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DJ Sharpnel - Future Dominators [OsuMania]

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Bad Apple
307 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Bad Apple
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 3. August 2015 at 00:47:25

Artist: DJ Sharpnel
Title: Future Dominators
BPM: 210,32
Filesize: 8966kb
Play Time: 05:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dead End - 4Key (5,35 stars, 4211 notes)
Download: DJ Sharpnel - Future Dominators
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hard 4k Marathon with Bursts, Jumpstreams and Trills.
For Rank! (Hopefully :3/)

- Mod-Count -
- 6 Mods -

- Special Thanks to -
- Feerum (Testplay)
- IamBaum (Testplay)
- Phil (Testplay and some VERY constructive Feedback)
- Shirou (Mod & Star)
- [Shana Lesus] (very awesome mod)
- AlisceaSparku (Mod & Star)
- Satoshi Kazuki (Mod)
- Crono (Mod & Feedback)
- Sirade (Mod)
- adrien062 (Testplay)
Last edited by Bad Apple , edited 6 times in total.
-[C R A Z Y]-
107 posts
Joined January 2015
-[C R A Z Y]-
OMG great map, congratulations *-*/
Bad Apple
307 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Bad Apple

-[C R A Z Y]- wrote:

OMG great map, congratulations *-*/
Omg, thank you so much for the positive feedback and the favorite! >w<
stuff like that keeps me motivated!
Shirou
280 posts
Joined January 2014
Shirou


Hi Modding from Voltexer's modding queue~

Chicken is so busy now. So I modded your map vicariously chicken :)

Hello Bad Apple~!

Marathon map modding first try...
I can also a lot wrong :d

|1|2|3|4|

Dead End
01:31:508 (91508|2) - add note (Pitch problem)
02:19:435 (139435|1) - add note (Pitch problem)
02:57:092 (177092|2) - ^
03:06:221 (186221|1) - ^ --- Contents can be a unrank elements.
03:20:627 - add two note any col (Missed note)
03:23:337 (203337|2) - add note (Pitch problem)
03:24:479 (204479|3) - ^
03:40:454 - add note 1 or 2 col (Pitch problem)
04:55:768 (295768|2) - add note (Pitch problem)
05:16:308 (316308|0) - ^

Good Luck!

And shoot star~!
Bad Apple
307 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Bad Apple

Shirou wrote:



Hi Modding from Voltexer's modding queue~

Chicken is so busy now. So I modded your map vicariously chicken :)

Hello Bad Apple~!

Marathon map modding first try...
I can also a lot wrong :d

|1|2|3|4|

Dead End
01:31:508 (91508|2) - add note (Pitch problem) ☑
02:19:435 (139435|1) - add note (Pitch problem) ☑
02:57:092 (177092|2) - ^ ☑
03:06:221 (186221|1) - ^ --- Contents can be a unrank elements.
03:20:627 - add two note any col (Missed note) ☑
03:23:337 (203337|2) - add note (Pitch problem) ☑
03:24:479 (204479|3) - ^ ☒ Hmmm, I don't think it's necessary to put an extra note here D:
03:40:454 - add note 1 or 2 col (Pitch problem) ☑
04:55:768 (295768|2) - add note (Pitch problem) ☑
05:16:308 (316308|0) - ^☑

Good Luck!

And shoot star~!
Thanks alot for the fast and good mod! And thank you very much for your star aswell >w</
If you need something modded, be sure to tell me :3
Greets
Apple
Deep Sea
1,947 posts
Joined June 2013
Deep Sea
req from pm
m4m

[Dead Dead Dead]

