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Aivi & Surasshu - Lonely rolling star (Missing you)

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Topic Starter
Inversal
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, October 14, 2015 at 5:06:07 PM

Artist: Aivi & Surasshu
Title: Lonely rolling star (Missing you)
Source: Katamari Damacy
Tags: bestza55567 shockolatte paloch vega aivi surasshu lonely rolling star katamari damacy
BPM: 180.16
Filesize: 5768kb
Play Time: 05:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Marathon (5.04 stars, 1312 notes)
Download: Aivi & Surasshu - Lonely rolling star (Missing you)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PLANNING TO REMAP SOON

Collab Project
Thanks BG by Backstep
Thanks HS By - N a n a k a - (Haven't applied yet)
Big shoutout to Aivi & Surasshu for composing the very awesome song!
Get ready to relax in this song. It isn't hard at all :D trust me.
Ready for mods now. :D (especially in nazi mod, pattern mod and Hitsounds)
Big thanks to all modders.
BG (100%) I got a good BG now!
Map (100%) Completed!
00:06:955 - 00:30:934 - Me
00:30:934 - 00:52:248 - Shockolatte
00:52:248 - 01:13:562 - Paloch VeGa
01:13:562 - 01:29:548 - Me
01:29:548 - 01:50:862 - Paloch VeGa
01:50:862 - 02:10:844 - Break!
02:10:844 - 02:33:490 - Shockolatte
02:33:490 - 02:54:804 - Me
02:54:804 - 03:10:790 - Paloch VeGa
03:10:790 - 03:53:418 - Shockolatte
03:53:418 - 04:17:397 - Me
04:17:397 - 04:46:703 - Paloch VeGa
04:46:703 - 05:08:018 - Me
05:08:018 - 05:33:028 - Shockolatte
CrystilonZ
Mini mod
no KDS

BGM เบี้ยวนะ ไม่รู้ว่าเท่าไหร่แฮะ แต่ฟังออกว่าเบี้ยวอะ 555+ ลองฟังตอนช่วงแรกๆเพลงดู มันเบี้ยว

03:10:790 - 03:32:104 ไม่ค่อยเข้าเท่าไหร่นะ stream คือ มันมีเสียง bg เป็น electronic 1/4 จริง แต่ว่า ตัวเพลงจริงๆ อะ มันเป็น calm ยิ่งโดดๆด้วย ไม่เข้า*2 ทำเป็น calm ไปเถอะ อาจจะมี 1/4 ติดมาบ้าง แต่ไม่ใช่ทั้งท่อนอะ

แค่นี้แหล่ะ
BoatKrab
คอยเชียร์ให้แรงค์ไวๆนะ ดูเหมือนว่าแมพนี้เจ๋งมาก ทั้ง 3 คนเลย xD
แต่ HitSound ยังไม่สมประกอบนะกำ หรือยังไม่เสร็จ :v
Topic Starter
Inversal
ใช่ๆ ลืมเขียนเลย ว่า HS WIP อยู่ มันไม่มี HS บาง Part ใช่มั้ยละ แก้แปปนะ
Hendrix89
Hi from my mod queue sorry for long wait,

Collab Marathon:

00:18:112 - add a whole note slider here
00:18:611 - add a 1/2 note slider here
00:42:507 (4) - remove this note
00:44:505 (2,3) - move these notes closer to the end of the slider
01:23:220 (6) - turn this into a 1/2 note slider
02:39:485 (8,1) - try lowering the SV to 0.75 for these two sliders
03:10:790 (1) to 03:29:273 (2) - this section feels very over mapped, it seems like you force a bunch of these streams like: 03:17:451 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) , 03:26:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) and some more, try to tone down the streams a bit
03:40:097 (1,2,3) - bring these notes closer together cuz of the
04:13:733 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - its a slow part so lower the distance of these jumps and make a NC on 8
04:45:371 (9) - delete NC, looks kinda ugly to have it
05:06:685 (1) - NC
05:10:682 (1) - ^
05:11:681 (1) - ^
05:12:181 (1) - ^
05:12:514 (1) - ^

Pretty good map overall, just fix the really streamy part and you should be good. Good luck with it :D
- Frontier -

Hendrix89 wrote:

Hi from my mod queue sorry for long wait,

Collab Marathon:

00:18:112 - add a whole note slider here
00:18:611 - add a 1/2 note slider here
00:42:507 (4) - remove this note
00:44:505 (2,3) - move these notes closer to the end of the slider
01:23:220 (6) - turn this into a 1/2 note slider
02:39:485 (8,1) - try lowering the SV to 0.75 for these two sliders
03:10:790 (1) to 03:29:273 (2) - this section feels very over mapped, it seems like you force a bunch of these streams like: 03:17:451 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) , 03:26:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) and some more, try to tone down the streams a bit
03:40:097 (1,2,3) - bring these notes closer together cuz of the
04:13:733 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - its a slow part so lower the distance of these jumps and make a NC on 8
04:45:371 (9) - delete NC, looks kinda ugly to have it
05:06:685 (1) - NC
05:10:682 (1) - ^
05:11:681 (1) - ^
05:12:181 (1) - ^
05:12:514 (1) - ^

Pretty good map overall, just fix the really streamy part and you should be good. Good luck with it :D
fix my part all. Thanks !
Topic Starter
Inversal
I'll talk about my part only. Thanks very much for the mod.

Hendrix89 wrote:

Hi from my mod queue sorry for long wait,

Collab Marathon:

00:18:112 - add a whole note slider here Fixed. But I have a better pattern than these two
00:18:611 - add a 1/2 note slider here Above ^
00:42:507 (4) - remove this note
00:44:505 (2,3) - move these notes closer to the end of the slider
01:23:220 (6) - turn this into a 1/2 note slider Fixed
02:39:485 (8,1) - try lowering the SV to 0.75 for these two sliders I think its OK.
03:10:790 (1) to 03:29:273 (2) - this section feels very over mapped, it seems like you force a bunch of these streams like: 03:17:451 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) , 03:26:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) and some more, try to tone down the streams a bit
03:40:097 (1,2,3) - bring these notes closer together cuz of the
04:13:733 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - its a slow part so lower the distance of these jumps and make a NC on 8 Fixed
04:45:371 (9) - delete NC, looks kinda ugly to have it Fixed
05:06:685 (1) - NC Fixed
05:10:682 (1) - ^
05:11:681 (1) - ^
05:12:181 (1) - ^
05:12:514 (1) - ^

Pretty good map overall, just fix the really streamy part and you should be good. Good luck with it :D Thank you very much!
Update!!! :D
Kyle Y
#collab modding queue
Sorry for late mod
To the creator, next time, please read the rules for modding queue. I did mention I will mod the maps under 4.5 star.
This time, I just mod for you.
Please bear in mind that modders still can choose not mod for you becasue you didn't read the rules, even if you did the M4M.

