MY FIRST STORY - Fukagyaku Replace [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

Crowley

435 posts

Joined April 2015

Crowley 2016-01-29T11:39:24+00:00

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Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-01-29T12:35:01+00:00

Asgore- wrote:
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idk ;w;

Crowley

435 posts

Joined April 2015

Crowley 2016-01-31T11:00:12+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
Asgore- wrote:
when bubble
idk ;w;

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koliron

791 posts

Joined July 2014

koliron 2016-02-04T20:00:04+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
This is already appled but I promised a mod a while ago so here goes /o/

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Koli's Rain
00:04:323 (1,2) - Spacing here feels halfway between dash and not-dash, would recceomend increasing the spacing a little, x-168 feels smoother in my opinion A bit
00:08:845 (4) - Personal preference, but you could really make a more interesting curved slider here. An S shape would work nicely and be more interesting to play yea why not
00:10:428 (1) - Advise against using a 1/4 beat note+spinner spacing as it can cause readability problems, especially at high BPM as you have here. Suggest starting the spinner 1/4 later at 00:10:504 I don't know why is there, i putted in 1/2 previously lol
00:35:979 (1,2) - Nice timing jump lol, this would be more comfortable to play if you reduced the distance a tiny bit. 00:34:628 (4,1) is tricky, but slightly easier to play, so I'd opt for a similar spacing as you used there ay
00:57:145 (1) - What's the reason for this NC? You've been following a 4 beat pattern throughout but I don't see any special reason to use 2 x 2 beat NCs here true
Nice work guys, diffs are looking mostly fine and are fun to play, these are just some suggestions that I think could improve them a bit. If you have any questions or want to discuss things further, please don't hesitate to get back to me and I'll see what I can do to help.

Good luck! (:

yu

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:不可逆リプレイス
Artist:MY FIRST STORY
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Source:信長協奏曲
Tags:Nobunaga Concerto mfs emo jrock ending Histoire Asagi Ster koliron
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Sorry for late lol

koliron

791 posts

Joined July 2014

koliron 2016-02-04T20:01:11+00:00

~~Double post aaa~~

Standard wwwwhennnn

Last edited by koliron 2016-02-07T17:01:58+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-02-05T01:03:56+00:00

Chara plz where's friday ;3

Bunnrei

1,044 posts

Joined May 2011

Bunnrei 2016-02-05T05:12:14+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
Chara plz where's friday ;3

blame my parents
also, nice doublepost koli

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-02-12T14:27:45+00:00

Another friday wwwww

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2016-02-13T10:15:13+00:00

Easy

00:07:941 (4) - NC
00:47:536 (2,3) - this feels very unconventional, I think a different rhythm would be more expected and easier to comprehend here:

SPOILER

01:20:267 - there's cymbals in the song here so maybe add a hitsound (across all difficulties if you do)
01:27:473 (3) - I think it would be better having it start only at 01:27:624 and lasting just 1 beat ending at the same point

Normal

00:07:941 (2) - NC starts here
01:16:663 (2,3) - this sticks out and not in a good way because the rhythm around this goes with the vocals like 01:15:462 (3,4) but this doesn't

Hard

00:04:323 (4) - extended unnecessarily, vocals stop at 00:04:624 - would be nicer to end with it too
00:04:926 (1,2,1,2) - NCing this, is quite errrwut, cuz in that sense also then 00:02:514 (5) would also be a NC but really, it's quite extra imo
00:08:921 (1,1) - this gap between them is still quite little for a Hard, ~0.3 secs (give it 0.375~0.4 at least)
01:16:814 (1) - same thing about the sudden shift to instrumentals instead of vocals, it's not expected, and it would also mean you would follow that instrumental beat at 01:18:015 but that's not the case, you went for 01:18:165 (1) instead

Good Luck

Bunnrei

1,044 posts

Joined May 2011

Bunnrei 2016-02-13T10:49:44+00:00

parang nagiging paasa na laang ako dito ah xd

I'm pretty sure that I followed everything (slap me if I didn't)