00:07:493 (7493|1) - move to 4
00:07:564 (7564|3) - move to 1
00:15:481 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3351431
00:16:622 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3351432
00:17:834 (17834|1) - move to 4
00:22:399 (22399|2) - move to 1
00:25:894 (25894|1) - move to 3
00:27:035 (27035|2) - move to 2
00:42:440 (42440|0) - move to 3
01:29:796 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352188
01:41:065 - add note to 2
02:00:749 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352197
02:15:512 (135512|3) - move to 2
02:54:809 (174809|3,174809|0,174881|1,174952|3,175023|2,175095|0,175166|1,175237|3,175309|2,175380|0,175451|1,175523|3,175594|2,175665|0,175737|1,175808|3,175879|2,175951|0,175986|1,176022|2,176058|3,176093|0,176129|1,176165|2,176200|3,176236|0,176272|1,176307|2,176343|3,176379|0,176414|1,176450|2,176485|3,176521|0,176557|1,176592|2,176628|3,176664|0,176699|1,176735|2,176771|3,176806|0,176842|1,176878|2,176913|3,176949|0,176985|1,177020|2,177056|3,177092|2,177092|1,177092|0) - ctrl + h
03:15:778 (195778|2) - end here 03:16:491 -
03:24:764 - 03:33:322 - make this moment more diverse
04:51:845 (291845|0) - move to 2
04:52:987 (292987|3) - move to 3
04:56:909 (296909|0,296945|1,296980|2,297016|3,297052|0,297087|1,297123|3,297159|2,297194|0,297230|1,297266|2,297301|3,297337|0,297373|1,297408|3,297444|2,297480|0,297515|1,297551|2,297587|3,297622|0,297658|1,297694|3,297729|2) - no no no, use this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352263
05:08:962 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352271
05:15:167 - same and on 04:56:909

good luck, nice map ~ :oops:
AlisceaSparku
704 posts
Joined August 2013
AlisceaSparku
Hi~!
Sorry can't mod this map well. Didn't know this was above 4 stars T_T

Anyway here's my mod
|1|2|3|4|

mod ;D
00:17:763 - http://puu.sh/iQ7Hx/cb7f7d1fdf.jpg for pattern with 00:18:904
if you're doing that you should do these too
00:18:191 (18191|1) - mvoe to 3
00:18:762 (18762|3) - move to 1
00:18:619 (18619|1) - move to 4
00:18:476 (18476|2) - move to 2 ( recommended )
or
00:18:476 (18476|0) - move to 2
00:18:048 (18048|3) - move to 3
00:18:191 (18191|2,18191|0) - move these to the right by one column
00:18:334 (18334|3,18476|2) - move these to the left by one column
trust me, everything i listed is for pattern :d and hand balance

I hope these helps! :)
Good luck with map!! free star :D
Satoshi Kazuki
525 posts
Joined July 2014
Satoshi Kazuki
M4M

sorry if my mod wasnt very useful...idk what pattern at map above 4 star

Dead End
00:09:633 - add note? drum sound
00:56:347 (56347|3) - ghost note i think...cause the drum stop at 00:56:276 -
00:56:918 (56918|0) - ^
00:57:488 (57488|2) - ^
00:58:059 (58059|3) - ^
00:58:629 (58629|2) - ^
00:59:200 (59200|0) - ^
etc...

01:52:119 (112119|1) - ghost
01:52:405 (112405|1) - ^
01:52:975 (112975|2) - ^
01:53:260 (113260|2) - ^
01:53:546 (113546|3) - ^


02:39:048 - add note? same here - 02:39:119 -
02:40:189 - ^ - 02:40:260 -
etc...

03:19:914 (199914|3,199914|0,200057|2,200057|1,200199|3,200199|0,200342|2,200342|1) - what are follow?? voice?? if voice to me it's doest suitable

03:24:479 - make fourth? the sound was loud
03:42:736 - triple?

03:48:727 (228727|2,228870|0) - ctrl + G?

03:49:583 - to - 03:51:865 - i found many ghost note...try check with 25%
04:03:277 - to - 04:21:534 - ^

Good Luck :D
Crono
227 posts
Joined April 2014
Crono
Hi there~ o/

From my queue~~

Before I begin, good job with this map. You could add alot more notes if you wanted to, not that it really needs it, it's really good for decent players with low endurance. rip dead hands is dead

0 l 1 l 2 l 3

DEAD

00:17:906 (17906|2) - move to 3. Column three feels empty here, it flows better too.
00:22:470 (22470|1) - move to 0. ^
01:54:758 move 01:54:901 (114901|0) - to here. it flows better and seems weird to not have a note here with this sudden change to vocal focus.
02:27:708 try moving 02:27:708 (147708|1) - to 3 and 02:27:851 (147851|3) - to 1

Sorry for the short mod, that's about all I could find.