[Collab]
I don't know which mapper which part, therefore just give suggestion, as marathon diff do not have that many rules, maybe.
00:06:955 (1) - I don't know why spinner end at 00:09:286 - . I think it should end at 00:09:619 - (of course del the circle)
00:12:117 (10,1,2,3) - I cannot understand also, what is the purpose of stacking.
00:20:110 - missing circle, becasue there is a instu sound, I cannot hear which kinds of instrument.
00:20:277 (7) - nc here
00:21:109 - should it be something clickable here as there is a strong sound
00:21:442 (12,1) - ctrl+g rhythm because a strong sound at 00:21:942 - , therefore clickable thing here.
00:24:106 (6,1) - not suitable jumping, although there is no restriction on Insane, but it is use proper jump for suitable music.
00:26:438 - same, clickable here?
00:32:599 (4) - same, here is strong sound (00:32:765 - ) therefore clickable thing is better
00:33:764 (3) - seperate more, just a little weird for ds, optional to do that
00:33:931 (4,3) - flowing... In fact I don't know if I should point the poor flow out, some mapper like to make flowing hard in order to increase the star rating, I don't know if you intent to do it or not.
I really random check for 1/4 sound, 00:39:842 - 00:42:507 (4) - I think there is no 1/4 sound here, if you map those 1/4 with no sound, then it is consider as overmapping. Just like 00:56:494 - there is a soft sound here, then it is okay to map it. Please check all the 1/4 sound, I think there is a lot of overmapping. (Of course, some place there is 1/4 sound but you didn't map it, just like 00:56:827 - )
01:02:905 (1,2) - I suggest using two 1/1 slider becasue it is more suitable for me, and easier to play.
01:11:231 - strong beat sound here, why skip it?
01:13:395 - I clam that the blue line show the mapping division parts right? I think this mapper is worth to learn, I like the patterns.
01:15:560 (5) - nc, becasue on the pattern. nc can show the pattern more clearly, from square to pentagon.
01:24:885 - 01:25:884 - why no make something clickable because of the strong beat.
01:27:050 (1) - if you can intend to skip it, then nothing. if not, then I think better to add a circle here
01:31:546 - Same, clickable thing due to the strong beat
01:33:544 (1) - place high to fit ds, and also flowing.
01:36:541 - strong beat again.
01:50:862 - I suggest last note before break is 01:51:361 - and snap the break start to 01:52:027 -
01:53:526 - 01:56:190 - 01:58:855 -try some simple pattern? becasue Insane no need that long break. Just map the Piano sound is okay.
02:14:008 (1) - is it good to skip beat? I don't know.
02:15:756 - I cannot hear 1/4 sound here, then just use 1/2
02:17:171 (1,2,3,4) - becasue here change of sentence... then change for pattern also? suggeston: change to 1/4 slider jump (optional)
02:37:653 - missing beat, avoid?
02:36:265 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - becasue the previous stream is 1/4 stream, and if suddently change to 1/6, many player will miss it
maybe you can try this.

02:42:149 (6) -nc this, pattern nc. btw, I suggest increase ds for 2nd square and further increase for 3rd square.
02:52:806 - piano sound, why skip?
02:53:972 (4) - why not increase the ds but decrease. the music is climbing higher, then I think the ds should also higher.
03:08:126 - suggest circle, just feel better for me. optional.
03:11:456 (3) - the reverse sign is blocked by 03:10:790 (1) - . I think it is UNRANKABLE, I am quite sure about it, just for confirm, please ask BNs.
03:13:954 (1) - better do not skip 03:14:120 - optional.
03:14:203 - 03:14:370 - 03:14:536 - 03:14:703 - there is 1/4 sound, not map it?
03:15:119 (5) - nc
This stream a little bit formal. maybe you can try this. Just map the map fun.
03:15:452 (1,2) - I cannot hear the 1/4 sound but 1/2 sound. and it is weird to have 1/4 also.
03:30:106 (1,2) - ^
03:42:428 (3,1) - hard to know it is 1/2 spacing, it is not suitable for a jump, becasue there is no strong beat on 03:42:594 -
03:51:253 - this strong beat copletely disappear.

03:52:086 (1,2,3,4,1) - are you intend to make it not straight line/ or following a curve slider?? If yes then keep, if no then change it for better look.
03:53:918 (2) - really misleading ds....
04:30:052 (3) - nc for SV change
04:31:384 (3) - use two 1/1 slider, skipping 04:31:883 - seems weird to me.
04:33:382 (1) - 1/1 slider, weird to me because the skipped 04:33:549 -
04:34:048 (3) - 04:36:712 (3) - I don't want to catch blanket. blanket it. Check it by yourself
04:46:703 (1) - can you make a jump here? there is a strong beat, this ds seems waste the beat sound.
05:00:358 - strong beat, clickable thing?
05:21:339 (1) - unsnapped, it is 1/3, and 05:21:672 (2) - this is 1/2.
05:24:336 (2) - 1/2 also, beacause music change notes at 05:24:503 -
05:24:836 (2,3,4) - increase ds, too close is not fluent to play.
05:28:666 (1) - constant ds with stream.


To all collab mapper
1)I am not focusing you to change it, but just giving you suggestion.
2)And then I find then the new combo for this map quite different from different mapper, it is too confuse the player. I think better to make a good decision and make nc the same. I suggest mainly nc at big tick, and change this rules base on the situation. Just like this first mapper (00:09:619 - ) 8 beats one nc seems too long.
3)I didn't check blanketing for you, I point of one blanket only, just I saw it when I pause and writing the mods. Blanketing can make the map more clear and well-look. therefore I highly suggest mapper to use perfect blanketed slider.
4) I found a lot of 1/4 overmapping, quite a lot in the beginning part. Please check if there is sound.
5)If you are not sure about my modding, you can find me of course.
6)If you think my modding is useless, please just reject to my mods, and do not slap me.

That's all.
Topic Starter
Inversal

Kyle Y wrote:

#collab modding queue
Sorry for late mod
To the creator, next time, please read the rules for modding queue. I did mention I will mod the maps under 4.5 star.
This time, I just mod for you.
Please bear in mind that modders still can choose not mod for you becasue you didn't read the rules, even if you did the M4M.

