1. Easy (1.63 stars, 219 notes)
2. Normal (1.73 stars, 284 notes)
3. Titanium (3.65 stars, 454 notes)

• 
  read me

1. correct AR ( do AR 3-4)
2. try on easy red ticks do not use!
3. Easy and normal difficulty should be in one pace, so will be easier to beginners to perceive a map
   
4. the distance between the notes make the entire map of the same
5. 00:13:099 (2,3,4) - replace on slider 00:13:099-00:13:575
6. 00:14:527 (3) - mvoe on 00:14:051 and finish here 00:15:003
   
7. 00:41:908 (1,2) - unstuck read me
8. 00:28:813 (1,2,3,4) - replace on
   00:28:813-00:29:289 - slider
   00:29:765 - note
   00:30:241-00:30:479 - slider
9. 01:06:670 (1,2,3) - rework ^ for beginners too hard
10. 01:44:527 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ rework
    01:44:765 - 01:45:241 - slider
    01:45:718 - note
    01:46:194 - 01:46:670 - slider
11. 01:48:575 (1) - finish here 01:49:051
12. 01:59:765 (1,2,3,4,5) - rework examples above or -
    02:00:003 - note
    02:00:479 - 02:00:956 - slider
    02:01:432 - note
    02:01:908 - note
13. 02:20:003 (2) - offgrid
14. 02:28:575 (1) - on easy difficulty too hard for beginners, make smoother
    
15. 02:51:670 - 02:58:813 - can break away? and pointed objects

1. 00:17:146 (1) - offgrid
2. 00:32:384 (1,2,3) - make a smoother transition between notes
3. 01:49:527 (4,5,6) - ^
4. 00:42:860 (4,5) - may be worth unstuck?
5. 01:57:384 - Add to note here
6. 02:20:956 (1) - delete NC
7. 02:21:908 (2) - NC
8. 02:22:860 (1) - delete NC
9. 02:22:622 - add note
10. 02:23:456 - add note
11. leave only this pause - 02:02:146 - 02:16:670

Loony Key wrote:

Easy

• 
  read me

1. correct AR ( do AR 3-4) FIXED
2. try on easy red ticks do not use! Okay!
3. Easy and normal difficulty should be in one pace, so will be easier to beginners to perceive a map Will consider it FIXED
   
4. the distance between the notes make the entire map of the same FIXED
5. 00:13:099 (2,3,4) - replace on slider 00:13:099-00:13:575 FIXED
6. 00:14:527 (3) - mvoe on 00:14:051 and finish here 00:15:003 FIXED
   
7. 00:41:908 (1,2) - unstuck read me FIXED
8. 00:28:813 (1,2,3,4) - replace on
   00:28:813-00:29:289 - slider
   00:29:765 - note
   00:30:241-00:30:479 - slider FIXED
9. 01:06:670 (1,2,3) - rework ^ for beginners too hard FIXED
10. 01:44:527 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ rework
    01:44:765 - 01:45:241 - slider
    01:45:718 - note
    01:46:194 - 01:46:670 - slider FIXED
11. 01:48:575 (1) - finish here 01:49:051 FIXED
12. 01:59:765 (1,2,3,4,5) - rework examples above or -
    02:00:003 - note
    02:00:479 - 02:00:956 - slider
    02:01:432 - note
    02:01:908 - note FIXED
13. 02:20:003 (2) - offgrid FIXED
14. 02:28:575 (1) - on easy difficulty too hard for beginners, make smoother FIXED
    
15. 02:51:670 - 02:58:813 - can break away? and pointed objects Will consider it

Hard

1. 00:17:146 (1) - offgrid FIXED
2. 00:32:384 (1,2,3) - make a smoother transition between notes FIXED
3. 01:49:527 (4,5,6) - ^ FIXED
4. 00:42:860 (4,5) - may be worth unstuck? FIXED
5. 01:57:384 - Add to note here FIXED
6. 02:20:956 (1) - delete NC Sorry, it is okay as it is.
7. 02:21:908 (2) - NC Sorry, it is okay as it is.
8. 02:22:860 (1) - delete NC Sorry, it is okay as it is.
9. 02:22:622 - add note FIXED
10. 02:23:456 - add note FIXED
11. leave only this pause - 02:02:146 - 02:16:670 Sorry, it is okay as it is.