rank before march pls

osu file format v14

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416,64,60598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,60748,2,0,L|384:112,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,61049,2,0,L|272:96,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,61349,6,0,L|16:96,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,80,61574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,80,61649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,128,61799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,160,62250,2,0,L|200:160,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,208,62550,6,8,L|472:16,1,192
256,80,63001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,63151,2,0,L|504:96,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,120,63451,2,0,L|160:136,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,136,63751,5,8,0:0:0:0:
40,64,63901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,64052,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,64,64202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,64,64352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,64,64502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,88,64652,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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88,112,64953,6,0,P|168:88|272:112,1,192,4|4,0:2|0:2,2:2:0:0:
128,192,65403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,224,65553,2,0,L|416:192,1,96,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,65853,2,0,L|240:208,1,96,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,66154,5,4,0:2:0:0:
400,160,66304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,176,66454,1,4,0:2:0:0:
208,128,66604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,66753,2,0,L|48:16,1,96,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,67054,2,0,L|256:112,1,96,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,67355,6,0,L|72:112,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,67504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,67579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,128,67654,2,0,L|152:128,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,144,67804,5,0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,67879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,67954,2,8,L|336:168,1,60
153,161,68105,2,0,L|96:144,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,68255,6,0,L|368:112,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,124,68406,1,4,0:2:0:0:
112,96,69156,6,0,P|48:192|176:224,1,270.000010299683,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,332,69457,2,0,P|502:233|392:192,1,270.000010299683,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,248,69757,6,0,L|184:112,1,132.00000402832,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,176,70058,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,232,70208,2,0,L|223:139,1,132.00000402832
32,152,70509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,176,70657,6,0,L|496:144,1,132.00000402832,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,70958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,112,71409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,160,71858,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,160,72009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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64,80,72609,2,0,L|96:240,1,132.00000402832
320,224,72909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,32,73660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,73810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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272,80,74261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,80,74411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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90,126,75012,2,0,L|266:126,1,132.00000402832
352,128,75312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,168,75462,6,0,L|200:168,1,132.00000402832,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,170,75762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,176,75912,2,0,L|-28:176,1,132.00000402832,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,76213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,76363,2,0,L|496:32,1,132.00000402832
320,80,76663,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,112,76814,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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176,176,77264,2,0,L|336:176,1,132.00000402832,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,77564,2,0,L|480:32,1,132.00000402832
240,88,77864,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,104,78015,2,0,L|456:104,2,66.0000020141602,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,78315,6,8,L|80:192,1,66.0000020141602
64,192,78465,2,8,L|144:192,1,66.0000020141602
336,192,78615,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,192,78690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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352,144,78915,2,0,L|368:64,1,66.0000020141602
152,62,79066,2,8,L|96:96,1,66.0000020141602
382,80,79216,2,8,L|448:80,1,66.0000020141602
80,336,79366,6,0,L|64:160,1,132.00000402832,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,208,79666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,224,79816,2,0,L|320:224,2,132.00000402832
56,280,80267,6,0,L|200:280,1,132.00000402832,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,216,80567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,288,80717,2,0,L|464:160,2,132.00000402832,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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416,176,82219,2,0,P|320:224|416:304,1,264.000008056641
271,307,82669,2,0,L|415:307,1,132.00000402832,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,82969,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,83119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,83269,2,0,L|272:272,1,132.00000402832,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,272,83569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,83719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,272,83869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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64,224,84471,2,0,L|96:48,1,132.00000402832,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,176,84771,2,0,L|400:0,1,132.00000402832
160,112,85071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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144,256,85672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,256,85822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,86123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,86273,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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96,160,87474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,160,87624,6,0,P|460:235|353:244,1,270.000010299683,4|0,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,87924,2,0,P|19:251|126:260,1,270.000010299683,4|0,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,88224,2,0,P|511:194|373:206,1,360,4|2,0:2|0:0,2:0:0:0:

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-02-13T13:30:54+00:00

neonat wrote:
Easy

00:07:941 (4) - NC ok
00:47:536 (2,3) - this feels very unconventional, I think a different rhythm would be more expected and easier to comprehend here: nice idea. Changed
SPOILER
01:20:267 - there's cymbals in the song here so maybe add a hitsound (across all difficulties if you do) ok added hs.
01:27:473 (3) - I think it would be better having it start only at 01:27:624 and lasting just 1 beat ending at the same point I see

Normal

00:07:941 (2) - NC starts here fixed
01:16:663 (2,3) - this sticks out and not in a good way because the rhythm around this goes with the vocals like 01:15:462 (3,4) but this doesn't I tried to focus on vocal then. Idk if I did right ;w;