[Collab]
I don't know which mapper which part, therefore just give suggestion, as marathon diff do not have that many rules, maybe.
00:06:955 (1) - I don't know why spinner end at 00:09:286 - . I think it should end at 00:09:619 - (of course del the circle) If i del the first one. players will have very few time to recover after spinner.
00:12:117 (10,1,2,3) - I cannot understand also, what is the purpose of stacking.Fixed
00:20:110 - missing circle, becasue there is a instu sound, I cannot hear which kinds of instrument. Fixed
00:20:277 (7) - nc here
00:21:109 - should it be something clickable here as there is a strong sound Let me think for a while. I tried to make notes suitable to all sounds.
00:21:442 (12,1) - ctrl+g rhythm because a strong sound at 00:21:942 - , therefore clickable thing here. Fixed
00:24:106 (6,1) - not suitable jumping, although there is no restriction on Insane, but it is use proper jump for suitable music. Fixed
00:26:438 - same, clickable here?
00:32:599 (4) - same, here is strong sound (00:32:765 - ) therefore clickable thing is better
00:33:764 (3) - seperate more, just a little weird for ds, optional to do that
00:33:931 (4,3) - flowing... In fact I don't know if I should point the poor flow out, some mapper like to make flowing hard in order to increase the star rating, I don't know if you intent to do it or not.
I really random check for 1/4 sound, 00:39:842 - 00:42:507 (4) - I think there is no 1/4 sound here, if you map those 1/4 with no sound, then it is consider as overmapping. Just like 00:56:494 - there is a soft sound here, then it is okay to map it. Please check all the 1/4 sound, I think there is a lot of overmapping. (Of course, some place there is 1/4 sound but you didn't map it, just like 00:56:827 - )
01:02:905 (1,2) - I suggest using two 1/1 slider becasue it is more suitable for me, and easier to play.
01:11:231 - strong beat sound here, why skip it?
01:13:395 - I clam that the blue line show the mapping division parts right? I think this mapper is worth to learn, I like the patterns.
01:15:560 (5) - nc, becasue on the pattern. nc can show the pattern more clearly, from square to pentagon.
01:24:885 - 01:25:884 - why no make something clickable because of the strong beat.
01:27:050 (1) - if you can intend to skip it, then nothing. if not, then I think better to add a circle here
01:31:546 - Same, clickable thing due to the strong beat
01:33:544 (1) - place high to fit ds, and also flowing.
01:36:541 - strong beat again.
01:50:862 - I suggest last note before break is 01:51:361 - and snap the break start to 01:52:027 -
01:53:526 - 01:56:190 - 01:58:855 -try some simple pattern? becasue Insane no need that long break. Just map the Piano sound is okay.
02:14:008 (1) - is it good to skip beat? I don't know.
02:15:756 - I cannot hear 1/4 sound here, then just use 1/2
02:17:171 (1,2,3,4) - becasue here change of sentence... then change for pattern also? suggeston: change to 1/4 slider jump (optional)
02:37:653 - missing beat, avoid?
02:36:265 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - becasue the previous stream is 1/4 stream, and if suddently change to 1/6, many player will miss it
maybe you can try this. Fixed

02:42:149 (6) -nc this, pattern nc. btw, I suggest increase ds for 2nd square and further increase for 3rd square. Fixed
02:52:806 - piano sound, why skip? Fixed
02:53:972 (4) - why not increase the ds but decrease. the music is climbing higher, then I think the ds should also higher. Fixed
03:08:126 - suggest circle, just feel better for me. optional.
03:11:456 (3) - the reverse sign is blocked by 03:10:790 (1) - . I think it is UNRANKABLE, I am quite sure about it, just for confirm, please ask BNs.
03:13:954 (1) - better do not skip 03:14:120 - optional.
03:14:203 - 03:14:370 - 03:14:536 - 03:14:703 - there is 1/4 sound, not map it?
03:15:119 (5) - nc
This stream a little bit formal. maybe you can try this. Just map the map fun.
03:15:452 (1,2) - I cannot hear the 1/4 sound but 1/2 sound. and it is weird to have 1/4 also.
03:30:106 (1,2) - ^
03:42:428 (3,1) - hard to know it is 1/2 spacing, it is not suitable for a jump, becasue there is no strong beat on 03:42:594 -
03:51:253 - this strong beat copletely disappear.

03:52:086 (1,2,3,4,1) - are you intend to make it not straight line/ or following a curve slider?? If yes then keep, if no then change it for better look.
03:53:918 (2) - really misleading ds....
04:30:052 (3) - nc for SV change
04:31:384 (3) - use two 1/1 slider, skipping 04:31:883 - seems weird to me.
04:33:382 (1) - 1/1 slider, weird to me because the skipped 04:33:549 -
04:34:048 (3) - 04:36:712 (3) - I don't want to catch blanket. blanket it. Check it by yourself
04:46:703 (1) - can you make a jump here? there is a strong beat, this ds seems waste the beat sound. Fixed
05:00:358 - strong beat, clickable thing? Fixed
05:21:339 (1) - unsnapped, it is 1/3, and 05:21:672 (2) - this is 1/2.
05:24:336 (2) - 1/2 also, beacause music change notes at 05:24:503 -
05:24:836 (2,3,4) - increase ds, too close is not fluent to play.
05:28:666 (1) - constant ds with stream.


To all collab mapper
1)I am not focusing you to change it, but just giving you suggestion.
2)And then I find then the new combo for this map quite different from different mapper, it is too confuse the player. I think better to make a good decision and make nc the same. I suggest mainly nc at big tick, and change this rules base on the situation. Just like this first mapper (00:09:619 - ) 8 beats one nc seems too long.
3)I didn't check blanketing for you, I point of one blanket only, just I saw it when I pause and writing the mods. Blanketing can make the map more clear and well-look. therefore I highly suggest mapper to use perfect blanketed slider.
4) I found a lot of 1/4 overmapping, quite a lot in the beginning part. Please check if there is sound.
5)If you are not sure about my modding, you can find me of course.
6)If you think my modding is useless, please just reject to my mods, and do not slap me.

That's all.
Sorry for forgotting the rules. Please apologize me. And thanks very much for the mod! :D :D :D
In PV's part. He fixed all thing except 04:31:384

I just finished only half (just only half of half) of your mods. But in my country, it is late night now. So I will finish it all tomorrow!

Update!
- Frontier -

Kyle Y wrote:

#collab modding queueFix my part
00:32:599 (4) - same, here is strong sound (00:32:765 - ) therefore clickable thing is better :v
00:33:764 (3) - seperate more, just a little weird for ds, optional to do that fixed
00:33:931 (4,3) - flowing... In fact I don't know if I should point the poor flow out, some mapper like to make flowing hard in order to increase the star rating, I don't know if you intent to do it or not. I want to make this map hard so I make hard flowing but I fixed it
I really random check for 1/4 sound, 00:39:842 - 00:42:507 (4) - I think there is no 1/4 sound here, if you map those 1/4 with no sound, then it is consider as overmapping. Just like 00:56:494 - there is a soft sound here, then it is okay to map it. Please check all the 1/4 sound, I think there is a lot of overmapping. (Of course, some place there is 1/4 sound but you didn't map it, just like 00:56:827 - )

02:14:008 (1) - is it good to skip beat? I don't know. I think no
02:15:756 - I cannot hear 1/4 sound here, then just use 1/2 Fixed
02:17:171 (1,2,3,4) - becasue here change of sentence... then change for pattern also? suggeston: change to 1/4 slider jump (optional) OK Fixed

