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Topic Starter
Doodley

banvi wrote:

hello :D
General
delete .osb file & full-submit Ah, I knew I had to full submit, of course...
N.Trophy
This is easy (or normal?) Normal. N-Gin is Hard and N. Cortex is Insane.
so I think you should use distance snap. At least , you should be consistent spacing with using distance snap for easy/normal.
00:15:543 (1,2,3) , 00:17:250 (1,2,3) , 00:20:664 (1,2,3) , 00:22:371 (1,2,3) , 00:24:078 (1,2,3,4) , 01:01:631 (1,2) , 01:03:338 (1,2)
because this increase distance pattern confused beginners. I moved the notes closer with 0.5x spacing and made a simpler pattern if that is what you're saying.
00:18:957 (2) remove new combo? The new combo was on the next note, done.
N-Gin
00:13:836 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) consistent spacing such as 00:17:250 (1,2,3) Moved the notes closer.
00:18:957 (2) remove new combo? Yup.
00:25:785 (6,1) more increase spacing Did it.
00:27:065 (1) remove new combo? Yeah.
00:27:492 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) I think better this combo I like this combo, it puts a new combo on every emphasized. Nice.
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N.Cortex
00:25:785 (8) 1 grid left (grid lv3)Did all of these...
00:36:027 (4) 1 grid down & 1 grid left
00:37:094 (3,4) 1 grid up
00:38:587 (4) 1 grid down & 1 grid right ...except this, I moved the entire combo because of the above moved note...
00:39:654 (3) 1 grid up and then moved these to go with the spacing!
00:49:469 (1) remove new combo? oops. I had these in before I copied the first beats over to this section and since removed them, but forgot to remove them here.
00:51:176 (1) ^
00:53:097 (3) 1 grid left I didn't see anything wrong here...

overall good map. rhythm is good.
star~
Thanks for your help!
Mianki
N. Trophy:

00:33:466 and 00:40:294. I think these spinners are too short for an Easy diff. New players can't beat them so easily.

Other diffs were fine~
Nice map :P, star~
Topic Starter
Doodley
Back from my trip, so post bump.
Kotone
General
Delete .osb
N.Trophy
00:25:465(4)-spacing
00:33:040(1)-try make this spinner longer.This is too short
00:39:868(1)-^

N-Gin
This is hard diff ?
HP Drain Rate: +2 ?
Overrall Difficulty:+2 ?
fine.

N.Cortex
fine.


nice map~ star :)
Topic Starter
Doodley

karenying wrote:

Delete .osb
I SWEAR I DID IT THIS TIME GOD DAMMIT

AAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGH
i mad

karenying wrote:

General
Delete .osb
N.Trophy
00:25:465(4)-spacing Did it. And the note was at 00:25:785!
00:33:040(1)-try make this spinner longer.This is too short One white tick longer.
00:39:868(1)-^ Also one tick longer.

N-Gin
This is hard diff ? Yes, it's hard.
HP Drain Rate: +2 ? I did both of these and it knocked it up to 4 and a half stars. I think it still lists as a Hard difficulty, though...
Overrall Difficulty:+2 ?
fine.

N.Cortex
fine.


nice map~ star :)
Thank you.

Mmm, looks like this is well on it's way to ranking. Just as planned...yes...bwahaha
NotShinta
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aRiskOfRain
Hitsounds are a bit loud, turn em down a couple of ticks.
You need a diff under 3 stars.
Delete your .osb and full submit~

N. Trophy;

I think you'll find his name is spelt N. Tropy.
00:14:156 (2) - No whistle.
00:17:570 (2) - ^
00:26:852 (2) - Move this so it doesn't overlap the orange 4 as much?
00:33:040 (1) - End a beat earlier.
00:39:868 (1) - ^

N-Gin;

Should be N. Gin.
00:14:156 (2) - No whistle.
00:58:858 (3) - Whistle.
01:01:632 (1,1) - Spacing.
01:03:339 (1,1) - ^
01:05:045 (1,1) - ^

N. Cortex;

00:28:772 (1) - No new combo.
00:29:199 (3) - New combo.
00:30:053 (1) - No new combo.
00:30:906 (5) - New combo.
00:31:333 (1) - No new combo.
01:02:805 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:06:218 (2,3) - ^
GladiOol
[General]
  1. Your hitsound volume is too high. Decrease it by alot.
  2. Remove 'crash' , 'bandicoot' & 'warped' from TAGs because it's already in the source.
  3. (nazi) Offset 180.
  4. Delete .osb file then re-fullsubmit.
  5. I don't get the diff. names. Please explain.
[N. Cortex]
  1. Alot of weird new combo placements you have. I've pointed them all out.
00:15:863 (3) - Stack (3) under note (4).
00:16:823 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:21:944 (1) - ^
00:23:651 (1) - ^
00:25:785 (8) - Add new combo.
00:26:425 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:27:065 (1) - ^
00:35:387 (1) - ^
00:56:511 (1) - Spacing, move it further away from slider end (5).
00:57:577 (5,6,7) - Move these all one grid level to the right. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)
00:58:217 (1) - Then move this note one grid level up. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)
00:59:924 (1) - Spacing, move it further away from slider end (5).
01:03:125 (3) - Spacing, (3) is too close to (2).
01:06:539 (3) - Spacing, (3) is too close to (2).