Hard

00:04:323 (4) - extended unnecessarily, vocals stop at 00:04:624 - would be nicer to end with it too I think it's still good for me since I still heard his voice at 00:04:699 -
00:04:926 (1,2,1,2) - NCing this, is quite errrwut, cuz in that sense also then 00:02:514 (5) would also be a NC but really, it's quite extra imo removed NC on 00:04:926 - then ;3
00:08:921 (1,1) - this gap between them is still quite little for a Hard, ~0.3 secs (give it 0.375~0.4 at least) maybe fixed
01:16:814 (1) - same thing about the sudden shift to instrumentals instead of vocals, it's not expected, and it would also mean you would follow that instrumental beat at 01:18:015 but that's not the case, you went for 01:18:165 (1) instead ok I fixed

Good Luck

Thanks♥ I fixed on my higher diffs about 01:16:814 - as well~

Last edited by Akitoshi 2016-02-13T13:49:19+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-02-13T13:33:27+00:00

UPDATED

lol why this came first

Shiirn

2,896 posts

Joined August 2010

Shiirn 2016-02-19T04:38:20+00:00

Suggestions
Major suggestions
Unrankable issues
You could probably do with adding a bit of saturation to your combo colors, raw primary colors tend to be pretty intense. That's just my preference, though.

Easy

01:16:363 (3) - This should be a 1/1 slider and a circle, not a 2/1 slider. Or, at least, that's what it feels like.
Solid, polished difficulty.

Normal

01:09:156 (1) - Maybe two 1/1 circles instead of slider?
Another solid, polished TV size normal.

Hard

AR 8? Normal has 5! Drop it down to 7. The map will be modded with AR7, as this is where it should be.
00:12:406 (1,2,3) - These not being spaced out equally feels really weird. Since this is a hard, you can start really taking liberties with spacing to make patterns more flexible. Distance snap is the enemy to mapping with good momentum.
00:18:112 (3) - Move this to x|332:y|187 for it to be directly above (4).
00:28:772 (1,2) - Blanket...? Not sure. Probably not worth fixing.
00:48:737 (3,1) - Blanket the 3?
01:17:264 (2,3,4) - Again, the distance between the sliders is not equal and it's very noticeable.

Irre's Insane

00:15:559 (5) - New combo for spacing change/jump? Normally I'd put it AFTER, but since there's a jump here anyway...
00:17:361 (1,2) - 2 is really, really not blanketed to 1's ending, but oh well.
00:18:412 (4,1) - Another noticeably bad blanket.
00:39:883 (1,1,1,1) - Don't see any musical reason for new combos. No emphasis necessary on any beats and the pattern isn't anything special to earn that colorful emphasis.
00:46:184 (2,3) - Move down and right 8 pixels to manually stack.
00:47:386 (2,3) - ^. If you want to be fancy, you can manually stack them in the opposite direction. x|116:y|124 for 2, x|112:y|120 for 3.
00:59:697 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I can't tell if this stream is trying to be straight or curve. Either way, 10->1 is visibly different. Honestly, a straight stream works great here. Go ahead and give every note -8x-3y for a nice straight stream.
01:07:355 (1,2,3) - Supernazi, triangle isn't perfect.

Insane

00:19:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Starting a 2-kick slider on a red tick is almost always a bad idea, even if musically it makes sense, because it's really awkawrd to play.You can probably just replace the second part of the stream with another 6 notes and have it play way better.
00:20:964 (1,2) - Triple, please. Irre's insane is alright sicne the middle note is the weakest of the triple, this has no real excuse as the slider end is on the strongest one. Just make it a triple.
01:00:598 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would re-orient this star pattern so that the jump to the next note after (6) wasn't directly back in the direction of (5). It throws off a player's momentum and kind of kills the purpose of a star pattern (to emphasize the clustered nature of a small section of 1/2)
01:02:550 (1,2) - blanket?
01:07:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - See the previous note. Also, you should consistently keep NC between these two combos.
Good diff.

Asagi's Insane

00:01:609 (3,4) - Not parallel.
00:13:906 (3,4) - Blanket
00:15:409 (4,2) - ^
00:16:910 (1,2) - ^
00:19:313 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - In the previous difficulty, I said that 2-repeat sliders on red ticks was almost always a bad idea. This is not one of those times. Good job, this is really cool!
00:36:730 (4,5) - I'd have the slider before the note in this case. (5) ends on a really clickable beat, and starts on a really weak beat.
Really solid difficulty. The early bits had me a bit scared but the later parts are very polished and well-structured.