03:11:456 (3) - the reverse sign is blocked by 03:10:790 (1) - . I think it is UNRANKABLE, I am quite sure about it, just for confirm, please ask BNs. Fixed
03:13:954 (1) - better do not skip 03:14:120 - optional. No, I think skip is better
03:14:203 - 03:14:370 - 03:14:536 - 03:14:703 - there is 1/4 sound, not map it? Fixed
03:15:119 (5) - nc Fixed
This stream a little bit formal. maybe you can try this. Just map the map fun.
03:15:452 (1,2) - I cannot hear the 1/4 sound but 1/2 sound. and it is weird to have 1/4 also. No, there's no sound at the end of the slider
03:30:106 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:42:428 (3,1) - hard to know it is 1/2 spacing, it is not suitable for a jump, becasue there is no strong beat on 03:42:594 - Fixed
03:51:253 - this strong beat copletely disappear. Like 03:15:452 (1,2). There's no sound on the end of slider.The volume is 5%

03:52:086 (1,2,3,4,1) - are you intend to make it not straight line/ or following a curve slider?? If yes then keep, if no then change it for better look. Yes

05:21:339 (1) - unsnapped, it is 1/3, and 05:21:672 (2) - this is 1/2. Fixed
05:24:336 (2) - 1/2 also, beacause music change notes at 05:24:503 - Fixed
05:24:836 (2,3,4) - increase ds, too close is not fluent to play. Fixed
05:28:666 (1) - constant ds with stream. Fixed !


To all collab mapper
1)I am not focusing you to change it, but just giving you suggestion.
2)And then I find then the new combo for this map quite different from different mapper, it is too confuse the player. I think better to make a good decision and make nc the same. I suggest mainly nc at big tick, and change this rules base on the situation. Just like this first mapper (00:09:619 - ) 8 beats one nc seems too long.
3)I didn't check blanketing for you, I point of one blanket only, just I saw it when I pause and writing the mods. Blanketing can make the map more clear and well-look. therefore I highly suggest mapper to use perfect blanketed slider.
4) I found a lot of 1/4 overmapping, quite a lot in the beginning part. Please check if there is sound.
5)If you are not sure about my modding, you can find me of course.
6)If you think my modding is useless, please just reject to my mods, and do not slap me. /me slaps Kyle Y haha

That's all.
micchi_chi
Hi M4M from my modding Q~ -w-

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : dem, pls don't do dis

[Collab Marathon]
  1. Gonna put some general problem here. First of all, I think the artist is "aivi & surasshu" (without capital "A" nor "S") and the title is "Lonely Rolling Star (Missing You)" (with capital "R", "S", and "Y"). Source from here https://soundcloud.com/waltzforluma/aiv ... ly-rolling You should fix those.
  2. Add some tags, firstly, add those (username) that participated in the collab.
  3. Song setup -> design, disable "Letterbox during breaks"
  4. Why don't try to set combo colors to support the background?
  5. Why do you put the audio preview at the very start of the song? .-. well it's taste but for me it would be better to be placed before chorus like 01:28:548 or 03:09:791
  6. Wow .-. you used a pretty slow SV don't you .-.
  7. Now for the mod...
  8. 00:17:446 (1) - End this here 00:17:779 and add a note afterwards because there's a piano sound there. http://puu.sh/kBvtY/2c8352c82f.jpg
  9. 00:30:101 (2,3,4) - Somehow clap feels unfitting x-x maybe you could use custom snare drum sound... I'm not expert at this tho
  10. 00:31:267 Actually for sound like these you better use custom snare drum instead of whistle :/
  11. 00:51:415 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star is slightly imperfect. I don't know if you already know this but you can make polygon shape with this option http://puu.sh/kBvCO/3760975d2c.png and 00:52:248 (1) - could be placed at the center better.
  12. 01:11:397 (2,4) - Nazi; stack these
  13. 01:15:560 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make it a star form? .-. using the technique above ^
  14. 01:24:219 (4,5,1) - better make these symmetric ((5) placed at the middle and (1) become the perfect copy of (4) (with copy pasting (4) then press ctrl+H))
  15. 01:33:877 (6,3) - Stack (3)'s tail with (6)'s head
  16. 01:38:789 There's a sound to support triplet here :/ pretty big actually, really, better add a note there
  17. 02:18:004 (1,1) - Stack~
  18. 02:47:144 (2,3) - The spacing is very near o-o I think you better make it like this http://puu.sh/kBvSH/5f3c9a0dbc.jpg
  19. 03:10:790 I think the claps are too loud at this part :/
  20. 03:46:757 Really .-. even without any sound here, feels really empty without a note... suddenly stopping here 03:46:591 feels abrupt .-. maybe just add a note to fill the emptiness
  21. 04:09:404 (1,2,3) - The different spacing with same rhythm make it feel weird :/ (2) looks like 1/4 rhythm... Maybe make them the same space http://puu.sh/kBw3B/01f99bf9ca.jpg
  22. 04:10:736 (5,7) - Stack?
  23. 04:13:733 (1,2) - is this not stacked on purpose?
  24. 04:36:712 (3,4) - lol, blankett
  25. 04:55:945 add a note for triplet, there's a sound that support it. Pretty hard to place it tho :/
  26. 04:59:192 (6) - What is this slider following? .-. there's a very big ignored sound here 04:59:359 better change it to a circle followed by 1/2 slider http://puu.sh/kBw9W/d937b1d848.jpg
  27. 05:04:521 (6) - These 1/1 sliders that start at red tick feels weird :/
  28. That's all I think. Pay more attention to your stack. I don't know if they are purposely unstacked so I don't want to remind them all. And I think you should change those 1/1 slider that start at the red tick at the last kiai, they feel weird :/. Overall good map :3

Good luck~ -w-

Edit: forgot something >.<
Topic Starter
Inversal
Thanks very much for the mod nanodesu!
Red = I don't fix it.
Blue = I don't sure (with some reasons)
Green = Fixed :D
I will fix only my part.

