SakiK wrote:

hi~ from modque

[Normal]

HP Drain +1? Done
01:24:148 (1) - Rm NC and 01:25:900 (2) - NC X
01:37:287 (3) - Rm whistel its on head Done
01:40:353 (4) - add whistel (little volume X
02:48:236 (1) - NC Done

[Hard]

some slider doesn't look good... you should try to fix I'll try to fix
01:53:491 (7) - NC here and remove01:53:929 (1) - NC is better X
(02:51:740- 02:53:49)there Hit Sound is bigger than (02:53:49-03:11:010)is strange,should be changed more big volume(02:53:49-03:11:010) Done

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue

好歌... 深海少女><

[General]

1. wei shen me wo kan dao le Bikko ge orz 這句甚麼意思= =

[Normal]

1. 感觉whistle音效声音有点大了... 看看这个 http://up.ppy.sh/files/normal-hitwhistle.wav Okay
2. 00:26:338 (3) - 加个finish? Done
3. 00:42:104 (1) - whistle改成finish Done
4. 00:43:856 (2) - 加一个whistle Done
5. 01:17:141 (1) - whistle改成finish Done
6. 00:50:864 (3) - reverse上whistle Done
7. 00:54:367 (3) - 头上whistle X
8. 01:42:542 (2) - 中间reverse加个whistle, 然后两边加绿线. 改成44% volume Done
9. 02:49:988 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这里音量逐渐增大吧... Done

[Hard]

1. 各种0.5x有点坑... 同感=w=所以Tick rate改成2，希望比較好
2. 00:09:696 (7) - whistle Done
3. 00:15:827 (5) - 滑条拉好点... Done；第3個人吐這條Slider TAT
4. 00:34:659 (5) - whistle Done
5. 00:35:973 (3) - finish Done
6. 01:23:272 (6) - 改成3个1/2 circle X
7. 01:54:586 (4) - 尾上whistle Done
8. 01:58:090 (4) - ^ Done
9. 02:21:651 - 加点note? normal都没break 一般来说高难度应该break少的 腦殘搞錯了BreakTime範圍；我著頭就改掉
10. 02:51:740 (1,2,3) - ......别这么摆orz 為甚麼0.0
11. 后面这段音量增加点 Done

Good luck~

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[normal]
00:29:842 (5) - 下一格(lv3) Done
02:04:440 (1) - remove NC? X
02:12:323 (1) - ^ X
03:14:513 (1) - 结尾whistle Done

[hard]
没有

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi There !

This mod is my suggestions

General: Nothing

Normal

00:08:820 (3) - Add reverse arrow ? X
00:10:572 (2) - Add whistle at the begin remove whistle at the end of the slider X
00:15:827 (3) - Add whistle? Done
00:33:345 (2) - Add whistle at the end of the slider X
02:34:221 (1) - Unnescesary timeline ? Done

Hard

00:07:068 (2) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider X
00:14:732 (4) - Add note
00:14:842 (5) - ^ Like this notes 00:13:856 (1,2) Sorry but I feel it so fast
00:15:608 (7) - Add note X
]01:01:156 (2) - ^ X

This song has alot of potential so this are just suggestions ! i Did my best, hope it was helpful But I know I map so bad QAQ

Good Luck ! And Star !

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

Modding as requested!

General
Kiai times are different!
Same as above, split normal into 2 different, or make hard all 1 kiai time. Okay.I make HARD all 1 kiai time.

Normal
Change to slidertick rate 2 like in hard. slidertick rate 1 is okay.
00:52:615 (1) -
00:54:367 (3) -
Reposition it as you like, just fixed the symmetry Done.
01:43:856 (4,5) - Remove these two notes, and make a repeating slider like you made at 01:42:542 (2). X
01:57:433 (5,6) - It sound's better like this (imo) if your willing to use another 1/2 beat back to back. Hard for Normal
02:20:207 (3) - Use finish instead of whistle. GJ
03:23:929 (1) - Add one repeat to this? X, It's unrank

Hard
00:45:170 (1) - Soft: 5% Volume. This makes the note silent, change to soft 30-40% so there is slight volume. X
01:34:221 (1) - ^
02:09:039 - ^
03:28:090 - ^
03:32:031 - As above ^
If you've done this in normal and I missed it, fix it too xD

01:19:988 (2) - Consider adding a note here. X
01:20:645 (3,4,5,6) - Stacking 2 or more sliders on the same starting grid causes an issue with the stack leiency: I do not know you meant, but I correct, because I think very interesting

Overall, a pretty well made beatmap!

LKs wrote:

Normal

整体音量太大了 下调
00:10:572 (2,3) - 这两个用弧形的打击感会比直线好很多 Done
00:12:323 (3) - 这里的whistle节奏变化导致你之后的whistle节奏和之前变了 而且变得不够自然。如果要把whistle移到尾部那么00:14:075 (1,2,3) - 的whistle也要改 Done
00:33:345 (2) - whistle Done
02:39:039 (1) - 又一个突然的whistle节奏变化, whistle移到尾部 Done

Hard

没什么mod的

整体音量调下 找mat

ertyukjh010 wrote:

找不到圖QAQ

Ritasu又該死的沒有人氣~~

edit: 瞎了

Armin wrote:

[Normal]

02:06:192 (1,1) - Not really a fair point for the new player, the best thing in my opinion (but you are free to reject it) is to replace these hitobjects 02:09:696 (1,2,3,1) with a break. What do you think? OIC, I fix to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/224014

[Hard]

Awesome.