CrystilonZ wrote:

From my queue
what you did here is pretty good actually
and I just realized that this is a WIP map did you read the rules? lol
Anyway, I will overlook it this time for the mod you've done for me XD

[General]
BG must be in jpg format, and it should be 1366*768 for 16:9 I changed the format, but I couldn't find higher resolution, so it will stay in 1024*600 :/

[Easy]
01:12:384 (1) - this is extremely old-fashion which isn't used anymore. Try something creative that fits well with 01:14:289 (1) - . Take a look in some maps made by experts I will change that, but I need to find some inspiration to do that.
01:18:099 (1,2) - this is bugging me so bad. Try to change (2) into a straight slider and make them overlap each other. I've done this frequently in my Hard in the map you've modded Changed, but in my own way
01:35:241 (1,1) - this can be made better. Try blanketing them Also changed, but not double blanket, but smth in that way
00:19:051 (1,1) - Overlapping like this is not the best choice in Easy Fixed!
02:17:622 (2,3,4) - Kind of sloppy, try making them into a square. Fixed!
02:47:622 (1) - idk, I think this spinner don't fit Removed!
03:06:670 (1,2,1) - try blanketing 1 with 1(second) Fixed!
03:29:527 (1,1) - same as 01:12:384 (1) - As I said, looking for inspiration right now.

The following mod will be entirely about Titanium diff

[Flow]
Mostly, the flow is pretty good except for these notes.
00:06:432 (4,5) - Hmm, I think it's good, but thanks!
00:33:813 (6,7,1) - I think I fixed it.
00:42:860 (4,5) - Also fixed!
01:04:765 (1,2) - ctrl G on 2 Fixed!
01:06:670 (1,2) - ^ Fixed!
01:34:765 (4,1) - I fixed it... At least I think so.
01:56:670 (3,4) - Fixed!
03:44:765 (1,1,1,1) - these sliders are indeed creative, but they're not that good in playing Will consider it, cause I really like them I will wait till somebody else criticize it, and I will change it then

[Pattern & Consistency]
00:11:432 (1,2,3) - weird blanketing, make the distance between them equal Fixed!
00:18:813 (1,2,3,4) - put 4 at 160/176 to form a square Square formed in my own way
00:22:860 (1,5) - parallel I think I did with it what should be done
00:28:575 (2,3,4,5) - square Fixed!
01:00:956 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - imo, this is VERY random and many people will criticize this Mhm, if another modder criticize it I will definitiely change that.
01:08:575 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:14:051 (8,1) - continue that 01:12:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pattern I think it's good as it is.
01:35:241 (1,4) - stack? Fixed!
01:41:908 (3,4,5,6) - idk, I think the stack here doesn't fit Fixed!
01:55:241 (4,5,6,7) - imo, the 567 curve should be rotated by 45 degrees clockwise Fixed!
01:57:384 why there's no circle here? Added a circle!
01:57:622 (5,2) - idk, stack doesn't fit I think it's good as it is.
02:24:765 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
02:17:146 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
03:04:765 (1) - ctrl G on this
03:18:099 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) -
03:26:670 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
03:29:527 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - they overlap each other so hard Fixed!
03:45:718 (1) - I'm not sure this slider whether it's rankable I'm not sure either, but as I said, maybe I'll change all of these sliders, so it will be gone.

[Others]
You really should stablise NCs. Choose either 1 big-white or 2 white but not both Hope so everything with NC's is okay now.
Actually, the kiai time of this song has so much potential. Find some wub-wub map and see what I mean

Good luck !

L0rdCthulhu wrote:

Heyyy I'm Abrax (still squid guy at the moment) and I'm the one who chose your map! So why don't we get into this?