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi M4M from my modding Q~ -w-

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : dem, pls don't do dis

[Collab Marathon]
  1. Gonna put some general problem here. First of all, I think the artist is "aivi & surasshu" (without capital "A" nor "S") and the title is "Lonely Rolling Star (Missing You)" (with capital "R", "S", and "Y"). Source from here https://soundcloud.com/waltzforluma/aiv ... ly-rolling You should fix those. OK Fixed
  2. Add some tags, firstly, add those (username) that participated in the collab. Fixed
  3. Song setup -> design, disable "Letterbox during breaks" Fixed
  4. Why don't try to set combo colors to support the background? Fixed
  5. Why do you put the audio preview at the very start of the song? .-. well it's taste but for me it would be better to be placed before chorus like 01:28:548 or 03:09:791 Ok
  6. Wow .-. you used a pretty slow SV don't you .-. Uh.... I didn't expect the 5-star difficulty at the beginning so i didn't set the high SV for these
  7. Now for the mod...
  8. 00:17:446 (1) - End this here 00:17:779 and add a note afterwards because there's a piano sound there. http://puu.sh/kBvtY/2c8352c82f.jpg Fixed
  9. 00:30:101 (2,3,4) - Somehow clap feels unfitting x-x maybe you could use custom snare drum sound... I'm not expert at this tho I'm not expert at these too lol
  10. 00:31:267 Actually for sound like these you better use custom snare drum instead of whistle :/ ^
  11. 00:51:415 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star is slightly imperfect. I don't know if you already know this but you can make polygon shape with this option http://puu.sh/kBvCO/3760975d2c.png and 00:52:248 (1) - could be placed at the center better.
  12. 01:11:397 (2,4) - Nazi; stack these
  13. 01:15:560 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make it a star form? .-. using the technique above ^Fixed
  14. 01:24:219 (4,5,1) - better make these symmetric ((5) placed at the middle and (1) become the perfect copy of (4) (with copy pasting (4) then press ctrl+H))
  15. 01:33:877 (6,3) - Stack (3)'s tail with (6)'s head
  16. 01:38:789 There's a sound to support triplet here :/ pretty big actually, really, better add a note there
  17. 02:18:004 (1,1) - Stack~
  18. 02:47:144 (2,3) - The spacing is very near o-o I think you better make it like this http://puu.sh/kBvSH/5f3c9a0dbc.jpg Fixed
  19. 03:10:790 I think the claps are too loud at this part :/
  20. 03:46:757 Really .-. even without any sound here, feels really empty without a note... suddenly stopping here 03:46:591 feels abrupt .-. maybe just add a note to fill the emptiness
  21. 04:09:404 (1,2,3) - The different spacing with same rhythm make it feel weird :/ (2) looks like 1/4 rhythm... Maybe make them the same space http://puu.sh/kBw3B/01f99bf9ca.jpg Fixed
  22. 04:10:736 (5,7) - Stack? Fixed
  23. 04:13:733 (1,2) - is this not stacked on purpose? Fixed
  24. 04:36:712 (3,4) - lol, blankett
  25. 04:55:945 add a note for triplet, there's a sound that support it. Pretty hard to place it tho :/
  26. 04:59:192 (6) - What is this slider following? .-. there's a very big ignored sound here 04:59:359 better change it to a circle followed by 1/2 slider http://puu.sh/kBw9W/d937b1d848.jpg Fixed but hard to fix tho lol
  27. 05:04:521 (6) - These 1/1 sliders that start at red tick feels weird :/ IMO There's no good option better than this. I don't want to jump here
  28. That's all I think. Pay more attention to your stack. I don't know if they are purposely unstacked so I don't want to remind them all. And I think you should change those 1/1 slider that start at the red tick at the last kiai, they feel weird :/. Overall good map :3
Thank you :D

Good luck~ -w-

Edit: forgot something >.<
NP
- Frontier -
:( :( :( I'm lazy to fix my part.
Red = I don't fix
Blue = I'm not sure :(
Green = Fixed !! :)
Black = My comment :)

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi M4M from my modding Q~ -w-

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : dem, pls don't do dis

[Collab Marathon]
  1. 00:31:267 Actually for sound like these you better use custom snare drum instead of whistle :/ Fixed
  2. 00:51:415 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star is slightly imperfect. I don't know if you already know this but you can make polygon shape with this option http://puu.sh/kBvCO/3760975d2c.png and 00:52:248 (1) - could be placed at the center better. Fixed But I'm not sure it's perfect :(
  3. 02:18:004 (1,1) - Stack~ Fixed
  4. 03:10:790 I think the claps are too loud at this part :/ Change the volume at 70% . Is it okay?
  5. 03:46:757 Really .-. even without any sound here, feels really empty without a note... suddenly stopping here 03:46:591 feels abrupt .-. maybe just add a note to fill the emptiness I follow piano sound at this part. Fixed
  6. That's all I think. Pay more attention to your stack. I don't know if they are purposely unstacked so I don't want to remind them all. And I think you should change those 1/1 slider that start at the red tick at the last kiai, they feel weird :/. Overall good map :3 Thanks !

Good luck~ -w- >w<
Edit: forgot something >.<
Natsuki Nanaka
lot of issue, hitsound, loud

