This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年10月10日 at 19:11:21

Artist: Horie Yui
Title: Complete
Source: Toradora!
Tags: Vikon pookz
BPM: 146
Filesize: 4672kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.66 stars, 88 notes)
2. Insane (4.84 stars, 310 notes)
3. Normal (4.43 stars, 170 notes)
4. Pookz's Insane (5 stars, 324 notes)
5. Vikon's Hard (4.73 stars, 245 notes)

Download: Horie Yui - Complete
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my 2nd beatmap,a song from Toradora,hope you can enjoy it,ready for mod.

edit normal
edit B_T to Lunatic

先星~

O_O! 你们不要这么快

Source is Toradora!
Change it XD
Great map ;D

BT难度很卧槽。。。
不管怎样先star吧。

Vicho-kun wrote:

Source is Toradora!
Change it XD
Great map ;D

w change it.

[General]
1) 還未定preview point
2) kiai time在hitobject上，且要另加綠線改音量 (上述2點也是提點而已.)
3) 把文件內 .osb file 刪除，然後full submission
4) 文件內的"section-fai" 應該重新命名為 "section-fail" (而且再加一個"section-pass" ~? )
5) scorebar-bg的解像度很低...
6) 因為已有hitcircle和overlay, 所以你還需要一個 "approachcircle" (隨便在osu file裏偷一個吧 XD)

因為昨天mod了easy和Normal，今天我直接mod其他了~

[Vikon's Hard]
01:22:603 (2) - 囧!! object unsnapped! 替我resnap all note 一下 謝-_-||

[Pookz's Insane]
00:01:232 個人覺得這段soft的音量太大了
00:13:971 (1,2) - 轉成soft-whistle? (而且提高音量)
00:32:053 這一段開始的clap 聽起來有點亂和吵, 而且default clap好像不太適合這首歌, 或考慮嘗試一下，在重拍的紅線加一下soft-hitfinish2 (e.g. 00:31:026 ,00:31:848 ,00:32:670 如此類推,若重拍的位置是是slider中間，可以考慮把slider縮短再加note)
01:09:862 (6,7,8,9) - 這段可以考慮加聲音漸大的效果
01:27:430 (1) - 加聲音淡出效果~?

[B_T]
00:01:231 個人覺得這段音量太大,一般來說soft的音量採用60~80%就足夠，這diff內其他timing section也是
00:04:930 (3,4) - (3)取消finish, (4)加finish?
00:05:547 (7,8) - (7)取消finish, (8)取消clap並加finish?
00:06:163 (1,2) - (1)取消finish, (2)加finish且移到00:06:368
00:17:670 這段的clap有點亂和吵，重排後用其他hitsound代替?

兜售pookz.exe。。

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) 還未定preview point
2) kiai time在hitobject上，且要另加綠線改音量 (上述2點也是提點而已.)
3) 把文件內 .osb file 刪除，然後full submission
4) 文件內的"section-fai" 應該重新命名為 "section-fail" (而且再加一個"section-pass" ~? )
5) scorebar-bg的解像度很低...
6) 因為已有hitcircle和overlay, 所以你還需要一個 "approachcircle" (隨便在osu file裏偷一個吧 XD)

因為昨天mod了easy和Normal，今天我直接mod其他了~

[Vikon's Hard]
01:22:603 (2) - 囧!! object unsnapped! 替我resnap all note 一下 謝-_-||

[Pookz's Insane]
00:01:232 個人覺得這段soft的音量太大了
00:13:971 (1,2) - 轉成soft-whistle? (而且提高音量)
00:32:053 這一段開始的clap 聽起來有點亂和吵, 而且default clap好像不太適合這首歌, 或考慮嘗試一下，在重拍的紅線加一下soft-hitfinish2 (e.g. 00:31:026 ,00:31:848 ,00:32:670 如此類推,若重拍的位置是是slider中間，可以考慮把slider縮短再加note)/
01:09:862 (6,7,8,9) - 這段可以考慮加聲音漸大的效果/
01:27:430 (1) - 加聲音淡出效果~?/

[B_T]
00:01:231 個人覺得這段音量太大,一般來說soft的音量採用60~80%就足夠，這diff內其他timing section也是
00:04:930 (3,4) - (3)取消finish, (4)加finish?
00:05:547 (7,8) - (7)取消finish, (8)取消clap並加finish?
00:06:163 (1,2) - (1)取消finish, (2)加finish且移到00:06:368
00:17:670 這段的clap有點亂和吵，重排後用其他hitsound代替?降低了音量

辛苦了 个别问题有争议 但大部份都fix了

[Pookz's Insane]
- Combo problem
00:25:889 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why there was so many new combo, it's useless.
00:29:177 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
00:50:136 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:15:821 (1,1) - You can use new combo, but I think it's useless.
01:26:505 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
- Other
Use more clap, see others how to put new combo.