Also I recommend asking ShikiNoHollow if he would like to m4m for his map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/325299

GO GO RANK!!! xD
Rilene
2,105 posts
Joined April 2014
Rilene
OH GOD THIS SONG 10/10

From My Mod Queue

Column 1/2/3/4

Ded End

Missing Notes
00:02:287
00:02:429
00:03:428
00:03:570
00:04:569
00:04:712
00:05:710
00:06:851
00:06:994

And so on, I'm sure you can make this diff more intense my adding notes on these time, and I'm sure that you know where to put.

- 00:09:633 - Adding 2 notes on the left might probably make it more fun.
- 00:19:475 - Missing note, did you miss this on purpose? And I recommend to add one note on column 2.
- 00:28:604 - Add a note on column 3.
- 00:46:862 - Another note needs a place to stay, add a note here, on column 2.
- 00:55:991 - Missing note, add on column 3.
- 01:05:119 - Missing note, add on column 3, same again.
- 01:31:508 (91508|2) - Remove? It is quite painful when dealing 1/4 jacks while dealing with 1/8 burst at the same time, especially on high BPMs.
- 02:38:834 - to - 02:52:527 - One note is already enough for these piano, if these are 2 note at the same time, then 02:53:668 (173668|2,173668|3) - or 02:54:809 (174809|0,174809|3) - should actually be 3 at the time.
- 02:57:092 (177092|2) - I guess 2 note is already enough.
03:06:506 (186506|1,186506|0,186649|3,186649|2,186934|3,186934|2,187077|1,187077|0,187362|0,187362|3,187647|0,187647|1,187932|2,187932|1,188218|2,188218|3) - 2 note at the time is quite strange... I suggest to use only 1 note only for vocal, becareful not to remove the instruments note.

Good luck~

Oh... Do you need a 7K GD? This is a pretty intense song so making a 7K diff would be fun.
Bad Apple
307 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Bad Apple

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

req from pm
m4m

[Dead Dead Dead]

00:07:493 (7493|1) - move to 4
00:07:564 (7564|3) - move to 1
00:15:481 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3351431
00:16:622 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3351432
00:17:834 (17834|1) - move to 4
00:22:399 (22399|2) - move to 1
00:25:894 (25894|1) - move to 3
00:27:035 (27035|2) - move to 2
00:42:440 (42440|0) - move to 3
01:29:796 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352188
01:41:065 - add note to 2
02:00:749 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352197
02:15:512 (135512|3) - move to 2
02:54:809 (174809|3,174809|0,174881|1,174952|3,175023|2,175095|0,175166|1,175237|3,175309|2,175380|0,175451|1,175523|3,175594|2,175665|0,175737|1,175808|3,175879|2,175951|0,175986|1,176022|2,176058|3,176093|0,176129|1,176165|2,176200|3,176236|0,176272|1,176307|2,176343|3,176379|0,176414|1,176450|2,176485|3,176521|0,176557|1,176592|2,176628|3,176664|0,176699|1,176735|2,176771|3,176806|0,176842|1,176878|2,176913|3,176949|0,176985|1,177020|2,177056|3,177092|2,177092|1,177092|0) - ctrl + h
03:15:778 (195778|2) - end here 03:16:491 -
03:24:764 - 03:33:322 - make this moment more diverse
04:51:845 (291845|0) - move to 2
04:52:987 (292987|3) - move to 3
04:56:909 (296909|0,296945|1,296980|2,297016|3,297052|0,297087|1,297123|3,297159|2,297194|0,297230|1,297266|2,297301|3,297337|0,297373|1,297408|3,297444|2,297480|0,297515|1,297551|2,297587|3,297622|0,297658|1,297694|3,297729|2) - no no no, use this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352263
05:08:962 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352271
05:15:167 - same and on 04:56:909

good luck, nice map ~ :oops:
Hey there, Shana! >w<
First of all, thanks alot for your mod again. It reaaally helped improve the map, I'm so glad you took your time to mod it.
I applied everything you mentioned. :3
Your M4M on your map is on the way (a little busy these days)
Thanks yet again!
Greetings :3/
Apple
Bad Apple
307 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Bad Apple