also this is irc mod
irc
2558-10-12 22:46 bestza55567: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/756014 Aivi & Surasshu - Lonely rolling star (Missing you)]
2558-10-12 22:49 - N a n a k a -: แหม่แมพ
2558-10-12 22:49 - N a n a k a -: ถถถ
2558-10-12 22:50 bestza55567: 555555
2558-10-12 22:50 bestza55567: มีอันเดียวอ่ะพี่ T^T
2558-10-12 22:51 - N a n a k a -: แปลกๆ
2558-10-12 22:51 - N a n a k a -: สัยสัยต้องลบลงใหม่
2558-10-12 22:51 - N a n a k a -: ยังค้าง m4m อีก 2 คน
2558-10-12 22:52 - N a n a k a -: นึกถึงชื่อ lazy mapper ไว้
2558-10-12 22:52 bestza55567: shocko หรอคับ 555
2558-10-12 22:52 - N a n a k a -: ไม่
2558-10-12 22:52 bestza55567: ใครหว่า
2558-10-12 22:52 - N a n a k a -: คนหนึ่งใกล้ๆตัวที่ทำแมพเสร็จยาก
2558-10-12 22:52 - N a n a k a -: :v
2558-10-12 22:53 - N a n a k a -: 03:10:623 - ทำไมต้องมา set pv ตรงนี้ถึงจะโอเคหว่า
2558-10-12 22:53 bestza55567: เราก็นานนะ
2558-10-12 22:53 bestza55567: :v
2558-10-12 22:53 - N a n a k a -: เราว่า m4m นายมีปัญหา
2558-10-12 22:53 - N a n a k a -: *mp3
2558-10-12 22:54 bestza55567: ยังไงหรอคับ
2558-10-12 22:54 - N a n a k a -: เหมือนจะ encode มีปปัญหา
2558-10-12 22:54 - N a n a k a -: เราเคยเป็นบ่อยๆ
2558-10-12 22:54 - N a n a k a -: BN ไม่ว่าอะไรมั้ง
2558-10-12 22:54 - N a n a k a -: รู้แต่ต้องเปลี่ยน pv ตามด้านบน
2558-10-12 22:56 - N a n a k a -: เหอ
2558-10-12 22:56 - N a n a k a -: hs 100%
2558-10-12 22:56 - N a n a k a -: พวกนายบ้าไปแล้ว
2558-10-12 22:56 - N a n a k a -: เพลงมันออกจะเบา
2558-10-12 22:58 - N a n a k a -: เรื่อง hs นี่ขัดเยอะ
2558-10-12 22:58 - N a n a k a -: เดี๋ยวไปม็อดลงบอร์ดอีกที
2558-10-12 22:59 bestza55567: ครับ 5555
2558-10-12 23:00 - N a n a k a -: โอเคของอีก 2 คนค่อยม็อดลงบอร์ดด
2558-10-12 23:00 - N a n a k a -: ขยับไป 120,44
2558-10-12 23:00 - N a n a k a -: 00:12:617 (3) -
2558-10-12 23:00 - N a n a k a -: นี่
2558-10-12 23:01 - N a n a k a -: 00:12:783 (4) - 72,104
2558-10-12 23:01 - N a n a k a -: โน๊ตมันจะดูโค้งกว่า
2558-10-12 23:01 bestza55567: ครับ แปปนะ
2558-10-12 23:03 - N a n a k a -: เสร็จแล้วบอก
2558-10-12 23:03 bestza55567: เรียบร้อยครับ
2558-10-12 23:05 - N a n a k a -: 00:16:114 (1) -
2558-10-12 23:05 - N a n a k a -: ก็อบจาก 00:15:448 (4) - แล้ว ctrl+j
2558-10-12 23:06 - N a n a k a -: เดี๋ยวหา hs ให้แล้วกัน
2558-10-12 23:06 - N a n a k a -: clap ดูขัดๆ
2558-10-12 23:06 bestza55567: ต้อง ctrl + g มั้ยครับ
2558-10-12 23:06 - N a n a k a -: เยส
2558-10-12 23:08 bestza55567: เรียบร้อยละครับ
2558-10-12 23:08 - N a n a k a -: 00:18:944 -
2558-10-12 23:09 - N a n a k a -: sv 0.87
2558-10-12 23:09 - N a n a k a -: ยังไม่เร็ว
2558-10-12 23:11 bestza55567: เรียบร้อยครับ
2558-10-12 23:13 - N a n a k a -: 01:14:228 (3) -
2558-10-12 23:13 - N a n a k a -: 396,244
2558-10-12 23:13 - N a n a k a -: 01:15:560 (1,2,3,4,1) - ดาวเบี้ยว
2558-10-12 23:17 bestza55567: เรียบร้อยครับ
2558-10-12 23:18 - N a n a k a -: http://puu.sh/kHG1A/1566b73ed7.rar
2558-10-12 23:18 - N a n a k a -: hs
2558-10-12 23:19 bestza55567: ขอบคุณคร้าบ
2558-10-12 23:20 - N a n a k a -: 01:17:225 (5) - 424,320
2558-10-12 23:20 - N a n a k a -: 01:16:892 (3) - 332,352
2558-10-12 23:20 - N a n a k a -: 01:17:558 (1) - 384,164
2558-10-12 23:20 - N a n a k a -: จะได้ 6 เหลี่ยมพอดี
2558-10-12 23:21 - N a n a k a -: 01:18:058 (2) - 252,80 ไว้ตรงนี้จะ flow กว่า
2558-10-12 23:22 - N a n a k a -: 01:25:218 (1) - ใส่ finish ผิด
2558-10-12 23:23 - N a n a k a -: 01:26:550 (4) - ย้ายมา stack โน๊ตด้านล่างน่าจะโอเคกว่า
2558-10-12 23:25 - N a n a k a -: เออ
2558-10-12 23:25 - N a n a k a -: ลืมใส่ kick ให้
2558-10-12 23:28 bestza55567: ตรงไหนหรอคับ
2558-10-12 23:28 - N a n a k a -: timimg เอียงด้วยเหรอ - -
2558-10-12 23:29 - N a n a k a -: หมายถึง?
2558-10-12 23:29 bestza55567: กำ
2558-10-12 23:29 - N a n a k a -: เอางี้
2558-10-12 23:29 - N a n a k a -: ลอง encode เพลงนี้ใหม่
2558-10-12 23:30 - N a n a k a -: ท่อนแรกมันแปลกๆ
2558-10-12 23:31 - N a n a k a -: ขี้เกียจลง adobe ไม่ใช่อะไร
2558-10-12 23:31 bestza55567: อ่อ
2558-10-12 23:32 - N a n a k a -: ปล่อยเพลงก่อนแล้วกัน
2558-10-12 23:32 - N a n a k a -: เดี๋ยวม็อดต่อแปบ
2558-10-12 23:33 bestza55567: ครับ
2558-10-12 23:36 - N a n a k a -: http://puu.sh/kHH5P/fb09403096.rar
2558-10-12 23:36 - N a n a k a -: อ่ะ hs อีกอัน
2558-10-12 23:37 - N a n a k a -: 02:36:487 (3,4,3,4) -
2558-10-12 23:37 - N a n a k a -: ทำเหมือน 02:36:487 (3,4,3,4) -
2558-10-12 23:37 - N a n a k a -: เอ้ย
2558-10-12 23:37 - N a n a k a -: 02:36:154 (1,2,1,2) -
2558-10-12 23:39 - N a n a k a -: 02:39:984 (1) - rotale จาก 02:39:485 (8) - มา แล้วทำให้ blanket
2558-10-12 23:39 - N a n a k a -: 02:41:483 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - เอียง
2558-10-12 23:40 - N a n a k a -: วีธีแก้ก็
2558-10-12 23:40 - N a n a k a -: ย้าย 02:41:982 (5) - ลงมา 1 ช่อง
2558-10-12 23:40 - N a n a k a -: ย้าย 02:42:648 (4) - มาขวาล่างอย่างล่ะ 1 ช่อง
2558-10-12 23:41 - N a n a k a -: 02:43:314 (4) - ไปขวา 2 ลงล่าง 1
2558-10-12 23:41 - N a n a k a -: 02:45:229 (8) - ลบตัวนี้ออก ไม่มีเสียง
2558-10-12 23:42 - N a n a k a -: 02:50:475 (5,6) - ทำให้ spacing เหมือนกับ 02:49:975 (2,3) -
2558-10-12 23:43 - N a n a k a -: 02:53:806 (3,6) - ย้ายไป 352,172
2558-10-12 23:44 - N a n a k a -: เสร็จแล้วบอก
2558-10-12 23:45 bestza55567: เรียบร้อยหมดละครับ
2558-10-12 23:45 - N a n a k a -: 03:52:752 (3,1) -
2558-10-12 23:45 - N a n a k a -: error blanket
2558-10-12 23:46 - N a n a k a -: 03:53:918 (2,3) - stack ไปเลยก็ได้
2558-10-12 23:47 - N a n a k a -: 04:47:370 (3,5,1) - stack
2558-10-12 23:49 - N a n a k a -: 04:50:533 (1) - NC
2558-10-12 23:50 - N a n a k a -: 04:51:199 (5,7) - แก้เป็นแบบนี้ดีกว่า http://puu.sh/kHHTy/0d2e912d01.jpg
2558-10-12 23:51 - N a n a k a -: 05:02:689 (1,2) - error blanket
2558-10-12 23:51 - N a n a k a -: 05:04:021 (1,2) - ^
2558-10-12 23:52 - N a n a k a -: 05:07:851 (6) - 76,64
2558-10-12 23:52 - N a n a k a -: หมดล่ะ