[B_T]
先不mod, 只看map本身都發現. 這是亂來的!!
要求重做!

[Vikon's Hard]
- Combo problem
00:13:971 (1) - Remove new combo
- Other
我發現了一個好大的問題, 就是00:37:601到00:59:382都沒有slider!
請試試用多一點, 太乏味了~

[ALL]
我看B_T可以不要, 你有[Pookz's Insane]還要bt幹什麼?
重要的一點B_T是亂做的!
請加油.

al2e10 wrote:

[Pookz's Insane]
- Combo problem
00:25:889 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why there was so many new combo, it's useless.fixed
00:29:177 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^fixed
00:50:136 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^fixed
01:15:821 (1,1) - You can use new combo, but I think it's useless.fixed
01:26:505 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^fixed
- Other
Use more clap, see others how to put new combo.

[B_T]
先不mod, 只看map本身都發現. 這是亂來的!!B_T difficulty is a challenge
要求重做!

[Vikon's Hard]
- Combo problem
00:13:971 (1) - Remove new combofixed
- Other
我發現了一個好大的問題, 就是00:37:601到00:59:382都沒有slider!
請試試用多一點, 太乏味了~

[ALL]
我看B_T可以不要, 你有[Pookz's Insane]還要bt幹什麼?
重要的一點B_T是亂做的!需要点时间考虑、商议解决办法.具体是降低难度还是砍掉重练还要看大部分人的意见.
請加油.

thanks for you mod.

Oh, heya skyflying

[General]
Set a Preview Point for all difficulties. Also, though it won't actually change anything, shouldn't the offset for all difficulties be 1,026?

[Easy]
Where's the Kiai Time here?

00:24:451 (1) - Too close to the previous combo
00:34:108 (1) - A bit close to the previous combo
00:35:958 (3) - I barely saw this note...
01:08:423 (4) - I'm not sure if stacking this is a good idea...
01:21:574 (5) - ^

[Normal]
Kiai Time is used at an odd time, but that's just my opinion.

[Vikon's Hard]
Nothing wrong with this difficulty, although I do want to point out that I like the use of Kiai Time here.

[B_T]
What the... Those sliders are fast! Nice challenge though

00:53:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - Too long of a combo; make a new combo somewhere.

[Pookz's Insane]
Nothing wrong with this difficulty either.

This is a nice song ★~

Blazevoir wrote:

Oh, heya skyflying

[General]
Set a Preview Point for all difficulties. Also, though it won't actually change anything, shouldn't the offset for all difficulties be 1,026?

[Easy]
Where's the Kiai Time here?

00:24:451 (1) - Too close to the previous combo
00:34:108 (1) - A bit close to the previous combo
00:35:958 (3) - I barely saw this note...
01:08:423 (4) - I'm not sure if stacking this is a good idea...
01:21:574 (5) - ^

[Normal]
Kiai Time is used at an odd time, but that's just my opinion.

[Vikon's Hard]
Nothing wrong with this difficulty, although I do want to point out that I like the use of Kiai Time here.

[B_T]
What the... Those sliders are fast! Nice challenge though

00:53:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - Too long of a combo; make a new combo somewhere.

[Pookz's Insane]
Nothing wrong with this difficulty either.

This is a nice song ★~

Thanks you Blazevoir.all fixed.

skyflying wrote:

:) Thanks you Blazevoir.all fixed.

You're welcome One thing you need to fix though: the Kiai Time used for Easy and Normal aren't at the same spots. (Don't kudosu this post )

ok.fixed

General
Remove Countdown?
skin有點太花巧
try this :3
mod着我眼花 而且我很累 所以可能mod的不好...

Easy
00:38:012(3,4)-這擺法不建議在easy diff 出現，不要重疊

Normal
00:52:807(5)-1 grid up
01:07:601(2) 2 grid left and 1 grid down

Vikon's
Baka Vikon GJ :3
seen fine.

B_T
卧槽...我mod不起
seen fine.

Pookz's
01:16:642(1,2,3,4,5)-可以再對稱點:3
01:26:916(3)-1 grid up 對稱對稱:D

STARミ★

I just wanted to remind you that you can't have three Insanes

karenying wrote:

General
Remove Countdown?
skin有點太花巧
try this :3

[attachment=0:abcd1]hitcircle.png[/attachment:abcd1]

mod着我眼花 而且我很累 所以可能mod的不好...辛苦啦 MOD的很用心也有用.图片麻烦你帮P了^^

Easy
00:38:012(3,4)-這擺法不建議在easy diff 出現，不要重疊在DS下只能变动了下silder方向 4露出半截··这样应该行吧

Normal
00:52:807(5)-1 grid upfixed
01:07:601(2) 2 grid left and 1 grid downfixed

Vikon's
Baka Vikon GJ :3
seen fine.

