al2e10 wrote:

AMSP

[Hard]____★★★★
- Spacing
00:39:802 (3,4,5) - Two problem
1. Spacing something changes make the map more interesting and challenging
2. Timing, how can make the other know there is 1/4? when you play the same rhythm from [00:28:230] to [00:35:078], you can easily knows there are 1/4 too. the song is very clear ,isnt it?
- Combo problem
00:43:230 (1) - Remove new combo √
00:44:944 (1) - ^ (I thought will better. √
- Other(S)
01:54:802 (1,1,1) - I thought that was hard to play thats why this is a 4.91-star diff.
02:01:444 (1,1) - ^

[yznoob's Normal] NP

[ALL]
Great map. When you make a diff. for Insane.
STAR

You got the name in Al2e KD Star list

wmfchris wrote:

nice music and excellent spacing... no problem found

star^2~

wcx19911123 wrote:

8-) hi

[yznoob's Normal]

short normal...hum... >_>

00:23:087 (4) - end at 00:23:730
00:23:730 (5) - start at 00:23:944
00:30:802 (4) - remove it
00:30:587 - add a slider end at 00:30:802
00:36:587 - add a circle?
01:05:516 (7) - end at 01:05:730?
01:17:944 (2) - rotate -15°
01:21:159 - add a circle?
01:26:516 (1) - longer...
01:29:944 (1) - rotate -15°
01:33:373 (3) - move to 01:33:159
01:33:802 (4) - end at 01:34:016

[Hard]

00:06:159 (1) - ctrl+H why?
00:11:944 (7) - new combo √
00:14:944 (2) - move to 00:14:730 no
00:21:802 (2) - ^ no
00:42:373 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too boring for a hard... hard is not insane
00:50:302 - add a circle following the song
01:26:087 - ^ 参见CH的mod
02:12:802 (6) - new combo no
02:34:659 (11) - ^ no
02:39:373 - add a circle my design
02:42:802 - ^ Customize hitsound
02:43:980 (2) - too hidden... idont think so
02:47:516 (1) - hidden when 02:45:480 (1) end... easily to see it

Do you need another diff?(bang... sry
Good map
Star~~

wcx19911123 wrote:

8-) hi

[yznoob's Normal]

short normal...hum... >_>

00:23:087 (4) - end at 00:23:730
00:23:730 (5) - start at 00:23:944 eh...fix
00:30:802 (4) - remove it Why?
00:30:587 - add a slider end at 00:30:802 ^
00:36:587 - add a circle? It's useless...
01:05:516 (7) - end at 01:05:730? no...
01:17:944 (2) - rotate -15° no...
01:21:159 - add a circle? It's useless...
01:26:516 (1) - longer... It's a rhythm change...
01:29:944 (1) - rotate -15° eh...fix
01:33:373 (3) - move to 01:33:159 follow the song
01:33:802 (4) - end at 01:34:016 ^

vivere wrote:

Hello =)

General:
The Difficulty must last the same time this is a new rule of ranked maps?

[yznoob's Normal]:

Good
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[Hard]:

00:11:087- I recommend you put a new combo sry
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Good map

:3

Alace wrote:

I am sorry
I don`t know how to make a mod post to show what i want to say
only one thiing i have to point out here

<Hard>
02:01:373 (2,1) - what the hell

Alright let me get rid of the red name

事實上這map的整體架構非常的好,3/4拍子的利用我非常喜歡,音效的架構也很不錯
不過我實在太無聊了,就作了一個音效diff,主要修改了下面幾個點
1.softhit+normalhit 這樣的組合其實會讓聲音顯的有點悶,所以我把你有加normalhit的點全用綠線換成normalhit only
2.一些細部的音量控制,有時hit數多了就變的要利用音量控制讓整體聽來柔和點
3. softclap的移除,這音效並不那麼適合這歌曲所以我利用normalhit代換了
4.softwhistle的增加,在有1/3拍子的部份很適合在每條白線上加whistle
5.移除三角鐵的音效,這音效的回音感很重,大量使用時其實並不好聽,雖然這音效跟音樂裡的樂器聲很像,但在音樂已經讓這樂器聲達到飽和了
6.末段clap音效的變更,簡單的2 4拍clap就能夠很好聽了,所以我移除了所有的藍線clap
另外我把那1/3的部份也修正了,並且加了一個note讓音效能夠維持下去,你可以比對這兩個難度找出其中細微的差異