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
2. Aimod : ( ✓ )
3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
5. Hitsound : ( × ) I'm sure it isn't really a huge problem, but some sounds here and there for the chorus part might be nice. Sorry I can't provide some examples though; I can't hitsound Actually I have just started hitsounding this mapset so when I finish it, I'll update the mapset with them. Actually... I hitsounded it last night!
6. Video : ( ✓ )

Easy

1. This map was perfectly done! There was nothing wrong with it, although I didn't check (thoroughly) for DS. But playing through it I could see that you had a lot of slider and note aesthetics. Thank you very much for such motivating words! Generally, I was thinking of to remove this difficulty, because of the spreading (the diffrence between Easy's and Normal's is very low.), but now I'm sure I'll let it stay, so thank you!

Normal

1. 00:01:194 (3) - It seems like you are missing a note here. In the blank place between the 2nd slider and the 3rd slider? Hmm, that's my idea, for more variety and avoiding 1/2 sliders, so it will stay as it is.
2. 00:39:051 (2) - Have this slider face downwards like so? FIXED!:
   SPOILER

   
3. I didn't find anything else other than that, but some slider formations like the one above ^ could use a little touching up. But they aren't really a huge problem, and this diff was generally fun to play Thanks, I will look for that kind of slider formations, and do "a little touching up"

TITANIIIIIIIIIIIIUM

1. 00:09:289 (4,3) - Possible stack? Note 4 could go on top of the head of slider 3? It makes it a little more fun to play too. FIXED!
2. 00:09:527 (1,3) - Slider shapes are irregularly shaped. They don't have to move, maybe edit them like so? Will consider it
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:13:099 (1,1,1,1,2) - Irregular flow. The circle that appears when you hold a slider is right outside the slider head. It makes for back and forth motions which I don't recommend much. Notice in this image the golden ring does not cover the slider head, which indicates that the cursor has to follow it a little to get the whole slider down:
   SPOILER

   .
   Maybe you would want to see another way of placing the sliders so you would decide whether to change it or not? I don't understand what's the problem with (my understanding lvl I know), so could you explain me that again for example in-game? Cause maybe there's is a problem, and I should change it, but I just don't get it
   SPOILER

   and
4. 00:30:479 (1,2) - The follow up from the slider to the note is a little off here. Try to make it so that the whole pattern 00:30:479 (1,2,3) roughly looks like a sector of a circle like so: FIXED!
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:31:670 (4,5,6) - Following the pattern above; maybe have the slider curve up and spread the notes out like so. The cursor follows up with the slider and goes in a little loop before going down a catching the next slider. Sorry, I like it as it is so it will stay like that.
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:33:337 (4,5,6) - Could the slider be straight so it corroborates with the notes? I changed that, but I didn't make it straight. But thanks for pointing out the problem!
7. 00:39:527 (8) - The shortness of the slider means that the red anchor point is really hard to show. Maybe have it center the slider so it looks like a 135 degree elbow? FIXED!
8. 00:42:860 (4) - This blanket seems a little too late to me; the note is a little too far away on the timeline. It could be a S shaped slider though. Hmm, will consider it.
9. From 00:45:241 (4) to 01:00:956 (1) - Is this 20 second break OK? I mean, this is a specially named difficulty, so it seems as though the break is a little too long. I'm not too sure though, maybe you wanna nerf the difficulty down a little by inserting this long break? Mhm, I think increasing the star rating of this difficulty would be great, so I'll consider mapping this break.
10. 01:28:575 (3) - I can't help but notice the slider tick is not at the center of this slider. Fix ples? {&} FIXED!
11. 01:29:527 (1) - Which sound is this spinner trying to follow other than the clap at the end? Maybe you could continue the mapping into here too and end off with a clap? FIXED!
12. 01:53:813 (5) - This is a weird slider shape. Maybe change it? FIXED!
13. From 02:01:432 (4) to 02:17:146 (1) - Same thing as the break above ^^^
14. 02:23:575 (2,2) - Possible stack here. But you have to balance it out by moving 02:25:718 (3) to the middle of 2 and 4 too. FIXED!
15. 02:28:575 (1,1) - Why not you do the same with 01:12:384 (1) to 01:15:718 (3) here too? The spinners aren't following any sound except for the last clap sound. FIXED!
16. 02:33:337 (4) - Same thing as {&} FIXED!
17. 02:34:765 (3,4) - I'd rather this overlap for two curve sliders or one straight one and a curve one. Maybe this bow would work? I think it's FIXED now!
    SPOILER

