General

Tags should be the same in all difficulties.

Transonic Flow

00:28:225 (2,3) - Fix this spacing. Turn distance snap and grid snap off and make it so it looks like the previous spacing.

00:42:494 (1) - Again, turn off both snaps and align this under the pink slider end. (distance snap glitch that happens with larger grids)
You'll see that it fixes the spacing with the notes after it too.

00:52:007 (5) - Move right 1 unit.

00:54:169 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - These notes can be centered by turning grid snap off and lining the edge up with 00:52:872 (1) -

00:58:493 (2,3,1) - Move down 1 unit. (This will correct a flow problem)

01:02:817 (3,4) - Turn Grid snap off and move down until it lines up with the edge of note 2.

01:08:438 (2) - Do the same with this note. Align with the previous slider end.

01:09:735 (4,5,6) - Move down 1 unit??

01:16:654 (5) - Move slightly left unit it is lined up with previous slider.

01:18:383 (2,3,4,5) - Move down a smidge.


Kaneko's Sonic

00:41:837 (2,3) - Move left 1 unit. ( Aligns notes with 00:42:702 (1) - )

03:26:366 (3) - I think you should adjust the hitsound volume to go with the music. Lower this one and add a note here 03:27:231 - and add a very low hitsound volume to that note.


Supersonic Flow

01:01:295 (5,6,7) - Move left 1 unit.

02:50:261 (5) - I don't suggest you jut this note out like that. It feels weird to play.

Hypersonic Flow

00:20:650 (7,8,9,1) - Move left until it is aligned with note 6. The small spacing difference it makes with the blue combo wont make a difference gameplay wise.

00:49:621 (7,8,9) - Spacing is too high?
00:50:269 (1,2,3) - ^

01:15:997 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Move up 1 unit.

01:37:401 (9,10,11,1) - Move right 1 unit

01:46:049 (10,11,12) - Why not stack?

02:12:642 (6,7) - WTH kind of spacing is this? It so breaks flow.

02:59:341 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Move up with grid snap off until it is lined up with the end of 02:58:692 (3) - .




That's all. It's really fun and well made. Star

Nice map! Ilike supersonic flow!

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
well i will say your BG sucks... chiptekBG use to be a 768*768 one i guess...? when playing just feel strange, though i noticed you tried to make them still in the picture but not the black.... but if could i still think a better BG is needed. and BGblue... i don't what the pixels in the middle mean, *sigh.
offset:+5, not sure.

[Transonic Flow]
Distance Spacing 1.2x for a Easy...? kind of weird. (though most of the time you use 1.1x i guess. but still...)
00:57:192 (1,2) - spacing.
01:27:460 (4) - new combo
01:39:135 (5,1,2,3) - ...the spacing
...need some more work on this diff.

[Kaneko's Sonic]
so many circles 0 0
02:34:694 (5) - the second tick 2 grid up and third: 1 grid left, will look better.
02:46:369 (8,9,10) - use a reverse slider instead..? kind of confusing in a Normal.
fair enough.

[Supersonic Flow]
01:03:029 (1,2) - not perfect stacked.
01:30:487 (8,9,1) - not sure about this.
02:43:562 (1...) - best part.
nice.

[Hypersonic Flow]
emmm.... HP Drain Rate 4? in [Supersonic Flow] it's 6.... set both of them to 5..?
01:01:299 (1) - the slider's end is confusing..
01:17:298 (7) - new combo?
01:46:053 (3,4,5) - it's weird to have such a ..1/4 jump?.
...don't know what pro players think about the spacing of streams or triples but too hard for me.

first off i will say.......LOVE the slider type

[transonic Flow]

resnap all notes

except from that this is nice and clean

[Kaneko's Sonic]
no real probs here either

[Supersonic Flow]
the BG is not nice on this diff D:

00:35:572 (1,2,3) - these curved sliders REALLY dont suit the map, i say make them like the others, this will make it epicly better xD

except from that, again smooth map

[Hypasonic Flow]

why does this map ask for a skin while the others dont?

00:05:952 (6,7) - same as the other diff, you dont need these curved sliders xD
00:47:030 (2,3,4) - fix the spacing on (3,4) that jump dont feel good

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i really liked these maps

great job o/

Hey.

- End all diffs a the same point. (might as well)

[Transonic Flow]
Snaping/Spacing errors...(alot too..)
00:15:469 (2) - extend this slider to end at 00:16:550
Seems fine.