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hi~!
Sorry can't mod this map well. Didn't know this was above 4 stars T_T

Anyway here's my mod
|1|2|3|4|

mod ;D
00:17:763 - http://puu.sh/iQ7Hx/cb7f7d1fdf.jpg for pattern with 00:18:904
if you're doing that you should do these too
00:18:191 (18191|1) - mvoe to 3
00:18:762 (18762|3) - move to 1
00:18:619 (18619|1) - move to 4
00:18:476 (18476|2) - move to 2 ( recommended )
or
00:18:476 (18476|0) - move to 2
00:18:048 (18048|3) - move to 3
00:18:191 (18191|2,18191|0) - move these to the right by one column
00:18:334 (18334|3,18476|2) - move these to the left by one column - Applied almost everything, Shana changed a few notes in her mod, so I couldn't change those :3
trust me, everything i listed is for pattern :d and hand balance

I hope these helps! :)
Good luck with map!! free star :D
Hey there Aliscea! :3
Thanks for modding it nonetheless! :)
I really appreciate it.
As mentioned, I didn't apply Shanas Mod in time, so I couldn't change a few notes, since they were already moved.
Thanks so much for the star aswell, I hope this map has a chance to get ranked some day '^'
Apple
Bad Apple
307 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Bad Apple

Crono wrote:

Hi there~ o/

From my queue~~

Before I begin, good job with this map. You could add alot more notes if you wanted to, not that it really needs it, it's really good for decent players with low endurance. rip dead hands is dead [color=#FF0000]- Alot of Love for the positive feedback :3 I greatly appreciate it.[/color]

0 l 1 l 2 l 3

DEAD

00:17:906 (17906|2) - move to 3. Column three feels empty here, it flows better too. - Done!
00:22:470 (22470|1) - move to 0. ^ - Moved in previous mod
01:54:758 move 01:54:901 (114901|0) - to here. it flows better and seems weird to not have a note here with this sudden change to vocal focus.
02:27:708 try moving 02:27:708 (147708|1) - to 3 and 02:27:851 (147851|3) - to 1 - Done!


Sorry for the short mod, that's about all I could find.

Also I recommend asking ShikiNoHollow if he would like to m4m for his map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/325299 - I absolutely love Madoka Magica, so I'll be more than just sure to ask him for that. Thanks for the hint ;3/

GO GO RANK!!! xD
Haha, first of all, thanks for the quick & good mod!
I'll try my best to rank this, if only more people would find this map xD ( old Future Dominators is so well known, pls people, notice my map ;w; )
I'll ask ShikiNoHollow as soon as I can, I'll tell him "Crono sent me here" >:)
Again, thanks for your time! :3
Greets
Apple
Bad Apple
307 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Bad Apple

Sirade wrote:

OH GOD THIS SONG 10/10

From My Mod Queue

Column 1/2/3/4

Ded End

Missing Notes
00:02:287
00:02:429
00:03:428
00:03:570
00:04:569
00:04:712
00:05:710
00:06:851
00:06:994

And so on, I'm sure you can make this diff more intense my adding notes on these time, and I'm sure that you know where to put. - I agree, I decided to not map some sounds here.. I'll keep your recommendation in mind, maybe I'll add those parts later on. For now, I'll keep it a little bit simple for the beginning of the song, so you don't get thrown right into 4* Jumps xD

