1,2,3) - Would look better if you made a triangle or something with theese.
02:07:254 (1) - Move the middle waypoint so that you cant see a sharp corner at the top of this slider
02:29:214 (1,2,3,4) - Make into a parallelogram? (that is a squarish shape but it can be any rotation)

[Hard]
This plays more like a Normal
00:02:548 - Insert Break?
00:06:165 - ^
01:05:685 - ^
01:11:955 - ^

[Normal]
This plays more like an Easy
00:02:548 - Insert break?
00:06:412 - ^
00:09:607 (1,2) - Since apparently you do want some pretty sliders here, i'd recommend you use 4 or 5 waypoints and make an arc (a.k.a Rainbow sliders) with both sides symmetric also if your going for perfection (2) is going into (1) a bit
SPOILER
Orz i tried i couldnt make them way too better in the sense of being perfectly on the outline of the other, however their arc aspect is better now

145,130,9607,6,0,B|179:32|328:32|391:130,1,300
326,176,11175,2,4,B|291:127|256:131|211:124|200:192|200:192,3,150
00:45:293 (1) - Make more curve or at least make it symmetric?
01:05:293 - Add a break?
01:11:567 - ^
01:43:612 - ^
01:47:163 - ^
02:08:430 (4) - Align with (3)?
02:11:567 (4) - ^

[Overall]
Just minor concerns overall, the map has great quality already doubt i can do that much more to it, however i really recommend you work a bit more in your sliders since some of them are like some sort of curve but not quite curvy type Star! and Good Luck!~
Joon
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Topic Starter
Joon
okye both

Spacing and break fix
Kuzino
Former osu!catch Champion: 2014
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Joined August 2009
Kuzino
star~ XDDDD

스타~ ><
Garven
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2010
Garven
Sorry I took so long. >>

[Normal]
00:09:607 (1,2) - Ugh, I tried making these look better for like 10 minutes to no avail. If you can, please try to get them symmetric. As is, the end points are a little off and the curve is kind of dented to one side on the smaller slider.
00:45:489 (1) - If you're going with the vocal, make this start at 00:45:685. Where it stands, I'm not quite sure what you're following.
01:23:332 (1) - Think you could smooth out the curve on this a bit? That really sharp turn doesn't look too nice. :<
01:57:449 (2) - Space this out further
01:59:018 (2) - ^ May just need a redesign though.
02:11:959 (5) - Looks kind of off compared to the rest of the combo. Maybe align with the 2 and adjust things from there?

[Hard]
You could easily get away with -1 to circle size here.
01:25:685 (5) - Hrm, maybe make the last three repeats into a new slider?

[Insane]
00:51:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels out of place. Either take it out or map the rest of the phrase at least. Where it ends, it just feels awkward.

There's a bunch of sliders that I could have pointed out for semi-ugly, but eh. s'fine.
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Joon

Garven wrote:

Sorry I took so long. >>

[Normal]
00:09:607 (1,2) - Ugh, I tried making these look better for like 10 minutes to no avail. If you can, please try to get them symmetric. As is, the end points are a little off and the curve is kind of dented to one side on the smaller slider.
00:45:489 (1) - If you're going with the vocal, make this start at 00:45:685. Where it stands, I'm not quite sure what you're following.
01:23:332 (1) - Think you could smooth out the curve on this a bit? That really sharp turn doesn't look too nice. :<
01:57:449 (2) - Space this out further
01:59:018 (2) - ^ May just need a redesign though.
02:11:959 (5) - Looks kind of off compared to the rest of the combo. Maybe align with the 2 and adjust things from there?

[Hard]
You could easily get away with -1 to circle size here.
01:25:685 (5) - Hrm, maybe make the last three repeats into a new slider?

[Insane]
00:51:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels out of place. Either take it out or map the rest of the phrase at least. Where it ends, it just feels awkward.

There's a bunch of sliders that I could have pointed out for semi-ugly, but eh. s'fine.
o_o all fix
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,848 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
Looks like the big issues are resolved....which means....

NAZI TIME

[Normal]
Change OD, AR, and Drain to 4.

