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Clemaister - Classic Style

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Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Accustomed pianis

01:28:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - not symmetry, I think set symmetry like next 1,2,3 is good


Mad Pianist

00:13:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - plz use distance snap for set spacing, many hit circle is wrong spacing xd
00:29:531 (6,7) - spacing
00:32:062 (4) - ^
00:48:937 (7,8,9) - this too
00:52:500 (1,2) - ^
00:55:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this stream is not matching with the music
01:22:593 (2,3,5) - spacing
01:24:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:34:500 (2) - new combo
01:39:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - check spacing again plz :3
01:55:687 (2,3) - ^
02:08:624 (7) - wrong spacing
02:30:000 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
02:50:437 (7,8,9) - ^

* when you put note stream plz check about spacing :3 ~
Hero Claw
38 posts
Joined March 2010
Hero Claw
Nice Map
Star <3
Suzumi Tamao
13 posts
Joined June 2009
Suzumi Tamao
star
PSPDS Eddie
457 posts
Joined November 2009
PSPDS Eddie
It is my idea.
Please disregard it when feeling that it makes a mistake.

I think that rate should make Easy of three or less.

Accustomed pianis
Please set Preview Point.
00:27:000 (1,2,3) - If it worries to make shape a straight line, it mends.
00:48:375 (2) - A last point of the slider is extended to a blue line.
01:29:250 (3,4,5) - up1grid
01:38:625 (4) - up1grid

Mad Pianist
Please set Preview Point.
The spacing of Stream is frequently wrong.
Please mend by using AIMOD.
Shift+Ctrl+A.
Fikusz_old
1 post
Joined May 2010
Fikusz_old
star D:
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
Nice map :)
Yumiko
505 posts
Joined September 2008
Yumiko
Great work, very nice map :P
Sutsuka
46 posts
Joined August 2008
Sutsuka
Nice map is nice. :)

Star~
rustbell
734 posts
Joined January 2010
rustbell
SPOILER
*bad english and modding*

General
a preview point is missing for this map < < (Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview Point)
offset 9 (if change then resnap all notes (under Timing menu
no kiai?

[Accustomed Pianist]
00:40:500 (1) - add finish
00:48:375 (2) - not equal to the music..?
01:42:000 (1) - add finish (?
02:54:000 (1) - ^


[Mad Pianist]
16mil score is a bit high >.> try to make HP Drain Rate smaller

as PSPDS Eddie said the spacing is frequently wrong for this diff
example
00:16:500 (1,2,3) -
01:04:406 (8,1) -
01:22:500 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
01:56:437 (5,6,7) -

00:40:500 (1) - add finish
01:42:000 (1) - ^ (?
02:30:000 (1) - ^
02:54:000 (1) - ^
03:00:000 (1) - whistle?

good work :)
starred
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
You might to give a warning that this map has flashing lights in it all the way through the map (idk how serious it has to be to have a warning for that) -- I guess ask a BAT about this
I dont really think the countdown suits the piano music but up to you
Give kudosu to any mod that has helped you (on the left)
If this is going for ranking it needs an easy or at least a normal below 3.5 stars
need a preview point for both difficulties (under timing)

Accustomed:
00:48:375 (2) - extend to the blue tick
00:49:312 (5,1) - align?
01:28:500 (1,3,4,5) - align
01:43:312 (5) - move 1 tiny grid right
02:54:937 (4,5) - line these up?

Mad Pianist:
nicely done map
I would just AIMod as mentioned before for some stuff
16 mil score might cause problems, not sure

*star*
Tomoka Rin
Former osu! Champion: OWC#1
378 posts
Joined June 2009
Tomoka Rin
star
nice map
AnFace
189 posts
Joined January 2010
AnFace
Delicious


[Accustomed pianist]
Suggestions
  • Capitalize pianist in the difficulty name, just for looks
    Increase difficulty by one tick, makes the timing easier to read and looks less cluttered
Everything else here looks good

[Mad pianist]
Suggestions
  • Capitalize pianist
    1:54:000 (1) - Every time I've played the map this note caught me off-guard. I see how it fits into the song and map, but I think where it's positioned makes it look like it's not with the same timing as the stream before it. This could just be me though, only a suggestion

Overall, I like this map. Storyboard and skin are well done (even if the skin makes it hard to see sometimes) and in general it's fun to play. All you need is the easier difficulty and I'd say you're set. Starred
Snai_old
14 posts
Joined November 2009
Snai_old
BPM ok

Nice Map! :)
Skin is very good

If there is Easy or normal, I can enjoy it more

gannbattene!! :lol:

Star~ :D
nuisible
555 posts
Joined September 2009
nuisible
Overall
BPM is okay

Mad pianist:

AnFace wrote:

1:54:000 (1) - I see how it fits into the song and map, but I think where it's positioned makes it look like it's not with the same timing as the stream before it.
so I agree.
03:06:000 (8) - move right, I think