Well, i reserve this post for other mod in collab and hitsounds

ไว้มาม็อดต่อแล้วกัน
Topic Starter
Inversal

- N a n a k a - wrote:

lot of issue, hitsound, loud

also this is irc mod
irc
2558-10-12 22:46 bestza55567: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/756014 Aivi & Surasshu - Lonely rolling star (Missing you)]
2558-10-12 22:49 - N a n a k a -: แหม่แมพ
2558-10-12 22:49 - N a n a k a -: ถถถ
2558-10-12 22:50 bestza55567: 555555
2558-10-12 22:50 bestza55567: มีอันเดียวอ่ะพี่ T^T
2558-10-12 22:51 - N a n a k a -: แปลกๆ
2558-10-12 22:51 - N a n a k a -: สัยสัยต้องลบลงใหม่
2558-10-12 22:51 - N a n a k a -: ยังค้าง m4m อีก 2 คน
2558-10-12 22:52 - N a n a k a -: นึกถึงชื่อ lazy mapper ไว้
2558-10-12 22:52 bestza55567: shocko หรอคับ 555
2558-10-12 22:52 - N a n a k a -: ไม่
2558-10-12 22:52 bestza55567: ใครหว่า
2558-10-12 22:52 - N a n a k a -: คนหนึ่งใกล้ๆตัวที่ทำแมพเสร็จยาก
2558-10-12 22:52 - N a n a k a -: :v
2558-10-12 22:53 - N a n a k a -: 03:10:623 - ทำไมต้องมา set pv ตรงนี้ถึงจะโอเคหว่า
2558-10-12 22:53 bestza55567: เราก็นานนะ
2558-10-12 22:53 bestza55567: :v
2558-10-12 22:53 - N a n a k a -: เราว่า m4m นายมีปัญหา
2558-10-12 22:53 - N a n a k a -: *mp3
2558-10-12 22:54 bestza55567: ยังไงหรอคับ
2558-10-12 22:54 - N a n a k a -: เหมือนจะ encode มีปปัญหา
2558-10-12 22:54 - N a n a k a -: เราเคยเป็นบ่อยๆ
2558-10-12 22:54 - N a n a k a -: BN ไม่ว่าอะไรมั้ง
2558-10-12 22:54 - N a n a k a -: รู้แต่ต้องเปลี่ยน pv ตามด้านบน
2558-10-12 22:56 - N a n a k a -: เหอ
2558-10-12 22:56 - N a n a k a -: hs 100%
2558-10-12 22:56 - N a n a k a -: พวกนายบ้าไปแล้ว
2558-10-12 22:56 - N a n a k a -: เพลงมันออกจะเบา
2558-10-12 22:58 - N a n a k a -: เรื่อง hs นี่ขัดเยอะ
2558-10-12 22:58 - N a n a k a -: เดี๋ยวไปม็อดลงบอร์ดอีกที
2558-10-12 22:59 bestza55567: ครับ 5555
2558-10-12 23:00 - N a n a k a -: โอเคของอีก 2 คนค่อยม็อดลงบอร์ดด
2558-10-12 23:00 - N a n a k a -: ขยับไป 120,44
2558-10-12 23:00 - N a n a k a -: 00:12:617 (3) -
2558-10-12 23:00 - N a n a k a -: นี่
2558-10-12 23:01 - N a n a k a -: 00:12:783 (4) - 72,104
2558-10-12 23:01 - N a n a k a -: โน๊ตมันจะดูโค้งกว่า
2558-10-12 23:01 bestza55567: ครับ แปปนะ
2558-10-12 23:03 - N a n a k a -: เสร็จแล้วบอก
2558-10-12 23:03 bestza55567: เรียบร้อยครับ
2558-10-12 23:05 - N a n a k a -: 00:16:114 (1) -
2558-10-12 23:05 - N a n a k a -: ก็อบจาก 00:15:448 (4) - แล้ว ctrl+j
2558-10-12 23:06 - N a n a k a -: เดี๋ยวหา hs ให้แล้วกัน
2558-10-12 23:06 - N a n a k a -: clap ดูขัดๆ
2558-10-12 23:06 bestza55567: ต้อง ctrl + g มั้ยครับ
2558-10-12 23:06 - N a n a k a -: เยส
2558-10-12 23:08 bestza55567: เรียบร้อยละครับ
2558-10-12 23:08 - N a n a k a -: 00:18:944 -
2558-10-12 23:09 - N a n a k a -: sv 0.87
2558-10-12 23:09 - N a n a k a -: ยังไม่เร็ว
2558-10-12 23:11 bestza55567: เรียบร้อยครับ
2558-10-12 23:13 - N a n a k a -: 01:14:228 (3) -
2558-10-12 23:13 - N a n a k a -: 396,244
2558-10-12 23:13 - N a n a k a -: 01:15:560 (1,2,3,4,1) - ดาวเบี้ยว
2558-10-12 23:17 bestza55567: เรียบร้อยครับ
2558-10-12 23:18 - N a n a k a -: http://puu.sh/kHG1A/1566b73ed7.rar
2558-10-12 23:18 - N a n a k a -: hs
2558-10-12 23:19 bestza55567: ขอบคุณคร้าบ
2558-10-12 23:20 - N a n a k a -: 01:17:225 (5) - 424,320
2558-10-12 23:20 - N a n a k a -: 01:16:892 (3) - 332,352
2558-10-12 23:20 - N a n a k a -: 01:17:558 (1) - 384,164
2558-10-12 23:20 - N a n a k a -: จะได้ 6 เหลี่ยมพอดี
2558-10-12 23:21 - N a n a k a -: 01:18:058 (2) - 252,80 ไว้ตรงนี้จะ flow กว่า
2558-10-12 23:22 - N a n a k a -: 01:25:218 (1) - ใส่ finish ผิด
2558-10-12 23:23 - N a n a k a -: 01:26:550 (4) - ย้ายมา stack โน๊ตด้านล่างน่าจะโอเคกว่า
2558-10-12 23:25 - N a n a k a -: เออ
2558-10-12 23:25 - N a n a k a -: ลืมใส่ kick ให้
2558-10-12 23:28 bestza55567: ตรงไหนหรอคับ
2558-10-12 23:28 - N a n a k a -: timimg เอียงด้วยเหรอ - -
2558-10-12 23:29 - N a n a k a -: หมายถึง?
2558-10-12 23:29 bestza55567: กำ
2558-10-12 23:29 - N a n a k a -: เอางี้
2558-10-12 23:29 - N a n a k a -: ลอง encode เพลงนี้ใหม่
2558-10-12 23:30 - N a n a k a -: ท่อนแรกมันแปลกๆ
2558-10-12 23:31 - N a n a k a -: ขี้เกียจลง adobe ไม่ใช่อะไร
2558-10-12 23:31 bestza55567: อ่อ
2558-10-12 23:32 - N a n a k a -: ปล่อยเพลงก่อนแล้วกัน
2558-10-12 23:32 - N a n a k a -: เดี๋ยวม็อดต่อแปบ
2558-10-12 23:33 bestza55567: ครับ
2558-10-12 23:36 - N a n a k a -: http://puu.sh/kHH5P/fb09403096.rar
2558-10-12 23:36 - N a n a k a -: อ่ะ hs อีกอัน
2558-10-12 23:37 - N a n a k a -: 02:36:487 (3,4,3,4) -
2558-10-12 23:37 - N a n a k a -: ทำเหมือน 02:36:487 (3,4,3,4) -
2558-10-12 23:37 - N a n a k a -: เอ้ย
2558-10-12 23:37 - N a n a k a -: 02:36:154 (1,2,1,2) -
2558-10-12 23:39 - N a n a k a -: 02:39:984 (1) - rotale จาก 02:39:485 (8) - มา แล้วทำให้ blanket
2558-10-12 23:39 - N a n a k a -: 02:41:483 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - เอียง
2558-10-12 23:40 - N a n a k a -: วีธีแก้ก็
2558-10-12 23:40 - N a n a k a -: ย้าย 02:41:982 (5) - ลงมา 1 ช่อง
2558-10-12 23:40 - N a n a k a -: ย้าย 02:42:648 (4) - มาขวาล่างอย่างล่ะ 1 ช่อง
2558-10-12 23:41 - N a n a k a -: 02:43:314 (4) - ไปขวา 2 ลงล่าง 1
2558-10-12 23:41 - N a n a k a -: 02:45:229 (8) - ลบตัวนี้ออก ไม่มีเสียง
2558-10-12 23:42 - N a n a k a -: 02:50:475 (5,6) - ทำให้ spacing เหมือนกับ 02:49:975 (2,3) -
2558-10-12 23:43 - N a n a k a -: 02:53:806 (3,6) - ย้ายไป 352,172
2558-10-12 23:44 - N a n a k a -: เสร็จแล้วบอก
2558-10-12 23:45 bestza55567: เรียบร้อยหมดละครับ
2558-10-12 23:45 - N a n a k a -: 03:52:752 (3,1) -
2558-10-12 23:45 - N a n a k a -: error blanket
2558-10-12 23:46 - N a n a k a -: 03:53:918 (2,3) - stack ไปเลยก็ได้
2558-10-12 23:47 - N a n a k a -: 04:47:370 (3,5,1) - stack
2558-10-12 23:49 - N a n a k a -: 04:50:533 (1) - NC
2558-10-12 23:50 - N a n a k a -: 04:51:199 (5,7) - แก้เป็นแบบนี้ดีกว่า http://puu.sh/kHHTy/0d2e912d01.jpg
2558-10-12 23:51 - N a n a k a -: 05:02:689 (1,2) - error blanket
2558-10-12 23:51 - N a n a k a -: 05:04:021 (1,2) - ^
2558-10-12 23:52 - N a n a k a -: 05:07:851 (6) - 76,64
2558-10-12 23:52 - N a n a k a -: หมดล่ะ