00:28:430 (4) - 1 grid down
00:29:999 (1) - ^
00:39:803 (2) - ^
00:51:960 (X) - Add a note?
01:09:214 (4) - 1 grid left
01:09:607 (5) - 1 grid down
01:19:411 (3) - ^
01:19:803 (4) - 1 grid left
01:25:685 (3) - 3 grid right
01:26:077 (4) - 2 grid right
01:26:469 (1) - 1 grid right
01:27:842 (2) - Move to x(152) y(248)
01:28:234 (3) - Move to x(128) y(168)
02:05:097 (1) - How about starting this spinner at 02:05:685 and
02:04:901 (X) - Adding a slider similar to 02:04:116 (1) here?
02:11:959 (5) - 1 grid up
02:13:528 (1) - ^
02:19:411 (1) - 4 grids down, 1 grid right
02:22:940 (1) - 1 grid left
02:24:509 (2) - 1 grid left, 1 grid down

[Hard]
Consider increasing AR, OD, and Drain by 1.
00:42:940 (2,3) - Remove these two notes and place a note at 00:43:136?
02:28:626 (1) - Keep the streams coming until 02:29:018 and start this spinner at 02:29:214.
Combo mods
SPOILER
00:29:214 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:999 (2) - NC
00:32:352 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:136 (3) - NC
00:36:273 (7) - ^
00:37:254 (2) - Remove NC
00:39:018 (1) - ^
00:39:411 (2) - NC
01:20:195 (6) - Remove NC
01:20:979 (1) - NC
01:26:469 (6) - ^
02:09:607 (1) - Remove NC
02:10:391 (2) - NC
02:12:744 (1) - Remove NC
02:13:528 (3) - NC
02:16:665 (7) - ^
02:17:646 (1) - Remove NC
02:19:411 (1) - ^
02:19:803 (2) - NC

[Insane]
00:09:607 (X) - Add a note.
00:09:705 (X) - ^
00:10:979 (X) - ^
00:11:077 (X) - ^
00:13:332 (1) - Why X2?
00:35:587 (9) - ^
01:25:685 (1) - ^
01:49:999 (X) - Add a note.
01:50:097 (X) - Add a note.
01:54:116 (9) - Spacing. Also, Why X2?
02:00:587 (X) - Add a note?
02:16:077 (9) - Why X2?


Starred.
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Joon

KRZY wrote:

Looks like the big issues are resolved....which means....

NAZI TIME

[Normal]
Change OD, AR, and Drain to 4.

00:28:430 (4) - 1 grid down
00:29:999 (1) - ^
00:39:803 (2) - ^
00:51:960 (X) - Add a note?
01:09:214 (4) - 1 grid left
01:09:607 (5) - 1 grid down
01:19:411 (3) - ^
01:19:803 (4) - 1 grid left
01:25:685 (3) - 3 grid right
01:26:077 (4) - 2 grid right
01:26:469 (1) - 1 grid right
01:27:842 (2) - Move to x(152) y(248)
01:28:234 (3) - Move to x(128) y(168)
02:05:097 (1) - How about starting this spinner at 02:05:685 and
02:04:901 (X) - Adding a slider similar to 02:04:116 (1) here?
02:11:959 (5) - 1 grid up
02:13:528 (1) - ^
02:19:411 (1) - 4 grids down, 1 grid right
02:22:940 (1) - 1 grid left
02:24:509 (2) - 1 grid left, 1 grid down

[Hard]
Consider increasing AR, OD, and Drain by 1.
00:42:940 (2,3) - Remove these two notes and place a note at 00:43:136?
02:28:626 (1) - Keep the streams coming until 02:29:018 and start this spinner at 02:29:214.
Combo mods
SPOILER
00:29:214 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:999 (2) - NC
00:32:352 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:136 (3) - NC
00:36:273 (7) - ^
00:37:254 (2) - Remove NC
00:39:018 (1) - ^
00:39:411 (2) - NC
01:20:195 (6) - Remove NC
01:20:979 (1) - NC
01:26:469 (6) - ^
02:09:607 (1) - Remove NC
02:10:391 (2) - NC
02:12:744 (1) - Remove NC
02:13:528 (3) - NC
02:16:665 (7) - ^
02:17:646 (1) - Remove NC
02:19:411 (1) - ^
02:19:803 (2) - NC

[Insane]
00:09:607 (X) - Add a note.
00:09:705 (X) - ^
00:10:979 (X) - ^
00:11:077 (X) - ^
00:13:332 (1) - Why X2?
00:35:587 (9) - ^
01:25:685 (1) - ^
01:49:999 (X) - Add a note.
01:50:097 (X) - Add a note.
01:54:116 (9) - Spacing. Also, Why X2?
02:00:587 (X) - Add a note?
02:16:077 (9) - Why X2?


