1. Hard (4.91 stars, 393 notes)
2. yznoob's Normal (3 stars, 107 notes)

AngelHoney wrote:

我就是個加星的...T.T

eveless wrote:

SPOILER

17:51 <[Aramary]> : 02:00:793 (1,2,1) - 这边我会读错
17:52 <eveless> : 我估计也会。。

神图

1. Source: Hatsune Miku -Project DIVA-
2. BPM: 140 Project DIVA的歌应该是整数
3. tags: Original Song Collection CD travoltaP
4. 这BG是"World is Mine"的专辑主题壁纸三张中的一张 - -| 我刚才说的就是这个 找张Project DIVA的吧

• 00:39:156 (2) - 加一个reverse? 或者对应的加note

1. 00:48:584 (5,6,1) - 不好读
2. 00:58:869 (2) - 太多次打起来很无趣的
3. 01:26:081 (T) - 这个slidertick类似的音不要放过啊
4. 01:35:509 (3) - new combo x0.5最好规律更明显点
5. 01:49:651 (2,3) - 中间的1/4建议也填掉
6. 最后感觉应该有个spinner...

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. Source: Hatsune Miku -Project DIVA- √
2. BPM: 140 Project DIVA的歌应该是整数 √
3. tags: Original Song Collection CD travoltaP √
4. 这BG是"World is Mine"的专辑主题壁纸三张中的一张 - -| 我刚才说的就是这个 找张Project DIVA的吧 wait

[Hard]:

• 00:39:156 (2) - 加一个reverse? 或者对应的加note

1. 00:48:584 (5,6,1) - 不好读
2. 00:58:869 (2) - 太多次打起来很无趣的 求好办法
3. 01:26:081 (T) - 这个slidertick类似的音不要放过啊 跟歌声
4. 01:35:509 (3) - new combo x0.5最好规律更明显点 √
5. 01:49:651 (2,3) - 中间的1/4建议也填掉
6. 最后感觉应该有个spinner...

以上全部只是建议

[Aramary] wrote:

会读错是会被02:01:364 (2,1)的间距误导节奏，不是02:00:579 (5,6,1) 啊，怎么把那里改了w

yangzd88 wrote:

Star...Mod无力

我想领个NM+...做到一半才发现你要3星以下的NM...30多分钟的人参啊...

Krisom wrote:

(do not kudosu)

As this song was released before project diva 1, I think that using "Hatsune miku -Project Diva-" as a source is not quite accurate(The MP3 I used from Hatsune miku -Project Diva-,OK?), and adding "travoltaP" as the source would suit better. (I'v explained about the Source in map massage.)

Anyway, if you dont change, at least remove "Hatsune miku" from the source as it is alredy in the artist and it's redundant. (The Source of the song is a psp game called "Hatsune Miku -Project DIVA-",so dont have doubt on it
)

won't star because I have not taken a look at the map (even though I like the song)

Dusty wrote:

no kds, please

[Hard]
00:47:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - so confusing, could you use normal spacing? (also try not to let them be covered up by the spinner's 300-burst)

Nice maps.

al2e10 wrote:

AMSP

[Hard]____★★★★
- Spacing
00:39:802 (3,4,5) - Two problem
1. Spacing something changes make the map more interesting and challenging
2. Timing, how can make the other know there is 1/4? when you play the same rhythm from [00:28:230] to [00:35:078], you can easily knows there are 1/4 too. the song is very clear ,isnt it?
- Combo problem
00:43:230 (1) - Remove new combo √
00:44:944 (1) - ^ (I thought will better. √
- Other(S)
01:54:802 (1,1,1) - I thought that was hard to play thats why this is a 4.91-star diff.
02:01:444 (1,1) - ^

[yznoob's Normal] NP

[ALL]
Great map. When you make a diff. for Insane.
STAR

You got the name in Al2e KD Star list

wmfchris wrote:

nice music and excellent spacing... no problem found

star^2~

wcx19911123 wrote:

8-) hi

[yznoob's Normal]

short normal...hum... >_>

00:23:087 (4) - end at 00:23:730
00:23:730 (5) - start at 00:23:944
00:30:802 (4) - remove it
00:30:587 - add a slider end at 00:30:802
00:36:587 - add a circle?
01:05:516 (7) - end at 01:05:730?
01:17:944 (2) - rotate -15°
01:21:159 - add a circle?
01:26:516 (1) - longer...
01:29:944 (1) - rotate -15°
01:33:373 (3) - move to 01:33:159
01:33:802 (4) - end at 01:34:016

[Hard]