- 00:09:633 - Adding 2 notes on the left might probably make it more fun. - Done!
- 00:19:475 - Missing note, did you miss this on purpose? And I recommend to add one note on column 2. Done!
- 00:28:604 - Add a note on column 3. Done!
- 00:46:862 - Another note needs a place to stay, add a note here, on column 2. Done!
- 00:55:991 - Missing note, add on column 3. Done!
- 01:05:119 - Missing note, add on column 3, same again. Done! (Short explanation; I wasn't sure whether its 8 notes or 9 notes, so I only used 8 notes until someone says that I miss one... Which you did now xD (applies to all those parts ^ ))
- 01:31:508 (91508|2) - Remove? It is quite painful when dealing 1/4 jacks while dealing with 1/8 burst at the same time, especially on high BPMs. Agreed, done!
- 02:38:834 - to - 02:52:527 - One note is already enough for these piano, if these are 2 note at the same time, then 02:53:668 (173668|2,173668|3) - or 02:54:809 (174809|0,174809|3) - should actually be 3 at the time. - I decided to go with 2 notes here and add another note to those 2 positions you pointed out, then changed the streams to have better balance :3
- 02:57:092 (177092|2) - I guess 2 note is already enough. - Done!
03:06:506 (186506|1,186506|0,186649|3,186649|2,186934|3,186934|2,187077|1,187077|0,187362|0,187362|3,187647|0,187647|1,187932|2,187932|1,188218|2,188218|3) - 2 note at the time is quite strange... I suggest to use only 1 note only for vocal, becareful not to remove the instruments note. - Agreed, applied it!

Good luck~

Oh... Do you need a 7K GD? This is a pretty intense song so making a 7K diff would be fun.
Ohai there! >u</
I've thought about a 7k Diff already.. If I decide to add a GD for 7k, I'll be sure to let you know! :3
Thanks for the mod aswell, especially the piano part and the parts with the missing notes have improved alot now :)
If you need something modded (4k pls ;w;) be sure to let me know!
Greetings,
Apple
Bad Apple
307 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Bad Apple

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

M4M

sorry if my mod wasnt very useful...idk what pattern at map above 4 star

Dead End
00:09:633 - add note? drum sound
00:56:347 (56347|3) - ghost note i think...cause the drum stop at 00:56:276 -
00:56:918 (56918|0) - ^
00:57:488 (57488|2) - ^
00:58:059 (58059|3) - ^
00:58:629 (58629|2) - ^
00:59:200 (59200|0) - ^
etc...

01:52:119 (112119|1) - ghost
01:52:405 (112405|1) - ^
01:52:975 (112975|2) - ^
01:53:260 (113260|2) - ^
01:53:546 (113546|3) - ^ - I agree, those notes aren't necessarily mapped 100% accurate to the song. However, I think removing those would decrease the playability and fun of the map drastically, so I will keep them for now.


02:39:048 - add note? same here - 02:39:119 -
02:40:189 - ^ - 02:40:260 -
etc... - I thought of adding those, but when adding them, it doesn't seem quite right when playing them. I will keep that in mind tho.

03:19:914 (199914|3,199914|0,200057|2,200057|1,200199|3,200199|0,200342|2,200342|1) - what are follow?? voice?? if voice to me it's doest suitable - I changed them with the last mod, should be better now!

03:24:479 - make fourth? the sound was loud - That would create a 210bpm 1/8 jack, noone (except for top 100) could play that xD
03:42:736 - triple?


03:48:727 (228727|2,228870|0) - ctrl + G? - Hm, no, I think I'll keep it as it is

03:49:583 - to - 03:51:865 - i found many ghost note...try check with 25%
04:03:277 - to - 04:21:534 - ^ - Same as previously mentioned, keeping those for playability

Good Luck :D
Hey there! >w</
Thanks for your mod! Unfortunately, there wasn't alot changed, but that's not a problem, every single mod and every change helps!
I will try to mod your map in the next day or two.
Thanks again,
Greets
Apple
Rilene
2,105 posts
Joined April 2014
Rilene

- Bad Apple - wrote:

Ohai there! >u</
I've thought about a 7k Diff already.. If I decide to add a GD for 7k, I'll be sure to let you know! :3
Thanks for the mod aswell, especially the piano part and the parts with the missing notes have improved alot now :)
If you need something modded (4k pls ;w;) be sure to let me know!
Greetings,
Apple
Ok.
Be sure to notify me for a 7K GD. :3