I like this map, all is okay, I can't see any mistakes :3
Great song, good sb.
Starred~
lucy lucy
6 posts
Joined July 2010
lucy lucy
star :)
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted

Accustomed Pianist
01:27:000 (5) - remove new combo and remove clap at the reverse arrow
Mad Pianist
IRC mod about the Overall Diff and/or the HP drain. thoug if you wan't to keep the 5.00 star rating, don't change the rates and delete some notes to minimize the max score

other than that, Hand-breaker XD

Awesome!, love the streams :D

☆☆☆⌒ヽ(*＾O＾*)
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lucy lucy
6 posts
Joined July 2010
lucy lucy
~
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Mayoi Neko
165 posts
Joined January 2010
Mayoi Neko
hi~ BG the best 800*600

Normal

try 45-50% volume, clap to whispered.

and 00:26:250 (2) 00:26:437 00:26:812 - removal clap

00:30:750 (2) - removal clap

00:32:250 (2) - removal clap

00:37:125 (4) - removal clap

00:37:500 (1) - 1,3 removal clap 2,4 clap

01:00:937 (4) - removal clap

01:03:937 (4) - 3,4,6 removal clap

02:05:250 (2) - 02:05:437 (2) - 02:05:812 (3) - rem clap

02:09:937 (2) - removal clap

02:11:250 (2) - removal clap

02:16:312 (4) - removal clap 1,3 - removeal calp

02:50:437 (4) - removal clap

Hard ... i have nothing to say

, good luck!
Inozuma
596 posts
Joined June 2008
Inozuma
IRC Mod~

Star~
kaouji
92 posts
Joined February 2009
kaouji
Beginer:
0019125(2) remove
0019500 add a combo
0020250 add a combo
0025125(2) move to 0024750
0030000(1) one reture change to three retures
0058125 add a combo
0152125(2) move to 0151750
0201875 add a combo
0210125(2) remove
0210500 add a combo
0211250 add a combo
0216125(2) move to 0215750
0233750(1) one reture change to three retures
0259625 add a combo


Accustomed:
0133375 add a combo


mad:
0029808(8) remove
0044343(8) remove
0142000(1) space wrong
0234406(12) remove
0245656(7) remove
Pasonia
osu! Alumni
1,199 posts
Joined October 2008
Pasonia
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KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,848 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
Finally modding ;_;

[Beginner Pianist]
00:39:000 (1) - End this spinner at 00:40:500 and add a note at 00:40:875?
01:40:500 (1) - End this spinner at 01:42:000 and add a note at 01:42:375?
Generally, the sliders are pretty ugly. I think you can do a better job with the sliders.
SPOILER
Sliders like this can do with a little bit of modifying.

[Accustomed Pianist]
Great difficulty. Love this.

[Mad Pianist]
Not really a fan of how the streams are laid out in some places, but as I cannot come up with better alternatives I'll let it slide.

Star!
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

[Beginner Pianist]
  • 01:03:000 (1,2,1) - These notes, and couple of further looks better when not stacked. So i suggest decreasing stack leniency to 3rd bar.
[Accustomed Pianist]
Cool :3

[Mad Pianist]
Yeah. :D

I was modding this map in storm, lightnings + sb flashes <3
Anyway there was almost nothing to mod. Map is awesome imo :3 Starrr'd.
Micia
20 posts
Joined July 2009
Micia
good map 8-)
☆
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa
;)
Mizuki-kawaii
3 posts
Joined February 2010
Mizuki-kawaii
good beatmap
<3 Clemaister I love you<3
:3
y u c a
844 posts
Joined April 2009
y u c a
Beginner

00:16:875(2)　lose shape. perhaps you should same shape 00:15:375(2)
02:07:500(1) ill-placed
02:56:250(2) 1grid right



Accusomed

01:04:500(1) ill-placed
02:20:625(4) ^?



Mad Pianist

00:48:281(4) 1 grid down
00:53:156(6) 1 grid left
01:39:000(1)~ ill-placed
01:39:750(1)~ ^
02:30:000(1)~(4) ^


good song~♪
(･ω･ﾉ)ﾉ⌒☆
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[deleted user]
[deleted user]
Okai!
Mod4Mod

[Beginner Pianist]:
00:15:000(1): I think you should put this originally in one of the previous circle spots so it looks neater.
01:52:500(3): Put where previous (1) is.
02:03:000 (1): I don't think this slider is rankable? idk for sure.

[Accustomed Pianist]:
01:02:625 (4): a 3size grid to the left.

[Mad Pianist]:
nothing found.

Excellent SB, Map, and Song (or instrumental, however you should say it).
star~
zaru-d
13 posts
Joined March 2009
zaru-d
very good.
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[SB]
The white part about the map and song by you is kinda hard to see at the shoulders of the person in the bg, but since your name appears twice in the song selection I don't think its a problem.

[Skin]
I don't think the middle thing in the spinner is a full circle...


Starred.
Ekoro
3,456 posts
Joined March 2010
Ekoro
Diff Finie.

