Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

Easy orion
only 2 Hitcircles? you can't be serious
Shulin's Normal
no issues
Hard
01:15:183 (5) - 2 grid left, 1 grid up xD no
01:26:771 (6) - how about silence the slider end? ok
01:27:672 (T) - unused timing section fixed
Vicho's Insane
1/4 spacing is very unforgiving @_@
slider tick rate = 1
00:59:346 (4) - lol, not very readable isn't it?

Good map! also nice skin :>
STAR!

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Vicho's Insane
1/4 spacing is very unforgiving @_@ lol
slider tick rate = 1 ok xd
00:59:346 (4) - lol, not very readable isn't it? it's fine

Lissette wrote:

Vicho's Insane
00:41:449 - coloca la timing section medio beat antes :3 listo ;3
01:26:835 (1) - empiezalo en el tick rojo >< ok :3

Lissette wrote:

Vicho's Insane
00:41:449 - coloca la timing section medio beat antes :3
01:26:835 (1) - empiezalo en el tick rojo ><

Hard
01:21:363 - new combo aqui, para que sea mas facil de leer :> ok

Shulin's Normal
01:26:707 - why x0.5? fixed
01:27:672 - useless timing section >< fixed

Easy orion
00:49:690 (1) - i dont like how this slider sounds, maybe shorten one beat

SB y skin <333333

Star!!

EDIT: me olvide la star

• Some thoughts about the comboburts: it's really small (but maybe that's intentional) and it has a black area (and i don't think that is intended to be seen). Can you have a look at that? Ask me if you need help for it.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Cute and Easy :3
  (LOL@0 stars)

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nice and well balanced :3

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Funny and cool patterns :3

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  I should say, some patterns at the beginning may seem confusing at first sight. But hey it's an Insane

Card N'Force wrote:

The part in the middle is pure genius xD

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

You should have told me this was fully storyboarded ;~;
The part in the middle is pure genius xD

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Some thoughts about the comboburts: it's really small (but maybe that's intentional) and it has a black area (and i don't think that is intended to be seen). Can you have a look at that? Ask me if you need help for it. Yea I need one x3

- Easy orion:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Cute and Easy :3
  (LOL@0 stars)

- Normal:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nice and well balanced :3

- Hard:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Funny and cool patterns :3

- Vicho's Insane:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  I should say, some patterns at the beginning may seem confusing at first sight. But hey it's an Insane

Nothing wrong, i hope the SB didn't distract me too much xD
I really like this, i can see the effort and the passion you put in this work. That's how mapping should be most of the times.
Get my star and KD star. thx x3

Sallad4ever wrote:

Ohai Astom

Card N'Force wrote:

The part in the middle is pure genius xD

Agreed (^0^)b

[General]
- Nice skin, simple yet good
- Just like CnF said the combo burst is too little, can you find any bigger one ?

[Easy orion]
0.15 star rating
00:41:449 (1) - Finish at the start
00:49:690 (1) - most of the notes before this are following the lyric, so if you're following the lyric this slider should be shorten by 1/1 beat
01:25:226 (1) - I really think it's better to end this spinner on 01:26:771 to match the "YAY" (oh hey the spinner-osu is also a YAY)

[Shulin's Normal]
00:52:780 (2) - this slider should end on the long white tick where the long "NA~" enter, so remove 1 repeat (or even all of the repeats and add a long slider for the NA~) and fill the empty space with circles or slider no
01:22:651 (1) - remove the clap at the end, kinda fell strange for me but... sounds good to me x3
00:32:179 (3) - I'm sure someone will say it later but I'll take the initiative, move the slider end point down 2 no xDgrids
Combo mod

SPOILER

Most of the combo used here are 1 combo set per 2 stanza ( ex: 00:00:248 (1,2,1,2) ) so following that pattern :
00:05:913 (1) - remove NC then add NC on 00:06:428 (7) ok
00:06:943 (1) - remove NC ok
00:08:488 (5) - and this should be NC ok
00:43:509 (4) - NC
00:47:629 (4) - ^
00:54:840 (3) - ^
00:55:870 (5) - ^
00:59:990 (4) - ^
01:08:230 (3) - ^ ok

[Astom's Hard]
00:17:758 (4,5) - hmm...a little off, imo it's sounds better if you swap them ok
00:20:333 (4) - following the lyric, remove this? no
00:28:445 (5,1) - the stack messed up xD Yea xd nothing to do xD
01:26:771 (6) - NC ? also add finish at the start not necesary
00:43:252 (1) - remove NC then add NC on 00:43:510 (9) no

[Vicho's Insane]
Decrease HP drain by 1 tick
00:04:175 (7) - following the lyric shouldn't this be on the white tick?
01:26:835 (1) - remove the finish

That's all I can found
Good skin I like'em, Good luck *sigh* why does the anime have to end on 13th episode ;_;
I can't stop smiling when playing this
~Star

Lesjuh wrote:

Insane
00:33:209 (1) - Use distance spacing 2 and move it further from the previous beat.
00:45:569 (1) - Remove this spinner or end it @ 00:47:629
01:03:595 (6,7) - One grid to the right~

Hard
Slider tick rate 1 xD no, sounds awfull >-<
00:06:428 - Place a beat here in the center of the screen and then star the spinner. mmm fixed in another way
00:45:312 - Place a beat here mm ok

Easy
This difficulty has only 2 circles and I don't think thats a good thing to do. This also causes some sliders not to go with the music at all. Fix this! Place more circles!
Also why does this difficulty have a different background when the complete map is storyboarded?