Hope you can rank this map soon. c;
Steins
308 posts
Joined December 2013
Steins
Marathon desu
i used playback rate 25% for mods this. Btw it's possible after my mods your maps can be overmapped, so don't apply all just saying

00:03:570 (3570|1) - can add note
00:04:712 (4712|2) - can add note
00:05:781 (5781|3) - here try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3363811
00:06:994 (6994|1) - can add note here
00:08:135 (8135|1) - add note
00:11:558 (11558|3) - add note
00:12:699 (12699|3) - add note
00:13:840 (13840|0) - add note
00:16:123 (16123|0) - add note
00:17:264 (17264|0) - add note
00:18:405 (18405|1) - add note
00:20:687 (20687|3) - add note
00:21:686 (21686|1) - 00:21:828 (21828|2) - add note
00:22:827 (22827|1) - 00:22:969 (22969|2) - add note
00:23:968 (23968|3) - add note
00:25:109 (25109|0) - 00:25:252 (25252|3) - add note
00:26:250 (26250|1) - 00:26:393 (26393|2) - add note
00:27:534 (27534|1) - add note
00:29:317 (29317|1) - delete 00:29:388 (29388|1) - add note
00:29:887 (29887|0) - delete 00:29:745 (29745|3) - move at 0 00:29:887 (29887|1) - move at 3 00:29:816 (29816|1) - add note
00:30:315 (30315|0) - move at 3 00:30:458 (30458|3) - delete 00:30:387 (30387|2) - add note 00:30:458 (30458|2) - move at 0
00:30:886 (30886|1) - add note
00:31:456 (31456|3,31456|2,31599|0,31599|1,31742|0,31742|3,31884|1,31884|2) - this part like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3363897
00:32:027 (32027|2) - add note
00:32:455 (32455|2) - move here 00:32:384 (32384|2) -
00:32:740 (32740|1) - move at 00:32:669 (32669|1) -
00:33:168 (33168|2) - add note
Between 00:33:453 (33453|0,33453|3,33596|2,33596|1,33739|3,33739|2,33881|1,33881|0,34024|3,34024|0,34167|2,34167|1,34309|1,34309|0,34452|2,34452|3) - and 00:34:595 (34595|2,34595|3,34737|1,34737|0,34880|0,34880|3,35022|1,35022|2,35165|1,35165|0,35308|2,35308|3,35450|0,35450|3,35593|1,35593|2) - and 00:35:450 (35450|3,35450|0,35593|2,35593|1,35736|3,35736|2,35878|0,35878|1,36021|3,36021|0,36164|1,36164|2,36306|0,36306|1,36449|3,36449|2,36592|2,36592|1,36734|3,36734|0,36734|1) - use playback rate, and move/delete/add note ~ like i show you before. It's better for the follow ~
00:37:376 (37376|3) - add note
00:37:661 (37661|1) - add note
00:37:733 (37733|1) - delete
00:38:517 (38517|0) - add note
00:38:802 (38802|3) - 00:38:945 (38945|1) - add note
00:39:658 (39658|0) - 00:39:801 (39801|3) - add note
00:39:944 (39944|1) - add note
00:40:229 (40229|1) - add note
same choose for the rest use 25% and follow the rythm
00:56:204 (56204|1) - delete
00:57:346 (57346|2) - 00:57:488 (57488|2) - delete 00:57:417 (57417|3) - move at 2 (and you can add 1 note too)
00:57:631 (57631|3) - delete
At this part your patterns are good but listen with 25% ~
01:19:811 (79811|1,79811|2,79954|1,79954|2,80097|3,80097|0,80239|2,80311|3,80382|2,80382|0) - this part try like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3363981
01:29:368 (89368|0,89368|2) - delete one note
01:31:544 (91544|1,91579|2,91615|3,91650|0,91686|1,91722|2,91757|3,91793|0,91829|1,91864|2,91900|3,91936|0,91971|1,92007|2,92043|3,92078|0,92114|1,92150|2,92185|3,92221|0,92257|1,92292|2,92328|3,92364|0,92399|1,92435|2,92471|3,92506|0,92542|1,92578|2,92613|3) - try stairs 1/6
01:50:907 (110907|3,110943|2,110978|0,111014|1,111049|3,111085|2,111121|0,111156|1,111192|3,111228|2,111263|0,111299|1,111335|3,111370|2,111406|0,111442|1,111477|3,111513|2,111549|0,111584|1,111620|3,111656|2,111691|0,111727|1,111763|2,111763|3,111834|1,111834|0,111905|2,111905|3,111977|0,111977|1) - also 1/6 ?
01:58:895 (118895|3) - 01:59:323 (119323|0) - 01:59:751 (119751|1) - for this song i don"t think LN on the voice is good ~
02:01:177 (121177|3) - finish here ? 02:04:886 (124886|2,124886|1) -
02:18:294 (138294|0,138329|1,138365|3,138401|2,138436|0,138472|1,138508|3,138543|2,138579|0,138615|1,138650|3,138686|2,138722|0,138757|1,138793|3,138829|2,138864|0,138900|1,138936|3,138971|2,139007|0,139043|1,139078|3,139114|2,139150|0,139185|1,139221|3,139257|2,139292|0,139328|1,139363|3,139399|2,139435|0,139435|3,139435|1) - very hard part ~
02:33:128 (153128|0) - add note, drum ~
02:37:693 (157693|3) - maybe you can remove coz before 02:36:552 (156552|0,156587|1,156623|3,156659|2,156694|0,156730|1,156766|3,156801|2,156837|0,156873|1,156908|3,156944|2,156980|0,157015|1,157051|3,157086|2,157122|0,157158|1,157193|3,157229|2,157265|0,157300|1,157336|3,157372|2,157407|0,157407|1,157479|3,157479|2,157550|1,157550|0,157621|2,157621|3) - this part drain stamina, so add remove this jack can be better
02:52:955 (172955|2,173098|1,173240|3,173383|0,173526|2) - no sound
02:54:096 (174096|2,174239|1,174382|3,174524|0,174667|2) - no sound

