00:22:006 (1,2,3) - In the begginning you're following the guitar sounds, these sliders would sound better if you turn them into triple notes and make them closer
00:23:006 (1,2,3) - And in this case, the triplet would sound better as a slider
00:24:673 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This stream sounds a bit off since the song didn't actually got more intense, consider changin this pattern to sliders or singles/triples, try listening to the song in this part again
00:32:673 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - same ^
00:51:006 (1) - until 01:11:673 (1) - The song is slower now, and i think you should use less spacing, you're forcing too many movements for a slow part
01:11:673 (1) - all the things here until 01:32:006 (7) - were already explained via in-game
02:09:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe a slider or a different pattern here would sound better with the song
02:26:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I think this stream is a bit forced, the rythm didn't change here...you could change it now and use something similar to this stream here instead 02:29:006 (1) -
02:40:673 (6) - until 02:47:840 (4) - I didn't actually understand the rythm here, it's not the drums for sure, but it's also really different from the guitar, i suggest you listen to the guitar and the drums rythm, choose one of them and make it based on it
03:11:340 (1) - All of the ''mini-stop'' parts started close to where the previous ended...why this one is far? looks better if it's close too ( I didn't know if is intentional or just a little mistake)
03:21:506 (6) - I think this is way too far....i think it's better if you change it's location to something like : x:153 y: 166
04:06:673 (4,5,6) - Similar to the begginning, would sound better if you changed to triples...but it's optional
04:08:673 (6,7) - same ^
04:10:673 (6,7) - ^
04:15:673 (3) - These sliders would work better if you change their positions and replace at 04:14:673 (10) - so when the guitar makes those triple notes you can sync it with the sliders (optional until the end of the map)
Final observations: One good suggestion is to listen to the song again looking at the editor without hitsounds, and try to feel the notes you see with what you hear, maybe it can give you more inspiration to make the map feel more like the song
