1. Easy (1.82 stars, 93 notes)
2. Lissette's Hard (4.82 stars, 204 notes)
3. Normal (4.01 stars, 144 notes)

Krisom wrote:

Holas ! Mi primer mod como MAT, wow, que emoción =x yay~

General-
Evita usar el combocolor gris, ya que es medio confuso al jugar en Multi. Por esta vez lo dejare así D:

Easy-
En general excelente, las notas en 1/2 me confundieron bastante eso si, por lo general no las que estaban inmediatamente después de una nota, sino las que estaban a 1 y 1/2 de distancia. Lo dejo a tu conciencia.
00:09:293 (2) - Podrías agregar un whistle al final de este slider para ser contistente con tu patrón. Ok
00:20:512 (1) - ^^
00:33:195 (2) - Esperaba claps al principio y al final del slider en vez de whistles. Ahí ve tu que te acomoda mas =x Ok
00:35:147 (4) - Acá lo mismo, esperaba un clap =x :)
00:37:098 (1) - Creo que un finish le sentaría mucho mejor a este spinner. Ok
00:51:976 (1,2) - No los puedes mover a otro lado para que no los tape 00:49:781 (7) ? Movidos~
00:53:195 (3) - Agrega un whistle en el repeat y un clap al final. Ok
01:00:513 (1) - Quita el whistle de esta nota. Ok
01:23:927 (2) - Agrega un clap al final Ok
01:25:878 (4) - Quita el clap de acá, el finish basta. Listo~

Normal-
Buen trabajo y entretenido o/
00:04:415 (1) - Acá hay un whistle al principio. Pero en el resto de esta sección no oigo ninguno que lo acompañe (como lo hiciste en Easy). O agrega mas, o remueve este. Agrege más
00:11:244 (7) - ^ Lo mismo, pero al final. ^
00:19:049 (5) - Agregale whistle para que no suene tán vacío =x? Ok
00:22:952 (6) - ^? ^
00:26:366 (7) - ^? ^
00:37:342 (1) - Creo que un finish le sentaría mucho mejor a este spinner. Ok
Desde 00:51:976 (1) hasta 01:02:708 (7) - Acá si te fijas bien, invertíste el patrón de los claps. Arreglado~
01:11:732 (3) - Quítale el clap del principio :v Ok
01:25:634 (5) - Agregale claps a todo el slider, ya que sigue los tambores. Ok

Liss Hard-
Genial como siempre
00:03:195 (2) - Me costó mucho entender cuando tenía que clickear este, el spacing no me dejó claro que era de 1/2 a la primera :v

Star!

Krisom wrote:

Liss Hard-
Genial como siempre >////<
00:03:195 (2) - Me costó mucho entender cuando tenía que clickear este, el spacing no me dejó claro que era de 1/2 a la primera :v

Astom wrote:

Iaaa............. ando muy flojo pero weno <.<

[General]
-Thumbs.db en la carpeta SB, para evitar este archivo ir a "Herramientas -> Opciones de carpeta... -> Ver" seleccionar la opcion "No alojar en cache las vistas miniatura", luego preciona "aplicar" y luego "aceptar". Toma todas las imagenes en la carpeta SB y muevelas a otra parte, luego borra la carpeta SB y vuelve a crearla, vuelve a mover las imagenes a la carpeta SB. Hace fullsubmit cuando termines.
-BG.jpeg debe ser 800x600 o 1024x768
Listo~


Uhmm aparte de eso en Normal y easy hay algunas partes q rompen un poco el ritmo, quisa podrias mover algunos circles o poner algunos mas, pero igual esta bien como esta. Asi esta bien~

Star~

EEeee wrote:

all diffs look fine to me, just no Background in Normal and Lissette's Hard? is it a problem, or gonna add a different one?
Rdy~

anyways, star!

Shinxyn wrote:

@_@

Easy-
01:26:366 (1) - sounds a bit longer than it may need to be, but okay... Okay~
Fine..

Normal-
Sounds like its missing a lot of (custom) claps, and some parts have the hitsound matching the drums in the background, and then it doesn't... >.<
like for 00:26:366 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 7 uses whistle, then the drum pattern+custom claps shift a bit... it sounds a bit awkward compared to the pattern you were using the whole time Fixed~
00:19:049 (5) - add custom clap to third 2nd repeat? Ok~
00:22:952 (6) - ^---^
01:18:561 (1,2,3) - nazi spacing~ >_< (1-2 is farther than 2-3) xD Ok~
01:22:464 (1,2,3) - custom claps at the end of theses? Ok, Sounds better thnx!
Map plays fine and nice though

Lissette
Hmm, good~ <3~

Normal could sound better~ thats all o-o~

James2250 wrote:

You need a hitcircle overlay in folder (template skin should work)
You need a cursor trail in folder Rdy~

Easy:
AR + 1 Ok~
looks good :>

Normal:
I would have a spinner at the end like Easy as it sounds better to me, but up to you That's Fine

Lissette's Hard:
Looks nice Is Nice 8 )

*star*

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi hi cute!