The rest seems like good but some parts are very difficult for FC this (you know what i mean), like i said before listen your song with playback rate 25%

your maps it's hard to mods coz some patterns are mapped on the voice, but nice maps ~ good luck !
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Critical_Star
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Critical_Star
Hi Apple~ :3
mod requested
just a suggestion beloow
column 1 2 3 4
Dead End
00:11:772 (11772|3,11915|2,12057|3) - CTRL+H then move to right by 2
00:12:271 (12271|2) - move to 2
00:12:343 (12343|0) - move to 3
(^somehow a bit of hand balance for all above for this part :3)
00:22:328 (22328|1,22399|0) - CTRL+G then move to the right by 2
00:22:470 (22470|1) - move to 1
(for more hand balance)
00:56:347 (56347|3) -
01:01:839 (61839|2) - move to 2
01:02:409 (62409|1) - move to 3
01:05:191 - missing note? there is still a sound here
00:56:347 (56347|3) - remove this? there isnt any instrumental sound at here
00:56:918 (56918|0) - here too ^ (well i not sure is this on purpose to make stream at this part,at least here have vocal sound but not recommended :v)
(if u agree to remove, u might wanna recheck above those stream part xD
01:08:971 (68971|1) - move to 4
01:09:399 (69399|3,69470|2) - CTRL+H
01:09:541 (69541|0) - move 3
01:09:613 (69613|1,69684|2) - move to the left by 1
01:09:755 (69755|1) - move to 3
01:09:827 (69827|2) - move to 1
(^for hand balance, your current pattern seems to be unbalance :< above just a suggestion to make it balance or u can make other pattern other than this)
01:37:499 (97499|3) - move to 1 for a better playability
02:06:383 (126383|2,126455|1,126526|0,126597|3,126597|1) - CTRL+H and 02:06:597 (126597|2) - move to 2
for better playability
02:09:593 - maybe u can add a note here, since u map kick for this part like 02:09:307 (129307|2) -
02:15:726 (135726|2) - move to 4 for hand balance
02:25:854 (145854|3) - move to 2 for balance too
02:28:065 (148065|1) - remove?there seems to be no sound at here
From 02:38:834 - till 02:52:527 - (hmm, actually there is another low pitch pianosound other than the main piano sound like 02:44:753 - which the sound is very obvious and u didnt map it.i will suggest you add a note for all this sound in this part since the sound are obvious and i think u shouldn't miss it xD)
03:00:800 - add a note here? there is a sound
03:06:221 (186221|0,186221|2,186221|3) - actually u can make this in quad note (4note) since this is a really loud crash sound, might as well to emphasize this sound different from other :v
03:08:503 - add another note here, u mapped double for this piano sound before
03:09:929 - add another note, feel empty here :/