    
18. 03:36:670 (6) - It breaks the rhythm the notes were trying to place. Looking at the front 03:33:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6), the beat should go according to that too. After all, I don't think the music would suggest such a slider too. FIXED!
19. 03:40:003 (4) - It's a weird slider shape here. Maybe try a S slider? I changed it in my own way, but thanks again for picking this problem out!
20. 03:45:718 (1) - Make this beat a repeat slider so it covers the I AM TI part. I think I did what you said, so FIXED!
21. 03:46:670 (1,1) - These two sliders end on the red tick, not the white one. Changed the whole part in my own way.

Overall

1. This seems like a potential DT mapset, and it was quite well done! Thanks!
2. The jumps in the titanium difficulty were fun to play, and I would see DT on it no probs! That's great
3. I really hope my mod helped you! If this is for rank, then good luck with rank!

Edit: (words)

Yoges wrote:

Hello! From my modding queue.

general

There's really not much wrong with this map. That's good then ;3
The only things i could spot were in the Titanium

Titanium

1. 01:14:289 (1,2) - Those should either be 3 repeat sliders with 3 repeats each or 2 repeat sliders with the 1 ending at 01:15:122 and the 2 begining at 01:15:241 The way you have it makes the flow a bit awkward Fixed
   
2. 01:44:527 (4,1,2,3,4) - Maybe delete the first 4 and move all the sliders back so they start from where the 4 was and add a note at 01:46:432 like this It would flow better imo Will consider it
   
3. 02:30:479 (1,2) - Same as 01:14:289 (1,2) Fixed

nya10 wrote:

Hello, I'm nya10 from ~ Lovely Modding Quest ~ (･｀ｪ´･)つ
Well so my first impression , the map itself is already good (the Normal and Easy are great (: ) , my mod is only just suggestion to you , feel free to deny it~

Titanium

General:
There's a bit spacing inconsistency that may disturb a player experience to play this map (although it's not much , I'd still recommend fixing it a bit would be helpful)
For example : 00:38:337 (1,2,3) - (1,2) is 1.1x DS and (2,3) is in 1.2x DS and 01:53:337 (3,4,5) -
(well actually I thought the DS in this diff (it is intended as a hard , isn't it, is a bit too much for a hard)) , feel free to consider it , I don't want to ruin your mapping style, it's just my thought that was coming up when I'm doing mod on this diff. Will consider it

00:38:813 (4,5,6,7,8) - Actually the positioning of circle 7 kind of making me curious, it feels a bit uncomfortable. I'd prefer to make it something like this though:

SPOILER

It's a suggestion though (: Will consider it

00:42:146 (1,2) - Put a circle between 1 and 2, make it a triplet imo (it doesn't need to be spaced, stacked one is good enough) FIXED!

03:31:432 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I'm thinking that the stream is a bit too rough, especially when the cursor is transitioning from circle 3 to 4 to 5 to 1 and to 2. Here is an example of what I mean:

SPOILER

(don't mind the spacing, I don't use it at all xD, you should adjust it on your own from here, it's just kinda a bad example afterall.... Just to give you some thought)

FIXED!

03:32:265 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Try to move circle 1 such that that circle coincide with the approach circle of circle 3, it plays prettier imo. Here is the pic :

SPOILER

FIXED!

Normal
01:32:384 (3) - Move the middle point of slider 3 to 96/276 , although no one would notice it, it plays a bit prettier imo FIXED!