Weakness

00:20:964 (1,2) - Triple please.
00:49:938 (3,1) - Improve blanket
00:57:145 (3,1) - Bad blanket, maybe fix.
00:58:796 (1) - I normally don't care, but since this is mirrored with a curved slider that is 3 points and therefore perfectly symmetrical, you should make sure this linear one bends directly on-tick here: 00:58:947 - . Make sure it is perfectly symmetrical to mirror the curved slider, the end and start are currently 2 pixels off vertical. (omg nazi)
01:21:768 (1,3) - Improve blanket

Ongaku

607 posts

Joined January 2014

Ongaku 2016-02-19T04:50:27+00:00

I fucking love this map.

Good structure, fun, it has everything I ever wanted to map. nice job

Akitoshi

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Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-02-19T11:45:37+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
I fucking love this map.

Good structure, fun, it has everything I ever wanted to map. nice job

Thanks!♥ This is the one of my main reason why I don't give up on mapping thingy

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-02-19T12:28:44+00:00

Shiirn wrote:
Suggestions
Major suggestions
Unrankable issues
You could probably do with adding a bit of saturation to your combo colors, raw primary colors tend to be pretty intense. That's just my preference, though.

Easy
01:16:363 (3) - This should be a 1/1 slider and a circle, not a 2/1 slider. Or, at least, that's what it feels like. oh Nice, fixed to 1/1 slider + Circle.
Solid, polished difficulty.

Normal
01:09:156 (1) - Maybe two 1/1 circles instead of slider? It will hard to hit between the gap of 01:08:406 (4) - I mean the low rank players can get 100 or 50 if I converted to Circles after this.
Another solid, polished TV size normal.

Hard
AR 8? Normal has 5! Drop it down to 7. The map will be modded with AR7, as this is where it should be. I understand how the AR gaps was made. But bpm is pretty high enough to get the high AR on this map (199~200) that I can set to AR8 as well. I'll consider to change it soon.
00:12:406 (1,2,3) - These not being spaced out equally feels really weird. Since this is a hard, you can start really taking liberties with spacing to make patterns more flexible. Distance snap is the enemy to mapping with good momentum. Lol true, I tried to do the CCW pattern to make it more neat (idk if I did right but yeee at least it's better now imo)
00:18:112 (3) - Move this to x|332:y|187 for it to be directly above (4). Fixed.
00:28:772 (1,2) - Blanket...? Not sure. Probably not worth fixing. I raised up 00:29:223 (2) - a bit
00:48:737 (3,1) - Blanket the 3? it was already blanket but yee that was nazi lol. Maybe fixed.
01:17:264 (2,3,4) - Again, the distance between the sliders is not equal and it's very noticeable. true, I wish I did right here for equal-looking.

Insane
00:19:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Starting a 2-kick slider on a red tick is almost always a bad idea, even if musically it makes sense, because it's really awkawrd to play.You can probably just replace the second part of the stream with another 6 notes and have it play way better. Hmm I think no reverse for make it more readable (makes harder to play for those hating the streams tho lol)
00:20:964 (1,2) - Triple, please. Irre's insane is alright sicne the middle note is the weakest of the triple, this has no real excuse as the slider end is on the strongest one. Just make it a triple. I did the same thing with Irre than to make it triple.
01:00:598 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would re-orient this star pattern so that the jump to the next note after (6) wasn't directly back in the direction of (5). It throws off a player's momentum and kind of kills the purpose of a star pattern (to emphasize the clustered nature of a small section of 1/2) I moved the star pattern itself for the space of 01:01:349 (1) - as well
01:02:550 (1,2) - blanket? idk if it's still nazi but maybe fixed
01:07:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - See the previous note. Also, you should consistently keep NC between these two combos. did the same with first.
Good diff.

Weakness
00:20:964 (1,2) - Triple please. same with my prev. diff
00:49:938 (3,1) - Improve blanket maybe fixed
00:57:145 (3,1) - Bad blanket, maybe fix. maybe fixed as well,
00:58:796 (1) - I normally don't care, but since this is mirrored with a curved slider that is 3 points and therefore perfectly symmetrical, you should make sure this linear one bends directly on-tick here: 00:58:947 - . Make sure it is perfectly symmetrical to mirror the curved slider, the end and start are currently 2 pixels off vertical. (omg nazi) Lol.
01:21:768 (1,3) - Improve blanket Maybe fixed (I put "maybe" because I have a bad sight and idk if it's looks really parallel or not ;3;