Starred.
lol nice modding. i though.
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
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IceBeam
[Normal]
01:27:842 (2) - It's a bit close to (1),not necessary,but looks weird,fix please.
01:55:881 (2) - It's too close,fix distance,or use NC.

[Hard]
01:14:901 - I hear a guitar part here,maybe you should add a note.
01:15:391 - Also,it looks like you should add a note here.
01:16:175 - ^
Well,it's hard,but because of OD.You could make it harder,by adding more notes,cause you're following mostly 1/1 beats.Anyway,it's fine to me.

[Insane]
00:11:175 (1) - Jumping after such a stream is cruel.
01:27:254 (1,2,3) - That's technically fine,but hard to read,I was expecting a jump,because of previous symmetrical ones.

Song is simply awesome,I like it.
Star~
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Joon

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Normal]
01:27:842 (2) - It's a bit close to (1),not necessary,but looks weird,fix please.
01:55:881 (2) - It's too close,fix distance,or use NC.

[Hard]
01:14:901 - I hear a guitar part here,maybe you should add a note.
01:15:391 - Also,it looks like you should add a note here.
01:16:175 - ^
Well,it's hard,but because of OD.You could make it harder,by adding more notes,cause you're following mostly 1/1 beats.Anyway,it's fine to me.

[Insane]
00:11:175 (1) - Jumping after such a stream is cruel.
01:27:254 (1,2,3) - That's technically fine,but hard to read,I was expecting a jump,because of previous symmetrical ones.

Song is simply awesome,I like it.
Star~
Thx :3
ok fix
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
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Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Insane;

get rid of those silly 1/8 repeating sliders
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
[Normal]
01:57:842 (1) - Move this farther from the previous note.
01:59:411 (1,2,3) - Why not do the same thing like 01:57:842 (1)?
02:05:685 (1) - Spinner is too short for the easiest difficulty. Imo, just delete it.

[Insane]
02:38:430 (1) - That finish sounds really drawn out at the end. Maybe just silence the end of the spinner and take off the finish?

Edit: Bubbled
Alace
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Joined August 2008
Alace
mapset is really nice
offset -14ms sounds better to me
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Joon

Alace wrote:

mapset is really nice
offset -14ms sounds better to me
ok fix
Alace
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Alace
Cool
minyeob
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Joined May 2008
minyeob
Modded by Event @A@
Ranked.
Joon
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Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Joon
yooooooooooo!!!

Thx guys
Faust
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Joined January 2009
Faust
Jumps is orz
Lefiyer
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Joined September 2010
Lefiyer
nice map XD
Alace
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Alace

Faust wrote:

Jumps is orz
LEARN HOW TO PLAY
Faust
osu! Alumni
4,785 posts
Joined January 2009
Faust

Alace wrote:

Faust wrote:

Jumps is orz
LEARN HOW TO PLAY
Learn how to take a joke.
Garven
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2010
Garven

Faust wrote:

Alace wrote:

LEARN HOW TO PLAY
Learn how to take a joke.
Learn how t- Congratulations on the rank, hujune!
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,848 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
yay hujune :D
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Joon
;) Thx
Masayochi
6 posts
Joined October 2010
Masayochi
This is english song :)

lyrics :

My mixed emotions where'd you come from?
Rolling soul is missing now
Dont you know?
Dark with light
Reflection into you
Insidediscover me
Im lost in the dark
Affection and hatred are living in everyone
Your inner feelings where did you go?
Holdings hearts together now
Oh break through the dark
Wish dusk comes the truth
Let the world shine for you

Outsideshow me whole love
Brightness! Capture you
The darkness and lightness are living in everyone
Behind the hatred there lies
A plundering decide for love
But we all hold gentle eyes
Find it!
Insidediscover me please
Discover me. Dont forget love!
Now we cant escape from the dark side of the light
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