Star :p

Comment t'a fait pour avoir autant de stars?! o.o

Download: Clemaister - Classic Style (Clemaister) [LRJulien's Medium Pianist].osu
krius_old
277 posts
Joined March 2009
krius_old
star~
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
Héhé

Bon boulot :)

~Star
lxy
108 posts
Joined March 2009
lxy
8-)
Good map &song :)
akX
24 posts
Joined November 2008
akX
good beatmap
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
azuki
star~
Tapdancingmetroid
osu! Alumni
225 posts
Here since the beginning
Tapdancingmetroid
As far as spacing/other map-type things are concerned I found no problems with the four maps.
On the other hand, I had some issues with the skin and whatnot, especially on the hardest difficulty. In the large streams of notes, the transparency of the notes, combined with the light colors of the notes, makes it really difficult to see where exactly the next note occurs. Also, in a lot of these streams, I felt that the hit sounds were actually too quiet to provide any feedback to the player (letting them know whether or not they hit the note, etc).
TL;DR: make the notes more obvious, turn up the sample volume
Anyway, just do what you can to fix that stuff.

I'll star this for the time being. ;)
mattyu007
osu! Alumni
1,602 posts
Here since the beginning
mattyu007
Bubble~
Scar
681 posts
Joined January 2009
Scar

mattyu007 wrote:

Bubble~
Are you serious ?
This map needs some work...
Just in [Mad Pianist] the spacing is totally retarded...
It's really not funny at all, it's just boring and retarded.
Eirene
577 posts
Joined December 2008
Eirene

scar1410 wrote:

mattyu007 wrote:

Bubble~
Are you serious ?
This map needs some work...
Just in [Mad Pianist] the spacing is totally retarded...
It's really not funny at all, it's just boring and retarded.
:roll:
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
wow I come back here and its bubbled...well....I will mod anyway :) (if the next BAT that looks at this disagrees then ignore it all)
-Custom cursor needs a cursor trail in folder
-Make the background 800x600 so it looks nicer? (same with sb)
-Add LRJulien to tags on all difficulties
-Why does every difficulty have the same slider velocity, or more importantly why does LRJulien's have a lower slider velocity than the easiest difficulty
-On LRJulien's difficulty shouldn't the storyboard say beatmap by LRJulien?

Everything looks fine apart from
Mad Painist:
01:49:500 (5) - new combo to match others
01:53:250 (9) - ^
16 mil max score wow..

nicely done


Scar1410 learn to have some respect, constructive criticism is one thing, saying things are "retarded" is another
James
osu! Hall of Famer
4,371 posts
Joined January 2008
James
change playfield background to black.
can anyone recheck if offset needs +8-+12ms?
im hitting 100s on this map.

other than these two the map is good, except that the hardest diff is overmapped.

no star since i dont give out my precious stars
James
osu! Hall of Famer
4,371 posts
Joined January 2008
James
rebubbled.
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Ton of notes and sliders aren't snapped in [Mad Pianist]
Also album title doesn't go in source, put it in the tags instead.

Edit: K, rebubbled.
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
Wow. How many mods have you asked? I feel bad for popping this again.

[General]
  1. Take a look at this: http://puu.sh/7TO - it really doesn't need to be that big. I can easily resize it to http://puu.sh/7TP, and it would look the same while having better performance. Mind cropping all the images that do this?
  2. Comboburst is a bit small.
  3. Add these files:
    1. cursortrail.png
    2. spinner-approachcircle.png
    3. hit0.png
    They can be either custom or from the template skin.
[Beginner Pianist]
  1. This difficulty has a weird finish point, but I guess you could finish mapping the rest.
  2. The slider velocity is a bit too fast for the easiest difficulty. I'm not telling you to change now, but consider it for your next map. If you changed it would be great though.
01:40:510 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:42:010.

[Accustomed Pianist]
  1. This difficulty has a weird finish point. Read on if you want to check this further.
  2. A bit of inconsistent spacing towards the end... at 02:42:385 to be specific.
[Mad Pianist]
  1. That score doesn't seem very appropriate, plus the finish point is a bit weird. If you finished the map at 02:18:010 or so, it would fix both of these problems.
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens

Gens wrote:

01:40:510 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:42:010.
The beat after it is a bit too close, in my opinion... would you remove that?

The comboburst now looks pixelated. Wouldn't you search for a similar image with high resolution instead of resizing?

And, I think it would be better if all the difficulties finished at the same point, but oh well. Not going to force you, but it does seem a bit sloppy now.

EDIT: Perfect. Rebubbled!
James
osu! Hall of Famer
4,371 posts
Joined January 2008
James
ranked. awesome music composition if thats what they called~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Same here, don't forget to set genre and language >_>

Anyway grats Clemaister :)
dNextGen
4,689 posts
Joined May 2010
dNextGen
sugoi as fuck
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
Congrat!~ ;)
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
yay it's ranked! :D
time to break keyboard
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