B_T
卧槽...我mod不起
seen fine.

Pookz's
01:16:642(1,2,3,4,5)-可以再對稱點:3我一个一个grid数了半天 就差拿尺子量了= = 也只是把5 left 1 guid看着感觉好点了吧XD..最后说句图书卡这个死触手XD
01:26:916(3)-1 grid up 對稱對稱:D fixed

STARミ★

thanks for you mod

bmin11 wrote:

I just wanted to remind you that you can't have three Insanes

thanks for you remind.but i think vikon's hard isn't a Insanes difficult.How do you think ?
hope you can enjoy this song^^

bmin11 wrote:

I just wanted to remind you that you can't have three Insanes

thx for reminding :3 , accroading to the post " Official Ranking Submission Criteria "
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although the star rating shows my diff is an [I], but base on my feeling, it is a [H], so I think it's fine.

[EZ]
00:31:437 (2) - Disable the gird snap and use 0.0x DS to cheak it
00:43:560 (1,2) - too short slider for easy.Confusing
00:46:848 (1,2) - ^
00:50:136 (1,2) - ^

[NM]
00:32:053 (4) - Spacing

[Vikon]
Nice

[B_T]
Have nothing to say

yangzd88 wrote:

[EZ]
00:31:437 (2) - Disable the gird snap and use 0.0x DS to cheak itDS选1.0是仔细看过的 小于1.0的话NOTE会重叠这样不好
00:43:560 (1,2) - too short slider for easy.Confusing fixed
00:46:848 (1,2) - ^fixed
00:50:136 (1,2) - ^fixed

[NM]
00:32:053 (4) - Spacingfixed

[Vikon]
Nice

[B_T]
Have nothing to say

thanks you

Hello ^^

[Easy]:

00:02:053- Would be better if you give a better curve

01:02:259- ^
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[Normal]:

00:22:807- Remove this new combo
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[Vikon's Hard]:

00:27:327- New combo
00:49:108- ^
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Good map

;D

vivere wrote:

Hello ^^

[Easy]:

00:02:053- Would be better if you give a better curve

01:02:259- ^
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[Normal]:

00:22:807- Remove this new combo
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[Vikon's Hard]:

00:27:327- New combo
00:49:108- ^
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Good map

;D

all fixed

thanks for you mod

Sorry I took so long. :/

As per your request:

[General]
Your metronome is off. Set offset to 1026.
Maybe reduce lead in time to 1.5 seconds? 3 seconds feels like you're just sitting there for awhile waiting for the song to start up in silence.

[Skin]
The transparancy on the hit circles is kind of confusing to me - especially with stacks. Maybe fill that in a bit?
scorebar-bg is kinda low quality. Maybe try to make with a better source image?

[Easy]
Kinda weird that this is the only one with a filled-in color background. Well, I guess BT's as well, but this one is much darker.
00:42:122 (4) - Maybe point this down so it's not sticking into the slider after it?
00:44:382 (2) - And point this one up and to the left or so so it's not sticking into the one before it?
01:08:423 (4,1) - This rhythm was kind of unexpected. Doesn't fit anything in the song... though you use it several times later in the map too. Eh.

[Normal]
Hrm, same slider velocity as Easy? Makes it feel really samey and everything gets bunched up together really bad. Makes it look messy.
Also strange that Normal has a break, but easy doesn't.
Kind of lacking in hit sounds on this difficulty.
I'll leave this one a lone for now. The low distance snap and slider velocity kind of made this difficulty look really messy. I'd suggest upping them a bit, but that's your call.

[Vikon's Hard]
00:08:423 (3,4,5) - Maybe scoot these left a couple grids to reduce overlap?
A few of the stacks looked kind of off due to the heavily transparent skin near the end. Maybe try to position them so the starting beat is aligned with the rest of the notes you have around them? It should make things more visually appealing, in any case.
Really nice difficulty here though. Plays nice 'n smooth.

[B_T]
Okay, these stupid-fast sliders don't fit the laid-back tempo of this song at all. And if you really insist on having them, reduce the tick rate to .5. 3 is off rhythm, and just sounds awful.
The hitsounds are really quiet too - makes hoping that you actually hit the circles kind of annoying while playing this too.
Purposefully going 2x tempo, then doing 2x sliders off that is just... That and I dunno if the psychotically pulsing osu! icon will like that. :P

[Pook's Insane]
That last spinner doesn't really fit to me. Otherwise nice.

Decent map set - I just wish Normal wasn't so cramped and B_T's diff wasn't so... ugh.

sorry i'm late,i will fix it when i get home

PM me on forums when you have fixed all other mods and I will mod it~

Lol, now that I actually start watching this anime, the pictures NOW make sense

Anyway, good luck with getting this ranked