Thanks for the mod!♥

domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

domSaur 2016-02-19T13:23:35+00:00

teach plz

20:49 domSaur: ole
20:50 Akitoshi: elo
20:51 domSaur: you prolly won't apply any of these except for the nc but heh.. u won't tits me anywe
20:52 Akitoshi: you won't apply if I tits you either
20:53 domSaur: 00:19:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - rather than just having spurted out of nowhur the first few notes of this could blanket the head of 00:19:012 (5) - from its top right
20:53 domSaur: to keep up with the loop-de-loop i guezz
20:54 Akitoshi: wet
20:55 domSaur: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4564166 smth like this(ofc you'll have to adjust stuff, this is just how it's supposed to flow or smth like that)]
20:55 Akitoshi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4564176 did smthng similar
20:56 domSaur:  that 
20:56 Akitoshi: okek applied
20:58 domSaur: smth minor(and nazi). 00:36:730 (3) - since the slider that you copied this is a blanket, why not blanket this to 00:37:030 (4) - (or the other way around)
21:00 Akitoshi: lol I don't wanted to blanket anyway for the stack between 00:35:829 (6) - but okek lez tri
21:03 domSaur: 01:05:853 (6,7) - for some reason i feel like this is better off a single 1/2 slider.. idk, it rly won't sink to me about hitting "self"
21:04 domSaur: and the start of this stanza, covered by the combo color, is also a slider
21:04 domSaur: u kno, for symmetry/consistency/wtvr
21:05 Akitoshi: 01:06:003 (7,1) - it's just loop of star patterns in 01:05:253 (2,3,4,5,6) -
21:05 Akitoshi: and if you want to point out the consistency of NC thingy maybe le based instruments works
21:06 domSaur: well, if that's how you put it
21:07 Akitoshi: I spammed the 1/2 sliders on 01:06:153 (1,2,3,4) - so ye
21:07 domSaur: about that thing i was pointing out hmm.. maybe if i was a better modder i can explain this mucho cleary
21:07 domSaur: *clearly
21:08 domSaur: actually there you go..
21:09 domSaur: almost all the vocals at this section with heavy drums is hit with a slider... all except the (6,7)
21:10 domSaur: but fk it if it rly is a problem.. some better modder would be able to point it out so nvm..
21:10 Akitoshi: 01:05:853 (6,7) - wat
21:11 Akitoshi: I can't rly get it why I need to slide
21:14 domSaur: ty now i also dunno.. anyways liek i sed nvm.. "save myself" the vocal is hit by a slider and then transitioned by a series of circles.... transitioned to where
21:14 domSaur: ?
21:15 Akitoshi: 01:05:253 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - so you mean I will slide ALL of this?
21:16 domSaur: no. definitely no
21:17 domSaur: anyways maybe to help u get wat i mean(or not).. almost every combo pattern starting from when the drumming gets heavy at 01:00:223 has some sort of symmetry(not just in aesthetics but also in rhythm)
21:17 domSaur: niec i fuked it up
21:18 domSaur: anyways, have the lines in this convo is just one mod so ye.. nvm, you've got far better mods and if they didn't see any prob then you probably shouldn't as well...
21:18 Akitoshi: eh
21:19 domSaur: i guezz this is just the bad case of me trying to shove my own mapping/playing views agen
21:19 Akitoshi: 01:04:952 (1) - it's really same as 01:00:148 (1) -
21:19 Akitoshi: if I nerf smthng in 01:05:253 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - then it will bland af
21:19 domSaur: if u sed so
21:20 Akitoshi: sry for rejects because srsly I don't get it lol
21:20 domSaur: it's oke.. i suk at explaining as werr
21:21 domSaur: nothing rly mucho to say... i post dis nao on thread
21:21 Akitoshi: oke
21:21 domSaur: o and dam, i duno why but "macaroni" sliders like 01:15:462 (1) -  triggers me for some reason, but that's just me and my preference on barely-bent sliders

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2016-02-19T14:55:49+00:00

Shiirn wrote:
Irre's Insane
00:15:559 (5) - New combo for spacing change/jump? Normally I'd put it AFTER, but since there's a jump here anyway... Valid point.
00:17:361 (1,2) - 2 is really, really not blanketed to 1's ending, but oh well.
00:18:412 (4,1) - Another noticeably bad blanket. These are blanketted just fine.
00:39:883 (1,1,1,1) - Don't see any musical reason for new combos. No emphasis necessary on any beats and the pattern isn't anything special to earn that colorful emphasis. It's my way of introducing the new part.
00:46:184 (2,3) - Move down and right 8 pixels to manually stack. Why? I don't see the need for that.
00:47:386 (2,3) - ^. If you want to be fancy, you can manually stack them in the opposite direction. x|116:y|124 for 2, x|112:y|120 for 3. I'm fine with the current one.
00:59:697 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I can't tell if this stream is trying to be straight or curve. Either way, 10->1 is visibly different. Honestly, a straight stream works great here. Go ahead and give every note -8x-3y for a nice straight stream. It's a curve.
01:07:355 (1,2,3) - Supernazi, triangle isn't perfect. Redid it? Looks pretty much the same though.

