Hey, M4M |
your mod General
- It's a cutted version, I don't know anything of these things, but I guess it's a TV Size, so if it is add "(TV size)" in the title. Otherwise, don't do anything.
- 00:11:573 - Move the break's beginning at this time (if you don't know how to do that, ask me in the irc)
- 01:29:350 - Try to make the slider quiet, you edit the inherited point here to hitsounds: Soft & Volume: 5% (5% is the minimum), or even use an hitsound to make it quiet, or even modify the .osu to make that this inherited point's volume is at 0%
- Use the tiny grid pls ;w;
- Tbh, flow is weird sometimes :/
Easy
- 00:08:610 (2) - This slider can look better (
pic)
- 00:17:314 (1,3) - Imo the (1)'s head and (3)'s head si too close to each other
- 00:24:165 (2,3) - This looks a bit ugly, you can do better here
- 00:32:313 (1) - Use one point for this slider, it'll be correct, don't worry (delete all of the points except the first and the last one and add one (Ctrl + click), osu! have a little bug about this so you need to do that manipulation)
- 00:42:684 (3) - I see what you wanted to do here, but you're using too much useless point, you can do
this- 00:44:165 (1) - It'll be nicer if the red point is on the slider tick
- 00:47:128 (1,2) - Here you can add more point, because the slider is larger. That's weird, you put like 5-6 points on most of little sliders (mostly on 2 white ticks, dat doubletime tho) but in the big ones, you only use one point
- 00:53:054 (1) - You can add more point here too (
pic)
- 00:56:017 (1) - ugly, sliderwaves aren't made like that
- 00:53:054 (1,1,1) - No NC spam please, that's useless and it destroys gameplay, NC mainly gives HP, and if there's too much NC, it'll be too simple...
- 01:01:943 (1) - Explained above, you can only use one point (with the first and the last point), it'll be more accurate
- 01:07:869 (1) - Actually, I don't like this slider, it can be improved a lot
- 01:15:276 (2) -
can looks nicer- 01:18:980 (4,1) - Improve this blanket
Normal
- 00:03:425 (3) - Can be improved, as showed on Easy
- 00:06:758 (4,1) - It's only my opinion, but I hate thoses
- 00:14:351 (1,2) - Or you can do
this- 00:25:091 (1,2,3,4) - I do not recommand these on Normal diffs,
this rhythm can be better
- 00:26:388 (1,2) - Improve the blanket
- 00:29:350 (1) - Problem exaplained above
- 00:33:054 (3,4) - Okay, I can see that you don't know how to do sliderwaves:
this is how you should do it
- 00:36:758 (3) - ^
- 00:41:202 (1) - What? The fourth point is TOTALLY useless here
- 00:44:165 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
- 00:50:832 (2,3) - This overlap is not good, 1. because it reduces DS (here, the DS is at 0.96x, you have a DS of ~1x (thanks big grid size)) 2. because the beginners might not understand this 3. because it's ugly
- 00:54:536 (3,4) - These sliders can be better
- 01:12:128 (1) - Why two red points? I mean, it will work with only one, you know
Hard
- 00:01:203 (1,3) - They're too close from each other
- 00:03:425 (3,2) - Overlap
- 00:09:351 (4,5,1) - ^
- 00:26:388 (1) - This slider can look nicer (as seen above)
- 00:29:350 (1,3) - ^
- 00:36:758 (5) - ^
- 00:44:906 (2,4) - Do a perfect overlap
- 00:46:202 (4) - Can look better
- 00:54:536 (5,6) - ^
- 00:56:017 (1) - Wow, the other sliderwaves are ugly, but this one is just perfect!
- 01:05:647 (3) - Don't do a big curve for a such small slider, it looks really ugly
- 01:07:869 (1) - I don't get it
For me, you're restricting yourself too much on this diff., actually, in Hard, you can start to add stuff like triplets, or little jumps, but here, there's nothing. There's only this marathon thing during the kiai time, which is a concept that I don't like (you haven't made them, you can actually see these on some ranked beatmaps)
I'll stop here, because I'm terrible at Insanes and Insane+/Extras ^^
Good luck with your map ;3 Bye! And, again, thanks for your collaboration