也許大多數的人以外綠線加的多,外加音效的種類多就是好音效,不過其實有很多微小的地方還是可以下功夫的 (雖然大多人聽不出來吧 XD)
希望這個file對你有幫助 (如果你喜歡的話 可以直接命為hard取代掉舊的,)

題外話 以前老詹幫我作過兩次這種事,我每次都很不服氣的自己全部重弄一次 lol

1. Timing looks fine to me
2. I don't think "Original Song Collection CD" should be in the tags, even if they came from an album that was called that. They seem too general to be good tags imo.
3. Make an Easy difficulty? With only 2 difficulties, and one being really short, It feels like an unfinished map. Making an easy would complete it.

Doomsday wrote:

;)

1. Timing looks fine to me
2. I don't think "Original Song Collection CD" should be in the tags, even if they came from an album that was called that. They seem too general to be good tags imo. anyway, Better than blank XD
3. Make an Easy difficulty? With only 2 difficulties, and one being really short, It feels like an unfinished map. Making an easy would complete it.

Im too busy to make diff..even a EASY

[YZNOOB'S NORMAL]

That looks like a pretty hard normal. You might need an easy anyway due to the difficulty of this.

It looks fine though, to me.

[HARD]

Green lines everywhere

00:18:586 (2,3) - Move these a bit more together? It's a tiny jump, but since it doesn't look like a jump, so it confuses me. fixed
01:54:802 (1) - Click this slider and then click "Reverse Selection"? Again, the way the spacing goes here, you would click on the wrong end because you don't expect a jump here. I missed on my playthrough here.
02:35:087 (13) - Add a new combo? new combo at [02:34:659]
02:35:944 (1) - ...And remove this new combo?

It's a nice mapset on the whole. I could nitpick Hard a bit more but it's alright. It needs an Easy though.

Starred

yangzd88 wrote:

Should I map all the song lol?

Alace wrote:

Alright let me bubble this

Colin Hou wrote:

that's funny

LKs wrote:

yeah, funny >_>

Krisom wrote:

Well, we've discussed about the source of the game with some MATs, and we agreed that "Hatsune Miku -Project DIVA-" is not a good source.

Yes, the song appears in the game "Project diva", but the song was released long before this game was released. This game didn't even make the song famous.

I'd strongly suggest you to use travoltaP as the source, as he's the creator of the song. Vocaloid can be used as a source too (though I'd personally add that to the tags). Project Diva and everything else can go in tags.

(and please, don't feed me kudosu if you fix)

Source: This field should generally only be included for Anime or Video Game songs, and occasionally for Novelty (Movies, TV, or Internet) songs. If the song is from an anime or video game, or is most famous for its use as a TV or movie theme, the title of that source goes here. Rock and Pop songs should generally leave the field blank: This is not to be used for things like album titles, and video games like Rock Band or Guitar Hero, which use already-popular songs, should not be named here.

Krisom wrote:

Also, @Alace, no, I don't care more about the source than about the map, but we can always aim to get the best map as a whole possible. If it has an unaccurate source/tags/artist, it should be of out interest to make it better for the people who will play the map and then seach about the song.
We should teach mappers what and what not to do, not encourage them to do what they want.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Cute map, I like it.

Ranked~

Colin Hou wrote:

接下来, 是双星物语了吧

[Aramary] wrote:

接下来, 是双人物语了吧 : D

[Aramary] wrote:

接下来, 是双人物语了吧 : D