Thanks for your check!

Irre's Insane

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koliron

791 posts

Joined July 2014

koliron 2016-02-21T07:17:56+00:00

minor fixes in my rain

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:不可逆リプレイス
Artist:MY FIRST STORY
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Creator:Akitoshi
Version:Koli's Rain
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^^ c'mon find a std bnnnn

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-02-21T08:58:35+00:00

koliron wrote:
^^ c'mon find a std bnnnn

Waiting for Asagi and I'm already trying to find a std BN since last year xdxDXDEksDiixd

4399guangguang

75 posts

Joined April 2013

4399guangguang 2016-02-27T11:14:10+00:00

Asagi's Insane

01:18:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - For a 200BPM map,16hits are not really necessary.Try to make half of them into short sliders.

Irre's Insane

00:20:964 (2,3) - Looks a little bit strange.3 could be at x:36,y:348
00:25:469 - Add one more circle.
00:38:532 (1) - Adding a spinner here might be strange.This can be replaced by other objects.
00:19:313 (1,2,3,4) - Replace them by two short sliders.

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2016-02-28T16:35:13+00:00

Sorry, no fixes for me, all of this was intentional. Thanks for your check nevertheless!

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-03-04T16:40:37+00:00

<3

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-03-05T03:55:48+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
<3

♥

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-03-05T14:47:57+00:00

when rank huhuhu

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-03-05T17:12:01+00:00

Janpai wrote:
when rank huhuhu

idk maniniwala na ako sa foreve--

Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2016-03-05T20:05:52+00:00

Fixed all mods (except on some parts that I remapped)
Improve some stuff and such

( 　・ω・)

osu file format v14

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welp

Janpai

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Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-03-05T23:32:58+00:00

walang forever （¯﹃¯）

Bunnrei

1,044 posts

Joined May 2011

Bunnrei 2016-03-05T23:48:43+00:00

Janpai wrote:
walang forever （¯﹃¯）

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-03-06T03:32:03+00:00

Chara wrote:
Janpai wrote:
walang forever （¯﹃¯）

koliron

791 posts

Joined July 2014

koliron 2016-03-20T02:35:28+00:00

d e d

Akitoshi

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Joined August 2014

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Akitoshi 2016-03-20T05:24:48+00:00

koliron wrote:
d e d

I'm not giving up yet ;3;

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-03-27T15:38:53+00:00

pls rank

Akitoshi

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Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Akitoshi 2016-03-27T17:13:58+00:00

how xd

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

burstlimit2 2016-03-28T08:17:51+00:00

[General]
Nice mapset, there are some rhythm errors in easy-normal-hard. In 2hardest diffs I can`t find anything. Or I'm just bling or it`s perfect. Overall nice song and nice bg. GL on rankng!

[Insane]
00:19:012 (3) - That slider should be reversed because song goes like that, U can ctrl+g it and connect with the next stream for it to look better.
00:21:115 (2) - Stack with (1) maybe?
00:24:418 (2,3) - If u decided to mirror 00:25:018 (4,1), why not to mirror this ones? http://puu.sh/nWHpX/6be4751f6b.jpg
00:30:424 (2) - This rythm will be better http://puu.sh/nWHsk/9b1206da5c.jpg
01:24:096 (5,6) - Delete those. There is no need for triples there
[Irre`s Insane]
Irre is so lazy LOL. Beginning should be mapped imo
00:22:766 (4) - Maybe just make this slider longer instead of reverseing it? I don`t here any reverse there. Example: http://puu.sh/nWHGm/de90a903cb.jpg
00:58:046 (2) - Should be moved down a bit. It kinda goes out of the play field
00:59:397 (4) - 1)It doesn't suit there 2) Its unplayable
01:07:355 (1,2,3) - It will be better if u will leave them with only 2 reverse arrows there imo.
[Hard]
00:12:181 (1,2,3) - Move them a few ticks earlier or add one more slider on 00:12:181
00:19:238 (1,2,3) - Move one tick earlier
[Normal]
00:25:844 (4,1) - Move 1 tick earlier

Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2016-03-28T08:37:47+00:00

mamka322 wrote:
[General]
Nice mapset, there are some rhythm errors in easy-normal-hard. In 2hardest diffs I can`t find anything. Or I'm just bling or it`s perfect. Overall nice song and nice bg. GL on rankng!
[Insane]
00:19:012 (3) - That slider should be reversed because song goes like that, U can ctrl+g it and connect with the next stream for it to look better. this is fine flow imo
00:21:115 (2) - Stack with (1) maybe? yes it may be the good too, but I want to do "something" with this higher pitch on le instrument xd
00:24:418 (2,3) - If u decided to mirror 00:25:018 (4,1), why not to mirror this ones? http://puu.sh/nWHpX/6be4751f6b.jpg that was already mirrored lol, and your image looks good but too near ;w;
00:30:424 (2) - This rythm will be better http://puu.sh/nWHsk/9b1206da5c.jpg ok converted to 2circles
01:24:096 (5,6) - Delete those. There is no need for triples there oh. true
[Hard]
00:12:181 (1,2,3) - Move them a few ticks earlier or add one more slider on 00:12:181 it will be unrankable lol
00:19:238 (1,2,3) - Move one tick earlier changed 00:19:012 (5) - to slider instead :3
[Normal]
00:25:844 (4,1) - Move 1 tick earlier current one is fine, I don't really want to add too much 1/2 as well xd

Thanks for the mod!

Irreversible

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Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2016-03-28T14:02:09+00:00

mamka322 wrote:
[Irre`s Insane]
Irre is so lazy LOL. Beginning should be mapped imo for me, the song starts where I mapped it
00:22:766 (4) - Maybe just make this slider longer instead of reverseing it? I don`t here any reverse there. Example: http://puu.sh/nWHGm/de90a903cb.jpg i think a reverse fits this very well
00:58:046 (2) - Should be moved down a bit. It kinda goes out of the play field i checked it and it is fine
00:59:397 (4) - 1)It doesn't suit there 2) Its unplayable how is it unplayable?
01:07:355 (1,2,3) - It will be better if u will leave them with only 2 reverse arrows there imo. but 5 fit better

thanks nevertheless!

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2016-03-31T05:58:41+00:00

easy
-00:47:536 (2,3) - ctrl'g this rhythm? sounds better as the most important beats are mapped. you could after extend (3) like http://puu.sh/o0mK8/23b6720403.jpg
-01:16:363 (3,1,2) - similar stuff happens here. similar to http://puu.sh/o0mQn/ac8c69e9bd.jpg sounds more fitting i tihnk

normal
-00:58:196 (2) - sounds more natural if it started at 00:58:346 - instead, cuz drumszz
-01:16:814 - why do u ignore the cymbal here ;; start 01:16:964 (1) - from 01:16:814 - plz
-01:20:867 - gap feels so unnatural to play.. really consider mapping it. if you think it'll be too dense or something i'd remove 01:21:618 (6) - since it's mapping to nothing important

hard
-00:42:731 (6) - myocd tells me 00:41:980 (3,5,6) - should be a triangle ;( try moving the whole pattern a bit to the left so you dont go out of the playfield
-01:06:885 (2) - ??

irre
-00:45:734 (1,2,3) - 00:46:935 (1,2,3) - would be cool if these were custom stacked, so they look like 00:52:791 (8,9,1) - for instance lul
-00:32:376 (1,2,3) - spaced triple looks so randomly placed. it's the only place where it's done and it's not even a very hyped verse
-01:28:224 (2) - sounds keeps sounding but your slider ends earlier ;; even for vocals ending at 01:28:675 - would sound better

asagi
-extended sliders like 00:22:766 (1) - 00:32:377 (1) - dont sound too nice with nromal samp+high volumen. using lower volumen on their tails would be nice k
-01:09:156 (1,2) - add silenced sliderlide pls my ears ;;
-01:18:240 (2) - but stream starts clearly from red tick... it wouldn't matter if the sound wasnt clear, but here is just too obvious. uh
-01:27:624 (1,2,1) - adding some hitsounds on these slider's head would fit the ending verse of the song. pls add something like finishes or even whistles
-these http://puu.sh/o0p5W/9ecca4c48e.png should have the same samp/volumen accorind to qat lul