That's all!

Dusty wrote:

(no kudosu please)

If hit50, hit100, and hit300 could be different colors like scorebar-kidanger and scorebar-kidanger2 (i.e. yellow, orange, red) that'd be great.

great mapset, have a *

yangzd88 wrote:

Great SB

[Easy orion]
LOL

[Normal]
Nice

[Hard]
00:20:333 (4) - Delete this circle I like my circle :3
01:15:183 (5) - 2 grids up,2 grids left no =(

Don't feed me kudosu = =||

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Comboburst for you!

[attachment=0:e5139]comboburst.png[/attachment:e5139]

I have a request for the BATs: please don't be picky about the resolution of the comboburst (650*670), i had to do that because of the arm of the girl, i can't cut it out (i mean, it would look REALLY bad) and i can't find other good imaes like this one.

I tried it in-game and it looks great.

If you find a better one, feel free to tell me and i'll make it again.

Leorda wrote:

BIVUENDO!

[General]
1) The BPM is diffrent on each diff! Orioncomet's BPM is 116,50. But why other is 233? Please make it same, or else, it's unrankable It's rankeable because 116,5 x 2 = 233
2) Aha, I found black space in comboburst it's fixed already in a previus mod
3) The hitcircleoverlay are very hard to read if the bg turn to black is part of the song :3

[Easy onion]
Meh. boring!!!!!

[Shulin's Normal]
00:32:179 (3,4) - Spacing error
00:56:127 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?
01:12:608 (B) - ^

[Hard]
Evil jumps, argh

[Vicho's Insane]
Fine~ But you are insane boy ever

Let's just say, a mapper perfection lol x3
STAR

onigiri-lol wrote:

Estrellado : )

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

[Easy orion]
Why is this map the only one with 177 BPM? All the others have 233. Fix this. well, It's 116.5 not 177 and 116.5 x 2 = 233
Seems fine...But also boring...Add some notes...Just sliders is really boring...Mixing it up makes it fun!
It's EASY isn't it =] If I add many many single hitnote that shouldn't suppose to be an Easy diff anymore

wmfchris wrote:

Sorry for late modding

[general] ...hard is much much harder than normal ._. U have 2 very very easy diff for play so

[Insane] Nice and soooooo extreme : >

[hard]
1:05:398 (2) suggestion: since there's only three slider... put this horizontally? direction comes from 01:05:140 (1)
1:07:200 (3) up 1 grid? no ._.
1:19:818 (1) same as 1:05:398 same from before, direction comes from [color=#FF0000]01:20:591 (1)
1:25:999 (3,4,5,6) maybe clap for the beginning of (3,4,5) and finish for (6)...? no :<

[normal] nice

star

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey.

-Delete the osb file and fully submit. ._.!!! if u don't know .osb save the code of the SB and if u didn't notice the song have it so... xD no

[Easy orion]
Why is this map the only one with 177 BPM? All the others have 233. Fix this.
Seems fine...But also boring...Add some notes...Just sliders is really boring...Mixing it up makes it fun!

[Shulin's Normal]
Seems fine.

[Hard]
Seems fine.

[Vicho's Insane]
Seems fine.

~STAR

Zekira wrote:

So I never was able to make my WAN WAN Size of this... oh well, whatever.

Mafiamaster wrote:

spinner-background filesize is larger than 1MB. Lower to less than 1MB please.

Everything else looks good!

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Hard]

00:29:089 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Fix this pattern, the stack in-game is horrible.

Fix and I'll rank!

EDIT: Ranked~

PSPDS Eddie wrote:

Insane
00:04:175 (7) -
Is this ok ?

PSPDS Eddie wrote:

Insane
00:04:175 (7) -
Is this ok ?

Beuchi-chan wrote:

PSPDS Eddie wrote:

Insane
00:04:175 (7) -
Is this ok ?

Nope. It should be 1/4 before.

Also... why does orion's Easy have another background? It's going to be covered by the storyboard anyways...

Lesjuh wrote:

Easy
This difficulty has only 2 circles and I don't think thats a good thing to do. This also causes some sliders not to go with the music at all. Fix this! Place more circles!
Also why does this difficulty have a different background when the complete map is storyboarded?

peppy wrote:

hard:
00:41:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is *totally* inappropriate. Now I have to program aimod to detect this and call it insane/expert.

peppy wrote:

Oh that's a nice way to justify yourself. "Someone else did worse so even though mine is wrong it's not AS wrong".

I'm still considering unranking this.