01:44:527 (1) - Move the middle point (the red one) to 332/156 FIXED!

Easy
01:25:241 (3,1) - You would like to move the beginning point of slider 1 to 224/44 and endpoint to 372/132 to make a better blanket, or just do it by yourself~ FIXED!

03:23:813 (1,2) - Fix the blanket a bit here, especially the blanket from beginning point of slider 1 to slider 2 FIXED!

Note: I don't mod about hitsounding , so try to ask about hitsound mod to someone else

Anyway feel free to contact me via forum PM / ingame if there's something you don't understand (:
Goodluck with the map~ , I can't wait to see it ranked soon

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Yo from my modding Q
Sorry for late mod >.<
Sorry for a very late reply ;_;
AMBUREGUL EMESEYU BAHRELWAY BAHRELWAY forget it, only Indonesian will understand xD

Anyway, let's start

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment

[General]

1. maybe you can add some tags, maybe like the album : Nothing but the Beat
2. Cool BG bruh Thanks ^^

[Easy]

1. There's one DS problem, pls fix FIXED!
2. You used too much NC, try to NC every two big white ticks instead of every big white tick, it'll make the combo at least longer. Sorry, but nope
3. 00:08:575 (2) - There's no sound here 00:09:289 it don't really make sense to end the slider there, better just use 1/1 slider and end it here 00:09:051 just like what you did before. FIXED!
4. 00:11:432 (1,1,2) - Instead of using circle, maybe you can do it like this http://puu.sh/jtBLx/475dd53628.jpg it'll be easier to hit for new players. Will consider it
5. 01:05:718 (2) - same as third suggestion ^^
6. 01:08:099 (4) - Well this fit the rhythm nicely but I suggest to avoid placing reverse at big white tick since it would cause the big white tick to be less emphasized than the other notes, if there's big sound, you better can click it. Hmm, sorry, but nope.
7. 01:12:384 (1,1) - Maybe you can do it like this :3 http://puu.sh/jtBWk/0b6ba779fe.jpg or if you want to make 01:14:289 (1) - rounded http://puu.sh/jtBZJ/fc67325edb.jpg or http://puu.sh/jtC1t/81ff51a7c5.jpg it'll look neater :3 FIXED!
8. 02:18:575 (4,2) - Warning, nazi mod; stack better. FIXED!
9. 02:32:384 (1) - Add finish hitsound, I hear cymbal there. FIXED!
10. 02:39:051 (2) - ^ at the tail and whenever you think necessary, try to selfmod okay -w- FIXED!
11. That's all, solid Easy :3

[Normal]

1. Maybe you could try to make this harder since the diff star difference from Easy is just 0.1 since the diff star jump to Hard is very far (I know there will be Light Hard; oh yeah, maybe better name the light Hard "Advanced", but still the jump from Easy to Normal is too small imo)
2. 00:03:575 Try to add a note here to increase the density. FIXED!
3. 00:15:956 ^ and to support the vocal FIXED!
4. 00:33:337 (2) - Try to split this to make the diff harder http://puu.sh/jtCqO/104aa2011c.jpg or to support vocal http://puu.sh/jtCvu/86f117cae2.jpg FIXED!
5. 01:14:289 (1) - Nice slider bruh -w- Thanks ^^
6. Why it's suddenly got full of note at the chorus o-o maybe try to make the difficulty more balanced through the song. Will consider that
7. 01:58:099 (1) - split this to 1/1 slider followed by a circle. FIXED!
8. 02:30:479 (1) - This kind of slider might be unrankable tho

   Osu! Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds

   I don't really sure what this mean tho but better be safe, avoid this kind of slider. Furthermore, this is Normal, it might be confusing. FIXED!
9. 03:20:718 Add a note to support vocal? FIXED!
10. 03:22:860 (1) - split this to 1/1 slider followed by a circle. FIXED!
11. 03:48:575 (1) - Maybe try to make the spinner end consistent, you end this at white tick on Easy... FIXED!
12. I don't know why this only 1.69 star while it indeed looks a lot harder than Easy... Osu diff starring are weird .-. Yep, that's true ;_;