weakness
-00:00:102 - i'd rather use soft samp with higher volumen, than this. sounds more fitting for such calm section. in addition, you should add atleast some whistles every 2 measure or something, 11 sec without hs is kinda dull. same for this 2 circle here 01:09:156 - .
-01:08:255 (5) - wasnt it supposed to be around x175y178 ?
-01:18:240 (2) - but stream starts clearly from red tick... it wouldn't matter if the sound wasnt clear, but here is just too obvious. uh
-01:24:020 (6,1) - weird that in a map with high spacing, this strong sound is stacked. i guess you could go with something like http://puu.sh/o0oUo/c3454bf434.jpg to not change the whole pattern
-01:28:825 - soft samp pls xd you can still hear the "tik" from the normal samp
-samplesets should apply to others diffs since they're copying

also, asagi doesnt have video
maps are fine to me feel free to call me if u need

Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2016-03-31T07:47:04+00:00

Milan- wrote:
easy
-00:47:536 (2,3) - ctrl'g this rhythm? sounds better as the most important beats are mapped. you could after extend (3) like http://puu.sh/o0mK8/23b6720403.jpg hell yea so true, blame my 4months ago ;3
-01:16:363 (3,1,2) - similar stuff happens here. similar to http://puu.sh/o0mQn/ac8c69e9bd.jpg sounds more fitting i tihnk yea

normal
-00:58:196 (2) - sounds more natural if it started at 00:58:346 - instead, cuz drumszz I think the vocal is strong enough to emphasize here too like 00:56:394 (3,1) -
-01:16:814 - why do u ignore the cymbal here ;; start 01:16:964 (1) - from 01:16:814 - plz
-01:20:867 - gap feels so unnatural to play.. really consider mapping it. if you think it'll be too dense or something i'd remove 01:21:618 (6) - since it's mapping to nothing important Re-mapped that part based on your suggestion yay. Looking back my old meps so gud aaaaaaaaaaa

hard
-00:42:731 (6) - myocd tells me 00:41:980 (3,5,6) - should be a triangle ;( try moving the whole pattern a bit to the left so you dont go out of the playfield yea I moved entire 00:41:980 (3,4,5,6) -
-01:06:885 (2) - ?? I want to slap my old self yo
I re-mapped some parts, less "GAY" sliders and more asian waves xd

weakness
-00:00:102 - i'd rather use soft samp with higher volumen, than this. sounds more fitting for such calm section. in addition, you should add atleast some whistles every 2 measure or something, 11 sec without hs is kinda dull. same for this 2 circle here 01:09:156 - . tried
-01:08:255 (5) - wasnt it supposed to be around x175y178 ? I'm so sorry ;w;
-01:18:240 (2) - but stream starts clearly from red tick... it wouldn't matter if the sound wasnt clear, but here is just too obvious. uh oops. removed, I wish my current 01:18:165 (1) - will be fine ;e;
-01:24:020 (6,1) - weird that in a map with high spacing, this strong sound is stacked. i guess you could go with something like http://puu.sh/o0oUo/c3454bf434.jpg to not change the whole pattern Change the whole pattern was good I guess :^)
-01:28:825 - soft samp pls xd you can still hear the "tik" from the normal samp ayyyyyy
-samplesets should apply to others diffs since they're copying ya copied my hs this weeabooness to other my diffs

also, asagi doesnt have video
maps are fine to me feel free to call me if u need

Thanks for very helpful mod ;w;
lez wait for Irre and Asagi~

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2016-03-31T16:41:24+00:00

Milan- wrote:
irre
-00:45:734 (1,2,3) - 00:46:935 (1,2,3) - would be cool if these were custom stacked, so they look like 00:52:791 (8,9,1) - for instance lul oh okay, but i don't see the simialrities between them xD
-00:32:376 (1,2,3) - spaced triple looks so randomly placed. it's the only place where it's done and it's not even a very hyped verse mh no, if you listen to the song carefully this only happens once.
-01:28:224 (2) - sounds keeps sounding but your slider ends earlier ;; even for vocals ending at 01:28:675 - would sound better ok

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: MFS Fukagyaku Replace.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2500
PreviewTime: 69081
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Fukagyaku Replace
TitleUnicode:不可逆リプレイス
Artist:MY FIRST STORY
ArtistUnicode:MY FIRST STORY
Creator:Akitoshi
Version:Irre's Insane
Source:信長協奏曲
Tags:Nobunaga Concerto Ending Asagi Ster koliron Irreversible
BeatmapID:902037
BeatmapSetID:342218

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.57
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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