[N-Gin]
  1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by 2.
  2. Decrease Drain Rate by 1.
  3. Diff. name must be N. Gin.
00:26:425 (1) - Spacing, (1) is too close to slider end (6).
00:52:670 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:59:925 (1) - Spacing, (1) is too far away from slider end (4).
I'm not fond of the kiai time part, maybe remap it?

[N. Trophy]

00:20:664 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:22:371 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:24:078 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:28:772 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:670 (1) - ^

Starred.
Garven
As per your request:

[General]
The hit sounds are kind of loud compared to the song itself. Maybe lower them a bit?

[N. Trophy] Isn't this supposed to be entropy?
00:10:848 (2,1) - Might be a bit difficult for new players to tell when the slider is going to end - especially at that velocity. Same with copy/paste later on.
00:20:664 (1) - Why the increased distance snap suddenly? Kind of confusing on a difficulty like this.
00:26:852 (2) - Maybe move this? Looks really bad being covered up by the previous slider.
01:00:991 (2,1,2,1) - This looks really messy. Maybe try to space these out a bit more in a different configuration?

[N-Gin] Hyphen instead of a period?
Wait, didn't I just play this... oh. I wouldn't recommend just rehashing the exact same patterns like that. There's a lot more you can do here.
Maybe up the slider speed a bit to help differentiate between this and the easier difficulty? You'll have to redo all of your sliders though.
The lowish distance snap also makes things a little annoying to read, but oh well.
Otherwise, okay.

[N. Cortex]
00:34:747 (1) - You create a lot of ugly overlaps with your repeating sliders in this section - try move the end points around so they're not half-covering up notes.
aRiskOfRain
Hold on, the artist should be Mutato Muzika, no?
Topic Starter
Doodley

DiamondCrash wrote:

Hold on, the artist should be Mutato Muzika, no?
I suppose so.

I'll make everyone's amends tomorrow, thanks for all your help.

And the difficulty names are the bosses of Warped from 2nd boss to final.
AussieEvil

stickmeister wrote:

And the difficulty names are the bosses of Warped from 2nd boss to final.
Third boss. Dingodile is #2.

(GENERAL)
You should reduce the hitsound volume (like Garven suggested). Sometimes it completely drowns out the music.

(N. TROPHY)
You did misspell the difficulty name, I fear. It should be "N. Tropy".

(N-GIN)
Just minor nigglings here, but for consistency, the "N" is an initial, so this should be "N. Gin."

+star
Kamure
great job! star...

N.Trophy
00:25:785 (4) - new combo
00:26:425 (1) - remove combo
01:01:631 (1,2,1) - it's a bit cramped in the spot. Consider spacing?

N.Gin
00:26:425 (1) - move away from the slider

N.Cortex
00:35:387 (1) - remove combo
00:36:027 (4) - add combo
00:36:667 (1) - remove combo
Topic Starter
Doodley
Took a two month break from osu, extremely happy to see that this beatmap is still alive. Addressed a buttload of problems, most notable being that 1. The difficulty names are now more obvious, there's still the pun in "Insane" and 2. N. Gin (or Hard now) is now much different from the other difficulties. Various other subtle problems addressed. Still not done though. The artist name will be changed to Mutato Muzika when I get the chance.

Damn, I need to finish my Rhythm Heaven skin...
Sushi

stickmeister wrote:

DiamondCrash wrote:

Hold on, the artist should be Mutato Muzika, no?
I suppose so.

I'll make everyone's amends tomorrow, thanks for all your help.

And the difficulty names are the bosses of Warped from 2nd boss to final.
It is. If you refer to the soundtrack and the wiki, the artists are josh mancell, mark mothersbaugh and Mutato Muzika with Mutato Muzika as main artist. Put Mutato Muzika as Artist and josh mancell / mark mothersbaugh in the tags.
James2250
I don't know how much of the map you have left to fix but once everything is done PM me on forums (I like the song/game)
Topic Starter
Doodley
REVIVED, BIZNITCHES
Topic Starter
Doodley
quick bump so this isn't sent to the graveyard
Misja
[Normal]
00:24:077 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe An Idea to not to overlap.
00:24:717 (3,4) - This one Is too close Aimod :P

[hard]
00:40:400 (1) - NinjaSpinner

[N.Sane]
WoW gr8 map :)
Overall difficulty +1 ?
Topic Starter
Doodley

misja056 wrote:

[Normal]
00:24:077 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe An Idea to not to overlap. They seem fine to me. They just overlap in the editor.
00:24:717 (3,4) - This one Is too close Aimod :P

[hard]
00:40:400 (1) - NinjaSpinner It's a hard difficulty and I can't do much about it to fit the music. If it's crucial to ranking, then I'm not going to worry about it.

[N.Sane]
WoW gr8 map :)
Overall difficulty +1 ?
Haganeproductio
This map needs more love ;;___;; Crash Bandicoot need more love in osu! and so on.

It's a shame that the map was a little bit too short I think, but the song itself is kinda short and if you repeated it or something, then it would get boring etc.

Are you going to make more good ol' Crash themed maps? Like something from CTR? C:
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