Easy
Suggestion
00:36:122 (1) - move to prev white tick? >< sounds good imo :>
<3~

good~<3

• Make the first custom colour (Grey) slightly darker, please.

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:19:537 (x) - add a beat here; 00:22:464 (4) - remove one repetition.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  00:19:049 (5) - i should say, the last repetition threw me off. It's not a mistake anyway, just to let you know.
  00:58:317 (8) - i expected one more here, instead.
  Nothing else, except that some combos are a flow of 1/2 beats and maybe some of them can be removed to make it feel more "Normal", like in 00:24:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) and 00:55:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8).

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nothing to say

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Make the first custom colour (Grey) slightly darker, please.

Ok~

- Easy:

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:19:537 (x) - add a beat here; 00:22:464 (4) - remove one repetition.

Rdy~

- Normal:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  00:19:049 (5) - i should say, the last repetition threw me off. It's not a mistake anyway, just to let you know.
  00:58:317 (8) - i expected one more here, instead. Ok~
  Nothing else, except that some combos are a flow of 1/2 beats and maybe some of them can be removed to make it feel more "Normal", like in 00:24:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) and 00:55:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8).

^^"

- Lissette's Hard:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nothing to say

Hooray!

Nice job, again ^^

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]

Artist: Should be "cloudica", without the C capitalized. (You can see it here or here).
Ok~

I suggest to you to add the video, I've tryed it and it merges well with your SB Uh... no thnx ><
Here is the video

I'm doing a guest diff for this map, but I'll post it tomorrow
(I hope that you'll accept it )

KenezzEdward wrote:

I suggest to you to add the video, I've tryed it and it merges well with your SB Uh... no thnx >< Why? ç_ç

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Storyboard]
hitori, issho, kiri, kizutsuite iku, kono sora no shita, kute, machi, etc. have some excessive transparency to the left and right of the lettering. Could you crop those please? Ready~

[Easy]
00:16:610 (1) - Waaay too soon after a spinner for an easy. I'd map through the spinner. >< fixed~
00:22:464 (4) - Forget your custom clap? :> fixed~
00:36:122 (6) - ^ -^
00:40:025 (1) - Again, too soon after a spinner. Maybe cut the spinner at 00:38:561 - and add a note where the spinner ends currently? Ok~
01:08:805 (4,5) - Hrm, instead of a faster slider like this, maybe follow the vocals? So maybe like this: Ok~

01:26:366 (1) - I'd do a gradual reduction of volume on the spinner, though if you don't want to do that, at least move the last green timing section to the very end of the spinner so you don't have that sudden volume drop before it's done. Fixed~

[Normal]
Strange that you don't end with the same spinner from easy. Fixed~
Felt a little excessive on the 1/2's for a normal to me... otherwise it's okay. ^^

[Lisette's Hard]
Kinda wish you didn't follow the drums so much, but it's still nice~ is nice 8)

Mostly just worried about the notes after spinners on easy. Otherwise this map set is nice~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Hit300 and Hit300k are very similar, also you can barely see the 50 in hit50

[Easy]
There are several 1 grid off spacing issues in this diff that you may want to fix, i'll only point out the ones that stand out the most.
00:27:342 (1,2,3) - Spacing, also would be nice if you kept (3) identical to (1) or viceversa.
01:16:610 (3,4) - Spacing too close.
01:19:537 (2,3) - Spacing too far.

Fix all and i'll bubble

Sakura Hana wrote:

Sighs... guess i'll have to show each one to you...
[Easy]
00:08:317 (1,2) - Ninja Spacing Error.
00:17:098 (1,2) - ^
00:28:317 (2,3) - ^
00:33:195 (2,3) - ^
00:46:366 (2,3) - ^
01:06:366 (3,4) - ^
01:10:025 (5) - Oh look an awkward slider tick that i missed last time, either extend or shorten this slider, if it absolutely has to end there, then double the tick rate.
01:15:634 (2,3) - Ninja Spacing Error.
01:18:561 (1,2,3) - ^ Also (3)'s overlapping looks kind of ugly.

Why do you think i asked you to check your whole difficulty for these tiny spacing errors, for your next map i recommend you use 1.0x distance spacing on Easies to avoid such trouble.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Easy] & [Normal]
Have the max volume in the middle throughout these two difficulties.
It just seems so loud especially on [Normal] at 01:25:634 (5).


[Lissette's Hard]
01:09:293 (2,1) - This large jump doesn't really feel like a "Hard". Make the spacing closer.
Something like the picture below would be more fitting or how ever you want it. Just ^

Thnx All Fixed~

Larto wrote:

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