Well, i reserve this post for other mod in collab and hitsounds

ไว้มาม็อดต่อแล้วกัน
Gigantic update here. Thanks very much!
erictran0
oh hello. how are you. is your m4m queue still open?
don't let this map be in graveyard, the song is too beautiful for it

Timing
BPM: 180.147, Offset: 9596ms

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Add the following tags: "yoshihito yano namco"
See previous mods for artist and title, looks like it wasn't fixed
Remove the following tags: "bestza5567 aivi surasshu lonely rolling star katamari damacy"

Collab Marathon
00:14:932 (1,2,3,4) - Notes are stacked but not in 00:09:603 (1,2,3,4) or 00:12:268 (1,2,3,4). I suggest that these three combos are placed similarly
00:42:074 (2) - Should be a note here since you're mapping the piano (?)
00:52:232 (1) - Anti-jump where intensity is high on 00:51:399 (1,2,3,4,5,1). Make this a jump
01:18:208 (1) - Distance spacing should be 1.8x
01:19:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Piano pitch is decreasing throughout this part, so distance spacing increase and back is not appropriate
01:45:517 (1) - Make this a jump or overlap note 5
01:49:514 (4) - Offscreen?
01:50:679 (10,1) - Anti-jump on a build-up? Have these two notes contribute to the star
02:19:320 (1) - Remove NC
02:26:147 (1,2,3) - Circles are too far apart from slider
02:33:974 (2,3) - Higher spacing?
02:39:136 (6) - NC
02:43:465 (5) - ^
02:43:798 (1) - Remove NC
02:44:131 (2) - NC
02:45:297 (1) - I don't think this should stack with the 3-note stack at 02:44:964 (5,6,7)
02:46:795 (1,2,3,4) - You mapped the piano at previous combos but not here?
02:49:959 (2,3) - This should be the jump, not 02:50:126 (3,4)
02:53:956 (4) - NC
02:54:455 (7) - ^
03:04:946 (4) - I think 03:04:946 (4,5) should be the jump, not 03:04:779 (3,4)
03:14:687 (1) - Remove NC
03:14:770 (2) - NC
03:15:020 (1) - Remove NC
03:14:604 (5,1) - Plays so weirdly imo. Don't know what to do with this one but fix it somehow
03:16:102 (1) - Fix blanket
03:18:600 (2) - I think 03:18:600 (2,1) should be the jump, not 03:18:101 (1,2).
03:19:766 (2) - Convert to stream
03:30:423 (2) - ^
03:35:418 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue
03:39:914 (1) - Remove NC
03:44:577 (1) - ^
03:51:071 (1) - ^
03:56:066 (6) - NC
03:58:731 (5) - ^
04:28:038 (1) - Jump?
04:43:524 (2,3) - These two objects should be closer
04:45:189 (7,8,9) - Overlap note 2?
04:53:348 (5) - NC
04:56:012 (5) - ^
05:00:009 (5) - ^
05:06:003 (4,5) - I think 05:05:837 (3,4) should be the jump rather than 05:06:003 (4,5)
05:12:165 (1) - Remove NC
05:15:661 (1) - Slider should end at red tick
05:18:659 (1) - Overlap note 2 of same combo
05:21:323 (1) - Slider should end at red tick
05:26:152 (1) - Is this supposed to blanket 05:25:985 (4)? If so, please fix
05:28:317 (2,3,4) - Should be 1/6 spacing
05:28:983 (1) - Slider should end at red tick
05:29:482 (1) - Extend spinner to 05:35:310 and insert inheriting sections so that the spinning sound will gradually fade

Good luck on getting this map approved!
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