[Kaneko's Sonic]
Make offset 980 like the other diffs.
Add Kiai Time?
01:42:810 (5,6,7) - move down 1 grid
Seems fine.

[Supersonic Flow]
Remove this BG and use just the other one...Whats the point in having one diff have a different BG?
Overall Difficulty: -1
Alot of spacing errors (doesnt apply to jumps) and 1 snaping error
Add Kiai Time?
00:12:222 (x) - add a note here?
00:12:438 (x) - ^
00:12:654 (x) - ^
01:03:678 (2) - take off grid-snap, and align it properly so its stacked under the previous slider
02:12:862 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 02:15:672


[Hypersonic Flow]
HP Drain Rate:+2
Seems fine.

~STAR GOOD LUCK

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DS is just a tool, if you know how to use it
you can make your maps pretty XD ( hold Alt+mouse wheel to set DS)
Every new combo can start with a new DS (i don`t mean that you can set new combo randomly)
if you follow the music, you can find there are many sections in a music (some people use bookmark to mark those different parts)

Pasonia used newcombo to mark the jumps you setting,
02:05:511 (1,2,3) - this is so confusing without newcombo mark
when you set a new combo on 02:06:376 (2) , people may notice it (i can understand why you set jump here, the music sounds more heavy here)

I just place some of your notes with random DS, are they looking bad to you ?
if they are not, you can try to use the tool DS to place your notes in the future

Download: she - supersonic (Faust) [Supersonic Flol].osu

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA!~

General:

I don't think you need to have "she - chiptune" as the source, since "she" is already the artist. I guess you have to change it to "chiptune", only.

Transonic Flow:

You could use clap each (2,4), you know.

00:07:894 (1) - Change this to a finish instead.
00:19:140 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23337 The end of this slider is weird. Wouldn't it be better if it was like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23338
00:35:572 (1) - Better like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23339 ?
00:40:760 (4,5,1) - Weird. And hard to see. Either stack (1) with (4)'s end or move it to somewhere else. Also, (1) ends in a weird way...

Not going to complain about sliders end anymore, since they're everywhere...

Kaneko's Sonic:

I still think this is too hard for a normal ( that is, if this is supposed to be a normal ). I mean, there are many 1/2 streams, and it's even 4 stars. But meh.

01:30:057 (3) - Add a clap at the end.

Hypersonic Flow:

00:47:030 (2,3,4) - Wtf is this spacing? ):
01:01:191 - Why ending the kiai here? Looks weird. >_>;

I didn't really like your linear sliders, but orz. Transonic Flow looks good, so star.

Hypersonic:
00:37:950 - Silly break.
00:47:030 (2,3,4) - That spacing between 3 and 4. Also I dislike how (4)'s beginning is hidden by (1).
01:14:272 (3) - What's that note for? It's interrupting the silence of the song..~
02:12:646 (6,7) - Lolwat jump. Doesn't look good to me.
02:52:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm kinda sure this stream is not a good idea.

Kaneko:
02:10:703 - That Kiai is just stupid.
02:45:944 (7,8,9,10) - Looks a little ugly.
02:49:403 (6,7,8,9) - ^

Transonic:
Unsnapped notes.
00:14:821 - What's with that red section

Overall I think the mapset is kinda square. The highest diff had pretty nice spacing and speed changes that made it interesting, but the note placement was still too square to make it that enjoyable. I don't know if you intended to make it square, but it's silly-ish.

Hi Dr. Faust

[General]
Is "she - chiptune" is album? If yes, please delete it, because album are not belong in album

[Transonic Flow]
*) All notes are unsnaaaaaaaaaaaped on timing, you should *snap* it (Timing -> Resnap All Notes -> Yes)
*) Meh, I don't like the shapes of slider. They are robotic but the shape of slider seems strange, anyway
*) Whistle Hitsound needs more.....

00:45:949 (7) - Must new combo, because the combo is very long for easy diff
00:47:246 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:10:164 (5) - New combo?

[Kaneko's Sonic]
This diff are very very neat than other diff

00:55:681 (6,7) - Move 1 grid down?
01:30:922 (4) - New combo?
01:31:787 (1) - Remove new combo?

[Supersonic Flow]
*) Those BG are very strange, I guess
*) No Kiai?????

02:03:781 (4) - Clap at end?

[Hypersonic Flow]
*) Some slider are so strange, I guess
*) Why this diff set the Preferred Skin to Azure v1.0?