[Titanium]

1. Is this Hard? It can be labeled as Insane because of the pretty far jump imo. Maybe think of this as Insane and just name the upcoming Light Hard (Advanced) to be Hard. Will consider that
2. 00:41:075 Add a note here to follow vocal and to make a better polarity Sorry, I can't hear anything here, either the vocal nor beat.
3. 01:00:956 Try to use set of 1/2 sliders for this part to make the diff harder and for variation -w- Will consider that
4. 01:16:194 You've used too many same rhythm in a while :/ it's getting kinda boring Will consider it to make more variety
5. Good diff but I think you should use some more variation at the chorus -w-

Good luck~ ^^

bigjoe97 wrote:

Hello, random mod. Saw the thread and since I love this song so much I couldn't resist.

Easy:

00:08:575 (2) - end at 00:09:051 FIXED!
00:27:622 (2,1) - I would switch these two. The synth rhythm suggests a single slider, 1/2 gap, then the repeating slider. See 00:43:575. Thanks, but no, I prefer that way

Sorry, not much here. It looked good to me.

Normal:

00:01:194 - Circle here? Nope
00:08:813 - ^ Nope
00:10:718 - ^ FIXED!
01:09:289 - ^ follow vocals Nope
01:11:194 - ^ follow vocals FIXED!
01:15:956 (2) - remove Nope
01:36:432 - Circle here? Nope
03:35:956 - ^ Nope
03:41:670 - ^ Nope
03:42:622 - ^ FIXED!
03:45:479 - ^ Nope
03:48:575 (1) - End at 03:50:003 like the other two diffs. FIXED!

Titanium

I actually didn't find anything, this looked fantastic. Wow, thanks ^^

I'd also be thrilled to do a GD Extra for you, this song has so many possibilities.

RVMathew wrote:

Hi there. 6 months ago you posted in my queue for t/336458/start=60 for a NM request. Here I am 6 months later with a mod.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

General
1) Tags are inconsistent according to AI mod.

2) I recommend using audio leadin of around 1000-2000 ms to allow people to get ready for the beatmap.

Titanium

1) 00:04:765 (3,4) - shift 4 up a little bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4343017

2) 00:15:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - For this pattern, use ctrl+shift+d as a guide to make the pentagon pattern better.

3) 00:20:479 (4,5) - I was thinking of making this into a 1/2 slider to finish off this pattern: 00:19:051 (1,2,3,4,5). I am curious as to why you decided to not complete that pattern?

4) 00:41:908 There is a strong beat here, so I am curious as to why you mapped a 1/2 slider 00:41:432 (4) with a repeat, instead of breaking it up into a 1/2 slider and a note? I assume you did that because with the current setup you get better flow into the triplet.

5) I don't like the chorus of the song, but you mapped it really nicely. Kudos for that.

Otherwise, this beatmap looks really nice.

Normal
1) 00:19:051 (1,2,3,4,1) - Pentagon looks imperfect to me. Use ctrl+shift+d as a guide to make it look better. If you already used it then disregard this post.

2) 00:25:241 (2,3) - Perhaps make the sliders parallel.

3) 01:16:194 (1) - Maybe curve the slider like this for better flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4343412

Good difficulty.

Easy
1) 00:12:860 (1,2) - I am wondering if this pattern may be too difficult terms of rhythm since everywhere else except here you use 1/1 rhythm. However, with your pattern it sounds better.

2) 03:38:099 (2) - Blanket can be improved. This is a small thing though.


Final Thoughts
I do not like David Guetta and most people that make big room tracks and electro stuff like this; they make songs which are only worth listening for a few weeks at most then you forget about it. I prefer progressive trance/progressive house with bpm of 138+. However, I must say that you mapped this song very well (I liked the way you mapped the chorus in hard), and it looks really, really good.

Good luck and sorry for replying 6 months later.