Call me for another recheck when you fix that little issue.

Ekaru wrote:

Hard:

02:35:535 (1,2,3) - The spacing decrease is a bit too steep here and doesn't feel good. Okay, How about Stacked? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227599

It appears to be squeaky clean aside from that, though. Normal's tick rate could be 2, but eh. I want to Choose Tick rate 1. Because it would be many tick in the slider. EX. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227605

PM me after changing this and I'll bubble.

Ekaru wrote:

"but eh" means "It's up to you." Okay, have your bubble. ;P

AlphaXT wrote:

Normal

節奏做得不好 額，我會再改一下

Hard

00:21:740 - 放note Done
00:22:615 - ^ Done
00:49:550 - clap Done
00:59:623 - 1和2兩個Slider沒對稱 Done

GoodLuck

ay6859 wrote:

Ert大 owo , 你要不要新增一個Collab ?

兩個難度太不給力了 >___>

Raging Bull wrote:

Dunno but I love Shinkai Shoujo :S

ertyukjh010 wrote:

ay6859 wrote:

Ert大 owo , 你要不要新增一個Collab ?

兩個難度太不給力了 >___>

我不是大QAQ 別否認了 ~

不過，已經拜托了別人做Hard和Taiko ~ 哦哦 好吧~

Raging Bull wrote:

Dunno but I love Shinkai Shoujo :S

:3

ay6859 wrote:

Normal

[01:24:148] 滑條改短一點 >___> 配合音樂 Done

[02:37:725] 滑條能短一點嘛 ? 節奏怎麼聽都不對勁 ( (3)改短後和(1)中間擺一個Note也很棒 ! ) Done

除了上面兩個之外 你的Normal真是棒 !! 謝謝誇獎:3

Insane

[00:29:185]這個(3)上面了一點點 ... 條下面一點吧 ! ( 跟(2)平行 ) Done

[00:40:791](2)和(1)沒有平行 ... 你應該是故意的 XD 不過我還是希望你條平行 Done

[01:02:907] (7)和(5)平行 , (8)和(4)平行 @A@ Done

[01:28:637] (7)調下來一點點 比(6)高一點點就好了 Done,這是手誤QAQ

[01:35:316] 神Mapper ...
我給不暸什麼意見了這個note (4)跟(5)盡量接近點吧 ... 這部份是跳的所以我覺得沒問題啊0.0 雖然我承認我放得不順手QAQ

[01:36:630] (2)和(3)位置對調 你真的很神 ^ (話說總覺得我被說反語了,可惡QAQ)

[01:43:418] 1. (1)移到(3)的位置
2. (2)和(3)的位置調換
二選一你覺得哪個比較好 .__. ? ^

[02:11:885] (5)移到 吧 沒這個需要了0.0

[02:41:229] 改成 節奏才會漂亮 Done
(另外說一下 , 這邊節奏超棒的 !! ) 嗯，這首歌節奏的確很好，只是我做不好（攤手

[03:05:754] 這邊幾個note ... 太超過了吧 沒差啦=3=都INS了
(2) (4) (6) (8) 移進來一點就好

[03:16:265] 改成 我的圖比較注重跳

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太棒了這張圖 -w- !! 謝謝誇獎><

被我修一修變的好簡單啊

ertyukjh010 wrote:

ay6859 wrote:

Normal

[01:24:148] 滑條改短一點 >___> 配合音樂 Done

[02:37:725] 滑條能短一點嘛 ? 節奏怎麼聽都不對勁 ( (3)改短後和(1)中間擺一個Note也很棒 ! ) Done

除了上面兩個之外 你的Normal真是棒 !! 謝謝誇獎:3

Insane

[00:29:185]這個(3)上面了一點點 ... 條下面一點吧 ! ( 跟(2)平行 ) Done

[00:40:791](2)和(1)沒有平行 ... 你應該是故意的 XD 不過我還是希望你條平行 Done

[01:02:907] (7)和(5)平行 , (8)和(4)平行 @A@ Done

[01:28:637] (7)調下來一點點 比(6)高一點點就好了 Done,這是手誤QAQ

[01:35:316] 神Mapper ...
我給不暸什麼意見了這個note (4)跟(5)盡量接近點吧 ... 這部份是跳的所以我覺得沒問題啊0.0 雖然我承認我放得不順手QAQ

[01:36:630] (2)和(3)位置對調 你真的很神 ^ (話說總覺得我被說反語了,可惡QAQ)

[01:43:418] 1. (1)移到(3)的位置
2. (2)和(3)的位置調換
二選一你覺得哪個比較好 .__. ? ^

[02:11:885] (5)移到 吧 沒這個需要了0.0

[02:41:229] 改成 節奏才會漂亮 Done
(另外說一下 , 這邊節奏超棒的 !! ) 嗯，這首歌節奏的確很好，只是我做不好（攤手

[03:05:754] 這邊幾個note ... 太超過了吧 沒差啦=3=都INS了
(2) (4) (6) (8) 移進來一點就好

[03:16:265] 改成 我的圖比較注重跳

----------

太棒了這張圖 -w- !! 謝謝誇獎><

被我修一修變的好簡單啊

謝謝大大的Modding

ertyukjh010 wrote:

額SB我是不擅長，也不打算請人做了~

因為我都比較喜歡簡潔為主，就例如我從來不會加入SKIN之類的東西