Not bad
STAR

Kaneko: Offset differs from the other diffs

Easy: Still unsnapped notes

Larto wrote:

Kaneko: Offset differs from the other diffs

Easy: Still unsnapped notes

Fixed the unsnapped notes.

I always seem to have a problem with Kaneko Diff offset.

Hi ~

General;
- SkinPreference:Azure v1.0 for all please :3
- Emm, I think your BG looks better like this, I'm not sure, and why don't you use the BG with the girl for all diff ??
- The number one (skin) isn't in the center of the circle...

Easy;
- This.
- Umm, what distance snap are you using, AIMod shows some spacing errors...maybe use 0.9x for the whole map ??
- 00:08:763 (2,3,4,5) >> add whistle
- 00:12:222 >> I think this shoud end at 00:14:384
- 00:39:031 >> make this a slider that ends at 00:39:463 ??
- 00:59:759 >> new combo then remove new combo to the next circle
- 02:02:052 >> From this part on, I think everything will sound better if it was soft hitsounds, or maybe just the last spinner end it with a soft finish ??

Kaneko's Sonic;
- Is okk ~ with some minor spacing errors (Open AIMod)

Supersonic Flow and Hypersonic Flow are okk ~ with minor spacing errors (Open AIMod)

* Star ~ :3

The song audio file should also be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself - ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file should be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 256kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BAT - they will be more than happy to find one for you.

Sadly, Faust, the 320 kbps bit rate mp3 you used for this map is not rankable under the new ranking standards.

If you want to re-encode the mp3 yourself, here is a nice guide to help you.
Otherwise, you can post on this thread to ask for help.

POW!

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Sadly, Faust, the 320 kbps bit rate mp3 you used for this map is not rankable under the new ranking standards.

If you want to re-encode the mp3 yourself, here is a nice guide to help you.
Otherwise, you can post on this thread to ask for help.

Could you send me the new ranking standard page so i can see where all these new rules are?

Gabi wrote:

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Sadly, Faust, the 320 kbps bit rate mp3 you used for this map is not rankable under the new ranking standards.

If you want to re-encode the mp3 yourself, here is a nice guide to help you.
Otherwise, you can post on this thread to ask for help.

Could you send me the new ranking standard page so i can see where all these new rules are?

Sorry for causing all of this commotion. viewtopic.php?f=6&t=439

Specifically,

The song audio file should also be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself - ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file should be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 256kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BAT - they will be more than happy to find one for you.

no no you didn't cause any commotion at all, i didn't mean to come out as an ass, i just wanted some info seeing as there seems to be new rules and i don't know where i can find them

added 4 days ago, alright

...Words cannot describe how annoyed I am. Who suggested that new rule anyway, I want to know.

No.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I am a giant whore with a fancy jack-shit title.

Guidelines[...] should be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 256kbps.

I can smell blood.

Starred~

Disregard that here's a better mp3 http://up.ppy.sh/files/03_she-supersonic.mp3

BPM: 138.75 (otherwise it gets noticeably fast near the end)
Offset: 1,025 (for new mp3)

Remember to resnap on all difficulties afterwards!

IRC Modding but most of that was from jar who can't be arsed to post so no kudosu plz ty bubble bah BAM

Been having this map in my list for quite some time,
Needa star it.

[Kaneko]
02:46:430 (8,9) - What's with this sudden jump? It's the only one of it's kind in this difficulty.

[Hypersonic Flow]
The preferred skin for this difficulty is "Azure v1.0" yet the other difficulties are set to user's preference. Change it back to user's preference or change all to Azure v1.0.

(Maybe even remove letterboxing on all difficulties as well?)

I assumed the jump was okay because it kinda suited the song. Also Faust wanted to highlight that particular diff..


But now that both is fixed...

Boom.

weee love this map

Another map please

Thanks to all who made contributions to this !

@eMKay, thank you !

Congrats on your first ranked map, Faust!

agree with Priestess on Hypersonic(dunno how it's not approved >_<) otherwise nice map and good job..

lol GJ Faust

yay, awesome work Faust!

Congratz Faust !

How is this a song in Japanese? Please change it to English. (or instrumental)

Changed to English.

Grat'z Faust!

Yarrrr..

Congratulations Faust !

All these slider speeds are annoying in taiko. And I'm not talking about ninja notes.

Odaril wrote:

All these slider speeds are annoying in taiko. And I'm not talking about ninja notes.

Yeah, uh, sorry to hear that.