Good Luck apple~ nice song :3
MEGAtive
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Joined August 2013
MEGAtive

Hi Apple
Mod from my queue

DJ Sharpnel - Future Dominators

Column
|1|2|3|4|

[Dead End]
Mods
  1. 00:02:073 - Hmm, something tells me that this' actually two notes. You can hear the snare-like instrument in 00:02:001 plus a hihat like 00:01:787 in here. Suggest to add on 1.
  2. 00:03:214 - Same with here. I can hear the snare-like instrument+ a hihat. Suggest to make the pattern like http://puu.sh/iZzfw/0b13a82412.png to balances the hand while playing.
  3. 00:04:355 - ^ Well, I suggest to do the pattern like http://puu.sh/iZzrG/2c6291b973.png to maintain the hand balance.
  4. 00:05:496 - ^ Hmm, pattern like http://puu.sh/iZznE/d5b4029928.png should more fit to play.
  5. 00:06:637 - ^ Maybe patterns like http://puu.sh/iZzv3/7a1d4a05c4.png should suffice.
  6. 00:07:778 - ^ Just add the note on 3 and it's fit enough.
  7. 00:08:919 - ^ Adding the note on 3 is enough.
  8. 00:11:202 - ^ Maybe add note on 4 are enough.
  9. 00:12:343 - ^ Add note on 2 and it looks pretty and balanced.
  10. 00:14:625 - ^ on 3, it's enough.
  11. 00:15:766 - ^ on 4. That should enough.
  12. 00:16:907 - ^ on 3. That's pretty balanced IMO.
  13. 00:18:048 - ^ on 4. It's pretty balance-wise.
  14. Hmm, from 00:19:617 to 00:27:605 are the same as before. Just pay attention to ehich section it's and do the same like before.
  15. 00:27:891 (27891|3) - Suggest to move this to 1. Since column 1 looks empty plus balancing the pattern pretty well.
  16. 01:14:819 - I think this being only one note is fine. Since in here you can only hear an instrument, while on 01:14:534 there's a cymbal and this instrument as well.
  17. 01:32:792 (92792|1,92934|3,93077|2,93362|0) - Hmm, turn these into LNs? Since the instrument are a pretty long deep bass, it should reflect the basses pretty well.
  18. 02:01:890 - Hmm, maybe patterns like http://puu.sh/iZAlI/376b7def89.png should play well. Try it.
  19. 03:21:911 and 03:22:054 - I could hear the snare here. Add note on those section.
  20. 03:43:878 to 03:44:448 - Add note on those blue lines (1/4 and 3/4 snap). Actually on 1/4 and 3/4 snap you can hear the instrument too, but what makes it different is the instrument are switch panning on left to right output and vice versa. You'll know what I mean if you see through http://puu.sh/iZAWx/44872449e1.png .
  21. 03:44:448 to 03:44:733 - On the 1/8 snap. Refer to the image I post on above line to see what I meant here.
  22. 04:02:207 and 04:02:349 - Add note. Since in here there's that pan-switching instruments like the above mod. Well, on 04:07:270 you did it.
  23. 04:26:099 - Add one more note for the kick and snare like 04:25:956 (LN aside, since LN are following vocals).
  24. 04:39:792 to 05:11:744 - Maybe you want to do it exactly like the first mod in these sections.

Sorry can't mod really much plus looks like there's another modder that already modded this map too XD
Good Luck for approval
Feerum
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God damned when you let this map die i will find you and i will show you a Dead End
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