00:06:159 (1) - ctrl+H why?
00:11:944 (7) - new combo √
00:14:944 (2) - move to 00:14:730 no
00:21:802 (2) - ^ no
00:42:373 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too boring for a hard... hard is not insane
00:50:302 - add a circle following the song
01:26:087 - ^ 参见CH的mod
02:12:802 (6) - new combo no
02:34:659 (11) - ^ no
02:39:373 - add a circle my design
02:42:802 - ^ Customize hitsound
02:43:980 (2) - too hidden... idont think so
02:47:516 (1) - hidden when 02:45:480 (1) end... easily to see it

Do you need another diff?(bang... sry
Good map
Star~~

wcx19911123 wrote:

8-) hi

[yznoob's Normal]

short normal...hum... >_>

00:23:087 (4) - end at 00:23:730
00:23:730 (5) - start at 00:23:944 eh...fix
00:30:802 (4) - remove it Why?
00:30:587 - add a slider end at 00:30:802 ^
00:36:587 - add a circle? It's useless...
01:05:516 (7) - end at 01:05:730? no...
01:17:944 (2) - rotate -15° no...
01:21:159 - add a circle? It's useless...
01:26:516 (1) - longer... It's a rhythm change...
01:29:944 (1) - rotate -15° eh...fix
01:33:373 (3) - move to 01:33:159 follow the song
01:33:802 (4) - end at 01:34:016 ^

vivere wrote:

Hello =)

General:
The Difficulty must last the same time this is a new rule of ranked maps?

[yznoob's Normal]:

Good
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[Hard]:

00:11:087- I recommend you put a new combo sry
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Good map

:3

Alace wrote:

I am sorry
I don`t know how to make a mod post to show what i want to say
only one thiing i have to point out here

<Hard>
02:01:373 (2,1) - what the hell

Alright let me get rid of the red name

事實上這map的整體架構非常的好,3/4拍子的利用我非常喜歡,音效的架構也很不錯
不過我實在太無聊了,就作了一個音效diff,主要修改了下面幾個點
1.softhit+normalhit 這樣的組合其實會讓聲音顯的有點悶,所以我把你有加normalhit的點全用綠線換成normalhit only
2.一些細部的音量控制,有時hit數多了就變的要利用音量控制讓整體聽來柔和點
3. softclap的移除,這音效並不那麼適合這歌曲所以我利用normalhit代換了
4.softwhistle的增加,在有1/3拍子的部份很適合在每條白線上加whistle
5.移除三角鐵的音效,這音效的回音感很重,大量使用時其實並不好聽,雖然這音效跟音樂裡的樂器聲很像,但在音樂已經讓這樂器聲達到飽和了
6.末段clap音效的變更,簡單的2 4拍clap就能夠很好聽了,所以我移除了所有的藍線clap
另外我把那1/3的部份也修正了,並且加了一個note讓音效能夠維持下去,你可以比對這兩個難度找出其中細微的差異

也許大多數的人以外綠線加的多,外加音效的種類多就是好音效,不過其實有很多微小的地方還是可以下功夫的 (雖然大多人聽不出來吧 XD)
希望這個file對你有幫助 (如果你喜歡的話 可以直接命為hard取代掉舊的,)

題外話 以前老詹幫我作過兩次這種事,我每次都很不服氣的自己全部重弄一次 lol

1. Timing looks fine to me
2. I don't think "Original Song Collection CD" should be in the tags, even if they came from an album that was called that. They seem too general to be good tags imo.
3. Make an Easy difficulty? With only 2 difficulties, and one being really short, It feels like an unfinished map. Making an easy would complete it.

Doomsday wrote:

;)

1. Timing looks fine to me
2. I don't think "Original Song Collection CD" should be in the tags, even if they came from an album that was called that. They seem too general to be good tags imo. anyway, Better than blank XD
3. Make an Easy difficulty? With only 2 difficulties, and one being really short, It feels like an unfinished map. Making an easy would complete it.

Im too busy to make diff..even a EASY

[YZNOOB'S NORMAL]

That looks like a pretty hard normal. You might need an easy anyway due to the difficulty of this.

It looks fine though, to me.

[HARD]

Green lines everywhere

00:18:586 (2,3) - Move these a bit more together? It's a tiny jump, but since it doesn't look like a jump, so it confuses me. fixed
01:54:802 (1) - Click this slider and then click "Reverse Selection"? Again, the way the spacing goes here, you would click on the wrong end because you don't expect a jump here. I missed on my playthrough here.
02:35:087 (13) - Add a new combo? new combo at [02:34:659]
02:35:944 (1) - ...And remove this new combo?

It's a nice mapset on the whole. I could nitpick Hard a bit more but it's alright. It needs an Easy though.

Starred